Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Source is surely NOT Internet
Inconsistent mapping (Make all diffs close to equal in play length)

[Easy]
Go to timing tab and click on "Resnap all notes"
00:22:653 (1) - Start on 00:22:515, end at same spot
00:27:551 (2) - Start on 00:27:413, end at same spot
00:32:311 (1) - use a lone slider instead of a repeat one
00:48:536 (2,3,4) - I dont think it's a good idea to have 1/2s on Easy
00:56:801 (1) - Why a spinner?
01:13:791 (1) - ^
01:33:536 Insert break here?

[Normal] This plays more like a Hard imo
Go to timing tab and click on "Resnap all notes"
01:30:781 (1) - Remove this note
01:50:832 (7,1) - This doesnt fit a Normal

[Insane]
01:39:199 (15) - New combo
02:19:148 (3,4,5) - Confusing
02:21:291 (1) - - Extend to 02:22:209 and remove (1)
02:32:311 (8) - New combo
02:34:454 (15) - New combo
02:34:760 (1) - No new combo
02:41:801 (8) - New combo
02:51:903 (9) - New combo
03:06:903 (13) - New combo

Good Luck! ~

Sakura301 wrote:

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Source is surely NOT Internet
Inconsistent mapping (Make all diffs close to equal in play length)

[Easy]
Go to timing tab and click on "Resnap all notes"
00:22:653 (1) - Start on 00:22:515, end at same spot
00:27:551 (2) - Start on 00:27:413, end at same spot
00:32:311 (1) - use a lone slider instead of a repeat one
00:48:536 (2,3,4) - I dont think it's a good idea to have 1/2s on Easy
00:56:801 (1) - Why a spinner?
01:13:791 (1) - ^
01:33:536 Insert break here?

[Normal] This plays more like a Hard imo
Go to timing tab and click on "Resnap all notes"
01:30:781 (1) - Remove this note
01:50:832 (7,1) - This doesnt fit a Normal

[Insane]
01:39:199 (15) - New combo
02:19:148 (3,4,5) - Confusing
02:21:291 (1) - - Extend to 02:22:209 and remove (1)
02:32:311 (8) - New combo
02:34:454 (15) - New combo
02:34:760 (1) - No new combo
02:41:801 (8) - New combo
02:51:903 (9) - New combo
03:06:903 (13) - New combo

Good Luck! ~

Thanks a lot.
I'm going to perfect it~

I think it must be busy when you worked on this beatmap,but you should be prond of it. It's just like your baby..
By the way, I also think you're a person who like sy.... Oh,sorry, but it's just a truth.

Well.All of the errors that Sakura301 mentioned has been sloved .
And I changed the NORMAL to HARD.
Thanks again~~
P.S:Asuka-rangerei is an "Aniki", I know he is.....

I have made the length of "Easy" as well as the length of "Hard".
I think it's a better beatmap now.

No prob. although i wont be able to check it this weekend, i'm not even sure if i'll be able to have time to get on the comp at all
Edit: Also if my previous mode helped you dont forget to give kudosu, to THAT post since it was a mod not THIS post

[General]
Note: Source field is used for songs that come from video-games or anime, or if they were famous because of a movie then it can be put in that field, Source is NOT to be used for where you found the song or an Album name (Album can be in tags however)
Also if you want to put the Author's Chinese name you can do so in tags (or change the artist of the song, although be careful when doing this, or you will duplicate your song). Hope that's cleared out, oh and before i forget, a Song doesnt HAVE to have something on the Source field, you can leave it blank if there's no source to go with it.
Delete .osb file from folder and full submit, i dont see a storyboard so yeah
Insane is still more mapped than the rest
Stack Leniency = 0 is Unrankable, maybe give it +4 ticks
Use Grid Lv. 3

