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jericho2442
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 June 2010 at 23:40:19

Artist: Access
Title: Hitomi no Tsubasa (TV Size)
Source: Code geass 3rd OP
Tags: Hangyaku no Lelouch Anime J-Pop Beuchi-chan Ztrot
BPM: 144
Filesize: 15071kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beuchi's Hard (4.47 stars, 160 notes)
  2. Easy (2.08 stars, 74 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 299 notes)
  4. Normal+ (4.4 stars, 122 notes)
  5. ztrot's Requiem (4.98 stars, 279 notes)
Download: Access - Hitomi no Tsubasa (TV Size)
Download: Access - Hitomi no Tsubasa (TV Size) (no video)
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Something different from me :).

3rd OP from code geass, VERY good song and i hope you all enjoy it :)

Thanks to Dangaard for the Video

Thanks to Beuchi-chan and Ztrot for the guest diff's ;)
Ultimate
Quick bpm and offset check :P

BPM: 144,040
OFFSET: 7.700

I'll test play when updated ^^!
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Ultimate wrote:

Quick bpm and offset check :P

BPM: 144,035
OFFSET: 7.700

I'll test play when updated ^^!
fixed and thanks for the star :)
AngelHoney
Star~ :) :)
Mismagius
Easy
00:56:019 (3) - Align with the end of (2)?
01:01:018 (2,1) - I don't think newbies can do a 1/2 like this..

Normal +
Actually it's Normal+ :P BTW, I think this is too hard for a Normal+. Maybe rename to Hard?
If you want to keep Normal+, at least lower Overall diff by 1 or 2.

00:10:199 (5) - Make this a mirrored (4)?

Insane
01:21:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe use soft hitsounds and add whistles?

Jericho's maps <3
Star
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Blue Dragon wrote:

Easy
00:56:019 (3) - Align with the end of (2)? fixed
01:01:018 (2,1) - I don't think newbies can do a 1/2 like this.. its one note, what is easy read, i think they will survive ;)

Normal +
Actually it's Normal+ :P BTW, I think this is too hard for a Normal+. Maybe rename to Hard?
If you want to keep Normal+, at least lower Overall diff by 1 or 2.kinda stuck here myself too, i need one more persons opinion over wether its normal or hard

00:10:199 (5) - Make this a mirrored (4)?

Insane
01:21:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe use soft hitsounds and add whistles? tru sounds nice

Jericho's maps <3
Star
thanks for mod and star :)
Beuchi
Hi hi! :P

Some suggestions for yur map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Capitalize "Geass" on Source, and maybe delete "3rd opening"?
- Delete "Code Geass" from Tags, it's already on Source so it isn't necessary :P
- Offset: 2700? or around that, I'm not so good with timings :/

~Easy~
01:01:851 (1) - Stack under (2)'s end.
01:21:012 (1) - Finish it on 01:27:677, like you did on [Insane]

~Normal+~
- This is more Hard than Normal imo, if you want to keep it like a Normal decrease Overall Difficulty a bit.

00:10:199 (5) - Flip horizontally?
00:35:608 (x) - Add a note here?
01:21:012 (1) - Finish it on 01:27:677, like you did on [Insane]

~Insane~
01:00:393 (4) - Make it a horizontal reflection of (3).
01:04:350 (x) - Add a note here?

Loooove this song!! Also... I made a diff for it... I don't mind if you don't want to add it, don't worry xD
Download: Access - Hitomi No Tsubasa (TV Size) (jericho2442) [Beuchi's Hard].osu

Good Job jericho!! :) *star + star*
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi! :P

Some suggestions for yur map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Capitalize "Geass" on Source, and maybe delete "3rd opening"? its needed, but changed to OP rather than opening
- Delete "Code Geass" from Tags, it's already on Source so it isn't necessary :P fixed
- Offset: 2700? or around that, I'm not so good with timings :/ almost right, 2.701 works a tiny bit better ;)

~Easy~
01:01:851 (1) - Stack under (2)'s end. no the spacing there is important
01:21:012 (1) - Finish it on 01:27:677, like you did on [Insane] no that would creat a waaay to long slider

~Normal+~
- This is more Hard than Normal imo, if you want to keep it like a Normal decrease Overall Difficulty a bit. took OD down 2
00:10:199 (5) - Flip horizontally? nah
00:35:608 (x) - Add a note here? added
01:21:012 (1) - Finish it on 01:27:677, like you did on [Insane] see easy

