This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 26, 2015 at 5:40:16 PM

Artist: Okamura Yasuyuki
Title: Viva Namida
Source: スペース☆ダンディ
Tags: Opening Anime Japanese Space☆Dandy Space Dandy
BPM: 128
Filesize: 24417kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.46 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (3.24 stars, 254 notes)
3. Insane (3.85 stars, 338 notes)
4. Normal (2.07 stars, 155 notes)

Download: Okamura Yasuyuki - Viva Namida
Download: Okamura Yasuyuki - Viva Namida (no video)
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//TODO: Receive mods

Hi there! For M4M

Should change around the volumes so the whole map isn't the same volume
Video dimensions are too large






That's all from me The diffs all have the problem of stacks not being perfect, but I only pointed out the obvious one(s), so you probably should fix the rest. You can use the coordinate system in the top right to your advantage.
From what little experience I have with hitsounding this map didn't really have any problems I could detect, so that's a plus

Good luck with your map!

JMQ stuff. Sorry for the delay!

Title: Viva Namida | Just remove the TV size.
Artist: Okamura Yasuyuki

That's all. The rest looks fine to me, good luck!

m4m

General

Please choose some Combo Colours!

Insane

00:00:449 - A note here would fit in my opinion
00:03:262 (3) - Whistle in the beginning?
00:08:184 (1,2,3) - Please stack these elements properly
00:10:996 (2,4) - I'd avoid this overlap, move (4) a bid down
00:16:387 (4) - Uh, all the notes in this pattern have got 1,2x spacing... why is this 2.0x? I suggest to fix it for consistency
00:43:574 (5) - Try to apply a ctrl+g on this slider, the flow will be improved!
00:48:262 (5) - Create a perfect blanket: move 2nd sliderpoint to 339|92 and 3rd sliderpoint to 251|4
01:10:762 (1,2,3) - These are not stacked well

Hard

00:00:684 (1,2,3,4) - Doublets are a bit too hard for an hard diff, I suggest to replace these with 2 sliders
00:05:137 (2) - Remove clap from slidertail and put it on 00:05:840 (3)
00:06:309 (1,1) - Ugly overlap, fix it please ;;
00:07:715 (1,3) - Finish on sliderhead and on that note
00:09:824 (1,2) - Please stack these elements properly
00:13:574 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:00:684 (1,2,3,4)
00:21:426 (3,4) - ^
00:20:840 (1,2) - Stack
00:36:309 (1,1) - These are too close for an hard diff... Reduce the spinner by 1/2 or 1/1
00:51:074 (1,1) - The same here ^
00:56:465 (5) - Clap here
01:03:965 (7) - ^
01:06:543 (1,1) - Same problem here
01:18:613 (6) - I think this sounds better if you move it to 01:18:848 instead
01:23:184 (1,2,3,4) - You know

Normal

The main problem in this diff are the blankets: They are not really well done... Since I don't like walls of mods full of nazi stuff I will point it out just once! So go through this diff and fix all the bad blankets

00:05:137 (2,4) - Maybe these are a bit close
00:19:434 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know, this pattern is a mess in my opinion, I suggest to remake it and stack and blanket objects properly

Easy

00:35:840 (3) - Clap here
00:36:309 (1) - Finish here
01:09:121 (1,2) - This is hard to read for newbies, I suggest to unstack these

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The rest loosk fine to me. The map needs more mods and some work but you can do it, good luck

Modding this cause I want to.


[Easy]

1. 00:14:746 (3) - I prefer that you design this slider differently, it kinda has that jazzy instrument sound to it, and having a unique slider design for it would make this so much better , and way more distinguishable. here what I think would work best in this case. change the slider any way you want, just don't make it look like this currently.
   
   lookie

   http://puu.sh/chVLq.jpg
2. 00:18:496 (2,3) - If your aiming for symmetry, circle three is way off. and since you made the first slider symmetry to the previous. I highly believe you are. I think you should make sure note 3 is symmetrical to 00:15:684 (1) - in this case.
3. 00:34:199 (1,2,3) - Starting at note 1 , the notes fit much better in the white ticks than in the red tick, the major beats (and instruments) are placed in that part, maybe you could shorten 00:32:793 (4) - and move all notes to the previous white tick? something like this : (make sure you adjust spacing correctly)
   
4. 00:52:012 (3) - The beats here are all really strong, and it finally reaches its highest point at the start of this slider, could you add a finish to show that? I think it sounds great!
5. 01:04:434 - Why did you ignore this part? I think a note could go here.
6. 01:25:059 (2) - Flow would be better here if could Ctrl+G the previous slider flow is leading towards the top, not the bottom of the map. this is kinda weird flow on how it is currently.
7. 01:28:809 (1,2) - Hmm, just an idea but maybe you could try this rhythm :
   

[Normal]

1. 00:00:684 (1) - I'd prefer you place this above of 2 , if that's how you want the overall pattern to flow like. not necessary but I really do believe it would flow better that way. here's how it looks like :
   
   see

   
2. 00:17:324 (5) - Whistles on both the start and the end of the slider sound good to me.
3. 00:24:824 (4) - Make this identical to the previous slider, and flip it around, currently that would fix the blanket which is my major concern for this slider, it just sticks out like a sore thumb, and all the overlaps there too, but the overlaps are fine the way they are.
4. 00:38:652 - You could add a note here, there's enough time after the spinner still even if you added the note, and that's the only reason I can see that a note wouldn't work here. (unless your following the vocals.)
5. 00:49:199 (1) - I won't mention all of them , but some blankets in this diff need to be fixed, and be concerned about them because this diff is blanket heavy. you should focus on them more at least in this diff.
6. 00:51:074 (5,6,7) - Ahhh, the hitsounds here are inconsistent with easy, remove all of them and add whistles or make normal's hitsounds the same in easy, whatever runs your beat, and make sure to add a finish at start of 00:52:012 (7) -
7. 00:54:121 (4) - This note touches the hp bar, and doesn't look pretty, and so do 00:55:059 (1) - , hard to say something then put all notes after 00:53:184 (1) - down without ruining your symmetry.
8. 01:07:480 (3) - Oh gosh, a finish definitely needs to be at the start here.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would of been better if you placed them so they're linear in a sense, something like this :
   
