tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
I'll check with AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A) too, so, if there's something found on it for your difficulties, i'll write "AImod!"

[General]
YAOI Background! xD
Delete Vocaloid2 from tags 'cause Vocaloid is already the Source. Fixed
Maybe it's better if you make all difficulties finish at the same time.

[Impossiblexu's Cake!]
00:13:374 (2) - Spacing.Fixed
00:32:345 (1) - WAH! maybe it's a volpted? if no, fix immediatly it.Fixed
01:43:374 (1) - Spacing.Fixed

[Break!]
00:55:727 (5) - Move this like here http://i39.tinypic.com/2wnwnxz.pngFixed
02:03:668 (7) - Flip horizontally.Fixed
02:04:992 (2,3,1,2) - Is this a bell?Fixed
03:17:345 (1,1) - This is bad D: do this two like this http://i43.tinypic.com/sor03s.pngFixed

[Zero!]
AImod!

[Erase!]
AImod!

[Ache!]
AImod!

This 3 diff's are all good, i posted "AImod!" 'cause there are sume suggestion! *star*

Thanks a lot~!

as you wished, I finish hitsounds for the diff
this is certainly not the best hitsounds for the map, but I guess this sounds already better *.*

[Erase] :

02:27:492 (3) - remove the clap
02:45:139 (3) - clap at the begining, whistle only at 3/4
02:46:021 (1) - add finish
02:46:463 (3,7) - add whistle ?
02:46:904 (5) - and maybe clap here ?
02:48:668 (1,2) - on (2) only whistle at the begining and on (1) only a clap at the begining
02:49:551 (3) - remove clap, add finish ( + whistle ? )
02:49:992 (5) - remove finish
02:50:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing here ( (but no whistle on (3) )
02:52:639 (2) - whistle
02:53:521 (1,2) - same as 02:48:668 (1,2)
02:54:624 (4) - whistle
02:55:286 (1) - remove whistle at the end
02:55:727 (2) - only whistle on the 3 parts of the slider, no clap
02:57:271 (4) - same as 02:55:286 (1)
02:58:816 (1) - remove clap ?
02:59:698 (2) - remove the last finish
03:00:801 (1) - finish instead of clap
03:01:683 (2) - ^ ( and remove the last finish )
03:03:448 (1) - whistle
03:15:139 (2) - add clap at the begining
03:15:801 (4) - add clap at the end
03:22:198 (3) - clap at the begining ?

the end is not bad ...
and that's all :3

Eirene wrote:

as you wished, I finish hitsounds for the diff
this is certainly not the best hitsounds for the map, but I guess this sounds already better *.*

[Erase] :

02:27:492 (3) - remove the clap
02:45:139 (3) - clap at the begining, whistle only at 3/4
02:46:021 (1) - add finish
02:46:463 (3,7) - add whistle ?
02:46:904 (5) - and maybe clap here ?
02:48:668 (1,2) - on (2) only whistle at the begining and on (1) only a clap at the begining
02:49:551 (3) - remove clap, add finish ( + whistle ? )
02:49:992 (5) - remove finish
02:50:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing here ( (but no whistle on (3) )
02:52:639 (2) - whistle
02:53:521 (1,2) - same as 02:48:668 (1,2)
02:54:624 (4) - whistle
02:55:286 (1) - remove whistle at the end
02:55:727 (2) - only whistle on the 3 parts of the slider, no clap
02:57:271 (4) - same as 02:55:286 (1)
02:58:816 (1) - remove clap ?
02:59:698 (2) - remove the last finish
03:00:801 (1) - finish instead of clap
03:01:683 (2) - ^ ( and remove the last finish )
03:03:448 (1) - whistle
03:15:139 (2) - add clap at the begining
03:15:801 (4) - add clap at the end
03:22:198 (3) - clap at the begining ?

the end is not bad ...
and that's all :3

All fixed~~
Thanks a lot!

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~!
I'm not sure if you will solve this problem……
Because I have searched for the answer for days but just no one can give me a solution.
It's this:
After I change the video from FLV to AVI, the total time wiil be reduce by 5 seconds.
It isn't a sudden reduce, but the time just be drained away like a sandglass or something.

