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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 5. Februar 2015 at 23:46:11

Artist: SiM
Title: EXiSTENCE (TV Edit)
Source: 神撃のバハムート GENESIS
Tags: shingeki no bahamut sin mah godri show-hate silence iz mine reggae punk hard core screamo ska opening theme one okoratu squirrel puxtu
BPM: 188
Filesize: 22528kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,65 stars, 115 notes)
  2. Hard (3,68 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Normal (2,17 stars, 146 notes)
  4. oko's Insane (4,61 stars, 356 notes)
  5. puxtu's HD - 4Key (2,58 stars, 695 notes)
  6. puxtu's NM - 4Key (1,94 stars, 478 notes)
  7. Rage (5,16 stars, 389 notes)
  8. Squirrel's Advanced (3,17 stars, 266 notes)


Download: SiM - EXiSTENCE (TV Edit)
Download: SiM - EXiSTENCE (TV Edit) (no video)
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Hi! From my modding queue :)

[General]
- Set AudioLeadIn to 2000 in every .osu file
- Insane doesn't have kiai time, but the other diffs do

[Easy]
00:03:923 (2,4) - These are really hard to read for newer players because of the way they overlap
00:46:689 (1,3) - ^
00:49:881 (2,4) - ^
00:22:593 (3) - Doesn't match the music, try this: http://puu.sh/duwsm/79a1410fc8.jpg
00:33:604 - Insert a break here

[Normal]
- AR6 would fit better imo (there's too much on screen at the same time right now)
00:33:604 - Same as Easy

[Insane]
00:22:593 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow
00:33:604 - Same as Easy

That's all I could find. Good luck with the map! :)
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ReallyFastCat wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue :)

[General]
- Set AudioLeadIn to 2000 in every .osu file yep good idea
- Insane doesn't have kiai time, but the other diffs do whoops

[Easy]
00:03:923 (2,4) - These are really hard to read for newer players because of the way they overlap gonna leave it for now, but i keep it mind
00:46:689 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:49:881 (2,4) - ^^
00:22:593 (3) - Doesn't match the music, try this: http://puu.sh/duwsm/79a1410fc8.jpg fixed
00:33:604 - Insert a break here nah, i think a break time wouldnt fit here - the short breathing space is perfect

[Normal]
- AR6 would fit better imo (there's too much on screen at the same time right now) well i see, but isn't ar6 a bit too high for a normal diff? correct me if im wrong
00:33:604 - Same as Easy ^

[Insane]
00:22:593 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow changed the form a bit should be better now
00:33:604 - Same as Easy ^

That's all I could find. Good luck with the map! :)


thanks for modding!
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Hello. As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

It will be better if you will put a break time at 00:33:604 - 00:36:157

[ Easy ]
00:03:923 (2,4) - Stack in Easy difficulties are really confusing for newbie players. Consider replacing the 4th note to somewhere else.
00:21:795 (2) - Place it little bit lower.
00:49:881 (2,4) - Same issue as with the 00:03:923 (2,4) - I know it's great blanket and stuff but really confusing for newbie players...

[ Normal ]
00:00:413 (1,3) - Make slider shape like this: Image
00:21:476 (2) - Improve the design of the slider and make a perfect blanket with 00:22:115 (3) -
00:23:391 (1) - Everywhere normal curvy sliders and then this. Make something like 00:00:413 (1,3) -
00:40:306 (3) - Too big jump. Put this circle on 00:40:625 (4) -
01:21:795 (5,2) - Not stacked properly.

[ Hard ]
01:25:625 (4,5) - Too big jump. Put it little closer to each other.

