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Aretheus

Joined June 2014

Aretheus 2014-10-30T21:27:39+00:00

I'm not a modder so I'm sorry that I can't quite help you but I favourited the beatmap cuz I like yours out of the other maps for this song

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-10-31T04:03:00+00:00

Aretheus wrote:
I'm not a modder so I'm sorry that I can't quite help you but I favourited the beatmap cuz I like yours out of the other maps for this song

thank you >.< it is my pleasure that you can have fun with my map

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-11-01T01:48:34+00:00

M4M here

[Easy]
00:37:811 (1,2,3,4) - 倒是没啥必要短链单点就好

[Normal]
00:20:748 - 加nont,hrfl的时候这边坑了我加note好接

00:23:373 - ^

00:26:561 (2,3) - 搞折返，hrfl我这点了50，和后面5照应

00:37:811 (1,3) - 都延长1/4

01:04:811 (1,2,3) - 差flow，

01:06:873 - 加个note？反正这里很不顺，总觉得少什么

01:15:311 (4) - 可删，Normal跟歌完全可以，这个多余

01:24:311 (5,6) - blanket,其实我最讨厌说blanket的惹

[Hard]

00:06:498 (2,3) - blanket

00:08:936 (5,6) - 正确的节奏是把5删了6拉前，何况长白线在滑条中间有音没滑条点听后会让人很困

囧

00:10:811 (1,2,3,1) - 12你可以考虑单点+滑条，折返不好，参考后面31

00:13:248 (3,4,5) - flow好差试试

SPOILER

00:34:436 (2) - 我是觉得没必要蓝线结尾就算你说拉长音，但在红线已经没惹

[Insane]
00:02:373 (3,1) - 叠好

00:03:311 (2,4) - same^

00:08:373 (3,1) - ^

00:07:061 (5) - 不喜欢这个折返，打起来不顺，拆滑条+单点，试试

SPOILER

00:36:217 (8) - 根本没音，

01:19:436 (5,1,2,3,4) - 打了下发现这边很突然地就跳走了，莫名，建议选中1234 ctrl+j

加油

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-11-01T05:25:55+00:00

哦草这也能写论文，fuel
~~哈哈等不及了吧~~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-02T07:58:22+00:00

Flandre_ErMei wrote:
M4M here

[Easy]
00:37:811 (1,2,3,4) - 倒是没啥必要短链单点就好这里节奏其实没用好应该用长滑条的，但是当时没想好，这里这个音貌似好像是压着鼓的我也不太确定

[Normal]
00:20:748 - 加nont,hrfl的时候这边坑了我加note好接我跟的人声，不加

00:23:373 - ^

00:26:561 (2,3) - 搞折返，hrfl我这点了50，和后面5照应

00:37:811 (1,3) - 都延长1/4这样滑条和下一个note之间间隔就会变得很奇怪了，而且压蓝线本来就不科学

01:04:811 (1,2,3) - 差flow，

01:06:873 - 加个note？反正这里很不顺，总觉得少什么没感觉

01:15:311 (4) - 可删，Normal跟歌完全可以，这个多余先保留

01:24:311 (5,6) - blanket,其实我最讨厌说blanket的惹

[Hard]

00:06:498 (2,3) - blanket

00:08:936 (5,6) - 正确的节奏是把5删了6拉前，何况长白线在滑条中间有音没滑条点听后会让人很困感觉还好

囧

00:10:811 (1,2,3,1) - 12你可以考虑单点+滑条，折返不好，参考后面31感觉没必要啊。。

00:13:248 (3,4,5) - flow好差试试你这个滑条会和之前一个滑条凑在一起啊，ar低的情况下很难看得，不过还是改了一下
SPOILER

00:34:436 (2) - 我是觉得没必要蓝线结尾就算你说拉长音，但在红线已经没惹感觉没事.-.为什么蓝线结尾我也不知道，改起来太麻烦了先保留

[Insane]
00:02:373 (3,1) - 叠好这是叠好的啊不是手动移的，是他自己对齐的

00:03:311 (2,4) - same^

00:08:373 (3,1) - ^

00:07:061 (5) - 不喜欢这个折返，打起来不顺，拆滑条+单点，试试这个滑条会和00:08:373 (3) - 叠起来啊
SPOILER

00:36:217 (8) - 根本没音，有个chi的音啊，满明显的

01:19:436 (5,1,2,3,4) - 打了下发现这边很突然地就跳走了，莫名，建议选中1234 ctrl+j感觉太近了

加油

谢谢你的mod

Sellenite wrote:
哦草这也能写论文，fuel
~~哈哈等不及了吧~~

一拳打爆

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2014-11-06T16:48:18+00:00

I didn't forget to mod this! Will post it sometime today~~~

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2014-11-07T03:44:44+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Easy

00:01:627 (2) - try curving it more to make it look nicer
SPOILER
00:46:440 (1) - move to 00:46:815 - (don't shorten spinner, make sure it ends on 00:48:690 - ) then add note at 00:46:440 - .
This way spinner start matches the sound in the music

coolcool

Normal

00:06:877 (5) - move to the right a bit so it lines up with the curve on the slider (~x 148 y 116)
00:20:565 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead

^00:21:315 - slider on downbeat also maps vocal, you can either keep 1/2 slider at 00:22:065 (4) - or use repeat slider.
00:37:815 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm instead:

idk I just like this rhythm better without the gaps between the notes. Up to you though

Hard

00:23:190 (2,3) - I think it's ok to stack these two since there is a prolonged trumpet sound in the music at 00:23:190 -
00:30:127 (2) - take me for a ride in your new car
idk try this shape for smoother curves:
SPOILER
00:30:690 (3,4,5) - , 00:46:440 (7,1) - etc, can be blanketed better if that was your intention
01:04:440 (4,1,2) - for better flow (and to make it look nicer), try rearranging like this:
SPOILER
01:15:690 - space here sounds empty, I feel that it's better to map it than to leave it silent for effect.

