1. Another (4,78 stars, 468 notes)
2. Hyper (3,3 stars, 327 notes)
3. Standard (1,78 stars, 223 notes)

5. Melody

---> Full, remapped version here! Nicer, harder than this! <---

1. AR and OD -0,5/1 since it's the easiest diff in this mapset.
2. 00:34:568 (2) - I suggest you to finish this slider here 00:35:257 -
3. 00:43:533 (4,5) - It's the easiest diff, make it easier! Why not to replace these circles with a slider?
4. 00:55:257 (1) - Reverce the slider this way to make a better flow with 00:56:292 (2) -
5. 02:04:912 (6) - Bend it to the other side?

1. 01:11:119 (2,3,4,5) - Ya can make this jump a bit another way. Example (using "Create polygon circles, ofc; slider is random).

1. I don't see any reasons to keep those 2 breaks in the beginning. HP will recover in some seconds, there's no problem with HP, imo. Delete them, please, they doesn't make sense.
2. 01:24:223 (1) - NC?
3. 02:04:223 (1,2,3) - Make distance between them the same.
4. 02:23:533 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:05:602 (1,3) - This overlap doesn't looks nice, you can improve it!
6. 02:22:154 (1,3) - Improve the stack?

1. If you customized the diffs like "Hyper" and "Another", then "Normal" should be renamed by "Advanced", or hardest diffs should be named "Hard" and "Insane". Think about it, I think there should be consistency between diff names.
2. Add Kazuya-sama in tags, you should know why.
3. 02:00:085 - Why not kiai here but yes here 02:11:119? It's chorus I guess. Consider starting kiai here (but keep the other one, ofc).

1. Increase OD and HP until 4 to make a better balanced-spread between diffs.
2. 00:52:154 (5) - Maybe you could curve a bit this slider to improve the flow, something like this would look better if you ask me. Not a big difference, but I personally think will improve the pattern a bit, like you did here 00:53:533 (3,4).
3. 00:53:878 (4) - Curve this slider following the next note, same reason as before.
4. 01:17:326 (1) - Keep the consistency please, if you've been adding NC each two stanzas then remove this one (Check this in all cases).

1. 00:24:050 (3,1) - You can improve the blanket between them, just move 00:24:912 (1) - a bit down (and if it's necessary fix DS with 00:25:602 (2)).
2. 00:53:878 (4) - If you add NC each stanza then here should be another one. But in case you started adding NC each two stanzas since here 00:49:740 (1), then remove this one 00:51:119 (1). Anyway, check it, in all cases if it's possible.
3. 01:12:844 (7,8) - Bad spacing, move (8) until x:116 y:340. Jumps are good but you should always try to keep the spacing if it's Hard instead of Insane.
4. 01:20:085 (4,1) - Orz, I don't know if this is allowed, I mean, it shouldn't be a problem, but it's a bit confusing imo...
5. 01:49:050 (7) - You missed a NC here.
6. 02:03:533 (1,3) - Swap NC.
7. 02:12:844 (2) - In case you wanted to use symmetry, this needs to be a bit improved, for 1 grid I guess.

1. Increase OD until 7 and HP until 7, these settings makes the diff a bit easier, and this one can be a more difficult challenge, at least for me.
2. 01:06:292 (1,4) - !nazi - Fix this stack. Not a big problem, but players will be thankful.
3. 01:13:533 (2) - Ctrl+G to improve the flow?
4. 01:49:050 (1) - You totally broke the flow here, add Ctrl+G and pattern will look better imo.
5. 01:55:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Hm... Maybe the NC combination looks bad, I suggest to add NC each white line.
6. 02:15:257 (1,2,3) - This looks really bad if you ask me, you were making patterns which have more spacing and this looks a bit sudden, try something different (the same goes to 02:23:533 (1,2,3)).

cmn_891127 wrote:

I am from your M4M queue, but I cannot find anything to mod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful map!

1. Let me know if I'm wrong, but I guess offset would be set to 2839.

1. 00:23:533 (5) - A bit imperfect blanketing. Maybe move the 2nd point in this slider to (X=136 | Y=216) and the 3rd point to (X=143 | Y=306)?
2. There are some moments when I think you could use a bit curved sliders (with red point) because some of the accurate are a bit too plane for me. What I mean: you could make them similar to 01:46:981 (2) - this one, since now it's the only 1 slider like this in the Standard diff, so you can make some more like this. Some of them:
   
   1. 00:41:464 (1) -
   2. 00:45:602 (4) -
   3. 01:35:947 (2) -
3. 00:43:533 (4) - This one does not blanket the previous object as good as it's possible. Also consider making this and another 00:44:050 (1) - note the same (you know, copy&paste) so they keep looking so cute and symmetrical. o3o
4. 02:15:602 (5) - The idea of making this slider is very cool in my opinion, but how about using CTRL + H to make and moving it to the same start point? If you don't understand my mumble -> *CLICK ME* So I think it just could improve the flow a bit.
5. 02:19:395 (1,3) - The ending of the slider and 3 the circle are not at the same level. Make them perfectly symmetrical.

1. Well, this Hard is pretty... hard! Consider to set OD5 so it's not too hard to FC it.
2. 00:46:119 (4,1) - I know it can be hard because of the DS, but maybe try to make them more blanket? For example put the 2nd point in the slider to (X=272 | Y=128) and the 3rd to (X=301 | Y=20). And 00:46:981 (1) - would be placed at (X=429 | Y=110) I believe.
3. 01:05:947 (3) - Maybe CTRL + G, because I think it will flow better. #KrfawyStyle *runs*
4. 01:55:947 (5) - Lower this circle a bit so this will look like the angle is a consistant as the sliders do. I think it will look more proffesional and flow will be improved.
5. 02:09:740 (1) - Move the first red point to (X=200 | Y=172) so it is more symmetrical.

