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Lissette

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Lissette 2014-12-20T22:18:21+00:00

[General]
This map with a pattern of drum sounds would be awesome, I think would fit really well.
Also I think timing is kinda off, trying getting someone to help you with it.

[Sleighs]
00:15:058 (1) - better not starting the spinner so fast after the note so it doesn't appear while you still at the prev slider body, also would be cool if you use some drum sounds on this
00:31:397 (7) - Remove note? Feels like is not needed here, if you do please fix spacing
00:41:790 (3,4) - sounds better if you remove 4 and longer 3 until where 4 was
00:59:804 (2,3) - Sounds better if you remove 3 and start 2 at 01:00:035 -
01:28:903 (1) - This jump felt weird while playing, I suggest to reduce it a bit
02:10:319 (1) - Same as the other one

[Normal]
00:02:067 (1,2) - 00:08:072 - 00:09:919 - (And the other like this one) Sounds a bit weird because you are ingnoring the piano here, then again would play to repetitive, just letting you know it felt a bit weird while playing
00:03:915 (1,2,3,4) - It would look good if you keep the same curve on these sliders, just a suggestion tho, cuz is a personal taste
00:05:531 - Add note here, maybe?
00:14:076 - if you add a note here will feel better while playing since is a harder beat here, if you do start spinner a bit later, of course
00:30:704 (4) - I would remove this note
00:42:483 (1,2,1) - Would be nice if you use this typo of hitsounds more even among the diff
01:15:970 - 01:37:910 - Be careful not going in circles around the screen for too long because will turn boring
01:41:836 - 02:09:550 - This part is really nice, and sliders are pretty <3
Combos in this diff are a bit messy, some are really short, some are longer, try to follow a pattern with the combos, for example: Follow the vocals, follow the music, place them every x number of beats, etc.

[Easy]
Take a look at combos here too.
Nice one.

Good luck~!

Birdy

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Birdy 2014-12-21T00:35:09+00:00

Lissette wrote:
[General]
This map with a pattern of drum sounds would be awesome, I think would fit really well. - Was supposed to try before, too, will try to remember it this time.
Also I think timing is kinda off, trying getting someone to help you with it. - Possibly. I'll see what can be done.

[Sleighs]
00:15:058 (1) - better not starting the spinner so fast after the note so it doesn't appear while you still at the prev slider body, also would be cool if you use some drum sounds on this - Alright.
00:31:397 (7) - Remove note? Feels like is not needed here, if you do please fix spacing - The thing is that I want to keep both this and the following white tick, as the vocal lands on this one and obviously the beat is on the white tick.
00:41:790 (3,4) - sounds better if you remove 4 and longer 3 until where 4 was - Indeed it does.
00:59:804 (2,3) - Sounds better if you remove 3 and start 2 at 01:00:035 - No, thanks.
01:28:903 (1) - This jump felt weird while playing, I suggest to reduce it a bit - Done.
02:10:319 (1) - Same as the other one - Yeah, fixed.

[Normal]
00:02:067 (1,2) - 00:08:072 - 00:09:919 - (And the other like this one) Sounds a bit weird because you are ingnoring the piano here, then again would play to repetitive, just letting you know it felt a bit weird while playing - Keeping it how it is.
00:03:915 (1,2,3,4) - It would look good if you keep the same curve on these sliders, just a suggestion tho, cuz is a personal taste - Yeah, for me it's enough to keep (1) with (2) the same, and (3) with (4).
00:05:531 - Add note here, maybe? - Sure.
00:14:076 - if you add a note here will feel better while playing since is a harder beat here, if you do start spinner a bit later, of course - Replaced the entire spinner with three circles.
00:30:704 (4) - I would remove this note - Replaced the previous one with a slider ending here.
00:42:483 (1,2,1) - Would be nice if you use this typo of hitsounds more even among the diff - I'm a lazy hitsounder ;__;
01:15:970 - 01:37:910 - Be careful not going in circles around the screen for too long because will turn boring - oh
01:41:836 - 02:09:550 - This part is really nice, and sliders are pretty <3 - Thanks~
Combos in this diff are a bit messy, some are really short, some are longer, try to follow a pattern with the combos, for example: Follow the vocals, follow the music, place them every x number of beats, etc. - I'll try.

