Narcissu wrote:

>,

[insane]

00:04:436 (7,8) - 既然原曲有1/4在白線起的話，我覺得不必特地換成強調長白縣的三連唔这里虽然有点overmap但是我感觉有个1/4节奏的话就有点渐进这样（唔说不清楚

00:12:873 (2,3,4) - 建議換成滑條接圈接滑條我感觉不是这样的，唔抱歉

01:22:061 (2,3) - 像這種的我覺得兩個1/2滑條擺難梗會一個長滑要合……overmap啊

[normal]

01:15:311 - 我覺得這段很激情啊空掉不合適吧，同樣的在hard和insane裏面都建議作難這裡nm更的人声啊，先不改这个看看别人怎么说

zjwautumn wrote:

hello,我来摸图啦。渣摸见谅><

[General]

1. 标题不符合rank规则官网上有source，是加了TV size的http://www.kimiuso.jp/music/01.html
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:13:061 (3) 和 00:13:811 (1) - Ctrl+G怎么样，感觉打起来更舒服点。感觉这里还是想用倒退的感觉
2. 00:34:061 (1,3) - 这两个位置对调下，感觉更流畅
3. 00:48:311 (1) - 感觉这里不需要加NC啊
4. 00:52:061 (1) - ^ 这里有点跟钢琴的感觉，先保持这样吧
5. 01:13:811 (1,2) - 音效都弄成Drum Clap怎样，然后01:14:561 (4,5) - 这两个Drum Finish，感觉效果挺好。

[Hard]

1. 00:09:123 (6,8) - 这两个加下NC？感觉没必要
2. 00:46:811 (1,3) - 这两个的blanket应该弄好点不blanket
3. kiai time的前半部分Insane的NC比较多，而Hard的Combo却比较长，我觉得应该修复下。
4. 00:55:061 (8,9,10) - 这里和前面的滑条尾摆成四边形怎样。不知道具体怎么摆._.
5. 01:17:561 (3,4,5) -
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:05:373 (3,4,5) - 打的时候就这里老是断，我这个整天打Normal的都被坑了，新人更被坑。感觉不好读图，建议这样:
   
2. 00:12:311 (1) - 这个转盘还是从00:12:311 - 开始好了，因为还有mania的转谱，那个就很坑了，突然来个3/4。
3. 00:24:311 (1) - 好像不需要NC
4. 00:23:561 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:436 (6,1) - blanket弄的不够好。
6. 01:27:217 (1) - 同样的转盘启始时间问题。

[Easy]

1. DS=1.3我不知道是不是rankable，看了一些新图的EZNM都是DS=1.0的。应该行
2. 00:00:311 (1) - 这个还是改成正常的滑条吧，整个EZ就这里是自身重叠的滑条，而且新人读不懂这种形状的滑条。这个还好吧我感觉还能接受，看看别人怎么说
3. 00:03:311 (1) - 这个从00:03:311 - 开始应该会好点，因为是Easy，音下在白线上好点。
4. 01:16:811 (1,2) - 感觉这里可以做个包围，像这样:我不喜欢blanket，再看看把
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:19:811 (3) - 加个NC？

._.

JJburstOwO wrote:

General

Source和Tag还空着呢
combo color弄点好看的
听说Enable countdown已经没用了，可以去掉吧

Normal

00:07:811 (1,2) - 距离有点远
01:15:311 (4) - 可以加个转盘

Insane

00:13:811 (1) - 有点歪 可以包好些
00:43:248 (5,1) - blanket

Hard摸不出来

摸不动啊..QAQ

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: hikarunara_goosehouse.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52623
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3311,6311,10811,14561,25811,37811,43811,52811,64061,76436,76811
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Hikaru nara -TV size-
TitleUnicode:光るなら -TV size-
Artist:Goose house
ArtistUnicode:Goose house
Creator:Mei
Version:JJburst's Insane
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso Your Lie in April Opening JJburstOwO
BeatmapID:523139
BeatmapSetID:223180

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
315,375,4,2,1,40,1,0
315,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,40,0,0
3127,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
4815,375,4,2,1,55,1,0
4815,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
12127,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
13815,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
13815,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
37815,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
43815,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
52815,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,65,0,1
76815,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
88065,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
88815,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,215,91
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 157,79,0
Combo4 : 255,155,205

