1. Hard (3.28 stars, 561 notes)
2. Insane (4.19 stars, 732 notes)
3. Lovesick (4.87 stars, 862 notes)
4. Normal (1.78 stars, 265 notes)

Tari wrote:

OMG , Your doing so mucj better, GREAT job on this.

Get some stars

Bananeur wrote:

Nice map!

If I may make one suggestion; the singles after the slow slider ( 02:51:404 ) seem kind of out of place.
It might just be me nitpicking, but I've never really been a fan of singles with no indicator, if that even makes any sense >_<

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Countdown: 0
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Title:Byoumei Koi Wazurai
TitleUnicode:病名恋ワズライ
Artist:Sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:[ Joey ]
Version:Test Insane
Source:HoneyWorks
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m1223961117 wrote:

For M4M...I'm sorry I'm late.

Normal
00:39:779 (3) - this better changed


00:55:529 (1) - x28 y264, better ok
00:58:529 (1,2,3) - put beautiful circle ok
01:06:029 (3) - I don't think this slider's angle can let newer feel better. I changed the slider shape
01:21:029 (3) - ^ no change
02:37:529 (1) - selection rotate -58 ok
03:40:154 (4) - x416 y256 ok


Hard
00:23:654 (3) - change two circles ok
00:26:654 (4,5) - put diamond look better (DS) no change
00:27:779 (3) - x296 y124, selection rotate -11 no change, i like how its symmetrical
00:29:466 (7,1) - make parallel changed, but didnt make parallel
00:30:591 (2) - Just suggestion: I think del this better nah, i dont want to miss the piano note
00:33:591 (5) - hide in 00:33:029 (4)'s tail ok
00:38:466 (3,4,5,1) - try this↓ ok, I also changed the order of some notes


00:40:341 (5,6) - del I like the way this triple sounds here
00:46:154 (3) - change two circles ok
00:47:654 (6) - x140 y368→00:47:654 (6,7) - reverse selection I don't understand
00:49:341 (5) - del no change
00:55:529 (1) - x238 y171 ok
00:58:529 (2,3) - try this↓ ok


01:26:279 (3) - x114 y120 increased the distance, but not that much
01:30:591 (2) - del ok
01:31:154 (3) - follow lyric better done
01:32:279 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try this↓ I don't really know what to do with this code, srry =/

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01:38:841 (5) - stack circle(3) changed to something else
01:42:029 (1,2) - I think you should try other look I spaced them out more
01:43:341 (4,5,6,1) - same as 01:40:341 (4,5,1,2) the NC? changed
02:08:841 (5) - x392 y316, no jump better shortened the jump
02:28:341 (5,6) - move to 02:28:247 k
02:32:841 (5) - I think this hide in 02:32:466 (4) 's tail better no change
02:36:029 (5) - don't follow lyric?? i dont want to follow the vocals there
02:40:154 (6) - reverse selection no change
02:52:341 - circle?? ok
03:20:279 (1,3) - reverse selection no change
03:34:716 (1) - del finish, add finish on 03:34:341 (4)'s tail ok
03:46:529 to 03:49:529 - break time ok
03:53:466 (3,4,5) - DS please ok
03:59:654 (3) - change two circles ok


Insane
00:19:154 (5) - x220 y352 ok
00:20:841 - put a circle here [/color]no change
00:43:529 (1,2) - same as 00:42:029 (1,2) I dont understand
01:08:654 (6) - no arrow ok
01:17:654 (5) - x478 r160 ok
01:19:716 (2) - x44 y180 ok
01:19:904 (3,4,5) - same as 00:40:529 (1,2,3) fixed
02:37:529 (10) - NC ok
02:51:591 (2,4) - del changed
03:51:029 (1,2) - same as 00:21:029 (1,2)


And this is for you. I like it
Just Reference.
Not GD.

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416,300,46529,6,0,L|432:172,1,114.749996498108,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,160,46904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,80,47091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,209,47279,2,0,L|412:220,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,47654,2,0,L|164:136,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,48029,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,236,48310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,236,48404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,132,48591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,184,48779,2,0,L|88:272,1,76.4999976654053,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,49154,2,0,L|200:40,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,164,49529,5,4,0:0:0:0:
268,228,49716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,49904,2,0,P|312:72|356:72,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,50279,2,0,L|328:240,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,50654,2,0,L|244:156,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,256,51029,5,2,0:0:0:0:
44,212,51216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,91,51404,2,0,L|140:168,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,51779,2,0,L|208:256,1,76.4999976654053,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,52154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,192,52529,6,0,L|340:204,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,52904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,172,52997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,53091,2,0,L|492:160,2,38.2499988327027,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,248,53466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,53654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,220,53841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,220,53935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,220,54029,6,0,L|484:80,1,114.749996498108,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,54404,2,0,P|444:64|388:68,1,76.4999976654053,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,54779,2,0,P|304:172|360:168,1,76.4999976654053,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,173,55060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,173,55154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,92,55341,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,100,55529,6,0,B|147:107|147:107|112:144|60:139,2,136,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,40,56654,2,0,P|92:92|92:184,1,136,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,57404,2,0,P|240:292|240:200,1,136,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,57966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,58154,2,0,P|336:208|304:204,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,58529,6,0,P|476:155|488:200,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,58904,2,0,P|363:60|396:28,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,59279,2,0,L|420:364,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,220,59654,2,0,P|350:202|388:196,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,348,60029,2,0,L|216:328,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,94529,6,0,L|240:204,1,63.75
352,176,94904,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,232,95091,2,0,L|424:332,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,95466,2,0,L|344:64,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,16,95841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,132,96029,6,0,P|412:176|312:192,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,96404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,132,96591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,216,96779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,96966,2,0,P|288:66|275:7,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,97529,6,0,L|92:188,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,260,97904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,260,98091,2,0,P|140:304|232:316,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,312,98466,2,0,P|308:300|344:304,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,324,98841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,324,99029,6,0,P|388:264|400:184,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,99404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,84,99591,2,0,L|316:188,2,85,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,20,100154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,100529,6,0,P|128:164|60:144,1,127.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,100904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,59,101091,2,0,L|184:144,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,101466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,232,101654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,192,101841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,102029,6,0,P|244:344|336:328,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,324,102404,2,0,L|352:224,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,56,102779,2,0,L|408:156,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,296,103154,2,0,L|468:196,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,180,103435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,152,103529,6,0,P|404:120|320:116,1,127.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,103904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,176,104091,2,0,P|180:204|100:184,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,180,104466,2,0,L|88:76,2,85,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,105029,6,0,L|208:304,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,105310,2,0,L|316:320,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,105591,2,0,P|348:305|412:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,272,105966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,188,106154,2,0,L|472:132,4,42.5,2|2|2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Good Luck

