Linkin Park - ROADS UNTRAVELED

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Nyukai
wtf I doubleposted without intention D:

-Bakari- wrote:

You know why I'm here.

[General]
  1. The BG isn't a 1366x768 one and the text on it is cut while using 4:3 displays. If it is possible, please look for a different BG. I'll change it once I update.
  2. Apparently, the correct title is ROADS UNTRAVELED . The links on theit web site and the site itself use "ROADS UNTRAVELED" as the title. Okay, fixed. If at the end it's not correct is not a big problem changing it x)
  3. You don't need letterboxes and kepping the Widescreen Support enabled also makes no sense. Sure.
  4. Pretty sure we can add more tags like Alternative or even Chester Bennington as some people might find it helpful. Done.
  5. Slider Tick Rate 3 seems to fit here pretty nicely, give it a try. Sure, why not.
  6. Mute the sliderslide sound? It seems a little annoying and does nt match well with the calm parts of the song. I'll see what I can do.


[Normal]
  1. Reduce the diff settings. First of all, reduce OD and HP to 3 since this is the easiest diff and 1/3 stuff feels really tricky. Then try AR 4 as the BPM is really low and this is the easiest diff of the set. True, fixed
  2. 00:29:776 (6) - everything in this combo follows the strong piano notes, everything except this circle. Remove it to make the rhythm more reasonabl and to simplyfy the diff.
    Note: 00:33:376 (5) - 00:36:676 (3) - 00:51:375 (5) - same here. They just don't really need to be emphasized in this diff. Removed all.
  3. 00:58:875 (1) - pretty sure this one should be emphasized as the drums are way too strong to be ignored at this point. Hm, what do you mean? Anyways I was following vocals.
  4. 01:28:873 - vocals here should be mapped, I believe, It feels really empty here. Maybe, added.
  5. 02:55:869 (3) - just to keep the polarity, you can make a long 1/1 slider here and use a 5% green line on its end. It might look a little strange, but it helps to keep the polarity. But I've been using 1/2 repeat sliders here, it's fine imo.
  6. 03:03:969 - I don't think it is necessary to keep the green line here. just as Sonnyc said, remove the unused ones, please! :)
    Note: 02:39:670 - 02:43:270 - same. :PSure.

    Great!


[Hard]
  1. 00:34:576 (4,1) - pretty sure this pattern was symmetrical. The way it looks now feels untidy so, do you mind bringing the old stuff back? Example They are actually symmetrical, maybe they aren't in the center but it's fine I think.
  2. 00:40:876 (1) - this one would fit with the vocals much better if it was a 2/3 slider. Give it a try, you'll like that! a picture I just wanted a very little break here :3
  3. 00:57:975 (2,3) - minor - the stack here is something flow-breaking, it does not feel well-placed, I'd say. Example Stacked with (4) instead.
  4. 00:59:475 (2,3) - minor - Ctrl+G them in order to improve the flow? :)Maybe, a little jump is not a problem, I think.
  5. 01:08:774 (3,2) - the glitchy effect that is given by the curve of these sliders does not represent anything in the song and, therefore, feels unnatural. Can you keep them straight or curve them in a less agressive way? G-Gero influences me
  6. 01:45:072 - vocals here are left ignored and this is a little sad. even a little curve at this point of the slider would help to represent amazing Chester's voice Maybe, but adding this kind of slider sometimes it's fine even for Hard ><
  7. 02:55:869 (1) - the same with Normal - just to keep the polarity, you can make a long 1/1 slider here and use a 5% green line on its end. It might look a little strange, but it helps to keep the polarity. Same then.

    Great stuff. Though you still have to work a little on blankets. :P


You did a good job on this one. With a few more mods this set will become a diamond!

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Best of luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
02:03:672 (1) - Make this a vertical symmetry slider? I'll try to improve it :_>

[Hard]
00:28:276 (1) - Improve blanket please. Done.
00:58:575 (4) - Grid up for distance. Lol true.
01:08:774 (3) - The vibrate of the slider doesn't fits with the song. Highly recommend to just use an ordinary shape. Already fixed.
01:29:173 (3,1) - This jump is way too big than your overall map. Please reduce this. But was nice :c Fixed anyway.

Remove inherited sections in the break. Done.


Big thanks for your awesome mods guys >3<
guineaQ
M4M reqs from #modreqs (yes people actually look at #modreqs big surprise)

Normal

  1. 00:25:876 (1,2,3) - personally I think it would be more cool if you rearrange like this:

    it's a bit nazi to have the slope of slider 1 and 2 identical but every little small detail adds up >w<
  2. 00:28:276 (4,5,1) - you can definitely make them symmetrical o3o (you can ignore this one if you want to keep the symmetry of 00:30:976 (2,3) - )
  3. 00:49:875 (3,4) - I personally found it awkward to have circle 4 slightly off with the alignment of 3's end. How bout dis
  4. 01:15:974 (4,1) - this one's a little off >.>
  5. 01:27:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having them connect to each other seamlessly?

    01:28:873 (3) - move to x:414 y:278
    01:29:473 (4) - x:280 y:356
    01:30:373 (5) - x:86 y:272
  6. 02:10:871 (1,2) - ;w; I usually don't point out blankets but I can tell without even looking at the approach circle :c
  7. 02:28:870 (1) - wtasgasg so close to being on center
  8. 03:08:469 (1,2) - i want to say the magic b word
  9. 03:27:368 (2,3) - I think it would be cool if they were symmetrical diagonally

    Cool normal diff, don't have anything major to point out

Hard


idk what a testplay replay on a hard diff would do but I'll link it anyways
http://puu.sh/e8Yr5/8389c1e32e.osr

One general comment: I remember seeing cases of auto stacking creating some ugly distancing between slider -> triplet. You might want to keep that in mind. It was usually the case when there was a triplet to the bottom right of a hit object.


