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[General]:
star~
- 不愧是阿部宽头像的使用者,在帖子里搅基...
- 之前的那个Xia ge,Lu kou,Jian的主题如果不想留黑历史的话可以参考这个里的第二十四个问题
- 黑色的combo color有时候会因为视频的关系变得几乎看不到
- 01:43:944 (T) - 这里的break time没必要
- 这首歌基本上每隔一个白线就要加一个hitsound 绝大部分都是clap.
- 02:56:801 (5) - 这里用finish
- note间隔距离再处理下 保证基本上相同（尤其是同一个combo串的）
- 最后再放几个note 做到和其他难度同一时间结束吧
- 00:31:087 (2) - 去掉clap
- 00:33:230 (2) - 去掉clap **clap的使用基本和音乐里的鼓声一样**
- 02:40:883 (5,6) - 去掉slider上的whistle
- 02:56:954 (1) - 这个起始点设置成02:56:801 结束点02:59:250
- hitsounds太少了...
- 01:43:332 (7) - 删掉
- 02:56:954 (1) - 处理方式同Normal
- 为什么这个难度没有最后的spinner了...
- Overall Difficulty +3
- slider速度有点低...不过已经做完了就这样吧
- 这个难度的preview point没有设置
star~
[Noob]:
建议让别的modder看看.
- clap正好下反了...全部移一下
- 还是clap的问题 听着音乐来下,里面的击掌声很明显
- overall difficulty +2
- hitsounds太乱了...
- 同Nightmare
建议让别的modder看看.
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
[Nightmare]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
- • I guess Title should be "See You at the Next Crossing"
- • 01:07:821 (3) - Move this circle 2 squares down (grid level 3)
[Nightmare]
- • 00:39:658 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.
[General]
*Offset feels a bit late. Try 462 and resnap on all difficulties please.
[Noob]
00:34:760 (1) - this spinner is a bit short... so how about moving it back to the red tick and extending 1/2? That way it'll give a bit more time to clear and still look perfectly fine while playing =)
01:02:923 (3,4,1,2,3) - spacing? The notes start to overlap and then 2,3 is just bleh
01:35:985 (1) - even though this spinner isn't short like the one I previously mentioned, I still think that it would look better moved back 1/2 and extended 1/2, just because the low overall difficulty on this easy map makes the spinners pop up much slower into view. Thus, it seems like it's starting a bit later than the white tick you want it to be on.
01:43:332 (2,3,4,5) - heh, I found it strange that this short part was a break in the harder difficulties but not in the easiest one :p
01:51:291 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing
02:10:270 (1) - same as the others XP
02:34:760 (1) - ^
02:57:413 (1) - ^, also, I I'd silence this to go with the music (0 volume soft set) but then put a new inherited section 1/4th before the end for the finish like you have.
*Whistles are a bit loud throughout the choruses =s
*I noticed that you kept a clapping pattern throughout the map, but it gets broken during sliders. You could always add a clap sound in the folder and use it as a custom sampleset for slider ticks y'know ;P (ask if you don't know how ;3)
[Virile]
00:54:352 (1) - I think that using a slider like this for the triplets in the first part of the chorus would've been more logical. That is, letting the player hear that it's a triplet pattern by means of a slider and THEN using single notes the next time(s).
00:55:577 (1) - These sliders _might_ still be rankable on harder difficulties, but you should definitely not have it on a normal one like this.
00:59:709 (1) - Sounds a bit odd where it ends. Perhaps shorten it 1/2?
01:31:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too clustered and hard-to-read. I wouldn't even advise doing this in a harder difficulty. Please space this whole part better so that they're not overlapped and ambiguous. .-.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - a bit hard-to-read
01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:536 (1) - maybe move this back 1/4th and extend
02:10:423 (1) - the curving makes the repeat arrow look pretty sloppy x_x
02:11:648 (1) - ^
02:18:230 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:56:801 (1) - silence like I suggested in the last diff please~
*Whistles are a bit loud at the end @-@
[Nightmare]
00:27:413 (7,1) - a bit hard to see that 1 is a slider
00:52:362 (3) - ^
00:59:862 (1) - perhaps shorten this 1/2?
01:39:352 (6) - can't see that it's a slider
01:39:948 (8,9,10,1,2) - these could be stacked on each other better I suppose..
02:18:214 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:41:173 (11,12,13) - waaay hard to read <.>
02:43:622 (6) - didn't see this at all while playing
02:52:959 (8) - ^, try to avoid overlapping streams :/
02:56:954 (2) - can't see the slider under 02:55:577 (5)'s hitburst
02:56:495 (6) - ouch this is a loud whistle ;x
02:58:010 (1) - silence suggestions above
*whistles are loud again ._.
