1. Crazy Jay (4.8 stars, 304 notes)
2. Hard (4.43 stars, 139 notes)
3. Insane (4.8 stars, 315 notes)
4. Normal (2.73 stars, 101 notes)
5. qinche's Daiko (5 stars, 414 notes)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Revived

loveFantasy wrote:

鬼...鬼畜..！不下qinche！

Numbers 596108 wrote:

SPOILER

Mod Request from wanhyrzh

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:00:-391 170.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:01:020 1.0x - K - -> OK
00:08:608 1.0x - N - -> OK
00:39:138 1.0x - N - -> Remove
00:39:844 0.75x - N - -> OK
01:04:550 1.0x - K - -> OK
01:29:961 1.0x - N - -> Ok

Notes :

00:02:432 (5) -
00:03:844 (9) -
00:05:256 (13) -
00:41:961 (210) -
00:44:785 (221) -
00:56:079 (255) -

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 7 -> OK
Circle Size - Max -> OK
Approach Rate - Max -> OK
Overall Difficulty - 7 -> OK

Total Result
Song favorite degree : 6 / 10
Note Pattern : 64 / 70
Other wrong : 10 / 10
Timing wrong : 10 / 10

Score : 90 / 100

Beren wrote:

★

loveFantasy wrote:

鬼...鬼畜..！不下qinche！

SPOILER

etc.

qinche wrote:

loveFantasy wrote:

鬼...鬼畜..！不下qinche！

招你惹你了我！！

1. Disable countdown?It's unecessary I guess.
2. The Audio Lead In and Preview Time in CJ's diff are different with others diff,please check it carefully!

1. 00:04:903 (2) - 感覺這個放直線的話會有點生硬...彎一下會比較好?附上圖和code..
   
   sth here>_>

   

   303,131,4903,2,0,B|246:168|181:127,1,120,4|8

2. 00:17:608 (2) - 這個被Slider(1)- 的hitburst遮住大丈夫?個人覺得這個可能會被MAT挑..而且你沒有Easy,所以一般新手會打這個diff,所以必須考慮到新手的能力...(除非自虐>_>)
3. 01:05:961 (4) - 在這裏加個New combo?因為這個combo的長度比其他的都長..建議加一個平衡整體的combo長度!
4. 01:24:314 (1) - 真心覺得這樣不是一個好辦法,但是用2個slider就會變成1/2 click,麻= =你自己看著辦..

1. 00:09:138 (x) - 這條綠線的聲量可考慮再減一半 >15% 因為這個位置不太強,而且只有vocal,30%感覺略多和凹凸.
2. 00:22:197 - 00:27:844 (x) - 考慮這部分使用whistle代替?我的想法就是和音樂堆上而已.
3. 00:30:844 (x) - 這tick的音量過大了=0= 有點吵

1. 00:20:432 (1) - 感覺在這裏沒比要要用到蟲子slider阿.感覺1/4 slider就很好了,蟲子slider有可能被人說 xD,而且在這裏真心不合適.
2. 00:31:726 (3) - 個人不喜歡倆個slider的開始疊在一起...不過算了,看你把
3. 00:33:138 (4) - 必須吐遭= = 感覺拉了和沒拉一個樣,可能是因為幅度不夠大把..而且個人覺得也沒啥原因需要拉這種slider.
4. 01:16:020 (9,1) - 這個移動的不太順,unstack可能會好一點..

1. AR9理解不能,為甚麼要選AR9?AR8已經很合適,而且這種BPM選AR9可能還會有反效果..

1. 00:33:226 (9,10,11,12) - 好把= =有點nazi,不過這個5連確實排歪了,不知道你是不是故意的...
2. 00:55:726 (5,6,7,8,9) - 在這裏突然來一個5連真心很怪..我知道背後是有連打的音樂,但相對來說就很小聲,所以這裏感覺很凸顯..很怪
3. 01:26:961 (7) - 給我我會把這slider停在01:27:491 - 然後把之後的spinner往後移1/4.感覺會比較好

1. 00:08:785 (x) - 試試把volume調到15~25%?45%感覺略大..

