RedMuffleR - Rubeus · forum

-Visceral-

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2014-12-29T06:12:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 14, 2015 at 3:48:48 PM

Artist: RedMuffleR
Title: Rubeus
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: Fort SDVX konami crabovan monstrata
BPM: 200
Filesize: 2943kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:

BASIC (2.21 stars, 157 notes)
BEGINNER (1.28 stars, 91 notes)
crabovan's ADVANCED (3.88 stars, 338 notes)
Fort's EXHAUST (4.75 stars, 452 notes)
GRAVITY (5.74 stars, 540 notes)
Monstrata's NOVICE (3.06 stars, 209 notes)

Download: RedMuffleR - Rubeus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Map #1 - RE-DOWNLOAD AFTER 4/18! NEW MP3!

BEGINNER- 100% by Smoothie World

BASIC- 100% by Smoothie World

NOVICE- 100% by Monstrata

ADVANCED- 100% by crabovan

EXHAUST- 100% by Fort

GRAVITY- 100% by Smoothie World

Special Thanks:
Azer - Took a look at my map twice on stream when I first uploaded it and again when it had +40 and gave me some tips that helped alot
Kloyd - Inspiration
Zare - Inspiration
Monstrata - Lots of help and support
Kroytz - Lots of help and support

Last edited by -Visceral- 2015-05-14T19:48:56+00:00, edited 58 times in total.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-03T10:34:25+00:00

hi there

Infinite:
00:11:317 (1,2) - i think change this slider to 1/4 slider pattern like this http://puu.sh/fpDq5/6da89c3104.jpg
00:11:617 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this pattern have long stream, so i think put circle in 00:11:842 - looks better (maybe you need to move this notes 00:11:317 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:13:267 (3,4) - i think you can put 1/1 slider in 00:13:267 - and then put circle in 00:13:717 - (or maybe you can put 1/2 slider there) or you can do the same pattern like this 00:17:917 (2,3,4) -
00:23:617 - you need clickable objects here (and NC it i think) ex: http://puu.sh/fpE01/be6ea5a2f7.jpg, it just my personal comment so you can ignore this i think (based on newcombo on some big beat and keep some consistency :3)
00:24:817 (8) - need NC this
01:00:517 (1) - remove NC here
01:08:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels overmap but idk
01:09:142 (8,1) - i think flow between this notes feels so hard, maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/fpEux/84e2b2be0b.jpg (feels comfortable i think)
01:17:317 (8) - better use 1/2 slider (some sound are in here 01:17:467 - and it feels better)
01:43:417 (1) - use 1/8 slider pattern, since this sounds is kind like 1/16 pattern, and maybe you can delete this circle 01:43:567 (2) - and extend slider to 01:43:567 -
01:43:867 (3) - move to x248y120 (minor visual improvement)
01:47:317 (1,2,1,1,2) - slider pattern is a bit confusing, maybe you can change it to circle (but i think i prefer not to NC 01:47:767 (1,1) - to keep followpoint clearly visible) or maybe 01:47:017 (4,5) - you can change this to 1/4 slider pattern.

Novice:
00:30:067 - you can put some circle here
00:29:617 (1,2,3) - but i think this pattern is weird cause you only do this pattern just once (the rest you just use 1/1 clickable pattern in white thick)
looks fine i think

Basic:
why no break time in here? 01:00:817 -
01:47:017 (1) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/fpFVX/a5cb43b0a3.jpg
diff is great i think.

good luck with your map

btw i pm you something :3

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-03T19:43:43+00:00

Fort wrote:
hi there

Infinite:
00:11:317 (1,2) - i think change this slider to 1/4 slider pattern like this http://puu.sh/fpDq5/6da89c3104.jpg Didn't do exactly that since I feel like it kind of ruins the momentum in that part, but I changed it up to something better
00:11:617 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this pattern have long stream, so i think put circle in 00:11:842 - looks better (maybe you need to move this notes 00:11:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keeping it as is after the changes above
00:13:267 (3,4) - i think you can put 1/1 slider in 00:13:267 - and then put circle in 00:13:717 - (or maybe you can put 1/2 slider there) or you can do the same pattern like this 00:17:917 (2,3,4) - Keeping as is for now
00:23:617 - you need clickable objects here (and NC it i think) ex: http://puu.sh/fpE01/be6ea5a2f7.jpg, it just my personal comment so you can ignore this i think (based on newcombo on some big beat and keep some consistency :3) Oh woops yea forgot that NC yea thanks but yeah I'm gonna keep the long slider for the consistency
00:24:817 (8) - need NC this Yup
01:00:517 (1) - remove NC here Yup
01:08:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels overmap but idk Yea you're right. It should go right into a stream like that so I started it out with some reverse sliders.
01:09:142 (8,1) - i think flow between this notes feels so hard, maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/fpEux/84e2b2be0b.jpg (feels comfortable i think) Yup fixed
01:17:317 (8) - better use 1/2 slider (some sound are in here 01:17:467 - and it feels better) Not 100% sure what you meant by this but yeah I popped it down to 1/2 and added a note at 01:17:467
01:43:417 (1) - use 1/8 slider pattern, since this sounds is kind like 1/16 pattern, and maybe you can delete this circle 01:43:567 (2) - and extend slider to 01:43:567 - Fixed
01:43:867 (3) - move to x248y120 (minor visual improvement) Fixed
01:47:317 (1,2,1,1,2) - slider pattern is a bit confusing, maybe you can change it to circle (but i think i prefer not to NC 01:47:767 (1,1) - to keep followpoint clearly visible) or maybe 01:47:017 (4,5) - you can change this to 1/4 slider pattern. Hmm yea I'm still trying to work this part out. Changed it up a bit but I'll likely go back to it in the near future when I get an idea

Novice:
00:30:067 - you can put some circle here Ok
00:29:617 (1,2,3) - but i think this pattern is weird cause you only do this pattern just once (the rest you just use 1/1 clickable pattern in white thick)
looks fine i think Dumbed down pattern a bit

Basic:
why no break time in here? 01:00:817 - Oops added lol
01:47:017 (1) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/fpFVX/a5cb43b0a3.jpg Yup
diff is great i think. Yay

good luck with your map Thanks ^^

btw i pm you something :3 Replied

gracefu

80 posts

Joined June 2014

gracefu 2015-02-04T13:51:13+00:00

~~Mod in progress~~ Done.

Technical:
Files √
Timing: Timed the second section to 12835 offset (you can deduce the first section by adding +18 ms). Assuming BPM is correct.
Metadata: Add some tags maybe? Remember to add your GD's creator name in the tags when you upload it.

Testplays:
Basic 1
Basic 2 (DT)
Novice 1
Novice 2
Infinite (HT)

The version they were played on:
Basic
Novice
Infinite

Important:
These are problems I spotted during the play. While the map is fun to play, these parts just ruined the experience for me. Sorry man :/

00:00:817 - The beginning is hard to read. Not a big problem, but starting with short sliders when your sv is higher than usual really disoriented me.
00:17:617 - The long sliders seem to end too early. They could be extended to the next red tick.
00:21:517 - Try to use some sliders here instead, or just leave it blank (not a bad idea). The circles do not fit the music at all, and sound bland imo.
Circle below slider end is really hard to read for normal/hard players.
00:30:385 - ~~The DS change (somewhere) is hard to read! Remember this is a NOVICE!~~ Worse when I think it's a DS change when it's actually a 3/2 gap! ;-; I'm sorry but this just doesn't work. (Also, Fort suggested a circle at 30:067. I don't think this is enough.)
The rhythm at 00:29:635 -:
Kick: *..*.*.* (each * or . is a 1/2 beat. So this goes White [gap] Red Red Red)
Snare: ..*...*.

If you're following the kick, I suggest the following rhythm:

SPOILER

If you're following both the kick and the snare, I suggest these two options:

SPOILER

01:05:635 - What's the spinner for? The music is just repeating, there's no buildup at all here. There is buildup when you do the 3xRepeat slider, so if you want to keep the slider, it would make more sense to remove the spinner. If you want the spinner, you can move it to 01:06:835 - imo.
01:20:017 - This slider is too close to the spinner and it's hard to play if you're a new player unless you sacrifice spinner time.
01:40:717 - Circle-longslider stack at the end is also hard to read. It's easier if circle doesn't overlap. (like everywhere else.)

Less important things:

Sliders: No problems found.
Flow:
00:30:667 - Imo, this is a great place to break the flow. Perhaps by ctrl-H?
00:50:617 - Also another good place to break the flow (you already have, a little). Because of slider leniency, you can actually move this a few grids down. By how much I'll leave it up to you.
00:56:617 - I like this!

Seems good!

Last edited by gracefu 2015-02-04T23:08:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-02-04T22:40:53+00:00

BASIC
00:12:817 (1) Make it curvy or just straight, as it looks now, it looks ugly
00:16:417 (2,1) The blank can be improved here
00:23:617 (2,3) ctrl+g
00:29:017 (3,1) Blank can be improved
00:39:217 (1,2) ^
00:59:617 (3,4,1) Make a slider instead
01:17:617 (1,1) Recovery time is too short
01:41:017 (1,2) Im unsure about this overlap, maybe you should delete it?

NOVICE
00:17:617 (1) This one feels out of place, maybe you should map the part
00:29:917 (2,3) Slider instead?
00:32:617 (2,3) ctrl+g
00:42:217 (2,3) They are really close to each other, maybe you should move (3) somewhere else
00:42:817 (3,3) Bad overlap
01:08:017 (1) Its just my opinion, but i hate multiple repeat sliders, maybe you should delete it?
01:17:917 (1,1) Recovery time is too short
01:43:117 (2,1) Why dont you stack them?

Fort's EXHAUST
00:06:217 (1,2) I think you should delete the overlap
00:14:317 Add Circle here
00:16:717 ^
00:36:667 (8,2,3,4) I think a stack would be better here
01:21:217 (5,1) You can improve the blank here
01:44:317 (3,5) Stack would be better

INFINITE
00:07:417 (5,6,1) Perfect triangle

Really nice map and song *_*
Good job on this one. Good luck

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-04T23:06:23+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
BASIC
00:12:817 (1) Make it curvy or just straight, as it looks now, it looks ugly Yup fixed
00:16:417 (2,1) The blank can be improved here Improved
00:23:617 (2,3) ctrl+g Yup
00:29:017 (3,1) Blank can be improved Yup
00:39:217 (1,2) ^ Yup
00:59:617 (3,4,1) Make a slider instead Yea made it a reverse slider
01:17:617 (1,1) Recovery time is too short Changed
01:41:017 (1,2) Im unsure about this overlap, maybe you should delete it? Changed to a note

NOVICE
00:17:617 (1) This one feels out of place, maybe you should map the part Keeping the same for now
00:29:917 (2,3) Slider instead? Ew yea wtf how did I come up with 2 notes like that
00:32:617 (2,3) ctrl+g Yup
00:42:217 (2,3) They are really close to each other, maybe you should move (3) somewhere else Keeping it like it is
00:42:817 (3,3) Bad overlap Ew yea you're right lol
01:08:017 (1) Its just my opinion, but i hate multiple repeat sliders, maybe you should delete it? Fixed
01:17:917 (1,1) Recovery time is too short Yup fixed
01:43:117 (2,1) Why dont you stack them? Stacked. Was originally because of distance issues but I worked around it

INFINITE
00:07:417 (5,6,1) Perfect triangle Moved slider down a bit to make a little jumpy feeling

Really nice map and song *_* Thanks
Good job on this one. Good luck

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-04T23:59:36+00:00

gracefu wrote:
~~Mod in progress~~ Done.

Technical:
Files √
Timing: Timed the second section to 12835 offset (you can deduce the first section by adding +18 ms). Assuming BPM is correct.
Metadata: Add some tags maybe? Remember to add your GD's creator name in the tags when you upload it. Yup added

Important:
These are problems I spotted during the play. While the map is fun to play, these parts just ruined the experience for me. Sorry man :/ Why are you apologizing lol? This stuff helps me out alot

00:00:817 - The beginning is hard to read. Not a big problem, but starting with short sliders when your sv is higher than usual really disoriented me. Remapped the beginning
00:17:617 - The long sliders seem to end too early. They could be extended to the next red tick. I think its alright as it is
00:21:517 - Try to use some sliders here instead, or just leave it blank (not a bad idea). The circles do not fit the music at all, and sound bland imo.
Circle below slider end is really hard to read for normal/hard players. Ok fixed
00:30:385 - ~~The DS change (somewhere) is hard to read! Remember this is a NOVICE!~~ Worse when I think it's a DS change when it's actually a 3/2 gap! ;-; I'm sorry but this just doesn't work. (Also, Fort suggested a circle at 30:067. I don't think this is enough.)
The rhythm at 00:29:635 -:
Kick: *..*.*.* (each * or . is a 1/2 beat. So this goes White [gap] Red Red Red)
Snare: ..*...*. I changed this part after you modded I believe, so it's different now.

