Naitoshi wrote:

Short lil mod from queue~

FIRST MOD ... worst mod
[General]
Disable Widescreen support throughout all diffs (no sb) Doesn't matter nvm

I think you may want an easy just for the spread i will think about this.. i tried to keep normal under 2 stars lol but if more people/ experienced modder and or B/QAT suggests this i will add one

You should put your timing point (red tick) at offset 00:00:347 - because right now it's timed off of the offbeat... Which isn't really much of a problem for mapping. It just bothers me a bit that the downbeat is on a red tick and it makes the metronome sound weird lol. But if it's too much of a problem to resnap things (I don't know why you'd have to but it sometimes happens) you can just ignore this suggestion

Your mp3 sounds sooooooo eeeew ...... It sounds so messy for some reason >.> I recommend stealing this song's mp3 from someone else

The hitsounds that you've used for this song are actually pretty soft. I think they're a bit too soft to play in this song. For your softclap, why not use something louder and more impactful? To amplify the intensity of the song... I think it would also sound a bit better if you utilized the normal sampleset a bit for big hits in the song like (of the insane) 00:06:753 (3) - the head here, 00:12:691 (1) - or here, 00:25:191 (1) - or here If you do end up utilizing the normal sampleset some of those hits, you can keep your original finish by changing the addition to "soft" i think the clap is fine, i can hear it very well, will change if more people suggest this though ;w; ill keep in mind your normal sampleset suggestions

[Insane]
00:32:222 (4,1) - fix slider end blanket?
00:38:784 (5) - ctrl + G feels a bit better here
00:40:191 - in this section I don't think you need so many finishes. If anything you could just have the slider end of 00:41:284 (5) - have a finish and then the rest of it could be claps (where needed) Here it's a bit too much. It almost sounds ambient like that lol.
00:41:597 (1) - clap head instead of finish? removed finish instead no added clap
00:45:347 (7) - maybe finish? i dont think it fits, the 'stream' sound ends very abruptly on a weak beat ;w; kind of fades a bit
00:45:503 - map this section? or at least this 00:52:691 - that would be cool. Just feels a bit empty, and then we go straight into a kiai.
00:56:284 (5) - finish slider end? note: if you do that you should map this 01:06:441 - and finish it as well
00:57:222 (4,1) - I feel that the distance between these two lessens the intensity a bit. Maybe more spacing? any suggestions? not really sure what to do :<
00:58:472 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - lol looks cool and looks like it would play terribly but it plays awesomely x) ... thanks! lol
01:00:191 (1,2) - this stops the flow a bit and feels weird. Consider doing something like this? i made the spacing larger, since i like the flow as it is
01:01:441 (1) - finish this?
01:13:941 (1) - it'd be kinda cool to move this somewhere around x:487 y:338 just to keep that vertical jump motion. It's not a big deal but it would feel pretty cool. As it is it kinda confused my hands lol. i want to emphasize the difference in sound (hinted from the nc lol)
01:43:784 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - awesome feeling jumps :p \:D/
01:46:284 (4) - soft addition finish this?
01:48:784 (5) - this too? I'm not sure we'd hear the drum clap anyway. The volume is a bit low
01:53:784 (4) - ^?
01:55:503 - If you decided to map the other part map this too lol.... unless you only mapped the tiny part of it well theres a spinner here, i think its enough warm up, for previous part i pretty much mapped as much as how long this spinner is :3
02:08:941 (1) - finish this?
02:25:503 - this has some cool rhythms to map ill think about it, it just uses a lot of blue ticks out of no where and may cause the player to go off guard :<
02:28:784 (5) - finish slider end?
02:31:441 (1) - finish head?
02:33:941 (1) - oh NOW you finish that finish within the song :ppp (I don't think I point them all out though)

[Hard]
Awesome difficulty seriously tyty :w;
Same thing in the insane about the finishes and what-not yee copied hitsounds from insane lol
I think you should go through your diff and resnap stuff though


01:00:816 (3,1) - you can blanket this better
01:15:659 (2) - curve a bit more? or rotate clockwise a few degrees? i prefer it as it is orz

yup. there ya go

[Normal]
same thing here with finishes ofc
get rid of unused green ticks? >w>

00:21:597 (3) - blanket better? you could curve it less and then move 4 i dont see the problem here lol
01:13:784 (3,4) - slider instead? nah, i think circle works better

cool


Wish I could've said more but the diffs are pretty good to me. Hope I helped(even just a little newb modder) Just that the mp3 sounds whack and the hitsounds sound a little puny for this song and a little inconsistent.
Had fun playing these (ask me to testplay this if ya want)