1. 00:32:432 (7) - 這個真心太突然了,如果x0.75還好.x0.5根本就無法預測,一般都會誤認這個為1/2,而且整段也只有這個slider變速.
2. 01:27:491 (1) - 我去...這個,極度confused..我能理解你為甚麼要放在中間,但是這spacing和(10)- 幾乎連在一起,於是會誤認為1/4.

1. 00:00:491 (2) - 試試把這個1/8延長到00:00:491 - ?而且作個減小音量的效果.如果改了,後面的(1)-可以考慮不調整位置直接當一個跳好了.
2. 00:44:873 (x) - 把這個spinner移到00:44:829 - (1/8) 和前面的spinner一樣.
3. 01:12:491 (11,12,13) - 把這個3連放在(4)- 的上面把,讓這個5邊形更完美!

1. 00:03:138 (x) - 種覺得這裡差一點東西,加note?
2. 00:22:197 - 00:28:197 (x) - 在這部分我有其他pattern的看法,感覺這部分多用kat會比較好聽,詳細就看看test file把,覺得可以的話就拿來用 xD
3. 00:46:903 (226) - 這裏是非重音位,所一加上finish感覺就有點怪,remove finish比較好..個人覺得
4. 01:04:550 - 01:15:844 (x) - 同上上

kanpakyin wrote:

SPOILER

ok tme to mod this.

[General]

1. Disable countdown?It's unecessary I guess.
2. The Audio Lead In and Preview of CJ's diff are difficult with others diff,please check it carefully!

[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:04:903 (2) - 感覺這個放直線的話會有點生硬...彎一下會比較好?附上圖和code..
   
   

   303,131,4903,2,0,B|246:168|181:127,1,120,4|8

2. 00:17:608 (2) - 這個被Slider(1)- 的hitburst遮住大丈夫?個人覺得這個可能會被MAT挑..而且你沒有Easy,所以一般新手會打這個diff,所以必須考慮到新手的能力...(除非自虐>_>)
3. 01:05:961 (4) - 在這裏加個New combo?因為這個combo的長度比其他的都長..建議加一個平衡整體的combo長度!
4. 01:24:314 (1) - 真心覺得這樣不是一個好辦法,但是用2個slider就會變成1/2 click,麻= =你自己看著辦..

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:09:138 (x) - 這條綠線的聲量可考慮再減一半 >15% 因為這個位置不太強,而且只有vocal,30%感覺略多和凹凸.
2. 00:22:197 - 00:27:844 (x) - 考慮這部分使用whistle代替?我的想法就是和音樂堆上而已.
3. 00:30:844 (x) - 這tick的音量過大了=0= 有點吵

[Hard]
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:20:432 (1) - 感覺在這裏沒比要要用到蟲子slider阿.感覺1/4 slider就很好了,蟲子slider有可能被人說 xD,而且在這裏真心不合適.
2. 00:31:726 (3) - 個人不喜歡倆個slider的開始疊在一起...不過算了,看你把
3. 00:33:138 (4) - 必須吐遭= = 感覺拉了和沒拉一個樣,可能是因為幅度不夠大把..而且個人覺得也沒啥原因需要拉這種slider.
4. 01:16:020 (9,1) - 這個移動的不太順,unstack可能會好一點..

[Crazy Jay]
Difficulty setting
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. AR9理解不能,為甚麼要選AR9?AR8已經很合適,而且這種BPM選AR9可能還會有反效果..

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:33:226 (9,10,11,12) - 好把= =有點nazi,不過這個5連確實排歪了,不知道你是不是故意的...
2. 00:55:726 (5,6,7,8,9) - 在這裏突然來一個5連真心很怪..我知道背後是有連打的音樂,但相對來說就很小聲,所以這裏感覺很凸顯..很怪
3. 01:26:961 (7) - 給我我會把這slider停在01:27:491 - 然後把之後的spinner往後移1/4.感覺會比較好

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:08:785 (x) - 試試把volume調到15~25%?45%感覺略大..