01:05:635 - What's the spinner for? The music is just repeating, there's no buildup at all here. There is buildup when you do the 3xRepeat slider, so if you want to keep the slider, it would make more sense to remove the spinner. If you want the spinner, you can move it to 01:06:835 - imo. Yeah you're right. Fixed
01:20:017 - This slider is too close to the spinner and it's hard to play if you're a new player unless you sacrifice spinner time. Yup fixed
01:40:717 - Circle-longslider stack at the end is also hard to read. It's easier if circle doesn't overlap. (like everywhere else.) Ok fixed

Less important things:

Sliders: No problems found.
Flow:
00:30:667 - Imo, this is a great place to break the flow. Perhaps by ctrl-H? Keeping it the same right now
00:50:617 - Also another good place to break the flow (you already have, a little). Because of slider leniency, you can actually move this a few grids down. By how much I'll leave it up to you. Keeping it the same for now
00:56:617 - I like this! Thanks ^^

Seems good!

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-02-05T14:36:15+00:00

Hi~~~
As requested :3

[General]

Disable Widescreen Support (No Storyboard)

[BASIC]

00:17:617 (1) - I feel this pattern doesn't fit with the song, suggest to change it like http://puu.sh/fuInd/a66ea97362.jpg
00:41:617 (1) - better blanket ? 2nd dot to x:320 y:54 - 3rd dot to x:368 y:28
01:05:617 (1,1) - for easy diff this range of spinner and notes are too short... short the spinner a little, I suggest to make the end of spinner at 01:08:017
01:17:617 (3,1) - Owww.... this is looks very clearly bad overlap. suggest to change the position
01:23:017 (2) - blanket. move 3rd dot to x:218 y:303

[NOVICE]

00:03:817 (1,1) - Don't overlap please
00:17:617 (1) - like BASIC
00:42:217 (2) - ctrl+g ? to be a better flow
01:22:117 (4) - ow... this stack... I think this circle is at 01:21:967 because the song is like that..

[Fort's EXHAUST]
Hi Fort :3

00:00:817 (1) - I suggest to move 2nd dot to x:367 y:120 or smoething like that. The reason is because It'll make the flow better from (1) to (2). The slider should be "up -> Down" not "down -> up' remembering the next note is on the bottom of slider (Sorry if it's hard to understand ;p)
01:10:267 (4) - This circle should be at 01:10:117
01:41:017 (1,2,3) - even make them stacks, I'll make them like http://puu.sh/fvnBH/ae63d9dabc.jpg
Amazhing diff.... Good Job Fort XD

[INFINITE]

00:17:917 (2,3) - Those notes is too close and will misread as 1/4. Suggest to separate it.
00:19:867 (4,5,1) - make straight ?
Nothing to say.... this diff is really good

Amazing mapset
Here take my ~~FEEL~~ STAR

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-05T16:36:23+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Fort's EXHAUST
00:06:217 (1,2) I think you should delete the overlap i think no, its still visible right?
00:14:317 Add Circle here no change
00:16:717 ^ no change
00:36:667 (8,2,3,4) I think a stack would be better here no stacking
01:21:217 (5,1) You can improve the blank here kay
01:44:317 (3,5) Stack would be better no change i think

Fantastica wrote:
[Fort's EXHAUST]
Hi Fort :3 hi :3
00:00:817 (1) - I suggest to move 2nd dot to x:367 y:120 or smoething like that. The reason is because It'll make the flow better from (1) to (2). The slider should be "up -> Down" not "down -> up' remembering the next note is on the bottom of slider (Sorry if it's hard to understand ;p) i understand but i think better like this lol
01:10:267 (4) - This circle should be at 01:10:117 oops, i think you're right. stacked it!
01:41:017 (1,2,3) - even make them stacks, I'll make them like http://puu.sh/fvnBH/ae63d9dabc.jpg no change because of this 01:09:217 (1,2) - ;_;

Amazhing diff.... Good Job Fort XD thanks <3

i apply all suggestion except red one

wow

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80017
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Rubeus
Artist:RedMuffleR
ArtistUnicode:RedMuffleR
Creator:Smoothie World
Version:Fort's EXHAUST
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:Fort SDVX konami crabovan
BeatmapID:574049
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1000th Post!

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-05T21:57:16+00:00

Fantastica wrote:
Hi~~~
As requested :3

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support (No Storyboard)Done
[BASIC]
00:17:617 (1) - I feel this pattern doesn't fit with the song, suggest to change it like http://puu.sh/fuInd/a66ea97362.jpg Keeping it the same
00:41:617 (1) - better blanket ? 2nd dot to x:320 y:54 - 3rd dot to x:368 y:28 Done
01:05:617 (1,1) - for easy diff this range of spinner and notes are too short... short the spinner a little, I suggest to make the end of spinner at 01:08:017 Shortened
01:17:617 (3,1) - Owww.... this is looks very clearly bad overlap. suggest to change the position Woops didn't even notice. Fixed
01:23:017 (2) - blanket. move 3rd dot to x:218 y:303 Dun
[NOVICE]
00:03:817 (1,1) - Don't overlap please Fixed
00:17:617 (1) - like BASIC Hm? Not sure what you mean here
00:42:217 (2) - ctrl+g ? to be a better flow I think it flows better the way it currently is
01:22:117 (4) - ow... this stack... I think this circle is at 01:21:967 because the song is like that.. Fixed fugly stack
[INFINITE]
00:17:917 (2,3) - Those notes is too close and will misread as 1/4. Suggest to separate it. Ok
00:19:867 (4,5,1) - make straight ? Straightified
Nothing to say.... this diff is really good Thanks ^^

Amazing mapset Yay
Here take my ~~FEEL~~ STAR

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2015-02-07T03:23:50+00:00

M4M
I asked you to mod 1 diff because I can't mod EXHAUST and INFINITE, because I can't play and can't comprehend them orz
[BASIC]
00:06:817 (1,2) - try positioning the (2)'s head inside (1), it will look tidier
00:20:017 (2) - fix blanket
00:24:817 (1) - it is better if you make this slider face the other side, or if you still want to preserve this, curve the half end like this

SPOILER

00:26:617 (3,1) - this one is not flowing well, I suggest to change the slider's flow (00:33:817 (3,1) - this one is a nice flow, so why not follow it simply like that) or just shift the position up a bit
00:38:617 (3,1) - since (1) was blanketing (2), move (3) a bit to the right to match the (1)'s edge

SPOILER

00:41:617 (1) - fix blanket
00:47:617 (2) - same case as 00:24:817 (1) - , curve it or flip it
01:15:217 (1) - blanket off, fix it
01:17:617 (3) - ^
01:20:017 (1) - overlap with 01:17:617 (3) - , move it a bit to the left
01:23:017 (2) - blanket off
01:42:517 (2) - stack properly
[NOVICE]
00:02:317 (1) - fix blanket
00:03:817 (1) - fix blanket with 00:03:517 (2) - and fix parallel with 00:03:517 (2,1) -
00:11:017 (2,2) - better stack each other, looks tidy
00:12:817 (1,2) - flow bad, curve the (1)?
00:14:017 (4) - fix blanket with 00:13:417 (2) -
00:23:617 (4) - curve it?
00:23:317 (3,1) - stack
00:27:217 (1,2) - same case as 00:12:817 (1,2) -
00:27:817 (2,1) - stack
00:32:617 (2,1) - ^
00:47:017 (3) - curve
00:53:617 (1,5) - blanket properly, so it will be neat
01:11:617 (1,2) - same case as 00:12:817 (1,2) -
01:17:017 (3) - ends 01:17:317 - , add long slider from 01:17:617 - to 01:18:817 -
01:22:417 (5,1) - flow bad, curve (5) up
01:24:517 (3) - make it repeat here 01:24:967 - and ends 01:25:417 - , delete 01:25:417 (4) -

good luck

crabovan

236 posts

Joined September 2011

crabovan 2015-02-08T15:17:03+00:00

Finally done it lazy ass.
http://puu.sh/fDP9Z/b56ea64bbb.rar

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-08T21:19:28+00:00

crabovan wrote:
Finally done it lazy ass.
http://puu.sh/fDP9Z/b56ea64bbb.rar

Woo thanks!

Going over Setsurei's mod as soon as I'm home and have more time.

Moved to Pending!

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-08T23:14:58+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
M4M
I asked you to mod 1 diff because I can't mod EXHAUST and INFINITE, because I can't play and can't comprehend them orz
[BASIC]
00:06:817 (1,2) - try positioning the (2)'s head inside (1), it will look tidier
00:20:017 (2) - fix blanket Done
00:24:817 (1) - it is better if you make this slider face the other side, or if you still want to preserve this, curve the half end like this
SPOILER
I prefer how it is now
00:26:617 (3,1) - this one is not flowing well, I suggest to change the slider's flow (00:33:817 (3,1) - this one is a nice flow, so why not follow it simply like that) or just shift the position up a bit Done
00:38:617 (3,1) - since (1) was blanketing (2), move (3) a bit to the right to match the (1)'s edge
SPOILER
Done00:41:617 (1) - fix blanket Done
00:47:617 (2) - same case as 00:24:817 (1) - , curve it or flip it I like how it is now
01:15:217 (1) - blanket off, fix it Done
01:17:617 (3) - ^ Done
01:20:017 (1) - overlap with 01:17:617 (3) - , move it a bit to the left Fixed
01:23:017 (2) - blanket off Eh not really but modified a bit
01:42:517 (2) - stack properly Done
[NOVICE]
00:02:317 (1) - fix blanket Fixed
00:03:817 (1) - fix blanket with 00:03:517 (2) - and fix parallel with 00:03:517 (2,1) - It looks fine to me .-.
00:11:017 (2,2) - better stack each other, looks tidy Done
00:12:817 (1,2) - flow bad, curve the (1)? Done
00:14:017 (4) - fix blanket with 00:13:417 (2) - I don't quite see what is off about it
00:23:617 (4) - curve it? I like it how it is now
00:23:317 (3,1) - stack Done
00:27:217 (1,2) - same case as 00:12:817 (1,2) - Keeping it the same
00:27:817 (2,1) - stack Done
00:32:617 (2,1) - ^ Done
00:47:017 (3) - curve Kinda did
00:53:617 (1,5) - blanket properly, so it will be neat Fixed
01:11:617 (1,2) - same case as 00:12:817 (1,2) - Keeping it the same
01:17:017 (3) - ends 01:17:317 - , add long slider from 01:17:617 - to 01:18:817 - Keeping it the same for now but I'll consider this if the same suggestion comes up again
01:22:417 (5,1) - flow bad, curve (5) up Fixed
01:24:517 (3) - make it repeat here 01:24:967 - and ends 01:25:417 - , delete 01:25:417 (4) - Done

good luck[/color]

Thanks for the mod! Updated

- Milhofo -

683 posts

Joined February 2014

- Milhofo - 2015-02-09T23:17:32+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue

[BASIC]

00:20:017 (2,3) - Why not blanket completely? I mean tighten the slider around 3
00:39:217 (1) - the second red anchor point isn't really needed, you could do the same effect with just 2 anchor points (1 red):
SPOILER
01:41:017 (1,2) - better to remove the stack having in account this is a really easy map, it should have the same distance as the previous sliders, from each other

[NOVICE]

00:03:817 (1) - slider end at ~ x:113 y:142 to improve blanket with 00:05:317 (1) -
00:05:017 (2) - reposition if above change applied ^
00:06:517 - feels like a note is missing here
00:05:317 (1,1) - unstack if you didn't make the above change (because the timing is different which makes it hard to read), if you did make the change, leave as is
00:12:817 (3) - NC
00:13:417 (4,6) - could be blanketed better by repositioning 6's slider start, then repositioning 00:13:717 (5) - if changed
00:21:517 (2) - mhm I would say the timing is werid, but following the song here would make it too hard, so rip
00:38:617 (5) - ctrl+g? I think it wouldn't break spacing
00:47:917 (2,3) - imperfect blanket
01:25:717 (4,1) - this one kind of asks for a blanket imo
01:48:067 - (just a suggestion) end slider here then..
01:48:217 - add note here then..
01:48:517 - finish with a spinner

[crabovan's ADVANCED]

There's a lot of unnecessary overlaps in this diff, which makes some patterns ugly and makes the map harder to read
Imo SV could be a bit lower, doesn't bother me personally though
00:04:417 (5,6,7) - and 00:05:917 (3,4,5) - jumps feel out of place, it feels like it's a hard map trying to be an insane
00:17:617 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:20:017 (1,2,3) - ugly overlaps, it really doesn't feel nice to play them :/
00:25:267 (4,5) - 5 is almost all covered up, it should be more visible
00:32:017 (1,2,3) - it looks cool but it doesn't play cool, can't feel the flow you're trying to achieve
00:36:817 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:817 (1,2) - too much overlapped, I would rotate 2 a bit for it to be more visible
00:52:417 (1,2) - shapes are weird and the blankets connected to these sliders aren't perfect due to their shape
00:48:817 - I don't get the reason behind the increase in spacing here, it's not that I don't like it, but then you change back at 00:54:517 - , it just messes up my idea of what diff this map is, sometimes it's easier other times it's a lot harder, you should alternate between both spacings evenly or just use one and stick with that one
01:46:717 - this needs either a repeating slider or a triple, it feels undermapped comparing to the rest of the map
It might look like I didn't like the map, that's not the case, but I still think it needs some work, mostly on spacing / flow consistency and appearence

[Fort's EXHAUST]

00:14:467 (8) - NC? would help with reading (I know you're going for white ticks, still, just giving my pov ^^)
00:16:867 (7) - ^
00:19:267 (5) - yep ^
00:52:267 (4,1) - mhm this overlap is a bit meh, and it's actually noteceable during gameplay
00:53:467 (4,1) - b-blanket
01:27:217 (6) - would a ctrl+g break spacing too much? I think it plays nice
01:32:017 (1) - random shape (not just because of that, because it breaks flow a little bit)
I like this diff :3

[INFINITE]

00:17:167 (5) - I can never get this right.... would love it to be rotated ~90º clockwise
00:17:617 (1) - ctrl+g pls sir
00:18:067 (3,4) - rip blanket
00:26:917 (5) - pointing this upwards breaks the flow a little too much imo, pros can do it, not so pros fail at it (jumping to the next triple) ; ;
00:28:267 (1) - idk if acceptable since it gets way out of the grid, would get confirmation to avoid problems
00:31:417 - the jumps are nice, but there's sound for a triple here (just a warning, it's up to the mapper ofc lol)
00:39:217 (1,4) - imperfect blanket
00:52:417 (1) - curving this would make flow better imo
01:11:242 (6) - rip combo
01:47:767 (3) - NC
I love this diff :33

Great set, have my star

gl!