[HitObjects]
180,108,315,6,0,P|216:104|236:92,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,32,690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,877,2,0,P|240:176|284:152,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,1440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,140,1627,6,0,L|354:260,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,2190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,348,2377,2,0,L|430:228,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,32,3127,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,3221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,40,3315,2,0,L|256:32,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,3690,2,0,L|204:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,4065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,276,4252,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,324,4440,2,0,P|283:335|244:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,4815,5,6,0:0:0:0:
216,96,5002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,5190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,276,5377,2,0,P|168:236|160:192,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,5752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,196,5940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,336,6127,6,0,P|324:344|376:288,1,160
408,200,6690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,68,6877,2,0,P|504:105|500:149,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,92,7252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,147,7440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,92,7627,6,0,P|284:88|232:20,1,160
324,4,8190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,84,8377,2,0,P|129:91|88:96,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,20,8752,2,0,P|66:13|108:8,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,172,9127,6,0,P|36:252|96:296,1,160
188,280,9690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,280,10065,2,0,P|228:276|268:276,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,308,10440,2,0,P|400:312|360:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,232,10815,5,10,0:0:0:0:
460,144,11002,2,0,P|456:104|456:64,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,232,11377,1,10,0:0:0:0:
356,251,11565,2,0,P|352:211|352:172,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,232,11940,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,172,12127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,348,12315,6,0,P|391:343|439:307,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,284,12877,2,0,L|192:280,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,13252,2,0,L|252:92,1,60.0000022888184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,172,13627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,13815,6,0,B|176:192|176:192|96:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,92,14377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,89,14565,2,0,P|188:88|228:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,172,14940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,4,15127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,4,15315,6,0,L|352:13,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,112,15877,2,0,P|332:152|332:192,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,359,16252,2,0,P|394:319|395:279,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,120,16627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,120,16815,6,0,P|512:184|484:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,17377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,219,17565,2,0,L|324:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,17940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,312,18127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,18315,6,0,L|314:365,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,312,18877,2,0,L|156:316,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,380,19252,2,0,L|88:376,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,19627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,19815,6,0,B|88:208|88:208|84:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,32,20377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,76,20565,2,0,P|200:80|240:80,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,20940,2,0,P|307:142|335:114,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,154,21315,6,0,P|488:208|448:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,279,21877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,360,22065,2,0,P|304:364|264:364,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,22440,2,0,P|160:292|200:292,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,368,22815,6,0,P|24:296|68:216,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,23377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,23565,2,0,L|192:40,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,44,23940,2,0,L|100:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,200,24315,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,200,24502,2,0,L|328:204,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,128,24877,2,0,L|388:124,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,25252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,25440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,348,25815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,348,26190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,348,26565,2,0,P|172:344|132:336,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,296,26940,2,0,P|112:248|192:264,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,168,28065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,124,28252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,12,28440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,12,28815,6,0,B|216:32|280:24|280:24|244:44,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,88,29377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,47,29565,2,0,P|68:87|67:127,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,29940,2,0,P|140:232|140:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,332,30315,6,0,P|136:364|212:332,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,244,30877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,136,31065,2,0,P|324:176|320:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,233,31440,2,0,P|445:211|414:187,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,316,31815,6,0,P|354:299|392:284,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,119,32190,2,0,L|180:136,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,72,32752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,24,32940,2,0,L|272:16,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,24,33315,6,0,P|432:76|436:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,212,33877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,34065,2,0,P|304:324|300:284,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,212,34440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,212,34815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,156,35002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,271,35190,2,0,L|208:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,212,35565,2,0,L|444:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,35940,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,288,36127,2,0,L|292:376,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,36502,2,0,L|212:68,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,252,36877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,37065,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,288,37252,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,156,37440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,156,37815,6,0,P|188:156|160:152,1,60.0000022888184,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,104,38190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,104,38377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,38565,2,0,P|232:72|260:76,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,124,38940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,124,39127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,39315,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,244,39502,2,0,B|224:304|176:304|204:360,1,120.000004577637
292,332,40065,2,0,L|292:272,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,180,40440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,220,40815,6,0,P|440:224|408:220,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,41190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,41377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,41565,2,0,P|436:312|376:300,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,42127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,336,42315,6,0,L|184:272,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,188,42690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,352,42877,2,0,L|84:228,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,144,43440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,52,43815,6,0,L|368:44,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,44377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,44565,2,0,P|396:188|388:264,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,328,45127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,280,45315,6,0,L|220:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,276,45690,2,0,L|156:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,46065,2,0,L|96:196,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,46440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,120,46815,6,0,P|176:76|188:0,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,92,47752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,184,47940,2,0,L|304:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,48315,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,92,48502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,244,48690,2,0,L|380:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,92,49065,2,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,49440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,200,49815,5,10,0:0:0:0:
120,180,50002,1,10,0:0:0:0:
420,292,50377,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,381,50565,1,10,0:0:0:0:
396,68,50940,5,10,0:0:0:0:
459,0,51127,2,0,P|484:76|440:152,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,152,51690,2,0,L|272:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,52065,2,0,L|216:64,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,180,52440,2,0,L|16:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,276,52815,5,6,0:0:0:0:
326,165,53002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,180,53190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,269,53377,2,0,L|468:296,1,191.999994140625
326,165,53940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,352,54127,2,0,L|173:325,1,191.999994140625
60,308,54690,5,8,0:0:0:0:
41,194,54877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,220,55065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,323,55252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,236,55440,2,0,L|144:136,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,9,55815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
20,80,56002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,236,56190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,164,56377,2,0,L|484:140,1,191.999994140625
340,272,56940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,64,57127,2,0,L|436:40,1,191.999994140625
292,164,57690,6,0,P|280:212|260:256,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,58065,2,0,P|127:182|175:177,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,364,58440,2,0,P|178:329|150:290,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,58815,5,6,0:0:0:0:
320,212,59002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,59190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,111,59377,2,0,L|228:300,1,191.999994140625
367,143,59940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,232,60127,2,0,L|187:43,1,191.999994140625,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,60690,6,0,P|352:40|400:36,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,12,61065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,143,61252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,208,61440,2,0,P|480:160|480:108,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,324,61815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,284,62002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,324,62190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,360,62377,2,0,L|100:368,1,191.999994140625
52,260,62940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,272,63127,2,0,P|264:280|316:208,1,191.999994140625
296,96,63690,6,0,P|288:48|292:0,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,48,64065,2,0,P|407:95|404:142,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,64440,2,0,P|184:96|188:48,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,64815,5,6,0:0:0:0:
287,210,65002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,65190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,48,65377,2,0,L|388:240,1,191.999994140625
484,172,65940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,210,66127,2,0,L|299:18,1,191.999994140625
192,64,66690,6,0,L|184:160,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,272,67065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,124,67252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,67440,2,0,L|108:120,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,272,67815,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,380,68002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,252,68190,2,0,L|412:264,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,360,68565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,272,68752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,68940,2,0,L|484:352,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,69315,6,0,B|204:272|204:272|240:200,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,69877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,70065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,202,70252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,44,70440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,44,70815,6,0,L|284:140,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,71190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,286,71377,2,0,L|200:96,1,191.999994140625
364,184,71940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,256,72127,2,0,P|368:292|452:256,1,191.999994140625
176,168,72690,6,0,L|272:160,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,352,73065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,184,73252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,252,73440,2,0,P|100:204|108:120,1,191.999994140625,8|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,74002,5,0,3:0:0:0:
316,80,74190,1,0,3:0:0:0:
364,184,74377,1,0,3:0:0:0:
309,284,74565,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,300,74752,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,219,74940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,144,75127,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,75221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,75315,2,0,P|244:192|244:244,2,95.9999970703126,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,75877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,324,76065,2,0,P|396:336|448:344,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,184,76440,2,0,P|421:195|374:203,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,76815,5,6,0:0:0:0:
208,112,77002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,77190,2,0,L|448:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,77565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,112,77752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,272,77940,2,0,L|240:372,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,204,78315,6,0,L|36:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,78690,2,0,L|196:12,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,79065,2,0,L|400:172,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,193,79440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,92,79815,6,0,L|44:12,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,188,80377,2,0,P|20:264|72:316,1,160
164,288,80940,6,0,L|248:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,204,81315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,304,81502,2,0,L|420:312,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,220,82065,2,0,P|437:165|416:91,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,44,82627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,84,82815,6,0,L|256:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,83190,2,0,L|188:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,352,83565,2,0,L|228:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,220,83940,2,0,L|296:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,84315,6,0,L|364:368,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,84690,2,0,L|392:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,128,85065,2,0,L|120:68,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,85440,2,0,L|92:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,218,85815,6,0,L|252:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,37,86190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,288,86377,2,0,P|224:328|302:315,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,220,86940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,368,87127,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87221,12,0,88815,0:0:0:0:

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. 加多200ms的AudioLeadIn，确保玩家有1.5秒以上的准备时间.
2. Tag加上 JJburst

Insane

• 
  前奏过后就不下soft-whistle音效了...？少了感觉很奇怪。(嗯你可以用把它加载别的自定义音效音轨里....要加的时候就切成那个additions来加。)这个是为了防止前面太空所以加的，后面有合适的哨子所以就不加了

1. 00:02:373 (7) - 滑条尾没音，稍微降低一下音量吧？推荐15%。
2. 00:12:123 (8) - 换成1/1滑条接两个note(连打)?现在大白线处违和感有点强。感觉有点破坏梗的整体性，现在的话感觉打起来还可以
3. 00:24:123 (5) - 换成1/2滑条比较好，和00:24:498 (2,3,4) - 形成整体。
4. 00:39:873 (2) - 加Soft-whistle?
5. 00:43:811 (1) - 稍微有点扭曲。
6. 00:53:373 (4) - 嗯...长音用停顿梗挺奇怪的...这里的停顿感觉很合曲啊
7. 01:13:811 (1,2,5) - 这里用drum不好吧，听起来很奇怪。修改了一下，保留了一个图里有得
8. 01:28:061 - 加一个30%音量的绿线在这。音乐淡出得有点快，玩的时候转盘音量会略大。
   按照日本流风格来说已经没什么可挑的了，但你这个难度有个比较大的问题...
   那就是大部分鼓点音效和节奏没什么关系,玩的时候音效是音效，多数都没打击出来...(多数问题是重音音效下在了滑条尾)
   我个人认为重音就要让玩家打击下去，无论是音乐里的音还是重音音效。这样玩家才会有更好的打击感。

Hard

1. 00:03:123 (1) - 滑条尾加Finish。
2. 00:03:686 (3) - 滑条头加Clap.
3. 00:04:061 (4) - 滑条尾Whistle.
4. 00:04:436 (5) - 滑条尾的Clap去掉，加多了奇怪...而且你Insane也没加。
5. 00:12:686 (2,3,4) - 这种就是重音音效和打下去完全没关系的典例...这么下音效有什么意思呢?难道只是为了听到...
6. 00:38:373 - 加note,这一部分其实都是XX XXXX这样的节奏...后面也应该补上。
7. 01:13:811 (1) - Drum的Finish还是降20%的音量吧...把finish去掉了用drum hitnormal
8. 01:22:061 (3) - 滑条头Clap.
9. 01:28:061 - 加一个30%音量的绿线在这。

Normal

1. 00:03:311 (1) - Finish?
2. 01:15:311 (4) - Finish.这段有点空，在01:16:061 - 补个note比较好。
3. 01:28:061 - 加一个30%音量的绿线在这。

Easy

1. 00:50:561 (2) - 用Finish更好。
2. 01:28:061 - 加一个30%音量的绿线在这。

Others

（此处写了各种懒的理由）,Goodluck.

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

怎么飞出个remap来。。那我就摸remap不摸Insane了

[General]
对所有难度，包括GD
整体感觉音效方面可以多加点finish不仅仅局限于背景音乐，比如
00:46:811 (1) - slider头 00:49:811 (1) - 00:50:560 (2) - 类似的地方感觉都可以加的怕感觉吵.-.先安稳的来吧

[remap]
00:06:873 (1,2,3,4) - 这个flow不好玩，怎么改我也不知道=-=。。

00:17:561 (2,3,1,2) - 方向改的太突兀了，等00:18:123 (2,3) - 的时候改感觉上要合适的多，比如下面这图（蓝色2 3的位置被我自己改了点。。我大概就是想表达这么个意思，不知道能懂不=-=具体怎么改你看你自己兴趣吧）

SPOILER

00:59:186 (3) - 这个放到右下角那个三角形中心更好。大概424|308

01:13:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段鼓音相对周围的soft-finish都有点高了，加根绿线，音量降到40左右试试鼓大部分都去掉了


[Hard]
nothing

[Normal]
00:00:311 (1,2) - 合并？

00:04:811 (1,2) - 合并，00:05:373 (3) - 到00:05:748 - 结束

00:06:311 (3) - 从00:06:123 - 开始00:06:686 - 结束

00:07:248 (4) - 从00:06:873 - 开始00:07:248 - 结束

00:07:811 (1) - 从00:07:623 - 开始00:08:186 - 结束

00:08:373 (2) - 不变

00:08:936 (3) - 从00:09:123 - 开始00:09:686 - 结束

↑↑↑normal就不多说了，基本就这样。类似这样的节奏，感受一下。现在那个按白线开头的有些地方打着很是蛋疼;w;

