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ErunamoJAZZ

CodeS wrote:

Changed All metada and normal issues.
I allowed the changes in normal ;)
Kyubey
http://nyanpass.com
Re-bubbled, seems fine now.
DakeDekaane
Hi.

[General]
Consider making the gray color a bit darker so it doesn't bright too much in kiai?

[ Insane]
00:13:637 - As you've been following the instrumental, consider adding a note here?
00:20:771 (1) - This one isn't really a held vocall, so no reason to make a 3/4 slider. A circle is enough.
00:24:796 (5,6) - This is a bit weird, doesn't play bad, but it's a bit inconsistent with 00:28:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and personally I like more how the latter plays. idk what you think.
00:26:259 (5,6) - ^
00:53:151 (1) - Remove NC?
01:03:674 (1) - I see this more fitting as a circle, it'll give more impact, imo.
01:13:269 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here?
01:18:202 - Same as 00:13:637 -
01:25:329 (1) - Same as 00:20:771 (1) -
01:29:348 (5,6) - Same as 00:24:796 (5,6) -
01:30:810 (5,6) - ^

[ Hard]
00:20:771 (2) - As in Insane
00:24:796 (3,4) - As in Insane.
00:26:259 (3,4) - ^
00:31:015 (2,3) - I know you're following the vocal phrases with each slider, it's not so noticeable, I think putting a circle in 00:31:015 - and beginning (3) in 00:31:381 - would be better, as you'll be following that wind instrument.
01:14:730 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here?
01:25:329 (3) - Same as 00:20:771 (2) -
01:29:349 (3,4) - Same as 00:24:796 (3,4) -
01:30:811 (3,4) - ^

[ Normal]
:!: Edit: Disable Widescreen Support.
00:11:991 (4) - Consider having something to hit in 00:12:357 - instead releasing? It'd feel better to play beginning along with the vocal phrases (you've been doing it).
00:52:603 (2,3,4) - Not really important, but I think this would play better being the circle first and then the sliders, as the player will be hitting on strongest beats.
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt.
01:16:557 (2) - As in 00:11:991 (4) -
01:33:004 (1,2) - Put first the 1/2 slider and then the 1/1? as you did in the other parts, like 01:30:080 (1,2) -

[ Easy]
00:16:747 (3) - This slider would look sexier with more pronunciated curves, like 01:08:151 (1) -
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt.
01:08:151 (1) - This could be better being a 2/1 slider, it's the same rhythm as 01:06:690 (2) - so idk why you did it different.

nyan
ErunamoJAZZ

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi. Hi dake

[ Normal]
:!: Edit: Disable Widescreen Support. Fix... xD
00:11:991 (4) - Consider having something to hit in 00:12:357 - instead releasing? It'd feel better to play beginning along with the vocal phrases (you've been doing it). i'm not agree, i know all that, but i feel this is fine bc vocal "...nai no~" need be a slider imo, but put a note in 00:12:357 - + slider, is unacceptable for a normal, i think.
00:52:603 (2,3,4) - Not really important, but I think this would play better being the circle first and then the sliders, as the player will be hitting on strongest beats. Not changed.
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt. Nope, bc previous bat mod
01:16:557 (2) - As in 00:11:991 (4) - ^
01:33:004 (1,2) - Put first the 1/2 slider and then the 1/1? as you did in the other parts, like 01:30:080 (1,2) - mm... not bc 01:32:273 (3,4) - are both 1/2 sliders, so, 3 1/2 sliders will be very intense for a section not need to be.

nyanpasu!

Gracias!! http://puu.sh/ewWiB/bb4b4de784.zip
Topic Starter
CodeS

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Consider making the gray color a bit darker so it doesn't bright too much in kiai? Done

[ Insane]
00:13:637 - As you've been following the instrumental, consider adding a note here? I don't like how it plays, I preffer having a small break here, mostly because this is coming after a big DS Jump, making another here would be uncomfortable
00:20:771 (1) - This one isn't really a held vocall, so no reason to make a 3/4 slider. A circle is enough The voice extent to almost the blue tick, there is nothing wrong with playing it like 3/4 when it fits and flows nice, try listening to the voice in slow speed.
00:24:796 (5,6) - This is a bit weird, doesn't play bad, but it's a bit inconsistent with 00:28:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and personally I like more how the latter plays. idk what you think. I wanted to put the later like the first one you're suggesting to change actually, but I'm also using it as a transition to the slow part, that's why I want the player to focus on the next slider rather than focusing on a posible 3/4, and I preffer how the first sliders plays. that's why both are different.