Without downloading, I'd just say that these videos have a little different FPS (frames per second) rate and it's causing the difference. Anyway, osu! supports flv videos, why don't you just use it?

wanhyrzh wrote:

Another little problem for BG...
I change the BG several times.
But the picture here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14159 just remained the first one I used.
Do you know how to solve it?

Hm, I think the thumbnail is supposed to autoupdate now. Try to reupload the map. If it doesnt fix it, post in Help and Support forums.

Mod by requested.


~Erase!~
Fine.

~Ache!~
00:28:374 (5,9) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:345 (9) - new combo
03:18:668 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star

Matma Rex wrote:

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~!
I'm not sure if you will solve this problem……
Because I have searched for the answer for days but just no one can give me a solution.
It's this:
After I change the video from FLV to AVI, the total time wiil be reduce by 5 seconds.
It isn't a sudden reduce, but the time just be drained away like a sandglass or something.

Without downloading, I'd just say that these videos have a little different FPS (frames per second) rate and it's causing the difference. Anyway, osu! supports flv videos, why don't you just use it?

wanhyrzh wrote:

Another little problem for BG...
I change the BG several times.
But the picture here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14159 just remained the first one I used.
Do you know how to solve it?

Hm, I think the thumbnail is supposed to autoupdate now. Try to reupload the map. If it doesnt fix it, post in Help and Support forums.

About the video, I finally fix this problem by at first use FLV1 to transform it into MP4 without any change, then transform the MP4 to AVI with some changes.
About the BG, I'm just asking for help in the General Questions forum.
THX~

DJPop wrote:

Mod by requested.


~Erase!~
Fine.

~Ache!~
00:28:374 (5,9) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:47:345 (9) - new combo
03:18:668 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star

FIXED.
THANKS~!

Woohoo it's me again!, but this time im not modding just here to give you a present because im liking how the beatmap's going
+Pink Star

Modding again by request~

[General]
*Didn't you have two Kaitos in the folder before? Otherwise, the combobursts will repeat as Len, Kaito, Len, Len, Kaito, Len, Len, etc. Please add a comboburst-3.
*Source: Usually, the creator of the song is listed as source with "Vocaloid" as a tag. I guess it doesn't matter, but I'll comment again that I think it should be "CrystalP".
*2nd kiai spot ends differently in each difficulty, which I find a bit strange.
*Offset is a bit early. Try +6 and resnap on all diffs.

[Cake!]
01:07:198 (7) - I like what you're trying to do, but the anchors aren't perfect which makes the slider bulge and look a bit ugly. Try to fix the first anchor like this and then perhaps rotate it 13 degrees so that the start and end of the slider line up vertically like this (ctr-shift-r to rotate manually)
02:10:727 (3) - Same as above, but this one needs the first, third, and last anchors fixed.
03:03:668 (1) - Perhaps make this a slider ending a white tick later so that the kiai doesn't start without a note to accompany it?

[Break!l]
02:46:463 (4) - Stack on (2) /nazi (if distance snap doesn't agree, turn it off for a moment)
03:34:110 (1) - A bit far from the center of the spinner for a normalish difficulty.

[Zero!]
00:19:551 (2,4) - Remake these sliders. They have extra anchor points on them which is making (4) have an upside down repeat. o-o;
00:47:345 (7,8) - ugly overlap. How about putting (7) above the slider?
01:22:198 (4) - Expected this to have one more repeat
03:23:963 (1) - ^

[Erase!]
02:24:404 (4) - I don't like the empty space until the next note, so perhaps add a couple of notes after this?
03:16:242 (5) - one more repeat?
03:38:742 - expected one more note here (perhaps stacked on 6, and then the spinner starting on the white tick and shortened)

[Ache!]
00:42:492 (11) - one more repeat?
01:08:963 - Kiai should start here, which is awkward since it's in the middle of a slider :S
02:20:874 - expected the last slider to end here or a note here or something...
02:28:154 - ^
03:01:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unrankable; (4) is practically invisible.