About the hitsound suggestions: I'm really picky :/ don't mind me
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

pkk wrote:

love this song~

also why is the dude in the background flipping me off? :3

General

1. 02:48:300 (1) - (for hard/insane diff) imo it's better to start the spinner on 02:47:988 - than on 02:48:300 - even though there's a sound there because starting from 02:47:832 - you can hear the guitar note being held down and you can map that with the spinner o/ fixed
   
2. 00:01:503 - the green line here is the blue tick in normal/insane but on the downbeat in your hard diff ;; aa fixed for consistency
   
3. 02:05:332 - sounds better to start the spinner here for normal/hard diff, you did this for your insane diff what was i thinking for normal hard.. fixed
   
4. Normal diff is a bit hard for beginners (lots of 1/2, for example 02:19:707 (4,5,1,2,3) - ), I highly recommend you make an easy diff. Sometimes you can't rely on star rating [strike]the thing is i kinda structured my diffs to balance in this way, so if i add an easy it'l mess up the spread so that i may have to remap many other parts..ill think about this tho.. why do my NHI maps never work out ;w;;;;

Normal

1. 00:06:113 (5,1) - try using a 1/1 slider at 00:06:269 - so you can map the strong beat and also make the rhythm easier (I feel that it fits better too but that's just me). Consider the same thing at 00:11:269 -ok

Hard

1. 00:05:957 (3,1,2) - it's a good idea to swap the NC at 00:06:425 (1,2) - so the jump is easier to read since due to the NC. Over at 00:11:425 (1,2) - you can do the same thing. fixed
   
2. 00:58:925 (1,2) - same over here, having the NC on 00:59:082 (2) - will emphasize the strong beats/finish sound in the music as well as the downbeat. This applies to 01:09:082 (2) - as well. Also consider 00:33:925 (5,6) - , etc fixed
   
3. 01:43:300 (2,1,2,3,4) - rhythm here can be improved, imo it's better to have the sliders start on the strong beats:
   
   SPOILER

   

did something similar

Insane

1. 00:22:519 (5) - drum clap sounds better here since the drum beat increases in pitch here in the music added
   
2. 00:41:113 (4) - just a suggestion, try moving this to x 121 y 232. You might like this flow better i prefer the current :>
   
3. 01:03:925 (1,2) - swap NC as it feels more natural on the downbeat k
   
4. 01:09:550 (1) - might look nicer if you turn the first linear point into a regular point k
   
5. 02:24:394 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the vocals here aren't exactly snapped to the white/red ticks (they're a little bit late) and the drums here in the music are also pretty loud. Consider changing the rhythm. You can turn 02:25:019 (6,1) - into a stream or do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   i think ill keep the current, even if the vocals aren't exact they're close enough and the music is timed to the white ticks

^basically just move the whole thing back 1/2 then add a circle at 01:44:707 - so you have two circles to emphasize the sound in the music

really nice insanethanks \:D

Good stuff, have fun mapping~!

UndeadCapulet wrote:

00:11:738 http://puu.sh/fjjGx/5c0ffe15b6.jpg\ did something similar
00:15:175 http://puu.sh/fjkDr/4b6ce019fb.jpg ^
00:40:097 http://puu.sh/fjkSD/c6bf443608.jpg ^
00:55:175 http://puu.sh/fjmwr/32b9a987d6.jpg i think ill keep the current one
01:05:175 http://puu.sh/fjmIV/1bc8513b72.jpg ^
01:15:175 http://puu.sh/fjmUZ/61ba253e65.jpg did something similar
01:39:082 http://puu.sh/fjnF7/0ca9d3d614.jpg i think ill keep the current one
01:46:269 http://puu.sh/fjnU9/aaf81c86f1.jpg did something similar
02:18:925 http://puu.sh/fjoaB/eb8813feae.jpg i think ill keep the current one
02:21:582 http://puu.sh/fjoiB/d4291aa45d.jpg ^
02:22:050 http://puu.sh/fjor5/50b7cdbd90.jpg ^
I do have one suggestion to make for actual improvement of the map (and not me being pedantic and obsessive). Make 02:28:769 a repeating slider, I don't like how the white tick is completely empty, it kinda loses the energy of the chorus. Move it down and Ctrl+G it if you do so. no change here, the reason behinf this is that the finish strong beat is on the red while there nothing on the downbeat

Good luck on getting it ranked! I'll star this when I have some available
EDIT: Starred!thank u !

