• • 01:49:106 (7) - This circle is partially hidden, make it more visible
  • 01:59:474 (6) - The start-slider is hidden, make it visible
  • 02:51:312 (3) - You should separate the start-slider from the end-slider
  • 03:00:577 (7,1) - Spacing

Takuma wrote:

weird spacing in ache!, but i see a few people use it, so i'll let it slide, i suppose.
screw that. i honestly do not agree with this spacing, sorry.
BUT YOU COULD HAVE MY STAR! YAY!

LoweH wrote:

Hi !

General
General audio +1 (?)

Break!
02:20:869 (1) - Hitsound whistyle
02:22:634 (3) - Hitsound whistyle

Zero!
01:22:855 (5) - Delete this, is out of rhythm
01:23:075 (1) - Move to 01:22:965

Erase!
02:04:105 - Add a beat here

Ache!
For me it's fine ~


Nice map, *Starr ~

Thunderstorm wrote:

Can't find something wrong. GJ

ignorethis wrote:

offset +5ms?

(ps I don't like the BG xD)

<Zero!>
increase overall by 1 or 2 for this
02:02:119 (2) - should this be on the blue tick...?

<Ache!>
I think some of the sliders are ugly

star'd. call back for recheck and pubble

WyndII wrote:

Erase or Zero
Len Kagamine & Kaito
[General]
ignore this. I don't like the BG

[Ache!]
00:46:463 (1) - this Z slider means Zero? lol

[Erase!]
ok~

[Zero!]
00:16:021 (3) - I don't like how the end of this slider is arranged. turn of gird snap and stack it with 00:14:257 (1) -
00:19:551 (2) - lol slider. why does it have 3 points >....>

[Break!]
...

nanana.

wmfchris wrote:

[Ache!]
0:39:624 (1) remove new combo
1:23:521 (3) Move down a grid to make the same level as (2)?
The gituar sound ends at 2:40:948, so consider the kiai time ends at 2:42:271?
awesome and veer insane diff lol

[Erase!]
0:14:477 (2) dwon and left 1 grid such that (1,2,3,4) forms a stright line?
0:59:588 (3) left 1 grid?
3:05:801 (4) left 1 grid?

[Zero!]
Good! Laughed when I saw "W" and "M" slider.

love the song, circle and approach circle lol, star with my own kd ;w;

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Change Source to Vocaloid and add ClistalP to Tags. Fixed.
Skin
- The image of comboburst-3.png is a bit unnecesary imo, it's just the other one flipped horizontally, so I'd delete it ._.This is just because I want them to be LEN-KAITO-LEN-KAITO……but I can not find another KAITO like this.
- Fix hitcircleoverlay.png, the borders are cropped :/Fixed.

~Break!~
- Maybe a bit... repetitive, but meh, it looks good and is easy for newbies :3

~Zero!~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty a bit. Fixed.

01:30:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe too hard for being a Normal? I just decide to leave them there.
02:01:904 (1,2,3) - No streams on easier diffs, please.Fixed.
02:26:610 (6) - This "half" overlap looks a bit ugly :/Fixed.
03:31:904 (1) - Shorten this spinner to the previous white tick.Fixed.

~Erase!~
- There's a big difference between the previous diff and this one, the spacing is like twice [Zero!]'s spacing, making it look harder :/

00:16:683 (1,1) - Delete New Combo.Fixed.
00:40:948 (6) - Fix spacing.Fixed.
01:49:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I see this kind of things more on an Insane than in a Hard >:Fixed.
02:04:110 (6) - Fix Spacing.Fixed.
02:05:874 (4) - ^Fixed.
03:16:242 (5) - ^Fixed.
03:37:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps jumps jumps @w@Decrease the distance from 2.0X to 1.6X.

~Ache!~
- Why does this have a HP Drain rate lower than the easier diff?I consider it'll be easier to pass……Anyway, fixed.

