[General]
- I suggest removing the green color combo since there's nothing green in the background, I suggest that you make it brown/orange/yellow or remove it
- - 00:11:111 (3) - Move it a little bit up to avoid overlap with (2)'s reverse
- - 00:22:711 (2) - Move this to 384, 184 to avoid overlap with (1)
- - 00:41:511 (2) - Move this to 164, 16 to make a better flow with (1)
- - 00:50:311 (3) - Make this a little curvy ?
- Suggest adding more curvy sliders huehuehuehue
- - 00:06:311 (2) - Copy this and pasted at 00:05:511 (1) to make a better flow
- - 00:12:711 (3) - ^
- - 00:08:311 (6) - Improve blanket with (1)'s end tail
- - 01:12:511 (1) - Move to 16, 104 to avoid overlap with (3)'s slider
- - 00:07:911 (3) - Stack this with (3) ?
- - 00:37:511 (1) - Make this curvy like 00:36:711 (3) for a better flow