Accel World wrote:

[From M4M]

hi~

[Normal]

00:28:529 (1) - a little ugly slider changed it a little

[Hard]

Why the distance between 00:26:841 (5) - 00:27:029 (1) is different with 00:17:841 (5) - 00:18:029 (1) ? The distance of the jumps arent the same, but do they have to be?
:3 please recheck the distance of this kind of jumps.
00:39:029 (1) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. changed the combo
00:50:279 (3) - How about change the position with 00:50:466 (4) would create too big of a jump for this part
00:55:529 (1) - Same question with 00:17:841 (5) I decided to stack it so it looks good. I think i'd would rather stack it here rather than worry about distance in this part. We'll see what other people think
01:03:779 (7) - It will be more fluency if you can try to move it up a little bit. moved it a little
02:04:529 (5) - The angle slider is unsuitable for here, you can change a soft slider no change here

Like this

02:18:591 (6) - ummm.... maybe change another position? fixed the overlap

Like this

03:15:779 (1) - a little ugly slider ya kind of. I tried to make it go with the drums. idk what else to put there

[Insane]

You forgot to click Widescreen support fixed

00:17:446 (1) - How about change the position with 00:17:654 (2) ok
00:30:996 (4) - How about change the position with 00:31:154 (5) nah
01:00:029 (1) - 01:00:966 (6) - ummm...strange jumps, especially the position and distance between (4) and (5). fixed
01:28:529 (1) - You can overlap with 01:27:966 (6) and don't forget to move 01:29:654 (1) to the right place. no change
01:43:154 (5) - You can move it to this position.

Look there

That's all for me. Nice song nice map :3 Good Luck~

wendao wrote:

Fun song

[General]

1. you might want to add Vocaloid Megpoid GUMI to tags

added

[Insane]

• 
  nice 3/4 slider you there

1. 00:27:591 (3) - stack to 00:26:091 (3) - 's head? done
2. 00:46:341 (4) - better NC added nc
3. 01:35:279 (2) - how about NC here? sure
4. 01:45:966 (4) - move to 252,248 kk
5. 03:04:529 - I hope you map this part so it'll break at 03:10:529 I thought about doing that but I decided not to. Maybe if someone else wants me to
6. 03:28:904 (1) - remove NC? removed
7. 03:39:029 (1) - missing Whistle? yup, added
8. 03:46:529 (9) - NC added nc

[Hard]

1. Slider Tick 2 fit best here ok
2. AR 7 felt so slow, how about 7.5 - 8? changed to 7.5
3. 00:27:029 (1) - stack to 00:25:904 (2) done
4. 00:33:029 (4) - NC added
5. 00:46:529 (4) - ^ k
6. 01:03:029 (5) - ^ k
7. 01:34:529 (1) - missing Finish? yup, added finish
8. 02:52:904 (2,4) - move it somewhere so it didn't hit 02:52:529 (1,3) not really sure what you mean here. I might have fixed it
9. 02:58:529 (3) - NC
10. 03:00:779 (2) - same, move it somewhere i think i fixed it

[Normal]

• 
  It's all fine, nothing particular to fix, just cutting some long combo

etildard wrote:

I like this map! it has nice flow.

Some criticisms:

2:37:716 : the (1) slider feels a bit awkward going straight up like that, maybe consider changing its shape/ the direction it moves in so that it flows into the next slider a bit better. I gave it some more curve

2:51:310 : the singles here might be a bit more interesting if they were small jumps or something, maybe a square? ya I completely changed this part

can't find anything else at the moment, but yeah great map!

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:36:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to X: 436 Y: 20 so it stacks with 00:37:904 (2) - moved slightly
00:42:029 (1,3) - Avoid overlap. changed
00:48:966 (5,7) - Why not stack them? removed the overlap
01:26:654 (4,3) - Stack (3) with (4)'s sliderhead ok
02:06:029 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid overlap. fixed
02:24:404 (3,5) - Stack? nah
02:48:216 (2,5) - ^^ nah
03:04:716 - Move break to 03:09:029 - kk
03:33:591 (5,8) - Stack? I'll consider these stacks
03:34:904 (2,4) - ^^
03:38:091 (4,6) - ^^
04:01:529 (6) - Press Q ok

Nice map, many good thing that i couldn't do so much about the objects.
Nice work, and i hope it gets ranked!

• 
  (Normal)
  This Diff don't have problems.
  
  (Hard)
  00:23:466 ~~~ 2 and 3. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
  00:35:841 ~~~ endpoint of 3 and head of 4. ^
  00:38:747 ~~~ 3, 4, 5. Very Strange arrangement. Fix arrangement among Marks.
  00:51:966 ~~~ 3 and 4. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
  01:38:466 ~~~ equal to 00:38:747
  02:47:654 ~~~ 4. Reverse endpoint and Head
  03:29:747 ~~~ 4, 5 and 1. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please.
  03:33:404 ~~~ 1, 2, 3. ^
  03:53:279 ~~~ 2 and 3. ^
  
  Marks is often located more further than entire marks’ arrangement but portion of them are somewhat awkward. However except this, Hard Diff is so made very well that I won’t have to point out it.
  
  (Insane)
  03:09:029 ~~~ Extend to 03:10:529.

very good map and very nice song

Hard
02:08:841 (5) - X321/Y349
02:19:154 (1) - X7/Y44
02:21:591 (2) - move to X136/Y176
02:25:904 (2) - copy 02:25:529 (1) slider and ctrl+H and place the slider at X248/Y184


Insane
00:22:154 (5) - X80/Y256
01:14:279 (3)- Copy 01:13:529 (1) - crtl+< and place at X228/Y144
01:14:654 (4) - Copy 01:13:904 (2) - crtl+< and place at X236/Y264
03:30:404 (2) - Copy 03:30:029 (1) - crtl+< 2 times and place at X460/Y152
04:01:622 (1) - Too much volume , ruduce it to 35%

Good luck for a ranked map.

otamangaka wrote:

Nice song (m4m)

[Normal]