1. Hmmm... just wondering if you could set HP8 so it will be more tricky since this Insa-I mean Another is perfect for being tricky.
2. 00:13:874 (1) - I don't like how it works to be honest... I don't know if you agree, but I guess something like that would work better -> *CLICK ME because now the flow and the construction do not play well for me and I think you would use something more like-a-symmetry-style because I guess you like this style.
3. 00:46:981 (1) - Nazi thing again, don't kill me ;w; So it is at X=201 when 00:46:119 (6) - this slider is at X=200. A small difference, but still...
4. 01:33:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This heart is pure beauty! *o*
5. 01:49:050 (1) - Again - I think this slider can be improved a bit.

Kazuya wrote:

Hyper

Fixed "all", except:

01:20:085 (4,1) - Orz, I don't know if this is allowed, I mean, it shouldn't be a problem, but it's a bit confusing imo...
I think good surprise. x'D

Hi! Really fun map so far, the streams flow great

Also about mod, I was going to do it right now but I'll wait until after you update again!

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Kazuya~ Ye I know I'm late >.< (soooo lazy uguu~)

- General :

1. I'm afraid SR between different diff is a little high and force you to do an other diff. Check it with a BAT.

wiki wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

1. Colours (3) and (4) are too similar. Can you make them differ a little more? Example.
   Note: you can just poke me if you need the code.
2. 02:00:085 - This part also feels like a kiai for me. I'm pretty sure you've forgotten to put a kiai here.

1. The diff is the easiest, so I would suggest reducing all settings by 1 or a least by 0,5. It will increase playability a lot.
2. 00:16:637 (3,4) - mind removing (4) and adding a repeat to (3)? It will make the rhythm easier and make rhythm more consistent. Example
3. 00:22:154 (4) - either add a new combo here or remove one from 00:27:671 (1) - in order to keep consistency in comboing.
4. 00:59:565 - the beat changes its sound at 00:59:395 - and havng a clickable object here would be great. Replace the repeat with a circle? Example
   Note: 01:11:464 (3) - same as above.
5. 01:49:740 (3) - in order to avoid a tricky 3/2 transition, you can map the beat at 01:50:257 - a simple circle will do. But a pattern like two 1/2 sliders should work, too
   
   Well mapped. I don't have much to say.

1. 00:04:568 (5,7) - feels overmapped. I believe that this part of the music was intended to be relaxing, so it's better if you remove these hitobjects. :c
2. 00:50:430 (2,4) - isn't x2.6 jump is too big for the diff? I would try to keep DS under x2.3 to keep the set balanced. If you're unsure, get some testplayers' opinions, first.
3. 01:24:137 (7) -this is the only 1/4 triplet in this part, it feels really random and unexpected. Can you remove the circle on the blue tick t keep things more consistent?
4. 01:38:706 (2) - the slider is placed too high, can we move it down a little? I am pretty sure it gets overlapped with the scores on 4:3 displays.
5. 02:21:464 (3,4) - I guess they are supposed to be 1/6 (as 1/3 doubles and plays as 1/6.) But both 1/6 and 1/8 sliders are too fast for a Hyper and might hurt the balance. Can we replace them with simple 1/3s? Examples
   
   I'd get a little more work on rhythm of the diff, but it is fine overall. ъ

1. 01:11:809 (1,2) - the music gets kinda calm here and the 1/1 gap represents it. The jump here feels exaggerated.
   Note: 01:35:947 (3,4) - same.
2. 02:12:384 (5,1) - the transition feels sorta forced, try a pattern like this or do something else if you agree that the pattern can get better.
3. 02:21:464 (5,6) - I'd say that it's 1/6. Howevrer, I recommend to get someone to confirm it.
   
   That's pretty much it. Nice ejob on this one!

It might need like 2-3 more mods (or 1 quality mod), then you're free to call me back if you'd like to.

1. Combo colours in Another are a little different. Please keep the same colours in all diffs, that's a important.
2. You have a missed skin elements.
   
   1. spinner-glow.png
3. Your spinner-background.png s just 1x1 file. Are you sure that you want to keep it that way?

1. Set AR to 4,5. It will look slightly better and it fits better for the easiest diff of the set.
2. 01:08:361 (2,3,4) - some players may mistakenly hit 94) too early, can we use a pattern like this, maybe?
3. 01:35:947 (2) - minor - can we rotate it a little, so it'd look neater? Example

1. 00:25:602 (2,3) - are you sure about the jump here? I would say that it is quite exaggerated. Reducing DS here might be a good idea.
2. 00:42:671 (3) - I am pretty sure that there should be a whistle on its head. There is a whistle on Standard and Another. So, replace the clap with a whistle.
3. 01:02:844 (2,3) - minor - curve on them makes your flow a little unnatural. How about this?
4. 01:20:085 (4,1) - try to unstack them a little, so, players will be able to notice (1) in time. Example
5. 01:24:137 (7) - think about it one more time, please. I highly recomend you to remove it since this is the ONLY triplet in the whole diff.
6. 01:43:533 - a strong drum hit is ignored here, are you sure that you want to kleep it that way?

1. 01:15:602 (5,6,1) - a sudden jump-stack transition might trick players. I would avoid the stack, if its possible.
2. 01:38:016 (1) - overmapped. Please think about replacing it with an 1/1 slider.

Your spinner-background.png s just 1x1 file. Are you sure that you want to keep it that way?

Desperate-kun wrote:

Good job!