^repeat on 01:15:315 - and circle on white ticks
01:22:065 (1,3) - NC should be swapped so it stars on downbeat

Normal diff needs to be polished a bit

JJburst's Insane

00:00:315 (1,2,3) - merry christmas \o/
00:05:940 (6) - consider stacking this on the tail of 00:05:377 (4) - , I think it flows better into 00:06:127 (7) - since you'll be able to go straight down into the curve instead of from the side at an awkward angle.
00:07:440 (11,1) - try stacking circle on tail for better flow
00:11:940 (5,6,1) - this back and forth motion is awkward to play imo, try ctrl+G on 00:12:315 (1) - , then stack 00:12:127 (6) - with head of 00:11:565 (4) -
SPOILER
00:21:315 (1) - try ctrl+j ctrl+g then stack 00:21:877 (2) - under the tail
SPOILER
flows better imo
00:31:065 (3,4,1) - cool 'w'

Nice diff

Insane

00:37:815 (1,3) - imo stacking these feels nicer to play since the current flow at 00:37:815 (1,2) - is kind of abrupt/sharp idk
01:02:377 (4,5) - compared to some of the other antijumps, the spacing on this one is a bit larger. I think it looks better if at least half the circle overlaps the slider
01:18:502 (2) - try moving it upwards more, maybe around ~x220 y156. I think it'll be more fun to play than having 01:18:315 (1,2,3) - in a straight line
01:19:440 (5) - you can try moving this downwards since 01:19:065 (4) - is going in a downwards direction. If you took the previous suggestion then you can stack 01:18:502 (2,5) -
SPOILER
01:28:065 - in the other diffs there is a 30% volume green line here, you might want to add that

sexy stuff

Have fun mapping! 晚安~ zzzzzzzzzz

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-07T06:26:08+00:00

pkk wrote:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Easy
00:01:627 (2) - try curving it more to make it look nicer
SPOILER
00:46:440 (1) - move to 00:46:815 - (don't shorten spinner, make sure it ends on 00:48:690 - ) then add note at 00:46:440 - .then i will get disaqual;ify since gap between spinner and note was too soon. but i moved it to 00:46:815
This way spinner start matches the sound in the music

coolcool
Normal
00:06:877 (5) - move to the right a bit so it lines up with the curve on the slider (~x 148 y 116)
00:20:565 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm insteadi followed vocal here and it sounds fine for me ;;

^00:21:315 - slider on downbeat also maps vocal, you can either keep 1/2 slider at 00:22:065 (4) - or use repeat slider.
00:37:815 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm instead:made some change based on this

idk I just like this rhythm better without the gaps between the notes. Up to you though
Hard
00:23:190 (2,3) - I think it's ok to stack these two since there is a prolonged trumpet sound in the music at 00:23:190 - i want to follow the ds
00:30:127 (2) - take me for a ride in your new carthats almost same for me
idk try this shape for smoother curves:
SPOILER
00:30:690 (3,4,5) - , 00:46:440 (7,1) - etc, can be blanketed better if that was your intention
01:04:440 (4,1,2) - for better flow (and to make it look nicer), try rearranging like this:
SPOILER
01:15:690 - space here sounds empty, I feel that it's better to map it than to leave it silent for effect. fixed by changinhg these to sliders

^repeat on 01:15:315 - and circle on white ticks
01:22:065 (1,3) - NC should be swapped so it stars on downbeatfollowed stanza and vocal, i think there is no problem here

Normal diff needs to be polished a bit
JJburst's Insane
00:00:315 (1,2,3) - merry christmas \o/
00:05:940 (6) - consider stacking this on the tail of 00:05:377 (4) - , I think it flows better into 00:06:127 (7) - since you'll be able to go straight down into the curve instead of from the side at an awkward angle.
00:07:440 (11,1) - try stacking circle on tail for better flow
00:11:940 (5,6,1) - this back and forth motion is awkward to play imo, try ctrl+G on 00:12:315 (1) - , then stack 00:12:127 (6) - with head of 00:11:565 (4) -
SPOILER
00:21:315 (1) - try ctrl+j ctrl+g then stack 00:21:877 (2) - under the tail
SPOILER
flows better imo
00:31:065 (3,4,1) - cool 'w'

Nice diff
Insane
00:37:815 (1,3) - imo stacking these feels nicer to play since the current flow at 00:37:815 (1,2) - is kind of abrupt/sharp idk
01:02:377 (4,5) - compared to some of the other antijumps, the spacing on this one is a bit larger. I think it looks better if at least half the circle overlaps the slider
01:18:502 (2) - try moving it upwards more, maybe around ~x220 y156. I think it'll be more fun to play than having 01:18:315 (1,2,3) - in a straight line
01:19:440 (5) - you can try moving this downwards since 01:19:065 (4) - is going in a downwards direction. If you took the previous suggestion then you can stack 01:18:502 (2,5) - the note upoward the slider is fine now, imo downwards would be kind weird
SPOILER
01:28:065 - in the other diffs there is a 30% volume green line here, you might want to add that

sexy stuff

Have fun mapping! 晚安~ zzzzzzzzzz

oithers fiiiiiiiiiixed >.< thank you pkkkkkk

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2014-11-14T05:00:58+00:00

hi~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:24:877 (5) - add circle?
00:43:065 (5) - delete it and add circles at 00:42:877 (5) and 00:43:252 (6) ?
01:15:315 (4) - use a slider end at 01:16:440 ?

[Hard]
00:09:127 (6) - NC?
(I prefer you NC for each 4/1 while not according to the vocal)

[JJburstOwO]
missing 2 timing points in this diff （虽然不知道那两条红线有什么用
00:11:565 (4) - unpleasant stack and flow here, ctrl + g?
00:27:315 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:14:565 (3) - move right by 1 pixel

Kazuya

894 posts

Joined May 2013

Kazuya 2014-11-16T11:18:43+00:00

Hello, from My Mod queue. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

AR: change to 8, or 8,5. It's 160 BPM, AR9 is not better
OD: change to 7,5

00:03:127 (1) - Do I have a short slider? I prefer two circle. :/
00:04:440 (7) - If you don't put a stream (Because it can be here.), delete this 00:04:721 (8) - circle. Without stream, doesn't fit here. Even the distance is big (1.86), and so weird. Can be misleading. If you not delete a (00:04:721 (8) - ) circle, you can use the same distance. Example: http://puu.sh/cQPoX/3724b8b615.jpg
00:09:315 (1) - Perfect stack: x: 448, y: 217
00:09:315 (1,2) - Follow the trumpet. Move 1/1 slider here: 00:09:315 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:09:877 - . Thus better fit. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/cQPMN/2f255cb4cd.jpg
00:11:752 (1) - Please, delete this circle. There is no emphasized sound.
00:54:127 (6,1) - Move 00:54:315 (1) - 1/1 slider here: 00:54:127 - , and 00:54:127 (6) - circle here: 00:54:690 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVob/6b6e5576d5.jpg Better follow the vocal. 1/1 slider fits better here: 00:54:127 -
01:00:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Move 01:00:315 (1) - 1/2 slider here: 01:00:127 - and 01:00:127 (6) - circle here: 01:00:502 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVvv/4572ccfbc8.jpg
01:06:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Slider --> Circle (Vocal)
01:12:878 (4,5,6) - Same as ^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVBp/2beafdb86f.jpg (Vocal)
01:26:752 (5) - Two circle is better fit the vocals.

