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Tari
OMG , Your doing so mucj better, GREAT job on this.

Get some stars
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

Tari wrote:

OMG , Your doing so mucj better, GREAT job on this.

Get some stars
Thanks so much Tari!!! <3 <3 <3
Yakumo Ran
Nice map!

If I may make one suggestion; the singles after the slow slider ( 02:51:404 ) seem kind of out of place.
It might just be me nitpicking, but I've never really been a fan of singles with no indicator, if that even makes any sense >_<
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

Bananeur wrote:

Nice map!

If I may make one suggestion; the singles after the slow slider ( 02:51:404 ) seem kind of out of place.
It might just be me nitpicking, but I've never really been a fan of singles with no indicator, if that even makes any sense >_<
Hmm, ya they do feel a little weird. I'm gonna keep it for now, but i'll change it when I think of something better to put there. Thanks for the suggestion!
Jesus Christ
I like this map! it has nice flow.

Some criticisms:

2:37:716 : the (1) slider feels a bit awkward going straight up like that, maybe consider changing its shape/ the direction it moves in so that it flows into the next slider a bit better.

2:51:310 : the singles here might be a bit more interesting if they were small jumps or something, maybe a square?

can't find anything else at the moment, but yeah great map! :D
wendao
Fun song :D

[General]
  1. you might want to add Vocaloid Megpoid GUMI to tags

[Insane]

  • nice 3/4 slider you there
  1. 00:27:591 (3) - stack to 00:26:091 (3) - 's head?
  2. 00:46:341 (4) - better NC
  3. 01:35:279 (2) - how about NC here?
  4. 01:45:966 (4) - move to 252,248
  5. 03:04:529 - I hope you map this part so it'll break at 03:10:529
  6. 03:28:904 (1) - remove NC?
  7. 03:39:029 (1) - missing Whistle?
  8. 03:46:529 (9) - NC

[Hard]
  1. Slider Tick 2 fit best here
  2. AR 7 felt so slow, how about 7.5 - 8?
  3. 00:27:029 (1) - stack to 00:25:904 (2)
  4. 00:33:029 (4) - NC
  5. 00:46:529 (4) - ^
  6. 01:03:029 (5) - ^
  7. 01:34:529 (1) - missing Finish?
  8. 02:52:904 (2,4) - move it somewhere so it didn't hit 02:52:529 (1,3)
  9. 02:58:529 (3) - NC
  10. 03:00:779 (2) - same, move it somewhere

[Normal]

  • It's all fine, nothing particular to fix, just cutting some long combo
Accel World
[From M4M]

:) hi~

[Normal]

00:28:529 (1) - a little ugly slider :roll:

[Hard]

:roll: Why the distance between 00:26:841 (5) - 00:27:029 (1) is different with 00:17:841 (5) - 00:18:029 (1) ?
:3 please recheck the distance of this kind of jumps.
00:39:029 (1) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. :)
00:50:279 (3) - How about change the position with 00:50:466 (4) :P
00:55:529 (1) - Same question with 00:17:841 (5) :roll:
01:03:779 (7) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. :)
02:04:529 (5) - The angle slider is unsuitable for here, you can change a soft slider

02:18:591 (6) - ummm.... maybe change another position?
03:15:779 (1) - a little ugly slider :oops:

[Insane]

You forgot to click Widescreen support :oops:

00:17:446 (1) - How about change the position with 00:17:654 (2)
00:30:996 (4) - How about change the position with 00:31:154 (5)
01:00:029 (1) - 01:00:966 (6) - ummm...strange jumps, especially the position and distance between (4) and (5). :o
01:28:529 (1) - You can overlap with 01:27:966 (6) 8-) and don't forget to move 01:29:654 (1) to the right place.
01:43:154 (5) - You can move it to this position.