That's all I could find.
Hope that helps.
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!
posted

Pjecoo wrote:

Hello. As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

It will be better if you will put a break time at 00:33:604 - 00:36:157 second one who told me this - added

[ Easy ]
00:03:923 (2,4) - Stack in Easy difficulties are really confusing for newbie players. Consider replacing the 4th note to somewhere else. oh hell, the whole pattern has to be changed then - gonna keep this one in mind, if an other modder will notice this im gonna change it
00:21:795 (2) - Place it little bit lower. fixed
00:49:881 (2,4) - Same issue as with the 00:03:923 (2,4) - I know it's great blanket and stuff but really confusing for newbie players... ^

[ Normal ]
00:00:413 (1,3) - Make slider shape like this: Image yep, looks better
00:21:476 (2) - Improve the design of the slider and make a perfect blanket with 00:22:115 (3) - not sure what excatly you mean - form and blanket seems ok to me
00:23:391 (1) - Everywhere normal curvy sliders and then this. Make something like 00:00:413 (1,3) - changed to this http://prntscr.com/5hjno2
00:40:306 (3) - Too big jump. Put this circle on 00:40:625 (4) - want to keep it for a constant 1.0spacing
01:21:795 (5,2) - Not stacked properly. fixed

[ Hard ]
01:25:625 (4,5) - Too big jump. Put it little closer to each other. 1.5x ds now

That's all I could find.
Hope that helps.
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!


this was useful - thanks for modding!
posted
Easy:

00:17:327 (4,5,6) - make the flow easier by raising 5 a bit.
00:20:838 (1,2) - make the y coordinate of these two the same
00:42:540 (3) - Important to keep the flow going, ctrl + g
00:48:923 (1) - I think this would be good just a straight slider since you can barely see the bend anyway
00:57:859 (2,3,1) - try this > http://puu.sh/dxpkY/09fc4977ec.jpg right now the flow is extremely awkward
01:08:072 (2) - how about just straight since imo its unsightly when its so minutely bent
01:23:391 (2) - This has to go. just make it a long slider or something, any more than two reverse backs on a short slider in a high bpm song in easy is overkill. http://puu.sh/dxpB9/0f0e8bf596.jpg - http://puu.sh/dxpCP/b1dfb77be5.jpg

Normal:

00:01:689 (3) - ctrl + j, and try to blanket them
00:18:604 (6,7,8) - try this? http://puu.sh/dxpQV/35b8770a8c.jpg
00:23:391 (1) - looks weird atm, try moving the middle node to x368 y176
00:29:455 (2,3) - move to the left to allow flow to ease
00:37:434 (3) - ctrl + g
00:47:966 (3,1) - was the overlap intended?
01:06:795 (1,2) - only stack when absolutely necessary, its easy to fix this one
01:17:966 (3,4,5) - four's closeness to the slider is unsightly imo, try move it to the right a bit to create a crushed triangle :P
01:20:040 (2) - improve flow by move either right or left , slightly or lots
01:23:391 (2) - same as easy, but maybe harder rhythm.

Hard:

There are no spinners in this diff, try to fix this?

Insane:

01:24:030 (1,2) - try to keep the star pattern

Overall: I think you are a great mapper, I love this epic mapset, please get it rank ! i sorry but i cant hand over star cause im stingy :3

EDIT: Holy crap you have no ranked map...? and your map is like this? what does that make me T_T
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insert metadata post here later on

Taken from opening video - i guess that's the MP3 you're using

so i guess it goes like:
Title: EXiSTENCE
Artist: SiM
Arranger: SiM
Composer: SiM
Lyrics (? 作詞 ?): MAH

apparently SiM is short for Silence iz Mine according to http://shingekinobahamut-genesis.jp/music/music_02.php
as well as http://sxixm.com/biography/ contains a lot of useful information if you bother reading it ~
(can just sneak lots of tags)




EDIT:
Artist's website says the Tv version should be called EXiSTENCE (TV Edit)
and links iTunes confirming that:


http://sxixm.com/news/article/0/8851/
posted

Yuthuil wrote:

Easy:

00:17:327 (4,5,6) - make the flow easier by raising 5 a bit. good idea
00:20:838 (1,2) - make the y coordinate of these two the same already changed in previous mod
00:42:540 (3) - Important to keep the flow going, ctrl + g nah, like it like that - is also a good flow
00:48:923 (1) - I think this would be good just a straight slider since you can barely see the bend anyway agreed
00:57:859 (2,3,1) - try this > http://puu.sh/dxpkY/09fc4977ec.jpg right now the flow is extremely awkward good idea
01:08:072 (2) - how about just straight since imo its unsightly when its so minutely bent i love slightly bent sliders but i guess its unnecessary in an easy diff
01:23:391 (2) - This has to go. just make it a long slider or something, any more than two reverse backs on a short slider in a high bpm song in easy is overkill. http://puu.sh/dxpB9/0f0e8bf596.jpg - http://puu.sh/dxpCP/b1dfb77be5.jpg fixed