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-09T23:55:34+00:00

Milhofo wrote:
Hi, M4M from your queue :3

[BASIC]
00:20:017 (2,3) - Why not blanket completely? I mean tighten the slider around 3 Fixed
00:39:217 (1) - the second red anchor point isn't really needed, you could do the same effect with just 2 anchor points (1 red):
SPOILER
Changed
01:41:017 (1,2) - better to remove the stack having in account this is a really easy map, it should have the same distance as the previous sliders, from each other Ok fixed
[NOVICE]
00:03:817 (1) - slider end at ~ x:113 y:142 to improve blanket with 00:05:317 (1) - Done
00:06:517 - feels like a note is missing here I think its alright
00:05:317 (1,1) - unstack if you didn't make the above change (because the timing is different which makes it hard to read), if you did make the change, leave as is Destackified
00:12:817 (3) - NC Oh woops I missed this
00:13:417 (4,6) - could be blanketed better by repositioning 6's slider start, then repositioning 00:13:717 (5) - if changed Done
00:21:517 (2) - mhm I would say the timing is werid, but following the song here would make it too hard, so rip Yeah I'll keep it
00:38:617 (5) - ctrl+g? I think it wouldn't break spacing I think it flows better as it stands
00:47:917 (2,3) - imperfect blanket Fixed?
01:25:717 (4,1) - this one kind of asks for a blanket imo Done
01:48:067 - (just a suggestion) end slider here then.. Ok
01:48:217 - add note here then.. Ok
01:48:517 - finish with a spinner I dislike a spinner at the end here

[INFINITE]
00:17:167 (5) - I can never get this right.... would love it to be rotated ~90º clockwise Done
00:17:617 (1) - ctrl+g pls sir Sorta kinda
00:18:067 (3,4) - rip blanket O shet
00:26:917 (5) - pointing this upwards breaks the flow a little too much imo, pros can do it, not so pros fail at it (jumping to the next triple) ; ; Aww I like it tbh : (
00:28:267 (1) - idk if acceptable since it gets way out of the grid, would get confirmation to avoid problems
00:31:417 - the jumps are nice, but there's sound for a triple here (just a warning, it's up to the mapper ofc lol) Yeah I like the jumps
00:39:217 (1,4) - imperfect blanket Now it isn't
00:52:417 (1) - curving this would make flow better imo Yup
01:11:242 (6) - rip combo I think this is fine .-.
01:47:767 (3) - NC Ok
I love this diff :33 Yay
Great set, have my star gl! Thanks! Will mod your map by tomorrow

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-10T10:25:27+00:00

Milhofo wrote:
[Fort's EXHAUST]
00:14:467 (8) - NC? would help with reading (I know you're going for white ticks, still, just giving my pov ^^) no change there (and with same)
00:16:867 (7) - ^
00:19:267 (5) - yep ^
00:52:267 (4,1) - mhm this overlap is a bit meh, and it's actually noteceable during gameplay do that thing on purpose
00:53:467 (4,1) - b-blanket lol i didnt blanket that thing
01:27:217 (6) - would a ctrl+g break spacing too much? I think it plays nice
01:32:017 (1) - random shape (not just because of that, because it breaks flow a little bit) my life is random, so okay with that
I like this diff :3 thanks
Great set, have my star gl!

applied all except red one

Exhaust

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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"here84G.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,61017,65017
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
-683,300,5,2,1,70,1,0
6817,-100,5,2,1,100,0,0
12817,300,4,1,1,50,1,0
22304,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
22417,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
80017,300,5,1,1,80,1,1
92017,-100,5,2,1,70,0,0
98017,-100,5,2,1,100,0,0


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Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,146,94
Combo4 : 0,128,64
Combo5 : 255,192,0

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tochiii

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

tochiii 2015-02-10T23:38:33+00:00

M4M from #modreqs :3

General

Fine.

INFINITE

01:32:167 - Make a spinner from here to here 01:35:017 -
01:47:767 (1) - Press Q, here too 01:48:067 (2) -

Fort's EXHAUST

Wow it feels weird not to see so many green lines in your diff o-o
00:50:017 (1) - Improve blanket so it looks better.
00:52:267 (4) - Move to x224 y172?

Feedback

Sorry for such a short mod I shot 1 kd!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-11T13:13:14+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
Fort's EXHAUST

[*]Wow it feels weird not to see so many green lines in your diff o-o you want walls of green lines? :3, i will make hitsounding there, but soon™
[*]00:50:017 (1) - Improve blanket so it looks better. sure
[*]00:52:267 (4) - Move to x224 y172? im do this for purpose[/list][/notice]

apply all except red one, thanks for mod :3

Exhaust

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-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-12T03:41:37+00:00

Applied all suggestions in mod and updated Fort's diff

AppLoad

AppLoad 2015-02-12T21:31:12+00:00

Hi, M4M from my queue, thanks for mod)

BASIC
00:53:617 (1) - Maybe make so? It looks more neatly.
00:59:617 (3) - I don't know, but maybe make so^

NOVICEl
00:02:017 (2,1) - Don't like this. Maybe separate them?
00:06:517 - Somehow empty, add circle here.
00:07:717 - ^
00:19:117, 00:19:417, 00:19:717 - Again, somehow empty. For example: Variant 1, Variant 2.
00:36:517 - You can put something here
00:41:317 - Emptyyy~ Put something.
00:46:117 - ^
00:55:717 - ^
01:27:517 (3,4,5) - I think, it looks better.
On "BASIC" at the end diff, you put spinner... Why you don't put spinner here? Instead of 01:48:517 (2) or after this circle.

crabovan's ADVANCED
00:04:417 (5,6) - Don't like this, somehow confused me... Maybe you make so? Or something else.
00:29:017 - Add circle here. Somehow empty.
00:32:467 (4) - Don't like this slider, some kind curve. You can make more accurate.
You can put spinner at the end of diff

Fort's EXHAUST
00:51:217 (1) - I think, this slider doesn't fit here. Make so
01:00:817 (1) - Maybe there isn't need to NC?
01:20:617, 01:22:117, 01:23:617, 01:25:117 - Add circles here
Maybe add spinner at the end?

INFINITE
Good diff, can't find problems, but maybe add spinner at the end?

Good Luck, I hope see this ranked!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-13T07:00:43+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Fort's EXHAUST
00:51:217 (1) - I think, this slider doesn't fit here. Make so dont want change that, im do it on purpose
01:00:817 (1) - Maybe there isn't need to NC? follow INFINITE diff, so no change
01:20:617, 01:22:117, 01:23:617, 01:25:117 - Add circles here keep that thing, that looks boring
Maybe add spinner at the end? nope

thanks for mod but no change i think, sorry :<

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2015-02-13T10:16:24+00:00

hi :3 from m4m queue

[General]

diff spread is toooooo wide between NOVICE and ADVANCED. you should make the new diff between it

[BASIC]

00:09:817 (2) - aligned with the symmetry?
SPOILER
00:17:617 (1,2) - strange spacing
00:38:017 (2,3,1) - ^
01:14:017 (3,1) -
01:17:617 (3,1) -
01:20:017 (1) - add additions:soft-finish on slider head? want to put on Kiai's start

In Easy Diff,Spacing should arrange neatly

[NOVICE]

00:00:817 (1) - add finish and whistle on slider head? same with other diff
00:02:317 (1) - add whistle on slider head?
00:03:817 (1) - ^
00:05:317 (1) - ^
00:12:817 (1,2) - strange spacing
00:21:817 (3,1) -
00:29:617 (1,2) -
00:32:917 (3,4) -
00:44:917 (4,5) -
01:44:017 (1,2) -
00:21:817 (3) - add Drum-clap? fit to song much imo
00:40:417 (2) - please put whistle on slider end!
00:42:217 (2,3) - umm,i think flow is bad... and want to use a wide space please try this
SPOILER
01:08:917 (2,3) - It is difficult for beginners to play more gently!! for example
SPOILER
01:17:017 (3) - add finish on slider end for sharp
01:48:517 (2) - add finish

[crabovan's ADVANCED]

00:06:817 (1) - remove finish on slider body and end. missed?
00:17:617 (1,2,3) - use Sampleset soft and small volume(20%) on slider end? it's noisy for me
00:20:017 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:417 - 00:40:867 - I can not understand hitsound of this period...... Please try again with reference to Infinite

EXHAUST & INFINITE is really good

good luck

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2015-02-13T23:41:04+00:00

Hey, here's my mod for a M4M!

BASIC

SPOILER

00:03:817 (1) - The curve towards the end of this slider looks strange because of how it bulges out, I would try to reduce this curve.

00:24:817 (1) - I would CTRL + H this (use same coordinates) because it would then slightly slant towards the next note instead of away, making it easier for a beginner to anticipate where the next note will be.

00:31:417 - I think you should add a note here but that's up to you.

00:39:217 (1) - This slider sounds like it is ending too late, I would shorten the slider a bit so it sounds on-beat.

00:46:417 (1,2) - I think curvy sliders would work better here, because then you can blanket them with each other in the current pattern you have right now.

00:51:217 (1) - This slider doesn't appear to be directly in the center within the Y-Axis, making the next note having an uneven blanket with this slider. Move this slider or adjust it accordingly so that it is directly in the middle, it would then give off a mirroring effect if you know what I mean.

00:59:017 (2,3) - The spacing of these look uneven compared to the (1) and (2) in this combo.

01:09:217 (1) - This slider to me doesn't sound and fit in right, I tried to extend this slider all the way to 01:10:417 and this fits in better. If you do this, remove the circle that is at 01:10:417 and try to make some sort of slider art with this slider afterwards.

01:17:017 (2,3) - Doesn't appear to be blanketed perfectly, make this look neater?

01:20:017 (1) - Extending this slider to 01:20:917 sounds more on-beat compared to how you have it as of right now.

01:21:217 (1,2) - I wouldn't blanket notes like this in a beginner difficulty because this will just confuse the player, I recommend you to not stack these at all.

01:21:517 (2) - Extend this slider to sound more on-beat to end at 01:22:417

01:22:717 (1,2) - Same thing about the stacking in beginner difficulties, I just wouldn't do it.

01:23:017 (2) - Extend this slider as well to sound more on-beat, I'll stop mentioning these so just go back to sliders similar to this and extend them to sound more on-beat if needed.

NOVICE

SPOILER

00:02:017 (2,1) - You can try to get these notes to blanket within the curve in the very first note in this map, I think it would look nice.

00:12:517 (2,1) - Spacing of these look uneven compared to the other notes.

00:17:317 - I think a note fits in here, but that's your choice.

00:27:217 (1) - The slant within this slider isn't very noticeable, why not slant it some more?

00:32:017 (1) - CTRL + < (Press this 2 times.) I think this helps improve the flow within this slider better, use the same coordinates still.

00:35:317 (4,1) - Have these stack? It doesn't look neat as it is right now.

01:48:817 - Didn't you have some kind of a spinner here in the BASIC difficulty? Why not add a spinner at the end as well?

crabovan's ADVANCED

SPOILER

00:01:267 (1) - I'm confused why there's a NC here while the music is the same at 00:04:267 (4) and it doesn't utilize a NC here.

00:05:917 (3,4,5) - The large jumps here don't fit in that well imo, I would stick the same style that you have for the other parts just like this.

00:27:517 (3) - Why not extend this slider to end more later? It fits the style you currently have with the other sliders that precede this one.

