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Narcissu

lkx_Shore wrote:

:? 你真的要带太鼓diff?
我不懂太鼓……不過他都做了幾十張太鼓了……我想看看業界人士對gentle heart這種徹徹底底的自閉党的圖有什麼看法……能rank最好不能就只能放棄了……不管怎麼樣……要邁出第一步><
ts8zs
太鼓最少两个难度以上……
Topic Starter
Narcissu

ts8zs wrote:

太鼓最少两个难度以上……
嗯嗯~

我只是想看看這個太鼓是不是正常啦 :)
ts8zs

Narcissu wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

太鼓最少两个难度以上……
嗯嗯~

我只是想看看這個太鼓是不是正常啦 :)
怎么说呢……如果是第一次做的那种就正常……如果是rank向的就不太正常
Wing My Way
赞一个 送一分 :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
16:06 Narcissu: 喵><
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 汪
16:06 Narcissu: 嗷~
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……
16:07 Narcissu: 沒詞了……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 吱!
16:07 Narcissu: #¥%……&*(
16:07 *Narcissu 失敗了!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哞!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……咳咳……正經正經……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 Narcissu: 有個曲子我感覺有小數BPM……
16:08 Narcissu: 姐姐能幫忙測一下麼><
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 放小数啊 怕什么
16:08 Narcissu: 但是小數就不知道到底准不准啊>,
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 打着准就行了
16:08 Narcissu: 也許是0.04也許是0.06
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 小数挺正常
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那就0.05啊
16:09 Narcissu: 說是這樣說……這個有人要是mod寫了就很麻煩orz
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 没问题的只要准就行了
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 重要的是打的准
16:09 Narcissu: 額……好吧……那我就用自己測的√
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 然後其實我又來求mod了【喂
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 一直a很嚇人啊……
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: b
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不对
16:11 Narcissu: .
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: s
16:11 Narcissu: 額……少女能接麼……@@
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 发图呀 我找板子去
16:12 Narcissu: 哦哦哦哦!
16:12 *Narcissu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512188 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这不是那个
16:12 Narcissu: 這就是那個?
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个我做了5秒坑了233
16:13 Narcissu: XD
16:13 Narcissu: 原曲是4分鐘的重複的逆天我剪輯了><
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 果然我不该拿4分钟的做
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还行啊不是5秒 做了47秒
16:14 Narcissu: 嗯嗯,4分鐘的交給guu了【喂
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 于是guu坑了
16:14 Narcissu: %%**
16:14 Narcissu: √
16:14 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493810 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:16 Narcissu: 怎麼變強了這麼多……我記得之前我們是一個水平的rank……
16:16 Narcissu: 這瞎眼的ACC……
16:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
16:19 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 夏萝的前面那里掉血太高了吧
16:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: fc啦(
16:21 Narcissu: 才3.5星啊……
16:21 Narcissu: #¥%……&*()——
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 太鼓不是要两个吗
16:22 Narcissu: 思考
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 不会打
16:22 Narcissu: 沒……這個是帶我入坑的mapper
16:22 Narcissu: 他是渣^^
16:23 Narcissu: 只是放進去……如果可以rank就補全,不行就deleted……sad
16:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:40:931 (6) - 这个不要叠在那里
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 容易断
16:26 Narcissu: 額……這個有點麻煩……我回去試試
16:26 Narcissu: 我放01:39:607 (1) - 上面了哦
16:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:27 Narcissu: 我想試試到處疊來著orz
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你到处都没叠啊..
16:28 Narcissu: 不過打起來完全沒感覺sad
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个歌不适合叠着
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉上
16:28 Narcissu: 嗚嗚嗚……見面就讓人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 呜呜呜...见面就让人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的呀
16:29 Narcissu: 人家明明到處疊的說
16:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的啊 不会mod
16:33 Narcissu: @#¥%……&
16:33 Narcissu: 納尼商~!
16:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1
16:35 Narcissu: 主公求摸啊><
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:03:136 (5) - 把这个放到3和7中垂线(?)上
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 内奸再不跳, 后面还怎么玩儿啊
16:36 Narcissu: 偶草我還是念數學的但是中垂線是什麼居然忘記了!
16:36 *Narcissu 跪
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 224:132
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这里
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你念数学啊 蜡烛
16:37 Narcissu: 哦哦哦……
16:37 Narcissu: 這也點蠟燭有點過分吧……
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是..
16:38 Narcissu: 全班50多人可以煉油了都
16:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:666 (8) - 这里加个new combo
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我真的觉得没什么能改了啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我看sharlo diff
16:41 Narcissu: 額%……&*
16:41 Narcissu: 夏蘿那個就沒辦法irc了……思考
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: int *p
16:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我发现个问题啊 你那个diff怎么没有kiai
16:44 Narcissu: 有啊有啊~
16:44 Narcissu: 瞎眼一秒鐘耶
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:44 Narcissu: 我感覺那麼長的kiai有點土啊%&
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还真的有啊!
16:44 Narcissu: 既然全程都是kiai那和全程不是kiai沒什麼區別吧……√
16:45 Narcissu: ...
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: √
16:45 Narcissu: 很鬼畜的1.25*啊!
16:45 Narcissu: 為了那個白色跳顏色很辛苦的啊啊啊啊
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: wwwwww
16:46 Narcissu: 這裡面都是心血啊!!居然沒發現……豈可修……好感度↓
16:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ↓→↓→○