Not bad for your first map.
*Offset feels a bit late. Try 462 and resnap on all difficulties please.
[Noob]
00:34:760 (1) - this spinner is a bit short... so how about moving it back to the red tick and extending 1/2? That way it'll give a bit more time to clear and still look perfectly fine while playing =)
01:02:923 (3,4,1,2,3) - spacing? The notes start to overlap and then 2,3 is just bleh
01:35:985 (1) - even though this spinner isn't short like the one I previously mentioned, I still think that it would look better moved back 1/2 and extended 1/2, just because the low overall difficulty on this easy map makes the spinners pop up much slower into view. Thus, it seems like it's starting a bit later than the white tick you want it to be on.
01:43:332 (2,3,4,5) - heh, I found it strange that this short part was a break in the harder difficulties but not in the easiest one :p
01:51:291 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing
02:10:270 (1) - same as the others XP
02:34:760 (1) - ^
02:57:413 (1) - ^, also, I I'd silence this to go with the music (0 volume soft set) but then put a new inherited section 1/4th before the end for the finish like you have.
*Whistles are a bit loud throughout the choruses =s
*I noticed that you kept a clapping pattern throughout the map, but it gets broken during sliders. You could always add a clap sound in the folder and use it as a custom sampleset for slider ticks y'know ;P (ask if you don't know how ;3)
[Virile]
00:54:352 (1) - I think that using a slider like this for the triplets in the first part of the chorus would've been more logical. That is, letting the player hear that it's a triplet pattern by means of a slider and THEN using single notes the next time(s).
00:55:577 (1) - These sliders _might_ still be rankable on harder difficulties, but you should definitely not have it on a normal one like this.
00:59:709 (1) - Sounds a bit odd where it ends. Perhaps shorten it 1/2?
01:31:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too clustered and hard-to-read. I wouldn't even advise doing this in a harder difficulty. Please space this whole part better so that they're not overlapped and ambiguous. .-.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - a bit hard-to-read
01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:536 (1) - maybe move this back 1/4th and extend
02:10:423 (1) - the curving makes the repeat arrow look pretty sloppy x_x
02:11:648 (1) - ^
02:18:230 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:56:801 (1) - silence like I suggested in the last diff please~
*Whistles are a bit loud at the end @-@
[Nightmare]
00:27:413 (7,1) - a bit hard to see that 1 is a slider
00:52:362 (3) - ^
00:59:862 (1) - perhaps shorten this 1/2?
01:39:352 (6) - can't see that it's a slider
01:39:948 (8,9,10,1,2) - these could be stacked on each other better I suppose..
02:18:214 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:41:173 (11,12,13) - waaay hard to read <.>
02:43:622 (6) - didn't see this at all while playing
02:52:959 (8) - ^, try to avoid overlapping streams :/
02:56:954 (2) - can't see the slider under 02:55:577 (5)'s hitburst
02:56:495 (6) - ouch this is a loud whistle ;x
02:58:010 (1) - silence suggestions above
*whistles are loud again ._.
Not bad for your first map.
Hi.
[Noob]
00:27:413 (5) - New combo?
00:30:475 (6) - 1 grid left.
00:56:801 (1) - Well,snapped right,but imo you can put it 1 grid further to the right.
01:05:372 (3) - Fix distance here.
01:13:944 (2) - New combo?
02:32:311 (2) - ^
[Virile]
Fine in general.
01:54:352 (1) - Remove new combo,and add it at 01:55:577 (3)?
01:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Nightmare]
00:51:903 (11) - Just a suggestion.You could remove this note.Try it,probably it will sound better to you.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - You should allign better this moment.
02:00:015 - Add a note? Sounds better to me.
Well,this song impressed me.I like it,so good luck in ranking it.Star~
[Noob]
00:27:413 (5) - New combo?
00:30:475 (6) - 1 grid left.
00:56:801 (1) - Well,snapped right,but imo you can put it 1 grid further to the right.
01:05:372 (3) - Fix distance here.
01:13:944 (2) - New combo?
02:32:311 (2) - ^
[Virile]
Fine in general.
01:54:352 (1) - Remove new combo,and add it at 01:55:577 (3)?
01:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Nightmare]
00:51:903 (11) - Just a suggestion.You could remove this note.Try it,probably it will sound better to you.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - You should allign better this moment.
02:00:015 - Add a note? Sounds better to me.
Well,this song impressed me.I like it,so good luck in ranking it.Star~
EnakoRin
I very love maps similar to this.