   
   since 4 5 and 6 aren't linear to 1 2 and 3 which I think would make the flow a little jagged, but with this it makes more sense.
2. 00:15:449 (9) - A Jump here is fine, but don't you think its a little bit major for a hard? personally you can do a jump here but the spacing needs to be reduced a bit more.
3. 00:21:074 (6) - New combo here, since this is a new rhythm and plus the whole combo is just super long, and needs to be shortened (none of your combo last more than 10 notes)
4. 00:40:527 (5) - This note and all the circle's after are practically a own pattern of there whole and need to be shown that with they're own separate combo, that being said. you need a new combo here.
5. 01:05:371 - a note needs to be here,
6. 01:06:309 - ^ same , unless you want to emphasize just the vocals.

[Insane]

1. 00:07:715 (1,2,3) - The stacking here is not good, I can see your trying to stack the ends with the start of 00:06:309 (1) - ,but they're not perfectly correct which is trouble-some to me....
2. 00:09:590 (9) - Same, make sure they stack with 00:08:652 (5) -
3. 00:21:074 (1) - Ahh best place I can see a new combo to be, just to reduce some of these combo's from exceeding 10 because they don't really need to orz.
4. 00:29:512 (6) - Same, needs a new combo.
5. 00:32:324 (6) - ^ all your combo's need to reworks on this, the one's that exceed 10.
6. 00:40:527 (5) - This too, it's a separate pattern itself.

The insane plays really well besides the long combo's/

@Tari, applied everythung but:

[Easy]
01:28:809 (1,2) - Hmm, just an idea but maybe you could try this rhythm A slider with fast repeats is too hard for an easy, I feel

[Hard]
01:05:371 - a note needs to be here,
01:06:309 - ^ same , unless you want to emphasize just the vocals. I was emphasizing the vocals here

Helloo M4M

[Easy]

1. 00:00:684 (1) - You can add whistle on reverse imo since It have same sound like the one on slider head
2. 00:02:559 (2,1) - Same as above
3. 00:06:309 (2) - Add whistle on tail
4. 00:08:184 (1) - How about add finish on head? I hear cymbal sound there
5. 00:14:746 (3) - Delete whistle? I'm not sure why you add whistle there
6. 00:17:559 (1,1) - Wrong NC I geuss, I don't know is that intended or no
7. 00:18:496 (1,2) - Swap clap, (2) should be clap and (1) no clap
8. 00:22:012 (4) - How about you add whistle on both head and tail?
9. 00:25:059 (3) - Delete clap on tail
10. 00:33:965 (1) - Delete finish? finish should be at (2)'s head 00:34:434 (2) -
11. 00:35:840 (3) - Add clap
12. 00:41:934 (1) - Delete whistle? I'm not sure why you add whistle there
13. 00:49:199 (3) - Add whistle on tail
14. 01:11:934 (1,2) - How about you make the hitsound same as 00:58:809 (1,2) -
15. 01:23:184 (1) - You can add whistle on reverse imo since It have same sound like the one on slider head
16. 01:25:059 (2,3) - Same as above

[Normal]

1. 00:00:684 (1) - Add whistle on head
2. 00:01:387 (2) - Add whistle
3. 00:28:574 (4) - Delete whistle on tail?
4. 00:32:324 (1) - Not fit the song imo? why don't you follow the singer instead following the guitar sound there. A 1/1 slider with circle would be good
5. 00:49:902 (2) - Add clap?
6. 00:50:371 (4) - Add clap on tail?
7. 01:19:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - How about to have same hitsound as 01:04:668 (1,2) -

[Hard]

1. 00:00:684 (1) - Add whistle
2. 00:01:152 (4) - Add clap
3. 00:03:027 (2) - Delete whistle
4. 00:05:840 (3) - Delete whistle
5. 00:06:309 (1) - Add whistle on tail

[Insane]

1. 00:01:152 (5) - Add clap
2. 00:02:090 (9) - Replace whistle with clap
3. 00:03:027 (2) - Add clap
4. 00:03:262 (3) - Add whistle on head
5. 00:03:965 (5) - Add clap
6. 00:04:902 (5) - Add whistle
7. 00:05:840 (9) - Replace whistle with clap
8. 00:06:309 (1) - Add whistle on tail
9. 00:38:184 (1) - Add whistle
10. 00:45:684 (8) - Same as above
11. 01:04:668 (1,2,3) - Add whistle on (1) and (3)
12. 01:05:605 (1,2,3) - Same as above
13. 01:19:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 01:04:668 (1,2,3) - for consistency

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Good map I like It. Visualy your mapset is ready to go, but I'm not sure some hitsound especialy whistle sound inconsistent on the whole mapset
Good luck on the way! ranked soon~

m4m amirite

suggestions op

sorry if this mod was bad im still learnin 2 do anything on this game

from No_Gu's m4m queue

other two diffs r fine to me, but wanna mention some kind of similar mod in the hard diff.

good luck

Yo~
Metadata mod~

I like this song <3 (Namida, Namida)

Artist: Yasuyuki Okamura (for Romaji tittle) is correct not: Okamura Yasuyuki
Tittle: Viva Namida (TV size)
Add (TV size) in tittle~
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Good luck~ and NO KDS~

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