sharlo's insane
00:21:813 (4) - 这个来回我觉得不好 因为这里第4个音要小一点 我觉得可以放在192:292 或者200:240
00:49:019 (1) - 这个看不清 建议取缔
01:27:254 (1) - 不好看啊 你对比一下别的 完全不一样
01:33:872 (2) - 往右移上4格左右

hard
00:16:372 (5) - 复制下面那个转过去啊 这不对称
00:25:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:21:665 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 改成正常间距吧 感觉和别的地方style差好多..

hyper
fc了 不看了

这首歌要是把1/2都改成3/4 一定会很带感 (X
Topic Starter
Narcissu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

16:06 Narcissu: 喵><
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 汪
16:06 Narcissu: 嗷~
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……
16:07 Narcissu: 沒詞了……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 吱!
16:07 Narcissu: #¥%……&*(
16:07 *Narcissu 失敗了!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哞!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……咳咳……正經正經……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 Narcissu: 有個曲子我感覺有小數BPM……
16:08 Narcissu: 姐姐能幫忙測一下麼><
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 放小数啊 怕什么
16:08 Narcissu: 但是小數就不知道到底准不准啊>,
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 打着准就行了
16:08 Narcissu: 也許是0.04也許是0.06
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 小数挺正常
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那就0.05啊
16:09 Narcissu: 說是這樣說……這個有人要是mod寫了就很麻煩orz
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 没问题的只要准就行了
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 重要的是打的准
16:09 Narcissu: 額……好吧……那我就用自己測的√
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 然後其實我又來求mod了【喂
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 一直a很嚇人啊……
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: b
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不对
16:11 Narcissu: .
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: s
16:11 Narcissu: 額……少女能接麼……@@
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 发图呀 我找板子去
16:12 Narcissu: 哦哦哦哦!
16:12 *Narcissu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512188 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这不是那个
16:12 Narcissu: 這就是那個?
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个我做了5秒坑了233
16:13 Narcissu: XD
16:13 Narcissu: 原曲是4分鐘的重複的逆天我剪輯了><
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 果然我不该拿4分钟的做
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还行啊不是5秒 做了47秒
16:14 Narcissu: 嗯嗯,4分鐘的交給guu了【喂
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 于是guu坑了
16:14 Narcissu: %%**
16:14 Narcissu: √
16:14 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493810 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:16 Narcissu: 怎麼變強了這麼多……我記得之前我們是一個水平的rank……
16:16 Narcissu: 這瞎眼的ACC……
16:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
16:19 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 夏萝的前面那里掉血太高了吧
16:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: fc啦(
16:21 Narcissu: 才3.5星啊……
16:21 Narcissu: #¥%……&*()——
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 太鼓不是要两个吗
16:22 Narcissu: 思考
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 不会打
16:22 Narcissu: 沒……這個是帶我入坑的mapper
16:22 Narcissu: 他是渣^^
16:23 Narcissu: 只是放進去……如果可以rank就補全,不行就deleted……sad
16:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:40:931 (6) - 这个不要叠在那里
