This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 24 giugno 2010 at 20:18:21

Artist: Manga Boys
Title: Digimon 02 (TV Size)
Source: Digimon Adventure 2
Tags: italian op project xxheroxx Kuroneko-sHerald
BPM: 156,7
Filesize: 17091kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:

1. Heromon (3,82 stars, 120 notes)
2. Kuromon (2,35 stars, 101 notes)
3. Pandahmon (4,53 stars, 169 notes)

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size)
Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A italian opening of Digimon series

[Kuromon] (Guest's Easy) by Kuroneko-sHerald.
[Heromon] (Guest's Normal) by xxheroxx.
[Pandahmon] (Hard) by me, tmokb93

For the Italian OP Project.
Complete.

Ecco la mia diff (Normal)

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Armadillomon].osu

Devo aggiungere gli hitsounds e rivedere alcune parti, ma tecnicamente è completa.
Stavo lavorando su un'altra diff, una specie di Insane

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Patamon].osu

Non l'ho completata perchè prima voglio alcuni pareri su questo "nuovo stile"

Diff + BG + Star

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

Download: xxheroxx's diff.rar

BG per xxheroxx



EDIT: BG per tmokb93

Here's your hit-sounded diff, tmokb.

A couple quick mods on your diff though:
Reduce circle size. If this is a hard, it doesn't feel like it at all. Also increase hp drain and overall difficulty to suit the map.
00:11:527 (4) - This slider is doubtfully rankable.
00:23:973 (1,1) - Remove new combos
00:31:823 (2) - The slowdown on this slider is okay until you encounter 00:34:121 (2) - immediately afterward which looks the same but is twice as fast.
00:35:078 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:844 (1) - ^
00:36:227 (2) - New combo
00:36:610 (1,1) - Remove new combo
00:39:099 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:034 (1) - ^
01:06:480 (1) - ^
01:20:074 (6) - New combo
01:20:457 (1) - Remove new combo
01:28:690 (1) - This spinner ends in a weird spot and is really short. Use something else or start it earlier - maybe right after 01:27:350 (5).

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Pandahmon].osu

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
the combo colors are different in different diffs. fix it.

[Kuromon]
just feel there are too many spinners...
00:06:741 (4) - sounds a little strange.
01:26:010 - add a beat?
01:26:585 (2,4) - whistle.

[Heromon]
you must use hitsounds.
01:20:075 (1) - ...WTF? spin nearly 10s?

[Pandahmon]
you should, or say must, use grid level 3 in this diff, i saw many spacing problems.
00:10:952 (2,3) - spacing.
00:24:355 (1,1) - remove new combo.
00:31:823 (2) - try to make this symmetrical
00:34:121 (2) - ^
00:46:566 (4,5) - spacing?
01:12:990 (2,3) - ^

Music is too soft imo.

~Kuromon~
Add more hitsounds.
00:06:741 (4) - sounds weird
00:08:081 (1) - end on right white tick
00:46:950 (6,7) - don't mute them

~Heromon~
Add more hitsounds.
01:20:075 (1) - too long

~Pandahmon~
00:19:569 (1) - soft-hitsounds not fit
00:24:355 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:25:122 (2) - new combo (optional)
00:31:823 (2) - make it symmetry
00:34:121 (2) - ^
00:46:566 (4,5) - wrong spacing


+Star

Fixed some for Pandahmon.

DJPop wrote:

~Kuromon~
Add more hitsounds.
00:06:741 (4) - sounds weird
00:08:081 (1) - end on right white tick
00:46:950 (6,7) - don't mute them
[/color]

All done.

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

Kuromon:

-Black combo color's hard to read.
-All spinners but the last one would be better off gone and replace with hit circles and sliders.
-00:15:166 (1,2,3,4) - Repeating sliders done in this fashion throw off newbs.
-00:32:781 (2) - Maybe move 1/2 forward to make more music sense and feel better. This threw me off.
-00:33:547 (3) - Delete, and, starting 1/2 back, put 3 hit circles one beat apart from each other.
-Only real bad part would be the spinners, yeah.