[Easy]

不会，GG。。。

meili, jiayou~

huafenshaonv wrote:

来摸
[easy]
00:10:811 (1) - 转盘有点短 这里结束吧00:13:061后面就没有4个白线了，这样会被unrank.-.
00:34:061 (3) - NC？
00:49:061 多一个slider？00:49:061~00:49:436同理
00:53:936 (3) - 进hp
[nor]
01:22:811 (1) - 去了NC
nice
[Hard]
00:05:936 (4,1,2) - 舍弃ds用叠加前面不明智 可以兼顾的
00:31:811 (1) - 感觉跳的有点近
01:08:373 (3) - 拉的随意了 s弧线修整下
01:12:311 +1note 和前面保持一致
[insane]
00:03:311 (2) - add clap
01:17:936 (5) - 跳的远一点
01:19:061 (4) - ^

调整下NC 还有点乱
good luck

al2e10 wrote:

Welcome to AL2's mod queue :
可以用中文了 WWW
REMAP就不用MOD了?

==Insane==
- General -
- Combo -
01:12:311 (1) - 好像NC沒宥必要
01:14:936 (1) - ^
- Sound -
- Other(s) -
00:04:436 (7,8,1) - 不知道怎改... 但SPACING這樣下去會好奇怪... 會不會把8做成7和1之間?这里是故意的，现在流行这个（逃其实是这样做还蛮有趣而且跟人觉得比同spacing的要好打些
00:05:186 (2,3,4,5) - 會不會做一個正方形較好?感觉反而难打orz
00:08:561 (4,5,6) - 改一改SPACING?不好，因为56是个角度很大的antijump，这里改打了难度会很打，用小一点的角度看起来不是很合理其实打起来反而会顺
00:20:561 (3) - 用4的CTRL + < X2 會比較美
00:22:061 (3,4,5) - SPAICNG很怪间距逐渐加大啊不是很奇怪吧
00:25:248 (4) - 下一格會好看見多嗎?会overlap orz，不过还是做了点调整
00:29:748 (4,5,6) - SPACING (X.198 X2.16)4这里感觉需要一个大跳，因为男声vocal刚好在这里重新起了一句
00:32:373 (2,3,4) - ^这里为了blanket所以不改，而且现在的结构蛮顺
00:35:936 (7,8,1) - 之前有說過了
00:43:061 (4,5,6) - 會改一改SPACING嗎?这里没用等ds的原因是因为滑条很粗，判断上会出现差别，其实这里这样拍给人的感觉也是和等ds差不多的

======Overall=======
Quite good with those maps set, but remember to check the spacing.

Gaia wrote:

nice manga
didnt watch the anime yet tho, song's good so ill look forward :3

ヽ(･ω･ゞ)

1. Offset 315 sound better to me
2. Inconsistency in Widescreen Support

1. OD 8 is better for this diff, try to don't have OD -2 respect to AR
2. 00:01:623 looking at your combo pattern, you are adding one in every stanza, this mean that you are missing a NC here 00:01:623 -
3. 00:03:123 (1,2) - this 1/4 jumps is too big (since is the first one that you use in this diff) decreasing the spacing can help to the readability here, just a bit and this can work better.
4. 00:04:061 this NC is not even necessary, every time that you use a NC affect the overall HP drain in the diff, that's why keep them consistent is important.
5. 00:04:061 missing whistle I think, since a similar sound is in the music.
6. 00:04:248 (2) - there is a clap in the music as well, not sure if you are missing it or if you ignored it on purpose
7. 00:07:623 add whistle is really prominent in the music
8. 00:06:311 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - mmm just as a personal opinion, seems like you are mapping more to the bpm than to the prominent beats, mmm what I mean is by using others rhythms instead of mapping always to the downbeats can improve your map, for this part you can try:
   
   SPOILER

   
   take in mind that this is just my opinion, if you really like to follow wherever that you are then keep it
9. 00:10:623 (1,1,1) - the sound is kinda inaudible and feel weird to click them, but I see what you want to do, adding whistle to those beats, can make this better, since the click actions will bring a nice feedback
10. 00:12:311 (1,2,3,4) - similar as 00:06:311 -, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:12:311 also where is the whistle? you are missing a lot of spots that need some whistles, will be nice if you take a look at your diffs and add some more whistles.
12. your rhythm get a lot better from here 00:13:811 -, I guess your problem what just at the begginning, anyways will be nice if you improve the rhythms in the intro
13. 00:24:311 (1,2,3,4) - you did a pretty nice rhythm here, but not in 00:22:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are not following the same even when the parts are the same section in the music, my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:34:061 remove NC, is not necessary, since is not like 00:29:748 (1) -
15. 00:34:998 (2) - instead of claps, soft default whistles can do a better work for this kind of sound (apply to every similar part in the music)
16. 00:35:936 (7) - use two circles instead? follow the prominent beats a lot better IMO
17. 00:52:061 (1) - this doesn't need NC, since is the same part in the music as 00:51:123 (1,2,3) -
18. 00:54:123 (2,1) - this rhythm sound a bit weird, try this instead: (also consider to not NC 00:53:748 - seems so spammy)
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 00:56:748 (1) - same feeling about the NC, I guess is better to don't have one here
20. 00:57:498 whistle
21. overall is a fine map, but I feel that the intro can be better (talking about rhythm, placement is really nice to play) also try to add some more whistles, there are a lot of spots that feel empty cause of that