  • Change one pattern whole map symmetry ded
  1. 00:44:476 (1,2) - I personally believe it is better to have single reverse slider here to capture the ambiguous syllables between the ticks, imo you could have a triplet here to without sounding that awkward. Its your call.
  2. 00:48:075 (1,2) - rearrange like this so that the slider end of 1 is more aligned to the center of slider 2?
  3. 00:51:375 - I think having a clickable hitobject of some sort is better since there are some ambiguous sound at 1/12 (which wouldn't be the best idea to map it out but you can compensate for it by having a clickable hitobject)
  4. 01:09:674 (1) - I think this should be a jump :<
  5. 01:28:573 (2,1) - idk, not only 2 is not blanket'd perfectly but most important this is that it would cleaner (at least for me) if the 2's end overlapped more around the center of slider 1 :<
  6. 01:42:523 - you could have circle here :<
  7. 01:46:122 - ^^ looking at this I'll assume you undermapped on purpose
  8. 02:18:671 (3,4) - as much as I wanted to ignore blankets I just can't bare to ignore this

    I wouldn't mind if you ignore everything since this diff plays fine as it is already.

EDIT: shut up and take my star
Topic Starter
Nyukai

guineaQ wrote:

M4M reqs from #modreqs (yes people actually look at #modreqs big surprise)

Normal

  1. 00:25:876 (1,2,3) - personally I think it would be more cool if you rearrange like this That was kinda nazi xD
    it's a bit nazi to have the slope of slider 1 and 2 identical but every little small detail adds up >w<[/box]
  2. 00:28:276 (4,5,1) - you can definitely make them symmetrical o3o (you can ignore this one if you want to keep the symmetry of 00:30:976 (2,3) - ) Yeah I prefer to keep it as it is.
  3. 00:49:875 (3,4) - I personally found it awkward to have circle 4 slightly off with the alignment of 3's end. How bout dis Flow is fine imo.
  4. 01:15:974 (4,1) - this one's a little off >.> Hm? I don't see any problem here.
  5. 01:27:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having them connect to each other seamlessly? Sure, looks fine.
  6. 02:10:871 (1,2) - ;w; I usually don't point out blankets but I can tell without even looking at the approach circle :c Improved a bit, I think.
  7. 02:28:870 (1) - wtasgasg so close to being on center Fixed.
  8. 03:08:469 (1,2) - i want to say the magic b word xD Same as before.
  9. 03:27:368 (2,3) - I think it would be cool if they were symmetrical diagonally Nah, it's fine.

    Cool normal diff, don't have anything major to point out

Hard


idk what a testplay replay on a hard diff would do but I'll link it anyways
http://puu.sh/e8Yr5/8389c1e32e.osr

One general comment: I remember seeing cases of auto stacking creating some ugly distancing between slider -> triplet. You might want to keep that in mind. It was usually the case when there was a triplet to the bottom right of a hit object.


  • Change one pattern whole map symmetry ded
  1. 00:44:476 (1,2) - I personally believe it is better to have single reverse slider here to capture the ambiguous syllables between the ticks, imo you could have a triplet here to without sounding that awkward. Its your call. A triplet? Doesn't fit here.
  2. 00:48:075 (1,2) - rearrange like this so that the slider end of 1 is more aligned to the center of slider 2? Sure.
  3. 00:51:375 - I think having a clickable hitobject of some sort is better since there are some ambiguous sound at 1/12 (which wouldn't be the best idea to map it out but you can compensate for it by having a clickable hitobject) I prefer what I did.
  4. 01:09:674 (1) - I think this should be a jump :< Maybe, but I wanted symmetry here x)
  5. 01:28:573 (2,1) - idk, not only 2 is not blanket'd perfectly but most important this is that it would cleaner (at least for me) if the 2's end overlapped more around the center of slider 1 :< I think blanket and overlap are fine here.
  6. 01:42:523 - you could have circle here :< Maybe, but I didn't add triplets in whole map, more variety is fine.
  7. 01:46:122 - ^^ looking at this I'll assume you undermapped on purpose It's less important there imo.
  8. 02:18:671 (3,4) - as much as I wanted to ignore blankets I just can't bare to ignore this Improved a bit.

    I wouldn't mind if you ignore everything since this diff plays fine as it is already.

EDIT: shut up and take my star
Thank you so much <3 I'll mod your map soon, I won't forget.
XinCrin
Andaba un poco aburrido,encontre el mapa y me dio ganas de modearlo lel

General

  1. Debido a que la música no es muy fuerte al comienzo en las partes suaves, el sliderslide suena mal , asi que te sugeriria silenciar el sliderslide en las partes suaves. (00:04:878 - 01:36:973)


Easy

  1. |Comentario| 01:34:873 (1) Este slider largo va bien a la distancia con la música, pero no me gusta la forma. Me gustaría ver algo creativo o cualquier slider que no se vea tan común. Solo es un comentario
  2. 01:38:473 (1) Al comienzo de este slider la música se tuerce a algo más fuerte por asi decirlo. Asi que mi sugerencia es porque no aprovechar ese momento y cambiar el Soft Finish por un Normal Finish (Sampleset). Le da un mejor toque a esa parte en mi opinion
  3. 01:38:473 (1,2) Sería genial si intentaras una nueva forma similar a esta, luce mejor
  4. 02:07:271 (1) Misma sugerencia con respecto a un Normal Finish
  5. 02:09:971 (4) Mira, el slider recto no da un muy buen flow con el slider circular que sigue. No sé, pero juega mal aqui. Me gustaría que le hagas una curvatura a este slider apuntando hacia abajo,algo como esto:


Hard

  1. 00:12:077 (1) El Normal Finish encaja mucho mejor con la música en mi opinion
  2. 00:25:876 (1) Siento que olvidaste usar Whistles al comienzo y al final de este slider
  3. 03:04:269 (1) Yo se que hay un sonido que justifica este slider, pero el sonido es tan bajo y poco perceptible que al momento de jugar el mapa se siente algo incomodo en mi opinion. Te sugeriria quitar este slider, tomalo en cuenta


Buena suerte con el rank!!
Topic Starter
Nyukai

XinCrin wrote:

Andaba un poco aburrido,encontre el mapa y me dio ganas de modearlo lel

General

  1. Debido a que la música no es muy fuerte al comienzo en las partes suaves, el sliderslide suena mal , asi que te sugeriria silenciar el sliderslide en las partes suaves. (00:04:878 - 01:36:973) Listo, creo.


