Derekku Chan wrote:

CrystalP, not ClistalP. ffffffff

no kudos for this xp

Sakura301 wrote:

Note: The background isn't being loaded by the beatmap, i noticed the beatmaps are looking for a background called background.jpg but your backgrounds are called 00.pg and 01.jpg, reinsert your backgrounds (or change the name in the .osu files) to fix

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi

Green = Suggestion~

[Impossiblexu's Cake]
01:21:763 (3) - Remove The Whistle at the begin.
01:55:733 (3) - Delete the Whistle and add a clap



[Break!]
00:20:439 (4) - Add clap
01:05:880 (4) - Add clap at the first reverse and at the end
01:13:380 (2) - Add clap at the begin
01:14:263 (3) - Add Clap
01:23:527 (2) - Add clap at the end
02:02:792 (5) - Add Finish

[Zero!]
00:20:880 (4) - Remove the finish at the end
00:21:763 (5) - Add finish
00:58:822 (6) - New combo
01:05:660 (2) - Clap at the end
01:06:322 (3) - ^

[Erase!]
Fine.

[Ache!]
00:28:380 (1) - New combo

Impossiblexu's Cake!

fartownik wrote:

Make kiai time the same on all difficulties please.
Didn't do nazi. You may focus on the 3rd KIAI time in ACHE!. In that case, we can see 2:33:674~2:40:623 is playtime in ACHE! but breaktime in other diffs. So this KIAI time is only meaningful to ACHE!. Make others KIAI time the same.

Also

Impossiblexu's Cake!

is the most stupid and not fitting difficulty name I've ever seen.FIXED.

+star

tsukamaete wrote:

Ache!
00:58:601 (5,11) - over grid
03:45:145 (3) - no clap
fixed

others fine

General
soft - clap not good fit with the song try to do something...bu not sure since I'm totally weak in hitsounds...SORRY
good work for the virgin

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Awesome map!

[Ache!]:
02:11:175 (1) - Move this whole spinner back by 1/2? Fixed
02:20:108 (7) - Ack~ This note kind of feels...a bit covered from the hit-burst that (1) gets. Can you do something about this? ^^;Fixed
02:46:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You're totally implying Kaito x Len. <3 (Don't change, there's no problem at this part)haha, you feel it
03:31:910 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2.Fixed

Remove the .osb and do a Full Submission.OTL for the ".osb". Killed and checked.

There are some parts of your map that are to read because of the Approach Circle blending in with the video's background. I refined your approach circle, can you tell me how it looks?
Oh it's better~sorry for hadn't noticed this before and thanks for your work!
[attachment=0:e6902]approachcircle.png[/attachment:e6902]

Overall, a very good map. [Ache!] is a lot of fun. Star!

Cyborg wrote:

[Ache!]
01:32:130 (7) - move 1 grid to the right?(Lv3) fixed

[Erase!]
02:42:498 (2) - A little bit off screen fixed


[Relaxing]
01:07:204 (7) - Add finish? fixed
01:12:498 (4) - New combo fixed
02:10:733 (3) - Add finish? fixed

Star~

CDFA wrote:

Phew, got here before it got ranked~.

Ah, 3 minutes, 5 maps :3~.

Just to be short and blunt, I'll just say that for this song, the claps work better on 2 and 4 (This is a suggestion to ALL maps, so if I say fine, I mean it's fine except for this)I'm just weak in making hitsounds...anyway I will try to do something

impossiblexu: fixed for I think it sounds better~
00:26:616 (1) - Remove clap on beginning of slider
00:27:939 (2) - Add clap
00:28:380 (3,4) - Same as (1,2)
00:30:145 (5) - Add clap on repeat
00:30:145 (5) - Remove clap on end of slider

Break:fixed for I think it sounds better too~
00:22:204 (7) - Add clap
02:18:674 (5) - Add whistle on entire slider

Zero!:
Fine

Erase!:
Probably switch names with "Ache!"I thought about this at the very beginning but for some private reasons I decided to use ACHE! as the highest and maybe funniest diff
00:09:189 (3) - I'd prefer if this was a bit more even.

Ache!:
Probably switch names with "Erase!"
The hitsounds in here are actually pretty good. I still suggest 2 and 4 claps, though :3~.


~.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry i forgot to mod this some time ago >.<

Anyway, since it was bubbled i had a quick look and i think everything is fine ^^
I'd change something like some New combos, but there's absolutely no need since they wouldn't affect gameplay significantly.

I really like the usage of colours in the custom skin, good job on that ^^

Here's a star :>

Sakura301 wrote:

Good Job! also so you dont make the same mistake i did, if you edit the first post or do an upload it will immediately pop the bubble so be careful with that

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

Mafiamaster wrote:

It'd be best to change what deepsea said. The spacing of the beats are already enough.

[Ache]
02:23:086 (2) - Also move the starting point from under 9. It's kind of hidden.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Rebubbled!

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

NatsumeRin wrote:

恭喜= =~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

congrats wanhyrzh!
nice beatmap BTW

10'd!

YGOkid8 wrote:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

why didn't you say that on my map? D:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

yay!!!

Congrats on your first ranked map :3
Really fun ^w^/

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

wanhyrzh wrote:

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

Thank you Sakuraaa!!
You have taught me a lot!
I hope someday I'll be able to help you too~