Nice difficulty spread! =)

Sakura301 wrote:

Woohoo it's me again!, but this time im not modding just here to give you a present because im liking how the beatmap's going
+Pink Star

Thanks~~
I'll keep working on it.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Modding again by request~

[General]
*Didn't you have two Kaitos in the folder before? Otherwise, the combobursts will repeat as Len, Kaito, Len, Len, Kaito, Len, Len, etc. Please add a comboburst-3. I can not find another pic like this so Ijust delete coboburst-2.png
*Source: Usually, the creator of the song is listed as source with "Vocaloid" as a tag. I guess it doesn't matter, but I'll comment again that I think it should be "CrystalP". Fixed.
*2nd kiai spot ends differently in each difficulty, which I find a bit strange. Fixed.
*Offset is a bit early. Try +6 and resnap on all diffs. Fixed.

[Cake!]
01:07:198 (7) - I like what you're trying to do, but the anchors aren't perfect which makes the slider bulge and look a bit ugly. Try to fix the first anchor like this and then perhaps rotate it 13 degrees so that the start and end of the slider line up vertically like this (ctr-shift-r to rotate manually) Fixed.
02:10:727 (3) - Same as above, but this one needs the first, third, and last anchors fixed. Fixed.
03:03:668 (1) - Perhaps make this a slider ending a white tick later so that the kiai doesn't start without a note to accompany it? Fixed.

[Break!l]
02:46:463 (4) - Stack on (2) /nazi (if distance snap doesn't agree, turn it off for a moment) Fixed.
03:34:110 (1) - A bit far from the center of the spinner for a normalish difficulty. Fixed.

[Zero!]
00:19:551 (2,4) - Remake these sliders. They have extra anchor points on them which is making (4) have an upside down repeat. o-o; Fixed.
00:47:345 (7,8) - ugly overlap. How about putting (7) above the slider? Fixed.
01:22:198 (4) - Expected this to have one more repeat Fixed.
03:23:963 (1) - ^ Fixed.

[Erase!]
02:24:404 (4) - I don't like the empty space until the next note, so perhaps add a couple of notes after this? Fixed.
03:16:242 (5) - one more repeat? Fixed.
03:38:742 - expected one more note here (perhaps stacked on 6, and then the spinner starting on the white tick and shortened) Fixed.

[Ache!]
00:42:492 (11) - one more repeat? Fixed.
01:08:963 - Kiai should start here, which is awkward since it's in the middle of a slider :S I start at 1:07:198(204) Is that OK?
02:20:874 - expected the last slider to end here or a note here or something... Fixed.
02:28:154 - ^ Fixed.
03:01:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unrankable; (4) is practically invisible. Fixed.

Nice difficulty spread! =)

Thanks for rechecking~~

CrystalP, not ClistalP. ffffffff

no kudos for this xp

Derekku Chan wrote:

CrystalP, not ClistalP. ffffffff

no kudos for this xp

Oh, I notice this at first
but due to the "ClistalP" at the very beginning of the video……So I just use this.

EDIT: Add “CrystalP” to the tags.

Note: The background isn't being loaded by the beatmap, i noticed the beatmaps are looking for a background called background.jpg but your backgrounds are called 00.pg and 01.jpg, reinsert your backgrounds (or change the name in the .osu files) to fix

Sakura301 wrote:

Note: The background isn't being loaded by the beatmap, i noticed the beatmaps are looking for a background called background.jpg but your backgrounds are called 00.pg and 01.jpg, reinsert your backgrounds (or change the name in the .osu files) to fix

FIXED

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi

Green = Suggestion~

[Impossiblexu's Cake]
01:21:763 (3) - Remove The Whistle at the begin.
01:55:733 (3) - Delete the Whistle and add a clap



[Break!]
00:20:439 (4) - Add clap
01:05:880 (4) - Add clap at the first reverse and at the end
01:13:380 (2) - Add clap at the begin
01:14:263 (3) - Add Clap
01:23:527 (2) - Add clap at the end
02:02:792 (5) - Add Finish

[Zero!]
00:20:880 (4) - Remove the finish at the end
00:21:763 (5) - Add finish
00:58:822 (6) - New combo
01:05:660 (2) - Clap at the end
01:06:322 (3) - ^

[Erase!]
Fine.

[Ache!]
00:28:380 (1) - New combo

FIXED.~
TY!

Make kiai time the same on all difficulties please.
Didn't do nazi.

Also

Impossiblexu's Cake!

is the most stupid and not fitting difficulty name I've ever seen.