[Easy]
00:33:689 (1) - Start at 00:34:760 end at same spot (you can fill the other vocals with notes if you want
00:38:434 (2) - I think this Slider is better off starting from: 00:38:740
01:07:821 (5,6,7) - Dont use triplets on Easy, can you convert (5) and (6) into a slider?
01:43:026 (3) - Dont see a reason for a repeat, remove the repeat and extend the slider to end at the same spot
01:47:923 (5) - Ehh, just use a hitcircle here, a 1/4 slider doesnt look good on Easy.
02:12:719 (1) - Theese claps sound too loud, maybe turn em into whistles? or remove the clap from the repeat
02:21:291 (2) - Ok now this slider is dangerous for a newbie, either use just a hitcircle or dont use it at all
02:22:515 (4) - Try to restructure this slider so it doesnt get overlapped by the previous notes, also catmull sliders are ugly
02:37:362 (1) - Umm not really a good idea, a spinner sounds better for me
02:39:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know the song is slow, but please dont use 1/2 streams on an Easy
02:41:801 (1,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:49:454 (1) - I dont see how this part of the song relates to a spinner.

[Hard]
02:24:352 (1) - Awkward Spinner

[Insane]
01:09:658 (5,6) - Stack below the previous slider? (Hold Alt and set distance snapping to x0.0 then disable grid snapping, enable distance snapping and move)
02:36:903 (7) - Out of bounds
02:46:699 (5) - ^ although not as much as the previous one
03:17:005 (8) - New combo

Note: Remember if your combos go over 14... you are probably doing something wrong
There it is, make sure to get it modded by more ppl as well, PM me when you fix and i'll remod

OK.I will do it next weekend,because I have no time in week .
Thanks again

卧槽 春哥必须顶.

All cleared. Waiting for modding.
P.S:
春哥纯爷们，铁血真汉子←It isn's important,please ignore it.

Using spoiler boxes to prevent long walls of text
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]

[Easy]

[Hard]

[Insane]

Great job!
I found it is funny while modifing my beatmap.
And I will add a Normal .

Added a Normal.
Cleared the problems.
Rebuilt Easy and Hard.

Nazi modding Go!
[Easy]
02:51:903 (1,2) - 2 grids to the right then
02:53:128 (2) - Mirror of (1)
02:53:128 (2) - 1 grid to the right

[Normal]
(Overall) Dont use 1/4 time spacing between notes, 1/4 time can be turend into sliders or repeats, also dont use triplets like on: 00:34:760 (1,2,3) overall, still needs a bit of work, this right now it's too hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:58:918 (4) - Cant tell which is the start of the slider.
01:42:082 (4) - ^
And a couple more.
Slider ends need to be visible before the slider ball reaches them, coz you cant tell if it has a repeat or not otherwise

[Insane]
Small hitcircles are a No-No, no one uses them anymore, and i suggest you dont use them unless you want to annoy ppl :<
Same comments on sliders that i did on [Hard]

Ok, i've modded this map way too much already, you should get other ppl to mod it as well, I'm glad that you're taking into consideration my suggestions, hope this ends up a great map ^^ Good Luck!~ +Star

首先
删除文件夹里的 .osb文件,然后full submit
kiai要开始在确定的那个地方,不要提前

Easy
01:02:923(3) - 删除clap,使用whistle
01:03:536(4) - 删除clap
01:04:760(1) - 删除clap
01:05:985(3) - 删除whistle
01:07:821(2) - whistle?
01:10:270(4) - 删除whistle
01:11:495(1) - 结束处加whistle
01:13:944(2) - 同上
01:16:393(1) - 留下第一个往复处和结束处的clap
01:20:679(4) - finish?
02:20:066(1) - 开始处finish
但为什么这段要用soft的音效呢?
02:28:638(2) - 间距
02:50:679(1) - 去掉new combo

Normal
00:42:260(1) - normal就别放这么近了..
02:53:740(1) - 去掉new combo

Hard
offset 0 0
觉得适当减一些clap,和一些地方可以用normal的音效(目前不用的,也是很好的)

00:34:735(1) - 建议用个slider连接这1和2，然后别用clap,感觉不太好
00:44:837(2) - 删除
01:13:306(1) - 去掉new combo,去掉finish,加whistle
01:13:612(2) - 去掉clap
01:13:918(1) - whistle
01:15:602(6) - 去掉 clap
01:15:755(1) - 和之后的2同01:13:306(1) ,01:13:612(2)
01:16:367(1) - whistle
01:53:102(1) - 同00:34:735(1)
02:12:694(1) - 之后的几个clap感觉不好

Insane
感觉点起来还不错,就是有些连点间距略短些,手感会好些~
如00:49:301(7),这个用1.7X的,就会好点很多(额...Insane还是应该难些好~XD)
不过，circle size用normal，overall -1效果会更好些

00:49:454(1) - 去掉new combo
00:54:352(1) - 去掉开始的clap

STARrrr~

soulfear wrote:

卧槽 春哥必须顶.