00:28:717 (2) - I think you could do something more with this section, such as the same style you have with the other sliders.

00:30:442 (5) - This slider doesn't fit in that well to me at all, I don't hear it follow anything in the music that would sound like a triplet. Although, I do hear a point in the music at 00:30:517 where I can hear a section where this could fit in.

00:37:717 (5) - I think 2 separate notes here instead of this slider would fit in better instead of a slider, it would form a triplet afterwards.

00:48:817 (1,2,3) - Use the same DS that you are using previously instead of this random increase with the DS, I didn't hear anything in the song that could be emphasized with this. 00:50:617 (3,4,5,6) is used more effectively with the increased spacing, just not at that section that I mentioned.

00:53:617 (1,2,3) - The large spacing on this doesn't really fit in that well either to me at all, an increased spacing would sound much better at 00:54:517 (5,6,1) because of the high pitch in the piano.

01:20:917 (4) - This slider does not require a red tick at all, the shape just looks weird by having this, and it makes the blanket with the (1) look messy.

01:32:017 (1) - I think it looks nicer if you place this note at the coordinates X:256/Y:40

01:38:317 (2) - Ctrl + G makes a cooler pattern.

01:48:817 - Adding a spinner at the end would fit in since the BASIC difficulty utilizes one at the end.

Fort's EXHAUST

SPOILER

00:06:217 (1) - Personally, I don't like how this slider plays even though it is supposed to follow that one sound in the music, I think you should still follow the piano here.

00:17:242 - Try adding some type of fast reverse slider here? The music would fit in well with this.

00:26:767 - I can hear a point in the music here where you can use a triplet here.

00:30:517 (5,6) - It feels awkward having these stacked, I would just use regular spacing here.

00:40:417 (1) - Removing this note sounds and plays better in my opinion.

00:50:617 (3) - I would move this closer to the upcoming stream a bit more so it is easier to aim here.

00:56:467 - Adding a note here would fit in better.

INFINITE

SPOILER

00:05:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not use an increased spacing with these so that it looks a bit more different than the other part that was similar to this?

00:26:917 (5) - This slider here feels random to me, I would just utilize a stream of circles here.

00:36:517 (5) - ^

01:12:817 (1,2,3,4) - I see what the notes are following here, but this section of the song feels like it could contain more streams, such as the previous part before this. It just feels empty afterwards.

Nice map!

Good luck with this and I hope you find this mod helpful!

crabovan

236 posts

Joined September 2011

crabovan 2015-02-14T11:36:17+00:00

Milhofo wrote:
[crabovan's ADVANCED]
There's a lot of unnecessary overlaps in this diff, which makes some patterns ugly and makes the map harder to read some of them are planned but I rechecked this
Imo SV could be a bit lower, doesn't bother me personally though well, this diff is actually my difficulty border and I'm playing it decent, so let's keep it as is
00:04:417 (5,6,7) - and 00:05:917 (3,4,5) - jumps feel out of place, it feels like it's a hard map trying to be an insane about first, I can't deal this pattern without a jump, about second - rechecked
00:17:617 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:20:017 (1,2,3) - ugly overlaps, it really doesn't feel nice to play them :/ u are too strict about ANY designed overlaps
00:25:267 (4,5) - 5 is almost all covered up, it should be more visible 1x distance snap, rly?
00:32:017 (1,2,3) - it looks cool but it doesn't play cool, can't feel the flow you're trying to achieve I'm a bit mad about any sort of blanket
00:36:817 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:817 (1,2) - too much overlapped, I would rotate 2 a bit for it to be more visible fixed
00:52:417 (1,2) - shapes are weird and the blankets connected to these sliders aren't perfect due to their shape blankets are perfect
00:48:817 - I don't get the reason behind the increase in spacing here, it's not that I don't like it, but then you change back at 00:54:517 - , it just messes up my idea of what diff this map is, sometimes it's easier other times it's a lot harder, you should alternate between both spacings evenly or just use one and stick with that one I'm trying to keep same spacing but something I can't come up with something other than jump
01:46:717 - this needs either a repeating slider or a triple, it feels undermapped comparing to the rest of the map I'm mapping if you hear, I've mapped this right to piano notes only
It might look like I didn't like the map, that's not the case, but I still think it needs some work, mostly on spacing / flow consistency and appearence it's ok, ty for mod anyway

[AppLoad] wrote:
crabovan's ADVANCED
00:04:417 (5,6) - Don't like this, somehow confused me... Maybe you make so? Or something else. that's ruining that pretty pattern :c
00:29:017 - Add circle here. Somehow empty. but I don't hear anything here
00:32:467 (4) - Don't like this slider, some kind curve. You can make more accurate. it's blanket to whole 00:32:017 (1)
You can put spinner at the end of diff that's too quiet part for spinner

Breezy wrote:
crabovan's ADVANCED

SPOILER
00:01:267 (1) - I'm confused why there's a NC here while the music is the same at 00:04:267 (4) and it doesn't utilize a NC here. that's for better readability

00:05:917 (3,4,5) - The large jumps here don't fit in that well imo, I would stick the same style that you have for the other parts just like this. this one is fixed as mentioted before

00:27:517 (3) - Why not extend this slider to end more later? It fits the style you currently have with the other sliders that precede this one. done

00:28:717 (2) - I think you could do something more with this section, such as the same style you have with the other sliders. done

00:30:442 (5) - This slider doesn't fit in that well to me at all, I don't hear it follow anything in the music that would sound like a triplet. Although, I do hear a point in the music at 00:30:517 where I can hear a section where this could fit in. I hear anything in this section greatly

00:37:717 (5) - I think 2 separate notes here instead of this slider would fit in better instead of a slider, it would form a triplet afterwards. okay

00:48:817 (1,2,3) - Use the same DS that you are using previously instead of this random increase with the DS, I didn't hear anything in the song that could be emphasized with this. 00:50:617 (3,4,5,6) is used more effectively with the increased spacing, just not at that section that I mentioned. okay, fixed

00:53:617 (1,2,3) - The large spacing on this doesn't really fit in that well either to me at all, an increased spacing would sound much better at 00:54:517 (5,6,1) because of the high pitch in the piano. fixed

01:20:917 (4) - This slider does not require a red tick at all, the shape just looks weird by having this, and it makes the blanket with the (1) look messy. tried without red square, still same, keeping as is

01:32:017 (1) - I think it looks nicer if you place this note at the coordinates X:256/Y:40 I like current placement

01:38:317 (2) - Ctrl + G makes a cooler pattern. done

01:48:817 - Adding a spinner at the end would fit in since the BASIC difficulty utilizes one at the end. only basic using this slider

Thanks to all for mods
http://puu.sh/fTZ61/a47f76b20b.rar

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-15T23:51:27+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
:? Hi, M4M from my queue, thanks for mod)
BASIC
00:53:617 (1) - Maybe make so? It looks more neatly. I prefer how it is now
00:59:617 (3) - I don't know, but maybe make so^ Same here
NOVICEl
00:02:017 (2,1) - Don't like this. Maybe separate them? Ok fixed
00:06:517 - Somehow empty, add circle here. Ok
00:07:717 - ^ Ok
00:19:117, 00:19:417, 00:19:717 - Again, somehow empty. For example: Variant 1, Variant 2. Keeping same for now
00:36:517 - You can put something here Naw
00:41:317 - Emptyyy~ Put something. No
00:46:117 - ^ No
00:55:717 - ^ No
01:27:517 (3,4,5) - I think, it looks better. I disagree
On "BASIC" at the end diff, you put spinner... Why you don't put spinner here? Instead of 01:48:517 (2) or after this circle. Removed spinner from the end of BASIC
INFINITE
Good diff, can't find problems, but maybe add spinner at the end? No thanks
Good Luck, I hope see this ranked!

Thank you for the mod!

Applying other 2 mods later or tomorrow

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-17T09:00:06+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Fort's EXHAUST

SPOILER
00:06:217 (1) - Personally, I don't like how this slider plays even though it is supposed to follow that one sound in the music, I think you should still follow the piano here. pls, that kinda boring thing ever lol

00:17:242 - Try adding some type of fast reverse slider here? The music would fit in well with this. i didnt make that pattern, looks like weirdo

00:26:767 - I can hear a point in the music here where you can use a triplet here. i hear that too, but the jump there make people ear cant hear that lol

00:30:517 (5,6) - It feels awkward having these stacked, I would just use regular spacing here. i think its okay i will thinking about this pattern

00:40:417 (1) - Removing this note sounds and plays better in my opinion. always map strong beat, so i didnt delete it

00:50:617 (3) - I would move this closer to the upcoming stream a bit more so it is easier to aim here. sure, looks good

00:56:467 - Adding a note here would fit in better. im trying to make something there, 1/1 slider in there is easy to read that pattern

apply all suggestion except red one

Exhaust

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Rubeus
Artist:RedMuffleR
ArtistUnicode:RedMuffleR
Creator:Smoothie World
Version:Fort's EXHAUST
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
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-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-17T22:47:10+00:00

ShiraKai wrote:
hi :3 from m4m queue

[General]
diff spread is toooooo wide between NOVICE and ADVANCED. you should make the new diff between it Maybe

[BASIC]
00:09:817 (2) - aligned with the symmetry? Done
SPOILER
00:17:617 (1,2) - strange spacing I don't think so
00:38:017 (2,3,1) - ^ ^
01:14:017 (3,1) - ^
01:17:617 (3,1) - ^
01:20:017 (1) - add additions:soft-finish on slider head? want to put on Kiai's start OK
In Easy Diff,Spacing should arrange neatly I'm a bit confused. It really seems fine to me and to a few new players that I've asked for test plays

[NOVICE]
00:00:817 (1) - add finish and whistle on slider head? same with other diff OK
00:02:317 (1) - add whistle on slider head? OK
00:03:817 (1) - ^ OK
00:05:317 (1) - ^ OK
00:12:817 (1,2) - strange spacing Yeah you're right. Fixed
00:21:817 (3,1) - I think it is fine here
00:29:617 (1,2) - ^
00:32:917 (3,4) - Fixed
00:44:917 (4,5) - I think it is fine here
01:44:017 (1,2) - Fixed
00:21:817 (3) - add Drum-clap? fit to song much imo Good idea
00:40:417 (2) - please put whistle on slider end! Woops fixed
00:42:217 (2,3) - umm,i think flow is bad... and want to use a wide space please try this Fixed
SPOILER
01:08:917 (2,3) - It is difficult for beginners to play more gently!! for example Ok fixed
SPOILER
01:17:017 (3) - add finish on slider end for sharp Ok
01:48:517 (2) - add finish Woops forgot *_* fixed

EXHAUST & INFINITE is really good Thank you for the mod : )
good luck

Applying Breezy's mod in a bit

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2015-02-17T23:39:19+00:00

Hi, M4M

General

Wallpaper res is 1px short (1365 instead of 1366).
If you have time and if you care, find a .mp3 of better quality (the one you have is only 124kbps).
Diff spread is a little bit uneven, you'll probably have to find something like another harder NOVICE or easier ADVANCED diff.

First red timing section offset is 817.
Would have started kiai here: 01:10:417 -

BASIC

I'll assume this is Easy, so I'll apply Easy diff rules and guidelines.

Would have recommended AR3, but this is 200bpm so AR4 seems fine too. How about AR3.5?
00:14:617 (3,1) - Check blanket.
00:20:017 (2,3,1) - ^, but more importantly, flow suggests strongly to go for 00:22:417 (1) - instead of 00:21:817 (3) - , make sure the player has no doubt about which object must be clicked next.
00:23:617 (2,3,1) - Maybe here too, move 00:24:817 (1) - a little further way from 2.
Welp this is happening everywhere now so recheck your map for this kind of issue, remember, a beginner will want to go for the most obvious object next.
00:29:017 (3,1) - Check blanket.
00:39:217 (1,2,1) - ^
00:50:617 (4,1) - ^
01:09:217 (1,1) - ^ (move the objects in time to get the approach circle where you want it to be or to make an object visible to help you with making the blanket)
01:14:017 (3,1) - ^
01:17:017 (2,3) - ^
01:23:017 (2,1) - ^
01:24:217 (1,2) - Stacks are too hard to read for easy.
01:25:717 (1,2) - ^
01:26:017 (2,1) - Overlapping too.
01:28:717 (1,2) - Stacks
01:30:217 (1,2) - ^
01:31:717 (1,2) - ^
01:38:017 - Check all the overlaps from this point on.

NOVICE

I'll assume this is Normal diff.

00:00:817 (1,2,1) - Blankets.
00:09:817 (1,2) - ^
00:12:817 (1,2) - ^
00:13:417 (2,4) - ^
00:14:017 (4,1,2) - How bout this:

Look at all dem nice blankets and shit
00:28:417 (4,2) - Ugly overlap.
00:35:617 (5,1) - Blanket.
00:42:817 (3,3) - Overlap.
00:44:317 (2,5) - Blanket.
00:47:917 (2,3) - ^
00:50:017 (2,1) - ^
01:14:317 (3,4) - ^
01:20:017 (1,3) - ^
01:22:417 (5,1) - ^
01:25:717 (4,1) - ^
01:41:017 (2,1,2) - Like Easy, I really want to hit that 2 first.
01:44:017 (1,3) - ^
01:44:917 (3,1) - Blanket.
01:47:317 (1,2) - ^

crabovan's ADVANCED

Assuming this is hard.

