Nazi modding Go!
[Easy]
02:51:903 (1,2) - 2 grids to the right then
02:53:128 (2) - Mirror of (1)
02:53:128 (2) - 1 grid to the right

[Normal]
(Overall) Dont use 1/4 time spacing between notes, 1/4 time can be turend into sliders or repeats, also dont use triplets like on: 00:34:760 (1,2,3) overall, still needs a bit of work, this right now it's too hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:58:918 (4) - Cant tell which is the start of the slider.
01:42:082 (4) - ^
And a couple more.
Slider ends need to be visible before the slider ball reaches them, coz you cant tell if it has a repeat or not otherwise

[Insane]
Small hitcircles are a No-No, no one uses them anymore, and i suggest you dont use them unless you want to annoy ppl :<
Same comments on sliders that i did on [Hard]

Ok, i've modded this map way too much already, you should get other ppl to mod it as well, I'm glad that you're taking into consideration my suggestions, hope this ends up a great map ^^ Good Luck!~ +Star

首先
删除文件夹里的 .osb文件,然后full submit
kiai要开始在确定的那个地方,不要提前

Easy
01:02:923(3) - 删除clap,使用whistle
01:03:536(4) - 删除clap
01:04:760(1) - 删除clap
01:05:985(3) - 删除whistle
01:07:821(2) - whistle?
01:10:270(4) - 删除whistle
01:11:495(1) - 结束处加whistle
01:13:944(2) - 同上
01:16:393(1) - 留下第一个往复处和结束处的clap
01:20:679(4) - finish?
02:20:066(1) - 开始处finish
但为什么这段要用soft的音效呢?
02:28:638(2) - 间距
02:50:679(1) - 去掉new combo

Normal
00:42:260(1) - normal就别放这么近了..
02:53:740(1) - 去掉new combo

Hard
offset 0 0
觉得适当减一些clap,和一些地方可以用normal的音效(目前不用的,也是很好的)

00:34:735(1) - 建议用个slider连接这1和2，然后别用clap,感觉不太好
00:44:837(2) - 删除
01:13:306(1) - 去掉new combo,去掉finish,加whistle
01:13:612(2) - 去掉clap
01:13:918(1) - whistle
01:15:602(6) - 去掉 clap
01:15:755(1) - 和之后的2同01:13:306(1) ,01:13:612(2)
01:16:367(1) - whistle
01:53:102(1) - 同00:34:735(1)
02:12:694(1) - 之后的几个clap感觉不好

Insane
感觉点起来还不错,就是有些连点间距略短些,手感会好些~
如00:49:301(7),这个用1.7X的,就会好点很多(额...Insane还是应该难些好~XD)
不过，circle size用normal，overall -1效果会更好些

00:49:454(1) - 去掉new combo
00:54:352(1) - 去掉开始的clap

STARrrr~

soulfear wrote:

卧槽 春哥必须顶.

春哥威武啊。。必须顶、、

Done. Waiting for other moddings.

……抱歉这歌我不mod，出于对春哥的敬意，星星必须给。

什麼! 是春哥
nice first map, star

Normal
00:23:128(2) - clap
00:23:740(3) - whistle
00:24:352(4) - clap
00:27:719(1) - 结束处whistle
00:28:638(3) - 开始处whistle
00:29:250(4) - clap(减少20%音量)
00:29:556(5) - 结束处whistle
00:43:944(3) - clap
01:01:699(1) - whistle
01:02:311(3) - 同上
01:02:923(5) - 开始处whistle
01:03:536(6) - clap(减少20%音量)
01:04:148~01:05:985(1~6) - 同01:01:699(1)~01:03:536(6)
01:11:495(1) - 开始和第2个往复处加whistle
01:13:944(1) - whistle
01:14:556(3) - 同上
01:18:536 - kiai停止在这里
02:20:066(1) - whistle
02:22:515(1) - 同上
02:39:658(1) - 同上
02:40:270(3) - 同上
02:42:170(1) - 同上
02:42:413(2) - 结束处whistle

Hard
00:58:944(4) - spacing
02:41:495(5) - 用circle代替这个slider
02:44:097(8) - 删除掉
02:44:250(9) - 移除clap
02:44:403(10) - 同上

insane
Overall -1~2

搞定。

Rebuilt the Insane.It was confusing,and now is better.

