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Shoji Meguro - Bloody Destiny

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Topic Starter
Shulin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 March 2011 at 21:39:18

Artist: Shoji Meguro
Title: Bloody Destiny
Source: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona
Tags: yumi kawamura psp kenichi tsuchiya ryota kozuka revelations Dusty
BPM: 95
Filesize: 3114kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dusty's Hard (4.64 stars, 169 notes)
  2. Easy (1.08 stars, 70 notes)
  3. Insane (4.91 stars, 204 notes)
  4. Normal (2.69 stars, 108 notes)
Download: Shoji Meguro - Bloody Destiny
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Latest Update: Added Easy.

Composed by Shoji Meguro, Vocals by Yumi Kawamura.

Thank you Dusty for the Hard diff.
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
LKs
LK STRICT MODDING~

OVERALL

Remove " .OSB " if you didnt make a SB

normal

slider tick rate = 2 ( i think better
[00:50:75] new combo
[00:31:49]
[00:56:75] move 1 grid up

hard
[00:31:49] new combo
[00:35:59]
[01:31:17] ^
[00:35:43] add note (i think
[01:38:43] ^


very nice map , concise and excellent
star and star~


Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks for the stars LKs :D

I fixed everything you mentioned ^^
Lokamp
Normal
[General] ... aren't too muck 4 stars of difficulty rank for a Normal?
00:18:544 (spinner) - start it on 00:18:702 (same end point)
00:27:544 (3,4,5) - refine spacing here (maybe with larger gaps...)
00:28:650 (spinner) - start it on 00:28:807 (same end point)
00:44:755 (1,2) - find a more intuitive sp'acing for these beats...
00:50:755 (1) - maybe move it 1-2 squares left
01:14:123 (spinner) - start it on 01:14:281 (same end point)

Hard
Sounds fine!

Another good map for you...
Time for a star!
AngelHoney
Hard

00:12:860 - add a note ?
00:18:228 (5) - new combo ?
00:18:544 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:28:176 - add a note ?
00:44:439 (2,3,4,5) - move 1 gird up ?
01:23:755 - add a note ?

Normal

01:07:807 (1) - remove ?

All
(01:25:492 to end - add kiai time ?)

Star~ :) :)
Topic Starter
Shulin

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
[General] ... aren't too muck 4 stars of difficulty rank for a Normal? Meh, any Easier and I'd fall asleep
00:18:544 (spinner) - start it on 00:18:702 (same end point) Nope, less spinning time
00:27:544 (3,4,5) - refine spacing here (maybe with larger gaps...) Nowhere else I can go unfortunately
00:28:650 (spinner) - start it on 00:28:807 (same end point) People need to spin XD
00:44:755 (1,2) - find a more intuitive sp'acing for these beats... I wanted the end sliders to land in the middle so I can't really do anything else..
00:50:755 (1) - maybe move it 1-2 squares left Done
01:14:123 (spinner) - start it on 01:14:281 (same end point) More spinning time

Hard
Sounds fine!

Another good map for you...
Time for a star!
Thanks for modding ^^

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard

00:12:860 - add a note ? Following vocal
00:18:228 (5) - new combo ? Done
00:18:544 (1) - remove new combo ? Done
00:28:176 - add a note ? Vocal XD
00:44:439 (2,3,4,5) - move 1 gird up ? Nope, it misaligns 5
01:23:755 - add a note ? Vocal again XD

Normal

01:07:807 (1) - remove ? Why? lol

All
(01:25:492 to end - add kiai time ?) I don't really think kiai fits this song because there's no emphasis on the second chorus

Star~ :) :)
Thanks for modding :D
MoonFragrance
[Normal]
Good :3 This follow is just suggestion
00:31:492 (1) - add clap at end of slider
00:33:071 (2) - ^
00:34:965 (4) - add clap
00:39:386 (2) - add clap at middle of slider
00:41:913 (2) - ^
00:43:807 (3) - add clap
00:45:702 (3) - add clap at end of slider
00:46:965 (4) - ^
00:48:229 (1,2) - ^
01:27:071 (1) - ^
01:28:650 (2) - ^
01:30:544 (4) - add clap
01:39:386 (1) - ^
01:41:281 (1,2,1,2) - add clap at end of slider

[Hard]
Nothing major issues :D
I suggest to add clap like i've suggested in Normal :3