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue

• Normal

1. 00:10:644 (5,1) - fix blanket. ok
2. 00:54:707 (1) - how about remove this slider and add spin 00:50:332 to 00:54:707 ? i think it makes easy tempo. i prefer the current
3. 01:43:300 (6) - i think this timing point doesn't need to this diff.
4. 01:43:769 - ^
5. 01:44:082 - ^
6. 01:44:394 - ^
7. 01:44:707 - ^ all fixed
8. 02:10:644 (2) - try to move this slider like this? i think it makes better for flow. i prefer the current
9. 00:14:082 (3) - add clap at the slider's tail.(not to reverse arrow) i think it's more fit the music > < yes, i missed that ;; fixed,
10. 00:17:207 (4) - ^ ^
11. 00:19:082 (3) - remove clap at the slider's reverse arrow. and changing clap to whistle at the slider's tail. ^

• Hard

1. 00:58:300 (3,4) - i think doesn't fit normal sound...! ok
2. 01:55:332 (2) - add drum clap. i think drum finish works better
3. 00:16:425 (1,2) - NC swap.
4. 00:38:925 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:03:925 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:16:425 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:40:175 (1,2) - ^all fixed

• Insane

1. 00:12:988 (2) - remove clap.
2. 00:13:144 (3) - add clap at the slider's head.
3. 00:13:613 (4,5) - clap swap.
4. 00:14:082 (1,2) - clap and whistle swap.
5. 00:15:644 (2) - add clap.
6. 00:16:269 (5) - ^ sorry these claps are all intentional
7. 00:18:769 (5,3,5) - how about changing whistle to clap? i think it's better for music. yeah.. may of misclicked 'w' instead of 'r' when hitsouding lol
8. 02:47:363 (6) - NC!? i want the triplet to be all in the same combo

hope so helpful <3 [color=#0000FF]it was helpful, thanks Euny
good luck o_<[/color]

Fort wrote:

hi M4M

Insane:
00:27:988 (2) - move to x384y112 looks better did something similar
00:45:175 (5,6,7) - raise volume up pls, keep that thing audible ok, raised 5% but changed to normal sampleset
01:08:691 (1,1) - NC here looks weird oops thats a mistake lol
01:09:550 (1) - slider end in 01:09:628 - and looks good if you add Circle and NC it in 01:09:707 - i prefer the current
01:10:566 - add notes here if you want (i look some pattern in this map, so its up to you to change all of it) true theres a sound there but i want to keep the current rhythm for the jump, dont feel like spamming triplets after a stream
01:16:894 (3,4) - slider in 01:16:894 - sounds better theres a guitar and drum sound there so i have a circle
01:42:832 (2,3) - you can stack this notes since 01:43:144 - needs clickable objects (and quite nice downbeat there) ok added note
01:49:238 (1,2) - change to 1/1 slider, this can make 1/3 pattern read easier if you want changed to 1/3.. i was wrong about i being 1/6 o-o
02:12:050 (1) - same like i say before, and do the same for this pattern 02:22:050 (1,1) - too no change
02:19:707 (4) - why overlap this? ok stacked

Hard:
00:58:300 (3,4) - you can add reverse arrow in (3), and change (4) to circle, sounds nice changed this from previous mod
01:00:019 - no notes in strong part? its up to you then :3 im not sure what is so strong here ?
01:25:332 (4) - NC it, same like insane fixed insane instead

Normal:
the intensity so hard for normal diff lol :3
00:03:613 (5) - you should move this pattern to 00:03:769 - (but you too much make this pattern in other part, so idk) i prefer use white ticks as basic patterning. the guitar or whatever it is; starts there on the red tick
00:06:269 - its little bit confusing i think, its like follow intrument then vocal again its like lol i dont think its so confusing lol

normal looks good for consistency

Good luck for rank!. thanks !

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m from your queue

[General]

• Looks fine \:D

[Insane]

1. 00:02:675 (5) - NC for change in spacing ? added
2. 00:32:988 (2,3) - Aesthetic - the sliders placed so close try space them a bit farther ? i dont see the problem here? :< no change
3. 01:06:269 (5) - Looks you skip the emphasized 1/2 beat here which I don't know why and I think this is the only place that you skip emphasized 1/2 since you don't skip it here 00:56:425 (1) - , 02:08:925 (1) - ,02:18:925 (1) - yeah this was bothering me for a while but i was lazy to change it before, fixed now
4. 01:14:082 (2) - imo soft-sampleset sound nice here imo i prefer drum
5. 01:20:957 - This beat can be emphasized more , using this as slider end feel a bit weird for me i think the slider works well, it emphasizes the drag of the finish if that makes sense lol
6. 02:09:394 (2) - Ctrl+G this ? flow a bit nice imo i kind of prefer my current flow ;w;
7. 02:08:925 (1) - Finish at head instead of clap ? wow did i really put a clap there.. fixed
8. 02:17:441 - imo the beat here sound pretty emphasized so mapping this beat would give nice feeling when playing it imo i agree but i dont think i want to include a stream there right now
9. 02:38:144 (2) - imo I see that you applied every hitsound here but you use low spacing here which make me feel a bit curious that if you intend to emphasis the beat here why not use jumps here to emphasis this too ? increased distance
10. 02:38:457 - This beat can be emphasized more , using this as slider end feel a bit weird for me aa i think its fine imo
11. 02:40:566 - Why not map this beat? ok
12. 02:42:363 (5) - Triplet here instead ? i dont think that sound is very strong to be mapped
13. 02:46:582 (3,4,5) - Try this rhythm , it sound nice imo but I'm not sure is the white tick is okay to map ? sorry i prefer my circles :<