[General]:

1. 不愧是阿部宽头像的使用者,在帖子里搅基...
2. 之前的那个Xia ge,Lu kou,Jian的主题如果不想留黑历史的话可以参考这个里的第二十四个问题
3. 黑色的combo color有时候会因为视频的关系变得几乎看不到

[Easy]:

1. 01:43:944 (T) - 这里的break time没必要
2. 这首歌基本上每隔一个白线就要加一个hitsound 绝大部分都是clap.
3. 02:56:801 (5) - 这里用finish
4. note间隔距离再处理下 保证基本上相同（尤其是同一个combo串的）
5. 最后再放几个note 做到和其他难度同一时间结束吧

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:087 (2) - 去掉clap
2. 00:33:230 (2) - 去掉clap **clap的使用基本和音乐里的鼓声一样**
3. 02:40:883 (5,6) - 去掉slider上的whistle
4. 02:56:954 (1) - 这个起始点设置成02:56:801 结束点02:59:250

[Hard]:

1. hitsounds太少了...
2. 01:43:332 (7) - 删掉
3. 02:56:954 (1) - 处理方式同Normal

[Insane]:

1. 为什么这个难度没有最后的spinner了...
2. Overall Difficulty +3
3. slider速度有点低...不过已经做完了就这样吧
4. 这个难度的preview point没有设置

虽然有点单调 但是技术上的问题基本没有了 需要更多技巧...

star~

相当的感谢啊
PS：那个ASUKA是我同学，他来捣乱的= =

Done.

[Noob]:

1. clap正好下反了...全部移一下

[Virile]:

1. 还是clap的问题 听着音乐来下,里面的击掌声很明显
2. overall difficulty +2

[Nightmare]:

1. hitsounds太乱了...

[Tentaculata]:

1. 同Nightmare

kudosu这个post不要给了 以及对你有帮助的mod才能给,如果只是来加个星星的 就不用给了（让BAT看到会被收回的）

建议让别的modder看看.

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • I guess Title should be "See You at the Next Crossing"

[Virile]

• • 01:07:821 (3) - Move this circle 2 squares down (grid level 3)

[Nightmare]

• • 00:39:658 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.

你的MP3和VEDIO什么的都没了

soulfear wrote:

你的MP3和VEDIO什么的都没了

于是重新全部上传了一遍

OK I've finished it.
Hard (Nightmare) may be a little insane...

[General]
*Offset feels a bit late. Try 462 and resnap on all difficulties please.

[Noob]
00:34:760 (1) - this spinner is a bit short... so how about moving it back to the red tick and extending 1/2? That way it'll give a bit more time to clear and still look perfectly fine while playing =)
01:02:923 (3,4,1,2,3) - spacing? The notes start to overlap and then 2,3 is just bleh
01:35:985 (1) - even though this spinner isn't short like the one I previously mentioned, I still think that it would look better moved back 1/2 and extended 1/2, just because the low overall difficulty on this easy map makes the spinners pop up much slower into view. Thus, it seems like it's starting a bit later than the white tick you want it to be on.
01:43:332 (2,3,4,5) - heh, I found it strange that this short part was a break in the harder difficulties but not in the easiest one :p
01:51:291 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing
02:10:270 (1) - same as the others XP
02:34:760 (1) - ^
02:57:413 (1) - ^, also, I I'd silence this to go with the music (0 volume soft set) but then put a new inherited section 1/4th before the end for the finish like you have.
*Whistles are a bit loud throughout the choruses =s
*I noticed that you kept a clapping pattern throughout the map, but it gets broken during sliders. You could always add a clap sound in the folder and use it as a custom sampleset for slider ticks y'know ;P (ask if you don't know how ;3)