Easy Cómo que Easy D:

  1. |Comentario| 01:34:873 (1) Este slider largo va bien a la distancia con la música, pero no me gusta la forma. Me gustaría ver algo creativo o cualquier slider que no se vea tan común. Solo es un comentario Lo sé, pero no se me ocurre nada orz
  2. 01:38:473 (1) Al comienzo de este slider la música se tuerce a algo más fuerte por asi decirlo. Asi que mi sugerencia es porque no aprovechar ese momento y cambiar el Soft Finish por un Normal Finish (Sampleset). Le da un mejor toque a esa parte en mi opinion No me gusta cómo suena, lo dejaré así.
  3. 01:38:473 (1,2) Sería genial si intentaras una nueva forma similar a esta, luce mejor Sinceramente prefiero lo que hice si comparamos con tu sugerencia.
  4. 02:07:271 (1) Misma sugerencia con respecto a un Normal Finish Lo mismo.
  5. 02:09:971 (4) Mira, el slider recto no da un muy buen flow con el slider circular que sigue. No sé, pero juega mal aqui. Me gustaría que le hagas una curvatura a este slider apuntando hacia abajo,algo como esto Oki, no está mal.


Hard

  1. 00:12:077 (1) El Normal Finish encaja mucho mejor con la música en mi opinion Nah, lo veo bien así.
  2. 00:25:876 (1) Siento que olvidaste usar Whistles al comienzo y al final de este slider Era por consistencia, de todas formas se siente bien así que lo cambio.
  3. 03:04:269 (1) Yo se que hay un sonido que justifica este slider, pero el sonido es tan bajo y poco perceptible que al momento de jugar el mapa se siente algo incomodo en mi opinion. Te sugeriria quitar este slider, tomalo en cuenta Lo tendré en cuenta si más gente dice lo mismo, ya que no veo gran problema.


Buena suerte con el rank!!
Gracias por tu mod :3
LexiaLovesU
Modding owo

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General

  • Seems Fine in General~

Normal

  1. 03:01:269 - Unused Greenline please remove it
  2. 00:12:077 (1) - 1NC look unprofessional and the only confuse people there is no need for them in normal
  3. 01:39:373 (2) - I think you should make this look the same as 01:38:473 (1) - since the pattern you did seems like it calls for symmetry current the pattern looks a bit odd

Hard

  1. 00:12:077 (1) - Same as Easy
  2. 00:39:976 (2) - Come on inyus make this properly blanket 4s tail xD it looks a bit meh now
  3. 00:48:075 (1) - Same as above ;w;
  4. 01:17:774 (2) - The blanket is pretty off please fix >.<
  5. 01:25:273 (3) - This seems a lot better when it is stacked ontop of 4 because then they both hit the vocals so then the stack consist of it same rhythm so then the stack seems more properly hit owo
  6. 01:35:023 (1) -
  7. 01:34:873 (1) - 1NC look unprofessional and they only confuse people there is no need for them in hard 1 nc should be used to symbolize a antijump
  8. 01:47:472 (1) - blanket it better ;w;

    Im gonna stop mentioning blankets now lol
  9. 03:01:269 (1) - I personally think this fits better as antijump since of the lack of music between the notes the antijump really emphasizes that well plus it actually puts use to your 1 nc

    That's all Nice Job owo
Modem
Hi~! (> w <) For ticket (o v o)/

Fine here ~!
00:04:878 ~ 01:34:723 How about use SC1 from the beginning? Because there're some silent parts before the kiai time, and it needs soft-sliderslide from SC1 to make the slider's slide sounds softer
00:25:876 (1) Add whistle hitsound at this slider's head to follow the piano
01:13:274 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions and remove the whistle. The music strongly suggest it ;)
01:16:874 (1) Here too. Use finish hitsound at drum additions for this note and remove the whistle
01:20:474 (1) Same goes for this note ^
01:24:074 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions for this note as well ;)
01:27:673 (1) Remove whistle hitsound and add finish hitsound at drum additions at this slider's head
01:31:273 (1) Same goes for this slider's head ^
01:33:973 (2,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:33:973 (2) a bit more rounder
01:34:873 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions at this slider's head, then remove the whistle. The music strongly suggest it ;);)
01:48:072 It would be nice if add a note at this part (> w <) then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:96 y:264 so it will form stack with 01:49:272 (1)
02:24:071 Here too. Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:52 y:140 so it will form stack with 02:25:270 (1)
03:07:268 Here as well. Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note
03:10:868 (3) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's tail. The music strongly suggest it ;)
03:28:867 (3,4) Fix the blanket. Make 03:29:167 (4) a bit more rounder
03:30:967 (2,3) Fix the blanket. Make 03:30:967 (2) a bit more rounder
03:36:067 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:228 y:252 to form a blanket with 03:37:267 (1)
03:39:667 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:32 y:220 so it will form stack with 03:40:867 (1)
Nice diff! (o w o)/
00:04:878 ~ 01:34:723 Same goes with this diff. How about change it to SC1 from the beginning? Because there're some silent parts before the kiai time, and it needs soft-sliderslide from SC1 to make the slider's slide sounds softer
00:40:876 (1) Umm.... Stack this note with the head of this slider -> 00:41:776 (2) (Just a suggestion)
01:07:574 (3,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:07:874 (1) a bit more rounder
01:12:974 (3) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's tail
01:13:274 (1) Here too. The music really suggests to add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:18:374 (2,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:18:674 (1) a bit more rounder
01:20:474 (1) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:27:673 (1) ^
01:28:273 (1,2) Fix blanket. I think 01:28:573 (2) is a bit too straight for a bend slider
01:31:273 (1) Here as well add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:34:873 (1) Same here. Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this note, then remove the whistle
01:42:523 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note
01:46:122 ^
03:34:117 ^

That's all!! Cool mapset!
Good Luck for rank!!! (^ w ^)
YTYuyu
hii~ just popping by :P

General:
CLEAR~!