Normal:

00:01:689 (3) - ctrl + j, and try to blanket them added blanket
00:18:604 (6,7,8) - try this? http://puu.sh/dxpQV/35b8770a8c.jpg changed constellation - not possible anymore (removed all stacked tripples)
00:23:391 (1) - looks weird atm, try moving the middle node to x368 y176 changed in the previous mod to this http://prntscr.com/5htxnb
00:29:455 (2,3) - move to the left to allow flow to ease good idea - created a triangle now http://prntscr.com/5htydb
00:37:434 (3) - ctrl + g i guess it fits better here, ok
00:47:966 (3,1) - was the overlap intended? whoops - fixed
01:06:795 (1,2) - only stack when absolutely necessary, its easy to fix this one fixed
01:17:966 (3,4,5) - four's closeness to the slider is unsightly imo, try move it to the right a bit to create a crushed triangle :Pfixed in an other way
01:20:040 (2) - improve flow by move either right or left , slightly or lots good idea
01:23:391 (2) - same as easy, but maybe harder rhythm. done

Hard:

There are no spinners in this diff, try to fix this? 00:30:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - replaced this part with a spinner

Insane:

01:24:030 (1,2) - try to keep the star pattern hah, didnt intend to make a star here - but i changed it a little bit

Overall: I think you are a great mapper, I love this epic mapset, please get it rank ! i sorry but i cant hand over star cause im stingy :3 thanks, i try my best to get it ranked hehe - np never expected a star

EDIT: Holy crap you have no ranked map...? and your map is like this? what does that make me T_T im quite new :D


Thanks for modding! (Modding your map atm)


Okoratu wrote:


Taken from opening video - i guess that's the MP3 you're using

so i guess it goes like:
Title: EXiSTENCE
Artist: SiM
Arranger: SiM
Composer: SiM
Lyrics (? 作詞 ?): MAH

apparently SiM is short for Silence iz Mine according to http://shingekinobahamut-genesis.jp/music/music_02.php
as well as http://sxixm.com/biography/ contains a lot of useful information if you bother reading it ~
(can just sneak lots of tags)
added "sin mah godri show-hate silence iz mine reggae punk hard core screamo ska" to the tags

EDIT:
Artist's website says the Tv version should be called EXiSTENCE (TV Edit) changed


Thanks for meta-data modding!
posted
My first mod request omg... let's try!

Easy:

00:04:881 (4) - Move to 00:04:721 but i think is difficult for an easy


Normal:

00:09:349 (3,4) - I think for a user for a normal is not indicated this kind of slider
00:10:625 (1,2) - Same
00:13:178 (1,2) - Same, and this... this isn't an error i think it's only a little difficult for a normal player, is often inserted for the initial part of the map
01:06:795 (1,2,3) This is a little difficult for me too

Hard:

AR8... :/ it would be better with AR7 i think
00:38:710 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing for notes differently distant in time

Insane:

Some problems with the spacing, some notes are before very close together and after too far

P.S. Wow, really nice beatmap :) you have your own style and this for a NEW mapper is very good! Good luck, i hope to have been helpful :? (and sorry for my english :cry: )
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BAldoTridentE wrote:

My first mod request omg... let's try!

Easy:

00:04:881 (4) - Move to 00:04:721 but i think is difficult for an easy i understand what you mean but that would be way to hard for an easy


Normal:

00:09:349 (3,4) - I think for a user for a normal is not indicated this kind of slider i think its fine, gonna change if some more modder will tell me to
00:10:625 (1,2) - Same ^
00:13:178 (1,2) - Same, and this... this isn't an error i think it's only a little difficult for a normal player, is often inserted for the initial part of the map nothing wrong in my opinion
01:06:795 (1,2,3) This is a little difficult for me too dont know what excatly you mean :D

Hard:

AR8... :/ it would be better with AR7 i think ar7 would be overkill - there are too many objects on the screen then
00:38:710 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing for notes differently distant in time constant distance space is 1.1x so i guess its fine

Insane:

Some problems with the spacing, some notes are before very close together and after too far thats the style ^^

P.S. Wow, really nice beatmap :) you have your own style and this for a NEW mapper is very good! Good luck, i hope to have been helpful :? (and sorry for my english :cry: )


Don't worry its your first try modding, so idc ^^ - acutally your mod gave me some ideas so it wasn't useless. Thanks for modding!
posted
hi~

[Easy and Normal]

nothing to say here, everything is perfect o.o

[Hard]

00:35:828 (1) - Remove that unnecessary NC

01:28:328 (6) - You can add a spinner in the end to make it more cool :D

[Insane]

00:10:296 (1) - That NC looks ugly, try to change that like this way: http://puu.sh/dA7En.jpg

00:39:020 (2) - Make that part more jumpy http://puu.sh/dA9ay.jpg and http://puu.sh/dA9ip.jpg

01:10:296 (1,2,3) - Clap

01:11:892 (1,2,3) - ^

01:12:849 (1,2,3) - ^

01:16:998 (1,2,3) - ^

This mod taken me like 30-40 minutes, im new in this place for modding, so please be sincerely with me, dont give kudosu if its a useless mod.
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Insane:

You are going to need 1/8 timing for some fixes

00:00:961 (4) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed

00:23:700 (3) - Move this note away further from the previous note

00:28:647 (2,4) - Move the circle and the end of the slider under the head of this slider 00:27:211 (1) -, adjust 00:29:605 (7) - to fix the overlap

00:32:796 (2,3,4,5) - This should be timed like this (with this circle-slider placement your sliders shouldn't be impaired much)

00:38:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This should be timed like this (maybe use 1/4 sliders for doubles?)

00:43:168 (4) - Make this slider end on the red tick and add an extra note on the now empty blue tick

00:45:243 (7) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed

00:45:562 (2,3) - There should be a note on the blue tick in between

00:46:758 (4) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed

00:55:056 (6,8) - ^

00:58:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should be timed like this


00:59:524 (4,6) - These notes don't land on beats in the song and should be removed

01:14:605 (2) - Make a timing section here to increase the SV by 1.1, the song feels a bit more tense there and the current SV does not underline this

01:27:291 (2,4,6) - These notes don't land on beats in the song and should be removed

Hard:

Only suggestions, don't have much experience in stuff easier than insanes :(

00:05:190 (5,1) - Add a note on the blue tick in between those notes

00:45:562 (2,3) - ^

00:46:520 (1) - Time like this


01:03:115 (1) - Remove NC




Not doing Easy and Normal because I don't know how those have to feel
posted

Ukod wrote:

Insane:

You are going to need 1/8 timing for some fixes

00:00:961 (4) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed keep that in mind

00:23:700 (3) - Move this note away further from the previous note 1.8x ds now

00:28:647 (2,4) - Move the circle and the end of the slider under the head of this slider 00:27:211 (1) -, adjust 00:29:605 (7) - to fix the overlap fixed aesthetic

00:32:796 (2,3,4,5) - This should be timed like this (with this circle-slider placement your sliders shouldn't be impaired much) oh i see, changed it

00:38:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This should be timed like this (maybe use 1/4 sliders for doubles?) that sounds super awesome- added
00:43:168 (4) - Make this slider end on the red tick and add an extra note on the now empty blue tick in additional replaced the slider at the end with 2 more singles

00:45:243 (7) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed fixed

00:45:562 (2,3) - There should be a note on the blue tick in between don't see why i should add a circle here - no drums or anything in the music here

00:46:758 (4) - This note does not land on a beat in the song and should be removed fixed

00:55:056 (6,8) - ^ fixed

00:58:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should be timed like this fixed

00:59:524 (4,6) - These notes don't land on beats in the song and should be removed fixed

01:14:605 (2) - Make a timing section here to increase the SV by 1.1, the song feels a bit more tense there and the current SV does not underline this keep that in mind

01:27:291 (2,4,6) - These notes don't land on beats in the song and should be removed fixed

Hard:

Only suggestions, don't have much experience in stuff easier than insanes :(

00:05:190 (5,1) - Add a note on the blue tick in between those notes think this is not necessary here

00:45:562 (2,3) - ^ ^

00:46:520 (1) - Time like this ok

01:03:115 (1) - Remove NC fixed




Not doing Easy and Normal because I don't know how those have to feel


Thanks for modding, helped alot!
posted

Hakard wrote:

hi~

[Easy and Normal]

nothing to say here, everything is perfect o.o Thanks!