1. 03:26:279 (2,3) - sliders were not very neat here, make these like:
2. 03:31:529 (1,2) - ^
3. 03:01:529 (1) - not very neat with 03:00:029 (3) - 's end.
4. 00:40:529 (4) - NC
5. 00:42:029 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:43:529 (3) - NC

[Hard]

1. 01:13:529 (5) - NC
2. 01:14:279 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:15:029 (3) - NC
4. 02:19:154 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]

1. 02:08:091 (3) - reverse

Good luck

otamangaka wrote:

Nice song

[Normal]

1. 03:26:279 (2,3) - sliders were not very neat here, make these like: fixed
2. 03:31:529 (1,2) - ^ fixed
3. 03:01:529 (1) - not very neat with 03:00:029 (3) - 's end. fixed
4. 00:40:529 (4) - NC k
5. 00:42:029 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:43:529 (3) - NC

[Hard]

1. 01:13:529 (5) - NC
2. 01:14:279 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:15:029 (3) - NC
4. 02:19:154 (1) - remove NC fixed all the NC's

[Insane]

1. 02:08:091 (3) - reverse no change

Good luck

RE1359EBA wrote:

Hello ^ㅅ^.
Please understand that I Can’t Speak english very well

• 
  (Normal)
  This Diff don't have problems.
  
  (Hard)
  00:23:466 ~~~ 2 and 3. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. fixed
  00:35:841 ~~~ endpoint of 3 and head of 4. ^ no change
  00:38:747 ~~~ 3, 4, 5. Very Strange arrangement. Fix arrangement among Marks. no change
  00:51:966 ~~~ 3 and 4. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. no change, I want a slight jump here
  01:38:466 ~~~ equal to 00:38:747 no change
  02:47:654 ~~~ 4. Reverse endpoint and Head no change, I know the distance is a little long but I think its ok
  03:29:747 ~~~ 4, 5 and 1. Awkward Jump. Spacing Please. Jump goes with music here
  03:33:404 ~~~ 1, 2, 3. ^ ^
  03:53:279 ~~~ 2 and 3. ^ ^
  
  Marks is often located more further than entire marks’ arrangement but portion of them are somewhat awkward. However except this, Hard Diff is so made very well that I won’t have to point out it.
  
  (Insane)
  03:09:029 ~~~ Extend to 03:10:529. It wont let me extend the break that long

Good map. Star~ Thanks! But I don't see a star from you

saisee2010 wrote:

Hi - M4M (Sorry for my bad English TT)
very good map and very nice song

Hard
02:08:841 (5) - X321/Y349 fixed
02:19:154 (1) - X7/Y44 goes too far off the map
02:21:591 (2) - move to X136/Y176 no change
02:25:904 (2) - copy 02:25:529 (1) slider and ctrl+H and place the slider at X248/Y184 ok


Insane
00:22:154 (5) - X80/Y256 no change
01:14:279 (3)- Copy 01:13:529 (1) - crtl+< and place at X228/Y144 no changes on these
01:14:654 (4) - Copy 01:13:904 (2) - crtl+< and place at X236/Y264
03:30:404 (2) - Copy 03:30:029 (1) - crtl+< 2 times and place at X460/Y152
04:01:622 (1) - Too much volume , ruduce it to 35% kk

Good luck for a ranked map.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/260879

1. I don't really know recent vocaloid or cover criteria and rules these days, but I think you should move HoneyWork from source to tags instead http://puu.sh/deF5B/7020c9effc.png
2. You should un-tick Widescreen support, since you don't storyboard on your map
3. You should also un-tick Letterbox during breaks, beacause when breaks the letterbox makes the title "病名恋ワズライ" that on the background not see
4. You need custom colors to make this mapset more beautiful, the default colors not looks so good on this map
5. Maybe you find another background with same picture that have 1366x768 (the curent is ok but I think it can be improved), and make sure the size of the bg not too big (curently you have BG.png with 1,07Mb), you can convert BG.png into BG.jpg to reduced the size
6. You should delete normal-hitfinish2.wav bacuse not in use on this map
7. It's like there's a big gap between Normal and Hard diff

1. 00:19:529 (1) - I hear cymbal faintly on that one, maybe you should add finish on head
2. 00:33:029 (3) - Add clap instead whistle on tail? maybe you forget
3. 00:54:591 (4) - Same as above
4. 00:40:529 (1) - NC? It have diffrent music and not NC this one 00:42:029 (2) - then NC this 00:43:529 (4) - and not NC this 00:45:029 (1) - then NC this
5. 00:46:529 (4) - and not NC this 00:48:029 (1) - , well the NC better like that and to keep concistency while you place NC in every two stanza
6. 01:00:779 (1,3) - Swap NC between them
7. 01:04:529 (1) - 01:10:529 (1) - 01:16:529 (1) - 01:22:529 (1) - Add finish on head? There's cymbal sound there. Apparently you can add finish in every two stanza (big white tick) in whole kiai section
8. 01:21:029 (3) - Well I hear cymbal sound there, maybe you should add finish there
9. 01:30:779 (3) - Add clap on tail?, I hear drum begin to hit that part
10. 01:40:529 (1) - Add finish on head
11. 01:45:029 (1) - Pull that spinner up to here 01:46:529 - ? and add finish
12. 02:15:591 (4) - Use clap instead whistle?
13. 02:21:779 (1,3) - Swap NC between them and delete NC on this 02:23:654 (1) -
14. On second kiai section you also can add finish like I said from before
15. 02:47:279 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about those flow, especialy (2,3). (3) is like hide behind 02:46:529 (1) - I think you should avoid that on lowest diff (in
16. this case Normal), and the turn between (2,3) is prety sharp. I sugest you to rearrange them somehow
17. 02:51:029 (2,1) - It's not I don't like overlap, but you can avoid that on that one to make them neater
18. And on third kiai section you also can add finish like I said before