00:13:267 (2,3) - Check blanket.
00:15:517 (2,3) - ^
00:34:117 (5,1) - ^
00:36:067 (3,4,5) - Not pretty, triplet isn't straight.
00:37:717 (5,6,1) - ^
00:41:617 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:44:467 (3,4) - ^
00:46:867 (3,5) - ^
00:48:517 (3,1) - ^
00:48:817 (1,2,3) - Not perfectly straight (just slider to stream I know you know this).
00:50:317 (2,4) - Blanket.
00:54:967 (2,3) - ^
00:56:317 (3,4) - ^ (here:

)
01:09:217 (1,2) - ^
01:29:017 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:817 (2,3,4) - Blankets and shit:

01:44:017 (1,2) - ^, here:

01:47:317 (1,2) - Ugly stack.

Fort's EXHAUST

00:20:917 (3,1) - Ugly stack.
00:48:817 (1,2) - Blanket?

INFINITE

00:04:267 (4,5,6) - The 6 looks uneven.
00:05:767 (4,5,6) - ^
00:30:067 (4,7) - Blanket.
00:39:217 (1,4) - ^
00:44:467 (3,5) - You could blanket here.
00:50:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - Slider's start seems uneven

Nice mapset.

Available for questions if you have any, PM or in-game.

Good luck!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-18T10:19:54+00:00

Alheak wrote:
Fort's EXHAUST
00:20:917 (3,1) - Ugly stack. kay
00:48:817 (1,2) - Blanket? nope

updated!

EXHAUST

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gorgonzoler

104 posts

Joined March 2013

gorgonzoler 2015-02-19T04:36:50+00:00

i shamed but i really have no ideas how to mod your map.but you can have two star from me.(for my helpless)
Good luck for your maps OwO
i m still a new mapper need exp.

hehe

1,971 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-19T14:53:11+00:00

cool gravity wars! random mod. if you decide to not rename your diff to GRAVITY, could I gd a highest diff?

General

nice bitrate
fort is missing a redline for 5/4 meter at 01:20:017 -, also duplicate greenline at 01:05:617 -
insufficient audioleadin in all diffs, add minimum 1200ms.
uncheck letterbox?
advanced is TOO difficult, you can clearly see it from the ar already. too many 1/2 in a row.

INFINITE

general thoughts: neat patterns and good flow throughout. good use more emphasis through distance variation. also could utilize the playfield more. (ctrl+a and see for yourself.) hitsounds also leave much to be desired, with only occasional claps and finishes, lack of whistles./
rename to GRAVITY
green line problems:
1. 00:00:517 - no notes, remove.
2. 00:00:892 - the greenline is at 00:00:898 - so it is unsnapped, resnap.
3. 00:11:954 - same settings as previous, remove.
4. 00:12:179 - ^
5. 00:12:254 - ^
6. 00:12:442 - ^
7. 00:12:754 - ^
8. 00:17:617 - ^
9. 00:19:492 - ^
10. every line from 00:22:454 - to 00:30:704 - (which includes the time itself) ^
11. every line from 00:32:054 - to 00:39:142 - ^
12. 00:40:679 - ^
13. 00:40:829 - ^
14. every line from 00:55:079 - to 00:55:979 - ^
15. 00:58:492 - ^
16. 00:58:642 - ^
17. 00:58:792 - ^
18. every line from 00:59:654 - to 01:00:179 - ^
19. 01:10:379 - ^
20. 01:19:642 - ^
21. 01:19:979 - ^
22. every line from 01:41:092 - to 01:43:379 - ^
23. every line from 01:47:354 - to 01:48:029 - ^
24. be sure to check all your diffs for this.
00:00:817 (1) - 00:06:817 (1) - 00:08:317 (1) - 00:09:817 (1) - 00:11:317 (1) - finish? try this hitsound too: http://we.tl/34pBBTgVBT
00:01:717 (1,2) - you can softwhistle these for emphasis too
00:12:817 - be careful where you're going with this. it seems like you're trying to map to the bassdrums, which is infinitely softer than the loud piano we hear. i do realise you map the piano properly later on when its the only sound available, so you map something else here. however this is not a good choice, since what you're mapping to is very soft, and furthermore leaves the louder piano notes on sliderends mostly. very awkward to play. my suggestion would be to map the piano, but with a larger distance spacing than the section at 00:17:617 -
00:17:617 (1) - keep this extended as a 1/1 slider, 2's beat isn't very loud, unlike...
00:18:967 (5) - this guy that you should seperate to 1/2 slider and 1 circle, the beat on the tail is loud!
00:19:567 (1,2) - this is a 1/8 rhythm, use a repeat or 1/8 sliders. try not to undermap in highest diff.
00:19:942 (5) - and this would be overmap~ nothing here.
00:21:367 (1,2) - extending these to regular 1/2 sliders and connecting them gives a much cooler effect
00:28:867 (3,6) - better blanket
00:30:067 (4) - split to 1/2 slider then circle for better emphasis on the tail.
00:30:667 (7) - split to 3/4 slider then circle, to map to the beat at 00:30:892 -
00:31:417 (3,4) - good place for 1/4 sliders
00:31:867 (6) - could be a 1/6 repeat connected to 00:32:017 (1) - , referencing the song ofcourse
00:35:617 - unmapped!
00:40:267 (6) - nc
00:46:117 (5,6) - doesn't feel very comfortable to play, a little forced. regular circles are fine here.
00:46:417 (1,2,3,4) - listening to the music, you can keep distance here lower than 00:47:017 (5,6,7,8) - to bring greater emphasis
00:49:717 (5) - maybe split into 2 circles to follow the song better.
00:55:417 - 1/8 sounds to 00:55:567 -
00:55:867 - 1/8 (or 1/16?) sounds to 00:56:017 -
01:00:217 - 1/8 sounds to 01:00:367 -
01:17:692 (2,4,8,6) - listen carefully, these notes aren't necessary in the stream.
01:19:417 (5) - just throw this down to the bottom edge of the map~
01:32:167 - for a 2min map with a break already, i really dislike another break+spinner here. the sounds are very clearly mappable. it just felt odd.
01:47:767 (3) - nc

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-19T15:05:05+00:00

handsome wrote:
cool gravity wars! random mod. if you decide to not rename your diff to GRAVITY, could I gd a highest diff?

Yeah go for it!

Mk so I will be working on these mods within the next 2 weeks, but for now I only have 2 hours after school today to do mods and then it's to the hospital for shoulder surgery, so I will be completely off the computer for AT LEAST a week. If recovery is slow and I don't return for a while, THIS MAP IS NOT DYING lol.

SPOILER

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-02-19T16:01:55+00:00

Derp posted twice. Uh will used this for mods later? lol

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-20T13:00:54+00:00

Because Gravity is Infinite

Akali

639 posts

Joined November 2012

Akali 2015-03-13T10:34:51+00:00

No need to comment, apply what you think makes sense

[Beginner]

Some design stuff mostl I guess, other than that seems ok (ending not)

00:20:017 (2) - bad blanket + end of (2) could form perfect equilateral triangle with 00:21:817 (3,1) - easily
00:38:617 (3) - distance snap (is 0,8 everywhere else, 0,9+ out of sudden)
00:41:617 (1) - not nice overlap with sliderbody of 00:39:217 (1) - , 00:41:017 (2) - could blanket way cuter
00:59:617 (3) - in line with previous 2 circles maybe

01:20:017 (1) - from this to the end, I think you should just use DS like previously, stacks aren't really welcome on easy diffs since they are confusing to new players, so probably better off remapping

[Novice]

00:02:317 (1) - make good blanket or no blanket at all, this is halfway through which is meh
00:06:517 (2,1), 00:06:517 (2,1) - - just keep spacing consistent
00:21:517 (2,3) - they don't land on 1/3 whatever rhythm + there is nothing audible there, probably best to just delete those
00:29:917 (2) - put start on 00:28:117 (3) -

[Advanced]

Difficulty spike seems kinda big? from 1/1 to long sequences of 1/2s, maybe not a big problem but some BNs might not like that

00:00:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is a problem, you jump straight into 1/2 circles, then map exactly the same melody with sliders in 00:02:317 (1,2,3) - should be other way round since the song starts abruptly, this makes player get better feel of the rhythm

00:28:117 (5,6,1) - don't like the angle of the circles, it doesn't follow the curve of the slider
00:32:017 (1,2,3,4) - don't like this pattern on a hard, it's a pretty sharp turn
00:36:442 (4,5,6) - decepteively hard compared to other stuff in the diff, (5) a slider maybe?
00:42:067 (2) - bad flow, ugly, abusing slider leniency, try different pattern
00:50:617 (3,4,5,6) - seems too hard combined with sharp flow turn, especially considering different spacing between 3 and 4 than the rest
00:52:117 (3,4,1) - jump into small tilt to the right seems awkward, try something that flows better and is more consistent with spacing
00:53:317 (7,1,2,3) - slider for piano and circles for no pressure sounds - should be other way round
00:55:717 (3,4,1,2) - blanket, flow, needs change
if 00:57:817 (5,6,1) - form a nice symmetrical pattern I see no reason 00:58:717 (2) - shouldn't, looks meh
00:59:017 (3,4,5,6) - make them have identical spacing, like 00:59:467 (6) - on 247;123

[Exhaust]

Some 1/4s are unmapped, don't know why but I guess you had a reason behind it

00:39:517 (2,3) - don't like stack here, big difference between these sounds
00:52:267 (4,1) - messy overlap
00:52:867 (2,1) - make them have same curve?
00:56:467 - why no note here
00:58:717 (2,3,4) - boring flow, more jumpy with rotation etc you know the drill

[Infinite]

00:06:067 (6) - 341;112
00:14:317 (2,3) - it's extra diff so this slider end should be a circle to map impactful sounds, rearrange
00:15:217 (1,2,3) - same here
00:18:967 (5,6) - ^
00:35:917 (2,3) - don't like this being a stack, they appear later too, they are ok technically but some spacing would fit music better imo, decide yourself
00:38:317 (2,3) -
00:40:117 (5,6) -
00:43:117 (2,3) - ^, 00:43:117 (2) - on 504;127 somewhere there?
00:44:317 (2,3) - ^
00:47:917 (2,3) - ^
00:52:717 (2,3) - ^
00:53:917 (2,3) -
00:55:267 (4,5,6) - 1/4 sliders for that piano passage? 00:55:267 (4) - could be 1/2 slider or even a circle
01:09:667 (2) - and this on the other hand could be stacked under slider end
01:09:817 - you can start stream on this timing
01:14:317 (6,7) - ignoring some 1/4s
01:15:217 (1,2,3) - same here
01:17:542 (9) - positioned with weird spacing, + there doesn't seem to be any importan sound there, could make previous slider 3/4
01:39:517 (1) - stacks in this section again

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-03-14T11:07:04+00:00

Akali wrote:
No need to comment, apply what you think makes sense i feel so bad if i didnt reply people mods

[Exhaust]

Some 1/4s are unmapped, don't know why but I guess you had a reason behind it yes i have reason of it, lemme explain it. First, i designed my map to balance with advanced and Infinite diff. Second, its okay if i didnt too much use 1/4 pattern in here its like increasing Star rating too much. Third, maybe my pattern can drain player stamina, especially from singletap part :3

00:39:517 (2,3) - don't like stack here, big difference between these sounds
00:52:267 (4,1) - messy overlap didnt have any idea for this, i will consider this thing
00:52:867 (2,1) - make them have same curve?
00:56:467 - why no note here that one ;_; its like a dead end for play field, i didnt want to this. maybe that 1/1 pattern can make plays easier
00:58:717 (2,3,4) - boring flow, more jumpy with rotation etc you know the drill im do this to make next stream pattern feels easier

im apply all suggestion except red one, thanks akali~ :3

Exhaust

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-Visceral- 2015-03-17T22:35:49+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, here's my mod for a M4M!