00:45:139 (1) - This one is really confusing, it is "supossed" to have the same repeats but then it has a lot less... xDI decide to leave them there for it sounds good to me. I have tried other parterns but they just sounded bad.
01:32:124 (7,1,1) - I really think this jump is too much... e_eFixed.
01:49:771 (1) - Stack properly under (6).Fixed.
02:51:316 (3) - You don't know where is this slider going when you play the song, try to make the endpoint totally visible.Fixed.

Not bad but I feel there's a huge difficulty difference between Zero! and Erase!, and Ache! is just... too jumpyyy @___@.
Good luck with it ^^ *star*

impossiblexu wrote:

Finished:


[attachment=0:d34d9]Len Kagamine & Kaito - Erase or Zero (wanhyrzh) [Impossiblexu's Easy].osu[/attachment:d34d9]

• • 00:30:139 (5) - End this slider here 00:31:021 (white tick) and add a slider repetion
  • 00:50:874 (6) - New combo
  • 00:58:374 (5) - ^
  • 01:20:433 (6) - ^
  • 01:40:286 (7) - ^
  • 01:54:404 (7) - ^
  • 02:08:963 (5) - ^
  • 02:16:021 (5) - ^
  • 02:23:080 (5) - ^
  • 02:38:963 (6) - End this slider here 02:39:845 (white tick)
  • 02:53:080 (5) - New combo
  • 03:01:021 (5) - ^
  • 03:07:198 (5) - ^
  • 03:14:257 (7) - ^
  • 03:21:316 (3) - ^
  • 03:24:845 (1) - End this slider here 03:25:727 (white tick)
  • 03:26:610 (2) - End this slider here 03:27:492 (white tick). Also, start this spinner 03:27:492 (1) here 03:28:374 (white tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Impossiblexu's Cake!]

• • 00:30:139 (5) - End this slider here 00:31:021 (white tick) and add a slider repetion
  • 00:50:874 (6) - New combo
  • 00:58:374 (5) - ^
  • 01:20:433 (6) - ^
  • 01:40:286 (7) - ^
  • 01:54:404 (7) - ^
  • 02:08:963 (5) - ^
  • 02:16:021 (5) - ^
  • 02:23:080 (5) - ^
  • 02:38:963 (6) - End this slider here 02:39:845 (white tick)
  • 02:53:080 (5) - New combo
  • 03:01:021 (5) - ^
  • 03:07:198 (5) - ^
  • 03:14:257 (7) - ^
  • 03:21:316 (3) - ^
  • 03:24:845 (1) - End this slider here 03:25:727 (white tick)
  • 03:26:610 (2) - End this slider here 03:27:492 (white tick). Also, start this spinner 03:27:492 (1) here 03:28:374 (white tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Impossiblexu's Cake!]

• • 00:30:139 (5) - End this slider here 00:31:021 (white tick) and add a slider repetion
  • 00:50:874 (6) - New combo
  • 00:58:374 (5) - ^
  • 01:20:433 (6) - ^
  • 01:40:286 (7) - ^
  • 01:54:404 (7) - ^
  • 02:08:963 (5) - ^
  • 02:16:021 (5) - ^
  • 02:23:080 (5) - ^
  • 02:38:963 (6) - End this slider here 02:39:845 (white tick)
  • 02:53:080 (5) - New combo
  • 03:01:021 (5) - ^
  • 03:07:198 (5) - ^
  • 03:14:257 (7) - ^
  • 03:21:316 (3) - ^
  • 03:24:845 (1) - End this slider here 03:25:727 (white tick)
  • 03:26:610 (2) - End this slider here 03:27:492 (white tick). Also, start this spinner 03:27:492 (1) here 03:28:374 (white tick)

Fixed

Sakura301 wrote:

[impossiblexu's Cake!]
No problems were found

There you go

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
删掉.osb文件，重新传一下Fixed
重设各难度的preview time, 他们现在不在线上（应为1:08:080，现为1:08:077，刚发现是国人orz）Fixed
很多绿线没压在线上，如果是调音量音效的无所谓，但至少和kiai相关的请压线。
我在各难度上都测试了，感觉中间可能变过一次offset或者BPM不完全为整数，差值在10ms左右，我不能确认，你可能需要找个timing expert来看一下。
好长的歌好多难度orz...下次求mod这种歌先打个招呼吧喂= =