1. 00:18:029 (1,3) - The reverse arrow on (3) is hide behind (1)'s tail and it's not visible. I guess that unrankable based on rules as far as I know. please be aware of that, maybe there's more lol
2. 00:19:341 (4,5) - Maybe you can swap whistle between them, I think it's better if (4) have whistle and (5) not
3. 00:23:654 (3) - Add clap? maybe you forget
4. 00:27:779 (3,1) - I'm not comfortable about those anti jump, maybe you should move (1) somewhere else
5. 00:32:654 (3) - Move down or move right, that slider touch hp bar
6. 00:35:466 (3) - How about Ctrl+G that? to reduce the jump and better flow imo
7. 00:52:904 (2) - Add clap
8. 00:54:591 (2,3) - It's better to delete clap on both, it'll sound better
9. 00:57:029 (5) - Add clap also
10. 01:01:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is good, why don't every diff have raised volume on that part
11. 02:13:154 (4) - Add clap
12. 02:13:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I'm not sure about that hitsound, prety odd if I say
13. 02:37:341 (8) - Add finish on tail
14. 02:49:529 (4) - Add finish also
15. 03:04:154 (3) - I think it's better if that slider is a curve, something like this http://puu.sh/deLoc/a806b0860b.jpg
16. 03:15:779 (1) - How about make the red nodes like this http://puu.sh/deLz5/eda6ab4458.jpg , someone might say that unrankable slider if the red nodes close each other

1. normal-hitfinish2.wav is unused hitsound and should be deleted
2. set combo colors pwease

1. 00:24:029 (1,2,3) - current pattern is aesthetically pleasing, but the rhythm is hard to read :c changing rhythm to a reverse slider such as http://gyazo.com/281f2f340a6e0b239a9e3d2d69ef4452 or properly spacing would fix issue. You could also rearrange combos to match this 04:00:029 (1,1,1) - which would be fine
2. 00:43:529 (1,2) - the tail of this slider is a much stronger beat than the head. It would be better to just have a clickable object instead of a slider to emphasize the hitsound
3. 02:14:654 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:23:654 (6,7,1) - move 1 to the left so 6 and 7 don't completely overlap the body because it is more kawaii
5. 02:16:529 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G'ing 2 would better suit rhythm and flow into 3 smoother
6. 02:56:466 (1,2,3) - the way these notes are layed out could be confused for a stream (by people like me .-.)they follow the same tempo as 02:57:966 (1,2,3) - so either spacing them out more or forming them into softcore jumps would be better ^-^
7. 04:00:029 (1,1,1) - please either keep the sliders part of the same combo or apply the same to where else it appears in the map such as 00:24:029 (1,2,3) - (unless changed to reverse slider)

1. 00:36:029 (4) - nc
2. 01:01:529 (1,2,3,4) - following the same rhythm pattern as in 01:31:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) would work better here since beats are heavy
3. 02:22:529 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 01:03:779 (3) - insert hit circle before 01:04:529 (1)
5. 02:24:779 (3) - ^
6. 01:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - bring the notes closer together, the song will build up and run smoother this way
7. 01:31:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ncs unnecessary
8. 02:01:154 (1) - no nc
9. 02:01:154 (1,2) - move upper-left more or stack 1 with 02:00:779 (1) because the particular overlapping looks visually unappealing as of right now
10. 02:15:591 (2,3,4,5,6) - changing 2 and 3 into a slider would compliment the fact that 4 5 and 6 are louder hit sounds and go together goodly with vocals
11. 02:54:029 (5,6) - intensify jump slightly to signify the 1/1 beat gap by moving 5 more to the right or something
12. 02:57:029 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:57:779 (2,1) - moving these up more would work
14. 03:01:904 (2) - ctrl+G because the current way the slider is facing will work better with where 3 and 4 are placed and this way and make the jump more enjoyable to play in-game
15. 03:20:279 (1) - no nc
16. 03:27:216 (1,2,3,4) - move combo further to left so 2 doesn't overlap the tail of 03:26:841 (4)
17. 03:39:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
18. 02:29:841 (4,1,2,3) - ^

1. 01:42:779 (3) - change into 2 hit circles like in 01:39:029 (3,4,5) because it highlights high notes in the song and prevents against strictly slider game play for the section
2. 03:15:779 (1,2) - replacing this with something like this http://gyazo.com/2417300edd396405519c99bbb20386b0 would be a better rhythm
3. 03:53:091 (2,3) - flip 2 so curve of body blankets with head of 3

1. 00:17:466 (1) - uh pretty sure new combo here is unnecessary, as you show at 01:38:466 (4) -
2. 00:43:810 (2,3) - using a 1/4 slider here is really not a good way to represent what's a strong beat in the song at all. it's like your emphasizing the 3/4 tick on 00:43:810 - over teh way more important white tick on 00:43:904 - ...which is even mroe contradictory of your hitsounding. just doing the usual 3/4 slider + circle or 1/2 slider + 2 circles would work way better
3. 00:53:279 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - not sure what's going on with new combos here. 00:53:654 (1) - doesn't need a new combo at all and 00:54:029 (4,1) - should have their new combos swapped. as it is now, you're emphasizing the offbeat on 00:54:216 (1) - with a nc and that is wat
4. 01:00:966 (6,1,2,3,1) - yeah similar wtfcombos going on here. 01:01:154 (1) - doesn't need a new combo and 01:01:529 (3,1) - should be swapped. you do this same thing right at 02:22:341 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so uhhh
5. 01:23:935 (7,1) - covering the entirety of the sliderbody how bout nah. doing something like this where 7 doesn't completely cover 1 is a lot more readable and has the same effect as waht you've got now.
6. 01:30:029 (2) - this would work a lot better if curved in a way where you can follow the slider body directly in the jump from 1. as it is right now movement is kind of eww and doing this would fix stuffz (don't quesiton skins). same idea is explained much better under flow drops here
7. 01:32:091 (1) - uh your combos went to poop again. this shouldn't have a nc
8. 01:33:029 (6,1) - ...and these should have their new combo things switched
9. 01:35:279 (1) - ...and this one is unnecessary
10. 01:45:310 (2,3) - having a 1/4 jump like this is really not very intuitive when you've got a 1/2 jump right after it at 01:45:591 (3,4) - that uses the exact same visual spacing :/ you'll need to move the tail of 2 closer to 3's head or else spacing is broken. something like this would work but you can think of a better pattern yourself probs it's your map
11. 02:14:935 (2) - yeah that thing i wrote about 00:43:810 (2,3) - applies here too, except way more since you've got 1/2 jumps following this. the way that people click 1/4 sliders is pretty much teh same as that of hitcircles, so it's essentially playing a rhythm like this which does not work at all. same fixes mentioned at the other place would work here tho, but i'd just go with the 3/4 slider here since you've got a buttload of circles afterwards
12. 02:14:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - uh your new combos are so screwed i don't even want to explain specifics. just know that they should be consistent with teh 1 bar pattern you have everywhere else since there's nothing different enough in teh music to justify splitting
13. 02:21:029 (6,1) - yea um swap combos like you do everywhere else under triples that land on downbeats
14. 02:51:404 (1) - nc is kind of unnecessary, since you didn't use one at 01:30:029 (2) - . that other slider at 02:52:154 (1) - should have a new combo becuase of the slider velocity increase, but uh increasing slider velocity there seems really weird since you hadn't done so at 01:31:154 (3) - and they're the same thing ://////
15. 02:53:654 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ncs in this whole section are all over the place like i dont know you're not following vocal or musical phrases so please
16. 04:00:029 (1,1,1) - nc spam should be consistent with 00:24:029 (1,2,3) - in whatever way you choose to do it
17. 04:01:622 (1) - spinner here is kind of not necessary. it ends at a pretty awkward place and not including it would allow you to end all difficulties at the same time which is like good or something