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 容易断
16:26 Narcissu: 額……這個有點麻煩……我回去試試
16:26 Narcissu: 我放01:39:607 (1) - 上面了哦
16:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:27 Narcissu: 我想試試到處疊來著orz
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你到处都没叠啊..
16:28 Narcissu: 不過打起來完全沒感覺sad
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个歌不适合叠着
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉上
16:28 Narcissu: 嗚嗚嗚……見面就讓人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 呜呜呜...见面就让人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的呀
16:29 Narcissu: 人家明明到處疊的說
16:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的啊 不会mod
16:33 Narcissu: @#¥%……&
16:33 Narcissu: 納尼商~!
16:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1
16:35 Narcissu: 主公求摸啊><
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:03:136 (5) - 把这个放到3和7中垂线(?)上
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 内奸再不跳, 后面还怎么玩儿啊
16:36 Narcissu: 偶草我還是念數學的但是中垂線是什麼居然忘記了!
16:36 *Narcissu 跪
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 224:132
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这里
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你念数学啊 蜡烛
16:37 Narcissu: 哦哦哦……
16:37 Narcissu: 這也點蠟燭有點過分吧……
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是..
16:38 Narcissu: 全班50多人可以煉油了都
16:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:666 (8) - 这里加个new combo
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我真的觉得没什么能改了啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我看sharlo diff
16:41 Narcissu: 額%……&*
16:41 Narcissu: 夏蘿那個就沒辦法irc了……思考
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: int *p
16:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我发现个问题啊 你那个diff怎么没有kiai
16:44 Narcissu: 有啊有啊~
16:44 Narcissu: 瞎眼一秒鐘耶
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:44 Narcissu: 我感覺那麼長的kiai有點土啊%&
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还真的有啊!
16:44 Narcissu: 既然全程都是kiai那和全程不是kiai沒什麼區別吧……√
16:45 Narcissu: ...
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: √
16:45 Narcissu: 很鬼畜的1.25*啊!
16:45 Narcissu: 為了那個白色跳顏色很辛苦的啊啊啊啊
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: wwwwww
16:46 Narcissu: 這裡面都是心血啊!!居然沒發現……豈可修……好感度↓
16:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ↓→↓→○

hard
00:16:372 (5) - 复制下面那个转过去啊 这不对称……fix~
00:25:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:21:665 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 改成正常间距吧 感觉和别的地方style差好多..……額……我怕DS太大會太難……

这首歌要是把1/2都改成3/4 一定会很带感 (X …… 會很揪心的……吧

Wing My Way wrote:

赞一个 送一分 :) …… thx ><
moonlightleaf
怎么有花花雨道的感觉

[General]

太鼓需要2难度 大概是这样,

[Normal]

00:09:607 (5,6) - 可以改滑条 和前面23对应

00:19:018 (5,6) - ^

01:15:489 (5,6) - ^

01:24:901 (5,6) - ^

00:11:960 (9) - 我觉得折返比较贴音乐

00:16:665 (15) - ^

00:27:548 (3,4) - 可以换换排版 改反折试试

[Hard]

00:45:489 (1) -

00:49:313 (5) - 改短滑条

01:08:136 (5) - ^

[Sharlo]

00:29:460 (2) - delete

01:46:225 (2) - 叠好

俩kika中间那段没kika段好玩...

↓好疼...和fuwa fuwa最高难度一样没ss掉

不要吐槽relax ,我一样有zx戳,目前来说我只玩relax+hd组合
Gaia
haai as requested~

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane

[Easy]
你每4結NC一次? 我覺得每兩節NC比較好 .. 比如 00:08:431 (5) - 00:17:843 (5) - 00:27:255 (5) -