[JJburst]

AR: change to 8

00:07:440 (11) - Better stack: x: 492 y: 58
00:24:315 (1) - One circle, and one 1/2 slider is better. Emphasizes the trumpet. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW18/7744b83e5f.jpg
00:24:877 (3,4) - Emphasizes the trumpet, and drum. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW5f/a8bad36c52.jpg
00:26:565 (3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocal. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW9U/4e346def18.jpg
00:32:190 (2) - This long slider is little weird. I think delete, and use this: http://puu.sh/cSWia/934acebb8c.jpg Fits the vocal and piano.
01:10:252 (4) - Stack: x: 239 y: 202

[Hard]

AR: Change to 7! and HP to 5!

00:15:127 (4) - Please,m follow the vocal! Change slider end here: 00:15:502 - Please don't cancel!
00:17:940 (2,3) - Same as Insane.... Better fits the vocal: http://puu.sh/cSWHs/b71817bf79.jpg
00:27:127 (4,1) - ^ Replace them. slider --> circle ... Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWLw/80efe4ac4f.jpg
00:34:440 (2) - Here finish the slider: 00:34:627 - Here is the vocalist voice "fades". x'D
00:57:315 (5) - Two circle is better.
01:07:065 (8) - ^
01:11:940 (3,4) - Replace them. circle ---> slider Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWZ2/09678aedcb.jpg Better fits the vocal.

[Normal]
OD, HP: Change to 3! It's little difficult normal.

00:19:065 (4) - This repeating 1/1 slider is not fit here. Follow the drums! Put 1/2 slider and add once repeat: 00:19:065 - , and put circle here: 00:19:815 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSXac/2d8bd758fd.jpg

Biggest problem: Various distance/jumps/little jumps is unrankable for normal! Fix it! Examples:

00:31:065 (5,1) - 1,60x
00:35:940 (3,4) - 1,40x
00:42:315 (4,5) - 1,60x
00:49:815 (2,3) - 1,44x

Correct any such errors! Please, fix it! Very important!

[Easy]

Same as normal. Various distance problem.

00:01:627 (2,1) - 1,28x
00:03:315 (1,2) - 1,34x
00:15:315 (2,3) - 1,26x
00:15:690 (3,4) - 1,35x

Correct any such errors! pls fix it! Very important!

Good Luck.

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-11-16T12:53:58+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpointｓ are unnecessary, imo

[Easy]

00:03:315- finish
00:03:690- clap

[Normal]

00:03:690- clap
00:04:440- ^
00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127
00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
SPOILER
01:21:690- clap
01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?

[Hard]

00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetion
00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo

[Insane]

00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
SPOILER
01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) -
01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?

[JJburst's Insane]

00:06:127 (7) - NC
01:00:690 (1) - how about upward slider?
SPOILER

nice song! and good rhythm coordination <3
~☆
~Good Luck~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-17T05:18:00+00:00

Zweib wrote:
hi~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:24:877 (5) - add circle?
00:43:065 (5) - delete it and add circles at 00:42:877 (5) and 00:43:252 (6) ?
01:15:315 (4) - use a slider end at 01:16:440 ?没灵感啊

[Hard]
00:09:127 (6) - NC?
(I prefer you NC for each 4/1 while not according to the vocal)

[JJburstOwO]
missing 2 timing points in this diff （虽然不知道那两条红线有什么用
00:11:565 (4) - unpleasant stack and flow here, ctrl + g?
00:27:315 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:14:565 (3) - move right by 1 pixel

Kazuya wrote:
Hello, from My Mod queue. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

AR: change to 8, or 8,5. It's 160 BPM, AR9 is not better
OD: change to 7,5

00:03:127 (1) - Do I have a short slider? I prefer two circle. :/ kick slider here is better for me :/
00:04:440 (7) - If you don't put a stream (Because it can be here.), delete this 00:04:721 (8) - circle. Without stream, doesn't fit here. Even the distance is big (1.86), and so weird. Can be misleading. If you not delete a (00:04:721 (8) - ) circle, you can use the same distance. Example: http://puu.sh/cQPoX/3724b8b615.jpg
00:09:315 (1) - Perfect stack: x: 448, y: 217
00:09:315 (1,2) - Follow the trumpet. Move 1/1 slider here: 00:09:315 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:09:877 - . Thus better fit. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/cQPMN/2f255cb4cd.jpg this make no differences in my point
00:11:752 (1) - Please, delete this circle. There is no emphasized sound.if you really tried delete it you will find the blank part gave a bad feedback
00:54:127 (6,1) - Move 00:54:315 (1) - 1/1 slider here: 00:54:127 - , and 00:54:127 (6) - circle here: 00:54:690 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVob/6b6e5576d5.jpg Better follow the vocal. 1/1 slider fits better here: 00:54:127 - then i will miss a drum in00:54:315 so no
01:00:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Move 01:00:315 (1) - 1/2 slider here: 01:00:127 - and 01:00:127 (6) - circle here: 01:00:502 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVvv/4572ccfbc8.jpg slider end on a drum point is not a good idea for me.. sorry ;w;
01:06:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Slider --> Circle (Vocal)
01:12:878 (4,5,6) - Same as ^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVBp/2beafdb86f.jpg (Vocal)^
01:26:752 (5) - Two circle is better fit the vocals.i dont want to break the pattern there sorry ><

[Hard]

AR: Change to 7! and HP to 5!

00:15:127 (4) - Please,m follow the vocal! Change slider end here: 00:15:502 - Please don't cancel!???there is no vocal and drum
00:17:940 (2,3) - Same as Insane.... Better fits the vocal: http://puu.sh/cSWHs/b71817bf79.jpgno because i will miss some obivous drum
00:27:127 (4,1) - ^ Replace them. slider --> circle ... Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWLw/80efe4ac4f.jpg^
00:34:440 (2) - Here finish the slider: 00:34:627 - Here is the vocalist voice "fades". x'Dumm i dont have such idea on how to place the new rhythm
00:57:315 (5) - Two circle is better.this is a easier diff so i use sliders to make it friendly to those newbies(and dt player)
01:07:065 (8) - ^
01:11:940 (3,4) - Replace them. circle ---> slider Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWZ2/09678aedcb.jpg Better fits the vocal.

[Normal]
OD, HP: Change to 3! It's little difficult normal.

00:19:065 (4) - This repeating 1/1 slider is not fit here. Follow the drums! Put 1/2 slider and add once repeat: 00:19:065 - , and put circle here: 00:19:815 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSXac/2d8bd758fd.jpg

Biggest problem: Various distance/jumps/little jumps is unrankable for normal! Fix it! Examples:

00:31:065 (5,1) - 1,60x
00:35:940 (3,4) - 1,40x
00:42:315 (4,5) - 1,60x
00:49:815 (2,3) - 1,44x

Correct any such errors! Please, fix it! Very important!i fixed some of them,but rest are because blanket or symmetric or other reasons i keep mine ><same with easy. btw aimod didnot mentioned this so i think they are not that important

[Easy]

Same as normal. Various distance problem.

00:01:627 (2,1) - 1,28x
00:03:315 (1,2) - 1,34x
00:15:315 (2,3) - 1,26x
00:15:690 (3,4) - 1,35x

Correct any such errors! pls fix it! Very important!