[Impossiblexu's Cake!]
slider tick rate:2
我可以理解为什么Break这么短，但是可能会被挑刺的。
00:18:668 (2) - clap?
00:29:698 (4,5) - 1 grid right
00:32:345 - add a note?
00:40:286 (2) - clap?
00:46:904 (2) - clap放到(3)上
01:23:080 (1) - 这上面的两个绿线一个放到1:26:610结束kiai并调节音量，另一个删了。
01:34:551 (5) - remove clap
01:36:316 (2) - clap放到(3)上
01:47:786 (6) - 多重复次怎么样呢？
02:38:963 (6) - clap?
02:27:492 (1) - kiai的结束时间不要在转圈过程中。
02:49:551 (3) - 建议是第一个音whistle而不是finish
02:51:316 (4) - 第一个音whistle
03:10:727 (1,4,1) - remove whistle？这些地方听着感觉真的不好。
03:17:786 (1,2) - 建议是clap-normal-normal而不是反过来。
03:24:845 (1,2) - remove whistle?
Fixed

[Break!]
我个人比较支持在使用soft音效时更多使用whistle，不过没差什么……
00:14:698 (3,1) - spacing?
00:20:433 (4,7) - whistle?
00:33:669 (4) - 第一个音whistle?
00:42:492 (6,1) - clap?
00:47:786 (4) - 第一个音whistle?
01:08:080 (1) - 1 grid right?
01:17:345 (2,1) - clap代替whistle，同时去掉(3,2)上的clap
01:19:110 (1) - new combo 放到(2)上，去掉后面的(1) new combo，放到(4)上。
01:37:198 (4) - 如果是想直线排列，左两格上一格
01:42:492 (6) - remove clap
01:58:816 (4,5) - 1 grid right.
02:07:198 (2,3,1,2,3) - 我不喜欢这一段的排列。。但没什么问题。
02:19:551 (1,2,3) - 很奇怪的感觉，建议找什么办法修正下吧。
02:55:727 (8) - 1 grid left
Fixed

[Zero!]
01:05:874 (2) - whistle?
01:15:801 (1,2,3,4) - 看着不舒服……
01:20:874 (2,3) - 右一格
01:22:198 (4) - 右两格
01:42:492 (6) - remove clap?
01:57:713 (2) - 右一格同(6)对称
01:59:257 (8) - 尾音whistle
02:10:727 (6) - finish?
02:26:610 (6) - 右上一格
02:53:742 (3) - 多重复一次
02:57:051 (2) - remove finish
03:13:816 (1) - 这个起音位置很奇怪
03:38:080 (8) - 右一格
Fixed

[Erase!]
虽然是高难，但建议看下AIMod，可能有不少地方需要微修
00:21:095 (1) - whistle?Fixed
00:59:918 (4) - clap?Fixed
01:20:874 (4) - 下一格。Fixed
01:30:139 (1,5) - 第一个音whistleFixed
01:31:242 (2,3) - whistleFixed
01:35:213 (7,8) - spacing?Fixed
02:08:963 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议用3/4,3/4,1/2,3/4,3/4,1/2的拍节代替，随歌（我试图时也直接打成了这个拍，你摆的很像= =……）
03:15:801 (4) - 左一格
03:17:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这有必要吗？Fixed

[Ache!]
...第一个，分有点高了，这在找BAT上可能比较麻烦，另外第二个……这个spacing，我觉得可能也就傻根什么的会喜闻乐见。觉得这个可能要大改，所以spacing和hitsounds我都没有细看，见谅。
01:43:816 (1,3,5) - 节奏意义不明Fixed
03:21:316 (1,2,3,4) - 太频繁的whistle了

• - Erase and Ache have different slider tick than the other three diff
  My guess is that you do this to avoid the incredibly huge max score in ache diff?

• - Well I also think that you didn't really need the comboburst 3, but it's not an unrankable issue so you could leave it (too bad you can't find another image for kaito )

SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Wow so many star
Well I believe you've done a great job so I will only list something that bugs me

[General]

• - Erase and Ache have different slider tick than the other three diff
  My guess is that you do this to avoid the incredibly huge max score in ache diff?