1. 00:13:529 (1,2,3) - the sort of zig zag motion between these is so awkward that i can only describe it with an out-of-context quote
   
   doing something like this would work a lot better (or anything else that gets rid of the ugh)
2. 00:18:029 (1,3) - covering a slider reverse with an object is usually a baaaaaaaaaad idea. this is unrankable when covering a reverse with an object that has hit lighting, but covering at all is just not a good idea
3. 00:21:029 (5) - um need a new combo here for 1bar pattern
4. 00:26:091 (3,4,5,1) - similar to the first thing, movement here is...really weird. the slider makes you assume you'd move down, yet instead you move like to the left a weird amount, forcing you to not follow the actual sliderbody. doing something like this with 4 and 5 would prob be more appropriate. if you wanted to emphasize that super high pitch thing, make a larger gap between 3 and 4. placing it where it is now just makes things uncomfortable rather than emphasizing a high pitch note.
5. 00:29:091 (5) - dat stack
6. 00:32:654 (3) - probably better to avoid underlapping the hp bar :/
7. 00:36:029 (4,1) - uh broke your pattern here for some reason and dunno why. combos here should be swapped
8. 00:51:029 (1) - reverse covered by object's hit lighting may not be an issue at this point, but if you wanted to be safe, moving the reverse so it's not under an object would be good.
9. 00:57:029 (5) - uh kinda need a new combo here
10. 00:58:154 (1,2) - uh and these should swap new combos
11. 01:18:029 (5) - uh and this also needs a new combo
12. 01:31:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - uh uh uh uh no
13. 01:36:029 (3) - uhuhuhuhuh this needs a new combo
14. 01:45:029 (5,1) - please what is consistent comboing swap these babe
15. 02:06:029 (4) - click on this object and press Q
16. 02:08:091 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g on these objects (so their timeline positions switch) would match the vocal and instrumental emphasis positions way better than the stuff you've got now
17. 02:18:029 (5) - the nc is calling you
18. 02:36:029 (5) - answer the phone goddamnit
19. 02:37:341 (8) - you've got a super strong sound on a slider end, which is really uncomfortable. like in some places passive sliders can be acceptable but here.. no. this is like the exact halfway point of the kiai, so it's practically the same as starting the kiai with a sldier end which you would never ever do right yes so do something better
20. 02:39:029 (4) - ring ring
21. 02:48:029 (5,1) - uh swap those combos dood
22. 02:51:029 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - spacing on these is confusing af, specifically reading the difference between 02:51:029 (1,2,1,2,3) - and 02:52:341 (3,1) - . the jump is kind of uncalled for and looks exactly the same as the 1/1 spacing you just had so uh nooooooo. 3x spacing on a hard is usually bad too so
23. 02:54:029 (5) - i see the phone is still ringing
24. 03:16:529 (2) - well i hear it i guess, not really see. but still yea new combo -.-
25. 03:20:279 (1) - new combo here not really necessary
26. 03:34:341 (4) - same thing as 02:37:341 (8) - like really it is an issue please
27. 03:36:029 (4) - new combou
28. 03:37:716 - kind of the only place in the song that this rhythm plays and you ignore it. would really be appropriate to map to that 1/4 pianno thing in whatever way you feel like.
29. 03:42:029 (6) - this song climax section or whatever is pretty much trying to emphasize all 1/2 beats, which you cover well enough until this point. really should have a rhythm that covers 1/2 here too cuz otherwise it feels unnecessarily empty, especially compared to everything else you have mapped in the section
30. 03:42:029 (6,1) - newcomboswap plesz
31. 03:43:529 (3) - and this will need uno nc
32. 03:57:029 (5) - here too mate

1. 00:11:841 (1) - mapping such a short spinner in the lowest diff is probably not good. spinner recovery time is almost the same length as the spinner, which is a pretty good indication of way too short. replacing it with a slider (that has slightly lower sv) would work a lot better HEY LOOK thats what the ranked version did wew
2. 00:45:591 (3) - uh rhythm here is inconsistent with 00:33:029 (3,4) - and just ugh since it ignores the way stronger beat on the white tick. mapping it the same way as you did at 33 seconds would be betterrr
3. 00:46:529 (4,1) - swap comboz silly
4. 01:00:779 (1,3) - swap comboz
5. 01:27:029 (3,5) - you like reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally don't want to do something like this on a normal. it's too easy to interpret 3 as being the start of the slider since they're both visible on the playfield fully at hte same time. move stuff or die
6. 01:45:029 (1) - uh would make a lot more sense to end the spinner on the downbeat, especially since that's where you start the breaks in every other diff :/
7. 02:21:779 (1,3) - yea swap
8. 02:23:654 (1) - shouldn't have the new combo here use wherever that place is earlier for reference cuz you did it right :/
9. 02:27:029 (3) - really should be more conscious of the hp bar on easier diffs because reasons
10. 02:48:029 (3) - yea hardcore overlap on a normal that could be interpreted as a 1/2 gap by scrubs not a good idea. if you were to ctrl+j 02:48:029 (3,4,5) - ctrl+j and re-arrange in fancy ways things would be ok
11. 02:57:404 (1) - uh unnecessary nc
12. 03:04:529 (1) - nc not really necessary here either. the other diffs also have a break starting here, but tehy don't have new combos on this place so wat. you could add new combos in other diffs if you wanted to tho
13. 03:15:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 2 bar combo pattern gets off by a bar, meaning you're setting new combos on off-measures. can you not do that please kthankz (if you don't change this bad things will happen)
14. 03:47:654 - 03:49:154 - missing the sounds previously mapped at 02:50:654 (1) - 01:29:654 (1) - #consistency

jonawaga wrote:

M4M on this queue: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/218885

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SPOILER

00:43:529 (3) - make this curve the other way ok
it improves the flow https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/dlBQnR3.jpg?1
00:45:591 (2,3) - these blankets are messed up fixed
00:58:154 (4) - not too important, but not staking it with 01:00:779 (4) - this throws off the blankets a bit fixed blanket
02:18:029 (3,4) - blanket fixed
02:50:654 (1,2) - ^ fixed

I remapped the Hard since you modded this, sorry
Hard-

SPOILER

00:29:091 (5) - stack with 00:27:779 (3) - this by making the start of 00:27:779 (3) - this snap on the grid
00:30:029 (1) - same with this, try reversing the direction multiple times. It's not too important though
00:44:091 (3,4) - blanket
00:48:029 (1,2) - ^
00:58:154 (1) - NC should be next slider
01:59:091 (2,3) - blanket slightly off
02:00:779 (1,2) - these are spaced confusingly
02:19:529 (1) - if you took my suggestion for 00:58:154 (1) - then leave this alone,
if you didn't, then keep it consistent
03:27:216 (1,2,3,4) - (2) overlaps, and 3 straight circles followed by a curve doesn't flow well anyway
03:39:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, this could be intentional though

Insane-

SPOILER

00:21:591 (3) - doesn't stack properly to 00:22:529 (1) - this because it's hard to get 2 ends of sliders to stack lol fixed it i think
You do it by reversing a lot and snapping them on the grid. I'll stop mentioning this because it's minor
00:24:872 (4,5,6,7) - this stream could look a lot better i dont see anythign wrong with it
00:37:341 (6) - this doesn't go with the line, try x-304 y-280 fixed
that's all!

Good Luck~
Thanks for the mod!

Zero__wind wrote:

Oh plz Sana so good ☆

DraQeu wrote:

M4M
woot Sanahttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.ph ... p=3576638#

[Insane]

01:02:841 (7,2) - Ctrl+G these two, makes for a better jump imo nah, i want the jumps to start small
01:14:654 (4) - Make this a 1/4 repeating slider, fits better the music no change
01:15:779 (5,6) - I think these two can be spaced out some ok

[Hard]
There are some unsnapped sliders, you should fix those oops, fixed
00:33:591 (2) - This stacked note felt a bit weird to play, would recommend to something like this http://puu.sh/dx9sE/ee1499d0b5.jpg I think im gonna keep what I have
02:00:591 (2,2,2) - nazi Perfect stack fixed
02:44:279 (4,1) - ^ fixed
03:09:029 Start the break here like in the other diffs

[Normal]
02:48:779 (5) - Flip this slider looks neater imo http://puu.sh/dxaeM/b6413c2e34.jpg hmm i kinda like mine
03:41:279 (2) - Move this slider up and make it point downwards a bit towards 3 hmm ok

Ok this turned out shorter than I expected, soz
Good luck with your beatmap
Thanks for the mod!

Broccoly wrote:

m4m
here are some opinions

[General]
01:16:529 - you can end the kiai and start here again good idea

[Insane]
00:11:841 (1) - could consider rhythm like this. Hm I think i'd rather start notes where i have them currently

00:36:966 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are placed and being played in a rather restricted space... try spreading them out more? I spread out the last little bit of that combo. I think it helps.

01:04:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:16:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - you used surprisingly different rhythms on these... make it more consistent?
01:24:779 (3,4,5,6) - why didn't you place triplets here like you did 01:12:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - - 01:18:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - here?
I decided to re-map the kiai times. I agree with you on all of this.
For the kiai, I know you tried to follow the drum, but there are too many 1/2 beats at the moment, which makes it more or less a bit monotonous..
It plays well, and has a good flow, but I wish you used more variety of rhythm.

For example, 02:10:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
you can follow the hihat triplets instead of base/snare and vocal. Always think of how you can make the rhythm interesting, even when you spam 1/2. Even out the usage of circles and sliders to balance.

Try this rhythm out

03:04:529 - 03:09:029 - I would definitely map this part. It feels really awkward, especially with the hp bar holding. Since this part is quieter without the drum, you can use more sliders to express this. kk, mapped

Example

03:42:779 (3,4,5,6) - triplets?

Overall, solid map with good flow, but you could have done better with the rhythms. Also, I wanted to see larger jumps to make it more fun, since bpm's a bit slow. But good job anyways.

[Hard]
Check AiMod for unsnapped notes fixed
00:27:029 (1,2) - these 3/4 rhythms being ignored is making me sad. I know you're trying not to make the rhythm too complicated since it's a Hard, but you can still try 3/4 + 1/2 sliders. If you decide to do this, don't forget to do the same for others too. I know, I'm sad too I talked to a couple BATs about the difficulty of the Hard, and unfortunately I can't make it much harder than this, in order to keep it from being to much of a jump from the normal

01:03:779 (3) - change to circles? Just a slider can't convey the build-up imo. agreed, changed to circles

01:06:779 (2,3) - why don't you use more of these on the other triplet parts? added more triples in kiai
03:05:400 - same as insanekk

Good diff.

Hope this helped a bit.
Good luck with ranking~

Thanks for the m4m man!!

Infevo wrote:

Love the map!! Sana <3

=]

Keep up the work. I hope it gets ranked!

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! M4M from PM.
Well, here's my mod:

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00:17:091 (2,3) – Not that good idea for flow purposes. Rather do something like this to 00:17:091 (2) - changed :

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00:19:529 (1,2) – A blanket here will look nice. no change here. Still has good flow without a blanket

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00:23:091 (2) – This slider’s tail is pretty low. Just to be safe, I’ll say you should lift the tail of the slider a bit higher. moved it a little00:30:779 (3,1) – Improve this flow. Maybe you can do this: Ctrl+J 00:30:029 (2) – and then Ctrl+J 00:30:779 (3) – good idea

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00:37:154 (3,2) – This stack can be improved. Place 00:39:029 (2) – here: X:243 Y:246 kk00:45:779 (2,2) - ^, place 00:48:029 (2) – here: X:386 Y:155 done00:52:154 (4) – Move this circle till it’s somewhere here: X:300 Y:156 so that it makes a nice triangle shape with 00:50:654 (2,3) – done01:05:279 (2,3) – Try to improve this flow. Maybe place 01:06:029 (3) – a bit higher. Somewhere here: X:180 Y:52 changed, but I did something different01:16:529 (1,2) – Won’t this maybe look better. nah i dont like the symmetrical look