Good Luck.

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpointｓ are unnecessary, imo
[Easy]
00:03:315- finish
00:03:690- clap
[Normal]
00:03:690- clap
00:04:440- ^
00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127will miss a drum ;;
00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
SPOILER
01:21:690- clap
01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?ww i think this shape is fine
[Hard]
00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetionit is same so i am lazy with chaning it _(:зゝ∠)_
00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo
[Insane]
00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
SPOILER
01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) - this stack fits music
01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?current one is fine

nice song! and good rhythm coordination <3
~☆
~Good Luck~

thank you guys for modding this ><
i didnot change the arodhp because i think it give a good spread now and bat also not point there are some problems there.
for the muti timing points it is for nightcore mod
about volume... i think it is fine now... maybe ask more guys and will change them later

Erina

114 posts

Joined August 2012

Erina 2014-11-24T03:48:13+00:00

Hey~~~ from my mod for voice queue~~~

Great map, song, and anime

All of these are just ideas, apply what you see fit.

I began modding this a week ago, and then came back to check that half of my fixes were already fixed ;_; I should learn to mod faster >_<

[Insane]
00:03:877 (4,5) - Consider ctrl+g, currently its kinda hard to read, and it seems to fit better with the emphasis in the song (high/low notes alternation)
00:05:377 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+g, I think it's better flow.
00:23:565 (4) - Move to x:340 y:216, makes it symmetrical with the other notes in the pattern
00:32:752 (4) - Consider having this note stack with 00:32:565 (3) - , feels better with the hitsounds/music
00:43:815 (1,2,3) - I feel like these two large jumps were kind of uncalled for, seems kind of abrupt in a fairly calm part of the song. Consider moving 00:44:190 (2) - to x:248 y:288

[JJburstOwO]
00:04:252 (6,7) - This change in distance snap feels really weird

00:10:440 (4) - Consider ctrl+g, makes it more interesting
00:21:315 (1) - ehhh this slider looks weird to me...

[Hard]
A great portion of this diff is NC modding, change what you need/see fit.

00:09:127 (6) - Add NC here, keeps consistent with earlier lines
00:16:815 (5,1) - Switch NCs, i prefer NCs to go with the beat/measures of the music
00:19:065 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here 00:19:815 (3) - , remove NC here 00:21:315 (1) - .
This is to keep consistent with the rest of your NCs in this section, and it works better with the 4/4 time signature of the song.
00:24:502 (6) - Consider removing NC, it's up to you. I think this part works better as a full line.
00:57:315 (5) - Consider changing this into two notes rather than a slider - i think it would emphasis the drums in the back more. I noticed that you rejected the idea once, but I really think changing this would sound and play better

01:15:315 (4) - Add NC here, it sounds like the beginning of a new line (vocals end here)

[Normal]
00:56:940 (3,4) - Doesn't seem to fit with the music well, especially for a normal diff. Consider replacing slider with a single note.
01:12:690 (6,7) - Same as above, consider changing the rhythm to be like http://puu.sh/d3bAE/5f64f84466.jpg
01:21:315 (4) - I don't understand the reason behind the red ticks in this slider...I personally don't like it

[Easy]
00:15:690 (3) - I feel like a normally curved slider rather than a sharp-curved slider would look better here.
00:46:440 (5) - Consider adding a note here, this part just feels empty without one.
01:00:690 (4) - Consider giving this slider a curve: http://puu.sh/d3bYh/232986ab57.jpg

I hope you find this mod somewhat useful

Contact me later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing!

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-24T04:16:07+00:00

Erina wrote:
Hey~~~ from my mod for voice queue~~~

Great map, song, and anime All of these are just ideas, apply what you see fit.

I began modding this a week ago, and then came back to check that half of my fixes were already fixed ;_; I should learn to mod faster >_<

[Insane]
00:03:877 (4,5) - Consider ctrl+g, currently its kinda hard to read, and it seems to fit better with the emphasis in the song (high/low notes alternation)umm i prefer current pattern, so no change ;;
00:05:377 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+g, I think it's better flow.
00:23:565 (4) - Move to x:340 y:216, makes it symmetrical with the other notes in the pattern
00:32:752 (4) - Consider having this note stack with 00:32:565 (3) - , feels better with the hitsounds/music
00:43:815 (1,2,3) - I feel like these two large jumps were kind of uncalled for, seems kind of abrupt in a fairly calm part of the song. Consider moving 00:44:190 (2) - to x:248 y:288i dont think the jump here is so that big. i prefer mine ;;

[Hard]
A great portion of this diff is NC modding, change what you need/see fit.

00:09:127 (6) - Add NC here, keeps consistent with earlier lines
00:16:815 (5,1) - Switch NCs, i prefer NCs to go with the beat/measures of the music
00:19:065 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here 00:19:815 (3) - , remove NC here 00:21:315 (1) - .
This is to keep consistent with the rest of your NCs in this section, and it works better with the 4/4 time signature of the song.
00:24:502 (6) - Consider removing NC, it's up to you. I think this part works better as a full line.
00:57:315 (5) - Consider changing this into two notes rather than a slider - i think it would emphasis the drums in the back more. I noticed that you rejected the idea once, but I really think changing this would sound and play better
01:15:315 (4) - Add NC here, it sounds like the beginning of a new line (vocals end here)

[Normal]
00:56:940 (3,4) - Doesn't seem to fit with the music well, especially for a normal diff. Consider replacing slider with a single note.ummm i think this fits vocal ;;
01:12:690 (6,7) - Same as above, consider changing the rhythm to be like http://puu.sh/d3bAE/5f64f84466.jpg
01:21:315 (4) - I don't understand the reason behind the red ticks in this slider...I personally don't like it

[Easy]
00:15:690 (3) - I feel like a normally curved slider rather than a sharp-curved slider would look better here.
00:46:440 (5) - Consider adding a note here, this part just feels empty without one.
01:00:690 (4) - Consider giving this slider a curve: http://puu.sh/d3bYh/232986ab57.jpg

I hope you find this mod somewhat useful

Contact me later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing!

thank you Erina >,< those not mentioned = fixed

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-11-25T13:09:58+00:00

真·随便看看

[Normal]

00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle
00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放，然后3ctrl+g，再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点

[JJburst's Insane]

00:10:440 (4) - 感觉全曲就这一个sldier是这个造型，好违和
01:22:815 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉错开要好看点，不过改的话后面一组4个也要调整位置，还是看个人喜好吧
SPOILER

其实我感觉好多地方都还可以改吧，看上去好多都不舒服，不过大概是个人作图习惯的问题，所以我就都不提啦\("▔□▔)/

gl~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-25T23:31:52+00:00

Melt wrote:
真·随便看看

[Normal]
00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle因为有ez所以这里想搞的密一点
00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放，然后3ctrl+g，再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds
SPOILER
[Hard]
00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点

谢谢妹贴

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-11-29T03:46:46+00:00

[Easy]
00:06:315 (3) - Grid up

[Normal]
00:05:377 (3) - I personally feel ending at 00:05:752 will follow the strong beats better but keep if you prefer yours.
00:57:315 (4) - Mind giving a new combo since it feels distributed?
01:03:315 (5) - ^?
01:09:315 (4) - ^?