That's all for me. Nice song nice map :3 Good Luck~
DreaM117er
For M4M...I'm sorry I'm late. :(

Normal
00:39:779 (3) - this better


00:55:529 (1) - x28 y264, better
00:58:529 (1,2,3) - put beautiful circle
01:06:029 (3) - I don't think this slider's angle can let newer feel better.
01:21:029 (3) - ^
02:37:529 (1) - selection rotate -58
03:40:154 (4) - x416 y256


Hard
00:23:654 (3) - change two circles
00:26:654 (4,5) - put diamond look better (DS)
00:27:779 (3) - x296 y124, selection rotate -11
00:29:466 (7,1) - make parallel
00:30:591 (2) - Just suggestion: I think del this better
00:33:591 (5) - hide in 00:33:029 (4)'s tail
00:38:466 (3,4,5,1) - try this↓


00:40:341 (5,6) - del
00:46:154 (3) - change two circles
00:47:654 (6) - x140 y368→00:47:654 (6,7) - reverse selection
00:49:341 (5) - del
00:55:529 (1) - x238 y171
00:58:529 (2,3) - try this↓


01:26:279 (3) - x114 y120
01:30:591 (2) - del
01:31:154 (3) - follow lyric better
01:32:279 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try this↓
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01:38:841 (5) - stack circle(3)
01:42:029 (1,2) - I think you should try other look
01:43:341 (4,5,6,1) - same as 01:40:341 (4,5,1,2)
02:08:841 (5) - x392 y316, no jump better
02:28:341 (5,6) - move to 02:28:247
02:32:841 (5) - I think this hide in 02:32:466 (4) 's tail better
02:36:029 (5) - don't follow lyric??
02:40:154 (6) - reverse selection
02:52:341 - circle??
03:20:279 (1,3) - reverse selection
03:34:716 (1) - del finish, add finish on 03:34:341 (4)'s tail
03:46:529 to 03:49:529 - break time
03:53:466 (3,4,5) - DS please
03:59:654 (3) - change two circles


Insane
00:19:154 (5) - x220 y352
00:20:841 - put a circle here
00:43:529 (1,2) - same as 00:42:029 (1,2)
01:08:654 (6) - no arrow
01:17:654 (5) - x478 r160
01:19:716 (2) - x44 y180
01:19:904 (3,4,5) - same as 00:40:529 (1,2,3)
02:37:529 (10) - NC
02:51:591 (2,4) - del
03:51:029 (1,2) - same as 00:21:029 (1,2)


And this is for you.
Just Reference. :)
Not GD.
osu file format v13

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Title:Byoumei Koi Wazurai
TitleUnicode:病名恋ワズライ
Artist:Sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:[ Joey ]
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Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

m1223961117 wrote:

For M4M...I'm sorry I'm late. :(

Normal
00:39:779 (3) - this better changed


00:55:529 (1) - x28 y264, better ok
00:58:529 (1,2,3) - put beautiful circle ok
01:06:029 (3) - I don't think this slider's angle can let newer feel better. I changed the slider shape
01:21:029 (3) - ^ no change
02:37:529 (1) - selection rotate -58 ok
03:40:154 (4) - x416 y256 ok


Hard
00:23:654 (3) - change two circles ok
00:26:654 (4,5) - put diamond look better (DS) no change
00:27:779 (3) - x296 y124, selection rotate -11 no change, i like how its symmetrical
00:29:466 (7,1) - make parallel changed, but didnt make parallel
00:30:591 (2) - Just suggestion: I think del this better nah, i dont want to miss the piano note
00:33:591 (5) - hide in 00:33:029 (4)'s tail ok
00:38:466 (3,4,5,1) - try this↓ ok, I also changed the order of some notes


00:40:341 (5,6) - del I like the way this triple sounds here
00:46:154 (3) - change two circles ok
00:47:654 (6) - x140 y368→00:47:654 (6,7) - reverse selection I don't understand :(
00:49:341 (5) - del no change
00:55:529 (1) - x238 y171 ok
00:58:529 (2,3) - try this↓ ok


01:26:279 (3) - x114 y120 increased the distance, but not that much
01:30:591 (2) - del ok
01:31:154 (3) - follow lyric better done
01:32:279 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try this↓ I don't really know what to do with this code, srry =/
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01:38:841 (5) - stack circle(3) changed to something else
01:42:029 (1,2) - I think you should try other look I spaced them out more
01:43:341 (4,5,6,1) - same as 01:40:341 (4,5,1,2) the NC? changed
02:08:841 (5) - x392 y316, no jump better shortened the jump
02:28:341 (5,6) - move to 02:28:247 k
02:32:841 (5) - I think this hide in 02:32:466 (4) 's tail better no change
02:36:029 (5) - don't follow lyric?? i dont want to follow the vocals there
02:40:154 (6) - reverse selection no change
02:52:341 - circle?? ok
03:20:279 (1,3) - reverse selection no change
03:34:716 (1) - del finish, add finish on 03:34:341 (4)'s tail ok
03:46:529 to 03:49:529 - break time ok
03:53:466 (3,4,5) - DS please ok
03:59:654 (3) - change two circles ok