春哥威武啊。。必须顶、、

Done. Waiting for other moddings.

……抱歉这歌我不mod，出于对春哥的敬意，星星必须给。

什麼! 是春哥
nice first map, star

Normal
00:23:128(2) - clap
00:23:740(3) - whistle
00:24:352(4) - clap
00:27:719(1) - 结束处whistle
00:28:638(3) - 开始处whistle
00:29:250(4) - clap(减少20%音量)
00:29:556(5) - 结束处whistle
00:43:944(3) - clap
01:01:699(1) - whistle
01:02:311(3) - 同上
01:02:923(5) - 开始处whistle
01:03:536(6) - clap(减少20%音量)
01:04:148~01:05:985(1~6) - 同01:01:699(1)~01:03:536(6)
01:11:495(1) - 开始和第2个往复处加whistle
01:13:944(1) - whistle
01:14:556(3) - 同上
01:18:536 - kiai停止在这里
02:20:066(1) - whistle
02:22:515(1) - 同上
02:39:658(1) - 同上
02:40:270(3) - 同上
02:42:170(1) - 同上
02:42:413(2) - 结束处whistle

Hard
00:58:944(4) - spacing
02:41:495(5) - 用circle代替这个slider
02:44:097(8) - 删除掉
02:44:250(9) - 移除clap
02:44:403(10) - 同上

insane
Overall -1~2

搞定。

Rebuilt the Insane.It was confusing,and now is better.

[General]:

1. 不愧是阿部宽头像的使用者,在帖子里搅基...
2. 之前的那个Xia ge,Lu kou,Jian的主题如果不想留黑历史的话可以参考这个里的第二十四个问题
3. 黑色的combo color有时候会因为视频的关系变得几乎看不到

[Easy]:

1. 01:43:944 (T) - 这里的break time没必要
2. 这首歌基本上每隔一个白线就要加一个hitsound 绝大部分都是clap.
3. 02:56:801 (5) - 这里用finish
4. note间隔距离再处理下 保证基本上相同（尤其是同一个combo串的）
5. 最后再放几个note 做到和其他难度同一时间结束吧

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:087 (2) - 去掉clap
2. 00:33:230 (2) - 去掉clap **clap的使用基本和音乐里的鼓声一样**
3. 02:40:883 (5,6) - 去掉slider上的whistle
4. 02:56:954 (1) - 这个起始点设置成02:56:801 结束点02:59:250

[Hard]:

1. hitsounds太少了...
2. 01:43:332 (7) - 删掉
3. 02:56:954 (1) - 处理方式同Normal

[Insane]:

1. 为什么这个难度没有最后的spinner了...
2. Overall Difficulty +3
3. slider速度有点低...不过已经做完了就这样吧
4. 这个难度的preview point没有设置

虽然有点单调 但是技术上的问题基本没有了 需要更多技巧...

star~

相当的感谢啊
PS：那个ASUKA是我同学，他来捣乱的= =

Done.

[Noob]:

1. clap正好下反了...全部移一下

[Virile]:

1. 还是clap的问题 听着音乐来下,里面的击掌声很明显
2. overall difficulty +2

[Nightmare]:

1. hitsounds太乱了...

[Tentaculata]:

1. 同Nightmare

kudosu这个post不要给了 以及对你有帮助的mod才能给,如果只是来加个星星的 就不用给了（让BAT看到会被收回的）

建议让别的modder看看.

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • I guess Title should be "See You at the Next Crossing"

[Virile]

• • 01:07:821 (3) - Move this circle 2 squares down (grid level 3)

[Nightmare]

• • 00:39:658 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.

你的MP3和VEDIO什么的都没了

soulfear wrote:

你的MP3和VEDIO什么的都没了

于是重新全部上传了一遍

OK I've finished it.
Hard (Nightmare) may be a little insane...

[General]
*Offset feels a bit late. Try 462 and resnap on all difficulties please.

