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Pile, Mimori Suzuko, Nanjo Yoshino - soldier game

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ZZHBOY

smallboat wrote:

Already do previous mod at this map,so just some short suggestion for this map again (Feel better than before)

[Normal]
IRC in game (CH)
2015-03-06 00:56 smallboat: 看了看nm節奏有些忍不住要說
2015-03-06 00:56 ZZHBOY: 嗯?
2015-03-06 00:57 ZZHBOY: 这个已经近乎easy了啊
2015-03-06 01:00 smallboat: 01:13:460 (1) -
2015-03-06 01:00 smallboat: 轉盤尾應該是在
2015-03-06 01:01 smallboat: 114596
2015-03-06 01:01 smallboat: vocal end
2015-03-06 01:01 ZZHBOY: 不不 这个我做的应该没错
2015-03-06 01:01 ZZHBOY: 都跟的鼓
2015-03-06 01:03 ZZHBOY: 02:14:823 - 这一带我re了 全跟了1/1
2015-03-06 01:04 smallboat: 01:20:733 (1) - 別3stack啊
2015-03-06 01:04 smallboat: 你說是easy了啊
2015-03-06 01:04 ZZHBOY: 怎么我还放了这个shit
2015-03-06 01:04 ZZHBOY: 剁手了
2015-03-06 01:09 smallboat: 02:37:096 (1) - 往下一點
2015-03-06 01:10 smallboat: 02:58:914 (1) - 在這邊下很怪啊
2015-03-06 01:10 ZZHBOY: 嗯
2015-03-06 01:10 smallboat: 怎麼下在歌詞中間
2015-03-06 01:11 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-03-06 01:11 ZZHBOY: 当时好像有说低难度转盘后面隔4拍
2015-03-06 01:12 smallboat: 02:55:278 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852417
2015-03-06 01:14 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852423这样了
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 03:17:096 (1) - 可
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 貼錯
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: *打錯
2015-03-06 01:14 smallboat: 轉盤尾可以看看+finish
2015-03-06 01:15 smallboat: 恩那節奏可以
2015-03-06 01:17 ZZHBOY: 其他问题还有几个我都改了
2015-03-06 01:17 ZZHBOY: 包括各种stack已经节奏weird
[Hard]
00:17:096 (6) - Forgot NC?
00:57:096 (1) - Suggest move up a bit?似乎没出
02:02:551 (1) - 碰到血條
02:13:460 (1) - 跟前面part音軌對照,forgot add finish here
02:17:096 (3) - Same above
03:03:460 (3) - Move up a bit似乎没出

[Insane] OD+1 to 7?
00:31:414 (1,2,3) - Also use 0.20~0.30x distance here? (This stream so narrow)
01:38:687 (1) - Not a heavy vocal beat,necessary NC hereneed to be fixed.
01:42:096 (1) - Same as above
02:18:573 (3) - The vocal head at 02:18:687 here I think,suggest fix it.
02:53:233 (1) - Also can change a rhythm I think : (Because vocal start here,it will play better )
03:10:051 (2) - 碰到血條