Insane
00:19:154 (5) - x220 y352 ok
00:20:841 - put a circle here [/color]no change
00:43:529 (1,2) - same as 00:42:029 (1,2) I dont understand
01:08:654 (6) - no arrow ok
01:17:654 (5) - x478 r160 ok
01:19:716 (2) - x44 y180 ok
01:19:904 (3,4,5) - same as 00:40:529 (1,2,3) fixed
02:37:529 (10) - NC ok
02:51:591 (2,4) - del changed
03:51:029 (1,2) - same as 00:21:029 (1,2)


And this is for you. I like it :)
Just Reference. :)
Not GD.
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80,232,31529,6,0,P|152:224|200:160,1,152.999995330811,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,64,32091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,64,32279,2,0,L|108:156,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,32654,2,0,L|198:163,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,272,33029,2,0,P|125:324|195:343,1,114.749996498108,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,33404,2,0,P|268:328|300:328,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,336,33779,2,0,P|372:280|376:236,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,34154,2,0,P|448:120|444:164,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,34435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,188,34529,6,0,L|324:176,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,34904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,124,35091,2,0,P|148:136|88:132,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,208,35466,2,0,P|88:252|84:312,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,35841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,35935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,36029,6,0,P|264:208|268:148,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,340,36404,2,0,P|200:328|260:332,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,36779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,228,36966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,268,37154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,312,37341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,37529,6,0,P|313:128|342:54,1,114.749996498108,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,52,37904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,217,38091,2,0,L|388:228,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,38466,2,0,L|360:116,2,76.4999976654053,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,39029,6,0,L|192:160,1,114.749996498108,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,172,39404,2,0,P|220:228|216:264,1,76.4999976654053,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,324,39779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,288,39966,1,2,0:0:0:0:
219,245,40154,2,0,L|315:235,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,248,40435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,40529,6,0,L|436:248,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,288,40904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,152,41091,2,0,L|364:132,1,114.749996498108,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,41466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,180,41654,2,0,P|279:225|288:276,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,344,42029,6,0,P|192:284|180:216,1,114.749996498108,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,212,42404,2,0,L|80:196,1,76.4999976654053,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,42779,2,0,L|344:300,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,320,43154,2,0,P|404:268|416:180,1,114.749996498108,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,184,43529,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,60,43810,2,0,L|344:12,1,38.2499988327027,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,44091,2,0,P|240:164|176:152,1,114.749996498108,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,148,44466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,44654,2,0,L|110:272,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,45029,6,0,L|222:267,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,267,45310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,267,45404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,132,45591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,132,45779,2,0,L|312:228,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,209,46060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,209,46154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,300,46341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,46435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,46529,6,0,L|432:172,1,114.749996498108,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,160,46904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,80,47091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,209,47279,2,0,L|412:220,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,47654,2,0,L|164:136,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,48029,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,236,48310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,236,48404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,132,48591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,184,48779,2,0,L|88:272,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,49154,2,0,L|200:40,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,164,49529,5,4,0:0:0:0:
268,228,49716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,49904,2,0,P|312:72|356:72,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,50279,2,0,L|328:240,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,50654,2,0,L|244:156,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,256,51029,5,2,0:0:0:0:
44,212,51216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,91,51404,2,0,L|140:168,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,51779,2,0,L|208:256,1,76.4999976654053,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,52154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,192,52529,6,0,L|340:204,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,52904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,172,52997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,53091,2,0,L|492:160,2,38.2499988327027,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,248,53466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,53654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,220,53841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,220,53935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,220,54029,6,0,L|484:80,1,114.749996498108,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,54404,2,0,P|444:64|388:68,1,76.4999976654053,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,54779,2,0,P|304:172|360:168,1,76.4999976654053,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,173,55060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,173,55154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,92,55341,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,100,55529,6,0,B|147:107|147:107|112:144|60:139,2,136,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,40,56654,2,0,P|92:92|92:184,1,136,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,57404,2,0,P|240:292|240:200,1,136,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,57966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,58154,2,0,P|336:208|304:204,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,58529,6,0,P|476:155|488:200,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,58904,2,0,P|363:60|396:28,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,59279,2,0,L|420:364,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,220,59654,2,0,P|350:202|388:196,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,348,60029,2,0,L|216:328,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,94529,6,0,L|240:204,1,63.75
352,176,94904,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,232,95091,2,0,L|424:332,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,95466,2,0,L|344:64,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,16,95841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,132,96029,6,0,P|412:176|312:192,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,96404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,132,96591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,216,96779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,96966,2,0,P|288:66|275:7,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97529,6,0,L|92:188,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,260,97904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,260,98091,2,0,P|140:304|232:316,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,312,98466,2,0,P|308:300|344:304,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,324,98841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,324,99029,6,0,P|388:264|400:184,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,99404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,84,99591,2,0,L|316:188,2,85,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,20,100154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100529,6,0,P|128:164|60:144,1,127.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,100904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,59,101091,2,0,L|184:144,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,101466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,232,101654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,192,101841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,102029,6,0,P|244:344|336:328,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,324,102404,2,0,L|352:224,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,56,102779,2,0,L|408:156,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,296,103154,2,0,L|468:196,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,180,103435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,152,103529,6,0,P|404:120|320:116,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,103904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,176,104091,2,0,P|180:204|100:184,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,180,104466,2,0,L|88:76,2,85,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,105029,6,0,L|208:304,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,105310,2,0,L|316:320,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,105591,2,0,P|348:305|412:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,272,105966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,188,106154,2,0,L|472:132,4,42.5,2|2|2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:


Good Luck :D
Thanks for the m4m!! :D

I'm going to go over my other mods later. I'm tired right now
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

Accel World wrote:

[From M4M]

:) hi~

[Normal]

00:28:529 (1) - a little ugly slider :roll:changed it a little

[Hard]

:roll: Why the distance between 00:26:841 (5) - 00:27:029 (1) is different with 00:17:841 (5) - 00:18:029 (1) ? The distance of the jumps arent the same, but do they have to be?
:3 please recheck the distance of this kind of jumps.
00:39:029 (1) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. :)changed the combo
00:50:279 (3) - How about change the position with 00:50:466 (4) :Pwould create too big of a jump for this part
00:55:529 (1) - Same question with 00:17:841 (5) :roll:I decided to stack it so it looks good. I think i'd would rather stack it here rather than worry about distance in this part. We'll see what other people think
01:03:779 (7) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. :)moved it a little
02:04:529 (5) - The angle slider is unsuitable for here, you can change a soft slider no change here

02:18:591 (6) - ummm.... maybe change another position? fixed the overlap
03:15:779 (1) - a little ugly slider :oops:ya kind of. I tried to make it go with the drums. idk what else to put there

[Insane]

You forgot to click Widescreen support :oops:fixed

00:17:446 (1) - How about change the position with 00:17:654 (2) ok
00:30:996 (4) - How about change the position with 00:31:154 (5) nah :P
01:00:029 (1) - 01:00:966 (6) - ummm...strange jumps, especially the position and distance between (4) and (5). :ofixed
01:28:529 (1) - You can overlap with 01:27:966 (6) 8-) and don't forget to move 01:29:654 (1) to the right place. no change
01:43:154 (5) - You can move it to this position.