BASIC

SPOILER
00:03:817 (1) - The curve towards the end of this slider looks strange because of how it bulges out, I would try to reduce this curve. Ok

00:24:817 (1) - I would CTRL + H this (use same coordinates) because it would then slightly slant towards the next note instead of away, making it easier for a beginner to anticipate where the next note will be. Yee

00:31:417 - I think you should add a note here but that's up to you.Done

00:39:217 (1) - This slider sounds like it is ending too late, I would shorten the slider a bit so it sounds on-beat. I think its fine

00:46:417 (1,2) - I think curvy sliders would work better here, because then you can blanket them with each other in the current pattern you have right now. I prefer how it is atm

00:51:217 (1) - This slider doesn't appear to be directly in the center within the Y-Axis, making the next note having an uneven blanket with this slider. Move this slider or adjust it accordingly so that it is directly in the middle, it would then give off a mirroring effect if you know what I mean. Kind of fixed

00:59:017 (2,3) - The spacing of these look uneven compared to the (1) and (2) in this combo. Yup

01:09:217 (1) - This slider to me doesn't sound and fit in right, I tried to extend this slider all the way to 01:10:417 and this fits in better. If you do this, remove the circle that is at 01:10:417 and try to make some sort of slider art with this slider afterwards. Ok

01:17:017 (2,3) - Doesn't appear to be blanketed perfectly, make this look neater?Ok

01:20:017 (1) - Extending this slider to 01:20:917 sounds more on-beat compared to how you have it as of right now. Done

01:21:217 (1,2) - I wouldn't blanket notes like this in a beginner difficulty because this will just confuse the player, I recommend you to not stack these at all. Yea good point. I forget about these things for newer players sometimes

01:21:517 (2) - Extend this slider to sound more on-beat to end at 01:22:417 Keeping as is atm

01:22:717 (1,2) - Same thing about the stacking in beginner difficulties, I just wouldn't do it. Yup

01:23:017 (2) - Extend this slider as well to sound more on-beat, I'll stop mentioning these so just go back to sliders similar to this and extend them to sound more on-beat if needed. Hmm im just not hearing it : S

NOVICE

SPOILER
00:02:017 (2,1) - You can try to get these notes to blanket within the curve in the very first note in this map, I think it would look nice. Hmm im a bit confused on this one : s

00:12:517 (2,1) - Spacing of these look uneven compared to the other notes. Ah woops

00:17:317 - I think a note fits in here, but that's your choice. Idk. I like it atm

00:27:217 (1) - The slant within this slider isn't very noticeable, why not slant it some more? I like it less slanted honestly.

00:32:017 (1) - CTRL + < (Press this 2 times.) I think this helps improve the flow within this slider better, use the same coordinates still. Good call

00:35:317 (4,1) - Have these stack? It doesn't look neat as it is right now. Fixeded

01:48:817 - Didn't you have some kind of a spinner here in the BASIC difficulty? Why not add a spinner at the end as well?[ There is none in beginner diff atm/spoilerbox]

INFINITE

[spoilerbox]00:05:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not use an increased spacing with these so that it looks a bit more different than the other part that was similar to this? Ok

00:26:917 (5) - This slider here feels random to me, I would just utilize a stream of circles here. I'm going to keep this here for now. If it comes up some more I'll consider changing it.

00:36:517 (5) - ^

01:12:817 (1,2,3,4) - I see what the notes are following here, but this section of the song feels like it could contain more streams, such as the previous part before this. It just feels empty afterwards. Same as the above

Nice map!

Good luck with this and I hope you find this mod helpful!

Really far behind after surgery ~~and being lazy~~ but I'll catch up this week ^.^

Updated Fort's diff. Gonna try to pm Crabovan

-Visceral-

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-03-19T19:59:14+00:00

Alheak wrote:
Hi, M4M

General
Wallpaper res is 1px short (1365 instead of 1366). Fuark ok will fix lol
If you have time and if you care, find a .mp3 of better quality (the one you have is only 124kbps). BN said bitrate is good doe </3
Diff spread is a little bit uneven, you'll probably have to find something like another harder NOVICE or easier ADVANCED diff. Yup. Advanced needs to be brought down a lot.

First red timing section offset is 817. Do I need to move it over there? If it gets mentioned again I will fix it but since nobody else has mentioned it I'll keep it for now.
Would have started kiai here: 01:10:417 - I actually considered this but decided against it. This is still the buildup and I strongly dislike adding kiai in the buildup because it takes away from the overall impact of the actual kiai that I currently have.

BASIC
I'll assume this is Easy, so I'll apply Easy diff rules and guidelines.

Would have recommended AR3, but this is 200bpm so AR4 seems fine too. How about AR3.5? Ok
00:14:617 (3,1) - Check blanket. Looks good. Probably fixed in a previous mod
00:20:017 (2,3,1) - ^, but more importantly, flow suggests strongly to go for 00:22:417 (1) - instead of 00:21:817 (3) - , make sure the player has no doubt about which object must be clicked next. Tbh I think this is fine right now but I'll consider changing it if it comes up in the future.
00:23:617 (2,3,1) - Maybe here too, move 00:24:817 (1) - a little further way from 2. This one I think will stay the way it is
Welp this is happening everywhere now so recheck your map for this kind of issue, remember, a beginner will want to go for the most obvious object next. Hmm I don't really see the issue with it. I mean, again, if it comes up in the future, I will fix it, but for now I'm not quite going to change much regarding this.
00:29:017 (3,1) - Check blanket. Oops
00:39:217 (1,2,1) - ^ Ok I think I fixed this for good lol
00:50:617 (4,1) - ^ Fixed this already in a previous mod
01:09:217 (1,1) - ^ (move the objects in time to get the approach circle where you want it to be or to make an object visible to help you with making the blanket) Not seeing an issue with this one
01:14:017 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
01:17:017 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:23:017 (2,1) - ^ Remapped this entire kiai in a previous mod
01:24:217 (1,2) - Stacks are too hard to read for easy. ^
01:25:717 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:26:017 (2,1) - Overlapping too.
01:28:717 (1,2) - Stacks
01:30:217 (1,2) - ^
01:31:717 (1,2) - ^ Yea I fixed all of this dw
01:38:017 - Check all the overlaps from this point on.

NOVICE
I'll assume this is Normal diff.

00:00:817 (1,2,1) - Blankets. Fixed already in a previous mod. Sry I took so long to apply the mods before this lol
00:09:817 (1,2) - ^ I think this one is ok
00:12:817 (1,2) - ^ Hmm this too
00:13:417 (2,4) - ^ Ew I'm blind LOL
00:14:017 (4,1,2) - How bout this:

Look at all dem nice blankets and shit Yupyup
00:28:417 (4,2) - Ugly overlap. Remapped this just now
00:35:617 (5,1) - Blanket. ^
00:42:817 (3,3) - Overlap. Hmm, will consider
00:44:317 (2,5) - Blanket. This looks fine I think : s
00:47:917 (2,3) - ^ Ok
00:50:017 (2,1) - ^ I think this is good atm
01:14:317 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:20:017 (1,3) - ^ Changed
01:22:417 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:25:717 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:41:017 (2,1,2) - Like Easy, I really want to hit that 2 first. Ok yeah this one I can see
01:44:017 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:44:917 (3,1) - Blanket. Ok
01:47:317 (1,2) - ^ Man this is making me want to get a blanket irl lol

INFINITE
00:04:267 (4,5,6) - The 6 looks uneven. Dammit lol
00:05:767 (4,5,6) - ^ Changed in another mod
00:30:067 (4,7) - Blanket. Ok
00:39:217 (1,4) - ^ This is fine atm
00:44:467 (3,5) - You could blanket here. Kinda
00:50:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - Slider's start seems uneven Yup I made it like that on purpose

Nice mapset.

Available for questions if you have any, PM or in-game.

Good luck! Thank you for the mod ^^

handsome wrote:
cool gravity wars! random mod. if you decide to not rename your diff to GRAVITY, could I gd a highest diff?

General
nice bitrate
fort is missing a redline for 5/4 meter at 01:20:017 -, also duplicate greenline at 01:05:617 -
insufficient audioleadin in all diffs, add minimum 1200ms. How do
uncheck letterbox? Done
advanced is TOO difficult, you can clearly see it from the ar already. too many 1/2 in a row.
INFINITE
general thoughts: neat patterns and good flow throughout. good use more emphasis through distance variation. also could utilize the playfield more. (ctrl+a and see for yourself.) hitsounds also leave much to be desired, with only occasional claps and finishes, lack of whistles.
rename to GRAVITY Talking to a few people about this because I'm getting a ton of different opinions on whether it should remain or change to this
green line problems:
00:00:517 - no notes, remove. Done
00:00:892 - the greenline is at 00:00:898 - so it is unsnapped, resnap. Ok cool didn't even notice this haha
00:11:954 - same settings as previous, remove. Sry I am n00b with green lines : (
00:12:179 - ^
00:12:254 - ^
00:12:442 - ^
00:12:754 - ^
00:17:617 - ^
00:19:492 - ^ Holy shit for real though I really do suck at these LOOL. All of the above applied
every line from 00:22:454 - to 00:30:704 - (which includes the time itself) ^
every line from 00:32:054 - to 00:39:142 - ^
00:40:679 - ^
00:40:829 - ^
every line from 00:55:079 - to 00:55:979 - ^
00:58:492 - ^
00:58:642 - ^
00:58:792 - ^
every line from 00:59:654 - to 01:00:179 - ^
01:10:379 - ^
01:19:642 - ^
01:19:979 - ^
every line from 01:41:092 - to 01:43:379 - ^
every line from 01:47:354 - to 01:48:029 - ^
be sure to check all your diffs for this. Ok yeah I will
00:00:817 (1) - 00:06:817 (1) - 00:08:317 (1) - 00:09:817 (1) - 00:11:317 (1) - finish? try this hitsound too: http://we.tl/34pBBTgVBT Download is deleted apparently but added finish
00:01:717 (1,2) - you can softwhistle these for emphasis too Ok : D
00:12:817 - be careful where you're going with this. it seems like you're trying to map to the bassdrums, which is infinitely softer than the loud piano we hear. i do realise you map the piano properly later on when its the only sound available, so you map something else here. however this is not a good choice, since what you're mapping to is very soft, and furthermore leaves the louder piano notes on sliderends mostly. very awkward to play. my suggestion would be to map the piano, but with a larger distance spacing than the section at 00:17:617 - [/color]
00:17:617 (1) - keep this extended as a 1/1 slider, 2's beat isn't very loud, unlike... Ok
00:18:967 (5) - this guy that you should seperate to 1/2 slider and 1 circle, the beat on the tail is loud! Ok yup fixed
00:19:567 (1,2) - this is a 1/8 rhythm, use a repeat or 1/8 sliders. try not to undermap in highest diff. Fixed
00:19:942 (5) - and this would be overmap~ nothing here. ^
00:21:367 (1,2) - extending these to regular 1/2 sliders and connecting them gives a much cooler effect Yea you're right ^^
00:28:867 (3,6) - better blanket Better
00:30:067 (4) - split to 1/2 slider then circle for better emphasis on the tail. Ok good idea
00:30:667 (7) - split to 3/4 slider then circle, to map to the beat at 00:30:892 - Kind of did this
00:31:417 (3,4) - good place for 1/4 sliders I like the jumps tbh
00:31:867 (6) - could be a 1/6 repeat connected to 00:32:017 (1) - , referencing the song ofcourse ^ I would like to end in a jump
00:35:617 - unmapped! Can you clear this one up for me? Not sure what you mean by this
00:40:267 (6) - nc Ok
00:46:117 (5,6) - doesn't feel very comfortable to play, a little forced. regular circles are fine here. Ok
00:46:417 (1,2,3,4) - listening to the music, you can keep distance here lower than 00:47:017 (5,6,7,8) - to bring greater emphasis Ok done
00:49:717 (5) - maybe split into 2 circles to follow the song better. Good idear
00:55:417 - 1/8 sounds to 00:55:567 - Yup added a slider thingymabober
00:55:867 - 1/8 (or 1/16?) sounds to 00:56:017 - This i will keep the same
01:00:217 - 1/8 sounds to 01:00:367 - ^
01:17:692 (2,4,8,6) - listen carefully, these notes aren't necessary in the stream. Ooops ok changed
01:19:417 (5) - just throw this down to the bottom edge of the map~ Done
01:32:167 - for a 2min map with a break already, i really dislike another break+spinner here. the sounds are very clearly mappable. it just felt odd. Ok I dun fixered it
01:47:767 (3) - nc Ok. Thank you for this mod alot!

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2015-03-21T00:55:35+00:00

Hi~ M4M request in-game o/

- General :

Uninherited timing point on Fort's EXHAUST.
Why offset is -683 and not 817 ?

- BASIC :

00:15:217 (1) - Move it to 78:270 to blanket perfectly.
00:20:017 (2) - Spacing a little too high. Aslo you could use more anchor point to fit perfectly shape of 00:17:617 (1) - .
00:39:217 (1) - Wtf happend with this slider ? Why have you an red anchoir point at the end ? Also curve it to fit better 00:41:017 (2) - .
00:43:417 (2,1) - Blanket failed.
00:50:617 (4,1) - ^
01:15:217 (1) - Spacing with 01:14:017 (3) - is a little to high here too. Move it to 96:190 and adapt spacing for 01:17:017 (2,3) - .
01:48:517 - Maybe a spinner could fit here but do like you want (if you do it do same for other diff).