[Hard]

• Redundant green timing point ? 00:06:582 - , 00:12:832 - , 00:22:753 - , 00:44:394 - , 00:45:332 - , 00:54:863 - , 01:03:613 - , 01:04:003 - , 01:04:707 - , 01:09:941 - , 01:24:472 - , 01:24:707 - , 01:25:019 - , 01:25:488 - , 01:43:457 - , 01:43:925 - , 01:44:238 - , 01:44:550 - , 01:44:863 - , 01:55:488 - , 02:49:707 - , 02:50:332 - , 02:50:800 - pretty much all removed

1. 00:19:082 (1) - Clap at tail ? added
2. 00:31:425 (1) - Finish ? added
3. 00:31:582 (2) - Delete clap and finish ? doesn't sound right for me removed
4. 00:33:925 (1) - Finish ? added
5. 00:34:082 (2) - Delete finish ? doesn't sound right for me removed

[Normal]

• Redundant green timing point ? 01:09:784 - removed

1. 00:40:957 (2) - Try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
   I feel like 1/2 sound pretty nice when mappeddid something similar

Great mapset yaay thank you for the star

Good luck

Setz wrote:

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[General]

1. I think you should add an uninherited timing point at 00:02:675 - just to make the timeline easier to read. the same kind of thing happened with my se-no map. by doing this, all your downbeats land in proper places instead of red ticks. I have a feeling that since you didn't do this from the start, you ended mapping a bunch of unfitting passive 1/2 that make the map very weird to play (passive meaning, start on red, end on white tick). Get more opinions on this, though. I could always be wrong here. maybe ask pishifat. ill just ask pishi for this, since this may just be one of those weird songs that go offbeat very often, for example its many finishes that start on the red tick, a lot of songs have this but this one has a lot..but when you look at some other areas, the current timing would make sense
2. I think you are going to need an easy. I know the normal is under 2 stars, but the bpm on this is quite high for beginners, and your choice of slider velocity and distance snap just aggravates the issue further. ill have to think about this.. since i set the diffs to be at an ok N H I spread, if i add an easy everything will be unbalanced and ill have to remap a lot ;_;

[Insane]

1. 00:22:753 (2) - this is overmapped, there is no sound on the blue tick true there isnt a drum played there but theres the start of the weird sound, ill keep for now, might change later
2. 00:37:675 (1) - consider curving this slider up, for better flow coming from the previous combo. the curve plays nice due to the angle from there the previous object is. i want this turn to be sharp for emphasis
3. 00:58:457 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - hmm, these types of streams are kind of unsightly honestly. and the difference in spacing mid stream doesn't really fit here. I suggest you go for an even spaced stream, looks and plays better. ( to be clear, my problem with this is the random gap mid stream. this is repeated throughout the map, so I will only point it out once.) fixed just this one, most of them are before the sv changes so it kind of indicates those
4. 02:05:331 (1) - if i were you, i would start this spinner around here. 02:02:987 - makes more sense to me. true but the the spinner would be really long, so i started it on the sound at 02:05:332 -
5. 02:28:769 (5) - strong beat on slider end. fixed
6. 02:35:331 - spinner here maybe.aa i dont really want one there, i mean the prev kiai was a bit chaotic a break would of been good imo

[Hard]

1. some of the jumps in this diff might be too much for a hard, specially since some of them are circle jumps. also, this is a little dense for a hard of this bpm, you should try to use some more 1/1 sliders to follow vocals. i will think about this,changed a few things but just since insane is very dense and full of jumps i incorporated some into hard so the spread isnt a bad lol
2. 00:01:582 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space these the same way, since they are in the same combo, and there is no change in the music where 4 is. no changes, because 1,2,3 are following the drum taps while 4 is more like a transition to the next part
3. 00:04:394 (2) - unfitting imo, you are ignoring the vocal at 00:04:550 - which at this point is the dominant par tof the music fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:02:519 (2,3) - ewww, note stacks in the lowest diff of the set, and 1/2 at 192 bpm to boot, I really don't like this at all. yet another reason why you might need an easy. lol
2. 00:20:175 (1) - check spacing with previous object fixed
3. 00:20:175 (1,2) - make them parallel, if that is what you were trying to do. k
4. 02:05:332 (1,1) - too short recovery time after the spinner for this bpm. the general guideline for normal is 750 ms and you are short here by roughly 120 removed spinner

that is all I have. definitely try to look into both my points under general

good luck with the set ty !