That's all for me. Nice song nice map :3 Good Luck~

wendao wrote:

Fun song :D

[General]
  1. you might want to add Vocaloid Megpoid GUMI to tags
added

[Insane]

  • nice 3/4 slider you there
  1. 00:27:591 (3) - stack to 00:26:091 (3) - 's head? done
  2. 00:46:341 (4) - better NC added nc
  3. 01:35:279 (2) - how about NC here? sure
  4. 01:45:966 (4) - move to 252,248 kk
  5. 03:04:529 - I hope you map this part so it'll break at 03:10:529 I thought about doing that but I decided not to. Maybe if someone else wants me to
  6. 03:28:904 (1) - remove NC? removed
  7. 03:39:029 (1) - missing Whistle? yup, added
  8. 03:46:529 (9) - NC added nc

[Hard]
  1. Slider Tick 2 fit best here ok
  2. AR 7 felt so slow, how about 7.5 - 8? changed to 7.5
  3. 00:27:029 (1) - stack to 00:25:904 (2) done
  4. 00:33:029 (4) - NC added
  5. 00:46:529 (4) - ^ k
  6. 01:03:029 (5) - ^ k
  7. 01:34:529 (1) - missing Finish? yup, added finish
  8. 02:52:904 (2,4) - move it somewhere so it didn't hit 02:52:529 (1,3) not really sure what you mean here. I might have fixed it
  9. 02:58:529 (3) - NC
  10. 03:00:779 (2) - same, move it somewhere i think i fixed it

[Normal]

  • It's all fine, nothing particular to fix, just cutting some long combo

etildard wrote:

I like this map! it has nice flow.

Some criticisms:

2:37:716 : the (1) slider feels a bit awkward going straight up like that, maybe consider changing its shape/ the direction it moves in so that it flows into the next slider a bit better. I gave it some more curve

2:51:310 : the singles here might be a bit more interesting if they were small jumps or something, maybe a square? ya I completely changed this part

can't find anything else at the moment, but yeah great map! :D
Thanks so much for the mods guys!!
-Tochi
M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:36:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to X: 436 Y: 20 so it stacks with 00:37:904 (2) -
00:42:029 (1,3) - Avoid overlap.
00:48:966 (5,7) - Why not stack them?
01:26:654 (4,3) - Stack (3) with (4)'s sliderhead
02:06:029 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid overlap.
02:24:404 (3,5) - Stack?
02:48:216 (2,5) - ^^
03:04:716 - Move break to 03:09:029 -
03:33:591 (5,8) - Stack?
03:34:904 (2,4) - ^^
03:38:091 (4,6) - ^^
04:01:529 (6) - Press Q

Nice map, many good thing that i couldn't do so much about the objects.
Nice work, and i hope it gets ranked!
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:36:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to X: 436 Y: 20 so it stacks with 00:37:904 (2) - moved slightly
00:42:029 (1,3) - Avoid overlap. changed
00:48:966 (5,7) - Why not stack them? removed the overlap
01:26:654 (4,3) - Stack (3) with (4)'s sliderhead ok
02:06:029 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid overlap. fixed
02:24:404 (3,5) - Stack? nah
02:48:216 (2,5) - ^^ nah
03:04:716 - Move break to 03:09:029 - kk
03:33:591 (5,8) - Stack? I'll consider these stacks
03:34:904 (2,4) - ^^
03:38:091 (4,6) - ^^
04:01:529 (6) - Press Q ok

Nice map, many good thing that i couldn't do so much about the objects.
Nice work, and i hope it gets ranked!
Thanks for the mod ^-^
SakiZ
Nice song :D

[Normal]
  1. 03:26:279 (2,3) - sliders were not very neat here, make these like:
  2. 03:31:529 (1,2) - ^
  3. 03:01:529 (1) - not very neat with 03:00:029 (3) - 's end.
  4. 00:40:529 (4) - NC
  5. 00:42:029 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:529 (3) - NC

[Hard]
  1. 01:13:529 (5) - NC
  2. 01:14:279 (1) - remove NC
  3. 01:15:029 (3) - NC
  4. 02:19:154 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]
  1. 02:08:091 (3) - reverse

Good luck :)
RE1359EBA
Hello ^ㅅ^.
Please understand that I Can’t Speak english very well


  • (Normal)
    This Diff don't have problems.

    (Hard)
    00:23:466 ~~~ 2 and 3. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
    00:35:841 ~~~ endpoint of 3 and head of 4. ^
    00:38:747 ~~~ 3, 4, 5. Very Strange arrangement. Fix arrangement among Marks.
    00:51:966 ~~~ 3 and 4. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
    01:38:466 ~~~ equal to 00:38:747
    02:47:654 ~~~ 4. Reverse endpoint and Head
    03:29:747 ~~~ 4, 5 and 1. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
    03:33:404 ~~~ 1, 2, 3. ^
    03:53:279 ~~~ 2 and 3. ^

    Marks is often located more further than entire marks’ arrangement but portion of them are somewhat awkward. However except this, Hard Diff is so made very well that I won’t have to point out it.