[Hard]
00:18:877 (2) - (352,72) constructs a smoother flow.
00:34:440 (2) - The extra beat of 00:34:721 feels really awkward. Giving a 25% volume reduction won't hurt, would it?
01:19:815 (1) - Is the clap in the reverse intended?
01:20:940 (1) - ^?

[JJburst's Insane]
00:06:877 (3) - The flow of (1,2,3) feels little weird personally. Mind setting (3) a ctrl+G?

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-11-29T06:40:59+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Easy]
00:06:315 (3) - Grid up

[Normal]
00:05:377 (3) - I personally feel ending at 00:05:752 will follow the strong beats better but keep if you prefer yours.
00:57:315 (4) - Mind giving a new combo since it feels distributed?no, because i do NC every 2 stanza and i want it keep consistency
01:03:315 (5) - ^?
01:09:315 (4) - ^?

[Hard]
00:18:877 (2) - (352,72) constructs a smoother flow.
00:34:440 (2) - The extra beat of 00:34:721 feels really awkward. Giving a 25% volume reduction won't hurt, would it?
01:19:815 (1) - Is the clap in the reverse intended?yes they are
01:20:940 (1) - ^?^

[JJburst's Insane]
00:06:877 (3) - The flow of (1,2,3) feels little weird personally. Mind setting (3) a ctrl+G?

others fixed ><
thank you for modding

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Sakaue Nachi 2014-11-29T13:11:40+00:00

随便写写，神麻婆的图摸不动orz

[Hard]
00:08:752 (4) - 这个音比较突出，和前一个叠不太好感觉
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - 这里可以考虑三角跳什么的，叠着不太过瘾，我觉得hard还是需要点跳的，不过也不要多

[JJburst's Insane]
00:07:440 (5) - 叠在头flow好点
00:18:315 (1) - ctrl+g有意境一点
01:07:815 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:315 (1) - 感觉ctrl+g好点
00:47:940 (4,5) - ^
00:51:690 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉跳合适点，叠一起不好
00:59:002 (2) - 这个跳大点啊 224,364 感觉差不多

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-01T06:02:41+00:00

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
随便写写，神麻婆的图摸不动orz

[Hard]
00:08:752 (4) - 这个音比较突出，和前一个叠不太好感觉
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - 这里可以考虑三角跳什么的，叠着不太过瘾，我觉得hard还是需要点跳的，不过也不要多

[JJburst's Insane]
00:07:440 (5) - 叠在头flow好点
00:18:315 (1) - ctrl+g有意境一点
01:07:815 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:315 (1) - 感觉ctrl+g好点感觉现在的好
00:47:940 (4,5) - ^
00:51:690 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉跳合适点，叠一起不好我感觉叠在一起跟贴合音乐
00:59:002 (2) - 这个跳大点啊 224,364 感觉差不多思考，这里是个梗啊

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-12-03T16:55:40+00:00

(」· ω·)」Mei女王！(／· ω·)／Mei女王ー (」· ω·)」Mei女王！(／· ω·)／Mei女王ー

[Easy]

整体打起来没问题，所以这里挑细节

· 00:17:565 (1) - 这里往上移到X488 y300的话，可以让1和2看起来更直，前后DS也一样了（请鞭挞我这强迫症）

· 00:18:690 (3) - 滑条尾巴上的白点，移动到x104 y308，让整个滑条稍微整齐点

· 00:16:815 (4) - 前后DS差距有0.06了，可以移动到x432 y132
· 00:31:815 (1) - 同上，可以微调下DS
· 01:05:940 (3) - 这里
· 01:25:815 (1) - 还有这里也是

[Normal]

同上，打起来完全没问题，这里只有DS上的小细节。

· 00:08:377 (2) - DS前后有点出入，可以移动到x416 y244

· 00:39:315 (4) - 移动到x264 y356

· 00:54:127 (4) - 移动到x376 y332

· 01:04:815 (1) - 移动到x236 y212

· 01:11:940 (4) - 移动到x80 y56

[Hard]

· 00:13:252 (3) - 加Whistle？

· 00:36:315 (1) - 滑条尾巴加Clap

· 00:52:065 (2) - 取消滑条开头的Clap

· 00:54:127 (6) - 滑条尾巴加Whistle

· 00:55:065 (8,9,10) - 我觉得这三个圆圈没必要叠起来，可以考虑展开像这样。
当然，8、9、10也可以换个顺序放，一样没问题。

SPOILER

· 01:03:315 (1) - 滑条尾巴加Clap，很明显需要

· 01:06:127 (6) - 滑条尾巴加Whistle

· 01:07:065 (8) - 滑条尾巴上的Clap略显多余，可以删掉

[JJburst's Insane]

应该没问题，继续加油！

[Insane]

· 00:04:252 (6) - 我觉得在不影响Flow的情况下，这里完全可以统一前后DS，放到x64 y272就好

· 00:12:315 (1) - 个人觉得这个Whistle蛮违和的，删？

· 01:03:502 (2) - 滑条的开头很明显需要加一个Clap

· 01:04:065 (4) - 可以加Clap

· 01:07:065 (4) - 这里滑条尾巴的Clap不明显，没必要这里自己创节奏

· 01:10:440 (5) - 同上，滑条尾巴上的Clap不明显

祝武运昌隆

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-05T02:55:14+00:00

to l4d:
除了hard的那个排列，其他都改了

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-12-05T08:11:35+00:00

Mei wrote:
to l4d:
除了hard的那个排列，其他都改了

用北酱一般的眼神盯着你。

wgjgame

9 posts

Joined January 2012

wgjgame 2014-12-17T05:20:21+00:00

为什么另一个insane 没有video？

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-21T00:04:04+00:00

wgjgame wrote:
为什么另一个insane 没有video？

谢谢你帮我指出来，不知道什么时候就没有了_(:3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-01-05T03:30:23+00:00

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Open Aimod，inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections at the JJburst's Insane

[Easy]

Looks fine.

[Normal]

00:02:002 (4,1) - Perhaps can keep consistent distance here? Example:
00:07:252 (7) - Need move a bit distance keep consistent.
00:50:377 (3) - Missed a finish in slider end
00:51:127 (2) - Missed a clap in slider head

[Hard]

00:12:127 (1) - Missed a clap in slider head
00:49:815 (4) - Because change a downbeat vocal,so suggest add a new combo make easy to read here.
01:22:815 (1) - Seems missed a finish at all diff here.