Persona <3
Nice map, star :D
Topic Starter
Shulin

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Normal]
Good :3 This follow is just suggestion
00:31:492 (1) - add clap at end of slider
00:33:071 (2) - ^
00:34:965 (4) - add clap
00:39:386 (2) - add clap at middle of slider
00:41:913 (2) - ^
00:43:807 (3) - add clap
00:45:702 (3) - add clap at end of slider
00:46:965 (4) - ^
00:48:229 (1,2) - ^
01:27:071 (1) - ^
01:28:650 (2) - ^
01:30:544 (4) - add clap
01:39:386 (1) - ^
01:41:281 (1,2,1,2) - add clap at end of slider

[Hard]
Nothing major issues :D
I suggest to add clap like i've suggested in Normal :3

Persona <3
Nice map, star :D
Thanks MoonFragrance I picked which claps I thought sounded best ^^

I might add a custom hitsound if I can find a good one for that part because claps don't seem to fit sometimes.

Thanks for modding :D
Kytoxid
[Normal]

00:17:439 (1) - Found this note hard to catch, since no other notes you need to hit on 1/4 until here. Maybe use a slider or something?
00:27:544 (3) - Same as before; maybe just make 2 into a slider that ends here. Won't bother pointing out other ones, but I found the 1/4 notes kinda awkward if you don't know the song.
01:29:597 (3) - Consider reversing this slider? It was a pretty intuitive mini-jump though, so it's fine.

[Hard]

00:32:281 (2,3) - Stick these under the endpoint of 1?

A bit concerned about the sections with shortened spacing, but otherwise fine. :)

Poke me for protobubble?

EDIT: Oh wait, it wasn't +8 yet. I guess I should wait for a few more mods (that aren't my kudosu stars). Poke me after you get more mods? XD
Topic Starter
Shulin

Kytoxid wrote:

[Normal]

00:17:439 (1) - Found this note hard to catch, since no other notes you need to hit on 1/4 until here. Maybe use a slider or something? Done it's a slider now ^^
00:27:544 (3) - Same as before; maybe just make 2 into a slider that ends here. Won't bother pointing out other ones, but I found the 1/4 notes kinda awkward if you don't know the song. Done, yeah some of the 1/4 is quite tricky but it can't be avoided as all the vocals start on 1/4 and its more prominent than the backbeat XD
01:29:597 (3) - Consider reversing this slider? It was a pretty intuitive mini-jump though, so it's fine. Aww I like this, I'll keep it for now

[Hard]

00:32:281 (2,3) - Stick these under the endpoint of 1? Done

A bit concerned about the sections with shortened spacing, but otherwise fine. It's pretty easy with practice I guess... I'll see what others say lol :)

Poke me for protobubble?

EDIT: Oh wait, it wasn't +8 yet. I guess I should wait for a few more mods (that aren't my kudosu stars). Poke me after you get more mods? XD
Thanks for modding and double star :D
Dusty
sorry, couldn't help myself

Download: Yumi Kawamura - Bloody Destiny (Shulin) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Shulin

Dusty wrote:

sorry, couldn't help myself
Lol, thanks I've uploaded it :D
Sonnyc
Star~
YGOkid8
Dusty's Easy
Tooooo short. Should be mapped until end D:
Also, Velocity surprised me. Maybe reduce?

Normal
Fine.

Hard
Fine.
Dusty

YGOkid8 wrote:

Dusty's Easy
Tooooo short. Should be mapped until end D:
Sure. It repeats itself the second time, though, so I don't know what to do except cope+paste+rotate...

Also, Velocity surprised me. Maybe reduce?
No.

EDIT: Mapped to the end. Very boring.

Download: Yumi Kawamura - Bloody Destiny (Shulin) [Dusty's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Shulin
Updated.

Thanks for the star sonnyc :D

And thanks for modding YGOkid8 ^^
Leorda
Hi

[Dusty's Easy]
00:10:334 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at repeating slider
00:12:860 (1) - ^
00:15:386 (1) - ^
00:17:913 (3) - ^
00:20:439 (1) - ^
00:22:965 (1) - ^
00:30:544 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider and end of slider
00:35:597 (1) - ^
00:45:702 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:48:229 (1) - ^

01:00:859 (1) - Offscreen
01:04:650 (2) - ^

01:05:913 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at repeating slider
01:08:439 (1) - ^
01:10:965 (1) - ^
01:13:492 (3) - ^
01:16:017 (1) - ^
01:18:543 (1) - ^
01:26:122 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:31:175 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider and end of slider
01:41:280 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:43:807 (1) - ^


[Normal]
00:00:229 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:16:018 (3) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
00:41:123 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
01:31:176 (1) - Add a finish hitsound


[Hard]
00:00:229 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:05:281 (1) - ^
01:00:860 (1) - ^
01:05:913 (1) - ^


Again, sorry for long mod post, because it's depending on the song
Not Bad
STAR
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Lowercase the "Dusty" tags.