    (Insane)
    03:09:029 ~~~ Extend to 03:10:529.



Good map. Star~
saisee2010
Hi - M4M (Sorry for my bad English TT)
very good map and very nice song :D

Hard
02:08:841 (5) - X321/Y349
02:19:154 (1) - X7/Y44
02:21:591 (2) - move to X136/Y176
02:25:904 (2) - copy 02:25:529 (1) slider and ctrl+H and place the slider at X248/Y184


Insane
00:22:154 (5) - X80/Y256
01:14:279 (3)- Copy 01:13:529 (1) - crtl+< and place at X228/Y144
01:14:654 (4) - Copy 01:13:904 (2) - crtl+< and place at X236/Y264
03:30:404 (2) - Copy 03:30:029 (1) - crtl+< 2 times and place at X460/Y152
04:01:622 (1) - Too much volume , ruduce it to 35%
Good luck for a ranked map. :):)
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/260879 :D
SakiZ

otamangaka wrote:

Nice song :D (m4m)

[Normal]
  1. 03:26:279 (2,3) - sliders were not very neat here, make these like:
  2. 03:31:529 (1,2) - ^
  3. 03:01:529 (1) - not very neat with 03:00:029 (3) - 's end.
  4. 00:40:529 (4) - NC
  5. 00:42:029 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:529 (3) - NC

[Hard]
  1. 01:13:529 (5) - NC
  2. 01:14:279 (1) - remove NC
  3. 01:15:029 (3) - NC
  4. 02:19:154 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]
  1. 02:08:091 (3) - reverse

Good luck :)
SakiZ
sorry, that post was an accident :(
Topic Starter
[ Joey ]

otamangaka wrote:

Nice song :D

[Normal]
  1. 03:26:279 (2,3) - sliders were not very neat here, make these like: fixed
  2. 03:31:529 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  3. 03:01:529 (1) - not very neat with 03:00:029 (3) - 's end. fixed
  4. 00:40:529 (4) - NC k
  5. 00:42:029 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:529 (3) - NC

[Hard]
  1. 01:13:529 (5) - NC
  2. 01:14:279 (1) - remove NC
  3. 01:15:029 (3) - NC
  4. 02:19:154 (1) - remove NC fixed all the NC's

[Insane]
  1. 02:08:091 (3) - reverse no change

Good luck :)

RE1359EBA wrote:

Hello ^ㅅ^.
Please understand that I Can’t Speak english very well


  • (Normal)
    This Diff don't have problems.

    (Hard)
    00:23:466 ~~~ 2 and 3. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. fixed
    00:35:841 ~~~ endpoint of 3 and head of 4. ^ no change
    00:38:747 ~~~ 3, 4, 5. Very Strange arrangement. Fix arrangement among Marks. no change
    00:51:966 ~~~ 3 and 4. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. no change, I want a slight jump here
    01:38:466 ~~~ equal to 00:38:747 no change
    02:47:654 ~~~ 4. Reverse endpoint and Head no change, I know the distance is a little long but I think its ok
    03:29:747 ~~~ 4, 5 and 1. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. Jump goes with music here
    03:33:404 ~~~ 1, 2, 3. ^ ^
    03:53:279 ~~~ 2 and 3. ^ ^

    Marks is often located more further than entire marks’ arrangement but portion of them are somewhat awkward. However except this, Hard Diff is so made very well that I won’t have to point out it.