[Easy]
Take a look at combos here too.
Nice one.

Good luck~!

Thanks!

Lust

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Lust 2014-12-22T16:04:39+00:00

yeah thats bro

10:39 Static Noise Bird: re-reminding about my kurisumappu, because I'm definitely not able to come online tomorrow (travelling and stuff), and by a chance neither in the next 8 days
10:39 Lust: holy shit yo
10:39 Lust: lets do it now
10:39 Static Noise Bird: oh alrighto
10:41 Lust: 00:42:483 (4,2) - find a different place to put 4 or angle 2 somewhere else since 4 obsctructs 2's repeat until its just about to be played
10:42 Static Noise Bird: sure
10:45 Lust: 00:53:799 (7,1) - shorten the distance between these two, you hardly ever go for a spacing of this magnitude and imo it doesnt really fit for this kind of song
10:45 Lust: since 1 is on a completely opposite corner to 7 it might be difficult to notice as well
10:48 Static Noise Bird: done
10:49 Lust: OD 5.5 for the sleigh diff, and OD 3.5 for a more natural difficulty progression
10:49 Lust: a slower song like this with a high od will just make it awkward imo
10:52 Static Noise Bird: assuming OD 3.5 is for Normal, fixed both diffs
10:52 Static Noise Bird: yeah I guess that makes sense
10:52 Lust: yeah for the normal sorry haha
10:52 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/553076 Birdy - White Winter Hymnal [Normal]]
10:53 Lust: 00:17:540 (2,3) - the spacing between these are a bit large
10:53 Lust: keep your consistent 1.30x spacing
10:53 Static Noise Bird: I thought it makes sense for the sake of readability, but alright
10:53 Lust: 01:06:732 (3,4) - too close, just move it up and then arrange the slider end so it fits the 1.30x spacing scheme you have
10:54 Lust: you'd be surprised haha
10:55 Static Noise Bird: fixed both sections now
10:55 Lust: 01:53:845 (2,3) - meh i think you can scoot by with this one
10:56 Static Noise Bird: wha
10:57 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/554955 Birdy - White Winter Hymnal [Easy]]
10:57 Lust: 00:50:104 (1,2) - small spacing error, just scoot 2 up a bit
10:58 Static Noise Bird: I see, fixed
10:58 Lust: 01:01:189 (1,2) - same here, i know you have a pattern going on but for the lowest diff for the sake of consistency and playability might as well fix it
10:59 Static Noise Bird: b-but
10:59 Lust: ye i know
11:00 Lust: 01:52:921 - poorly placed break but idk i guess its fine for noobs to have a break
11:01 Static Noise Bird: and now it's perfectly spaced while still keeping the design
11:01 Static Noise Bird: and yeah I wasn't sure about that break either, even though I kind of still like it
11:01 Static Noise Bird: which is why I was waiting for someone to point it out l0l
11:01 Static Noise Bird: if it's fine though, I'd like to keep it
11:01 Lust: alright

What we fixed:

An obscured repeat in the Sleighs difficulty
Shortened the spacing between two notes in the Sleighs difficulty
Lowered the ODs for the Normal and Sleighs difficulties
Fixed various spacings in the Easy and Normal difficulties

Post in the thread when you are satisfied

Birdy

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Birdy 2014-12-22T16:13:24+00:00

Yeha.

Updated, along with additional minor changes to Normal.

Lust

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Lust 2014-12-22T16:18:22+00:00

Bubbled!

Birdy

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Birdy 2014-12-22T16:18:54+00:00

O man.