- NOVICE :

00:00:817 (1) - Curve it more to fit with 00:02:017 (2) - .
00:03:817 (1,2,1) - Should be a 1.10x spacing here for consistency.
00:05:317 (1,2) - Here too.
00:06:517 (2,1) - Even if SV change here, you should keep same spacing for these, and use new spacing after only.
00:08:017 (3) - Should be 1.00x.
00:09:817 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:13:717 (3) - Move it to 184:48 to adjust spacing.
00:14:017 (4,1,2) - Bad blanket too.
00:21:817 (3,1) - Bad spacing.
00:35:617 (5) - Slider ends on lifebar !
00:53:617 (1,2,3,4) - Not a perfect square. Move 2 -> 172:196 / 3 -> 172:88 / 4 -> 280:84.
01:08:917 (2,3) - Keep a constant spacing. Use 1.00x here.
01:14:317 (3,4) - Fail blanket.
01:24:517 (3) - Move it to 260:128 for spacing.
01:40:717 (1,2,1) - Use a 1.00x spacing here.
01:47:317 (1,2) - Fail blanket.

- craboyan's ADVANCED :

00:01:567 (3,4) - Did you avoid a jump here cause it's the start of the song ? Because you use one for same part after.
00:17:617 (1,2,3) - and 00:20:017 (1,2,3) - : sounds a lot better with 1/1 slider imo.
00:57:667 (4,2) - Bad stacking.
00:41:617 (1,2) - Try to place put the end of (1) at center of (2).
00:42:817 (1,2) - This is probably only a problem for me but this overlap looks awful. I don't really have solution so change it or keep it :/
00:50:617 (3,4,5,6) - These 4 should have same spacing imo. They're from strong drum but nothing suggest to have a growing sapcing, especially when it's a Hard.
00:53:917 (3) - Move it to 288:60 to get a flow more rotative.
00:59:017 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:50:617 (3,4,5,6) - .
01:41:017 (1,2) - Bad stacking.
01:48:217 (3) - A finish is a lot better than a clap at the end of this slider.

- Fort's EXHAUST :

00:06:217 (1,1,2,3) - Maybe it's just me, but everytime I played it I go to hit 00:07:117 (3) - instead of 00:06:967 (2) - so you can invert both or make 00:06:967 (2) - more visible maybe ?
00:52:267 (4,1) - Move circle to the center of slider.

- INFINITE :

00:24:817 (1,2,3) - Bad stacking.
01:48:517 (1) - Soft Finish hitsound sounds better than Normal.

That's all o/
Mukyu~

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-03-22T00:52:00+00:00

Summoned from the team queue, I'll do three diffs and WildOne will do the remaining two later (:

General Comments:

I would raise the volume in the kiai section slightly (maybe 80-85% instead of 70%) to give a little more emphasis on these notes
You can drag your breaks out to start at the nearest white tick (or maybe red if it fits since the bpm here is quite high). This is really minor, but I feel it flows into the break a little better during play - give it a try and see if it does anything for you
SPOILER

(This example isn't specific to this map but hopefully you get the idea)

BASIC

00:14:017 (2,3) - I'm not sure what to think about these notes. They're mapping the more simple drum pattern, which is great for this diff as the piano rhythm is more complicated, but the piano is just so much more prominent than the drums here I couldn't help but want to hit these as if they mapped the piano rhythm. I guess the simplest way to map the piano here would be to remove (2) and place notes at 00:13:717 (2) and 00:14:167 (3) although the latter is on a red tick and I'm not sure you'd want to do this... Still not sure what would work best here unfortunately.

00:15:217 (1) - Rotate the tail of this slider 2 degrees cw to improve the blanket here

00:16:417 (2,3) - Same as 00:14:017 (2,3) - whatever you decide to do there, ensure it's the same here

00:17:617 (1) - Try adjusting the anchor points on this slider so that the sliderball reaches the kinks at the same time as the strong piano/synth beats at 00:18:067 and 00:18:517

00:19:417 - Put a circle here to maintain the piano/synth rhythm
00:21:817 - ^ As above

00:20:017 (2,3) - Give (2) more of a curve to perfect the blanket with (3)

00:51:217 (1) - Rotate the tail 3 degrees cw to perfect the blanket with (4) from the previous combo

00:57:817 - Add a circle here for the strong piano note

01:15:217 (1) - Rotate the tail 2 degrees ccw to perfect the blanket with the tail of (3) from the previous combo

01:48:517 - Add a note here with a finish for the last note in the music

NOVICE

00:07:267 (2) - I would put a circle on the 1/2 here to keep the rhythm of the piano

00:14:917 (1,2) - Move these to [x-368,y-262] to perfect the blanket with 00:14:017 (4)

00:19:417 and 00:19:717 - Consider putting some circles on the white ticks here for the piano as this space seems too energetic to be left unmapped

00:29:917 (2,3) - You could rotate these ccw slightly around (1) so that (3) stacks with the head of (4) from the previous combo

00:44:917 (4,5) - Distance spacing here looks like it's slightly smaller than for the previous notes in this combo, I would choose to move (4) to save having to re-blanket (5) around (2), but it's your call

00:58:717 and 00:59:917 - This feels like a climax before the break, so I think you should map some notes here. Maybe circles on white ticks at 00:59:017 and all white ticks between 00:59:617 (1) and 01:00:817 (1) for the buildup of the kick drum/finish pattern

01:22:117 (4) - This note was surprisingly awkward to play, since it doesn't seem to be mapping anything in the music (or at least not anything prominent). I think you're mapping the piano in this section, where the strong note is 1/2 back at 01:21:967 whilst the drum track has two equally strong notes (although weaker than the piano at 1/2 before and after this note.

01:40:417 - Add a circle on the white tick here for the piano as you have at 01:40:717 (1)

Fort's EXHAUST

It might just have been an oversight or a weird download glitch on my end, but this diff doesn't have any kiai sections :S The timing points are in the right place, but kiai isn't enabled between 01:20:017 and 01:32:017 as it is for the other diffs. The missing inherited point at 01:20:017 has also been mentioned, so be sure to copy this across too

00:14:467 (8) - You could put a NC here or 1/2 back on the previous note if you're worried about combo length getting too long, but otherwise ignore this
00:16:867 (7) - ^ As above

00:49:867 (4,1) - Blanketing is a *little* off here, move the head of (1) to [x-416,y-366] and rotate 1 degree cw

01:29:017 (1,4) - If you want to blanket this, the positioning is okay but (1) will probably need to be a bit more curved

Well that's all from me, hope this helped! I'll try to poke WildOne to do the remaining diffs tonight or tomorrow. If you need anything else from me, feel free to drop me a PM or shout in the team queue and I'll do my best to help.

Best of luck! (:

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2015-03-25T19:58:23+00:00

Hey there owo/
Sorry for the late split mod with JBHyperion. I am just lazy ;w;

General
Only one thing i can see. Maybe the colour combo 1 could be that light blue colour which comes off the side of the planet in the bg cause i see no purple. or the water in the fish tanks (and maybe make combo colour 2 a bit brighter for the sun sort of colour).
Great beatmap though

crabovan's Advanced

00:07:567 (4) - Drag down to x:396 y:336
00:14:917 (6) - Including a whistle here would make better emphasis on the next note. (But consider finding a custom one instead like a "Ding" sort of noise)
00:28:192 (6,1) - move both left a bit to curve it more.
00:32:017 (1) - should this not have a finish at the start? (i know you can't really hear it but you know... it still helps and for taiko players too XD)
00:34:642 (2) - ain't this triplet a bit too fast for advanced? remove (2)
00:36:442 (4) - move left a bit so it lines up better with (3)
00:41:617 (1) - add finish to start
00:45:292 - add circle note
00:48:817 (1,2,3) - curve these notes more
00:55:867 (4) - a quick reverse sounds better here (or suggestion 2)

00:57:817 (5,6,1,2) - these are not mirrored right. (mostly (2)). Fix up
01:20:017 (1,2,3) - add a curve to all these sliders. Looks nicer feels smoother.

01:47:767 (2,3) - not too essential but maybe add curves to these too ?

Infinite

I will see how i go for suggestions on this cause i can't exactly play it ;w;.

Noticed this in Aimod http://puu.sh/gPl1J/4229225c13.png

00:01:717 (1) - move up juuuuust a tinchy bit to align with (4)
00:20:017 (1) - move the end of the slider right a bit to see it a bit better
00:35:467 (1) - move the second point to x:156 y:232 so this slider is smoother. (you can also delete the point between the 2 anchors in the middle)
00:44:467 (3) - remove the 4th anchor and move it to x:320 y:256 (and just remove the 5th anchor completely
00:55:867 (6) - this should be another reverse slider as it has that fast distorted noise
01:19:417 (5) - bit low on the screen. try move up

Hope at least one of them helped >w<

Well i hope this all helped

Any questions pm me or leave a message in my inbox
Good luck

/

-Visceral-

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-03-25T20:03:46+00:00

Akali's mod done too

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ M4M request in-game o/

- General :
Uninherited timing point on Fort's EXHAUST.
Why offset is -683 and not 817 ? If this comes up again I will change. I don't see a reason for it unless its unrankable or something. Same function from what I know

- BASIC :
00:15:217 (1) - Move it to 78:270 to blanket perfectly. Ok
00:20:017 (2) - Spacing a little too high. Aslo you could use more anchor point to fit perfectly shape of 00:17:617 (1) - . Fixed in prev mod
00:39:217 (1) - Wtf happend with this slider ? Why have you an red anchoir point at the end ? Also curve it to fit better 00:41:017 (2) - . Fixed
00:43:417 (2,1) - Blanket failed. This is fine .-.
00:50:617 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
01:15:217 (1) - Spacing with 01:14:017 (3) - is a little to high here too. Move it to 96:190 and adapt spacing for 01:17:017 (2,3) - .
01:48:517 - Maybe a spinner could fit here but do like you want (if you do it do same for other diff). No

- NOVICE :
00:00:817 (1) - Curve it more to fit with 00:02:017 (2) - . I think its fine atm
00:03:817 (1,2,1) - Should be a 1.10x spacing here for consistency. Fixed in prev mod
00:05:317 (1,2) - Here too. ^
00:06:517 (2,1) - Even if SV change here, you should keep same spacing for these, and use new spacing after only. ^
00:08:017 (3) - Should be 1.00x. Ok
00:09:817 (1,2) - Bad blanket. This blanket is fine
00:13:717 (3) - Move it to 184:48 to adjust spacing. Spacing is fine atm
00:14:017 (4,1,2) - Bad blanket too. Fixed
00:21:817 (3,1) - Bad spacing. Fixed i hope
00:35:617 (5) - Slider ends on lifebar ! Is this unrankable? If it gets brought up again I will fix it for sure
00:53:617 (1,2,3,4) - Not a perfect square. Move 2 -> 172:196 / 3 -> 172:88 / 4 -> 280:84. Ok
01:08:917 (2,3) - Keep a constant spacing. Use 1.00x here. Oops
01:14:317 (3,4) - Fail blanket. Fixed
01:24:517 (3) - Move it to 260:128 for spacing.
01:40:717 (1,2,1) - Use a 1.00x spacing here.
01:47:317 (1,2) - Fail blanket. Everything to here fixed

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00:24:817 (1,2,3) - Bad stacking. Fixed in prev mod
01:48:517 (1) - Soft Finish hitsound sounds better than Normal. Ok

That's all o/
Mukyu~ Ty for mod

-Visceral-

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-03-25T20:29:39+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Summoned from the team queue, I'll do three diffs and WildOne will do the remaining two later (:

General Comments:
I would raise the volume in the kiai section slightly (maybe 80-85% instead of 70%) to give a little more emphasis on these notes Thats too loud imo
You can drag your breaks out to start at the nearest white tick (or maybe red if it fits since the bpm here is quite high). This is really minor, but I feel it flows into the break a little better during play - give it a try and see if it does anything for you I think they are fine atm
SPOILER

(This example isn't specific to this map but hopefully you get the idea)
BASIC
00:14:017 (2,3) - I'm not sure what to think about these notes. They're mapping the more simple drum pattern, which is great for this diff as the piano rhythm is more complicated, but the piano is just so much more prominent than the drums here I couldn't help but want to hit these as if they mapped the piano rhythm. I guess the simplest way to map the piano here would be to remove (2) and place notes at 00:13:717 (2) and 00:14:167 (3) although the latter is on a red tick and I'm not sure you'd want to do this... Still not sure what would work best here unfortunately. I dont have too much freedom for rhythm here since it is a very easy diff

00:15:217 (1) - Rotate the tail of this slider 2 degrees cw to improve the blanket here Blanket is fine atm. Might have fixed in prev mod

00:16:417 (2,3) - Same as 00:14:017 (2,3) - whatever you decide to do there, ensure it's the same here Same as above

00:17:617 (1) - Try adjusting the anchor points on this slider so that the sliderball reaches the kinks at the same time as the strong piano/synth beats at 00:18:067 and 00:18:517 Good idea

00:19:417 - Put a circle here to maintain the piano/synth rhythm I like it how it is currently
00:21:817 - ^ As above

00:20:017 (2,3) - Give (2) more of a curve to perfect the blanket with (3) Said fk it and didnt blanket it exactly but I did move it

00:51:217 (1) - Rotate the tail 3 degrees cw to perfect the blanket with (4) from the previous combo Fixed