[Hard]

00:35:828 (1) - Remove that unnecessary NC doesnt matter here i guess - like it that way

01:28:328 (6) - You can add a spinner in the end to make it more cool :Dnah, doesnt really fit in my opinion

[Insane]

00:10:296 (1) - That NC looks ugly, try to change that like this way: http://puu.sh/dA7En.jpg same as in the hard diff

00:39:020 (2) - Make that part more jumpy http://puu.sh/dA9ay.jpg and http://puu.sh/dA9ip.jpg already changed that

01:10:296 (1,2,3) - Clap i like to emphasize this one with the drums

01:11:892 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

01:12:849 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

01:16:998 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

This mod taken me like 30-40 minutes, im new in this place for modding, so please be sincerely with me, dont give kudosu if its a useless mod.


Actually your mod gave me a few ideas so wasn't useless at all. Thanks for modding!
posted
choo choo thomas the dank engine has arrived

time for da mods askpiasoyiaa

Hard
Change AR to 8.5
00:16:839 (1) - Make it straighter. http://puu.sh/dApbc.jpg
00:18:275 (1) - Make only this one straighter. Keep the one after it the same. http://puu.sh/dApgn.jpg
00:19:392 (1) - Just reverse it from what it already is. http://puu.sh/dApli.jpg
00:33:434 (4,1) - Just look at the puush. http://puu.sh/dApuN.jpg
00:36:147 (1) - Make the opposite end parallel to the start. http://puu.sh/dApB1.jpg


Insane
00:20:349 (8) - Make it more roundish. http://puu.sh/dAop2.jpg
00:50:668 (3) - Make it straighter, not completely straight. http://puu.sh/dAowE.jpg
00:51:147 (5) - Make it go downwards. It's difficult to see where you put it. Preferrably tilt. http://puu.sh/dAoC0.jpg
00:59:764 (5,1) - Make both straighter slightly. http://puu.sh/dAoH2.jpg
01:01:041 (4) - Make it bendier. If you do do this, you should probs change the stuff after it. http://puu.sh/dAoMH.jpg
posted
Hey there,

Here's my mod as desired on forum:
[Insane]
00:06:147 (5) - Looks a little weird while playing since all other sliders are not that bent, just mentioned that... maybe consider straightening out a bit.

00:32:756 (2) - There is absolutely no additional sound at that point in time, so I would consider removing that one. If it was referring to the double kick, it was too early, what brings me to the next part...

00:32:996 (4) - I don't think this one should be a slider too, since there is no long sound/other sound at the end.
This might be better than what it was before, it is just a suggestion though!

00:33:235 (5) - Needs to be longer to match the second snare,like this

00:15:722 (1) - Consider Ctrl+G on this, because this feels much more comfortable to play after the pattern of jumps already ended in the same direction as this slider is going.

00:25:376 (3) - Is not really necessary, since there isn't a big instrumental thing like a snare in there.

00:48:275 (5,6) - I really feel like you could use more of that pattern in 00:36:147 to 00:54:020

00:50:668 (3) - I think this vocal is short enough to make it a single hitcircle so it wouldn't be that confusing

Keep in mind that those are all only suggestions and feel free to give me some feedback to improve my modding~
Also, sorry for a short mod, but I'm not feeling that well and I think I'm gonna quit Osu for tonight :C
Nice map by the way :):oops:

I would love it though if you could mod my map too, if you like it and you have some time :)
posted

