00:17:444 (4) - Try it straight. It'll look better.
No00:30:259 (1) - Make the shape better, I suggest
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2896190.
sure00:36:667 (3) - Too much jumpy there. No need to rush.
Adds difficulty01:00:551 (1) - Just make this straight because the S-shape isn't recognizable.
Would cause a little remap here01:17:153 (2) - Make this straight slider curved, alternate to the next one.
fine01:23:269 (1) - Polish the end part of this slider.
looks fine to me02:02:881 (3) - Make this a curve alternating with the next one.
No