• - Well I also think that you didn't really need the comboburst 3, but it's not an unrankable issue so you could leave it (too bad you can't find another image for kaito ) fixed

[Cake & Break]
yup nothing's strange here

[Zero]
(a little hitsound mod) you can totally ignore this if you don't like it

SPOILER

00:06:757 (6) - remove Finish then add finish on 00:07:198 (1)
00:12:492 (3) - change to finish then remove finish on 00:12:933 (4)
00:13:816 (6) - remove clap then change 00:14:257 (1) to finish
00:16:021 (3) - change the slider's start to finish
00:16:904 (4) - add finish
00:17:786 (6,7,8) - change all of these to finish
00:19:110 (1) - add finish on the slider's start

00:08:963 (5) - NC (New Combo)
00:10:727 (1) - remove NC
00:12:492 (7) - NC
00:23:080 (8) - NC then remove NC on 00:23:521 (1)
all fixed

[Erase]
There are spinners that strange for me for for example 00:21:095 (1), if you follow the lyric closely then the spinner should start at 00:20:433. Some more spinner are like this but because no modder complain about this, I guess it's ok
01:54:624 (1) - remove NC
01:55:066 (1) - ^
all fixed

[Zero]is it just me ? I think this diff is overmapped :~
02:25:286 (4) - umm... if you intend to make a perfect heart then copy 02:23:080 (2) and paste it on 02:25:286 then flip it (ctrl +h)
like this

SPOILER

or you can do it vice versa (copy 4 then paste it in to 2)
02:40:727 (1) - I found it strange that the kiai time still continue until here, when the guitar sound has already over and the lyric enter with different hitsound. Better end the kiai time in this place.
all fixed

Twinkle twinkle litlle star~
I will gladly give you star ~
Good luck with your map, if you need help just pm me

Shinxyn wrote:

@.@ meeeeeeh

Impossiblexu's- ... zzz
it's alright, some claps sounded a bit out of place, but no big deal

Break!- zzz
... meh, its... alright, but... gets very boring since it constantly follows the same 1/1 pace for most of the map
Didn't wanna comment on hitsounds, there were some lacking, but again, no big deal

Zero!-
00:25:286 (4) - was expecting this to sound like (2)... oh wait, you added a slider slide sound, but not whistles to the slider ends.. fixed
01:22:970 (1) - no big deal, but start on the 1/1 beat? (though it IS a spinner, so w/e)fixed
01:48:448 (4) - don't overlap this please (also... 3,4,5 is unevenly spaced x.x)fixed
also follows a slow pace sometimes... got a bit boring after a while too ;-;

Erase!- Overall diff +1 or 2 please!fixed
Some parts you followed vocal completely, and then it went back to continuously following the beat...
01:55:066 (6) - preferred if this was new combo after that jumpfixed
03:15:801 (4) - left a tick!? this one is... spaced out compared to the rest of the patternfixed
03:23:521 (5) - up a tick, make the 5 even within the stream too?fixed
meeeh

Ache!- ahhhh heavy spacing on slowish song! D:
14mil... boooooo, ah well >_>
The map's pace is, imho, too fast for the song...
01:01:352 (4,5) - bring this down a tick to match (1,2,3), and new combo (6)fixed
02:47:566 (13) - right a tick!~ (flip of (5)) xDfixed
02:59:036 (9) - was expecting whistle on the slider ends (again, there is a whistle set to the slider slide though)fixed
03:45:470 (6,7) - same as 01:01:352 (but with (6,7))fixed
First kiai starts in a different (and quite an odd) place compared to other diffsfixed
don't like this map much, spacing is high, and streams weren't necessary

I think the second kiai section should start on 03:04:110... (due to music)fixed

ykcarrot wrote:

Oh, too many times modded by people. oh just because I'm a very green hand


[Erase!]
03:04:110 - start kiai at here fixed


[Ache!]
03:28:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest you flip horizontally these notes. bcuz 03:28:374 (1) is too close to previous note.fixed


Others are fine! star~*

eee wrote:

it's good, I can't find anything (hopefully I didn't miss anything )
I'll star, k?

only info I can give you, is to find a BAT to bubble -> rank this, it's about time for a rank... even though something tells me it isn't "perfect"

Eirene wrote:

I hope my mod will help you <3

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
I'll check with AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A) too, so, if there's something found on it for your difficulties, i'll write "AImod!"