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:14:707 (3) - ctrl+g? i prefer the current flow ;w;
00:30:566 (3) - delete but theres a triplet sound there?
00:31:425 (1,2) - 00:32:675 (1,2,3) - I think those two should use same type of rhythm ok
00:38:457 (4) - ctrl+g i prefer current flow
00:58:769 (1,2) - well what i think is no necessary to use the huge jump on here fixed spacing
02:11:035 (x) - well...rhythm on here？ i see what you mean, but idk how i would put that stream without breaking the flow ;w;
02:17:441 (x) - ^ ^
02:41:582 (1,2) - weird.. lol, think that was an accident, fixed

[Hard]
00:25:175 (1,2,3) - use same space fixed
00:28:457 (3) - actually I suggest move this note on x500 y36，and you dont need wrong about space also the flow will be more smooth did something similar
00:42:675 (1,2) - space and blanket fixed
01:45:800 (2,3) - blanket ^
02:13:925 (1) - move to x288 y152 did something similar
actually some 1/4 slider begin at white line will be more comfortable I think
and some QAT may think the spread between Insane and Hard will be problem, take care about that imo hard to insane should be fine, both have density, 1/4's and jumps its just the star rating because i use more circles in insane so the star rating is higher

[Normal]
02:13:457 (2) - already teach the HP bar, move down litter bit ok
hmmm...for a Normal diff, it looks really cool already, but for a low diff in osu, it is too hard, like much of overlap and 1/4 rhythm, I dont think new player can handle for that so...

Take care about spread problem and try to add a easy diff _(:зゝ∠)_ hh ok i will add one, so many people told me ;_;

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

1. Inconsistent video offset.
2. Unused *.osb file.
3. Normal is too difficult to be lowest diff.
4. I recommend disabling letterbox in breaks because it obscures part of the video. all fixed, and i will be making an easy

[Normal]

1. 01:46:269 (3,4,5) - Rhythm here is confusing as beat on (4) is weak, and there's no sound on end of (3), making it difficult for the player to get a feel for the rhythm. I recommend removing (4) and extending (3) by 1/2 tick. ok
2. 02:14:707 (5,1) - eh.. the spacing here is bothering me. fixedd ;w;
3. 02:24:707 (5,1) - Player is really likely to hit (1) early by 1/2 beat because of vocal there, especially since this is the lowest diff. ok changed rhythm
   The map could be more memorable if you used some more distinct patterns.aa im not good with this :V

[Hard]

1. 00:29:863 (4,5,1) - This flow is pretty bad. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/gfm1r/242416c3a5.jpg Just make the flow less awkward. did something along the lines of your example
2. 00:42:675 (1,2) - Fix blanket. ok
3. 00:59:082 (1,2,3) - These are overlapping a lot, which makes it look messy and a bit hard to read. I recommend spacing it out like 02:11:582 (1,2,3) and 02:21:582 (1,2,3)ok(im just running out of room on the screen xD

[Insane]

1. 00:44:238 (2,3,4) - Especially for (3,4), the way this is spaced makes it too hard to tell when (3) ends. ok fixed, evened out spacing
2. 00:59:316 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here is really awkward. This direction would work much better: http://puu.sh/gfnjC/2979944943.jpg imo the current one flows better
3. 00:59:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe it'd be nice to make a regular hexagon? ok
4. 01:07:519 (5,1) - It'd probably play nicer if you add a jump here to accent (1). increased spacing a bit, not sure what else to do without ruining the current pattern
5. 01:11:113 (4) - I recommend replacing this with two circles. I think the beat at 01:11:269 is worth clicking. It also matches with 01:01:113 (5,6) yeah i agree
6. 01:18:457 (3,4,5,1) - The pattern you chose here makes the spacing a bit uncomfortable. I suggest http://puu.sh/gfnIV/6b1044fa29.jpg or http://puu.sh/gfnPs/ed8cf620de.jpg orz i prefer my own pattern
7. 02:28:925 (6) - Rhythm feels much better if you use a 1/1 slider like you did in every other part of the map. ok
8. 02:41:269 (6) - Ctrl+G feels better imo. i prefer the current flow
9. 02:42:207 (4,5) - I think it may be better to reverse this rhythm, to place a circle where the clap is: http://puu.sh/gfodA/e070fb7923.jpg

Good luck.