[Noob]
00:34:760 (1) - this spinner is a bit short... so how about moving it back to the red tick and extending 1/2? That way it'll give a bit more time to clear and still look perfectly fine while playing =)
01:02:923 (3,4,1,2,3) - spacing? The notes start to overlap and then 2,3 is just bleh
01:35:985 (1) - even though this spinner isn't short like the one I previously mentioned, I still think that it would look better moved back 1/2 and extended 1/2, just because the low overall difficulty on this easy map makes the spinners pop up much slower into view. Thus, it seems like it's starting a bit later than the white tick you want it to be on.
01:43:332 (2,3,4,5) - heh, I found it strange that this short part was a break in the harder difficulties but not in the easiest one :p
01:51:291 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing
02:10:270 (1) - same as the others XP
02:34:760 (1) - ^
02:57:413 (1) - ^, also, I I'd silence this to go with the music (0 volume soft set) but then put a new inherited section 1/4th before the end for the finish like you have.
*Whistles are a bit loud throughout the choruses =s
*I noticed that you kept a clapping pattern throughout the map, but it gets broken during sliders. You could always add a clap sound in the folder and use it as a custom sampleset for slider ticks y'know ;P (ask if you don't know how ;3)

[Virile]
00:54:352 (1) - I think that using a slider like this for the triplets in the first part of the chorus would've been more logical. That is, letting the player hear that it's a triplet pattern by means of a slider and THEN using single notes the next time(s).
00:55:577 (1) - These sliders _might_ still be rankable on harder difficulties, but you should definitely not have it on a normal one like this.
00:59:709 (1) - Sounds a bit odd where it ends. Perhaps shorten it 1/2?
01:31:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too clustered and hard-to-read. I wouldn't even advise doing this in a harder difficulty. Please space this whole part better so that they're not overlapped and ambiguous. .-.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - a bit hard-to-read
01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:536 (1) - maybe move this back 1/4th and extend
02:10:423 (1) - the curving makes the repeat arrow look pretty sloppy x_x
02:11:648 (1) - ^
02:18:230 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:56:801 (1) - silence like I suggested in the last diff please~
*Whistles are a bit loud at the end @-@

[Nightmare]
00:27:413 (7,1) - a bit hard to see that 1 is a slider
00:52:362 (3) - ^
00:59:862 (1) - perhaps shorten this 1/2?
01:39:352 (6) - can't see that it's a slider
01:39:948 (8,9,10,1,2) - these could be stacked on each other better I suppose..
02:18:214 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:41:173 (11,12,13) - waaay hard to read <.>
02:43:622 (6) - didn't see this at all while playing
02:52:959 (8) - ^, try to avoid overlapping streams :/
02:56:954 (2) - can't see the slider under 02:55:577 (5)'s hitburst
02:56:495 (6) - ouch this is a loud whistle ;x
02:58:010 (1) - silence suggestions above
*whistles are loud again ._.

Not bad for your first map.

Nice working!

Hi.

[Noob]
00:27:413 (5) - New combo?
00:30:475 (6) - 1 grid left.
00:56:801 (1) - Well,snapped right,but imo you can put it 1 grid further to the right.
01:05:372 (3) - Fix distance here.
01:13:944 (2) - New combo?
02:32:311 (2) - ^

[Virile]
Fine in general.
01:54:352 (1) - Remove new combo,and add it at 01:55:577 (3)?
01:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Nightmare]
00:51:903 (11) - Just a suggestion.You could remove this note.Try it,probably it will sound better to you.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - You should allign better this moment.
02:00:015 - Add a note? Sounds better to me.

Well,this song impressed me.I like it,so good luck in ranking it.Star~

Thanks a lot and I will take into consideration your suggestion~
+kudosu~

finished yeah

I very love maps similar to this.

[Noob]
ideally <3

[Virile]
ideally <3

[Nightmare]
ideally <3


very pleased me! A song is a very class!

~STAR!

Thank you!

[Virile]

00:59:84(spinner)

I don't think this spinner fit this diff(for mapset it is hard), also this spinner and its ugly with later object.>_>

02:18:21(spinner)

^
[Nightmare]

All map is fine, but this map is hard to read, some are fine with rhythm but some hmmm

00:50:97(5)..(10)(1)(2)(3) I don't like this one, other's are fine.

