happy623 wrote:

你們都做神曲;-;

Tags: ラブライブ! にしきの まき Nishikino Maki 西木野 真姬 そのだ うみ Sonoda Umi 园田海未 あやせ えり Ayase Eli 绚濑绘里

KSHR wrote:

Tags: ラブライブ! にしきの まき Nishikino Maki 西木野 真姬 そのだ うみ Sonoda Umi 园田海未 あやせ えり Ayase Eli 绚濑绘里

Hm, I wonder why Chinese characters are used in Tags. Also add "Eri" as well.

1. 00:14:823 (3,4) - 这两个复制前面的吧00:14:369 (1,2) -
2. 00:24:823 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - flow奇怪，这样好么http://puu.sh/deUVA.jpg
3. 00:29:369 (6,7) - 错开一点吧，而且跳之后的间距应该逐渐减小http://puu.sh/deVuc.jpg
4. 00:30:051 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏是x-x-x x-x-x，结合上一条排版就这样试试http://puu.sh/deVC0.jpg
5. 00:31:414 (1,2,3) - 既然后面是一个4连，为何不00:31:414 (1) - 3/4滑条，00:31:869 - 1/4滑条
6. 00:32:551 (4,5,6,7,8) - 没排直
7. 00:40:733 (1) - 这个位置感觉有点牵强，其实走向应该是横向左http://puu.sh/deWcP.jpg
8. 00:43:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - 没拉直
9. 00:48:233 (2) - 向上吧
10. 00:49:142 (2,1) - why are you so dio
11. 00:51:642 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这你就没想过摆个图形？虽然这样也勉强哟个5边行，但是前后不搭啊http://puu.sh/deWU7.jpg
12. 01:01:414 (3,4,5) - 没叠好
13. 01:24:823 (3,4,1,2) - 一坨翔，向右移开吧
14. 02:33:005 (3,4,5,6,1) - 没排直开gs吧
15. 02:33:914 (4) - 突然加速，边个色吧

1. 00:21:869 (2) - 这个nc
2. 00:27:778 (1) - 稍微弯一下http://puu.sh/deXo7.jpg
3. 00:30:051 (1) - 漏音了，折返一下，或者拆成两个圈

lkx_Shore wrote:

Quick check. No kd.

[Insane]

• 
  就说下节奏吧..

1. 00:08:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - 直接说就是平塞，其实什么音轨都没跟到，这样玩起来什么意思都没有.好
2. 00:11:642 (1) - 换成1/1更好，00:11:869 - ，00:11:869 - 没有打击感很强的音，不跟。好
3. 00:15:051 (4) - 这种音明显比其他部分要强烈的，就应该从哪个部分区分开来，加音效，弄大跳。好
4. 00:15:960 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 什么都跟只会造成很混乱的效果，这点在Kiaitime尤为明显，为什么就不能好好跟一个音轨呢？好
5. 00:22:778 (5,6) - 和00:23:460 (7,8) - 用note接1/2滑条会比现在的效果好很多。要跟人声就不要考虑鼓点，要跟鼓点就不要考虑人声。
6. 00:31:414 (1,2,3) - 一样。这里不清楚怎么改就随便改了下
7. 00:39:142 (2) - 这个人声强音在这，选择1/2.
8. 00:40:733 (1) - 头补finish。好
9. 00:41:642 (4) - 白线没强音，人声的强音效果明显优于这个弱音，这种跟人声。改成折返了
10. 00:43:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为什么说你很不认真的，就是因为这种你跟的音轨都在乱下节奏，去掉00:43:801 (2) - 在00:44:255 - 加上好note。
11. 00:53:914 - 之前说过这部分跟音轨的问题了，不说了。跟vocal了
12. 01:21:187 (2) - 滑条尾巴真的没音，没必要这样。好
13. 01:40:505 (6) - 重音补Finish.好
14. 01:42:096 (11) - 为什么要搞个折返.....直接让人打完不好么好
15. 01:47:096 (4) - 跟人声。改成折返了
16. 其实打击重点在02:18:346 - 和02:18:687 - ，不过她们没唱对。暂时放着的因为vocal比较明显
17. 02:18:914 (1) - 滑条尾消音处理。好
18. 02:27:551 (6,7,8) - 这三个note又混在前面两个音里了？而且02:27:664 (7,8) - 有什么意义么。拆成两个二连了
19. 02:31:414 (6) - 同00:15:051 (4) - 加大了ds
20. 02:31:983 (2) - 为什么突然用这么大的间距。改小了
21. 02:38:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这部分算是乱下吧?...把1/4滑条换成circle了
22. 02:40:733 (1) - 这部分太空了，在02:41:073 (2) - ,02:41:187 - 补note。02:42:096 - 用长滑条拖到02:42:551 - ，那个地方是弱音不适合打击。填满了点
23. 02:55:051 (1) - 尾巴补Finish。好
24. 02:32:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这一段的重音在蓝线上。加了clap来突出了