Normal:
00:09:977 (3,4) - this downwards transition feels uncomfortable to follow for me and it feels flow breaking due to the downwards transition. consider doing something like this. you'll sacrifice the blanket, but you'll be sacrificing the blanket over a smoother transition in the beginning of the diff.
00:33:676 (1) - use a drum finish here instead of a soft finish. you'll emphasize the bass drum if you do this.
00:40:876 (1) - ^
00:54:375 (4,5) - a bit of a nazi idea but consider moving this a bit to the left for a smoother transition during gameplay. it should look something like this.
01:05:174 (4) - i suggest using a 1/1 slider to keep that vocal consistency going. following the BGM suddenly might makes players feel uncomfortable during gameplay, so at least consider this before applying it.
01:09:674 (1) - same as 00:33:676 -
01:15:074 (3) - since you like mapping symmetrically and blanketing, consider doing something like this for that purpose.
01:16:874 (1) - use a drum finish instead of that whistle. same reason as 00:33:676 -
01:20:474 (1) - here as well. same reason as above.
01:38:173 (3) - consider moving this down a bit for that smoother transition like i said before.
02:13:571 (4) - why don't you make this slider look like (3) for a better transition and i feel that doing this fits your mapping style.
02:25:270 (1) - stack the end of (1) on 02:23:471 (3) - . i feel that it'll look a lot neater and more fun to follow for players during gameplay. if you do this, then make (3) look like the slider you did.
02:53:169 (4) - replace this for a circle and a 1/6 slider because the circle will follow the BGM, and the slider will follow the vocals, making it more comfortable to follow.
03:11:169 (4) - same as 02:13:571 -
03:22:868 (1) - same as 02:25:270 -
nice diff. if you can keep your drum finishes more consistent, this diff will be perfect.

Hard:
00:07:877 (4,5) - this part feels overmapped since there are parts in the BGM that break off to pieces instead of following your rhythm selection. for this one, i highly suggest that you do something like this to follow the BGM and to keep that steady flow going during gameplay.
00:11:477 (3,4) - ^
00:29:476 (3,4) - i'm sure you get the idea by now ><
00:53:475 (1) - keep that transition consistent in this part because it feels like you've given up on the jumps here and placed it here. no offense but that's what i think. for this one, maybe you can do something like this to keep that jump pattern going and it'll look good and fun to follow during gameplay.
00:58:575 (4) - i feel that stacking this on (1) would feel more comfortable to follow during gameplay.
01:31:873 (2,3) - ;w; the spacing feels forced to follow since you're using the default spacing for this part. consider stacking (3) on the beginning of 01:31:273 (1) - to keep that consistent spacing.
01:52:572 (4,5) - use normal hitsounds here to emphasize the drums in this part of the song.
01:55:572 (2) - move this up a bit for a smoother transition in this part during gameplay like i said in normal.
01:58:872 (2) - use 2 circles instead to emphasize the drums better during gameplay. i feel that the slider feels awkward to follow during gameplay.
02:06:971 (5) - move this a bit to the right. same reason as 01:55:572 - .
02:28:570 (4,5) - same as 01:52:572 -
02:51:369 (3) - same idea as normal. replace this for a circle and a 1/6 slider to follow the vocals and BGM separately.
02:54:969 (2) - ^ and vice versa.
02:57:669 (1,2) - you cannot silence both the sliderslide and slidertick at the same time as it's unrankable. this is something that has been overlooked a lot nowadays. raise the volume so that the sliderticks are hearable and rankable during gameplay.
03:18:969 (4,5) - same as 01:52:572 -
03:33:367 (3,4) - ^
03:35:467 (1) - i really think it's possible to do a better blanket here. try to play around with the slider and you might see.
same as normal. keep your drum finishes consistent, and it'll be perfect :D.

and that's all i got. GL ;)
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Modem wrote:

Hi~! (> w <) For ticket (o v o)/

Fine here ~!
00:04:878 ~ 01:34:723 How about use SC1 from the beginning? Because there're some silent parts before the kiai time, and it needs soft-sliderslide from SC1 to make the slider's slide sounds softer Nah, just increasing / decreasing the volume is fine imo.
00:25:876 (1) Add whistle hitsound at this slider's head to follow the piano
01:13:274 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions and remove the whistle. The music strongly suggest it ;)
01:16:874 (1) Here too. Use finish hitsound at drum additions for this note and remove the whistle
01:20:474 (1) Same goes for this note ^
01:24:074 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions for this note as well ;)
01:27:673 (1) Remove whistle hitsound and add finish hitsound at drum additions at this slider's head
01:31:273 (1) Same goes for this slider's head ^
01:33:973 (2,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:33:973 (2) a bit more rounder
01:34:873 (1) Use finish hitsound at drum additions at this slider's head, then remove the whistle. The music strongly suggest it ;);)
01:48:072 It would be nice if add a note at this part (> w <) then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:96 y:264 so it will form stack with 01:49:272 (1) I don't consider it necessary here, I prefer to follow the vocal.
02:24:071 Here too. Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:52 y:140 so it will form stack with 02:25:270 (1) Same.
03:07:268 Here as well. Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note Same.
03:10:868 (3) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's tail. The music strongly suggest it ;)It doesn't sound good here imo.
03:28:867 (3,4) Fix the blanket. Make 03:29:167 (4) a bit more rounder
03:30:967 (2,3) Fix the blanket. Make 03:30:967 (2) a bit more rounder It's fine here.
03:36:067 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:228 y:252 to form a blanket with 03:37:267 (1) Nah, same reason as before.
03:39:667 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note then, put it at x:32 y:220 so it will form stack with 03:40:867 (1) Same.
Nice diff! (o w o)/
00:04:878 ~ 01:34:723 Same goes with this diff. How about change it to SC1 from the beginning? Because there're some silent parts before the kiai time, and it needs soft-sliderslide from SC1 to make the slider's slide sounds softer Same as before.
00:40:876 (1) Umm.... Stack this note with the head of this slider -> 00:41:776 (2) (Just a suggestion) I like that little unstack :3
01:07:574 (3,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:07:874 (1) a bit more rounder It's fine for me.
01:12:974 (3) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's tail Oh lol I forgot it here.
01:13:274 (1) Here too. The music really suggests to add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:18:374 (2,1) Fix the blanket. Make 01:18:674 (1) a bit more rounder I think it's fine.
01:20:474 (1) Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:27:673 (1) ^
01:28:273 (1,2) Fix blanket. I think 01:28:573 (2) is a bit too straight for a bend slider uuh but it's well done imo.
01:31:273 (1) Here as well add finish hitsound at drum additions for this slider's head then remove the whistle
01:34:873 (1) Same here. Add finish hitsound at drum additions for this note, then remove the whistle
01:42:523 Add a note at this part then, use finish hitsound at drum additions or whistle for this note Adding a note here is less important imo.
01:46:122 ^ Same.
03:34:117 ^ Same.