[Dusty's Easy]
This song has 2 parts with the same vocal and music. You copied the first part and paste to the second part. They both will be the same expect for the placement. I mod the hitsound just in the first part but I hope you will apply them all to all parts.
00:05:281 (1) - Add finish.
00:05:281 (1,2) - Move them down a little bit.
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Make a clap pattern like this.
00:10:334 (1) - Add clap at the repeat of the slider.
00:12:860 (1) - ^
00:14:754 (2) - Remove finish. Add clap.
00:15:386 (1,3) - Add clap at the repeat of the slider.
00:20:439 (1) - ^
00:22:965 (1) - ^
Dusty, you know what I mean. Clap every two 1/1 tick.
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00:28:018 (1) - Add clap.
00:30:544 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:33:071 (1) - ^
00:35:597 (1) - Add finish at the whole slider.
00:43:176 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:45:702 (1) - Add clap at the end.
00:48:229 (1) - ^
01:00:859 (1) - Move it down some grids.

[Normal]
Maybe you can increase the slider tick rate to 4.

[Hard]
00:28:650 (1) - Add clap. Remove finish.
01:17:439 - Add note here.
01:24:229 (1) - Add clap. Remove finish.
01:43:807 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick. [?]
Star. I love the song.
Topic Starter
Shulin
@Leorda added most of your hitsound suggestions, thanks for your modding :D

@VanMonky did everything except the additional note and tick rate 4, they didn't fit imo, thanks again for modding!
Dusty
gdeath
all fine to me
Star
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks for starring :D
Derekku
Sorry that it took me so long to get to this... I was busy with school all week and then I was sick in bed all weekend. D:

[General]
*The "Dusty" tag should only be in Dusty's diff o:
*Easy/Hard use 227 offset, while Normal uses 225. But really, I think that those are a bit early and that 235 works better.

[Dusty's Easy]
Cool. Simple, yet fun~

[Normal]
Looks good~

[Hard]
00:35:605 (1) - Honestly this should be farther away from the previous slider. If you really look at the spacing in the early part of the map, this looks like it should only be 1/4 away =x
01:25:813 (1,2,3) - For some reason, these feel awkward to me. Perhaps place them in the center? x3x
01:45:079 (1) - I'd lower the volume of this a few ticks. (You have it lower in Normal..)

I see no reason why this shouldn't already be pubbled except for those few small things. Tell me when you're done and I'll gladly pubble this. :)
Topic Starter
Shulin

Derekku Chan wrote:

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this... I was busy with school all week and then I was sick in bed all weekend. D:

[General]
*The "Dusty" tag should only be in Dusty's diff o: Done EDIT: The search for "Dusty" doesn't work if I do this so I've kept the tags the same, besides its pretty obvious which difficulty Dusty did XD
*Easy/Hard use 227 offset, while Normal uses 225. But really, I think that those are a bit early and that 235 works better. Oops, I was playing with offsets and forgot to set them all the same, anyway 235 seems much better so changed.

[Dusty's Easy]
Cool. Simple, yet fun~

[Normal]
Looks good~

[Hard]
00:35:605 (1) - Honestly this should be farther away from the previous slider. If you really look at the spacing in the early part of the map, this looks like it should only be 1/4 away =x Your right, changed ^^
01:25:813 (1,2,3) - For some reason, these feel awkward to me. Perhaps place them in the center? x3x Done
01:45:079 (1) - I'd lower the volume of this a few ticks. (You have it lower in Normal..) Yep, it was too loud so changed

I see no reason why this shouldn't already be pubbled except for those few small things. Tell me when you're done and I'll gladly pubble this. :)
Thank you! :D
Derekku
mmmm I love the beat of this song more and more everytime I listen to it~

Pubbled!
Astom
StaR

I check it later
Louis Cyphre
Your request in #modreqs

[Easy]

Spacing is random.

00:00:235 - finish
00:30:550 - ^
01:36:234 - ^
01:28:656 - ^

Other diffs seems for me perfect.

Have a star

---

EDIT: Omg.
Dusty
Topic Starter
Shulin

Dusty wrote:

now you have 2 Hards. Yay.
Not anymore since yours is easier xD

Thanks for the diff! ~ updated.
theowest
Nice beatmap you've got here... Easy to play with double time! :D


STAR4STAR? :D
Xeno_old
[Normal]

00:39:392 (2) - Finish (reduce volume with 2 ticks ) ( sounds epic for me )
01:11:602 (3) - Take a closer look at this slider. not 100% Symmetrical ( if this matter )

Thats is, Nice diff :) good use of hitsounds.