1. 00:01:623 (1,3) - ugly overlap IMO, try to avoid this, since doesn't fit your mapping style
2. 00:34:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm at this part really bother me a bit, I guess it could be improved, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:311 you was adding NC in every stanza, based on that you are missing a NC here 00:48:311 -
4. 00:50:373 (1) - this doesn't need NC.. spamming combos just mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff, so is better if you avoid this.
5. 00:55:436 try to don't sliders in such important beats as 00:55:811 - this is the place where a new section is starting in the music plus a new verse in the vocals and is where your NC is supposed to be, but not in 00:55:998 (1) - , so will be nice if you change the rhythm here
6. 00:58:998 (2) - this need 1 grid to the right to avoid an overlap with 00:59:373 (4) - sorry for nazi, but this kind of stuff doesn't fit with this clean diff
7. 01:11:373 (3) - this is touching the HP bar (tested with default skin)
8. 01:22:811 (1,2,3,4) - not a big fan of the overlaped tails.. I guess is better if you avoid it

1. your settings are really not balanced and look random.. try OD 6 HP 6
2. same about whistles in insane and rhythm in the intro
3. 00:01:623 missing NC, same reason as Insane
4. 00:12:686 (2,3) - blanket
5. 00:15:123 (5) - a 1/2 slider or a 1/2 repeat will fit better the music, cause of the sound that you are ignoring is louder than the mapped as tail
6. 00:14:561 (3,5) - this pattern can be better, if you blank 5 with 3 better
7. 00:17:373 (6,1) - swap NC, since you are not following the stanzas, so in my opinion is better to have it in 00:17:373 (6) - where the vocal verse is starting
8. 00:20:561 (1,2) - swap NC, similar reason as above
9. 00:22:061 (4,5,1) - rhythm and NC pattern can be better here, I think that actually is messed up, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:27:311 from 00:27:311 - to 00:36:123 - you started to use NC every two stanzas instead of one like you was doing.. this is not consistent, try to avoid this pls, since you changed to every one here again 00:36:311 -
11. 00:34:436 (2,3) - not stacked properly
12. 00:38:373 -, 00:39:873 -, 00:41:373 -, 00:42:873 -, really weird that you are ignoring that important beats in the music
13. 00:51:123 add finish, this apply for every diff

1. same as Hard your settings are not balanced, try HP4 OD 4
2. 00:14:561 (1) - to soon after a spinner for a normal diff, just remove 00:14:561 (1) - or remove the spinner and map that part properly, up to you
3. 00:49:061 (1) - ^
4. combos are a bit random imo, but rhythm and placement is really nice GJ

1. settings are really weird o.o, AR3 OD2 HP2 gonna be better for spread and balance
2. 00:13:811 (1,2) - this rhythm is really weird to me, try something that follow better the song, maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

Natsu wrote:

Hello

General:

1. Offset 315 sound better to me
2. Inconsistency in Widescreen Support

Insane:

1. OD 8 is better for this diff, try to don't have OD -2 respect to AR
2. 00:01:623 looking at your combo pattern, you are adding one in every stanza, this mean that you are missing a NC here 00:01:623 -
3. 00:03:123 (1,2) - this 1/4 jumps is too big (since is the first one that you use in this diff) decreasing the spacing can help to the readability here, just a bit and this can work better.
4. 00:04:061 this NC is not even necessary, every time that you use a NC affect the overall HP drain in the diff, that's why keep them consistent is important.
5. 00:04:061 missing whistle I think, since a similar sound is in the music.
6. 00:04:248 (2) - there is a clap in the music as well, not sure if you are missing it or if you ignored it on purpose
7. 00:07:623 add whistle is really prominent in the music
8. 00:06:311 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - mmm just as a personal opinion, seems like you are mapping more to the bpm than to the prominent beats, mmm what I mean is by using others rhythms instead of mapping always to the downbeats can improve your map, for this part you can try:
   
   SPOILER

   
   take in mind that this is just my opinion, if you really like to follow wherever that you are then keep it
9. 00:10:623 (1,1,1) - the sound is kinda inaudible and feel weird to click them, but I see what you want to do, adding whistle to those beats, can make this better, since the click actions will bring a nice feedback
10. 00:12:311 (1,2,3,4) - similar as 00:06:311 -, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:12:311 also where is the whistle? you are missing a lot of spots that need some whistles, will be nice if you take a look at your diffs and add some more whistles.
12. your rhythm get a lot better from here 00:13:811 -, I guess your problem what just at the begginning, anyways will be nice if you improve the rhythms in the intro
13. 00:24:311 (1,2,3,4) - you did a pretty nice rhythm here, but not in 00:22:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are not following the same even when the parts are the same section in the music, my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:34:061 remove NC, is not necessary, since is not like 00:29:748 (1) - i think NC here help players to understand the parttern
15. 00:34:998 (2) - instead of claps, soft default whistles can do a better work for this kind of sound (apply to every similar part in the music)imo clap fits more sorry
16. 00:35:936 (7) - use two circles instead? follow the prominent beats a lot better IMO
17. 00:52:061 (1) - this doesn't need NC, since is the same part in the music as 00:51:123 (1,2,3) -
18. 00:54:123 (2,1) - this rhythm sound a bit weird, try this instead: (also consider to not NC 00:53:748 - seems so spammy)since 00:54:311 there's a whistle, iprefer the current one
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 00:56:748 (1) - same feeling about the NC, I guess is better to don't have one herei remake all NC patterns in Kiai
20. 00:57:498 whistle
21. overall is a fine map, but I feel that the intro can be better (talking about rhythm, placement is really nice to play) also try to add some more whistles, there are a lot of spots that feel empty cause of that

Hard:

1. your settings are really not balanced and look random.. try OD 6 HP 6
2. same about whistles in insane and rhythm in the introi fixed al whistle part but for rhythm i keep mine since this diff mainly focus on vocal
3. 00:01:623 missing NC, same reason as Insane
4. 00:12:686 (2,3) - blanket
5. 00:15:123 (5) - a 1/2 slider or a 1/2 repeat will fit better the music, cause of the sound that you are ignoring is louder than the mapped as tail
6. 00:14:561 (3,5) - this pattern can be better, if you blank 5 with 3 better
7. 00:17:373 (6,1) - swap NC, since you are not following the stanzas, so in my opinion is better to have it in 00:17:373 (6) - where the vocal verse is starting
8. 00:20:561 (1,2) - swap NC, similar reason as above
9. 00:22:061 (4,5,1) - rhythm and NC pattern can be better here, I think that actually is messed up, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:27:311 from 00:27:311 - to 00:36:123 - you started to use NC every two stanzas instead of one like you was doing.. this is not consistent, try to avoid this pls, since you changed to every one here again 00:36:311 -
11. 00:34:436 (2,3) - not stacked properly
12. 00:38:373 -, 00:39:873 -, 00:41:373 -, 00:42:873 -, really weird that you are ignoring that important beats in the music
13. 00:51:123 add finish, this apply for every diff

Normal:

1. same as Hard your settings are not balanced, try HP4 OD 4
2. 00:14:561 (1) - to soon after a spinner for a normal diff, just remove 00:14:561 (1) - or remove the spinner and map that part properly, up to you
3. 00:49:061 (1) - ^
4. combos are a bit random imo, but rhythm and placement is really nice GJi think i used 2stanza per NC and it should be fine ._.

Easy:

1. settings are really weird o.o, AR3 OD2 HP2 gonna be better for spread and balance
2. 00:13:811 (1,2) - this rhythm is really weird to me, try something that follow better the song, maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

mmm in my opinion both Insanes and Hard diff can have a bit more work, try to get some more feedback about those diffs, I'll keep an eye in this map o/

Aretheus wrote:

I'm not a modder so I'm sorry that I can't quite help you but I favourited the beatmap cuz I like yours out of the other maps for this song

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

M4M here

[Easy]
00:37:811 (1,2,3,4) - 倒是没啥必要短链 单点就好这里节奏其实没用好应该用长滑条的，但是当时没想好，这里这个音貌似好像是压着鼓的我也不太确定

[Normal]
00:20:748 - 加nont,hrfl的时候这边坑了我 加note好接我跟的人声，不加

00:23:373 - ^

00:26:561 (2,3) - 搞折返，hrfl我这点了50，和后面5照应

00:37:811 (1,3) - 都延长1/4这样滑条和下一个note之间间隔就会变得很奇怪了，而且压蓝线本来就不科学

01:04:811 (1,2,3) - 差flow，

01:06:873 - 加个note？反正这里很不顺，总觉得少什么没感觉

01:15:311 (4) - 可删，Normal跟歌完全可以，这个多余先保留

01:24:311 (5,6) - blanket,其实我最讨厌说blanket的惹

[Hard]

00:06:498 (2,3) - blanket

00:08:936 (5,6) - 正确的节奏是把5删了6拉前，何况长白线在滑条中间有音没滑条点听后会让人很困感觉还好

囧

00:10:811 (1,2,3,1) - 12你可以考虑单点+滑条，折返不好，参考后面31感觉没必要啊。。

00:13:248 (3,4,5) - flow好差 试试你这个滑条会和之前一个滑条凑在一起啊，ar低的情况下很难看得，不过还是改了一下

SPOILER

00:34:436 (2) - 我是觉得没必要蓝线结尾 就算你说拉长音，但在红线已经没惹感觉没事.-.为什么蓝线结尾我也不知道，改起来太麻烦了先保留

[Insane]
00:02:373 (3,1) - 叠好 这是叠好的啊不是手动移的，是他自己对齐的

00:03:311 (2,4) - same^

00:08:373 (3,1) - ^

00:07:061 (5) - 不喜欢这个折返，打起来不顺，拆滑条+单点，试试这个滑条会和00:08:373 (3) - 叠起来啊

SPOILER

00:36:217 (8) - 根本没音，有个chi的音啊，满明显的

01:19:436 (5,1,2,3,4) - 打了下 发现这边很突然地就跳走了，莫名，建议选中1234 ctrl+j感觉太近了

加油

Sellenite wrote:

哦草这也能写论文，fuel
哈哈等不及了吧

pkk wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Easy

1. 00:01:627 (2) - try curving it more to make it look nicer
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:440 (1) - move to 00:46:815 - (don't shorten spinner, make sure it ends on 00:48:690 - ) then add note at 00:46:440 - .then i will get disaqual;ify since gap between spinner and note was too soon. but i moved it to 00:46:815
   This way spinner start matches the sound in the music
   
   coolcool

Normal

1. 00:06:877 (5) - move to the right a bit so it lines up with the curve on the slider (~x 148 y 116)
   
2. 00:20:565 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm insteadi followed vocal here and it sounds fine for me ;;
   
   ^00:21:315 - slider on downbeat also maps vocal, you can either keep 1/2 slider at 00:22:065 (4) - or use repeat slider.
   
3. 00:37:815 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm instead:made some change based on this
   
   idk I just like this rhythm better without the gaps between the notes. Up to you though

Hard

1. 00:23:190 (2,3) - I think it's ok to stack these two since there is a prolonged trumpet sound in the music at 00:23:190 - i want to follow the ds
   
2. 00:30:127 (2) - take me for a ride in your new carthats almost same for me
   idk try this shape for smoother curves:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:690 (3,4,5) - , 00:46:440 (7,1) - etc, can be blanketed better if that was your intention
   
4. 01:04:440 (4,1,2) - for better flow (and to make it look nicer), try rearranging like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:15:690 - space here sounds empty, I feel that it's better to map it than to leave it silent for effect. fixed by changinhg these to sliders
   
   ^repeat on 01:15:315 - and circle on white ticks
   
6. 01:22:065 (1,3) - NC should be swapped so it stars on downbeatfollowed stanza and vocal, i think there is no problem here
   
   Normal diff needs to be polished a bit

JJburst's Insane

1. 00:00:315 (1,2,3) - merry christmas \o/
   
2. 00:05:940 (6) - consider stacking this on the tail of 00:05:377 (4) - , I think it flows better into 00:06:127 (7) - since you'll be able to go straight down into the curve instead of from the side at an awkward angle.
   