[Virile]
00:54:352 (1) - I think that using a slider like this for the triplets in the first part of the chorus would've been more logical. That is, letting the player hear that it's a triplet pattern by means of a slider and THEN using single notes the next time(s).
00:55:577 (1) - These sliders _might_ still be rankable on harder difficulties, but you should definitely not have it on a normal one like this.
00:59:709 (1) - Sounds a bit odd where it ends. Perhaps shorten it 1/2?
01:31:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too clustered and hard-to-read. I wouldn't even advise doing this in a harder difficulty. Please space this whole part better so that they're not overlapped and ambiguous. .-.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - a bit hard-to-read
01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:536 (1) - maybe move this back 1/4th and extend
02:10:423 (1) - the curving makes the repeat arrow look pretty sloppy x_x
02:11:648 (1) - ^
02:18:230 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:56:801 (1) - silence like I suggested in the last diff please~
*Whistles are a bit loud at the end @-@

[Nightmare]
00:27:413 (7,1) - a bit hard to see that 1 is a slider
00:52:362 (3) - ^
00:59:862 (1) - perhaps shorten this 1/2?
01:39:352 (6) - can't see that it's a slider
01:39:948 (8,9,10,1,2) - these could be stacked on each other better I suppose..
02:18:214 (1) - shorten 1/2?
02:41:173 (11,12,13) - waaay hard to read <.>
02:43:622 (6) - didn't see this at all while playing
02:52:959 (8) - ^, try to avoid overlapping streams :/
02:56:954 (2) - can't see the slider under 02:55:577 (5)'s hitburst
02:56:495 (6) - ouch this is a loud whistle ;x
02:58:010 (1) - silence suggestions above
*whistles are loud again ._.

Not bad for your first map.

Nice working!

Hi.

[Noob]
00:27:413 (5) - New combo?
00:30:475 (6) - 1 grid left.
00:56:801 (1) - Well,snapped right,but imo you can put it 1 grid further to the right.
01:05:372 (3) - Fix distance here.
01:13:944 (2) - New combo?
02:32:311 (2) - ^

[Virile]
Fine in general.
01:54:352 (1) - Remove new combo,and add it at 01:55:577 (3)?
01:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Nightmare]
00:51:903 (11) - Just a suggestion.You could remove this note.Try it,probably it will sound better to you.
01:39:964 (8,9,10) - You should allign better this moment.
02:00:015 - Add a note? Sounds better to me.

Well,this song impressed me.I like it,so good luck in ranking it.Star~

Thanks a lot and I will take into consideration your suggestion~
+kudosu~

finished yeah

I very love maps similar to this.

[Noob]
ideally <3

[Virile]
ideally <3

[Nightmare]
ideally <3


very pleased me! A song is a very class!

~STAR!

Thank you!

[Virile]

00:59:84(spinner)

I don't think this spinner fit this diff(for mapset it is hard), also this spinner and its ugly with later object.>_>

02:18:21(spinner)

^
[Nightmare]

All map is fine, but this map is hard to read, some are fine with rhythm but some hmmm

00:50:97(5)..(10)(1)(2)(3) I don't like this one, other's are fine.

The whole map is fine without fixing but people hate map that hard to read, so it's up to you.

THX

你好~!