Shrik wrote:

choo choo thomas the dank engine has arrived

time for da mods askpiasoyiaa

Hard
Change AR to 8.5 keep that in mind
00:16:839 (1) - Make it straighter. http://puu.sh/dApbc.jpg would destroy the small blanket
00:18:275 (1) - Make only this one straighter. Keep the one after it the same. http://puu.sh/dApgn.jpg ^
00:19:392 (1) - Just reverse it from what it already is. http://puu.sh/dApli.jpg good idea
00:33:434 (4,1) - Just look at the puush. http://puu.sh/dApuN.jpg good idea
00:36:147 (1) - Make the opposite end parallel to the start. http://puu.sh/dApB1.jpg blanket with 3


Insane
00:20:349 (8) - Make it more roundish. http://puu.sh/dAop2.jpg changed
00:50:668 (3) - Make it straighter, not completely straight. http://puu.sh/dAowE.jpg would destroy the blanket
00:51:147 (5) - Make it go downwards. It's difficult to see where you put it. Preferrably tilt. http://puu.sh/dAoC0.jpg changed
00:59:764 (5,1) - Make both straighter slightly. http://puu.sh/dAoH2.jpg nah, like them this way
01:01:041 (4) - Make it bendier. If you do do this, you should probs change the stuff after it. http://puu.sh/dAoMH.jpg good idea


Thanks for modding!
posted
Yo o/
Sad you don't take extra diff xD Anyway, here's your mod. Everything is just suggestion, of course. (except when I say it's unrankable in order to make your map..ranked).
Thanks to explain when you don't change something.

[Genral]
Your Easy and Normal doesn't have the same Audio preview time than Hard and Insane. Probably because of a new offset.

[Easy]
The diff has a really big density..
  1. 00:16:360 (2) - Basically for an easy diff, you could totally remove this note and extend 00:15:722 (1) - to the current position of (2). Not to mention that it would give more impact on the single tap of those 00:17:317 (3,4,5) - I won't mention this each time. Just so you know you can reduce the density by extending those sliders. (00:10:615 (1) - 00:13:168 (1) - etc.) Just with those 3 I reach 1.73 star rating. (1.5 would be nice).
  2. 00:15:403 (5) - Try to avoid overlap like this as much as possible. It's pretty hard to read. Move it around x340y216


[Normal]
  1. 00:09:339 (3) - Not a big fan of this, I like the symmetry with 00:10:615 (1,2) - But the rythme feels totally different. Try something like this http://puu.sh/dApXu/a9ed388013.jpg
  2. 00:41:254 (5) - Add NC
  3. 00:51:466 (5) - ^
  4. 00:56:573 (1) - Bad flow with 00:55:296 (2) - Try to change 00:54:020 (1,2) - for some wave sliders or something, to create some diversity.
  5. 01:11:892 (4) - Move the middle tick at x128y52 and 01:12:849 (5) - the midle tick at x320 y80 for better flow within this 01:10:296 (2,3,4) -


Some patterns sounds pretty hard for a normal diff but I'm not sure about that, and I kinda like them so I didn't point them out.

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:562 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for better flow
  2. 00:01:839 (1,2) - ^ (maybe)
  3. 00:03:115 (1,2) - ^ (maybe but would be nice)
  4. 00:14:605 (2) - tricky hidden note... But well, I can't say you're not allowed to do it though.
  5. 00:39:658 (2,3) - Maybe you could add some NC on those notes, the way you made the tansition of rythme between 00:38:700 (5,1,2) - is pretty tricky. The NC would make a warning effect.
  6. 00:40:934 (2) - The slow slider feels really slow here xD you could actually change it for a 1/4 slider btw. The way you did is fine though, it's just a suggestion that might even be not that good lol
  7. 00:41:254 (3) - NC to prevent new SV change.
  8. 00:43:168 (2) - It should finish on the previous red tick, you can clearly hear the missing beat.
  9. 00:48:275 (4) - Hidden reverse -> Unrankable
  10. 01:01:041 (3) - Nonononononono. http://puu.sh/dArzg/53494dbb2a.jpg Also, I don't really like the fact that the slider is ending on a strong beat, a player would like to hit that note and your NC here 01:01:839 (1) - doesn't even make that much sense because of it. (doesn't mean you should remove the NC if you want to keep the slider eh!)
  11. 01:11:573 (2,3) - make the DS a bit more constant, you can make a higher one that usual, but make it constant. Would be more smooth I think.
  12. 01:24:020 (1) - ^
  13. 01:14:126 (2) - Extend it to the next blue tick? And add soft sampleset at the end of your slider in any case.