3. 00:07:440 (11,1) - try stacking circle on tail for better flow
   
4. 00:11:940 (5,6,1) - this back and forth motion is awkward to play imo, try ctrl+G on 00:12:315 (1) - , then stack 00:12:127 (6) - with head of 00:11:565 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:21:315 (1) - try ctrl+j ctrl+g then stack 00:21:877 (2) - under the tail
   
   SPOILER

   
   flows better imo
   
6. 00:31:065 (3,4,1) - cool 'w'
   
   Nice diff

Insane

1. 00:37:815 (1,3) - imo stacking these feels nicer to play since the current flow at 00:37:815 (1,2) - is kind of abrupt/sharp idk
   
2. 01:02:377 (4,5) - compared to some of the other antijumps, the spacing on this one is a bit larger. I think it looks better if at least half the circle overlaps the slider
   
3. 01:18:502 (2) - try moving it upwards more, maybe around ~x220 y156. I think it'll be more fun to play than having 01:18:315 (1,2,3) - in a straight line
   
4. 01:19:440 (5) - you can try moving this downwards since 01:19:065 (4) - is going in a downwards direction. If you took the previous suggestion then you can stack 01:18:502 (2,5) - the note upoward the slider is fine now, imo downwards would be kind weird
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:28:065 - in the other diffs there is a 30% volume green line here, you might want to add that
   
   sexy stuff

Have fun mapping! 晚安~ zzzzzzzzzz

1. hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
2. 00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpointｓ are unnecessary, imo

1. 00:03:315- finish
2. 00:03:690- clap

1. 00:03:690- clap
2. 00:04:440- ^
3. 00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127
4. 00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
5. 00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
6. 00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
7. 01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:21:690- clap
9. 01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?

1. 00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetion
   
2. 00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
3. 01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo

1. 00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) -
3. 01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
4. 01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?

1. 00:06:127 (7) - NC
2. 01:00:690 (1) - how about upward slider?
   
   SPOILER

   

Zweib wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:24:877 (5) - add circle?
00:43:065 (5) - delete it and add circles at 00:42:877 (5) and 00:43:252 (6) ?
01:15:315 (4) - use a slider end at 01:16:440 ?没灵感啊

[Hard]
00:09:127 (6) - NC?
(I prefer you NC for each 4/1 while not according to the vocal)

[JJburstOwO]
missing 2 timing points in this diff （虽然不知道那两条红线有什么用
00:11:565 (4) - unpleasant stack and flow here, ctrl + g?
00:27:315 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:14:565 (3) - move right by 1 pixel

Kazuya wrote:

Hello, from My Mod queue. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

AR: change to 8, or 8,5. It's 160 BPM, AR9 is not better
OD: change to 7,5

00:03:127 (1) - Do I have a short slider? I prefer two circle. :/ kick slider here is better for me :/
00:04:440 (7) - If you don't put a stream (Because it can be here.), delete this 00:04:721 (8) - circle. Without stream, doesn't fit here. Even the distance is big (1.86), and so weird. Can be misleading. If you not delete a (00:04:721 (8) - ) circle, you can use the same distance. Example: http://puu.sh/cQPoX/3724b8b615.jpg
00:09:315 (1) - Perfect stack: x: 448, y: 217
00:09:315 (1,2) - Follow the trumpet. Move 1/1 slider here: 00:09:315 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:09:877 - . Thus better fit. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/cQPMN/2f255cb4cd.jpg this make no differences in my point
00:11:752 (1) - Please, delete this circle. There is no emphasized sound.if you really tried delete it you will find the blank part gave a bad feedback
00:54:127 (6,1) - Move 00:54:315 (1) - 1/1 slider here: 00:54:127 - , and 00:54:127 (6) - circle here: 00:54:690 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVob/6b6e5576d5.jpg Better follow the vocal. 1/1 slider fits better here: 00:54:127 - then i will miss a drum in00:54:315 so no
01:00:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Move 01:00:315 (1) - 1/2 slider here: 01:00:127 - and 01:00:127 (6) - circle here: 01:00:502 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVvv/4572ccfbc8.jpg slider end on a drum point is not a good idea for me.. sorry ;w;
01:06:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Slider --> Circle (Vocal)
01:12:878 (4,5,6) - Same as ^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVBp/2beafdb86f.jpg (Vocal)^
01:26:752 (5) - Two circle is better fit the vocals.i dont want to break the pattern there sorry ><


[Hard]


AR: Change to 7! and HP to 5!

00:15:127 (4) - Please,m follow the vocal! Change slider end here: 00:15:502 - Please don't cancel!???there is no vocal and drum
00:17:940 (2,3) - Same as Insane.... Better fits the vocal: http://puu.sh/cSWHs/b71817bf79.jpgno because i will miss some obivous drum
00:27:127 (4,1) - ^ Replace them. slider --> circle ... Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWLw/80efe4ac4f.jpg^
00:34:440 (2) - Here finish the slider: 00:34:627 - Here is the vocalist voice "fades". x'Dumm i dont have such idea on how to place the new rhythm
00:57:315 (5) - Two circle is better.this is a easier diff so i use sliders to make it friendly to those newbies(and dt player)
01:07:065 (8) - ^
01:11:940 (3,4) - Replace them. circle ---> slider Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWZ2/09678aedcb.jpg Better fits the vocal.

[Normal]
OD, HP: Change to 3! It's little difficult normal.

00:19:065 (4) - This repeating 1/1 slider is not fit here. Follow the drums! Put 1/2 slider and add once repeat: 00:19:065 - , and put circle here: 00:19:815 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSXac/2d8bd758fd.jpg

Biggest problem: Various distance/jumps/little jumps is unrankable for normal! Fix it! Examples:

00:31:065 (5,1) - 1,60x
00:35:940 (3,4) - 1,40x
00:42:315 (4,5) - 1,60x
00:49:815 (2,3) - 1,44x

Correct any such errors! Please, fix it! Very important!i fixed some of them,but rest are because blanket or symmetric or other reasons i keep mine ><same with easy. btw aimod didnot mentioned this so i think they are not that important

[Easy]

Same as normal. Various distance problem.

