Well well. Hello there and here's a mod from my queue:
- 00:08:196 (6,1) - stack this properly. move this to: x:184 y:337
- 00:15:392 (6) - i think you could add a soft whistle here to accent the "mo", because it's a bit more impactfull than before
- 00:20:676 - again. maybe add a whistle?
- 00:37:214 (4,1) - that sudden jump feels weird and also doesn't flow very nice. the energy you need for that jump gets wasted and the flow breaks suddenly. maybe don't go with symmetry here and don't jump here
- 00:40:791 (4,5,6) - i suggest you use the same ds here as 00:38:945 (7,8,9) - else it's difficult to read
- 01:02:251 (1,2) - how about you emphasize the violin a bit and turn this into a 1/2 slider instead? do the same with 01:02:598 (4,5) - and 01:02:944 (7,8) -
- 01:05:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - i don't think you should use stacks here. there's no sound suggesting it and this is just weird somehow.
- 01:23:021 (5,4) - stack this properly
- 01:26:944 (6,3) - ^
- 01:29:021 (1) - i suggest you ctrl + g this slider because this way you can catch the cursor from the jump. as it is now, it breaks the flow
- 01:30:637 (7,8) - why are you stacking this? there's no reason for this.
- 01:31:214 (2,4) - i think you want to go with style here but this just feels a bit too forced. dont do that. stack them
- 01:31:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - nothing to point out. this is really cool
- 01:33:867 (5,6) - i suggest you change them into a slider again to support the vocals. the drums are really in the background
- 01:38:944 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - nothing in the music suggests a jump here. this is unreasonable and overmapped and please don't.
- 01:42:637 (4) - this slider may be too difficult to read. don't know if this is rankable
- 01:49:098 (4,3) - again stack properly
- 01:53:598 (4,5) - what's with that sudden change in direction with this jump? this is not intuitive and that's what jumps should be. make this circular and not anti-clockwise
- 01:55:790 (1) - this slider is really difficult to read and also not that pretty, tbh. maybe change this one
- 01:59:021 (3) - ctrl + g this for better flow?
- 02:42:867 (2) - again weird slider. maybe round the part after the red tick
- 02:45:175 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest you change this. it plays weird
- 02:55:790 (2) - how about making an ankeled slider out of this?
- 04:14:596 (2,3) - i think you should switch these. so that 2 is a slider and 3 is a circle. as it is now you're emphasizing a downbeat, even if the vocals are much more present. i think they should be in the foreground and you shouldn't forget them
- 04:15:635 (3) - here the emphasize is on the sliderend. why are you doing this?
- 04:17:942 (1,2,3) - this pattern is nice
- 05:07:327 (3) - this would flow better in a nice clockwise flow if you ctrl + g this
- 05:15:635 (3,1) - what's with that half-assed blanket
- 05:29:365 (2,3) - that linear flow is weird, especially because you're jumping right after this. maybe make the end of the slider go a bit down
- 05:39:635 (5,1) - stack properly.
- 05:44:200 (2) - is this circle timed right? I'm not sure about this. dunno. the whole end feels off.