+star

fartownik wrote:

Make kiai time the same on all difficulties please.
Didn't do nazi. You may focus on the 3rd KIAI time in ACHE!. In that case, we can see 2:33:674~2:40:623 is playtime in ACHE! but breaktime in other diffs. So this KIAI time is only meaningful to ACHE!. Make others KIAI time the same.

Also

Impossiblexu's Cake!

is the most stupid and not fitting difficulty name I've ever seen.FIXED.

+star

Thanks a lot~.

AFK两个月跑回来W君都成mapper了，捂脸
加油啊~

Ache!
00:58:601 (5,11) - over grid
03:45:145 (3) - no clap

others fine

General
soft - clap not good fit with the song
good work for the virgin

tsukamaete wrote:

Ache!
00:58:601 (5,11) - over grid
03:45:145 (3) - no clap
fixed

others fine

General
soft - clap not good fit with the song try to do something...bu not sure since I'm totally weak in hitsounds...SORRY
good work for the virgin

Oh thanks Boss-tsuka~

Awesome map!

[Ache!]:
02:11:175 (1) - Move this whole spinner back by 1/2?
02:20:108 (7) - Ack~ This note kind of feels...a bit covered from the hit-burst that (1) gets. Can you do something about this? ^^;
02:46:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You're totally implying Kaito x Len. <3 (Don't change, there's no problem at this part)
03:31:910 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2.

Remove the .osb and do a Full Submission.

There are some parts of your map that are to read because of the Approach Circle blending in with the video's background. I refined your approach circle, can you tell me how it looks?



Overall, a very good map. [Ache!] is a lot of fun. Star!

[Ache!]
01:32:130 (7) - move 1 grid to the right?(Lv3)

[Erase!]
02:42:498 (2) - A little bit off screen


[Relaxing]
01:07:204 (7) - Add finish?
01:12:498 (4) - New combo
02:10:733 (3) - Add finish?

Star~

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Awesome map!

[Ache!]:
02:11:175 (1) - Move this whole spinner back by 1/2? Fixed
02:20:108 (7) - Ack~ This note kind of feels...a bit covered from the hit-burst that (1) gets. Can you do something about this? ^^;Fixed
02:46:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You're totally implying Kaito x Len. <3 (Don't change, there's no problem at this part)haha, you feel it
03:31:910 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2.Fixed

Remove the .osb and do a Full Submission.OTL for the ".osb". Killed and checked.

There are some parts of your map that are to read because of the Approach Circle blending in with the video's background. I refined your approach circle, can you tell me how it looks?
Oh it's better~sorry for hadn't noticed this before and thanks for your work!
[attachment=0:e6902]approachcircle.png[/attachment:e6902]

Overall, a very good map. [Ache!] is a lot of fun. Star!

Kirbyyy~~ ( and good night )

Cyborg wrote:

[Ache!]
01:32:130 (7) - move 1 grid to the right?(Lv3) fixed

[Erase!]
02:42:498 (2) - A little bit off screen fixed


[Relaxing]
01:07:204 (7) - Add finish? fixed
01:12:498 (4) - New combo fixed
02:10:733 (3) - Add finish? fixed

Star~

Oh so quickly you reply this! Thank you Cyborg~!

Phew, got here before it got ranked~.

Ah, 3 minutes, 5 maps :3~.

Just to be short and blunt, I'll just say that for this song, the claps work better on 2 and 4 (This is a suggestion to ALL maps, so if I say fine, I mean it's fine except for this)

impossiblexu:
00:26:616 (1) - Remove clap on beginning of slider
00:27:939 (2) - Add clap
00:28:380 (3,4) - Same as (1,2)
00:30:145 (5) - Add clap on repeat
00:30:145 (5) - Remove clap on end of slider

Break:
00:22:204 (7) - Add clap
02:18:674 (5) - Add whistle on entire slider

Zero!:
Fine

Erase!:
Probably switch names with "Ache!"
00:09:189 (3) - I'd prefer if this was a bit more even.

Ache!:
Probably switch names with "Erase!"
The hitsounds in here are actually pretty good. I still suggest 2 and 4 claps, though :3~.

~.

CDFA wrote:

Phew, got here before it got ranked~.

Ah, 3 minutes, 5 maps :3~.