[Noob]
ideally <3
[Virile]
ideally <3
[Nightmare]
ideally <3
very pleased me! A song is a very class!
~STAR!
[Noob]
ideally <3
[Virile]
ideally <3
[Nightmare]
ideally <3
very pleased me! A song is a very class!
~STAR!
[Virile]
00:59:84(spinner)
I don't think this spinner fit this diff(for mapset it is hard), also this spinner and its ugly with later object.>_>
02:18:21(spinner)
^
[Nightmare]
All map is fine, but this map is hard to read, some are fine with rhythm but some hmmm
00:50:97(5)..(10)(1)(2)(3) I don't like this one, other's are fine.
The whole map is fine without fixing but people hate map that hard to read, so it's up to you.
00:59:84(spinner)
I don't think this spinner fit this diff(for mapset it is hard), also this spinner and its ugly with later object.>_>
02:18:21(spinner)
^
[Nightmare]
All map is fine, but this map is hard to read, some are fine with rhythm but some hmmm
00:50:97(5)..(10)(1)(2)(3) I don't like this one, other's are fine.
The whole map is fine without fixing but people hate map that hard to read, so it's up to you.
你好~!
[General]
1) 這是一首柔和的中文歌，所以個人覺得應該把那個粗獷的英文countdown除掉? (3個diff也是)
2) 把sliderside轉成靜音 ?
3) 把歌內所有的normal-whislte 轉成soft-finish ?(例如[Noob]中的01:02:910 (3), 因為有一部份人,包括我,不太喜歡哨子聲出現在柔和歌的中)
[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) 把spinner的聲音降低? (因為bonus出現時的聲音很吵，不適合歌 囧)
01:36:278 (1) ^
01:54:951 (2,1) 把它移開一點? 現在被遮住了,在視覺上比較不好看。
02:22:502 無意義timing section, 還是你忘了改變?
02:57:400 (1) 聲音降低? (原因相同)
[Virile]
00:39:645 (1) spinner音量降低?
01:18:829 (1) ^
02:18:217 (1) 不能被rank的spinner, 每個spinner的長度必須最少在auto mode 下打出2000 bonus, 但這個只有1000
02:56:788 (1) spinner音量降?
[Nightmare]
1) 一樣，把所有的spinner音量降低?
00:52:655 (4) 這note被00:51:737 (10) 爆出來的300遮住了，不易被看清，有種混亂的感覺 (我是沙包)
很好的first map, star~!
[General]
1) 這是一首柔和的中文歌，所以個人覺得應該把那個粗獷的英文countdown除掉? (3個diff也是)
2) 把sliderside轉成靜音 ?
3) 把歌內所有的normal-whislte 轉成soft-finish ?(例如[Noob]中的01:02:910 (3), 因為有一部份人,包括我,不太喜歡哨子聲出現在柔和歌的中)
[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) 把spinner的聲音降低? (因為bonus出現時的聲音很吵，不適合歌 囧)
01:36:278 (1) ^
01:54:951 (2,1) 把它移開一點? 現在被遮住了,在視覺上比較不好看。
02:22:502 無意義timing section, 還是你忘了改變?
02:57:400 (1) 聲音降低? (原因相同)
[Virile]
00:39:645 (1) spinner音量降低?
01:18:829 (1) ^
02:18:217 (1) 不能被rank的spinner, 每個spinner的長度必須最少在auto mode 下打出2000 bonus, 但這個只有1000
02:56:788 (1) spinner音量降?
[Nightmare]
1) 一樣，把所有的spinner音量降低?
00:52:655 (4) 這note被00:51:737 (10) 爆出來的300遮住了，不易被看清，有種混亂的感覺 (我是沙包)
很好的first map, star~!
Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes.
~Noob~
00:35:053 (1) - start on left white tick
01:16:380 (1) - end with normal hitsound, not soft one
~Virile~
02:24:951 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:29:237 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:074 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:39:645 (1) - move right 3 grids (Lv3)
02:39:951 (2) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:40:257 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
~Nightmare~
02:43:013 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:46:992 (7) - new combo
+Star
~Noob~
00:35:053 (1) - start on left white tick
01:16:380 (1) - end with normal hitsound, not soft one
~Virile~
02:24:951 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:29:237 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:074 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:39:645 (1) - move right 3 grids (Lv3)
02:39:951 (2) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:40:257 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
~Nightmare~
02:43:013 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:46:992 (7) - new combo
+Star
Fine for me.
Decide what djpop said then contact me.
Decide what djpop said then contact me.
EnakoRin
Hi! ^^ I'm going to start with the mod ok?
Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)
[General]
Good timing, good rhythm... :3
[Noob]
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:502 - ^
Perfect for beginners ^^
[Virile]
00:27:094 (x) - Add a note (?)
00:31:992 (x) - ^
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:196 - ^
02:50:666 (2) - Maybe finish this slider in the previous blue tick (?)
02:53:115 (3) ^
[Nightmare]
01:43:472 - Remove the break, it's too short
02:37:196 - ^
This is all
Good luck ^^
*Star*
Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)
[General]
Good timing, good rhythm... :3
[Noob]
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:502 - ^
Perfect for beginners ^^
[Virile]
00:27:094 (x) - Add a note (?)
00:31:992 (x) - ^
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:196 - ^
02:50:666 (2) - Maybe finish this slider in the previous blue tick (?)
02:53:115 (3) ^
[Nightmare]
01:43:472 - Remove the break, it's too short
02:37:196 - ^
This is all
Good luck ^^
*Star*
Easy;
OD -2
Drain rate -3
Normal;
00:42:400 (1) - No new combo.
Hard;
02:37:196 - Spinner here?
OD -2
Drain rate -3
Normal;
00:42:400 (1) - No new combo.
Hard;
02:37:196 - Spinner here?
Hi~
[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:36:278 (1) - ^
01:43:319 (2) - Add "Finish" ?
01:48:829 (3,5) - ^
01:54:951 (2) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
02:57:400 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4
[Virile]
00:37:655 (2) - Add "whistle" ?
01:13:319 (3) - Remove "Clap" and add "Finish"
01:15:768 (7) - ^
[Nightmare]
00:31:074 (7) - New combo ?
00:36:584 (5) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
01:19:747 (5) - New combo ?
Nice for a first map.
You get my star~
[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:36:278 (1) - ^
01:43:319 (2) - Add "Finish" ?
01:48:829 (3,5) - ^
01:54:951 (2) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
02:57:400 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4
[Virile]
00:37:655 (2) - Add "whistle" ?
01:13:319 (3) - Remove "Clap" and add "Finish"
01:15:768 (7) - ^
[Nightmare]
00:31:074 (7) - New combo ?
00:36:584 (5) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
01:19:747 (5) - New combo ?
Nice for a first map.
You get my star~
Hi~
我的建议:
[General]
Good map~
※ STAR ※
我的建议:
[General]
图非常不错 只是我个人不太喜欢里面Finish音效
01:20:666 (4): 去掉Finish 换成Clap
01:21:278 : 加一个Circle并加Finish
02:00:462 : ^
02:19:441 (10): 去掉Finish
02:56:788 : 转盘在这里开始就好了
00:46:992 (1): 去掉Finish
01:21:278 : 转盘在这里停止
01:33:217 (1): 在这里加Finish感觉不太好，建议加到下一个Circle上
01:37:808 (1): 去掉Finish
01:48:217 : 转盘在这里开始
02:20:053 (1): Finish
02:26:176 (4): Finish换成Clap
01:05:359 (5) : Whistle
01:35:666 (9) : 去掉Finish
01:57:706 (3) : ^
02:46:992 (7): New combo
02:56:176 : 加一个Circle
Good map~
※ STAR ※
Noob:
"Noob" is kinda bad name name for a difficulty, since there's that negative feeling to it
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
Virile:
00:28:625 (3) 1 grid up?
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:31:686 (4) 1 grid left
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
02:40:870 (5) 1 grid right
Nightmare:
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
Nice relaxing little song ^^. Map sounds really good
Star~
"Noob" is kinda bad name name for a difficulty, since there's that negative feeling to it
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
Virile:
00:28:625 (3) 1 grid up?
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:31:686 (4) 1 grid left
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
02:40:870 (5) 1 grid right
Nightmare:
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
Nice relaxing little song ^^. Map sounds really good
Star~
Looks fine to me, bubbled.
lol congra..
...春哥纯爷们啊...
能在OSU上看到春哥也算了了我一桩心愿啊...
能在OSU上看到春哥也算了了我一桩心愿啊...
omg 恭喜
omg 春哥终于RANK了 
恭喜
恭喜
手机上来拜春哥…
来晚了!
春哥纯爷们，铁血真汉子!
希望楼主下一步做春哥霸气成名曲<TMD我爱你>
或者<硬又黑>也行啊!
春哥纯爷们，铁血真汉子!
希望楼主下一步做春哥霸气成名曲<TMD我爱你>
或者<硬又黑>也行啊!
Spring Brother!!!
= =春哥!! (没人刷弹幕吗...
Nice Spring Brother