00:10:784 (7) - 這節奏... 鼓的聲音是在 00:11:372 - 00:11:519 - 跟 00:11:960 , 00:11:666 - 沒有聲音!! 縮短成 1/1 reverse 然後放個圓圈吧 更何況 00:12:548 是個蠻大的一拍, 有個可點的東西比較好 (記得NC)
00:20:195 (7) - 00:29:608 (7) - (還有更多)^
00:41:960 (2) - 1/1 reverse 所以有一拍在鼓上 00:42:548
01:00:783 (2) - ^
01:02:549 (3,4) - easy 嘛, 別疊
01:06:666 (7) - 包的可以更好?
01:16:666 (8,1) - 跟 00:10:784 (7) - 一樣, 包也可以加強
01:26:079 (7,1) - ^
01:35:489 (8,9) - 疊
01:38:431 (2) - 好像都在講同樣3個東西
01:40:195 (3,4) - 一樣

[normal]
NC 建議跟Easy 一樣
00:07:254 (7) - 如果是 " \ " 的形狀會比較順?
00:10:195 (7) - 灣多一點會比較好?
00:13:136 (2,3) - (好挑剔) 可以包更好
00:20:342 (8) - 灣另一邊?
00:22:548 (2,3) - 又來了
00:35:489 (8) - (312, 244) 三角形好像比較順?
00:52:548 (5,6) - 包起來
00:54:312 (8) - 跟00:35:489 (8) - 一樣
01:19:019 (2,3) - 好像太挑剔了所以不講了
01:30:195 (5,6) - 但這個就差蠻大了

[hard]
00:21:960 (1,2) - 00:32:842 (4,1) - 00:41:372 (2,3) - (還有蠻多其他的.... 我就不講了)
00:29:607 - 00:48:431 (2) - 01:07:254 (2) - 01:08:431 (6) - 音樂裡沒鼓聲喔, clap 去掉
00:20:489 - 00:25:195 (2) - -00:34:607 - 00:39:313 - 00:44:019 - 00:53:431 - 00:58:136 - 但這裡可以加clap .... 剩下的給你找 -3-

00:11:372 - 蠻大的鼓聲建議你放個什麼在這
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 這flow ;w;
00:59:607 (1,2) - 複製?
01:29:018 (3) - 一只跟鋼琴, 因該把這放在 01:28:872
01:33:724 (3) - ^ .. 還有其他但看你改不改
01:34:901 (1,2) - 複製?
01:40:195 (2) - clap
01:46:077 (6) - ^

[Hyper]
204 bpm? 因該要跟其他diffs一樣喔
AIMod裡有很多unsnapped objects
00:03:872 - 沒音阿, 建議把 00:03:725 (2,3) - 改成 1/1 滑條
00:31:078 (1) - 別clap
01:32:842 (2) - 01:33:136 (3) - 用同一個形狀 類似這樣
01:38:137 (4) - 改成圓圈, 把 01:38:284 (5) - 移到 01:38:284
01:42:842 (4,5) - ^

blanket 的問題我就沒講了

[Sharlo]
沒什麼大問題.. 只是覺得 用1/8的時候最好不要用圈, 用 1/8 reverse 比較合適
畢竟還是個 102 bpm 歌嘛

[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神

覺得flow 有點怪, 像 00:04:166 (5) - 00:18:284 (5) - 00:19:313 (8,1) -

跳也有點太大了, 像 00:07:254 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:11:960 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:14:313 (6,7,1) -

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌

阿阿阿阿阿 先就這樣啦 之後就加油瞜~
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[Eternal]

00:07:254 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9lBt/91933f8c40.png这样可能好些
00:14:901 (1) - 这里滑条头应该是drum,后面几个也是
00:16:225 (6) - 觉得放在256,144更好
00:17:107 (11) - 往左下移一点
00:21:372 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9mqg/fb608d9cbe.png建议这么放
00:13:578 (4) - 鉴于这种长滑条中间还有个鼓声,可以在00:14:019 (5) - 补一个
00:35:195 (7) - 这种地方音乐里没有鼓但是我觉得加一个也无所谓
01:17:842 (8,9,10,11) - bad flow http://puu.sh/c9mRX/289284e7f1.png
01:25:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里可以圆圈那边不变然后滑条转
01:46:372 (9) - http://puu.sh/c9mUl/c30ceb382d.png好看点
其实总的来说节奏有些单一,可以尝试变换下

[Sharlo's Insane]

00:29:901 (1) - 不太喜欢绕的...http://puu.sh/c9noj/fcc12c9a00.png
00:56:077 (1) - 280,152
01:41:372 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4换下