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02:03:779 (4) – Why not just make this slider a curved one as well like this one: 02:03:029 (3) – Copy and paste 02:03:029 (3) – then Ctrl+J idk I don't think it looks bad.02:06:591 (4) – Move this slider a bit lower till it’s here: X:432 Y:164 no change02:07:529 (1) – Maybe adjust this slider so it’s parallel with 02:06:029 (3) – ok

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02:13:529 (1,2) – Make this blanket look better by curving 02:13:529 (1) – a bit more not going for a blanket here02:21:029 (1,1) – Improve stack. Place 02:22:529 (1) – here: X:217 Y:200 fixed02:29:279 (2) – Why not just make this one a straight slider as well like 02:28:529 (1) – nah02:40:529 (1,2) – A blanket here will look better. no change

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02:45:029 (3) – Won’t this slider look neater if you try also curving the first part of the slider. Like this: I don't think it looks bad

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03:19:529 (1,2) – Blanket here? I don't think it needs one

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03:28:529 (1) – Move this slider a bit higher for better flow. Place it here: X:136 Y:44 ok03:58:529 (1) – Ctrl+J? nah

Hard:
One unsnapped object according to AiMod. Please fix. fixed00:17:091 (2) – I’d say rather place this slider somewhere here: X:140 Y:300 for better flow hmm, I still think it has good flow because of the way the slider is shaped.00:21:591 (2) – Same with this one. Place it somewhere here: X:384 Y:296 I tried to put it in the middle of the 2nd half of the slider, to give it an appealing look00:30:029 (1) – Just move this slider like one grid to the right to make the triangle shape look better. Somewhere here: X:272 Y:256 fixed00:33:779 (3,4) – No, I really don’t like this placement. Do something like this instead: ok, changed

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00:35:466 (3) – Ctrl+G nah, that removes the jump where I want it00:36:966 (1) – Remove NC. ok00:55:341 (6) – Rather move this circle till it’s somewhere here: X:140 Y:236. I know you’re trying to make a stack there, but I think it’s more important to make the half circle shape look neat and not disorientated. ok i agree. Fixed it01:19:154 (4,5,6) – I suggest rather changing these three hitcircles into a repetitive slider instead. I don’t think having two sets of close-hitting circles right after each other is a good idea.ok changed01:21:779 (6) – I don’t think you should make a jump here. Rather do this: I changed it, but kept a slight jump

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02:00:779 (1) – Remove NC ok02:01:154 (1) - ^ k02:15:966 (3,4,5) – Don’t just make a normal straight pattern with these circles. Do something like this instead: nah, I like the straight line

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02:18:029 (1,2) – This looks untidy. Rather this:I don't mind it, but if someone else mentions it, I will change

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02:20:654 (4) – I think you should rather finish the pattern. ok

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02:25:904 (2,1) – Improve stack. Place 02:27:216 (1) – here: X:292 Y:209 k02:51:779 (1) – Remove NC k03:39:029 (1,2,3,4) – A half-circle shape with these circles would look better than a straight pattern in my opinion ok, I changed this one

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03:49:904 (2,3) – No, rather a blanket. ok, made it a blanket

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03:56:091 (2) – Rather place it here: X:60 Y:288. It looks neater. kk

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Overall, a really nice mapset. Just a few more things that needs fixing then this mapset will be perfect.
I really love this song, so here’s a star for you.
Good Luck!

Thanks so much for the mod and star!!

• [Normal]

1. 00:18:779 (4,5) - I feel the flow drastically changes to go downwards and it to me is not smooth something like this will keep it look nice and also have the
2. same result Example
3. 00:28:529 (1) - To me the end end just ruins the blanket, either make it a regular slider or move the note itself up but since it fits it fits so no change is needed here, just something to point out
4. 00:43:529 (3) - The way this note is formed I don't see it as serving a purpose for the next note; I changed it to something like this Example you can change it to feed your need or no change at all
5. 00:54:591 (4) - The white tick in the middle of the red and other white makes it seems like the slider is a bit distressed. Removing the white tick in the middle or something like this to form a hill shape that goes up then goes down for better visual Example
6. 01:00:779 (2) - Distance Snap properly
7. 01:09:404 (3) - Move up a little bit for a better blanket, and full distance snap
8. 01:13:529 (1) - Overlap kind of has a weird feel to it; I did something like this. Just reversed flipped the slider to roll with the vocals/music and just kept the pattern going. Example
9. 01:39:779 (4,5) - Same reason as before here, but for me to make it actually work would to make this note fatter 01:39:029 (3) - Example The reasoning behind is I want to portray to the audience that the note goes into a dive instead of a flat slider into a drop. This way it goes up then down instead of straight and downwards which messes with cursor play
10. 02:19:154 (4) - Distance Snap properly
11. 03:06:779 (2) - Remove whistle at end of slider and here as well 03:08:654 (3); It follows the pattern you have and end the hitsounding on a note that no volume comes out of and to add a whistle would be awkward
12. 03:53:841 (3) - Maybe move that slider to the left on a red tick and it on the white. It flows with the music better because that gap with no notes was throwing me off

• [Hard]

1. 02:26:279 (3) - Possible slidertick-clap here?
   This was a masterpiece of a hard difficulty. It's fun to play on DT but challenging enough if hidden is involved for hidden notes, but damn that was what I was looking for, CONSISTENT SPACING, Love you for that ♥‿♥

• [Insane]

1. 00:18:404 (2) - Move slider tail down a click for better visual
2. 00:24:310 (1) - Move note to here? The polarity is good but when stacked together doesn't seem so great anymore; something like this will do Example It also stacks with 00:25:060 (4) to follow your style of mapping
3. 00:28:904 (2) - Without the overlay I believe it would look better Example the next one works because any position that note is in doesn't feel the same
4. 00:45:404 (2) - Something like this? Example
5. 01:28:529 (1) - Slider would seem better without that extra red tick Example
6. 01:36:404 (2) - Feel the note placed at this location seems and feels better x264 y316 to follow same concept you had here 01:37:529 (1,2)
7. 03:08:841 (6) - Removing whistle at the end would sound better for same reason
8. 03:16:154 (4,5) - I don't know about how well those whistle can maintain the hitsound, removing them will keep it consistent with the rest of the beatmap