Heromon:

-Dark red is hard to see with the video on.
-You've improved a lot. This map's good. ~

Pandahmon:

-Niiiiice.

I like what I'm seeing. Star!

Ho fixato un pò di cosuccie nelle diff (tags, hitsounds ecc.ecc.)

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Pandahmon].osu

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Heromon].osu



EDIT:

Ho tolto quel micio che stava nell'angolo a destra perchè era fuori luogo, ed ho aggiunto quell'altro micio che, però, non è proprio perfetto x_x

Fixati timing point e modificato qualcosa

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

CIAO

[File]
Your mp3 bit rate is too high, minimum of bit rate is 128kbps, and maximum is 198kbps, you need to lower the bit rate (current 256kbps)

[Kuromon]
00:04:252 (2) - I think it's little bit confusing, maybe don't stack with 1 at the end of slider??
00:27:803 (1,2) - I think this slider looks bad, IMO..... Maybe use a spiral or wave slider??
00:41:015 (4) - New combo?
00:42:738 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:45:227 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:44:078 (4)?
00:46:376 (3) - New combo please
00:47:333 (1) - Perhaps extend this spinner to 00:49:439?
00:55:757 (x) - Maybe add note here?
01:11:650 (2) - New combo?

[Heromon]
00:34:324 (x) - I feel there some missing beat in here, add note?
01:18:939 (4) - Reverse this? To make nice pattern?

[Pandahmon]
00:03:677 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:04:251 (2)?
00:11:527 (4) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let the startpoint overla the endpoint, it could be confusing)
00:23:973 (1,1,1) - Make a jump? Maybe?
00:31:823 (2) - Make symetric?
00:34:121 (2) - ^

Nice song
STAR

Leorda wrote:

CIAO

[Kuromon]
00:04:252 (2) - I think it's little bit confusing, maybe don't stack with 1 at the end of slider?? Done.
00:27:803 (1,2) - I think this slider looks bad, IMO..... Maybe use a spiral or wave slider?? Done.
00:41:015 (4) - New combo? No.
00:42:738 (1) - Remove new combo? No.
00:45:227 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:44:078 (4)? No.
00:46:376 (3) - New combo please Done.
00:47:333 (1) - Perhaps extend this spinner to 00:49:439? Done.
00:55:757 (x) - Maybe add note here? Done.
01:11:650 (2) - New combo? Done.

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

[General]
MP3: Decoder=NULL (Did you really download this mp3, or did you rip it yourself o.o)

[Kuromon]
Fine

[Heromon]
00:05:796 (2) - Out of bounds
00:10:391 (1) - Maybe start from: 00:11:731
01:20:087 (1) - Kiai sections only for star fountains are unrankable unless there's a very GOOOD reason for them to be there afaik

[Pandamon]
00:31:823 (2) - Looks kind of uggly like that, toy with both ends to make more symmetrical? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9027 (i just moved the left waypoint 1 grid up)


Umm pretty nice, you have improved a lot since the last time i modded one of your maps ^^ +Star!

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Heromon].osu

si, perchè chi mi vuole alla fine sceglierà le scelte e i miracoli non significano mai, spaghetti.

General
Difficulty names should include Easy/Normal/Hard/whatever, IMO, so add them to the -mon name.
You seem to abuse spinners... =S

EDIT: Wow. I looked at the thread and I just noticed two of the diffs are guest diffs. This is REALLY not obvious. >_<

Kuromon
I played with the video, but I think black hit circles on a black background won't work.
If this is supposed to be an Easy, it's way too hard. As it stands, it's a Normal.

00:02:529 (1,2) - =S
00:23:974 (1,1) - Notes show on the spinner pretty early on.
01:04:566 (1) - Would be better as notes IMO.
01:12:799 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't read this. I don't think newbies will be able to, either.