[Hard]

音效还没施工完就不挑了
00:20:931 (3) - 往下挪一点
00:46:078 (2) - 听到的时候笑出声...改成soft additon(不是说好不挑的么)
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 不要弄成和2平行,稍微再有点角度
01:06:666 (1) - 一样的..和4一条直线不太好看其实
01:41:959 (1,2) - 这两个可以拉直

[Normal]

00:15:784 (6) - 这种地方感觉这个节奏http://puu.sh/c9ovz/2acbb301ff.png更好点
00:50:195 (1) - 有点眼熟(
wantuol
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[General]
修aimod
整体音效缺少clap样子
[Easy]
00:15:784这里有个重音 不漏好
NC间隔有点长哦 不过hp2还好
00:20:195 (7) - 进hp条了
01:16:666 (8) - 这个音盖过去太多了
01:26:078 (7) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:136 (2) - 进hp
00:37:842 (4) - ^
[hard]
00:46:078 (2) - durm很怪
01:11:371 (1) - 进hp
01:29:312 (4) - ^
01:42:548 (2) - 依旧觉得很怪
easy nor 缺强力clap还好 hard开始音效突出点好
[Hyper]
00:06:960 (6,7) - 合并成一个slider
01:05:489 (5) - 个人感觉这种好丑
风格和前面都不同样子- -
[Eternal]
00:14:019 (5) - 尾巴叠在1上
00:21:960 (1) - 擦到hp了
00:30:489 (7) - 挺好的nc梗 不要rep啊 00:30:784这里加个note 凑三个111
跳的好乱 :? 拉远看还是眼太花 需要些地方让右手停一停

就这些 很干净的图 加油
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

怎么有花花雨道的感觉……一定是错觉!我最近才刚刚打过雨道!

[General]

太鼓需要2难度 大概是这样,……太鼓看情况可能会删……orz

[Normal]

00:09:607 (5,6) - 可以改滑条 和前面23对应……额……对应是什么意思?

00:19:018 (5,6) - ^

01:15:489 (5,6) - ^

01:24:901 (5,6) - ^

00:11:960 (9) - 我觉得折返比较贴音乐……额……我觉得单个滑条比较好

00:16:665 (15) - ^

00:27:548 (3,4) - 可以换换排版 改反折试试……那是换节奏了吧……既然曲子是重复的那我也应该重复才对……

[Hard]

00:45:489 (1) -……ok~

00:49:313 (5) - 改短滑条……那太坑了吧……
thx your mod ~

Gaia wrote:

haai as requested~……baobao><

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T……其实我这一次在学校机房……可以看puu……>,
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔……其实只是看看能不能rank啦……不能就删掉的sad

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane……那就一个3.5星和4.5都叫insane啦~

easy的NC打算换成两节一次了……迟一点回复论文……>,
fuck your 论文 ><

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

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[Eternal]

00:07:254 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9lBt/91933f8c40.png这样可能好些……我想用横平竖直的排版表现单调……
00:14:901 (1) - 这里滑条头应该是drum,后面几个也是……这是我额外补的长白线重音……
00:16:225 (6) - 觉得放在256,144更好……好~
00:17:107 (11) - 往左下移一点……额……不想和00:16:372 (7) - 占用一个位置来着……
00:21:372 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9mqg/fb608d9cbe.png建议这么放……我比较惯用锐角跳……
00:13:578 (4) - 鉴于这种长滑条中间还有个鼓声,可以在00:14:019 (5) - 补一个……窝所有diff程都没跟鼓啊><
00:35:195 (7) - 这种地方音乐里没有鼓但是我觉得加一个也无所谓……窝不要写鼓啦orz
01:17:842 (8,9,10,11) - bad flow http://puu.sh/c9mRX/289284e7f1.png……钝角大跳才反人类啊orz,锐角会有对原位置的记忆所以容易跳……
01:25:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里可以圆圈那边不变然后滑条转……唔……我还是觉得一起转比较好……
01:46:372 (9) - http://puu.sh/c9mUl/c30ceb382d.png好看点……横平竖直我的爱【喂
其实总的来说节奏有些单一,可以尝试变换下……但是原曲就是这么单调……我觉得一样单调的节奏会合理一点