That's all!! Cool mapset!
Good Luck for rank!!! (^ w ^)

Byakugan249 wrote:

hii~ just popping by :P

General:
CLEAR~!

Normal:
00:09:977 (3,4) - this downwards transition feels uncomfortable to follow for me and it feels flow breaking due to the downwards transition. consider doing something like this. you'll sacrifice the blanket, but you'll be sacrificing the blanket over a smoother transition in the beginning of the diff.
00:33:676 (1) - use a drum finish here instead of a soft finish. you'll emphasize the bass drum if you do this.
00:40:876 (1) - ^
00:54:375 (4,5) - a bit of a nazi idea but consider moving this a bit to the left for a smoother transition during gameplay. it should look something like this.
01:05:174 (4) - i suggest using a 1/1 slider to keep that vocal consistency going. following the BGM suddenly might makes players feel uncomfortable during gameplay, so at least consider this before applying it. Adding more variety like that is not a problem for me, so I keep it.
01:09:674 (1) - same as 00:33:676 -
01:15:074 (3) - since you like mapping symmetrically and blanketing, consider doing something like this for that purpose. I prefer what I did, anyways I fixed the pattern a bit.
01:16:874 (1) - use a drum finish instead of that whistle. same reason as 00:33:676 -
01:20:474 (1) - here as well. same reason as above.
01:38:173 (3) - consider moving this down a bit for that smoother transition like i said before. I prefer the current flow, it's fine for me.
02:13:571 (4) - why don't you make this slider look like (3) for a better transition and i feel that doing this fits your mapping style. Something like before, I like the current flow, also it fits surely better imo.
02:25:270 (1) - stack the end of (1) on 02:23:471 (3) - . i feel that it'll look a lot neater and more fun to follow for players during gameplay. if you do this, then make (3) look like the slider you did. (3) is almost disappearing so shouldn't be a problem the unstack.
02:53:169 (4) - replace this for a circle and a 1/6 slider because the circle will follow the BGM, and the slider will follow the vocals, making it more comfortable to follow. I try to avoid starting the 1/6 slider after the note since 1/6 is kinda weird especially in Normal diff, so... I prefer current pattern.
03:11:169 (4) - same as 02:13:571 - Same.
03:22:868 (1) - same as 02:25:270 - Same.
nice diff. if you can keep your drum finishes more consistent, this diff will be perfect.

Hard:
00:07:877 (4,5) - this part feels overmapped since there are parts in the BGM that break off to pieces instead of following your rhythm selection. for this one, i highly suggest that you do something like this to follow the BGM and to keep that steady flow going during gameplay. Did something different.
00:11:477 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:29:476 (3,4) - i'm sure you get the idea by now >< ^
00:53:475 (1) - keep that transition consistent in this part because it feels like you've given up on the jumps here and placed it here. no offense but that's what i think. for this one, maybe you can do something like this to keep that jump pattern going and it'll look good and fun to follow during gameplay. I understand what you say but I prefer what I did, looks good enough imo.
00:58:575 (4) - i feel that stacking this on (1) would feel more comfortable to follow during gameplay. Not sure about this, I think it's fine due the vocals there.
01:31:873 (2,3) - ;w; the spacing feels forced to follow since you're using the default spacing for this part. consider stacking (3) on the beginning of 01:31:273 (1) - to keep that consistent spacing. It's making a blanket with 01:30:373 (2) - so spacing should be fine.
01:52:572 (4,5) - use normal hitsounds here to emphasize the drums in this part of the song. I added drum additions, sounds good I think.
01:55:572 (2) - move this up a bit for a smoother transition in this part during gameplay like i said in normal. It's fine imo.
01:58:872 (2) - use 2 circles instead to emphasize the drums better during gameplay. i feel that the slider feels awkward to follow during gameplay. I don't feel it awkward, meh.
02:06:971 (5) - move this a bit to the right. same reason as 01:55:572 - .
02:28:570 (4,5) - same as 01:52:572 - Same.
02:51:369 (3) - same idea as normal. replace this for a circle and a 1/6 slider to follow the vocals and BGM separately. Same as before then.
02:54:969 (2) - ^ and vice versa. Same.
02:57:669 (1,2) - you cannot silence both the sliderslide and slidertick at the same time as it's unrankable. this is something that has been overlooked a lot nowadays. raise the volume so that the sliderticks are hearable and rankable during gameplay.
03:18:969 (4,5) - same as 01:52:572 - Same.
03:33:367 (3,4) - ^ Same.
03:35:467 (1) - i really think it's possible to do a better blanket here. try to play around with the slider and you might see. It's fine for me.
same as normal. keep your drum finishes consistent, and it'll be perfect :D.

and that's all i got. GL ;)


Big thanks guys <3 Also @Modem I'll your mod map asap, it's on my list so I won't forget.