    (Insane)
    03:09:029 ~~~ Extend to 03:10:529. It wont let me extend the break that long :(



Good map. Star~ Thanks! :D But I don't see a star from you :(

saisee2010 wrote:

Hi - M4M (Sorry for my bad English TT)
very good map and very nice song :D

Hard
02:08:841 (5) - X321/Y349 fixed
02:19:154 (1) - X7/Y44 goes too far off the map :P
02:21:591 (2) - move to X136/Y176 no change
02:25:904 (2) - copy 02:25:529 (1) slider and ctrl+H and place the slider at X248/Y184 ok


Insane
00:22:154 (5) - X80/Y256 no change
01:14:279 (3)- Copy 01:13:529 (1) - crtl+< and place at X228/Y144 no changes on these
01:14:654 (4) - Copy 01:13:904 (2) - crtl+< and place at X236/Y264
03:30:404 (2) - Copy 03:30:029 (1) - crtl+< 2 times and place at X460/Y152
04:01:622 (1) - Too much volume , ruduce it to 35% kk
Good luck for a ranked map. :):)
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/260879 :D
Thanks for the mods guys!!
Shiranai
Hellooo M4M from your mod :)
Let's see,

[General]
  1. I don't really know recent vocaloid or cover criteria and rules these days, but I think you should move HoneyWork from source to tags instead http://puu.sh/deF5B/7020c9effc.png
  2. You should un-tick Widescreen support, since you don't storyboard on your map
  3. You should also un-tick Letterbox during breaks, beacause when breaks the letterbox makes the title "病名恋ワズライ" that on the background not see
  4. You need custom colors to make this mapset more beautiful, the default colors not looks so good on this map
  5. Maybe you find another background with same picture that have 1366x768 (the curent is ok but I think it can be improved), and make sure the size of the bg not too big (curently you have BG.png with 1,07Mb), you can convert BG.png into BG.jpg to reduced the size
  6. You should delete normal-hitfinish2.wav bacuse not in use on this map
  7. It's like there's a big gap between Normal and Hard diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:529 (1) - I hear cymbal faintly on that one, maybe you should add finish on head
  2. 00:33:029 (3) - Add clap instead whistle on tail? maybe you forget
  3. 00:54:591 (4) - Same as above
  4. 00:40:529 (1) - NC? It have diffrent music and not NC this one 00:42:029 (2) - then NC this 00:43:529 (4) - and not NC this 00:45:029 (1) - then NC this
  5. 00:46:529 (4) - and not NC this 00:48:029 (1) - , well the NC better like that and to keep concistency while you place NC in every two stanza
  6. 01:00:779 (1,3) - Swap NC between them
  7. 01:04:529 (1) - 01:10:529 (1) - 01:16:529 (1) - 01:22:529 (1) - Add finish on head? There's cymbal sound there. Apparently you can add finish in every two stanza (big white tick) in whole kiai section
  8. 01:21:029 (3) - Well I hear cymbal sound there, maybe you should add finish there
  9. 01:30:779 (3) - Add clap on tail?, I hear drum begin to hit that part
  10. 01:40:529 (1) - Add finish on head
  11. 01:45:029 (1) - Pull that spinner up to here 01:46:529 - ? and add finish
  12. 02:15:591 (4) - Use clap instead whistle?
  13. 02:21:779 (1,3) - Swap NC between them and delete NC on this 02:23:654 (1) -
  14. On second kiai section you also can add finish like I said from before
  15. 02:47:279 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about those flow, especialy (2,3). (3) is like hide behind 02:46:529 (1) - I think you should avoid that on lowest diff (in
  16. this case Normal), and the turn between (2,3) is prety sharp. I sugest you to rearrange them somehow
  17. 02:51:029 (2,1) - It's not I don't like overlap, but you can avoid that on that one to make them neater
  18. And on third kiai section you also can add finish like I said before

All you need is add some finish sound, you can listen the song carefuly, beside that all good for me and ready to goo

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:029 (1,3) - The reverse arrow on (3) is hide behind (1)'s tail and it's not visible. I guess that unrankable based on rules as far as I know. please be aware of that, maybe there's more lol
  2. 00:19:341 (4,5) - Maybe you can swap whistle between them, I think it's better if (4) have whistle and (5) not
  3. 00:23:654 (3) - Add clap? maybe you forget
  4. 00:27:779 (3,1) - I'm not comfortable about those anti jump, maybe you should move (1) somewhere else
  5. 00:32:654 (3) - Move down or move right, that slider touch hp bar
  6. 00:35:466 (3) - How about Ctrl+G that? to reduce the jump and better flow imo
  7. 00:52:904 (2) - Add clap
  8. 00:54:591 (2,3) - It's better to delete clap on both, it'll sound better
  9. 00:57:029 (5) - Add clap also
  10. 01:01:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is good, why don't every diff have raised volume on that part
  11. 02:13:154 (4) - Add clap
  12. 02:13:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I'm not sure about that hitsound, prety odd if I say
  13. 02:37:341 (8) - Add finish on tail
  14. 02:49:529 (4) - Add finish also
  15. 03:04:154 (3) - I think it's better if that slider is a curve, something like this http://puu.sh/deLoc/a806b0860b.jpg
  16. 03:15:779 (1) - How about make the red nodes like this http://puu.sh/deLz5/eda6ab4458.jpg , someone might say that unrankable slider if the red nodes close each other