00:26:259 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:151 (1) - Remove NC? "Nyanpasu!" on stack
01:03:674 (1) - I see this more fitting as a circle, it'll give more impact, imo. I disagree
01:13:269 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here?
01:18:202 - Same as 00:13:637 -
01:25:329 (1) - Same as 00:20:771 (1) -
01:29:348 (5,6) - Same as 00:24:796 (5,6) -
01:30:810 (5,6) - ^ Sorry but I'm going to disagree with all this, every single one of these changes ruin how fun the map is. Many of these 3/4 are on longer than average voice sections so they fit and play really well (I'm not the kind of mapper who puts 3/4 on places where they don't belong), makes the map as fun as it is. that's why no changes

[ Hard]
00:20:771 (2) - As in Insane Same as Insane
00:24:796 (3,4) - As in Insane. Same as Insane
00:26:259 (3,4) - ^ Same as Insane
00:31:015 (2,3) - I know you're following the vocal phrases with each slider, it's not so noticeable, I think putting a circle in 00:31:015 - and beginning (3) in 00:31:381 - would be better, as you'll be following that wind instrument. =)
01:14:730 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here? Done
01:25:329 (3) - Same as 00:20:771 (2) -
01:29:349 (3,4) - Same as 00:24:796 (3,4) -
01:30:811 (3,4) - ^ Already said why

[ Normal]
:!: Edit: Disable Widescreen Support.
00:11:991 (4) - Consider having something to hit in 00:12:357 - instead releasing? It'd feel better to play beginning along with the vocal phrases (you've been doing it).
00:52:603 (2,3,4) - Not really important, but I think this would play better being the circle first and then the sliders, as the player will be hitting on strongest beats.
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt.
01:16:557 (2) - As in 00:11:991 (4) -
01:33:004 (1,2) - Put first the 1/2 slider and then the 1/1? as you did in the other parts, like 01:30:080 (1,2) -

[ Easy]
00:16:747 (3) - This slider would look sexier with more pronunciated curves, like 01:08:151 (1) - Done!
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt. Sorry but no, these were changed on past BAT checks (one of them being for bubbled actually)
01:08:151 (1) - This could be better being a 2/1 slider, it's the same rhythm as 01:06:690 (2) - so idk why you did it different. Avoid being a really monotonous part, also plays well with the next slider both in flow and direction.

nyan
Gracias por el mod Dake, pero me estas pidiendo cambiar mucho el mapa, y me estas pidiendo cambiar principalmente los detalles que mas me gustan y le dan personalidad en mi opinion. Gracias por el mod.
DakeDekaane
ヽ(=^ω^=)丿
Ozato Fumika
lol gratz~~
Topic Starter
CodeS

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(=^ω^=)丿
As a note. We talked a lot about different changes on the mapset and stuff online.

THANKS!

ErunamoJAZZ

t-thanks
Pereira006
gratz :D
Asahina Momoko
gratz :)
BeatofIke
gratz :)
Myxo
gratz :)
Nyukai
wtf that spam

Anyways gratz
Kaguya Hourain
Nyan nyan
meii18
grats ! nya >///<
Mao
Oh wow this song lol
ainol
I want to upload this video to BiliBili, can?
Http://www.bilibili.com/
ErunamoJAZZ

ainol wrote:

I want to upload this video to BiliBili, can?
Http://www.bilibili.com/
lol, idk... we dont are the owners xDD, ask in nico nico douga.
ainol
Browse the website of other countries is very difficult in China, especially Japanese website.
I what all can't do in NicoNico, can you help me ask?
If you can't help me please tell me the SM number of this video.
Finally, thank you to reply to me.
-Asuki-Chan-
I like the maps beat but some notes you've placed have ruined that but other than that i love it dear to my heart its a good map thats why i put a 1 star cause its almost unplayable for some people and it ruins that idea of a perfect map but lovely work ill say that
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