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

LL大法好

1. The right source is ラブライブ! School idol project
2. 01:20:733 - from here it looks a bit off time you should get somebody who is goos with multiple selections and offset (i'm not QuQ)
3. add a sliderslide is better to have it silent ;_;
4. 03:33:233 - the diffs should finish arround here imo is the best part to get it finished

1. AR + 0,5 HP and OD + 1,5
2. 00:07:778 - from here until 00:22:551 - you should really re-do your hitsounds because are really incosistent you're missing allot of claps like ; 00:11:642 (9) - slider end 00:16:414 (4) - same
3. 00:07:778 (1,2) - this blanket could be better
4. 00:11:642 (9) - new combo
5. 00:38:460 (4) - here your flow is totally wrong because with the prev slider you're introducing with the slider end a flow wich is going down but wrongly you're going up,so the best way to fix this jump pattern is to move this circle down
   
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   or even parallel to the next jump pattern
   
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6. 00:43:914 (2,3,4,5) - you should curve this stream to flow the prev circle instead of having a straight pattern like this
7. 01:23:914 (5,6,7,8,1) - feels like overmapped rhythm here
8. 01:12:778 (2,3) - totally a wrong rhythm here
9. 02:18:233 (2,3) - same here ^
10. 03:17:096 (1) - finish on the spinner

1. 00:42:096 (3) - stack it with the next slider
2. 00:42:323 (1,2) - something like this is better
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:47:551 (5,6) - feels extra here remove 00:47:664 (6) -
4. 01:23:914 (6) - feels overmapped a bit
5. 01:45:051 (3,4) - ugly overlap
6. 03:01:414 (2) - stack it with the next slider
7. 03:06:187 (1,2) - blanket is better here

1. OD and HP -1
2. 00:42:551 (1) - ctrl+h
3. 01:08:914 (3) - ctrl+h
4. 01:27:096 (2) - for a better flow change this slider in this way and move it more to the end of the prev slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:44:369 (1) - blanket for the next object
6. 01:48:005 (1) - ctrl+h
7. 01:50:733 (2,3) - for a better flow do something like this:
   
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8. 02:37:096 (1) - blanket for prev object
9. 03:00:733 (1) - ctrl+h

1. 整体来说吧，基础比较扎实，但是有些死板。梗用的还不错，但是jump细节还需要改进。整体感有，但是还是不完善，但是架子已经出来了，不错。

1. 升级AR8吧
2. 作为水出来的Hard还算比较中肯，不错。

1. AR9更好些，如果再有些i的梗，这个diff就完美了。

Rotte wrote:

哦对了，这BG分辨率太低了，要么换个图，要么截一个1080p的动漫图。

smallboat wrote:

Already do previous mod at this map,so just some short suggestion for this map again (Feel better than before)

[Normal]

IRC in game (CH)

2015-03-06 00:56 smallboat: 看了看nm節奏有些忍不住要說
2015-03-06 00:56 ZZHBOY: 嗯?
2015-03-06 00:57 ZZHBOY: 这个已经近乎easy了啊
2015-03-06 01:00 smallboat: 01:13:460 (1) - 
2015-03-06 01:00 smallboat: 轉盤尾應該是在
2015-03-06 01:01 smallboat: 114596
2015-03-06 01:01 smallboat: vocal end
2015-03-06 01:01 ZZHBOY: 不不 这个我做的应该没错
2015-03-06 01:01 ZZHBOY: 都跟的鼓
2015-03-06 01:03 ZZHBOY: 02:14:823 - 这一带我re了 全跟了1/1
2015-03-06 01:04 smallboat: 01:20:733 (1) - 別3stack啊
2015-03-06 01:04 smallboat: 你說是easy了啊
2015-03-06 01:04 ZZHBOY: 怎么我还放了这个shit
2015-03-06 01:04 ZZHBOY: 剁手了
2015-03-06 01:09 smallboat: 02:37:096 (1) - 往下一點
2015-03-06 01:10 smallboat: 02:58:914 (1) - 在這邊下很怪啊
2015-03-06 01:10 ZZHBOY: 嗯
2015-03-06 01:10 smallboat: 怎麼下在歌詞中間
2015-03-06 01:11 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-03-06 01:11 ZZHBOY: 当时好像有说低难度转盘后面隔4拍
2015-03-06 01:12 smallboat: 02:55:278 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852417
2015-03-06 01:14 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852423这样了
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 03:17:096 (1) - 可
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 貼錯
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: *打錯
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 轉盤尾可以看看+finish
2015-03-06 01:15 smallboat: 恩那節奏可以
2015-03-06 01:17 ZZHBOY: 其他问题还有几个我都改了
2015-03-06 01:17 ZZHBOY: 包括各种stack已经节奏weird