Okay, so the diff is pretty cool, but you still need to work on it. The flow is pretty weird sometimes, and I'm sure you can improve some patterns:
  1. 00:56:573 (1) - The reverse plays weird, but that's still pretty much ok.
  2. 01:15:403 (1,2,3) - So of course this is playable, but the slider totally breaks the flow.
  3. 01:18:275 (2,3) - Doesn't really look nice. And the flow isn't that good neither. http://puu.sh/dAsof/929813afc6.jpg <- As example.


Well, as I said, the diff isn't bad, there's also some good things in it, but those kind of things needs to be improved.

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  1. 00:12:530 (5,6) - You could Add NC to prevent the new DS~
  2. 00:17:637 (4,5) - ^ (but those could be ok, would just be for constancy I guess).
  3. 00:24:498 (7) - Ctrl+J for better flow
  4. 00:28:966 (4) - you could Ctrl+H for better flow as well.
  5. 00:31:360 (3) - Ctrl+H ^
  6. 00:31:679 (4) - Citrl+H ^
  7. 00:33:474 - You're missing a note here
  8. 00:39:977 (7,8) - Same rythme as 00:40:615 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/dAt1c/6fdbdbd8f0.jpg and add NC on 00:39:977 (7) - since it's actually a new rythme.
  9. 01:09:020 (6) - Not a big fan of this shape. http://puu.sh/dAte0/74880429a8.jpg
  10. 01:14:126 (5) - Extend to next blue tick with soft sampleset at the end
  11. 01:14:445 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could change this single note for a 1/4 slider
  12. 01:14:924 (3) - ^ (same goes for the other part if you like the idea).
  13. 01:22:424 (2) - .. Avoid those 90% angle x) http://puu.sh/dAtsX/9ba88271c3.jpg
  14. 01:24:339 (2) - Reduce to the previous blue tick and add soft sampleset at the end. then add a note here 01:24:658 - with a NC then remove 01:24:817 (1) - this nc x)
  15. 01:25:296 (3) - Just a suggestion as well but you could also extend this slider to the next blue tick to make a reminder of 01:24:339 (2) -
  16. 01:25:615 (4) - add nc (especially if you did the point just above).


That's pretty cool. The flow is way better than the hard diff even if I pointed out a few things it's still pretty good. You'll get this diff with a few mods. It's already pretty good.