no reply = fixed, thx for mod
Flask
我來惹

[General]
  1. 有JPstaff我就不check metadata了
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:369 (4) - / 00:16:642 - / 00:17:551 - / 00:18:460 - / 00:30:278 - 鼓點沒跟到
  2. 00:11:642 (9) - 這個nc? 感覺跟前面沒什麼交集
  3. 00:55:278 - 01:02:551 - 02:00:733 - 02:08:005 - 感覺可以加whistle 跟vocal啦或跟背景的那個什麼樂器的音都好 不過看你
  4. 00:57:096 - 02:14:369 - 我感覺這裡可以上個whistle 不然聽上去好空啊 (你在03:12:551 - 有加哦)
  5. 01:12:551 (1) - 這裡和(2,3)一樣跟鼓吧
  6. 01:22:096 - 這裡加個note跟(2)疊在一起? 這打起來的感覺好難用言語表達啊但是音樂裡白線上確實是有音的
  7. 01:35:051 - 補個finish 因為你前面01:33:233 (1,3) - 都有加 這幾個基本上是一組的少加一個都怪怪
  8. 01:38:687 (1) - 這..沒必要nc吧
  9. 01:47:323 - whistle / 01:47:551 - 沒跟到鼓
  10. 01:56:926 - 我開25%聽這裡沒音 你看要不要刪兩個折返在藍線加個note或是直接不加note都行
  11. 02:15:733 - 02:34:823 (6) - 鼓點鼓點
  12. 02:38:914 (3,6,9) - 這三顆不加點什麼? 覺得空空的
  13. 02:40:505 (5,6) - 是說這裡跟前面1/8 (01:56:755 (6) - )很像啊 我覺得你要就兩個都擺一樣節奏
  14. 02:42:551 - 這鋼琴音用whistle跟一下
  15. 03:06:528 - 你這裡前面同樣的pattern都會clap所以也下一下吧
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:460 (1) - 我覺得順著flow做一個彎曲slider比較好點 (其實也只是nazi)
  2. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 00:56:187 (2,3) - 這種不用兩個sliderhead都clap吧 我看你I也是第一個whistle第二個才clap的..聽上去節奏挺亂的>_>
    (其他同樣的有: 01:01:642 (2,3) - 01:03:460 (3,4) - 01:59:823 (2,3) - 02:01:642 (2,3) - 02:07:096 (2,3) - 02:58:005 (2,3) - 02:59:823 (2,3) - )
  3. 01:06:187 - 01:07:096 - 01:09:823 - 上whistle? 你Insane有加
  4. 01:12:892 - / 01:13:233 - 我感覺這兩個也可以上clap 你03:16:187 (4) - 也有加 (同理02:18:346 - 02:18:687 - )
  5. 01:25:278 - 至少要whistle啊這裡音這麼突兀不加東西聽起來超空
  6. 01:25:960 - 這裡你其他diff是用drum 你看你要全部都用finish還是這個改成drum sampleset
  7. 01:35:051 - 01:40:505 (1) - 02:13:460 (1) - 02:17:096 - 03:15:278 - finish
  8. 01:35:505 (1) - 我覺得這個點很容易和前面的01:34:823 (6) - 誤認為是1/2節奏..你可以把(6)往左環移一點 (example)
  9. 01:51:414 (1,2,3) - 超宇宙無敵nazi但(1)的尾巴和(2)(3)之間不等距 (3)稍微往右下偏移一點
  10. 02:08:460 - 02:34:823 - 漏clap了
  11. 02:10:733 (4,1,3) - 跟前面一樣上whistle (02:09:823 (1) - 也可以clap+whistle跟前面一樣)
  12. 02:22:551 - 跟I一樣禁音?
  13. 02:29:823 (1) - 這裡不用clap吧 頂多drum sampleset
  14. 02:33:914 - 這個加個whistle吧跟I一樣
    這複製大法
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 同H 改跟00:53:914 - 這個點 是說這裡前面的slider就已經跟到24clap了還是乖乖下24clap就好 (後面pattern就一樣自己check下)
  2. 01:12:892 - 01:13:233 - 同H
  3. 01:35:051 - 這個用soft finish就好啦
  4. 01:40:505 - finish (還是同hard啊)
  5. 02:15:278 - 02:28:005 - 02:35:278 - 02:36:187 (2) - 這裡不用clap
  6. 02:22:551 - 學I禁音?
  7. 02:33:914 - 同Hard (太多同Hard啦)
  8. 02:34:823 - 02:37:551 - 鼓鼓鼓
  9. 03:15:278 - 至少要whistle
  10. 03:16:187 (2) - 這slider3個音我覺得可以用clap跟
主要都音效居多 排版已經夠好啦
Call me back
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
Flask

Flask wrote:

我來惹

[General]
  1. 有JPstaff我就不check metadata了
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:369 (4) - / 00:16:642 - / 00:17:551 - / 00:18:460 - / 00:30:278 - 鼓點沒跟到
  2. 00:11:642 (9) - 這個nc? 感覺跟前面沒什麼交集
  3. 00:55:278 - 01:02:551 - 02:00:733 - 02:08:005 - 感覺可以加whistle 跟vocal啦或跟背景的那個什麼樂器的音都好 不過看你
  4. 00:57:096 - 02:14:369 - 我感覺這裡可以上個whistle 不然聽上去好空啊 (你在03:12:551 - 有加哦)
  5. 01:12:551 (1) - 這裡和(2,3)一樣跟鼓吧
  6. 01:22:096 - 這裡加個note跟(2)疊在一起? 這打起來的感覺好難用言語表達啊但是音樂裡白線上確實是有音的
  7. 01:35:051 - 補個finish 因為你前面01:33:233 (1,3) - 都有加 這幾個基本上是一組的少加一個都怪怪
  8. 01:38:687 (1) - 這..沒必要nc吧
  9. 01:47:323 - whistle / 01:47:551 - 沒跟到鼓
  10. 01:56:926 - 我開25%聽這裡沒音 你看要不要刪兩個折返在藍線加個note或是直接不加note都行
  11. 02:15:733 - 02:34:823 (6) - 鼓點鼓點
  12. 02:38:914 (3,6,9) - 這三顆不加點什麼? 覺得空空的
  13. 02:40:505 (5,6) - 是說這裡跟前面1/8 (01:56:755 (6) - )很像啊 我覺得你要就兩個都擺一樣節奏
  14. 02:42:551 - 這鋼琴音用whistle跟一下
  15. 03:06:528 - 你這裡前面同樣的pattern都會clap所以也下一下吧
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:460 (1) - 我覺得順著flow做一個彎曲slider比較好點 (其實也只是nazi)
  2. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 00:56:187 (2,3) - 這種不用兩個sliderhead都clap吧 我看你I也是第一個whistle第二個才clap的..聽上去節奏挺亂的>_>
    (其他同樣的有: 01:01:642 (2,3) - 01:03:460 (3,4) - 01:59:823 (2,3) - 02:01:642 (2,3) - 02:07:096 (2,3) - 02:58:005 (2,3) - 02:59:823 (2,3) - )
  3. 01:06:187 - 01:07:096 - 01:09:823 - 上whistle? 你Insane有加
  4. 01:12:892 - / 01:13:233 - 我感覺這兩個也可以上clap 你03:16:187 (4) - 也有加 (同理02:18:346 - 02:18:687 - )
  5. 01:25:278 - 至少要whistle啊這裡音這麼突兀不加東西聽起來超空
  6. 01:25:960 - 這裡你其他diff是用drum 你看你要全部都用finish還是這個改成drum sampleset
  7. 01:35:051 - 01:40:505 (1) - 02:13:460 (1) - 02:17:096 - 03:15:278 - finish
  8. 01:35:505 (1) - 我覺得這個點很容易和前面的01:34:823 (6) - 誤認為是1/2節奏..你可以把(6)往左環移一點 (example)
  9. 01:51:414 (1,2,3) - 超宇宙無敵nazi但(1)的尾巴和(2)(3)之間不等距 (3)稍微往右下偏移一點
  10. 02:08:460 - 02:34:823 - 漏clap了
  11. 02:10:733 (4,1,3) - 跟前面一樣上whistle (02:09:823 (1) - 也可以clap+whistle跟前面一樣)
  12. 02:22:551 - 跟I一樣禁音?
  13. 02:29:823 (1) - 這裡不用clap吧 頂多drum sampleset
  14. 02:33:914 - 這個加個whistle吧跟I一樣
    這複製大法
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:369 (2,3) - 同H 改跟00:53:914 - 這個點 是說這裡前面的slider就已經跟到24clap了還是乖乖下24clap就好 (後面pattern就一樣自己check下)
  2. 01:12:892 - 01:13:233 - 同H
  3. 01:35:051 - 這個用soft finish就好啦
  4. 01:40:505 - finish (還是同hard啊)
  5. 02:15:278 - 02:28:005 - 02:35:278 - 02:36:187 (2) - 這裡不用clap
  6. 02:22:551 - 學I禁音?
  7. 02:33:914 - 同Hard (太多同Hard啦)
  8. 02:34:823 - 02:37:551 - 鼓鼓鼓
  9. 03:15:278 - 至少要whistle
  10. 03:16:187 (2) - 這slider3個音我覺得可以用clap跟
主要都音效居多 排版已經夠好啦
Call me back
all fixed
Flask
Recheck