Heromon
I think the 1/2's should all be stacked, including 00:18:816 (6,7,8) and 00:34:134 (2,3,4). 01:03:238 (1,2,3) doesn't HAVE to be stacked, but I think it'd play a bit better.
Decrease OD. Maybe decrease HP drain too?

00:38:729 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stack doesn't match the music and is too long, IMO.
00:47:154 (1) - Too long.
01:20:087 (1) - Too long.

Pandahmon
Quite a lot of spinners...
Looks very good except some "nazi" quirks which just irritate me. (Yes, I actually played and noticed all of these issues.)

00:07:697 (5) - Feels weird, especially stacked under the slider with 1/1 time spacing.
00:11:527 (4) - Ugly, and the ends overlap. I suggest you redo this or at least adjust it.
00:17:845 (4) - 1/2 doesn't match the music...
00:25:696 (1) - Doesn't match the music/map IMO.
00:31:823 (2) - Looks ugly when the ends don't align.
00:34:121 (2) - ^
00:59:395 (1) - Jump?
01:05:522 (1) - Kinda doesn't match and it's pretty short. Next note starts appearing 1/4 into the spinner, making it almost a ninja spinner (which is definitely unrankable).
01:14:713 (3,4,5,6) - <3
01:25:244 (5) - Looks ugly when the ends don't align.

strager wrote:

General
Difficulty names should include Easy/Normal/Hard/whatever, IMO, so add them to the -mon name. I never used them on difficulties, they are on Beatmap message.
You seem to abuse spinners... =S And then?

Pandahmon

00:07:697 (5) - Feels weird, especially stacked under the slider with 1/1 time spacing. No.
00:11:527 (4) - Ugly, and the ends overlap. I suggest you redo this or at least adjust it. Adjusted.
00:17:845 (4) - 1/2 doesn't match the music... It matches.
00:25:696 (1) - Doesn't match the music/map IMO.^
00:31:823 (2) - Looks ugly when the ends don't align. I make them by my will.
00:34:121 (2) - ^.^
00:59:395 (1) - Jump?Done.
01:05:522 (1) - Kinda doesn't match and it's pretty short. Next note starts appearing 1/4 into the spinner, making it almost a ninja spinner (which is definitely unrankable).I think it's okay
01:14:713 (3,4,5,6) - <3?
01:25:244 (5) - Looks ugly when the ends don't align.^

Don't feel like kudos you, i'll chosse after xxheroxx and Kuroneko-sHerald fixes up their diffs.

EDIT: xxheroxx didn't follows your mods too.

strager wrote:

Kuromon
I played with the video, but I think black hit circles on a black background won't work. Changed.

00:02:529 (1,2) - =S ?
00:23:974 (1,1) - Notes show on the spinner pretty early on. Deleted spinner and added a break.
01:04:566 (1) - Would be better as notes IMO. Done.
01:12:799 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't read this. I don't think newbies will be able to, either. I don't see this problem, so I don't change it.

Download: Manga Boys - Digimon 02 (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Kuromon].osu

Ohh i digimon! :3

Una delle mie serie preferite finalmente qui su osu!

[Pandahmon]
00:11:527 (4) - Generally you shouldn't do this unless you have some SB arrow showing which way to go. So make the slider more obvious of the counterclockwise motion!

Edit: Bubbled

There's a missing preview point in one difficulty ([Heromon]). Mind fixing that?

I think BPM would work better as 156.70... though it doesn't sound as good for me in the Timing tab. I don't know, it's happened to me before a few times... and the timing sounds better in the timing tab as 156.67. Check both of them so you can see what I'm talking about. I'd prefer if you used 156.70.

Fix the preview point at least.

Fixed, and popped

Why did you change the offset? I said it was fine. =[

It just stood as is in the Heromon difficulty.

EDIT: mkayrebubbled

Ranku!