[Insane]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 00:32:432 (7) - 這個真心太突然了,如果x0.75還好.x0.5根本就無法預測,一般都會誤認這個為1/2,而且整段也只有這個slider變速.
2. 01:27:491 (1) - 我去...這個,極度confused..我能理解你為甚麼要放在中間,但是這spacing和(10)- 幾乎連在一起,於是會誤認為1/4.

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:00:491 (2) - 試試把這個1/8延長到00:00:491 - ?而且作個減小音量的效果.如果改了,後面的(1)-可以考慮不調整位置直接當一個跳好了.
2. 00:44:873 (x) - 把這個spinner移到00:44:829 - (1/8) 和前面的spinner一樣.
3. 01:12:491 (11,12,13) - 把這個3連放在(4)- 的上面把,讓這個5邊形更完美!

[Daiko]
Pattern/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:03:138 (x) - 種覺得這裡差一點東西,加note?
2. 00:22:197 - 00:28:197 (x) - 在這部分我有其他pattern的看法,感覺這部分多用kat會比較好聽,詳細就看看test file把,覺得可以的話就拿來用 xD
3. 00:46:903 (226) - 這裏是非重音位,所一加上finish感覺就有點怪,remove finish比較好..個人覺得
4. 01:04:550 - 01:15:844 (x) - 同上上

That's it!Pretty nice.

1. AR9理解不能,為甚麼要選AR9?AR8已經很合適,而且這種BPM選AR9可能還會有反效果..

1. 00:33:226 (9,10,11,12) - 好把= =有點nazi,不過這個5連確實排歪了,不知道你是不是故意的...
2. 00:55:726 (5,6,7,8,9) - 在這裏突然來一個5連真心很怪..我知道背後是有連打的音樂,但相對來說就很小聲,所以這裏感覺很凸顯..很怪
3. 01:26:961 (7) - 給我我會把這slider停在01:27:491 - 然後把之後的spinner往後移1/4.感覺會比較好

1. 00:08:785 (x) - 試試把volume調到15~25%?45%感覺略大..

1. it's you better if you include qinche's on the diff so player know which one is made by different mapper
2. Are you sure about the source? This video are the same song but with different source. I try searching the google and it give me the same result. Oh and the title should be "Flower of Fortune"
3. Use 2 tick rate so the speed change on some slider (Insane - 00:32:432 (7), 01:21:844 (1) & Crazy Jay - 00:21:844 (3) this one is harder to read without any warning ) are easier to read

1. I highly suggest you to add a custom hitcircle too, the custom slider tick and slider ball won't clash with the player preferred skin if you can add them
2. Include a cursor.png to complete your cursor set
3. For the sliderball can you animate it so it rotate on the play mode?
4. Also add a pause-overlay.png and fail-background.png. A simple black image are fine if you don't want to trouble yourself finding a new image

1. 00:04:903 (2) - I expect this to have the same rhythm as 00:02:256 (2), that is to start at 1/2. I highly suggest to make them have the same rhythm as it'll be more easy to hear
2. 00:21:667 (3) - NC this
3. 00:28:373 (1) - maybe use 2 stacked circles instead of a kick slider? it may only my preference but I found it flow better with circles than short slider. It's up to you ofc
4. 00:38:432 (3) - the slider end finish is a little too slow, try increasing it for 10% or 20%

1. 00:00:314 (1) - This is better to use the same rhythm as 00:00:138 (1) on Normal. I even found it strange how this Hard diff start with a simple 1/1 slider than a 1/2 slider repeat like on Easy
2. 00:18:667 (2) - not a very good overlap here, I suggest to move the red anchor on 00:17:961 (1) on the center of 00:18:667 (2)
3. 00:19:373 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:22:197 (1,2) - same as 00:18:667 (2) you only need to curve it a little more so 00:22:197 (1) won't cover a little bit of (2)'s slider end
5. 01:24:314 (1) - I suggest to move the repeat so it won't parallel with the previous slider. I think that it a bit crumpled with how it touch the previous slider