~Insane~
01:00:393 (4) - Make it a horizontal reflection of (3). nah
01:04:350 (x) - Add a note here? nah

Loooove this song!! Also... I made a diff for it... I don't mind if you don't want to add it, don't worry xD
[attachment=0:5e6e6]Access - Hitomi No Tsubasa (TV Size) (jericho2442) [Beuchi's Hard].osu[/attachment:5e6e6]

sure, few changes discussed in IRC and now im very happy to ahve your guest diff <3
Good Job jericho!! :) *star + star*
thanks much for everything :)
arien666
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
jericho2442

arken1015 wrote:

[Easy]
No problem

[Normal+]
00:07:69(1) - I think Start and Reverse are not aligned. How about move 3rd spot(I don't know better word but...) 1 grid right? fixed

[Beuchi's Hard]
Some notes are not snapped (Fixed on IRC modding) fixed

[Insane]
00:28:73(4) - [Suggestion] I think Start and Finish are not aligned. How about move 3rd spot 1 grid up? thats how i wanted it
00:45:60(9) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? fixed
01:04:76(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left? ^
01:06:01(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? ^
01:06:43(5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left? ^
01:12:68(6) - [Suggestion] How about align with (5)? It seems not perfectly aligned :3 ^
01:16:84(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? ^



Yay! Good song :3
And good luck.

Here's my star.
thanks :)
An64fan
[General]
Um... That purple's a little hard to see, I hate to announce.
General difficulty is a little high, but it's not bad, and still stands in the ranges you've placed them.

[Hard]
00:02:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This threw me off horribly. I think this is going to catch everyone on the first play...
00:27:068 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing makes it seem later, unfortunately.
00:44:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This also caught me off. All of it. Constantly.
00:53:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same deal. Consider a patter adjustment maybe?
00:57:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same old.
01:04:141 (1,2,3) - Also managed to catch me off (bad visibility doesn't help).
01:08:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Festival of Ghost pattern anyone? I'm actually pleased. I love that pattern. :D

[Insane]
00:11:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - Actually pretty awkward to play.
00:12:906 (2,3,4) - So is this one.
00:22:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a bit out of place. Next one a little less so.
00:49:146 (6,7) - Not a big problem (I read just fine), but I see 101 ways for people to misread that (hard-to-read purple maybe?)
01:21:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - At this, I have to say: "ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!" Still half a beat of overlap, but that doesn't make it any less awkward.
I can't appreciate the spacing jackup, especially on the streams.
To be honest, I wouldn't have expected an Insane out of a song like this.


That's all I really caught on my plays. I enjoy it though, ignoring the...quirks?
Topic Starter
jericho2442

An64fan wrote:

[General]
Um... That purple's a little hard to see, I hate to announce.
General difficulty is a little high, but it's not bad, and still stands in the ranges you've placed them.

[Insane]
00:11:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - Actually pretty awkward to play. no its fine
00:12:906 (2,3,4) - So is this one. no
00:22:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a bit out of place. Next one a little less so. no
00:49:146 (6,7) - Not a big problem (I read just fine), but I see 101 ways for people to misread that (hard-to-read purple maybe?) no
01:21:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - At this, I have to say: "ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!" Still half a beat of overlap, but that doesn't make it any less awkward. no
I can't appreciate the spacing jackup, especially on the streams. *facepalm*
To be honest, I wouldn't have expected an Insane out of a song like this.


That's all I really caught on my plays. I enjoy it though, ignoring the...quirks?
srry cant give you kudo for your mod on my map since its a horrd mod :/
Beuchi

An64fan wrote:

[Hard]
00:02:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This threw me off horribly. I think this is going to catch everyone on the first play... Changed the spacing :3
00:27:068 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing makes it seem later, unfortunately. I've seen a lot of things like this in a lot of maps... It's maybe weird spacing, but it's because of symmetry :/
00:44:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This also caught me off. All of it. Constantly. Symmetry again :<
00:53:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same deal. Consider a patter adjustment maybe? Adjustment? It's just flipped o.O
00:57:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same old. I'm starting to think you don't like symmetry oxo... But I do :(
01:04:141 (1,2,3) - Also managed to catch me off (bad visibility doesn't help). Bad visibility would be because of the combocolours/background, maybe jericho can change them, up to him, though.
01:08:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Festival of Ghost pattern anyone? I'm actually pleased. I love that pattern. :D xD Thanks.
Thank you, but I'll only change that first pattern, I kind of agree with you, that spacing could be better oxo
Download: Access - Hitomi No Tsubasa (TV Size) (jericho2442) [Beuchi's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
jericho2442
added your update Beuchi-chan

also combo colours wont be changed unless a bat forces me to do so, ive had 0 probs reading it.
An64fan
Are you playing on an LCD screen? Because I'm certainly not.
Sushi
[Insane]
The last stream is... huh.