Sometimes you miss clap and finish sound, the rest looks fine

[]
I'm sowwy I can't do Insane
Good luck on this mapset, just polish a little more and I think it's ready
Tyl
Hihi ^-^ this is my first mod so I'm sorry that I suck so hard ;-;

[general]
  1. normal-hitfinish2.wav is unused hitsound and should be deleted
  2. set combo colors pwease


[Insane]
  1. 00:24:029 (1,2,3) - current pattern is aesthetically pleasing, but the rhythm is hard to read :c changing rhythm to a reverse slider such as http://gyazo.com/281f2f340a6e0b239a9e3d2d69ef4452 or properly spacing would fix issue. You could also rearrange combos to match this 04:00:029 (1,1,1) - which would be fine
  2. 00:43:529 (1,2) - the tail of this slider is a much stronger beat than the head. It would be better to just have a clickable object instead of a slider to emphasize the hitsound
  3. 02:14:654 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:23:654 (6,7,1) - move 1 to the left so 6 and 7 don't completely overlap the body because it is more kawaii
  5. 02:16:529 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G'ing 2 would better suit rhythm and flow into 3 smoother
  6. 02:56:466 (1,2,3) - the way these notes are layed out could be confused for a stream (by people like me .-.)they follow the same tempo as 02:57:966 (1,2,3) - so either spacing them out more or forming them into softcore jumps would be better ^-^
  7. 04:00:029 (1,1,1) - please either keep the sliders part of the same combo or apply the same to where else it appears in the map such as 00:24:029 (1,2,3) - (unless changed to reverse slider)


[Hard]
  1. 00:36:029 (4) - nc
  2. 01:01:529 (1,2,3,4) - following the same rhythm pattern as in 01:31:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) would work better here since beats are heavy
  3. 02:22:529 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 01:03:779 (3) - insert hit circle before 01:04:529 (1)
  5. 02:24:779 (3) - ^
  6. 01:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - bring the notes closer together, the song will build up and run smoother this way
  7. 01:31:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ncs unnecessary
  8. 02:01:154 (1) - no nc
  9. 02:01:154 (1,2) - move upper-left more or stack 1 with 02:00:779 (1) because the particular overlapping looks visually unappealing as of right now
  10. 02:15:591 (2,3,4,5,6) - changing 2 and 3 into a slider would compliment the fact that 4 5 and 6 are louder hit sounds and go together goodly with vocals
  11. 02:54:029 (5,6) - intensify jump slightly to signify the 1/1 beat gap by moving 5 more to the right or something
  12. 02:57:029 (1,2) - ^
  13. 02:57:779 (2,1) - moving these up more would work
  14. 03:01:904 (2) - ctrl+G because the current way the slider is facing will work better with where 3 and 4 are placed and this way and make the jump more enjoyable to play in-game
  15. 03:20:279 (1) - no nc
  16. 03:27:216 (1,2,3,4) - move combo further to left so 2 doesn't overlap the tail of 03:26:841 (4)
  17. 03:39:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  18. 02:29:841 (4,1,2,3) - ^


[Normal]
  1. 01:42:779 (3) - change into 2 hit circles like in 01:39:029 (3,4,5) because it highlights high notes in the song and prevents against strictly slider game play for the section
  2. 03:15:779 (1,2) - replacing this with something like this http://gyazo.com/2417300edd396405519c99bbb20386b0 would be a better rhythm
  3. 03:53:091 (2,3) - flip 2 so curve of body blankets with head of 3


Great map, I love the song ^-^
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