Well... that's it. Nice set, but you still need to work on it a bit. The song is pretty good too by the way xD.
Poke me if you have any question.
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19:42 Saut: yo, got some time/motivation for a short mod/m4m?
19:44 Squigly: depends
19:44 Squigly: what be the map?
19:47 Squigly: and by that i mean np it ;w;
19:49 Saut: sorry haven't seen the chat notification
19:49 *Saut is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/555651 SiM - EXiSTENCE (TV Edit) [Insane]]
19:49 Squigly: lol
19:50 Squigly: its all good
19:50 Saut: ofc you can deny modding this if you dislike the song/map
19:50 Squigly: ill take a look in a moment
19:50 Squigly: c:
19:55 Saut: ok, great
20:19 Squigly: hm
20:19 Squigly: i dunno if i want to mod it
20:19 Squigly: its a good map
20:19 Squigly: i have a lot of other requests to be frank im sorry to disapoint
20:19 Squigly: if your map had more issues that i could find then i would definetly invest in helping you
20:19 Squigly: but i dont like to interfere with a mappers style
20:19 Squigly: one thing i can suggest though
20:20 Squigly: 00:19:551 (4) - the sound from here to the red tick could be a slider if you wanted to but im sure you already knew that
20:20 Squigly: there are probably other instances of this
20:21 Squigly: 00:21:147 (2) - instead of making this a slider i would keep it as a single note
20:21 Squigly: sounds better to me
20:22 Squigly: you could space this more from the slider 00:23:381 (1) -
20:22 Saut: yea i know thats the reason why i probably gonna remap the diff
20:22 Squigly: and then create a triangle from this pattern
20:22 Squigly: would fit well with the small pattern after the slider
20:22 Squigly: its not that bad tho
20:22 Squigly: i think it is rather neat
20:22 Saut: often set an object / hit where nothing in the music is
20:23 Squigly: yeah
20:23 Squigly: you can fix those things though c:
20:23 Squigly: it is nothig too serious
20:23 Squigly: this song is sweet
20:23 Saut: anyways
20:23 Saut: thanks for small mod! And have a nice day
20:24 Squigly: wait
20:24 Squigly: im not done
20:24 Squigly: i guess i am modding it nvm
20:24 Squigly: 00:38:940 (2,3) -
20:24 Saut: oh
20:24 Squigly: why not change this small slider into
20:24 Squigly: a note on the blue tick
20:24 Squigly: and a slider to the red tick
20:24 Squigly: from the white
20:25 Saut: though this fits better
20:25 Saut: but i was struggeling with this part
20:25 Squigly: if you get rid of these sliders
20:25 Saut: same goes for this 00:32:637 (1,2,3,4,1) -
20:25 Squigly: and make them notes and then longer sliders
20:25 Squigly: then it would fit better
20:25 Squigly: because there is more stress on the note that is diminishing after the white tick
20:26 Squigly: ohhhhh
20:26 Squigly: this is mistimed i think
20:26 Squigly: yeah that part is 1/4
20:26 Squigly: 00:32:756 (2) - delete that
20:26 Squigly: hm
20:27 Squigly: strange
20:27 Squigly: let me look at this a bit more
20:27 Squigly: its very awkward
20:27 Saut: yep
20:27 Squigly: wait
20:27 Squigly: 00:32:956 (3) -
20:27 Squigly: make that a single note
20:27 Squigly: and not a slider
20:27 Squigly: on the white tick
20:28 Saut: still weird
20:29 Squigly: 00:33:222 (4) - turn on 1/6, make the head of the slider on the 1/6 right next to the white tick
20:29 Squigly: and the slider end on the red tick
20:29 Squigly: 00:32:796 (2) - this slider is a 1/4 on the red to blue tick
20:29 Squigly: it plays great if you do all of this
20:29 Squigly: hm
20:29 Squigly: i hear that
20:30 Squigly: thats because it is multiple drums though i think
20:30 Squigly: hold on
20:30 Squigly: like, if you wanted to map that part EXACTLY to the song
20:30 Squigly: it would be a 1/12
20:31 Squigly: but that would be impossible to play
20:31 Saut: wow
20:31 Squigly: its too small of a slider, so just stick with the white tick, no one will play it badly because it works well enough
20:31 Saut: ill leave it to 1/6
20:31 Squigly: noooo
20:31 Saut: oh wasnt talking bout that
20:31 Squigly: it sounds awkward if you make this note 00:32:929 (3) - a 1/6
20:31 Squigly: oh
20:31 Squigly: which one then?
20:32 Saut: though you ment 00:33:222 (4) -
20:32 Squigly: oh no
20:32 Squigly: that is a 1/6 you silly c:
20:32 Squigly: i said that ;x;
20:32 Squigly: but the slider end ends on a 1/4
20:32 Squigly: on the red tick
20:32 Saut: and thats the reason i said ill leave it to 1/6 :D
20:33 Squigly: you know, this sounds better on 1/16 but dont do that LOL
20:33 Squigly: actually it might not make much of a difference
20:33 Squigly: since it is barely moved
20:33 Squigly: it will just sound better
20:33 Squigly: up to you on that
20:35 Squigly: this map is cool
20:35 Saut: thanks, means alot
20:35 Squigly: do you have anything ranked?
20:35 Saut: nop
20:35 Squigly: if i was bat i would definetly help you with this
20:36 Saut: sweet ^^
20:36 Squigly: but im not
20:36 Squigly: lol
20:36 Saut: lost motivation ranking this one
20:36 Saut: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/229402#
20:37 Squigly: thats all i am willing to do with a mod at this hour
20:37 Squigly: i hope it was good c:


i think this map is really unique and has a great chance of being a sweet map to be ranked with a few mods fixing some things, i saw them but i am too tired to do much more today, gl with the set i might be able to help later on c:
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