Nice map, sir.
Natteke
<3
Symbolic
- in General
  1. Remove .osb file, it's unused (Full Submit after removing it).
  2. The Kiai Time feels really out of place, remove that please.
- Easy
  1. Lower the Overall Difficulty.
- Normal+
  1. Lower the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick.
- Beuchi's Hard
  1. Nothing here.
- Insane
  1. Nothing here.

Fun song,
Starred *
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Symbolic wrote:

- in General
  1. Remove .osb file, it's unused (Full Submit after removing it). removed
  2. The Kiai Time feels really out of place, remove that please. no i like the kiai time

- Easy
  1. Lower the Overall Difficulty.
fixed
- Normal+
  1. Lower the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick.
fixed
- Beuchi's Hard
  1. Nothing here.
- Insane
  1. Nothing here.

Fun song,
Starred *
ty for mod
Lokamp
[General] remove initial countdown... it doesn't fit very well with this map's beginning...

Easy
00:21:029 (1) - end it with clap
01:15:181 (3) - silence it!
01:21:012 (spinner) - silence it, too!

Normal+
01:21:012 (spinner) - see Easy

Beuchi's Hard
00:04:366 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end (or maybe set soft finish)

Insane
Very well!

Another superb work with the usual Hi-skilled guest mapper!
One last thing before starring, jericho: try to add on your modes some whistles during kiai kime! To listen sequential claps in a row on Insane can be weird...
Beuchi

Lokamp wrote:

Beuchi's Hard
00:04:366 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end (or maybe set soft finish) Soft finish set :3

Changes made! I also removed countdown :3
Download: Access - Hitomi No Tsubasa (TV Size) (jericho2442) [Beuchi's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Lokamp wrote:

[General] remove initial countdown... it doesn't fit very well with this map's beginning... fixed

Easy
00:21:029 (1) - end it with clap fixed
01:15:181 (3) - silence it! nah i dont like it
01:21:012 (spinner) - silence it, too! fixed

Normal+
01:21:012 (spinner) - see Easy fixed

Beuchi's Hard
00:04:366 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end (or maybe set soft finish)

Insane
Very well!

Another superb work with the usual Hi-skilled guest mapper!
One last thing before starring, jericho: try to add on your modes some whistles during kiai kime! To listen sequential claps in a row on Insane can be weird...srry im not a fan of whistles so i will leave this out ;)
thanks much and updated your diff too beuchi :)
ZeTia
nice map :P
Jinxy
You could just make the spinner start at 01:15:180 and end at 01:20:596. If you change it, disregard all spinner mods at the bottom.

[Easy]
01:21:012 (1) - Unsilence this spinner. Try using Soft?

[Normal+]
Same as Easy.

[Beuchi]
Nothing

[Insane]
Nada.

Starred.
ztrot
Love almost done let me know what you thing of the hitsounds tho
http://up.ppy.sh/files/hitsounds.rar

Download: Access - Hitomi No Tsubasa (TV Size) (jericho2442) [ztrot's Gaze].osu
ztrot
Topic Starter
jericho2442
thanks ztrot added :D

no more guest diff's now though ppl ;0
Symbolic
- ztrot's Gaze
  1. 00:19:154 (4,1) - This jump is really tricky, can you change it.
edit: PUBBLED
Topic Starter
jericho2442

Symbolic wrote:

- in General
  1. Put ztrot in Tags
this was done before you even posted due to i noticed it myself, thus i cannot give kudo
ztrot
ztrot
Topic Starter
jericho2442
o/ updated ;)
ztrot
YaY!
arien666
[ztrot's Gaze]
00:02:701 (1,5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:21:654 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:27:694 (1) - [Suggestion] How about align start and end(1st return)?
00:31:234 (2,3,4,5,6,7,9,10) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:38:940 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left and up?



Good song anyway.
And new custom hitsounds seem good XD
Good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply :3...
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