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! o/

General

1. BG Size is Wrong ! u can use this ! http://puu.sh/ghWC8/0f7db19c76.jpg fixed
2. Remove Lettre Box During breaks in all Diffs fixed
3. Maby Increase OD And HP By +1 in Insane And Hard i have the od's in order from 3-4-5-6 ;w;
4. Videos Offset in insane is 20ms ! REduce it to 18 like others
5. Optional : Reduce Offset By -2 Ms Like this ! http://puu.sh/gjkU7/d28c6f219b.jpg For More Accuracy ok

Easy

1. OD And HP 2
2. Lower the AR ! Maby 3 Or 3.5 no changes to diff settings, i have them in order with the other diffs lol/color]
3. 00:02:832 (3,1) - Switch NC / 00:05:175 (3,1) - ^ after first / 00:07:675 (2) - NC ! To loo Something like http://puu.sh/gjiRh/1dd5112e3d.jpg
4. 00:40:957 (2) - Lower a bit to not touch 00:39:082 (3) - ok
5. 01:05:175 (1,2,3) - i suggest to keep rhythm consistent ! Make it Same as 00:55:175 (1,2,3,4) - hh i have a different rhythm here because if i do the samr rhythm all the time it gets boring imo
6. 01:49:707 (3) - Why Snapped with 1/3 http://puu.sh/gjjlG/205b47b595.jpg ! See Next Suggestion for rhythm there
7. 01:49:707 (3,1) - Rhythm Suggestion to Remove 1/3 http://puu.sh/gjjtc/0076f4576a.jpg fixed
8. 01:55:332 (1) - NC i dont really want a combo of '1' in an easy :V
9. Try To REduce Some hitcircles to lower stars diff ! Maby those 00:21:269 (3) - 00:28:769 (3) - 01:18:769 (3) - 01:23:769 (3) - 02:16:269 (3) -
   02:41:269 (3) - 02:46:269 (3) - maybe.. its just i dont want spread to normal to be too much :V

good luck kawaifly o/

eINess wrote:

I'm sorry for late, killing time from school orz thats ok

[Insane]

1. 00:05:798 (4) - well.. make circle > slider better repeat slider. start slider at 00:05:955 - make good follow with vocal. ok
2. 00:09:548 (5) - same above changed to 1/1 slider
3. 00:14:705 (3) - ctrl+g better, I think just more fun? :3 i prefer current :>
4. 00:22:751 (2) - make same DS prev and next i cant go this distance with ds on ;w;
5. 00:41:423 (1) - make blanket with 00:41:892 (2) - , better for design. or move x:420 y:27 this 00:41:892 (2) - ok
6. 00:42:673 (1) - why only whistle with finish this haed? and you missed blanket little. fixed blanket, whistle is to emphasize higher pitch
7. 00:43:142 (2,3) - make ctrl + g, heard better vocal. nice
8. 01:09:080 (1) - cheak blanket with 01:09:314 (2) - ok
9. 01:49:939 (4) - you should be star 1/6 beat here. >> 01:49:913 - actually 1/3, something happened i probably resnapped notes and forgot to bring it back to 1/3 o^o fixed
10. 02:33:923 (1) - fix blanket with 02:34:392 (2) ok-
    
    well.. I don't recommend your break time. like 02:25:330 (1) - ~ 02:27:673 (1) - i made this one because the music goes really off at mostly blue ticks and it may be confusing for the player // 02:35:173 (1) - ~ 02:37:673 (1) - made this one because long vocals and i dont want to put spinner ;^;
    really weried to play ; ^ ;

other diffs look find to me >_> take my star! thanks for the star!
GL

sheela901 wrote:

Hey kakifly!

General

1. soft-hitclap.wav has a delay 1ms, although it would be unrankable if it's ~5ms. Just to be safe, here's a new file. added
2. Remove the osb file, since you don't have any SB.i swear i removed this before, it came back, removed.

Easy

1. 00:02:830 to 00:09:392 - The new combo pattern here doesn't match very well with the song. Try this pattern:fixed
   I would also add a new combo on 00:02:830 (2) -, but it would let the first object lonely. i followed what you did in the picture, i think a longer combo would be better than a combo of '1' which may confuse beginners
2. 00:13:455 (2) - I think it forgot the whistle on the head and a clap at the end, like in the second similar section. There's also 00:15:955 (2) . fixed
3. 00:25:955 (2,3) - Get the distance constant with the others, so a distance 1.30x would be here. You made a mistake I guess. oops, fixed
4. 01:19:080 (3,1) - Be careful with the distance between them. fixed
5. 01:35:330 to 01:42:830 - Check the hitsounds in this section. For example, on the tail on 01:42:830 contains a drum clap, but I don't hear the beat in the music that makes the object having a clap. But I think a whistle would go. i copied hitsounds from insane, where i had a pattern for the drum claps.. did them a while ago so i forgot the pattern but for easy to be consistent with the other diffs, it would have the drum claps too
6. 01:46:736 (2,2) - I would move those sliders to 1/2 a beat forward and reduce the sliders' length by 1/2 a beat, or add 1/2 a beat in the slider, because the strong beats stand on the upbeats.yeah thats a lot better, fixed