基本上就是加加減減音效而已 為什麼我就不詳述了 大多是consistency

[Insane]
00:12:096 - clap
00:27:778 (1,2) - 這兩個slider的尾巴之間的間距再拉大一點? 大概就是1.2x左右
01:22:096 (3) - clap
01:50:733 (3,4,5) - 這三個的間距可以調成一致
02:08:346 - clap
02:15:733 - clap
03:10:278 (3) - clap
02:12:551 (1,3) - whistle
最後的轉盤上個finish吧 (hard也是)

[Hard]
00:33:460 (1) - 這個沒改呀
01:03:005 - clap
02:09:823 (1) - whistle
02:18:005 (1) - 這個跟01:12:551 (1) - 一樣下法
03:15:278 - whistle就好

[Normal]
00:23:005 (1,2) - 沒下到音效
00:49:596 - finish
00:53:914 - 00:55:733 - clap
01:03:460 (2) - 這個不用clap
01:21:187 - 01:22:096 - clap
02:13:460 (1) - finish
02:13:914 (2) - 02:14:823 - 02:27:551 - clap
02:38:914 (1) - finish
02:57:096 - finish
02:57:551 - 02:58:460 (3) - 02:59:369 - 03:04:823 (2) - 03:06:642 (2) - clap
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Flask wrote:

Recheck

基本上就是加加減減音效而已 為什麼我就不詳述了 大多是consistency

[Insane]
00:12:096 - clap
00:27:778 (1,2) - 這兩個slider的尾巴之間的間距再拉大一點? 大概就是1.2x左右
01:22:096 (3) - clap
01:50:733 (3,4,5) - 這三個的間距可以調成一致
02:08:346 - clap
02:15:733 - clap
03:10:278 (3) - clap
02:12:551 (1,3) - whistle
最後的轉盤上個finish吧 (hard也是)

[Hard]
00:33:460 (1) - 這個沒改呀 这个没动因为感觉ds在应该没啥问题而且动的话前后都要动挺麻烦orz
01:03:005 - clap
02:09:823 (1) - whistle
02:18:005 (1) - 這個跟01:12:551 (1) - 一樣下法
03:15:278 - whistle就好

[Normal]
00:23:005 (1,2) - 沒下到音效
00:49:596 - finish
00:53:914 - 00:55:733 - clap
01:03:460 (2) - 這個不用clap
01:21:187 - 01:22:096 - clap
02:13:460 (1) - finish
02:13:914 (2) - 02:14:823 - 02:27:551 - clap
02:38:914 (1) - finish
02:57:096 - finish
02:57:551 - 02:58:460 (3) - 02:59:369 - 03:04:823 (2) - 03:06:642 (2) - clap
其他都改了 .-.
Flask
Bubbled!

I hope I didn't lack many hitsound issues ;_;
smallboat
Okay,already check few times at this map,I believed it prove good a lot has no issue I think.