[Hard]

音效还没施工完就不挑了……纳尼……我应该下完了啊……思考……
00:20:931 (3) - 往下挪一点……DS用的1.6额……我觉得没什么问题
00:46:078 (2) - 听到的时候笑出声...改成soft additon(不是说好不挑的么)……><
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 不要弄成和2平行,稍微再有点角度……横平竖直我的爱啊>,
01:06:666 (1) - 一样的..和4一条直线不太好看其实……思考……01:41:959 (1,2) - 这两个可以拉直

[Normal]

00:15:784 (6) - 这种地方感觉这个节奏http://puu.sh/c9ovz/2acbb301ff.png更好点……窝全程没跟鼓啊orz
00:50:195 (1) - 有点眼熟(……千万不要说出去>,
thx your mod ~

huafenshaonv wrote:

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[General]
修aimod……修了~不过有几个没办法改只能先放着orz
整体音效缺少clap样子……没地方可以下orz
[Easy]
00:15:784这里有个重音 不漏好……跟了的话……后面怎么办……
NC间隔有点长哦 不过hp2还好……额……打算换成2节一次了
00:20:195 (7) - 进hp条了……我觉得插不深不会怀孕的【喂
01:16:666 (8) - 这个音盖过去太多了……不然就不是easy啦>,
01:26:078 (7) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:136 (2) - 进hp……XD
00:37:842 (4) - ^
[hard]
00:46:078 (2) - durm很怪……不小心按错了>,
01:11:371 (1) - 进hp……只是插一下不会射的啦啦啦~
01:29:312 (4) - ^
01:42:548 (2) - 依旧觉得很怪……依旧是不小心按错了>,
easy nor 缺强力clap还好 hard开始音效突出点好……但是没什么合适的位置按orz
[Hyper]
00:06:960 (6,7) - 合并成一个slider……窝设置是有音就按下去……
01:05:489 (5) - 个人感觉这种好丑……我也觉得不好看……但是太长了orz……又不能和最高难度一样直接单锚点
风格和前面都不同样子- -……思考……
[Eternal]
00:14:019 (5) - 尾巴叠在1上……好~
00:21:960 (1) - 擦到hp了……擦啊……真的不会怀孕的啊【那个跪地上哭的表情……
00:30:489 (7) - 挺好的nc梗 不要rep啊 00:30:784这里加个note 凑三个111……本来就是三个111的……但是没有颜色用了才这样的><跳的好乱 :? 拉远看还是眼太花 需要些地方让右手停一停……额……的确全程都是乱飞orz

就这些 很干净的图 加油……喵>,
感谢摸图~
Gaia
fuck my 論文 D:
Sharlo

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

sharlo's insane
00:21:813 (4) - 这个来回我觉得不好 因为这里第4个音要小一点 我觉得可以放在192:292 或者200:240 fixed 我今晚自己打了之后也跟你一样的想法:3
00:49:019 (1) - 这个看不清 建议取缔 Editor里看不清楚 实际上还好阿
01:27:254 (1) - 不好看啊 你对比一下别的 完全不一样 诶 在看mod之前正好也改了lol
01:33:872 (2) - 往右移上4格左右

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

怎么有花花雨道的感觉 看我怒抄一波 xD

[Sharlo]

00:29:460 (2) - delete lol 这里我大改了一波w 感觉这个circle还是不要去掉比较好

01:46:225 (2) - 叠好 fixed

俩kika中间那段没kika段好玩... kiai哟~

↓好疼...和fuwa fuwa最高难度一样没ss掉 十分感人;w;

不要吐槽relax ,我一样有zx戳,目前来说我只玩relax+hd组合

Gaia wrote:

[Sharlo]
沒什麼大問題.. 只是覺得 用1/8的時候最好不要用圈, 用 1/8 reverse 比較合適
畢竟還是個 102 bpm 歌嘛 其实…也就204的连打 而且不是串 只有3连...

