1. missing add whistle and drum in hard
2. the timing by shiro and ticclick still more better, more correct

Kyubey wrote:

I have to pop this due to missing space in title:
«Dr.にゃんぱすー» → «Dr. にゃんぱすー»
And i'm pretty sure that source should be «Dr. Mario» since original music was from this game, and only got some looped anime voices. Move «non non biyori» to the tags and delete «dr. mario» from it.
And better to snap your preview point to... 00:41:680 - ?
Changed All metada and normal issues.

Additional modding:

[Hard]
00:43:294 (3) - missing NC due to your way to place it Sorry but no, you're just using strong beats for common combo placement, there is nothing that suggest a NC should be here, it clashes with how I NC too.

00:48:400 (1) - 00:49:862 (1) - 00:50:958 (1,1) - these NCs doesn't really follow anything in the music, and it looks just like overspam with NCs, i really suggest to delete them, because they don't fit music (and pattern, when 2 notes+2 notes) at all
00:54:263 (1) - 00:55:725 (1) - 00:57:187 (1) - 00:58:649 (1) - same thing
so, better to place NCs on the big white ticks there because only this will follow the music well Deleted every one
01:05:228 - why don't you use 2/1 slow sliders in this part that will really fit the music better? that 1/2 sound on the background is really too quiet to point at it somehow, so 2/1 slider will fit music much better Because in my mapping style, the idea of what I want to transfer in this part, a smooth kind of movement, 2/1 doesn't fit, and because that's not how I map things, I feel using this sliders fits better.
[Insane]
00:28:089 (4,2) - maybe stack them? (and move the whole pattern ofc). that will look better No, it ruins the entire symmetry also I don't like how it flows stacked and how it looks.
00:35:108 (1) - delete NC Done
00:38:835 - you have to _start_, not _finish_ slider here because you miss everything that music provides to you, you just ignored that sounds, i don't really undestand, why. place slider here and put note/repeat tail of previous slider 00:38:462 - here?
00:39:580 - you shouldn't place the end of slider here too
00:40:325 - and it will be really good if you place here repeat tail of 00:39:580 - slider that should be here and then put spinner and finish it 00:41:590 - here for example with using 5-10% volume on this point to make end of spinner not that loud Remapped a bit this part, also what spinner?
00:47:670 - i explained these NCs in the hard Done
01:05:228 - and i would use same suggestion as in the hard too same as Hard

I hope you will fix most of these things beause it will make your map look really solid, otherwise I'm not sure about if it is ready to become one of official maps.
Btw, about NCs: your Easy diff looks pretty clean with it, so, probably, better to keep same NC policy?

CodeS wrote:

Changed All metada and normal issues.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi. Hi dake

[ Normal]
Edit: Disable Widescreen Support. Fix... xD
00:11:991 (4) - Consider having something to hit in 00:12:357 - instead releasing? It'd feel better to play beginning along with the vocal phrases (you've been doing it). i'm not agree, i know all that, but i feel this is fine bc vocal "...nai no~" need be a slider imo, but put a note in 00:12:357 - + slider, is unacceptable for a normal, i think.
00:52:603 (2,3,4) - Not really important, but I think this would play better being the circle first and then the sliders, as the player will be hitting on strongest beats. Not changed.
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt. Nope, bc previous bat mod
01:16:557 (2) - As in 00:11:991 (4) - ^
01:33:004 (1,2) - Put first the 1/2 slider and then the 1/1? as you did in the other parts, like 01:30:080 (1,2) - mm... not bc 01:32:273 (3,4) - are both 1/2 sliders, so, 3 1/2 sliders will be very intense for a section not need to be.

nyanpasu!

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Consider making the gray color a bit darker so it doesn't bright too much in kiai? Done

[ Insane]
00:13:637 - As you've been following the instrumental, consider adding a note here? I don't like how it plays, I preffer having a small break here, mostly because this is coming after a big DS Jump, making another here would be uncomfortable
00:20:771 (1) - This one isn't really a held vocall, so no reason to make a 3/4 slider. A circle is enough The voice extent to almost the blue tick, there is nothing wrong with playing it like 3/4 when it fits and flows nice, try listening to the voice in slow speed.
00:24:796 (5,6) - This is a bit weird, doesn't play bad, but it's a bit inconsistent with 00:28:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and personally I like more how the latter plays. idk what you think. I wanted to put the later like the first one you're suggesting to change actually, but I'm also using it as a transition to the slow part, that's why I want the player to focus on the next slider rather than focusing on a posible 3/4, and I preffer how the first sliders plays. that's why both are different.

00:26:259 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:151 (1) - Remove NC? "Nyanpasu!" on stack
01:03:674 (1) - I see this more fitting as a circle, it'll give more impact, imo. I disagree
01:13:269 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here?
01:18:202 - Same as 00:13:637 -
01:25:329 (1) - Same as 00:20:771 (1) -
01:29:348 (5,6) - Same as 00:24:796 (5,6) -
01:30:810 (5,6) - ^ Sorry but I'm going to disagree with all this, every single one of these changes ruin how fun the map is. Many of these 3/4 are on longer than average voice sections so they fit and play really well (I'm not the kind of mapper who puts 3/4 on places where they don't belong), makes the map as fun as it is. that's why no changes

[ Hard]
00:20:771 (2) - As in Insane Same as Insane
00:24:796 (3,4) - As in Insane. Same as Insane
00:26:259 (3,4) - ^ Same as Insane
00:31:015 (2,3) - I know you're following the vocal phrases with each slider, it's not so noticeable, I think putting a circle in 00:31:015 - and beginning (3) in 00:31:381 - would be better, as you'll be following that wind instrument. =)
01:14:730 (3,4,1) - Consider fixing the spacing here? Done
01:25:329 (3) - Same as 00:20:771 (2) -
01:29:349 (3,4) - Same as 00:24:796 (3,4) -
01:30:811 (3,4) - ^ Already said why

[ Normal]
Edit: Disable Widescreen Support.
00:11:991 (4) - Consider having something to hit in 00:12:357 - instead releasing? It'd feel better to play beginning along with the vocal phrases (you've been doing it).
00:52:603 (2,3,4) - Not really important, but I think this would play better being the circle first and then the sliders, as the player will be hitting on strongest beats.
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt.
01:16:557 (2) - As in 00:11:991 (4) -
01:33:004 (1,2) - Put first the 1/2 slider and then the 1/1? as you did in the other parts, like 01:30:080 (1,2) -

[ Easy]
00:16:747 (3) - This slider would look sexier with more pronunciated curves, like 01:08:151 (1) - Done!
01:00:842 - , 01:02:304 - , 01:03:674 - I'd love to see some circles here. The break feels abrupt. Sorry but no, these were changed on past BAT checks (one of them being for bubbled actually)
01:08:151 (1) - This could be better being a 2/1 slider, it's the same rhythm as 01:06:690 (2) - so idk why you did it different. Avoid being a really monotonous part, also plays well with the next slider both in flow and direction.

nyan

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(=^ω^=)丿

THANKS!

ainol wrote:

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