00:57:817 - Add a circle here for the strong piano note Done

01:15:217 (1) - Rotate the tail 2 degrees ccw to perfect the blanket with the tail of (3) from the previous combo Ok

01:48:517 - Add a note here with a finish for the last note in the music Ok

NOVICE
00:07:267 (2) - I would put a circle on the 1/2 here to keep the rhythm of the piano Fixed in prev mod

00:14:917 (1,2) - Move these to [x-368,y-262] to perfect the blanket with 00:14:017 (4) ^

00:19:417 and 00:19:717 - Consider putting some circles on the white ticks here for the piano as this space seems too energetic to be left unmapped I still need to think what my plan is here

00:29:917 (2,3) - You could rotate these ccw slightly around (1) so that (3) stacks with the head of (4) from the previous combo Remapped this in prev mod

00:44:917 (4,5) - Distance spacing here looks like it's slightly smaller than for the previous notes in this combo, I would choose to move (4) to save having to re-blanket (5) around (2), but it's your call Fixed

00:58:717 and 00:59:917 - This feels like a climax before the break, so I think you should map some notes here. Maybe circles on white ticks at 00:59:017 and all white ticks between 00:59:617 (1) and 01:00:817 (1) for the buildup of the kick drum/finish pattern Ok

01:22:117 (4) - This note was surprisingly awkward to play, since it doesn't seem to be mapping anything in the music (or at least not anything prominent). I think you're mapping the piano in this section, where the strong note is 1/2 back at 01:21:967 whilst the drum track has two equally strong notes (although weaker than the piano at 1/2 before and after this note. I think its fine as it stands though if it comes up again ill change it

01:40:417 - Add a circle on the white tick here for the piano as you have at 01:40:717 (1) Ok

Well that's all from me, hope this helped! I'll try to poke WildOne to do the remaining diffs tonight or tomorrow. If you need anything else from me, feel free to drop me a PM or shout in the team queue and I'll do my best to help. Thanks

Best of luck! (:

WildOne94 wrote:
Hey there owo/
Sorry for the late split mod with JBHyperion. I am just lazy ;w;

General
Only one thing i can see. Maybe the colour combo 1 could be that light blue colour which comes off the side of the planet in the bg cause i see no purple. or the water in the fish tanks (and maybe make combo colour 2 a bit brighter for the sun sort of colour). Changed
Great beatmap though

Infinite
I will see how i go for suggestions on this cause i can't exactly play it ;w;.

Noticed this in Aimod http://puu.sh/gPl1J/4229225c13.png Talked in game lol

00:01:717 (1) - move up juuuuust a tinchy bit to align with (4) Fixed
00:20:017 (1) - move the end of the slider right a bit to see it a bit better Ok
00:35:467 (1) - move the second point to x:156 y:232 so this slider is smoother. (you can also delete the point between the 2 anchors in the middle)
00:44:467 (3) - remove the 4th anchor and move it to x:320 y:256 (and just remove the 5th anchor completely Fixed in prev mod
00:55:867 (6) - this should be another reverse slider as it has that fast distorted noise Added
01:19:417 (5) - bit low on the screen. try move up This is fine

Hope at least one of them helped >w< Thanks

Well i hope this all helped
Any questions pm me or leave a message in my inbox
Good luck /

IM FINALLY CAUGHT UP ON EVERY MOD.

Shushan

627 posts

Joined November 2013

Shushan 2015-03-26T12:46:48+00:00

hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-http://prntscr.com/6ljoq0 fix pls
fix DS in BASIC -don't use grid snap
basic
00:09:817-overlap
00:39:217-the wave is to fat, make the red anchor grey one
01:09:217 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:17:017 (2,3) - -^^
01:21:217-remove NC
01:32:017-dont stack is easy diffs
novice-your SV is to high
and pls fix distance snap
00:03:517 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:14:917-dont stack is normal
00:29:617 (1,2) - wtf jump its normal
00:32:917 (3,4) - -fix blanket
00:34:417 (1,2,3,4) - four circle one after the other is not recommended in normal.
01:24:217 (2) - dont stack
01:25:717 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:47:317 (1,2) - ^^
crabovans advance
00:10:417 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:12:817 (1,2) - ^^
00:13:267 (2,3) - ^^
00:32:242 (2,3) - doesn't flow well with 1
00:32:917 (5,1,2,3,4) - blanket -_-
00:40:268 (6) - this is an ugly overlap, if u can try stack it
01:20:317 (2,3) - ctrl g?
forts exaust
00:49:867 (4,1) - fix blanket
sorry i suck

INFINITE
00:18:442 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:35:017-dont break here?
i suck at extras as i said in the queue but...

gl! ill send you my map in PM

Raging Bull

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Joined June 2010

Raging Bull 2015-03-26T12:48:56+00:00

Gravity would fit better infinite better imo.

DahplA

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Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-03-31T04:05:00+00:00

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

ctrlshifta
SPOILER

INFINITE

00:00:892 Having it switch from a loud sound to going quiet was really odd, especially because at the start there is no other 40% lines.
00:07:567 (6) - Shouldn't this be same distance spacing as 00:07:267 (4,5) -
00:30:667 (8) - Not stacked properly on 00:29:617 (1) -

Fort's EXHAUST

00:40:567 (2,3,4) - In my opinion it would look better if this was spaced differently in consideration to 00:41:167 (5) -

00:58:717 (2) - Not stacked properly
01:09:217 (1) - Fix blanket
01:20:092 (2) - ^

-Visceral-

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Topic Starter

-Visceral- 2015-03-31T20:44:15+00:00

INFINITE CHANGED TO GRAVITY

ohad1881 wrote:
hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-http://prntscr.com/6ljoq0 fix pls
fix DS in BASIC -don't use grid snap
basic
00:09:817-overlap Keeping it same
00:39:217-the wave is to fat, make the red anchor grey one think its k atm
01:09:217 (1,2) - fix blanket Fixed
01:17:017 (2,3) - -^^ ^
01:21:217-remove NC
01:32:017-dont stack is easy diffs
novice-your SV is to high No I disagree here. Halfway between novice and advanced
and pls fix distance snap
00:03:517 (2,1) - fix blanket ok
00:14:917-dont stack is normal i think its fine atm but may change later if more people suggest it
00:29:617 (1,2) - wtf jump its normal k
00:32:917 (3,4) - -fix blanket k
00:34:417 (1,2,3,4) - four circle one after the other is not recommended in normal. ok
01:24:217 (2) - dont stack ok
01:25:717 (4,1) - fix blanket this one is fine atm
01:47:317 (1,2) - ^^ ok

INFINITE
00:18:442 (2,3) - fix blanket ?
01:35:017-dont break here? ok
i suck at extras as i said in the queue but...
gl! ill send you my map in PM

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2015-03-31T21:58:22+00:00

Sup Smoothie World~ I see you're friends with Nero ;o. Anyways you posted on my queue with m4m so here's a mod on all your diffs~

[GRAVITY]

00:13:267 (3,4) - Swap these two in timeline. Slider first, then circle feels better since the player will be able to click the beat at 00:13:717 - .
00:16:117 (5,6) - 5 is fine, but 6 isn't really snapping to anything in the music. How about a 3/4 slider here instead like you did with your previous and next combo? Would make them more consistent too~
00:18:067 (2,3) - Check blanket.
00:20:917 (4) - This slider ends in complete silence so add an inheriting section at 00:21:217 - With volume reduced to 5% to mute the slider-end.
00:30:667 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay, this jump pattern works nicely, but the flow could be improved imo. Here. I didn't change any note placements, just the order in which they occur. This way you can keep a continuous clockwise flow while playing the jumps.
00:40:567 - How about shortening the slider so you can map another note here? Because there's definitely a beat and this is the hardest diff so imo it's better not to map this to a slider-end.
00:50:617 (1,2,3,4) - Just an idea, but you could map these to kick sliders if you want ;o.
00:51:667 (3) - 00:52:867 (3) - 00:54:067 (3) - You seem to switch between mapping 1/1 sliders and 1/2 sliders for the same beats. Imo it's better to map the beat and shorten the sliders to 1/2.
00:55:267 (4) - I don't think the repeats kick in until 00:55:417 - ... In any case, Ctrl+G this so the slider is pointing away from 3 rather to towards it.
01:00:217 (1,2) - This part sounds different from the other 2 kick sliders... Add repeats here like you did previously.
01:09:217 (1,2) - Stack.
01:10:117 (7,8) - The linear pattern starts on 7 with a reduced spacing, so you should reduce the spacing here to make it consistent with the 2nd half of the stream.
01:10:417 (1,2) - This is a really sudden jump. Also it's spaced so that it appears to be 1/2. Your stream also decreases in distance snap, so all this suggests to the player that the jump will be 1/2 spaced not 1/4.... Spacing here needs to be reduced by a considerable amount or I can see a lot of breaks occuring here.
01:13:942 (5,6) - ^ Same idea. there is a huge jump for a 1/4 spacing. But the main concern here just like above, is that the pattern just before it was all spaced in 1/2's which leads players to think this spacing will also be 1/2.
01:14:317 (7,8,9) - ^
01:24:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This jump sequence is really inconsistent with all your other jumps. You have pauses at 01:24:667 (2,3) - and 01:25:117 (5,6) - . But you don't use this motion (or lack of motion) elsewhere. Make them all jumps~
01:30:667 (2,3,4,5,6) - You could make this a perfect star if you want, since it's so close to looking like one. You could also blanket 01:30:667 (2,7) - .
01:43:717 (2,3,1) - If you want, you could make these kick-sliders, 01:44:467 (4) - also. Maybe? lol

[EXHAUST]

Ya. Nice.

00:06:217 (1,2) - Maybe try and have less of circle 2 overlapped? Kinda hard to read imo.
00:11:542 (2,3) - Move the repeat a bit more to the left so its more visible. Also, cuz the other repeats aren't as overlapped.
00:20:917 (3,1) - Stacks.
00:30:517 (5,6) - Triplet?
00:39:442 - Could add a note here too

Check AI Mod with Smoothie World tho, there are a few conflicting timing points and audio-lead in inconsistency with other diffs.

[ADVANCED]

00:01:267 (1) - Remove NC
00:07:717 (1) - ^
00:39:667 (4,7) - Stacks.
00:52:117 (3,4) - Why the jump? None of your other combo's that come after (where the pitch gets higher and higher too) are mapped with jumps.
00:53:317 (3) - Two circles instead. Since you mapped them in 00:52:117 (3,4) - and 00:54:517 (5,6) - .
00:52:417 (1,2) - Maybe blanket slider end of 1 with 2 or something, looks a bit weird...
00:57:667 (4,2) - Stacks.
01:20:917 (4) - If you want the tail to be cornered, angle it a bit more downward, right now it doesn't look like anything tbh.
01:23:917 (6,7) - Make this a 1/1 slider since all your other combo's are mapped to 1/1 sliders.
01:20:017 - 01:32:017 - This whole section, you use a lot of different rhythm choices. Try and stay with two different rhythm choices, Osu is a Rhythm Game after all, and having a recurring pattern creates a nice effect.
01:41:017 (1,2,3) - Fix stacks. Also, this pattern uses a lot of overlaps which is hard to read. Your combo's before were both relatively open and spaced, maybe rethink this pattern

.
01:47:317 (1,2) - Stacks.

Imo there are rhythmic inconsistency issues with this difficulty... The map flows well, but having a different rhythm for each combo despite being the same melody kinda makes it feel a bit awkward to play for me

. I get that you want variety, but that can easily be accomplished without jeopardizing rhythm.

[NOVICE]

00:00:817 (1,2,1) - Blankets.
00:09:817 (1,2) - ^
00:12:817 (1,2) - ^
00:13:417 (2,4) - ^
00:28:417 (4,2) - Not a good idea to overlap on essentially a Normal. Because of the low AR, the player will see 2 even before slider 4 is finished. Put 2 somewhere else that won't be overlapped, or blanket the repeat slider with 1.
00:32:917 (3,4) - Blankets.
00:44:317 (2,5) - ^
00:47:917 (2,3) - ^
00:56:017 (1,2) - ^
01:22:417 (5,1) - ^

AI mod picks up 1 spacing issue you'll need to fix.

There might be more blanket issues actually lmao. I only pointed out the ones that were off when I played so they're pretty off. (If they're like 2 pixels off, or you need to pause in editor and zoom in to check, they should be okay so dw about those)

[BASIC]

00:17:617 (1,2) - You could blanket this. The AR is so low you'll see the next slider before the first is done playing.
01:09:217 (1,2,3) - How come they are differently spaced. The border in between blankets is noticeably different.
01:20:017 (1) - Reduce the length of this slider to 2/1 to be consistent with your other sliders.

AI Mod picks up 6 Spacing issues that you'll need to fix.

Alright, Good luck~

crabovan

236 posts

Joined September 2011

crabovan 2015-04-02T23:50:02+00:00

Checked all of the mods, sorry what without replies.
http://puu.sh/gZrPo/9a1d2ce7da.rar

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