Everything not mentioned = fixed.
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Doubleposting because Lexia's mod :3u

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Modding owo

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General

  • Seems Fine in General~

Normal

  1. 03:01:269 - Unused Greenline please remove it Fixed.
  2. 00:12:077 (1) - 1NC look unprofessional and the only confuse people there is no need for them in normal Added due stanza and consistency with Hard.
  3. 01:39:373 (2) - I think you should make this look the same as 01:38:473 (1) - since the pattern you did seems like it calls for symmetry current the pattern looks a bit odd Well honestly I prefer the current flow.

Hard

  1. 00:12:077 (1) - Same as Easy Same AND THAT'S NOT EASY.
  2. 00:39:976 (2) - Come on inyus make this properly blanket 4s tail xD it looks a bit meh now Improved a bit.
  3. 00:48:075 (1) - Same as above ;w; Same.
  4. 01:17:774 (2) - The blanket is pretty off please fix >.< ^
  5. 01:25:273 (3) - This seems a lot better when it is stacked ontop of 4 because then they both hit the vocals so then the stack consist of it same rhythm so then the stack seems more properly hit owo ^
  6. 01:34:873 (1) - 1NC look unprofessional and they only confuse people there is no need for them in hard 1 nc should be used to symbolize a antijump Added due stanza.
  7. 01:47:472 (1) - blanket it better ;w; k

    Im gonna stop mentioning blankets now lol
  8. 03:01:269 (1) - I personally think this fits better as antijump since of the lack of music between the notes the antijump really emphasizes that well plus it actually puts use to your 1 nc // Not really but reduced a bit

    That's all Nice Job owo
Thanks o3o
Pappy
My mod for M4M, sorry for delay~ :3

LINKIN PARK <3

Most are suggestions;

General

  1. I am not sure if the title should be "ROADS UNTRAVELED" instead of "Roads Untraveled". -Bakari- suggested title from original site, but it's only font, every other source is saying that it's just "Roads Untraveled."
  2. MP3 is actually low quality (128kbps), don't you want 192kbps version? (It's not converted from actual one so it can be better.) *click* o3o
  3. Delete .osb, it's useful.
  4. Why sliderslide is silenced only in some sections? D: It is too noisy on calm piano parts.
  5. 03:03:069 - Maybe add here 5% volume? For spinner silence.

Hard

  1. 00:33:076 (4) - Add whistle maybe? For me it fits very well. :3
  2. 00:25:876 - 00:39:076 - This part seems calm, any triplet in this section doesn't play very good for me.
  3. 01:34:873 (1) - Since your map looks very like Andrea's, why it isn't at middle of x? xD
  4. 00:39:076 (1,2) - What about blanket here? It doesn't ruin flow/distance snap so might fit here. :3
  5. 00:38:776 (4) - Whistle?
  6. 00:53:475 (1,2) - What about Ctrl+G (1) and using this rhytm? it will create better flow between 00:54:675 (2,1) and 00:53:175 (4,1) - :)
  7. 02:00:072 (1) - Whistle for consistency? You should add missing whistles on moments where you used finish. AND there should be whistle
  8. 02:15:371 (2) - I don't understand why it's 2/3 slider. For me you should follow guitar here, this missed beat feels bad. :<
  9. 02:21:371 (4,5) - Why not add here claps or drum-hitfinish? (like at 01:52:572 (4,5,1) - Sounds amazing!)
  10. 03:39:667 (3) - Clap on tail feels bad when playing, try to change rhytm to leave clap clickable.
  11. 03:45:966 (5) - ^ The same problem + offbeat D: I like when last note in map is able to click it. :3

Normal

  1. Probably same about whistles with finishes.
  2. 01:51:972 (4) - Clap at 01:52:572 -
  3. 02:20:771 (4) - Clap at tail
  4. 03:42:367 - What about add note here for vocals?

Hope that mod was useful
Really awesome map, good luck! :D
LexiaLovesU


There official youtube also states it with all capital letters
Pappy

LexiaLovesU wrote:



There official youtube also states it with all capital letters
Lol I couldn't find official video on yt, sorry for this. D:
pw384
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
star!

btw I'd like to do a storyboard for this map. Would you like to get it? ;w;
Topic Starter
Nyukai

384059043 wrote:

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
star!

btw I'd like to do a storyboard for this map. Would you like to get it? ;w;
Ofc, go ahead~

Anyways I'll check your mod tomorrow @Pappy
pw384
http://puu.sh/em86Z/008e28f8db.zip

Enjoy this storyboard!
And don't forget to tick on epilepsy warning on all diffs.
~
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Pappy wrote:

My mod for M4M, sorry for delay~ :3

LINKIN PARK <3

Most are suggestions;

General

  1. I am not sure if the title should be "ROADS UNTRAVELED" instead of "Roads Untraveled". -Bakari- suggested title from original site, but it's only font, every other source is saying that it's just "Roads Untraveled." Not sure as well, but I'll keep it for now xD
  2. MP3 is actually low quality (128kbps), don't you want 192kbps version? (It's not converted from actual one so it can be better.) *click* o3o 128 kbps shouldn't be a problem, 128-192 it's fine o3o
  3. Delete .osb, it's useful. Added SB, so it's not x)
  4. Why sliderslide is silenced only in some sections? D: It is too noisy on calm piano parts. I think I'll ask someone for a silent sliderslide >:
  5. 03:03:069 - Maybe add here 5% volume? For spinner silence. Not a big difference, but okay.