[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神 不难阿 只是有点跳嘛:3

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌 窝觉得爽爽爽XDD

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

[Sharlo's Insane]

00:29:901 (1) - 不太喜欢绕的...http://puu.sh/c9noj/fcc12c9a00.png 这里我改了
00:56:077 (1) - 280,152 放了一下别的位置w
01:41:372 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4换下 破坏FLOW
@huafenshaonv: 啊啊啊我的难度呢??? 被吃了吗!
axschiming
粪MOD
XD


[Easy]
00:29:608 (7,1) - 包一下
01:10:784 (3,4) - 4包一下3
00:33:725 (3) - 弧度可以大一点


[Normal]
00:19:606 (7) - 试着向左凹可能flow更顺


实际上咱也摸不出什么,就是感觉音效可以做的仔细些,比如在01:23:136 (1)这类的地方可以换个比较亮的Finish之类的

[Hard]

00:37:254 (3,4) - 可以把4拆成一个散点和一个一拍的滑条
00:45:489 (1,2,3) - 感觉不好看……
01:32:548 (1,2) - 节奏改成散点跟一个半拍的折返滑条试试
01:42:548 (2,3) - 纯建议
http://puu.sh/cfnWN/5be42546c3.jpg

[Hyper]
01:05:489 (5) - 0 0
http://puu.sh/cfoc4/6367688783.jpg
01:28:136 (2,3) - 换个位置

这个难度跃进的有点大



[Sharlo's Insane]

神麻婆,摸不动Orz

[Eternal]

抱歉感觉高难度实在有点看不懂;w;



很喜欢这张图哦,祝早日rank
Topic Starter
Narcissu

axschiming wrote:

粪MOD
XD…… XD


[Easy]
00:29:608 (7,1) - 包一下
01:10:784 (3,4) - 4包一下3
00:33:725 (3) - 弧度可以大一点

這個diff會大改orz

[Normal]
00:19:606 (7) - 试着向左凹可能flow更顺……一直順的太死板啦>,


实际上咱也摸不出什么,就是感觉音效可以做的仔细些,比如在01:23:136 (1)这类的地方可以换个比较亮的Finish之类的……唔……音效是太懶orz……有機會我去找找

[Hard]

00:37:254 (3,4) - 可以把4拆成一个散点和一个一拍的滑条……這個一改就是十來個啊>,
00:45:489 (1,2,3) - 感觉不好看……唔……換了一下
01:32:548 (1,2) - 节奏改成散点跟一个半拍的折返滑条试试……也是一改就是一堆啊>,
01:42:548 (2,3) - 纯建议……我這裡看不了Puu啊orz
http://puu.sh/cfnWN/5be42546c3.jpg

[Hyper]
01:05:489 (5) - 0 0……放不下了>,
http://puu.sh/cfoc4/6367688783.jpg
01:28:136 (2,3) - 换个位置……

这个难度跃进的有点大……但是只多了一星 >,



[Sharlo's Insane]

神麻婆,摸不动Orz

[Eternal]

抱歉感觉高难度实在有点看不懂;w;……是啊是啊>,



很喜欢这张图哦,祝早日rank……喵~
感謝摸圖~
PinkHeart
From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note
kiai和别的难度设置不一样

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好

[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
Topic Starter
Narcissu

PinkHeart wrote:

From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped……fix~
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了……因為不是1/1所以放開一點……

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐……fix~

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好……那就擺不下了啦

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note……fix
kiai和别的难度设置不一样……fix

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上……那就變成跳了……

[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名……那用什麼呢……思考……

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上……唔……但是不知道怎麼改
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了……雖然比正常值高很多,但是我覺得還是有近有遠的啊……並不是全部大跳而是大跳,特大跳和超級跳【喂

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
感謝摸圖~
Sharlo

PinkHeart wrote:

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着 关了

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点 我现在这样进test看还好
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好
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104,156,76519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,108,76666,2,0,L|332:92,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,40,77402,1,6,0:0:0:0:
260,108,77549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,108,77843,5,10,0:0:0:0:
200,48,77989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,72,78137,1,6,0:0:0:0:
104,156,78284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,192,78431,6,0,B|264:240|240:284|240:284|200:324,1,139.999990463257,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,308,78872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,372,79019,2,0,L|324:324,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,79314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,79461,6,0,L|336:180,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,79755,1,4,0:0:0:0:
248,192,79902,2,0,P|212:204|180:204,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,80196,2,0,P|312:96|352:96,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,80490,2,0,L|331:180,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,80784,6,0,P|128:120|80:72,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,81225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,30,81372,2,0,L|364:100,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,81667,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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348,248,82108,1,6,0:0:0:0:
348,248,82181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,82255,2,0,P|312:240|272:248,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,82549,5,10,0:0:0:0:
108,255,82696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,136,82843,1,6,0:0:0:0:
53,181,82990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,50,83137,2,0,P|152:55|108:107,1,139.999990463257,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,136,83578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,120,83725,2,0,P|313:114|345:119,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,184,84020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,316,84166,6,0,P|343:282|347:247,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,152,84461,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,184,84607,2,0,P|364:180|336:160,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,136,84901,2,0,P|230:132|258:112,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,85195,2,0,P|304:44|276:24,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,52,85490,6,0,B|120:84|120:84|96:132|116:176,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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268,92,86078,1,10,0:0:0:0:
268,92,86372,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,86519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,136,86666,1,6,0:0:0:0:
260,260,86814,1,6,0:0:0:0:
264,176,86960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,176,87254,6,0,B|208:200|160:176|160:176|140:204|140:240,1,167.999994277954,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,232,87842,6,0,P|52:160|24:92,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,88284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,88431,2,0,L|140:120,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,88725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,195,88872,6,0,L|264:175,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,89166,1,4,0:0:0:0:
428,220,89313,2,0,L|448:144,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,228,90122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,90195,6,0,P|16:192|28:120,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,90636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,55,90783,2,0,L|276:44,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,91078,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,264,91225,6,0,L|392:272,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,184,91666,2,0,L|184:176,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,264,92254,1,6,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92401,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92548,6,0,B|140:112|140:112|88:120|68:156,1,153.999999454498,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,104,93136,2,0,L|224:28,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,236,93431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,93578,6,0,L|308:28,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,260,93872,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,340,94019,2,0,L|316:263,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,188,94313,2,0,P|200:184|164:200,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,94607,2,0,P|382:128|380:88,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,64,94901,6,0,P|133:112|208:104,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,24,95342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,95489,2,0,L|96:236,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,95783,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,100,95931,6,0,L|216:180,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,96225,1,6,0:0:0:0:
501,119,96372,2,0,P|466:105|428:104,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,260,96666,5,10,0:0:0:0:
216,176,96813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,316,96960,1,6,0:0:0:0:
364,168,97107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,112,97254,6,0,P|124:184|164:252,1,153.99999420929,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,97695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,44,97842,2,0,L|4:52,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,98137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,116,98284,6,0,L|300:40,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,98578,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,112,98725,2,0,L|136:28,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,240,100195,2,0,L|292:160,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,104,100636,6,0,L|208:28,1,76.9999971046448,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,100931,1,6,0:0:0:0:
384,144,101004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,220,101666,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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368,240,102548,2,0,P|408:240|444:224,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,102843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,156,102989,6,0,L|48:148,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,103284,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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144,264,104754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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201,177,106225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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lsahi
[General]
曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂,
其他的都没什么问题


下面问题来了
[Eternal]
音效部分
首先,整体建议减小到50%吧,本来就是比较安静的音乐,(还真别说66声音也不小,,,)
有些拍子略微有点凌乱
00:31:078 (1) -
01:27:548 (1) -
以上,去掉clap,换成finish

00:35:195 (7) -
00:39:901 (7) -
00:44:607 (7) -
00:49:313 (7) -
等等还有好多
这种尾音放在这歌里听着有些奇妙,可以选择把这种音调低(5%?)

排版部分
先来个总起,就是flow会有些生硬
00:08:872 (5) - 加个锚点,右下凹
00:12:548 (1) - 可以稍微拧一下,然后后面的①和2构成一个椭圆型flow
00:54:607 (9) - 虽然跟后面不对称了不过这里顺时针旋转10~15度试试
01:09:019 (1) - 加个锚点吧,让他向左凹一点,,,
整体还是挺漂亮的,不过看起来有复制粘贴啊,,,幸好本身图没那么规整
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