[JJburst's Insane] (應該能用中文?)

00:12:127 (6,1) - 這裡音樂聽起來沒什麼要跳的理由，這個flow也很扭，在(1)使用ctrl+g讓平順和拉近些
00:13:627 (4) - 像這裡聽起來就可以做跳了，可以放到(331|49)位置
00:50:940 (1,2) - 這兩個往下一點快撞到分數版了
01:13:440 (4) - 這個drum音量太突出了吧，要強調背景音樂感覺不需要這麼大聲。
01:27:127 (5) - 放在(133|171)不就成了一個symmetry?
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:50:564 (4) - Downbeat,forgot add new combo here?
01:14:190 (3) - This vocal seems can change 2 note to do a lot notes jump,maybe can try it.

If fix done,call me back.

JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2015-01-05T06:57:44+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[JJburst's Insane] (應該能用中文?)
00:12:127 (6,1) - 這裡音樂聽起來沒什麼要跳的理由，這個flow也很扭，在(1)使用ctrl+g讓平順和拉近些
00:13:627 (4) - 像這裡聽起來就可以做跳了，可以放到(331|49)位置
00:50:940 (1,2) - 這兩個往下一點快撞到分數版了
01:13:440 (4) - 這個drum音量太突出了吧，要強調背景音樂感覺不需要這麼大聲。
01:27:127 (5) - 放在(133|171)不就成了一個symmetry?
SPOILER

Thx~

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 52623
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:光るなら -TV size-
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Creator:Mei
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Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso Your Lie in April Opening JJburstOwO
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Mei

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Mei 2015-01-05T07:01:14+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
Open Aimod，inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections at the JJburst's Insane
[Easy]
Looks fine.
[Normal]
00:02:002 (4,1) - Perhaps can keep consistent distance here? Example:
00:07:252 (7) - Need move a bit distance keep consistent.
00:50:377 (3) - Missed a finish in slider end
00:51:127 (2) - Missed a clap in slider head
[Hard]
00:12:127 (1) - Missed a clap in slider head
00:49:815 (4) - Because change a downbeat vocal,so suggest add a new combo make easy to read here.
01:22:815 (1) - Seems missed a finish at all diff here.
[JJburst's Insane] (應該能用中文?)
00:12:127 (6,1) - 這裡音樂聽起來沒什麼要跳的理由，這個flow也很扭，在(1)使用ctrl+g讓平順和拉近些
00:13:627 (4) - 像這裡聽起來就可以做跳了，可以放到(331|49)位置
00:50:940 (1,2) - 這兩個往下一點快撞到分數版了
01:13:440 (4) - 這個drum音量太突出了吧，要強調背景音樂感覺不需要這麼大聲。
01:27:127 (5) - 放在(133|171)不就成了一個symmetry?
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:50:564 (4) - Downbeat,forgot add new combo here?
01:14:190 (3) - This vocal seems can change 2 note to do a lot notes jump,maybe can try it.i think slider also works well here and i dont want to change the structure here since it is a big work so no fixed ;;

If fix done,call me back.

others fixed~ thank you smallboat!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-01-07T03:29:58+00:00

Recheck discuss with mapper.

Fix a NC to switch (00:50:940 (1,2)) in JJburst's Insane.,

it still looks good to me.

Happy new year ~

!

Bubbled !

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-07T03:38:34+00:00

*note : wait for http://osu.ppy.sh/s/223871 to get in the ranked beamaps list

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2015-01-07T04:29:40+00:00

비디오 오프셋 틀린거 같은데 ㅋㅋ 약간

Nice map!! Good flow :3/

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-07T05:38:08+00:00

No Dap wrote:
비디오 오프셋 틀린거 같은데 ㅋㅋ 약간

Nice map!! Good flow :3/

i cant find proper video offset ;w;;w;w;w;w;w; what i do is just estimate an offset and check them in edit ;w;w;w;

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-07T06:22:26+00:00

(so im coming here)

~~placeholder (i know i have to waiting Pandiar's mapset first)~~
Sorry popped because huge spread for Easy to Normal :C

General

unsnapped preview time, should be snapped at 00:52:627 -

Easy

00:00:315 - remove greenline here and change S:C2 for unInherit point instead
00:10:815 (1) - how about shorten the spinner at to 00:12:127 - and give finish on spinner? since it has cymbal there
00:31:440 - i think you have to add note here coz the snare drum is continuing from 00:31:065 - which means should be mapped together
00:36:502 - i think this sound or 00:37:252 - should be mapped here because the crash sound, i guess http://puu.sh/ee7yZ.jpg would be fine here
00:37:815 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if they are fine i know they are easy but a little bit short and probably make newbie hard to read, also some loud music like 00:39:877 - 00:41:377 - (the same drum which you mapped) 00:42:877 - would be nice if they are mapped here. just try http://puu.sh/ee8Jv.jpg for all sliders here
00:50:565 (2) - finish at tail please because the cymbal </3
01:04:815 (1) - nazi but if you can avoid inconsistency 1,24x here, it would be safer here
01:07:815 (1) - nazi but it would be better to 1 grid up to avoid minimum of normal spacing (1,25x) here
01:13:815 (1) - add whistle on spinner please. i still hear a drum here
01:19:815 (1) - remove clap here since the music is only a drum (not snare drum) [clap heard inconsistency too for me]
01:20:940 (2) - if you agree with above so please replace clap on tail with whistle since no snare drum at that time
01:22:815 (1) - finish at head because crash cymbal
01:24:315 (3) - clap for both head and tail heard so random here since no snare drum, only a weak drum which enough to use whistle

Normal

00:00:315 - same as Easy
00:00:315 (1) - remove whistle on tail, it sounds better here since if you add it on that time, should be added for 00:01:440 - for consistency
00:03:315 (1) - nazi again but please avoid 1,44x spacing here for consistency :C
00:04:065 - use soft default whistle for this time please, it sounds so empty for me
00:08:377 (2) - is whistle's body here intentional? coz it sounds quite noisy Q_Q
00:09:127 (3) - i dont get what music mapped from this slider since drums sound at 00:09:315 - and 00:09:690 -
00:11:377 (3) - yep if possible avoid 1,45x which the minimum spacing here, move to 396,128 would be safer imo
00:11:940 (4) - finish at tail because the cymbal :C
00:14:565 (2) - lol inconsistency spacing 1,44x here
00:31:815 (1) - aaa i know why inconsistency spacing here but i dont think if it acceptable Q_Q
00:39:315 (4,5,6) - this one could be nerfed by use 3/2 slider repeat
00:50:377 (3,2) - remove finish on (3)'s tail and add for (2)'s head because the crash cymbal (louder one) actually sound at 00:51:127 - Q_Q
00:58:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one could be nerfed by remove 01:00:127 (5) - and add note at the stanza instead
01:01:815 (1,2) - could be nerfed by change to 1/2 slider repeat too
01:04:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be nerfed again just like http://puu.sh/eec3J.jpg
01:10:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/eec91.jpg
01:14:940 (3,4) - 1/2 slider repeat to nerf
01:16:815 (1) - finish at head please </3
01:19:815 (1) - remove clap at head please, music only a drum and not snare drum one
01:21:315 (4) - ^
01:22:815 (3) - finish at head for crash cymbal <//3
01:23:565 - 01:24:315 - 01:25:065 - i dont get too why claps here when the music only drums which sound like whistle here
I told already about star rating in game according Easy diff is quite easy and this normal has much 1/2 + huge spacing 1,5x (even i know 1,5x here for avoid overlap at 1/2)