[General]
YAOI Background! xD
Delete Vocaloid2 from tags 'cause Vocaloid is already the Source. Fixed
Maybe it's better if you make all difficulties finish at the same time.

[Impossiblexu's Cake!]
00:13:374 (2) - Spacing.Fixed
00:32:345 (1) - WAH! maybe it's a volpted? if no, fix immediatly it.Fixed
01:43:374 (1) - Spacing.Fixed

[Break!]
00:55:727 (5) - Move this like here http://i39.tinypic.com/2wnwnxz.pngFixed
02:03:668 (7) - Flip horizontally.Fixed
02:04:992 (2,3,1,2) - Is this a bell?Fixed
03:17:345 (1,1) - This is bad D: do this two like this http://i43.tinypic.com/sor03s.pngFixed

[Zero!]
AImod!

[Erase!]
AImod!

[Ache!]
AImod!

This 3 diff's are all good, i posted "AImod!" 'cause there are sume suggestion! *star*

Eirene wrote:

as you wished, I finish hitsounds for the diff
this is certainly not the best hitsounds for the map, but I guess this sounds already better *.*

[Erase] :

02:27:492 (3) - remove the clap
02:45:139 (3) - clap at the begining, whistle only at 3/4
02:46:021 (1) - add finish
02:46:463 (3,7) - add whistle ?
02:46:904 (5) - and maybe clap here ?
02:48:668 (1,2) - on (2) only whistle at the begining and on (1) only a clap at the begining
02:49:551 (3) - remove clap, add finish ( + whistle ? )
02:49:992 (5) - remove finish
02:50:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing here ( (but no whistle on (3) )
02:52:639 (2) - whistle
02:53:521 (1,2) - same as 02:48:668 (1,2)
02:54:624 (4) - whistle
02:55:286 (1) - remove whistle at the end
02:55:727 (2) - only whistle on the 3 parts of the slider, no clap
02:57:271 (4) - same as 02:55:286 (1)
02:58:816 (1) - remove clap ?
02:59:698 (2) - remove the last finish
03:00:801 (1) - finish instead of clap
03:01:683 (2) - ^ ( and remove the last finish )
03:03:448 (1) - whistle
03:15:139 (2) - add clap at the begining
03:15:801 (4) - add clap at the end
03:22:198 (3) - clap at the begining ?

the end is not bad ...
and that's all :3

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~!
I'm not sure if you will solve this problem……
Because I have searched for the answer for days but just no one can give me a solution.
It's this:
After I change the video from FLV to AVI, the total time wiil be reduce by 5 seconds.
It isn't a sudden reduce, but the time just be drained away like a sandglass or something.

wanhyrzh wrote:

Another little problem for BG...
I change the BG several times.
But the picture here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14159 just remained the first one I used.
Do you know how to solve it?

Matma Rex wrote:

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~!
I'm not sure if you will solve this problem……
Because I have searched for the answer for days but just no one can give me a solution.
It's this:
After I change the video from FLV to AVI, the total time wiil be reduce by 5 seconds.
It isn't a sudden reduce, but the time just be drained away like a sandglass or something.

Without downloading, I'd just say that these videos have a little different FPS (frames per second) rate and it's causing the difference. Anyway, osu! supports flv videos, why don't you just use it?

wanhyrzh wrote:

Another little problem for BG...
I change the BG several times.
But the picture here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14159 just remained the first one I used.
Do you know how to solve it?

Hm, I think the thumbnail is supposed to autoupdate now. Try to reupload the map. If it doesnt fix it, post in Help and Support forums.

DJPop wrote:

Mod by requested.


