[General]
- MP3 file sound bad. change it (it's already loud but have some waving sound)
- don't mute slider tick and slider slide together. it's againts the ranking criteria
- re-encode your BG video to 720p (or 480p)
- try search some tags that related with this song
- un-check widescreen, letterbox
- 00:52:558 - fit better for preview
[Trinity]
need some adjusment on flow, and NC still un-consistent, try use NC per 2 stanzas
00:09:110 - add note will follow vocal
00:09:553 (1) - remove finish
00:19:011 (1) - ^
00:18:716 (6) - move it somewhere else that fit with flow, for me (456,144) fit it
00:20:046 (3) - remove clap at end of reverse
00:21:080 - why don't use soft hitsound?
00:22:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - adjust the curve, make it neater (using grid level 4)
00:23:740 - soft hitsound?
00:24:775 (4,5,6,7,8) - different spacing in constant speed doesn't pleased
00:35:859 (10) - broken flow
00:41:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it can use better pattern
00:42:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - this star pattern is unpredictable
00:45:908 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know you can do better pattern
00:54:923 (5,6,7,8) - use same y-axis between same x-axis note
http://puu.sh/c6IVP.jpg00:55:514 (1) - move it, beside unpredictable also your flow is broken
00:56:696 (5,6) - move it 2 units down, so after 6 will get better flow
01:02:460 (1) - remove finish at end, also make neater curve
01:03:051 (2) - remove finish at start
01:05:415 (2,3) - unpredictable, also you can do better flow
01:07:189 (1,3,4) - make it curving can make neater flow
01:14:282 (5,6,7) - ^
01:16:056 (8,9) - move 3 or 4 units to left
01:19:011 (1,2,3) - can do neater flow imo
01:24:036 (1) - remove finish at start
some pro modder can find more problem... but for me it's the most part you can improve
[Hard]
okay flow & NC again. and be consistent, if your insane have spinner at start then add it here (and other diff if there's not yet spinner at start), ah.. and check AImod (ctrl+shift+a)
00:06:745 (1,2) - i'm not sure... i think you want a blanket. if it's true then fix it
00:08:075 (4) - neater curve
00:09:110 (6) - 1 units down
00:09:553 (1,2,3) - broken flow. change the curve to upward
00:14:282 (1) - remove finish
00:15:021 (3,4,5) - change 3 to curved
00:34:085 (1,2,3,4) - try fix it. it's ugly
00:37:041 (3) - move the end 1 unit down
00:39:701 (4) - curve fit better imo
00:43:395 (1) - remove finish at end. sound to loud
00:45:760 (1) - change to 1/2 slider. overmapped
00:50:341 - re-snap timing point
00:50:785 - ^
00:53:445 (2) - make standing slider. flowing better
01:01:868 (7,8) - unpredictable
01:08:371 (3) - move 1/2 time faster
http://puu.sh/c9hVl.jpg01:10:735 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this beat is hard to follow. consider change this
01:14:282 (1,2,3) - blanket better
01:26:105 (1) - you can make it better with just 3 point
http://puu.sh/c9iVm.jpg[Normal]
flow & NC already good, and spinner at start, and change the SV multiplier is not pleased on lower diff (easy and normal), chec AImod too
00:06:893 (1,2,3,4) - make neater flow
00:16:351 (1) - blanket better
00:23:445 (4) - remove finish
00:33:494 (2) - curved and blanket it
00:42:361 (3,4) - you can do it better
00:43:543 (1) - blanket better
00:44:430 (2,3,4,5,6) - player must be go to 5 instead of 4. try change the pattern
00:46:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:54:775 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - in most case, normal & easy must use DS. change this and do better flow
00:58:617 (2,3) - move 3 1 unit to right and make neater curve
01:00:982 (3) - remove finish at reverse and end
01:06:597 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern can do better
01:11:844 - remove this. it doesn't make any different on this part
01:16:351 (4) - remove finish at start
01:28:599 (5,6) - tidy the curve
[Easy]
should re-map... the SV is too low and your DS is to high.
probably this mapset have potential.
good luck
take care. maybe i will be your opponent to rank this song ;grin