The whole map is fine without fixing but people hate map that hard to read, so it's up to you.

THX

你好~!

[General]
1) 這是一首柔和的中文歌，所以個人覺得應該把那個粗獷的英文countdown除掉? (3個diff也是)
2) 把sliderside轉成靜音 ?
3) 把歌內所有的normal-whislte 轉成soft-finish ?(例如[Noob]中的01:02:910 (3), 因為有一部份人,包括我,不太喜歡哨子聲出現在柔和歌的中)

[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) 把spinner的聲音降低? (因為bonus出現時的聲音很吵，不適合歌 囧)
01:36:278 (1) ^
01:54:951 (2,1) 把它移開一點? 現在被遮住了,在視覺上比較不好看。
02:22:502 無意義timing section, 還是你忘了改變?
02:57:400 (1) 聲音降低? (原因相同)

[Virile]
00:39:645 (1) spinner音量降低?
01:18:829 (1) ^
02:18:217 (1) 不能被rank的spinner, 每個spinner的長度必須最少在auto mode 下打出2000 bonus, 但這個只有1000
02:56:788 (1) spinner音量降?


[Nightmare]
1) 一樣，把所有的spinner音量降低?
00:52:655 (4) 這note被00:51:737 (10) 爆出來的300遮住了，不易被看清，有種混亂的感覺 (我是沙包)

很好的first map, star~!

很感谢！

Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes.


~Noob~
00:35:053 (1) - start on left white tick
01:16:380 (1) - end with normal hitsound, not soft one

~Virile~
02:24:951 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:29:237 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:074 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:39:645 (1) - move right 3 grids (Lv3)
02:39:951 (2) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:40:257 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)

~Nightmare~
02:43:013 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:46:992 (7) - new combo


+Star

Fine for me.

Decide what djpop said then contact me.

Thanks a lot
But I am AFK now , so when I come back home,I would fix this..

Some tiny fixing
finished

Hi! ^^ I'm going to start with the mod ok?

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Good timing, good rhythm... :3

[Noob]

01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:502 - ^

Perfect for beginners ^^

[Virile]

00:27:094 (x) - Add a note (?)
00:31:992 (x) - ^
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:196 - ^
02:50:666 (2) - Maybe finish this slider in the previous blue tick (?)
02:53:115 (3) ^

[Nightmare]

01:43:472 - Remove the break, it's too short
02:37:196 - ^

This is all

Good luck ^^

*Star*

Nice~kudosu~

FIXED

Easy;

OD -2
Drain rate -3

Normal;

00:42:400 (1) - No new combo.

Hard;

02:37:196 - Spinner here?

THX
Finished

Hi~

[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:36:278 (1) - ^
01:43:319 (2) - Add "Finish" ?
01:48:829 (3,5) - ^
01:54:951 (2) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
02:57:400 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4

[Virile]
00:37:655 (2) - Add "whistle" ?
01:13:319 (3) - Remove "Clap" and add "Finish"
01:15:768 (7) - ^

[Nightmare]
00:31:074 (7) - New combo ?
00:36:584 (5) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
01:19:747 (5) - New combo ?

Nice for a first map.
You get my star~

唔嚯……好modding!
已搞定

Noob:

"Noob" is kinda bad name name for a difficulty, since there's that negative feeling to it
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?

Virile:

00:28:625 (3) 1 grid up?
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:31:686 (4) 1 grid left
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
02:40:870 (5) 1 grid right

Nightmare:

01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?

Nice relaxing little song ^^. Map sounds really good
Star~

THX
finished

Looks fine to me, bubbled.

Thanks!

lol greedy snakes

Oh great~

lol congra..

LKs wrote:

lol congra..

Thank you!

...春哥纯爷们啊...
能在OSU上看到春哥也算了了我一桩心愿啊...

下一步是冰菊物语（嗯嗯

omg 恭喜

omg 春哥终于RANK了
恭喜

手机上来拜春哥…

来晚了!

春哥纯爷们，铁血真汉子!

希望楼主下一步做春哥霸气成名曲<TMD我爱你>
或者<硬又黑>也行啊!

Spring Brother!!!

= =春哥!! (没人刷弹幕吗...

Nice Spring Brother

玩起来很有FEEL