1. Easy (1.54 stars, 164 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 630 notes)
3. Normal (4.08 stars, 325 notes)

General:

It lacked kiai, since this song really needs at least one. Adding kiai to all diffs would be a good idea, but that's up to the mapper.

Easy:

Make the hitcircles bigger, since it's an easy.
02:54:293~03:01:117 - Isn't this a little hard for an easy? I would recommend making them closer on two squares on grid level 2, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4572

Hard:

01:32:396 (4) - I won't say this slider in a 0.5x don't fit the song, but the problem is that it's hard to see it coming. My suggestion would be to use the same thing here in (8).
02:22:741 (9) - New combo.

FuukoLover wrote:

General:
It lacked kiai, since this song really needs at least one. Adding kiai to all diffs would be a good idea, but that's up to the mapper.
All of my Children maps don't have Kiais.

Easy:
Make the hitcircles bigger, since it's an easy.
Same as every Children maps.
02:54:293~03:01:117 - Isn't this a little hard for an easy? I would recommend making them closer on two squares on grid level 2, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4572
Fixed.

Hard:
01:32:396 (4) - I won't say this slider in a 0.5x don't fit the song, but the problem is that it's hard to see it coming. My suggestion would be to use the same thing here in (8).
X
02:22:741 (9) - New combo.
Fixed.

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
[Easy]
- Circle Size: -1 ?
X
01:14:982 (4) - move this note to 01:14:810 - sound better.. for me =.=
X
02:23:775 (1) - maybe end this spinner at 02:25:500
X
02:54:293 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - แปลกๆ.. บอกเฉยๆ >_<
- -"
03:34:293 (1) - try sound Whislte
Tried.

[Normal]
- Circle Size: -1 ?
X
01:14:465 (6) - maybe end this silder at 01:15:155 sound better.. for me
X
02:24:034 (1) - maybe end this spinner at 02:25:500
X
03:20:413 (1) - look short for me, maybe make it like [Hard] end at 03:21:706.. =3=
X
คนอื่นจะมองว่าโน๊ตตัวต่อไปกดยากไหม แต่ที่จริงทำสปินยาวๆไม่ได้แปลว่าจะต้องสปินให้หมดนี่เนอะ. Orz
Auto เกิน 3,000 ยังไงก็ผ่าน :3
03:34:293 (1) - try sound Whislte
Tried

[Hard]
02:24:034 (1) - maybe end this spinner at 02:25:500
X

Thunderstorm wrote:

[Easy]
Overall
Make hitcircles larger, it's easy after all.
Recheck spacing on whole map and make it consistent, since it's easy.
I don't post following issues, 'cuz it almost on whole map (lvl 3 greed used)
Everything is fine.

[Normal]
01:53:948 (1) - spacing
X
Ok, new combo here, but don't spacing on easy and normal difficulties must be consistent?
No.
02:18:086 (4) - ^
X
03:20:413 (1) (spinner) - i think, it too short for such diff
X

Leorda wrote:

[Easy]
Circle Side must be level 1, since this is an easy mode. If you don't, give me a reason, why you don't change it?
See my old "The Children" maps, they're the answers.

[Hard]
02:11:706 (7) - New combo
Fixed.
02:37:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - The combo are too long, crop it?!
Fixed.