Qualified ~ !
Kotori-Chan
you really should change something with the online offset..
it feels so wrong :/
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

HolyNightmare wrote:

you really should change something with the online offset..
it feels so wrong :/
plz don't just ask for a change, tell me how to change it and why
Kodora
Why this CS on Hard orz .-.
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Kodora wrote:

Why this CS on Hard orz .-.
cs from normal to insane: 3→3.5→4, so-called nice spread huehue
Flask
效率
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Flask wrote:

效率
既然泡了就起飞嘛 8-)
blissfulyoshi
Just wondering, should the artist field be updated to fit the version in the booklet(s). The one in the booklets use 1 ampersand and 1 comma (and the argument about CV is a bit ridiculous right now, so ignoring that)


Very minor detail, but just wanted to note the existence of it.
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Just wondering, should the artist field be updated to fit the version in the booklet(s). The one in the booklets use 1 ampersand and 1 comma (and the argument about CV is a bit ridiculous right now, so ignoring that)


Very minor detail, but just wanted to note the existence of it.
....…....I see
alacat
Hi, ZZHBOY again :( disqualify due to the wrong metadata.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Just wondering, should the artist field be updated to fit the version in the booklet(s). The one in the booklets use 1 ampersand and 1 comma (and the argument about CV is a bit ridiculous right now, so ignoring that)


Very minor detail, but just wanted to note the existence of it.
I checked the official CD and website, So The artist must be

  1. Artist : 西木野真姫 (CV.Pile), 園田海未 (CV.三森すずこ) & 絢瀬絵里 (CV.南條愛乃)
  2. Romanised : Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile), Sonoda Umi (CV.Mimori Suzuko) & Ayase Eri (CV.Nanjo Yoshino)
according the CD information (Single)

Website : http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/release.html

Don't forget to remove them from tags before getting rebubble!

Additional Modding :

[General]
  1. I guess this map doesn't have storyboard. So the osb file is not necessary. Please remove it.
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:369 (1) - Try to rotate about 50°? The flow would be better for playing.
  2. 01:00:733 (1) - missing a clap to the tail
  3. 01:04:369 (1) - The clap follows nothing to me at here. You should consider removing it.
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:869 (2,1) - I think you made this part to follow same sound on these note. So it's better to add new combo from here 00:21:869 - like this :
  2. 01:11:642 (3) - add a clap to the tail
  3. 03:15:505 - How about adding hitsounds to here? I prefer to add a clap to follow the sound :3
  4. 03:15:733 (2,3) - ^ Same
    Insane diff has many jumps and streams part. I recommend you to make more jumps at kiai time for diff spread.
meii18
安らかに眠る ;w;
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
waiting for a reply on this p/3953395/
Flask
..還以為有JPstaff看過不用擔心了
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Flask wrote:

..還以為有JPstaff看過不用擔心了
嘛的以后做日本歌先找五个狗去check metadata :?
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
..

南条是nanjou啊
Spectator
..
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Spectator wrote:

..
:?
alacat
Let me know after deleting .OSB file and adding "Love Live! Nishikino Maki Sonoda Umi Ayase Eli" to Tags

Then, I feel these tags are not necessary "にしきの まき そのだ うみ あやせ えり"
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

alacat wrote:

Let me know after deleting .OSB file and adding "Love Live! Nishikino Maki Sonoda Umi Ayase Eli" to Tags

Then, I feel these tags are not necessary "にしきの まき そのだ うみ あやせ えり"
all fixed :)
something wrong with my network, i will try to upload it soon
alacat

Re-Bubbled
zyoi

alacat wrote:

(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) moe moe
smallboat
Okay, already check at previous mod by me and looks fine, qualfied
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

smallboat wrote:

沒人恭喜裝裝逼
CLSW
YEAA

Gonna take 1st place of CtB after it gets ranked successfully!
Spectator
<3
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

CLSW wrote:

YEAA

Gonna take 1st place of CtB after it gets ranked successfully!

Spectator wrote:

<3
pro ctb player always be a fans of u's?
Xinely

ZZHBOY wrote:

pro ctb player always be a fans of u's?
exactly

grats ajiboy <3
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Xinely wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

pro ctb player always be a fans of u's?
exactly

grats ajiboy <3
Thank you xinly :3
PatZar
soldierrr gemmuuu
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