[General]
1) 這是一首柔和的中文歌，所以個人覺得應該把那個粗獷的英文countdown除掉? (3個diff也是)
2) 把sliderside轉成靜音 ?
3) 把歌內所有的normal-whislte 轉成soft-finish ?(例如[Noob]中的01:02:910 (3), 因為有一部份人,包括我,不太喜歡哨子聲出現在柔和歌的中)

[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) 把spinner的聲音降低? (因為bonus出現時的聲音很吵，不適合歌 囧)
01:36:278 (1) ^
01:54:951 (2,1) 把它移開一點? 現在被遮住了,在視覺上比較不好看。
02:22:502 無意義timing section, 還是你忘了改變?
02:57:400 (1) 聲音降低? (原因相同)

[Virile]
00:39:645 (1) spinner音量降低?
01:18:829 (1) ^
02:18:217 (1) 不能被rank的spinner, 每個spinner的長度必須最少在auto mode 下打出2000 bonus, 但這個只有1000
02:56:788 (1) spinner音量降?


[Nightmare]
1) 一樣，把所有的spinner音量降低?
00:52:655 (4) 這note被00:51:737 (10) 爆出來的300遮住了，不易被看清，有種混亂的感覺 (我是沙包)

很好的first map, star~!

很感谢！

Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes.


~Noob~
00:35:053 (1) - start on left white tick
01:16:380 (1) - end with normal hitsound, not soft one

~Virile~
02:24:951 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:29:237 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:074 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:39:645 (1) - move right 3 grids (Lv3)
02:39:951 (2) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
02:40:257 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)

~Nightmare~
02:43:013 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:46:992 (7) - new combo


+Star

Fine for me.

Decide what djpop said then contact me.

Thanks a lot
But I am AFK now , so when I come back home,I would fix this..

Some tiny fixing
finished

Hi! ^^ I'm going to start with the mod ok?

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Good timing, good rhythm... :3

[Noob]

01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:502 - ^

Perfect for beginners ^^

[Virile]

00:27:094 (x) - Add a note (?)
00:31:992 (x) - ^
01:43:625 - Remove this break (or map here), it's too small...
02:37:196 - ^
02:50:666 (2) - Maybe finish this slider in the previous blue tick (?)
02:53:115 (3) ^

[Nightmare]

01:43:472 - Remove the break, it's too short
02:37:196 - ^

This is all

Good luck ^^

*Star*

Nice~kudosu~

FIXED

Easy;

OD -2
Drain rate -3

Normal;

00:42:400 (1) - No new combo.

Hard;

02:37:196 - Spinner here?

THX
Finished

Hi~

[Noob]
00:35:053 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:36:278 (1) - ^
01:43:319 (2) - Add "Finish" ?
01:48:829 (3,5) - ^
01:54:951 (2) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
02:57:400 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4

[Virile]
00:37:655 (2) - Add "whistle" ?
01:13:319 (3) - Remove "Clap" and add "Finish"
01:15:768 (7) - ^

[Nightmare]
00:31:074 (7) - New combo ?
00:36:584 (5) - Remove "Finish" and add "Clap"
01:19:747 (5) - New combo ?

Nice for a first map.
You get my star~

唔嚯……好modding!
已搞定

Noob:

"Noob" is kinda bad name name for a difficulty, since there's that negative feeling to it
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?

Virile:

00:28:625 (3) 1 grid up?
01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:31:686 (4) 1 grid left
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?
02:40:870 (5) 1 grid right

Nightmare:

01:43:219 Insert Break Time?
02:37:196 Insert Break Time?

Nice relaxing little song ^^. Map sounds really good
Star~

THX
finished

Looks fine to me, bubbled.

Thanks!

lol greedy snakes

Oh great~

lol congra..

LKs wrote:

lol congra..

Thank you!

...春哥纯爷们啊...
能在OSU上看到春哥也算了了我一桩心愿啊...

下一步是冰菊物语（嗯嗯

omg 恭喜

omg 春哥终于RANK了
恭喜

手机上来拜春哥…

来晚了!

春哥纯爷们，铁血真汉子!

希望楼主下一步做春哥霸气成名曲<TMD我爱你>
或者<硬又黑>也行啊!

Spring Brother!!!

= =春哥!! (没人刷弹幕吗...

Nice Spring Brother

玩起来很有FEEL