Hard

  1. 00:33:076 (4) - Add whistle maybe? For me it fits very well. :3 Sure.
  2. 00:25:876 - 00:39:076 - This part seems calm, any triplet in this section doesn't play very good for me. The song is very slow and it's Hard diff, I think it's ok.
  3. 01:34:873 (1) - Since your map looks very like Andrea's, why it isn't at middle of x? xD Looks like his style, which doesn't mean I'm copying him. I have my inspiration too xD I prefer to keep this because the consistent spacing.
  4. 00:39:076 (1,2) - What about blanket here? It doesn't ruin flow/distance snap so might fit here. :3 It's a blanket o3o
  5. 00:38:776 (4) - Whistle? Sounds nice.
  6. 00:53:475 (1,2) - What about Ctrl+G (1) and using this rhytm? it will create better flow between 00:54:675 (2,1) and 00:53:175 (4,1) - :)I prefer the actual "jump".
  7. 02:00:072 (1) - Whistle for consistency? You should add missing whistles on moments where you used finish. AND there should be whistle Added whistle too.
  8. 02:15:371 (2) - I don't understand why it's 2/3 slider. For me you should follow guitar here, this missed beat feels bad. :< Adding some 2/3 sliders are fine too imo.
  9. 02:21:371 (4,5) - Why not add here claps or drum-hitfinish? (like at 01:52:572 (4,5,1) - Sounds amazing!) Sure, my bad.
  10. 03:39:667 (3) - Clap on tail feels bad when playing, try to change rhytm to leave clap clickable. Clap is where it should be, and I don't see a problem with rhythm.
  11. 03:45:966 (5) - ^ The same problem + offbeat D: I like when last note in map is able to click it. :3 It's the ending, fits good imo.

Normal

  1. Probably same about whistles with finishes. k
  2. 01:51:972 (4) - Clap at 01:52:572 - It doesn't fit imo.
  3. 02:20:771 (4) - Clap at tail I prefer drum-finish.
  4. 03:42:367 - What about add note here for vocals? Yep.

Hope that mod was useful
Really awesome map, good luck! :DThanks for your mod :3
Also added amazing storyboard by 384059043, thank you so much <3

Updated, don't forget to redownload because the SB~
AlexaBM
hey o/
[General]
  1. Offset 4858 sounds better for me. Also, don't forget to resnap everything after changing it! (if you will accept this, ofc)
  2. 01:45:652 - 02:00:052 - SB: imo, that flash flashhere doesn't fit the music, it is more or less calm part of the song, the flash is more suitable for kiai time.
    Also, 02:07:251 - here. It's the same picture? I don't have any ideas, but why not to add another picture with a seaside or an empty road (or idk) instead of using the same black&whited pic?


[Normal]
  1. Spacing is inconsistent here sometimes. Fix it please with DS x1,3, as I can see:
    00:31:876 (3,4) - 00:32:776 (4,1) - 00:34:576 (2,1) - 00:38:176 (2,3) - 01:07:874 (3,4) -
    Just look through this diff and fix such moments, please!
  2. 01:26:753 (4) - Rhythm suggestion: replace it with 1 circle + slider. Something like this sounds better, imo.
  3. 02:09:651 - Missed beat? I want to play it. Beginners want to play it too \:p/
  4. 02:24:051 - ^
  5. 02:26:450 (2) - Something like this or this?
  6. 03:24:048 (2) - ^
  7. I'd ctrl+g these two 02:53:149 (4,1) - 02:54:949 (2,3) -


[Hard]
  1. 01:12:974 - Here's a loud beat, it's better if you use a circle instead to emphasize that moment.
  2. There are a loooot of blankets that could be fixed. But oh well, you won't fix them. I think.


that's all! <3
Topic Starter
Nyukai

AlexaBM wrote:

hey o/
[General]
  1. Offset 4858 sounds better for me. Also, don't forget to resnap everything after changing it! (if you will accept this, ofc) I've tested and it's kinda off.
  2. 01:45:652 - 02:00:052 - SB: imo, that flash flashhere doesn't fit the music, it is more or less calm part of the song, the flash is more suitable for kiai time.
    Also, 02:07:251 - here. It's the same picture? I don't have any ideas, but why not to add another picture with a seaside or an empty road (or idk) instead of using the same black&whited pic? Hm, I'd ask to creator but the truth is I like what he did it actually, I think flashes fit, I also like using only two pics, that makes SB very simple, which fits well with the map :3


[Normal]
  1. Spacing is inconsistent here sometimes. Fix it please with DS x1,3, as I can see:
    00:31:876 (3,4) - 00:32:776 (4,1) - 00:34:576 (2,1) - 00:38:176 (2,3) - 01:07:874 (3,4) -
    Just look through this diff and fix such moments, please!
  2. 01:26:753 (4) - Rhythm suggestion: replace it with 1 circle + slider. Something like this sounds better, imo.
  3. 02:09:651 - Missed beat? I want to play it. Beginners want to play it too \:p/ Not too important imo x)
  4. 02:24:051 - ^ Same.
  5. 02:26:450 (2) - Something like this or this?
  6. 03:24:048 (2) - ^
  7. I'd ctrl+g these two 02:53:149 (4,1) - 02:54:949 (2,3) - I prefer actual rhythm, maybe clicking purple lines is not a good idea for beginners. The song's rhythm is a bit weird indeed.


[Hard]
  1. 01:12:974 - Here's a loud beat, it's better if you use a circle instead to emphasize that moment. Reverse slider is fine for me :3
  2. There are a loooot of blankets that could be fixed. But oh well, you won't fix them. I think. Don't say that, I'm really bad with blankets. You can mention them if you still want, I admit I need help with that stuff ;w;


that's all! <3
Everything not mentioned is fixed :3

Thanks a lot~

EDIT: Changed some stuff in Normal on my own.
Andrea
IRC Modded, this is really good.