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from modding queue and M4M

~General Overview~ I believe this map to be really good. I can see it ranked in the near future anytime soon with more BAT coming in. Not much there is to change, just my suggestions and different ways to consistently follow same patterns and result in a better play through. Hard was a force to be reckon with because it was soooo goood(I don't know how much more I can emphasize it) Estimated mod time ~45 minutes. I had a blast modding this map because Sana is awesome I hope to see this map progress in the near future. Thanks for your time

• [Normal]

1. 00:18:779 (4,5) - I feel the flow drastically changes to go downwards and it to me is not smooth something like this will keep it look nice and also have the
2. same result Example I agree, changed
3. 00:28:529 (1) - To me the end end just ruins the blanket, either make it a regular slider or move the note itself up but since it fits it fits so no change is needed here, just something to point out yeah, I have been questioning that slider. I couldn't decide if I liked it or not. I think it's time to remove that red anchor xD
4. 00:43:529 (3) - The way this note is formed I don't see it as serving a purpose for the next note; I changed it to something like this Example you can change it to feed your need or no change at all good idea!
5. 00:54:591 (4) - The white tick in the middle of the red and other white makes it seems like the slider is a bit distressed. Removing the white tick in the middle or something like this to form a hill shape that goes up then goes down for better visual Example Didn't do what you recommended, but I softened the curve
6. 01:00:779 (2) - Distance Snap properly I'm trying to stack these perfectly. I think the the DS is close enough
7. 01:09:404 (3) - Move up a little bit for a better blanket, and full distance snap ok
8. 01:13:529 (1) - Overlap kind of has a weird feel to it; I did something like this. Just reversed flipped the slider to roll with the vocals/music and just kept the pattern going. Example I'll keep what I have here
9. 01:39:779 (4,5) - Same reason as before here, but for me to make it actually work would to make this note fatter 01:39:029 (3) - Example The reasoning behind is I want to portray to the audience that the note goes into a dive instead of a flat slider into a drop. This way it goes up then down instead of straight and downwards which messes with cursor play added more curve to the slider
10. 02:19:154 (4) - Distance Snap properly ok
11. 03:06:779 (2) - Remove whistle at end of slider and here as well 03:08:654 (3); It follows the pattern you have and end the hitsounding on a note that no volume comes out of and to add a whistle would be awkward removed whistle on the end of slider three, but not the other one, so I stay consistent with the hitsound pattern
12. 03:53:841 (3) - Maybe move that slider to the left on a red tick and it on the white. It flows with the music better because that gap with no notes was throwing me off no change here, because I want that slider to start on that important beat.

• [Hard]

1. 02:26:279 (3) - Possible slidertick-clap here? The claps are on the red ticks, so no claps here
   This was a masterpiece of a hard difficulty. It's fun to play on DT but challenging enough if hidden is involved for hidden notes, but damn that was what I was looking for, CONSISTENT SPACING, Love you for that ♥‿♥ <3

• [Insane]

1. 00:18:404 (2) - Move slider tail down a click for better visual I want to keep them parallel
2. 00:24:310 (1) - Move note to here? The polarity is good but when stacked together doesn't seem so great anymore; something like this will do Example It also stacks with 00:25:060 (4) to follow your style of mapping Hmm, I would rather keep the distance snapping somewhat the same for these
3. 00:28:904 (2) - Without the overlay I believe it would look better Example the next one works because any position that note is in doesn't feel the same I kinda like how I have it, sorry
4. 00:45:404 (2) - Something like this? Example I moved it a little. Still hase a slight overlap
5. 01:28:529 (1) - Slider would seem better without that extra red tick Example didn't remove the red tick, but I softened some curves
6. 01:36:404 (2) - Feel the note placed at this location seems and feels better x264 y316 to follow same concept you had here 01:37:529 (1,2) kk, changed
7. 03:08:841 (6) - Removing whistle at the end would sound better for same reason I agree, removed
8. 03:16:154 (4,5) - I don't know about how well those whistle can maintain the hitsound, removing them will keep it consistent with the rest of the beatmap no change here

Tari wrote:

Will Check hehe.

Sonnyc wrote:

You can add 'Lovesickness' to the tags. added

Normal:

00:40:529 (4,1,3,1) - Comboes have been a mess. NC 00:40:529 - 00:43:529 and remove NC 00:42:029 - 00:45:029. fixed
01:40:529 - I think a Finish should be added here. added finish
02:07:529 (1,2) - Watch your spacing. fixed
02:13:529 (1,3) - You can stack these objects better. fixed
03:09:029 - Imo adding a whistle here will sound nice. i agree
03:21:029 - For all difficulties, I suggest the volume as 30%. The current hitsounds feel a little louder than the song. reduced to 30%
03:45:029 (1) - Making the combo consistent with the previous parts 01:27:029 (3) and 02:48:029 (3) will feel more organized. kk fixed
04:01:529 - For all difficulties, I suppose adding a Finish would be a nice ending for the map. hah yeah, idk why I didnt do that

Hard:

-- AR7 is enough to read things. Also the gap with [Normal] will be narrowed more. changed to ar7

01:17:841 - 01:18:591 (2) - Missing claps. added
02:06:591 (3) - Check your snapping. fixed
03:04:529 (4) - You must add a new combo to indicate the anti jump and sv change. added NC
03:15:779 (1,1) - This 1/4 jump doesn't fits the calm music here, nor is appropriate for [Hard]. Please shorten by 1/4, or maintain the distance. Oops this was an accident. Nice catch

Insane:

01:18:779 (3,4,5) - Making this triple stream's placement as 01:19:154 (6,7,8) will look more organized. unstacked them so they match
01:42:029 (1) - Finish doesn't sound nice here. I agree, removed finish
02:52:154 (4) - Reduce volume please. reduced to 45%
03:36:779 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion for 03:37:154 (6,7,8). did the same thing as above

Well the spread is quite wide, but I feel [Hard] is in the appropriate difficulty between [Normal] and [Insane]. So the spread is fine enough.
Whatever the lyrics mean, I love nurse. Call me back after fixing~ :D

Sonnyc wrote:

operation cwal

Tari wrote:

Someone needs to double-check the title since I'm uncertain of its Koiwazurai or not

From what I've heard it should of been that (according to iMage)

sheela901 wrote:

After running some tests (Japanese to Romaji), I think the title should be as it is. 恋 (which is Koi) is a noun, so I think the space should be placed after it. Same with Byoumei, but a little different. According to the "converter", that word forms a single noun. Unless I say something nonsense, correct me...

Saya wrote:

plz no unrank title is fine