1. 00:05:785 (5,6,7,8,9) - The different rhythm stack look ugly, this is my personal reference so you can ignore it (I just can't like it)
2. 00:14:432 (1) - Why is this circle have a different spacing? won't normal spacing works just fine here?
3. 00:25:726 (1) - ^
4. 00:19:020 (9,10,11,12) - same as 00:05:785 (5,6,7,8,9)
   00:55:726 (1,2,3,4,5) - use a hitsound here or increase the volume, currently is too inaudible
5. 01:02:432 (3) - please put the slider repeat on the side. Even though the pace are not fast the repeat are still covered by the previous circle's hit burst
6. 01:12:491 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:14:785 (1) - ^
8. 01:16:020 (1) - the position doesn't flow very good imo, because of the fast stream from the previous patterns that goes from left to right, this counter movement make the flow seems forced. I suggest to put the slider below the stream
9. 01:27:491 (1) - a very cruel trap. I bet first time player will miss this =P

1. 1 unsnapped object!!!
2. 01:26:961 (7) - use the non-costum soft-finish for the end, it sounds much better than a plain soft-hit

1. Disable Countdown
2. Slider Velocity 1,40
3. Overall Difficulty 6

Sallad4ever wrote:

ah the correct one is Shirushi not Sirusi as seen on this web. I guess the last one I give you is from a different version, sorry

Please tell CJ to do something about the slow slider I said on the general section, the slow down that look similar with 1/2 slider are not allowed without any warning
Add the repeat arrow too as it's one set with the hit circle
Also I forgot to tell you to disable the video on Taiko, it's looks bad with how it got pushed down by the taiko bar above so might as well disable it (and maybe add a taiko only BG ? :3)

Sallad4ever wrote:

ah the correct one is Shirushi not Sirusi as seen on this web. I guess the last one I give you is from a different version, sorry
ok I changed~

Please tell CJ to do something about the slow slider I said on the general section, the slow down that look similar with 1/2 slider are not allowed without any warning
CJ has add a kiai for warning, but ifyou think it's not enough, I'll add another sb-warning there~

Add the repeat arrow too as it's one set with the hit circle
ok~

Also I forgot to tell you to disable the video on Taiko, it's looks bad with how it got pushed down by the taiko bar above so might as well disable it (and maybe add a taiko only BG ? :3)
both done~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Unfortunately CJ, kiai time is still not enough of a warning, it's not like a kiai time means there's a change in slider speed anyway. 1 way to still keep the slider is to use slider tick rate 2. If you don't like the sound of the slider tick then you can silence it but don't silence the slider slide. Silencing both slider slide and slider tick are unrankable. So please use slider tick 2

I deny the kudosu you give me before wan, cause I just give a follow up from my previous post

Sallad4ever wrote:

I have some talk with wan to change to use silent slider tick rather than using timing sections which will reduce the slider slide too, I wanted to talk with CJ about his diff too but it seems hard to find him and I see that wan is allowed to update his diff, so~

After 1 and a half year in pending and 2 times into graveyard, I see no reason for me to delay this map anymore so here's your Bubble~

That trap on Insane is arrrghhhh

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
這AR太鬼畜了 建議+2 ?

<Hard>
AR+1 ?
00:13:020 (3) - 後面緊接的綠線用不到 可以砍了 (00:13:108)
00:22:197 (1) - slider裡的綠線也無用

<Insane>
00:32:432 (7) - 無用綠線在這裡
00:50:432 (1) - new combo (白痴bug)

<Copy Jay>
難得有一個我也許能FC的DIFF

<Daiko>
01:04:550 (1) - new combo
難爆了這鬼diff

Fix those tiny issues please, i will rank it after rechecking