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brackets are small suggestions for mostly aesthetics ,can ignore if you want to
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00:38:941 (7,1) - [Can make 7 either parallel or perpendicular to 1]
00:49:440 (2,3,4) - Line acceleration makes everything harder to hit man,use some sort of angle here or decrease spacing a bit or you could repeat 01:00:517 (2,3,4) - this
01:08:017 (3,6) - [Ehh diagonal sliders dont really look good individually they look better if theyre in a pattern, would suggest curving them a bit or anchoring]
01:16:094 (1,2) - Slider is pointing away from 2 which doesnt fit particularly well here , but the kink is kinda small so it might be okay for now
01:24:633 (2,3,4,5,6) - [Could make the star pattern neater i m o]
01:27:921 - Nice bookmark :^)
01:37:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could try some different patterns with this kind of slidershape because seeing the same pattern gets boring asf
Came up with
this. You could try something else though idk
01:40:094 - I really dont like how the 1/3 sliders in these sections end on white ticks because beat priority , but if people can sightread it I guess I can let it slide
01:48:402 (1,2,3,4) - Equal spacing is meh for emphasis imo , because the clap isnt getting the best emphasis , I'd suggest increasing spacing from 2->3 for a quick fix
01:54:863 (1,2,3) - [Would look visually more appealing if you lined up 1 with 2 like
this ]
01:57:517 (6,1,2,3) - Spacing is kinda jacked here because the strong->weak ones are having higher spacing than the weak->strong ones which gives emphasis to the wrong objects , would suggest something like 01:56:479 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - this
02:02:248 (1,2,3) - Equal spacing but this is kinda minor ,just reposition 2 a bit ,can also line it up with 1 like
this02:04:094 (1,3) - [blanket xdd]
02:03:171 (1,2,3) - Inverse spacing again, higher between 2->3 than 1->2 please
02:07:786 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I dont understand the triangles here, theres no 1-2-3-1-2-3 in the beats or the melody its all 1-2-1-2-1-2 , the slider is okay i think 02:09:633 (1,2,3) - I dont understand the huge backsnap to 2, 2 doesnt have enough to justify it imo , you could try
this if you want to keep the same objects but rotated or flipped etc
02:10:902 (2,3,4) - [Could try
this for better visual A E S T H E T I C S ]
02:13:325 (1,2,3) - [Move 2 in line with 1 to fix minor spacing]
02:14:594 (2,3,4) - [Equal spacing would work better because theres no instruments to support the variable spacing]
02:16:556 (5,2) - [l2stack]
02:16:671 (6) - It would be better if 6 was somewhere towards the left so players can anticipate the triple and the sudden direction change
02:18:863 (1,2,3) - Line acceleration is kinda awkward here , would suggest some sort of angle
02:27:171 (5,6,7,8) - [Possible reading hazard?An NC might work on 8]
02:40:786 (6,1) - Dude what ,please you already know what I'm gonna say :^)
03:08:708 (1,2,3) - The backward snap again , I wouldve understood if it was on the guitar riff but its not so blegh , you should probably change to something thats a little less harsh on backward snapping here
03:10:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Not 100% sure about this pattern because it seems kinda overspaced because you also use that kind of spacing in kiai , and because they're at 260 bpm I think you should tone it down a bit
03:19:785 (5) - NC for slowdown indication
04:06:861 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:48:402 (1,2,3,4)
04:17:938 (1,2,3,4) - [Personally I'd do
thisfor a less sharp flow but the one you have is okay as well]
04:32:708 (1,2,3) - [Increase spacing from 2->3]
04:37:900 (4) - [Could drop 4 a bit lower for emphasizing that high pitch vocal and ofcourse making 4,2 and 5 in a line like
this]
04:46:554 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NCs should be 1-2-1-2 because the huge bashing sound is what youre mapping to which is going 1-2-1-2
04:49:323 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - sAme as ^
04:53:015 (1,2,3) - [Could do something better because this looks e.e]
05:19:785 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+g 3 for a more intuitive movement
05:29:015 (1,2,3,4) - The 1's slidershapes doesnt fit well if you wanna keep the rest of the pattern ,
this might work but the overlap is a bit too risky for such a high bpm , oh well
05:41:015 (1,2,3) - This has the same spacing as 05:41:938 (1,2,3) - but the spacing on the second one is asdf
nokd :^)