It's my first bubble since 2013 spring.

Thanks!

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-12-23T05:54:13+00:00

hello~

[

General]

AudioLeadIn: 2000
The start of song is a little early, and it doesn't give a margin to the player, so please try to set the AudioLeadIn.

[

Easy]

AR+1? I think AR2 is too low.

[

Normal]

AR+1?
00:42:483 (1,2,3) - These drum sound are strange. You should remove these.
00:45:716 (4,5) - Hmm...this rhythm is really hard, and beginner players will probably get confused. Therefore i'd like to recommend that you remove two circles and add the slider as shown in the figure below.
image
00:55:878 (3,4,5) - I'd like to recommend that you change to the repeat slider for beginner players.
image
01:35:138 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:42:483 (1,2,3).
01:38:141 (1) - clap is missing.
01:55:693 (3) - fix the spacing.

[

Hard]

00:14:538 (5) - Move to x:96 y:312 in order to create a triangular. Also i think this flow is better than now.
00:15:000 (1) - Remove a drum sound. It is unnecessary in your hitsound pattern.
02:07:471 (x) - Add a circle.
02:10:473 (1) - It must be the same as the other diffs.

call me back when you are ready~ :3

Birdy

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Birdy 2014-12-23T14:19:38+00:00

Gamu wrote:
hello~

[ General]
AudioLeadIn: 2000
The start of song is a little early, and it doesn't give a margin to the player, so please try to set the AudioLeadIn. - Yup. Added this.

[ Easy]
AR+1? I think AR2 is too low. - Nah, it's fine.

[ Normal]
AR+1? - Fair enough.
00:42:483 (1,2,3) - These drum sound are strange. You should remove these. - Yeah, thanks. Forgot the remnants of my experimentations there.
00:45:716 (4,5) - Hmm...this rhythm is really hard, and beginner players will probably get confused. Therefore i'd like to recommend that you remove two circles and add the slider as shown in the figure below. - It's fine for a Normal, though.
image
00:55:878 (3,4,5) - I'd like to recommend that you change to the repeat slider for beginner players. - Again, should be just fine for a Normal diff.
image
01:35:138 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:42:483 (1,2,3). - Removed.
01:38:141 (1) - clap is missing. - Added.
01:55:693 (3) - fix the spacing. - I thought it was fine, but sure, since the fixing wasn't that difficult after all.

[ Hard]
00:14:538 (5) - Move to x:96 y:312 in order to create a triangular. Also i think this flow is better than now. - Yeah, thanks.
00:15:000 (1) - Remove a drum sound. It is unnecessary in your hitsound pattern. - Whoops, fixed.
02:07:471 (x) - Add a circle. - Eh, sure.
02:10:473 (1) - It must be the same as the other diffs. - Again, another silly error. Fixed.

call me back when you are ready~ :3

Thanks~

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-12-23T17:08:43+00:00

Recheck time:

<Normal diff>

・00:28:857 (1) - About the spacing, it would be better to have fixed, so 00:27:933 (5) - move to x:244 y:68?
・00:45:485 (4) - It can lead to mistakes of the rhythm if you ignore this powerful piano sound. Therefore i'd like to recommend that you add a circle here. In addition, 00:45:716 (5,6) - Please replace to the 1/2 slider. 1/2 slider is better than two circles. I really think so.

image

<Hard diff>

・00:15:000 (1) - I think clap sound is strange, so remove it.
・02:10:473 (1) - About the end point, it must end 02:13:245 in order to be the same as the other diffs.

I will give you the rank after fixed these

Last edited by Gamu 2014-12-23T17:32:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Birdy

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Birdy 2014-12-23T17:19:35+00:00

All fixed.

I thought I had fixed the spinner error (like I even mentioned in the previous reply), but apparently it keeps not saving properly. Should be fixed finally.

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-12-23T18:15:15+00:00

Everything looks good :3

Qualified!