00:01:627 (2,1) - 1,28x
00:03:315 (1,2) - 1,34x
00:15:315 (2,3) - 1,26x
00:15:690 (3,4) - 1,35x

Correct any such errors! pls fix it! Very important!

Good Luck.

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
2. 00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpointｓ are unnecessary, imo

[Easy]

1. 00:03:315- finish
2. 00:03:690- clap

[Normal]

1. 00:03:690- clap
2. 00:04:440- ^
3. 00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127will miss a drum ;;
4. 00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
5. 00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
6. 00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
7. 01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:21:690- clap
9. 01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?ww i think this shape is fine

[Hard]

1. 00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetionit is same so i am lazy with chaning it _(:зゝ∠)_
   
2. 00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
3. 01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo

[Insane]

1. 00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) - this stack fits music
3. 01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
4. 01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?current one is fine

nice song! and good rhythm coordination <3
~☆
~Good Luck~

Erina wrote:

Hey~~~ from my mod for voice queue~~~

Great map, song, and anime All of these are just ideas, apply what you see fit.

I began modding this a week ago, and then came back to check that half of my fixes were already fixed ;_; I should learn to mod faster >_<

[Insane]
00:03:877 (4,5) - Consider ctrl+g, currently its kinda hard to read, and it seems to fit better with the emphasis in the song (high/low notes alternation)umm i prefer current pattern, so no change ;;
00:05:377 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+g, I think it's better flow.
00:23:565 (4) - Move to x:340 y:216, makes it symmetrical with the other notes in the pattern
00:32:752 (4) - Consider having this note stack with 00:32:565 (3) - , feels better with the hitsounds/music
00:43:815 (1,2,3) - I feel like these two large jumps were kind of uncalled for, seems kind of abrupt in a fairly calm part of the song. Consider moving 00:44:190 (2) - to x:248 y:288i dont think the jump here is so that big. i prefer mine ;;


[Hard]
A great portion of this diff is NC modding, change what you need/see fit.

00:09:127 (6) - Add NC here, keeps consistent with earlier lines
00:16:815 (5,1) - Switch NCs, i prefer NCs to go with the beat/measures of the music
00:19:065 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here 00:19:815 (3) - , remove NC here 00:21:315 (1) - .
This is to keep consistent with the rest of your NCs in this section, and it works better with the 4/4 time signature of the song.
00:24:502 (6) - Consider removing NC, it's up to you. I think this part works better as a full line.
00:57:315 (5) - Consider changing this into two notes rather than a slider - i think it would emphasis the drums in the back more. I noticed that you rejected the idea once, but I really think changing this would sound and play better
01:15:315 (4) - Add NC here, it sounds like the beginning of a new line (vocals end here)

[Normal]
00:56:940 (3,4) - Doesn't seem to fit with the music well, especially for a normal diff. Consider replacing slider with a single note.ummm i think this fits vocal ;;
01:12:690 (6,7) - Same as above, consider changing the rhythm to be like http://puu.sh/d3bAE/5f64f84466.jpg
01:21:315 (4) - I don't understand the reason behind the red ticks in this slider...I personally don't like it

[Easy]
00:15:690 (3) - I feel like a normally curved slider rather than a sharp-curved slider would look better here.
00:46:440 (5) - Consider adding a note here, this part just feels empty without one.
01:00:690 (4) - Consider giving this slider a curve: http://puu.sh/d3bYh/232986ab57.jpg

I hope you find this mod somewhat useful

Contact me later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing!

• 00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle
  00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放，然后3ctrl+g，再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds
  SPOILER

  

• 00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
  00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
  00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点

• 00:10:440 (4) - 感觉全曲就这一个sldier是这个造型，好违和
  01:22:815 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉错开要好看点，不过改的话后面一组4个也要调整位置，还是看个人喜好吧
  
  SPOILER

  

Melt wrote:

真·随便看看

[Normal]

• 00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle因为有ez所以这里想搞的密一点
  00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放，然后3ctrl+g，再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds
  SPOILER

  

[Hard]

• 00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
  00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
  00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
00:06:315 (3) - Grid up

[Normal]
00:05:377 (3) - I personally feel ending at 00:05:752 will follow the strong beats better but keep if you prefer yours.
00:57:315 (4) - Mind giving a new combo since it feels distributed?no, because i do NC every 2 stanza and i want it keep consistency
01:03:315 (5) - ^?
01:09:315 (4) - ^?

[Hard]
00:18:877 (2) - (352,72) constructs a smoother flow.
00:34:440 (2) - The extra beat of 00:34:721 feels really awkward. Giving a 25% volume reduction won't hurt, would it?
01:19:815 (1) - Is the clap in the reverse intended?yes they are
01:20:940 (1) - ^?^

[JJburst's Insane]
00:06:877 (3) - The flow of (1,2,3) feels little weird personally. Mind setting (3) a ctrl+G?

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

随便写写，神麻婆的图摸不动orz

[Hard]
00:08:752 (4) - 这个音比较突出，和前一个叠不太好感觉
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - 这里可以考虑三角跳什么的，叠着不太过瘾，我觉得hard还是需要点跳的，不过也不要多

[JJburst's Insane]
00:07:440 (5) - 叠在头flow好点
00:18:315 (1) - ctrl+g有意境一点
01:07:815 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:315 (1) - 感觉ctrl+g好点感觉现在的好
00:47:940 (4,5) - ^
00:51:690 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉跳合适点，叠一起不好我感觉叠在一起跟贴合音乐
00:59:002 (2) - 这个跳大点啊 224,364 感觉差不多思考，这里是个梗啊

Mei wrote:

to l4d:
除了hard的那个排列，其他都改了