Just to be short and blunt, I'll just say that for this song, the claps work better on 2 and 4 (This is a suggestion to ALL maps, so if I say fine, I mean it's fine except for this)I'm just weak in making hitsounds...anyway I will try to do something

impossiblexu: fixed for I think it sounds better~
00:26:616 (1) - Remove clap on beginning of slider
00:27:939 (2) - Add clap
00:28:380 (3,4) - Same as (1,2)
00:30:145 (5) - Add clap on repeat
00:30:145 (5) - Remove clap on end of slider

Break:fixed for I think it sounds better too~
00:22:204 (7) - Add clap
02:18:674 (5) - Add whistle on entire slider

Zero!:
Fine

Erase!:
Probably switch names with "Ache!"I thought about this at the very beginning but for some private reasons I decided to use ACHE! as the highest and maybe funniest diff
00:09:189 (3) - I'd prefer if this was a bit more even.

Ache!:
Probably switch names with "Erase!"
The hitsounds in here are actually pretty good. I still suggest 2 and 4 claps, though :3~.


~.

Thanks~

Sorry i forgot to mod this some time ago >.<

Anyway, since it was bubbled i had a quick look and i think everything is fine ^^
I'd change something like some New combos, but there's absolutely no need since they wouldn't affect gameplay significantly.

I really like the usage of colours in the custom skin, good job on that ^^

Here's a star :>

Good Job! also so you dont make the same mistake i did, if you edit the first post or do an upload it will immediately pop the bubble so be careful with that

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Thank you Kirbyyy~!!
p.s.I remember this img.....isn't it the comboburst-2?
Oh but I just deleted it several days ago……

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry i forgot to mod this some time ago >.<

Anyway, since it was bubbled i had a quick look and i think everything is fine ^^
I'd change something like some New combos, but there's absolutely no need since they wouldn't affect gameplay significantly.

I really like the usage of colours in the custom skin, good job on that ^^

Here's a star :>

Also thanks~I think we can have co-operation next time?

Sakura301 wrote:

Good Job! also so you dont make the same mistake i did, if you edit the first post or do an upload it will immediately pop the bubble so be careful with that

Thanks for your warning, Sakura~!
I hadn't known this yet.
Oh I won't do this.

And so, the waiting game begins once again

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

Thank you for checking! Deepsea
I prefer not to change this for I think it fits the sound?
But if you do think it will lower the quality of the map, I'll change it.
Thanks again~!

It'd be best to change what deepsea said. The spacing of the beats are already enough.

[Ache]
02:23:086 (2) - Also move the starting point from under 9. It's kind of hidden.

deepsea wrote:

Nice vergin, I mean the map.

[Ache]00:45:14(1) (1) Little confusing for me.

Decide change(and change) or not then contact me.

Mafiamaster wrote:

It'd be best to change what deepsea said. The spacing of the beats are already enough.

[Ache]
02:23:086 (2) - Also move the starting point from under 9. It's kind of hidden.

So these problems finally get to be solved.

Rebubbled!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Rebubbled!

Thanks~

0.0

祝贺~~

有Normal难度 喜欢

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

congratz for your first beatmap

Many thanks to you all!!!!
I love you guys!

恭喜= =~

congrats wanhyrzh!
nice beatmap BTW

10'd!

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

why didn't you say that on my map? D:

NatsumeRin wrote:

恭喜= =~

谢谢~
很抱歉你之前提出的关于ACHE!的谱面问题
没有怎么改动
不过下次我会更加注意的！

Arusha Shuna wrote:

congrats wanhyrzh!
nice beatmap BTW

10'd!

Thank you!!
haha I see you hidden the 4th diff.
Awesome.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Congratulations! You made it, m'boi <3

why didn't you say that on my map? D:

yay!!!

Congrats on your first ranked map :3
Really fun ^w^/

Beuchi-chan wrote:

yay!!!

Congrats on your first ranked map :3
Really fun ^w^/

Thank you Beuchi!
Without you and Kirby's help it may not get ranked so quickly.

Congratulations on your rank

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

Thank you Sakuraaa!!
You have taught me a lot!
I hope someday I'll be able to help you too~

wanhyrzh wrote:

Sakura301 wrote:

Congratulations on your rank

Thank you Sakuraaa!!
You have taught me a lot!
I hope someday I'll be able to help you too~

It's always nice to see the dreams of others come true and help them come true ^.^ and now the osu! community can enjoy your map