19:00 Andrea: irc is okay?
19:01 Inyuschan: okay
19:01 Inyuschan: ~
19:04 Andrea: http://puu.sh/eyD7H/b961dd7588.png
19:04 Andrea: I've been checking AIBat and huh
19:05 Inyuschan: maybe that means BG is not used in SB
19:05 Inyuschan: o.o
19:05 Andrea: I suppose so
19:05 Inyuschan: :3u
19:05 Andrea: codeless = with no code
19:05 Andrea: so yeah
19:05 Inyuschan: sometimes AiBat is wrong indeed
19:06 Andrea: http://puu.sh/eyDWB/ea53d00057.png
19:06 Inyuschan: c.
19:06 Inyuschan: c:
19:11 Andrea: checking some metadata and general stuff
19:12 Inyuschan: no problem, I'm not sure about metadata indeed =w=
19:17 Andrea: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyUprhoTR-U that should be it
19:17 Andrea: btw, what about adding to the tags other LP members :) ?
19:18 Inyuschan: I think it has capital letters because of the CD font, just that
19:18 Inyuschan: but meh ;w;
19:18 Inyuschan: sure, maybe
19:18 Andrea: Mike Shinoda
19:18 Inyuschan: tell me the other members please (?)
19:18 Inyuschan: xD
19:18 Inyuschan: STOP READING MY MIND
19:18 Andrea: Brad Delson
19:18 Andrea: Rob Bourdon
19:19 Andrea: Joe Hahn
19:19 Andrea: Phoenix
19:19 Andrea: Mark Wakefield
19:19 Andrea: that's all
19:19 Inyuschan: I didn't remember there are too many
19:19 Inyuschan: lol
19:20 Inyuschan: okay added
19:21 Andrea: btw I'm not sure if SB/B2_B.jpg and SB/Background2.jpg are fine with their resolution, they probably need resize because they're too big for SB purposes
19:21 Andrea: you'll need to talk with storyboarder for that
19:21 Inyuschan: I can resize them
19:21 Inyuschan: if it's ok o.o
19:21 Andrea: idk if it will mess up the storyboard
19:21 Andrea: that's why it's better if you leave that to him
19:22 Inyuschan: well >:
19:22 Andrea: anyways, for both difficulties, always use silence sliderslide
19:22 Andrea: silenced*
19:22 Andrea: it's weird to hear it on some parts
19:22 Andrea: I won't run anywhere for the recheck, so don't worry :P
19:22 Inyuschan: can you give me one? D:
19:22 Andrea: you're already using it
19:22 Andrea: but some sections are S instead of S:C1
19:23 Andrea: you forgot to add custom hitsounds
19:23 Inyuschan: ah, true
19:23 Inyuschan: so I need to change S to S:C1
19:23 Andrea: on Normal btw
19:23 Inyuschan: I guess
19:24 Andrea: 00:31:876 (3,4) - make (4) aligned with the slider for a better flow
19:24 Andrea: then make sure to fix spacing afterwards
19:25 Inyuschan: done
19:25 Andrea: 02:33:370 (2,3,4,1) - would be better if you could move this pattern a bit down, so you won't risk to touch the hp bar
19:26 Andrea: not much else to say on Normal actually
19:27 Inyuschan: okay fixed o3o
19:27 Andrea: gosh it feels like modding my maps XD
19:27 Inyuschan: is it bad? xD
19:27 Andrea: no it's cool ;w;
19:28 Andrea: 00:40:876 (1,2) - I would stack these but like that they're okay too =w=
19:28 Andrea: ^ Hard btw
19:28 Inyuschan: yay o3o
19:28 Inyuschan: that little unstack is fine, idk :>
19:28 Andrea: 00:53:475 (1) - stack here could be improved
19:28 Inyuschan: ugh, I didn't want a stack
19:29 Inyuschan: but idk
19:29 Andrea: 00:54:375 (3) - this slider shape isn't perfectly symmetric if that was your intention :P
19:29 Andrea: if you want a nice blanket fix it ^^
19:30 Inyuschan: okay o3o
19:30 Andrea: 01:28:573 (2) - that's the good shape
19:30 Inyuschan: okay I got it xD
19:30 Andrea: 01:34:873 (1) - why this isn't centered on the grid
19:31 Andrea: baka!!!
19:31 Inyuschan: orz another one
19:31 Inyuschan: spacing between notes please
19:31 Inyuschan: anyways fixed
19:31 Inyuschan: xD
19:31 Andrea: xD
19:32 Andrea: 01:36:973 (1) - not sure if spinner recover time is enough for a Hard...
19:32 Inyuschan: now comes the whoaaaa part
19:32 Inyuschan: (?)
19:32 Andrea: yup, best part
19:32 Andrea: 01:43:873 (1,2) - this is so Gero like xD
19:32 Inyuschan: not sure neither, but kinda depends of the bpm / rhythm
19:32 Inyuschan: yeah
19:32 Andrea: yeah should be okay
19:32 Inyuschan: xD
19:33 Andrea: your style is a mix between mine and Gero's
19:33 Andrea: lol
19:33 Inyuschan: 01:42:673 (2,2) - lol I made that stack
19:33 Inyuschan: without intention
19:33 Inyuschan: I'm so pro
19:33 Inyuschan: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
19:33 Andrea: wow haha
19:33 Andrea: nice job
19:33 Inyuschan: :D
19:33 Inyuschan: and yeah, it's a mix xD
19:33 Andrea: 01:49:572 (2,3,4,5) - that's so my style
19:33 Inyuschan: indeed xD
19:34 Andrea: 01:53:772 (3) - same like before, blanket could be better
19:34 Andrea: if you fix the shape, make sure to fix (2) as well
19:34 Inyuschan: okay fixed xD
19:34 Andrea: 01:57:372 (2) - make the red points centered please :3
19:34 Andrea: looks a bit weird like that xD
19:35 Andrea: 02:49:869 (1) - why you didn't changed slider velocity on this slider as well like the rest?
19:35 Inyuschan: wait a moment
19:35 Andrea: the whole part is calm after all
19:36 Inyuschan: I had to change ALL pattern
19:36 Inyuschan: x_x
19:36 Andrea: I know that feel lol
19:36 Inyuschan: ah, my fault
19:37 Inyuschan: fixed
19:37 Andrea: 03:04:269 (1) - I can't hear nothing on 2nd repeat here...
19:38 Inyuschan: I hear something, anyways it was a wrong snapping
19:38 Inyuschan: so I fixed it a bit
19:39 Andrea: nothing else x)
19:39 Inyuschan: okay o3o
19:39 Inyuschan: going to update
19:40 Inyuschan: don't forget to post this irc owo
19:41 Andrea: okay :3
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