~Erase!~
Fine.

~Ache!~
00:28:374 (5,9) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:345 (9) - new combo
03:18:668 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star

Sakura301 wrote:

Woohoo it's me again!, but this time im not modding just here to give you a present because im liking how the beatmap's going
+Pink Star

Derekku Chan wrote:

Modding again by request~

[General]
*Didn't you have two Kaitos in the folder before? Otherwise, the combobursts will repeat as Len, Kaito, Len, Len, Kaito, Len, Len, etc. Please add a comboburst-3. I can not find another pic like this so Ijust delete coboburst-2.png
*Source: Usually, the creator of the song is listed as source with "Vocaloid" as a tag. I guess it doesn't matter, but I'll comment again that I think it should be "CrystalP". Fixed.
*2nd kiai spot ends differently in each difficulty, which I find a bit strange. Fixed.
*Offset is a bit early. Try +6 and resnap on all diffs. Fixed.

[Cake!]
01:07:198 (7) - I like what you're trying to do, but the anchors aren't perfect which makes the slider bulge and look a bit ugly. Try to fix the first anchor like this and then perhaps rotate it 13 degrees so that the start and end of the slider line up vertically like this (ctr-shift-r to rotate manually) Fixed.
02:10:727 (3) - Same as above, but this one needs the first, third, and last anchors fixed. Fixed.
03:03:668 (1) - Perhaps make this a slider ending a white tick later so that the kiai doesn't start without a note to accompany it? Fixed.

[Break!l]
02:46:463 (4) - Stack on (2) /nazi (if distance snap doesn't agree, turn it off for a moment) Fixed.
03:34:110 (1) - A bit far from the center of the spinner for a normalish difficulty. Fixed.

[Zero!]
00:19:551 (2,4) - Remake these sliders. They have extra anchor points on them which is making (4) have an upside down repeat. o-o; Fixed.
00:47:345 (7,8) - ugly overlap. How about putting (7) above the slider? Fixed.
01:22:198 (4) - Expected this to have one more repeat Fixed.
03:23:963 (1) - ^ Fixed.

[Erase!]
02:24:404 (4) - I don't like the empty space until the next note, so perhaps add a couple of notes after this? Fixed.
03:16:242 (5) - one more repeat? Fixed.
03:38:742 - expected one more note here (perhaps stacked on 6, and then the spinner starting on the white tick and shortened) Fixed.

[Ache!]
00:42:492 (11) - one more repeat? Fixed.
01:08:963 - Kiai should start here, which is awkward since it's in the middle of a slider :S I start at 1:07:198(204) Is that OK?
02:20:874 - expected the last slider to end here or a note here or something... Fixed.
02:28:154 - ^ Fixed.
03:01:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unrankable; (4) is practically invisible. Fixed.

Nice difficulty spread! =)

Derekku Chan wrote:

CrystalP, not ClistalP. ffffffff

no kudos for this xp

Sakura301 wrote:

Note: The background isn't being loaded by the beatmap, i noticed the beatmaps are looking for a background called background.jpg but your backgrounds are called 00.pg and 01.jpg, reinsert your backgrounds (or change the name in the .osu files) to fix

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi

Green = Suggestion~

[Impossiblexu's Cake]
01:21:763 (3) - Remove The Whistle at the begin.
01:55:733 (3) - Delete the Whistle and add a clap



[Break!]
00:20:439 (4) - Add clap
01:05:880 (4) - Add clap at the first reverse and at the end
01:13:380 (2) - Add clap at the begin
01:14:263 (3) - Add Clap
01:23:527 (2) - Add clap at the end
02:02:792 (5) - Add Finish

[Zero!]
00:20:880 (4) - Remove the finish at the end
00:21:763 (5) - Add finish
00:58:822 (6) - New combo
01:05:660 (2) - Clap at the end
01:06:322 (3) - ^

[Erase!]
Fine.