Normal

1. 00:01:580 to 00:12:673 - Like in the Easy section, I think the pattern in the combo would go something like this: fixed all
2. 00:16:580 (3) - There's a crash, so why not a finish. added a drum whistle, since it sounded more appropriate, the crash sound isnt the same as the places where i put finishes
3. 00:20:173 (1) - The tail should have a finish instead of a clap according to the previous rhythms. you mean whistle? all other diffs have clap here im pretty sure. removed whistle & added clap
4. 00:30:955 (2) - I don't hear any cymbal sound in the music. my mistake, fixed
5. 01:05:173 (1,2) - Distance between them is not consistent to the others. what happened there lol.. fixed
6. 02:08:767 (3) - I don't really see clearly the head due to 02:07:673 (1) -'s tail stacking on the circle to be honest. its fine for me, probably due to different skins but i think this should be fine, ive done some in my other ranked maps and it shouldnt be too hard to see, by the time its time to click the note the '3' is completely visible
7. 01:35:330 - Check in the Easy section.
8. 01:37:830 (1,2) - Inconsistent distance between them. Same thing goes to 01:47:830 (1,2) - 02:45:955 (2,3) . all fixed
9. 02:14:705 (5,1) - The distance is inconsistent, but I think it was on purpose for aesthetic. Also, I don't like the current flow from 02:13:923 (4,5,1) . It's kind of uncomfortable to my arm, yet take my skills to the blame. fixed distance a little, no change to flow, it was fine for me
10. 02:25:329 (1) - Hearing this circle on the big downbeat sounds a bit weird. I would try to follow the vocal. imo the downbeat is a lot stronger than the vocal, so keeping the current

Hard

1. 00:28:767 (4) - Move this more further from the previous circle? You use that kind of pattern when it's 1/2 rhythm like 00:07:205 (3,4) . oh i see what you mean, well i thought the AR would be enough to show but you're right, moved further
2. 00:30:173 (1,2) - Nazi, but blanket.ok
3. 01:07:361 (4,5) - Try switching the position of those two (Ctrl + G)? The flow would fluid. yeah, fixed
4. 02:07:517 (2,1) - The flow is broken to me. It feels weird when you touch those objects in those directions. I would make a blanket pattern with (1) and (1), then move the circle down of the tail of 02:07:205 (1) . It should something like this: nice, did something similar
   Check also the hitsounds by looking at the two sections above. Too lazy to post.

Insane

1. 00:33:455 (4) - This sounds weird to me, because I don't think it follows anything. Try a circle and 1/2 slider to hit the vocals. i prefer the current, it's following the drums very clearly
2. 00:39:705 - I'd put a circle on that tick, like you did to 00:29:705 . The beat seems to start a new rhythm and it's the first beat in the that new rhythm, so maybe a circle would likely get it.fixed
3. 00:43:064 - Add a circle here? This section that starts on 00:40:173 uses only 1/2 rhythm, yet the previous similar section has triplets. And that section looks intense (in the music), so something in the map should be intense there. There's also 00:40:564 - 00:41:814 . i don't feel the same about that part, it seems like a less dominant sounds than the ticks before where i had 1/4
4. 01:00:955 (4,5,6) - In my opinion, the short distance not in-between, but before and after seems to be uncomfortable to the arm. Try this:
   (4) goes where the (5) is, which is basically switching with Ctrl + G, then move (6) to where (5) were (unless you moved (4) first, then it's (4)). fixed, did something similar
5. 01:02:205 (5,1) - The higher jump should go there, instead of 01:01:892 (4,5) because the measure starts where 01:02:673 (1) is, so there's a downbeat that contains a stronger beat. changed rhythm a bit to make a jump
6. 01:18:455 (3,4) - The short distance between them and the previous slider doesn't go with the flow; the same reason with the arm. I'd move them (I don't know where...) further from that slider. fixed
7. 02:13:455 (5,1) - Try a jump? It fits with the music. maybe not here, the finish just doesnt seem as strong to me
8. 02:42:205 (4) - Switch the head and tail. The current flow doesn't seem to go well, and a higher distance would fit with the beats in my opinion. i think they work fine imo There's also 02:43:455 (3) .

Lazy to add the hitsounds. Again, check in the other sections done.

Okay, this should be it. Poke me for a recheck.

sheela901 wrote:

Recheck:

General

1. Add her album FlowersBEST in the tags.added

Hitsounds

I'll start with the hitsounds by using your hardest difficulty. That way, you'll copy the hitsounds to the rest of your mapset.

1. 00:12:673 - This section doesn't have the same pattern used in 01:15:173 and 02:37:673 specifically the drum clap. should be all fixed now
2. 00:16:580 (1) - I hear a crash on the head. added drum whistle
3. 01:45:330 to 01:55:330 - I'd increase the volume for this section to 60%, because I cannot hear the finishes. If the volume gets high, then it really fits with the beats, since the finishes are noticeable in the music ok.