[Hard]
00:17:096 (6) - Forgot NC?
00:57:096 (1) - Suggest move up a bit?似乎没出
02:02:551 (1) - 碰到血條
02:13:460 (1) - 跟前面part音軌對照，forgot add finish here
02:17:096 (3) - Same above
03:03:460 (3) - Move up a bit似乎没出

[Insane] OD+1 to 7?
00:31:414 (1,2,3) - Also use 0.20~0.30x distance here? (This stream so narrow)
01:38:687 (1) - Not a heavy vocal beat,necessary NC hereneed to be fixed.
01:42:096 (1) - Same as above
02:18:573 (3) - The vocal head at 02:18:687 here I think,suggest fix it.
02:53:233 (1) - Also can change a rhythm I think :

SPOILER

(Because vocal start here,it will play better )
03:10:051 (2) - 碰到血條

1. 有JPstaff我就不check metadata了

1. 00:09:369 (4) - / 00:16:642 - / 00:17:551 - / 00:18:460 - / 00:30:278 - 鼓點沒跟到
2. 00:11:642 (9) - 這個nc? 感覺跟前面沒什麼交集
3. 00:55:278 - 01:02:551 - 02:00:733 - 02:08:005 - 感覺可以加whistle 跟vocal啦或跟背景的那個什麼樂器的音都好 不過看你
4. 00:57:096 - 02:14:369 - 我感覺這裡可以上個whistle 不然聽上去好空啊 (你在03:12:551 - 有加哦)
5. 01:12:551 (1) - 這裡和(2,3)一樣跟鼓吧
6. 01:22:096 - 這裡加個note跟(2)疊在一起? 這打起來的感覺好難用言語表達啊但是音樂裡白線上確實是有音的
7. 01:35:051 - 補個finish 因為你前面01:33:233 (1,3) - 都有加 這幾個基本上是一組的少加一個都怪怪
8. 01:38:687 (1) - 這..沒必要nc吧
9. 01:47:323 - whistle / 01:47:551 - 沒跟到鼓
10. 01:56:926 - 我開25%聽這裡沒音 你看要不要刪兩個折返在藍線加個note或是直接不加note都行
11. 02:15:733 - 02:34:823 (6) - 鼓點鼓點
12. 02:38:914 (3,6,9) - 這三顆不加點什麼? 覺得空空的
13. 02:40:505 (5,6) - 是說這裡跟前面1/8 (01:56:755 (6) - )很像啊 我覺得你要就兩個都擺一樣節奏
14. 02:42:551 - 這鋼琴音用whistle跟一下
15. 03:06:528 - 你這裡前面同樣的pattern都會clap所以也下一下吧

1. 00:33:460 (1) - 我覺得順著flow做一個彎曲slider比較好點 (其實也只是nazi)
   
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2. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 00:56:187 (2,3) - 這種不用兩個sliderhead都clap吧 我看你I也是第一個whistle第二個才clap的..聽上去節奏挺亂的>_>
   (其他同樣的有: 01:01:642 (2,3) - 01:03:460 (3,4) - 01:59:823 (2,3) - 02:01:642 (2,3) - 02:07:096 (2,3) - 02:58:005 (2,3) - 02:59:823 (2,3) - )
3. 01:06:187 - 01:07:096 - 01:09:823 - 上whistle? 你Insane有加
4. 01:12:892 - / 01:13:233 - 我感覺這兩個也可以上clap 你03:16:187 (4) - 也有加 (同理02:18:346 - 02:18:687 - )
5. 01:25:278 - 至少要whistle啊這裡音這麼突兀不加東西聽起來超空
6. 01:25:960 - 這裡你其他diff是用drum 你看你要全部都用finish還是這個改成drum sampleset
7. 01:35:051 - 01:40:505 (1) - 02:13:460 (1) - 02:17:096 - 03:15:278 - finish
8. 01:35:505 (1) - 我覺得這個點很容易和前面的01:34:823 (6) - 誤認為是1/2節奏..你可以把(6)往左環移一點 (example)
9. 01:51:414 (1,2,3) - 超宇宙無敵nazi但(1)的尾巴和(2)(3)之間不等距 (3)稍微往右下偏移一點
10. 02:08:460 - 02:34:823 - 漏clap了
11. 02:10:733 (4,1,3) - 跟前面一樣上whistle (02:09:823 (1) - 也可以clap+whistle跟前面一樣)
12. 02:22:551 - 跟I一樣禁音?
13. 02:29:823 (1) - 這裡不用clap吧 頂多drum sampleset
14. 02:33:914 - 這個加個whistle吧跟I一樣
    這複製大法

1. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 同H 改跟00:53:914 - 這個點 是說這裡前面的slider就已經跟到24clap了還是乖乖下24clap就好 (後面pattern就一樣自己check下)
2. 01:12:892 - 01:13:233 - 同H
3. 01:35:051 - 這個用soft finish就好啦
4. 01:40:505 - finish (還是同hard啊)
5. 02:15:278 - 02:28:005 - 02:35:278 - 02:36:187 (2) - 這裡不用clap
6. 02:22:551 - 學I禁音?
7. 02:33:914 - 同Hard (太多同Hard啦)
8. 02:34:823 - 02:37:551 - 鼓鼓鼓
9. 03:15:278 - 至少要whistle
10. 03:16:187 (2) - 這slider3個音我覺得可以用clap跟

Flask wrote:

Recheck

基本上就是加加減減音效而已 為什麼我就不詳述了 大多是consistency

[Insane]
00:12:096 - clap
00:27:778 (1,2) - 這兩個slider的尾巴之間的間距再拉大一點? 大概就是1.2x左右
01:22:096 (3) - clap
01:50:733 (3,4,5) - 這三個的間距可以調成一致
02:08:346 - clap
02:15:733 - clap
03:10:278 (3) - clap
02:12:551 (1,3) - whistle
最後的轉盤上個finish吧 (hard也是)

[Hard]
00:33:460 (1) - 這個沒改呀 这个没动因为感觉ds在应该没啥问题而且动的话前后都要动挺麻烦orz
01:03:005 - clap
02:09:823 (1) - whistle
02:18:005 (1) - 這個跟01:12:551 (1) - 一樣下法
03:15:278 - whistle就好

[Normal]
00:23:005 (1,2) - 沒下到音效
00:49:596 - finish
00:53:914 - 00:55:733 - clap
01:03:460 (2) - 這個不用clap
01:21:187 - 01:22:096 - clap
02:13:460 (1) - finish
02:13:914 (2) - 02:14:823 - 02:27:551 - clap
02:38:914 (1) - finish
02:57:096 - finish
02:57:551 - 02:58:460 (3) - 02:59:369 - 03:04:823 (2) - 03:06:642 (2) - clap

HolyNightmare wrote:

you really should change something with the online offset..
it feels so wrong :/

Kodora wrote:

Why this CS on Hard orz .-.

Flask wrote:

效率

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Just wondering, should the artist field be updated to fit the version in the booklet(s). The one in the booklets use 1 ampersand and 1 comma (and the argument about CV is a bit ridiculous right now, so ignoring that)

Soldier Game (Single)

ラブライブ！ μ's Best Album

Very minor detail, but just wanted to note the existence of it.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Just wondering, should the artist field be updated to fit the version in the booklet(s). The one in the booklets use 1 ampersand and 1 comma (and the argument about CV is a bit ridiculous right now, so ignoring that)

Soldier Game (Single)

ラブライブ！ μ's Best Album

Very minor detail, but just wanted to note the existence of it.

1. Artist : 西木野真姫 (CV.Pile), 園田海未 (CV.三森すずこ) ＆ 絢瀬絵里 (CV.南條愛乃)
2. Romanised : Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile), Sonoda Umi (CV.Mimori Suzuko) & Ayase Eri (CV.Nanjo Yoshino)

SPOILER

1. I guess this map doesn't have storyboard. So the osb file is not necessary. Please remove it.

1. 00:24:369 (1) - Try to rotate about 50°? The flow would be better for playing.
   
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2. 01:00:733 (1) - missing a clap to the tail
3. 01:04:369 (1) - The clap follows nothing to me at here. You should consider removing it.

1. 00:21:869 (2,1) - I think you made this part to follow same sound on these note. So it's better to add new combo from here 00:21:869 - like this :
   
2. 01:11:642 (3) - add a clap to the tail
3. 03:15:505 - How about adding hitsounds to here? I prefer to add a clap to follow the sound :3
4. 03:15:733 (2,3) - ^ Same
   Insane diff has many jumps and streams part. I recommend you to make more jumps at kiai time for diff spread.

Flask wrote:

..還以為有JPstaff看過不用擔心了

Spectator wrote:

..

alacat wrote:

Let me know after deleting .OSB file and adding "Love Live! Nishikino Maki Sonoda Umi Ayase Eli" to Tags

Then, I feel these tags are not necessary "にしきの まき そのだ うみ あやせ えり"

alacat wrote:

smallboat wrote:

沒人恭喜裝裝逼

CLSW wrote:

YEAA

Gonna take 1st place of CtB after it gets ranked successfully!

Spectator wrote:

<3

ZZHBOY wrote:

pro ctb player always be a fans of u's?

Xinely wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

pro ctb player always be a fans of u's?

exactly

grats ajiboy <3