Hard

00:12:127 (1) - finish at head please because the crash cymbal
00:07:815 - why not mapping this time which has quite loud sound </3 , i would say http://puu.sh/eedWT.jpg like this instead
00:30:127 (2) - same as above (including the suggestion's example)
00:31:252 (5) - blanket please http://puu.sh/eeegZ.jpg
00:33:690 (6) - nazi but flow still can improved if you move to 324,336
00:34:815 (2) - only a trumpet sound at tail, why clap here? sounds quite random for me
00:41:002 (2) - just my taste but straight slider one feels more naturally for play here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2476863
00:55:252 (9) - stacked for 3 circles looks too easy and weird coz no movement imo, how about move this circle to 240,116?
01:03:315 (1) - better to use whistle on tail imo, clap sounds so noisy
01:19:815 (1) - as i told in Easy Normal, remove clap on repeat and use whistle instead on head
01:20:940 (1) - same here but remove clap on repeat and use whistle on tail

Insane

00:02:752 - 5% please </3 (no sound actually here orz)
00:07:065 (5) - the jump feels a little bit rush here. hmm personally i prefer use normal spacing by move to 96,172 coz music is loud same as 00:06:877 - and 00:07:252 -
00:11:190 (1) - the trumpet isnt loud like drum at 00:10:815 (2,3) - why become a huge jump here? personally prefer normal spacing instead (300,200). same for 00:11:752 (1) - too (296,272)
00:12:315 (1) - add whistle instead for emphasize the violin
00:17:377 (2) - nazi and might break your style but try move this circle to 168,360 so 00:16:815 (1,2,3) - would be look more center here http://puu.sh/eeieF.jpg
00:38:002 (2,3,4) - omg already being calm part here, please use normal spacing lol, i guess 00:38:002 (2,3,4) - become http://puu.sh/eeiqF.jpg [p.s (2) is slider repeat start from 00:38:002 - ] and 00:38:940 (5,6) - being http://puu.sh/eeirB.jpg would be nice imo
00:50:377 (3,1) - swap NC please, it makes trap by NC at the slider here
01:19:440 (5) - move to 220,156 instead. according previous slider's curve, this circle should be placed on downward
for hitsound from 01:19:815 - until 01:21:502 - , just fix if you fixed from Easy Normal, too tired to mention again Q_Q

JJburst's Insane

00:02:752 - same as Insane
00:04:440 (7) - hmm if you ctrl+G this slider and arrange it a little bit more, it would be more natural in flow, example http://puu.sh/eejx3.jpg
00:07:815 - should be mapped because the piano </3
00:09:127 (1) - ^ (drum)
00:12:127 (6) - finish coz cymbal sound?
00:14:377 (2) - why the jump is huge when music is calm, really not fit imo </3
00:26:940 (4,5) - the flow feels weird here suddenly, hmm i would like to arrange like http://puu.sh/eek3X.jpg (still not perfect though)
00:34:065 (3) - try ctrl+G, jump feels better to emphasize snare drum at 4th whitetick instead of drum only
00:35:002 (2) - dunno why but jump here feels quite harsh for me, i would like to use consistent spacing instead (move to 268,144) for this time
01:12:690 (1) - omg the jump is quite high, try ctrl+G for more consistent spacing jump instead
01:26:190 (2) - huge jump for next slider too, try reduce by move this to 176,80
00:52:815 (1,2,3) - , 00:55:815 (1,2,3) - i hope you can reduce the spacing here since they look quite hard and not really make pattern which i can understand why need huge spacing here

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Last edited by Xinely 2015-01-08T09:01:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-08T07:54:51+00:00

Xinely wrote:
(so im coming here)

~~placeholder (i know i have to waiting Pandiar's mapset first)~~
WIP

General
unsnapped preview time, should be snapped at 00:52:627 -

Easy
00:00:315 - remove greenline here and change S:C2 for unInherit point instead
00:10:815 (1) - how about shorten the spinner at to 00:12:127 - and give finish on spinner? since it has cymbal there
00:31:440 - i think you have to add note here coz the snare drum is continuing from 00:31:065 - which means should be mapped together
00:36:502 - i think this sound or 00:37:252 - should be mapped here because the crash sound, i guess http://puu.sh/ee7yZ.jpg would be fine here
00:37:815 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if they are fine i know they are easy but a little bit short and probably make newbie hard to read, also some loud music like 00:39:877 - 00:41:377 - (the same drum which you mapped) 00:42:877 - would be nice if they are mapped here. just try http://puu.sh/ee8Jv.jpg for all sliders here
00:50:565 (2) - finish at tail please because the cymbal </3
01:04:815 (1) - nazi but if you can avoid inconsistency 1,24x here, it would be safer here
01:07:815 (1) - nazi but it would be better to 1 grid up to avoid minimum of normal spacing (1,25x) here
01:13:815 (1) - add whistle on spinner please. i still hear a drum here
01:19:815 (1) - remove clap here since the music is only a drum (not snare drum) [clap heard inconsistency too for me]
01:20:940 (2) - if you agree with above so please replace clap on tail with whistle since no snare drum at that time
01:22:815 (1) - finish at head because crash cymbal
01:24:315 (3) - clap for both head and tail heard so random here since no snare drum, only a weak drum which enough to use whistle