[Ache!]
00:28:380 (1) - New combo

Impossiblexu's Cake!

fartownik wrote:

Make kiai time the same on all difficulties please.
Didn't do nazi. You may focus on the 3rd KIAI time in ACHE!. In that case, we can see 2:33:674~2:40:623 is playtime in ACHE! but breaktime in other diffs. So this KIAI time is only meaningful to ACHE!. Make others KIAI time the same.

Also

Impossiblexu's Cake!

is the most stupid and not fitting difficulty name I've ever seen.FIXED.

+star

tsukamaete wrote:

Ache!
00:58:601 (5,11) - over grid
03:45:145 (3) - no clap
fixed

others fine

General
soft - clap not good fit with the song try to do something...bu not sure since I'm totally weak in hitsounds...SORRY
good work for the virgin

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Awesome map!

[Ache!]:
02:11:175 (1) - Move this whole spinner back by 1/2? Fixed
02:20:108 (7) - Ack~ This note kind of feels...a bit covered from the hit-burst that (1) gets. Can you do something about this? ^^;Fixed
02:46:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You're totally implying Kaito x Len. <3 (Don't change, there's no problem at this part)haha, you feel it
03:31:910 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2.Fixed

Remove the .osb and do a Full Submission.OTL for the ".osb". Killed and checked.

There are some parts of your map that are to read because of the Approach Circle blending in with the video's background. I refined your approach circle, can you tell me how it looks?
Oh it's better~sorry for hadn't noticed this before and thanks for your work!
[attachment=0:e6902]approachcircle.png[/attachment:e6902]

Overall, a very good map. [Ache!] is a lot of fun. Star!

Cyborg wrote:

[Ache!]
01:32:130 (7) - move 1 grid to the right?(Lv3) fixed

[Erase!]
02:42:498 (2) - A little bit off screen fixed


[Relaxing]
01:07:204 (7) - Add finish? fixed
01:12:498 (4) - New combo fixed
02:10:733 (3) - Add finish? fixed

Star~

CDFA wrote:

Phew, got here before it got ranked~.

Ah, 3 minutes, 5 maps :3~.

Just to be short and blunt, I'll just say that for this song, the claps work better on 2 and 4 (This is a suggestion to ALL maps, so if I say fine, I mean it's fine except for this)I'm just weak in making hitsounds...anyway I will try to do something

impossiblexu: fixed for I think it sounds better~
00:26:616 (1) - Remove clap on beginning of slider
00:27:939 (2) - Add clap
00:28:380 (3,4) - Same as (1,2)
00:30:145 (5) - Add clap on repeat
00:30:145 (5) - Remove clap on end of slider

Break:fixed for I think it sounds better too~
00:22:204 (7) - Add clap
02:18:674 (5) - Add whistle on entire slider

Zero!:
Fine

Erase!:
Probably switch names with "Ache!"I thought about this at the very beginning but for some private reasons I decided to use ACHE! as the highest and maybe funniest diff
00:09:189 (3) - I'd prefer if this was a bit more even.

Ache!:
Probably switch names with "Erase!"
The hitsounds in here are actually pretty good. I still suggest 2 and 4 claps, though :3~.


~.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry i forgot to mod this some time ago >.<

Anyway, since it was bubbled i had a quick look and i think everything is fine ^^
I'd change something like some New combos, but there's absolutely no need since they wouldn't affect gameplay significantly.

I really like the usage of colours in the custom skin, good job on that ^^

Here's a star :>

Sakura301 wrote:

Good Job! also so you dont make the same mistake i did, if you edit the first post or do an upload it will immediately pop the bubble so be careful with that

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

Mafiamaster wrote:

It'd be best to change what deepsea said. The spacing of the beats are already enough.

[Ache]
02:23:086 (2) - Also move the starting point from under 9. It's kind of hidden.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Rebubbled!

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

NatsumeRin wrote:

恭喜= =~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

congrats wanhyrzh!
nice beatmap BTW

10'd!

YGOkid8 wrote:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

why didn't you say that on my map? D:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

yay!!!

Congrats on your first ranked map :3
Really fun ^w^/

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

wanhyrzh wrote:

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

Thank you Sakuraaa!!
You have taught me a lot!
I hope someday I'll be able to help you too~