Easy

1. 01:16:892 (3) - I forgot to also mention this to make a similar rhythm like 02:39:392 (3,4,1) . ok

Normal

1. 02:39:705 (4) - Move this to the up-left direction to get the same distance. ok
2. 02:25:330 - The break is missing here.oops added

Hard

1. 02:18:923 (1,2) - Switch the order in the timeline: the slider goes first followed by the circle. You usually put a slider when there's a finish in the rhythm. The current sounds awkward. fixed

Insane

1. 00:22:751 (2) - Nazi, but move this more down to get the distance from previous and next objects. fixed
2. 01:23:142 (2) - Try a larger distance between this and the previous slider? The short one doesn't really fit with the beats, since they're strong.i dont think its very strong a jump wouldnt be needed here imo

Alright, poke me again for a final recheck.

14:39 kakifly: finished the recheck, thanks again
14:39 kakifly: i'm going to be going AFK for a bit
14:49 sheela901: Hey. I was AFK. Whenever you're ready
14:50 kakifly: just added 500 audio lead in to the diffs
14:50 kakifly: im checking over for anything questionable
14:50 sheela901: Okay
14:54 kakifly: okay ready
14:54 sheela901: Do the command /np
14:54 *kakifly is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/597671 Hanatan - Raspberry*Monster]
14:55 sheela901: How come the image file went to PNG?
14:56 kakifly: not sure, it should be the one you sent me
14:56 kakifly: maybe you saved in png?apparently it handles bright colours better
14:57 sheela901: If I saved it in PNG, then the size would large. Anyways, that's not an issue
14:57 kakifly: as long as its the right cropped it should be fine
14:57 sheela901: yes
14:58 sheela901: Insane don't have an audio lead-in
14:58 sheela901: *doesn't
14:58 kakifly: added,
14:59 kakifly: i added before but maybe i forgot to save or something..orz
14:59 sheela901: lol
15:01 sheela901: In Hard, 00:53:767 (1) - the tail isn't correctly snapped
15:01 kakifly: i n0ticed in insane as well, anyways gonna fix
15:04 sheela901: In Insane, 01:21:111 (4,5) - should have their hitsounds switched
15:04 kakifly: no actually the current hitsounds are correct
15:06 sheela901: Hmm... 01:21:267 (5) - should have a clap? You added one on 01:21:892 (4) - 's head
15:07 kakifly: yeah, addd
15:07 kakifly: added*
15:09 sheela901: 00:22:751 (2) - I forgot the word "same" in my post
15:09 sheela901: The distance is inconsistent to the previous and next objects
15:09 kakifly: ok fixed
15:12 kakifly: sorry i have to leave, my weekends are usually busy x_x
15:12 kakifly: i updated the map, you can leave anything else in forum pm/ thread
15:12 sheela901: Oh okay. WHen will you come back?
15:12 kakifly: ill be back on in a few hours
15:12 sheela901: Okay.
15:12 sheela901: See you later
15:12 kakifly: see you
15:12 kakifly: bye
18:20 kakifly: hey i'm back,
18:20 sheela901: yey
18:21 kakifly: so about the offset check , you said you dont think its on the right tick?
18:21 kakifly: or do you mean it may be a few ms off?
18:21 kakifly: since i talked to pishi about timing on this map before, not sure if it relates to what you were thinking
18:23 sheela901: osu! kind of bugged. Anyways, I'm saying that I think the offset starts 1/2 early
18:24 kakifly: oh i've confirmed this with pishi a while ago,
18:24 kakifly: ill screenshot the forum pm hold on
18:24 sheela901: oh
18:26 kakifly: my computer isnt opening chrome so.. ill screenshot from my phone and forum pm you
18:26 sheela901: Okat
18:26 sheela901: *okay
18:28 kakifly: sent
18:28 sheela901: Alright
18:29 kakifly: oh hes on right now lol
18:29 sheela901: pishifat?
18:29 kakifly: yeah
18:30 sheela901: ok
18:30 kakifly: you can ask him to double check if you want but it's already confirmed with him
18:31 sheela901: I actually sent a message to him before
18:31 sheela901: I just wanted to make sure about the offset
18:31 sheela901: By the way, did you fix the preview point?
18:32 kakifly: yeah, updated
18:32 sheela901: Okay
18:32 kakifly: pretty much in the forum pm setz said the same thing about the offset, so i just asked pishi and he said its fine like this
18:33 sheela901: Okay. pishifat: timer god
18:33 kakifly: yep
18:34 sheela901: Uhmm... I guess there's no more things to suggest
18:34 sheela901: and it's ready to be qualified
18:34 kakifly: just let me double check stuff to be sure
18:34 sheela901: Go ahead