Normal
00:00:315 - same as Easy
00:00:315 (1) - remove whistle on tail, it sounds better here since if you add it on that time, should be added for 00:01:440 - for consistency
00:03:315 (1) - nazi again but please avoid 1,44x spacing here for consistency :C
00:04:065 - use soft default whistle for this time please, it sounds so empty for me
00:08:377 (2) - is whistle's body here intentional? coz it sounds quite noisy Q_Q
00:09:127 (3) - i dont get what music mapped from this slider since drums sound at 00:09:315 - and 00:09:690 -
00:11:377 (3) - yep if possible avoid 1,45x which the minimum spacing here, move to 396,128 would be safer imo
00:11:940 (4) - finish at tail because the cymbal :C
00:14:565 (2) - lol inconsistency spacing 1,44x here
00:31:815 (1) - aaa i know why inconsistency spacing here but i dont think if it acceptable Q_Q
00:39:315 (4,5,6) - this one could be nerfed by use 3/2 slider repeat
00:50:377 (3,2) - remove finish on (3)'s tail and add for (2)'s head because the crash cymbal (louder one) actually sound at 00:51:127 - Q_Q
00:58:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one could be nerfed by remove 01:00:127 (5) - and add note at the stanza instead
01:01:815 (1,2) - could be nerfed by change to 1/2 slider repeat too
01:04:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be nerfed again just like http://puu.sh/eec3J.jpg
01:10:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/eec91.jpg
01:14:940 (3,4) - 1/2 slider repeat to nerf
01:16:815 (1) - finish at head please </3
01:19:815 (1) - remove clap at head please, music only a drum and not snare drum one
01:21:315 (4) - ^
01:22:815 (3) - finish at head for crash cymbal <//3
01:23:565 - 01:24:315 - 01:25:065 - i dont get too why claps here when the music only drums which sound like whistle here
I told already about star rating in game according Easy diff is quite easy and this normal has much 1/2 + huge spacing 1,5x (even i know 1,5x here for avoid overlap at 1/2)

i fixed almost of them and i forgot which i donot fixed /me runs Q.Q

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-08T09:30:49+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:12:127 (1) - finish at head please because the crash cymbal
00:07:815 - why not mapping this time which has quite loud sound </3 , i would say http://puu.sh/eedWT.jpg like this insteadi prefer follow the trumpet here
00:30:127 (2) - same as above (including the suggestion's example)followed the vocal i think, to make it easier
00:31:252 (5) - blanket please http://puu.sh/eeegZ.jpg
00:33:690 (6) - nazi but flow still can improved if you move to 324,336
00:34:815 (2) - only a trumpet sound at tail, why clap here? sounds quite random for mebut this clap works well i think o.o maybe this clap fits the trumpet
00:41:002 (2) - just my taste but straight slider one feels more naturally for play here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2476863
00:55:252 (9) - stacked for 3 circles looks too easy and weird coz no movement imo, how about move this circle to 240,116?
01:03:315 (1) - better to use whistle on tail imo, clap sounds so noisy
01:19:815 (1) - as i told in Easy Normal, remove clap on repeat and use whistle instead on headthese claps are refer to the vocal here, and i think it sounds nice in hard and insane
01:20:940 (1) - same here but remove clap on repeat and use whistle on tail

Insane
00:02:752 - 5% please </3 (no sound actually here orz)
00:07:065 (5) - the jump feels a little bit rush here. hmm personally i prefer use normal spacing by move to 96,172 coz music is loud same as 00:06:877 - and 00:07:252 -it will not be that hard because 3,4,5 formed a perfect triangle and players are wasy to recogonize this pattern and catch the note
00:11:190 (1) - the trumpet isnt loud like drum at 00:10:815 (2,3) - why become a huge jump here? personally prefer normal spacing instead (300,200). same for 00:11:752 (1) - too (296,272)that will be really strange... lower distance make me drop here..
00:12:315 (1) - add whistle instead for emphasize the violin
00:17:377 (2) - nazi and might break your style but try move this circle to 168,360 so 00:16:815 (1,2,3) - would be look more center here http://puu.sh/eeieF.jpg
00:38:002 (2,3,4) - omg already being calm part here, please use normal spacing lol, i guess 00:38:002 (2,3,4) - become http://puu.sh/eeiqF.jpg [p.s (2) is slider repeat start from 00:38:002 - ] and 00:38:940 (5,6) - being http://puu.sh/eeirB.jpg would be nice imothis part is not as hard as you think, it is actually very easy and flow very well ;w;;w;;w sorry i prefer mine /.\
00:50:377 (3,1) - swap NC please, it makes trap by NC at the slider here
01:19:440 (5) - move to 220,156 instead. according previous slider's curve, this circle should be placed on downwardit will be kind of overlap there and i dont like this..... ;w;w;w;
for hitsound from 01:19:815 - until 01:21:502 - , just fix if you fixed from Easy Normal, too tired to mention again Q_Q

Poke me back for rebubble

JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2015-01-08T09:39:31+00:00

Xinely wrote:

JJburst's Insane
00:02:752 - same as Insane
00:04:440 (7) - hmm if you ctrl+G this slider and arrange it a little bit more, it would be more natural in flow, example http://puu.sh/eejx3.jpg
00:07:815 - should be mapped because the piano </3
00:09:127 (1) - ^ (drum)
00:12:127 (6) - finish coz cymbal sound?
00:14:377 (2) - why the jump is huge when music is calm, really not fit imo </3
00:26:940 (4,5) - the flow feels weird here suddenly, hmm i would like to arrange like http://puu.sh/eek3X.jpg (still not perfect though)
00:34:065 (3) - try ctrl+G, jump feels better to emphasize snare drum at 4th whitetick instead of drum only
00:35:002 (2) - dunno why but jump here feels quite harsh for me, i would like to use consistent spacing instead (move to 268,144) for this time
01:12:690 (1) - omg the jump is quite high, try ctrl+G for more consistent spacing jump instead
01:26:190 (2) - huge jump for next slider too, try reduce by move this to 176,80
00:52:815 (1,2,3) - , 00:55:815 (1,2,3) - i hope you can reduce the spacing here since they look quite hard and not really make pattern which i can understand why need huge spacing here - hmm.. I made most jumps in kiai time the same distance

others fixed~ thanQ Xinely _(:з」∠)_

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Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-08T21:02:29+00:00

recheck

Easy

01:03:690 - dont you map something here? it feels weird when you blank kiai time here (whenever you mapped whole song on this diff)

Normal

00:38:002 (2) - add whistle to emphasize the guitar sound for consistency with 00:41:002 (2) -

Hard

01:25:065 (4) - nazi but keep consistency spacing here, you still can keep it with 1 grid right

JJburst's Insane

00:04:440 (7) - missing clap?
00:13:815 (1) - missing something at tail? if you feel clap is weird, use whistle instead
00:27:315 (5) - NC for consistency

Insane

00:50:940 (3) - just realized why the jump is so big here when the music only a drum and next slider 00:51:127 (1) - which has cymbal placed with smaller spacing here

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-08T21:40:59+00:00

fixed all, thank you Xinely

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-09T02:21:23+00:00

irc modded and everything looks fine now

Rebubbled!~ ヽ(｡ゝω・｡)ﾉ

@ Next BAT : ~~keep on mind Pandiar's mapset still on qualified https://osu.ppy.sh/s/223871~~ it moved to ranked now

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Mei

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Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-09T02:40:24+00:00

Xinely wrote:
irc modded and everything looks fine now

Rebubbled!~ ヽ(｡ゝω・｡)ﾉ

@ Next BAT : keep on mind Pandiar's mapset still on qualified https://osu.ppy.sh/s/223871

thank you xinely ;w; fixed a lot in my baka map ;w;

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