[Dusty]

Perfecto
31 spacing infringements is greater than 24. (Heard this was not allowed anymore..)

[Insane]

Perfecto x2

Following is just me knitpicking.

00:19:024 (10) - New Combo
01:14:603 (10) - ^

00:03:552 Object isn't snapped!
00:03:868 Object isn't snapped!
00:04:184 Object isn't snapped!
Topic Starter
Shulin
The spacing infringements should be fine... I hope that isn't a new rule =.="

Fixed everything on my diffs thanks :D
Garven
I stole this from #modreqs a while back

[Normal]
2 unsnapped notes. :/
00:22:971 (1) - This combo runs a little long. Maybe do a new combo at the middle at 00:25:498 (5) - ?
01:21:076 (5) - ^

[Dusty's Hard]
I swear... all I ever find are stupid notes sticking into HP bar on your maps. :P
00:33:708 (2) - ^

[Insane]
'sall good.

<3 the slowdown for the chorus. Very fitting.
Excellent maps from a great mapping duo. Great job!
Topic Starter
Shulin
All fixed, thank you Garven! <3 <3 <3
Dusty
hp bar note fixed.

Spacing infringements better not be a rule, that'd be stupid :

Download: Shoji Meguro - Bloody Destiny (Shulin) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Xeno_old
Slap a big label with the name idiot on top of my head. Disregard the spacing infringements. That's my bad. I was think of something totally else when I wrote that.. =p

Sorry
regenz
as mod request :lol:
don't blame me if it's s**k i 've already told you.
*** it's only suggestion *** plz don't be serious you are more pro than me. :?
here go!

[Insane]
00:34:024 (3) - extend this slider to 00:34:971 and put clap at tail.
00:42:235 (3,4,5,6) - it would be more interesting if you arrange note not just only straight. ( this is apply to all of same note in this diff )
01:12:077 (4) - change this to whistle ?
01:29:603 (3) - same as 00:34:024 (3)

[Dusty's Hard]
Hmm this difficult is not abit much different form insane and i think AR is a bit low it's hard to play (maybe it's just only me)
coz your slider is fast and ar is too low so it's a little hard increase AR a bit's is a good imo.

**sorry if this are bad modding dusty
00:00:235 (1) - you can change this note to 1/4 return slider this apply for the rest of song but don't change all if you agree just change some point to make more variety
00:01:498 (4) - ^
00:29:919 (1) - it's good to make a jump note here.
00:33:077 (1) - this whistle is not fit imo
00:34:024 (3) - ^
00:38:761 (2) - whistle
00:39:392 (3) - whistle
00:46:656 (2) - not fit whistle
00:49:182 (2) - ^
01:12:077 (4) - whistle at head
01:25:498 (1) - it's good to make a jump note here.
01:28:656 (1) - finish
01:31:182 (1) - finish at head
01:34:971 (2,3) - good to make jump

[normal]
sry can' point any things bad.

Star!sry if this bad modding. :?
Dusty
did some of the hitsound stuff

edit: if you don't like the AR, play hardrock? I think it's fine tbh but eh, I made the map so I have it memorized :/

Download: Shoji Meguro - Bloody Destiny (Shulin) [Dusty's Hard].osu
DeathxShinigami
[Overall]
Great mapset. Probably could get bubbled soon ^_^
Here's some kiai points if you want to use them...
00:29:919 - 00:50:761
01:25:498 - 01:46:340


[Normal]
00:30:550 (1) - Reverse the starting point of this slider? (Feels like more of an easy type diff so the jump seems a tad awkward)
01:26:129 (1) - ^

[Dusty's Hard]
Excellent

[Insane]
For some reason AR 7 feels more enjoyable to me in the Insane diff. Just a suggestion but I only think about this due to the nature and the pace of the actualy song not the map. d:

Anyways, good luck!
Topic Starter
Shulin

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Overall]
Great mapset. Probably could get bubbled soon ^_^ Thanks =D
Here's some kiai points if you want to use them...
00:29:919 - 00:50:761
01:25:498 - 01:46:340 I felt the kiai looked a little weird so I didn't use it xD


[Normal]
00:30:550 (1) - Reverse the starting point of this slider? (Feels like more of an easy type diff so the jump seems a tad awkward)
01:26:129 (1) - ^ That's not really a jump and if I reverse the slider it becomes an anti jump xD

[Dusty's Hard]
Excellent

[Insane]
For some reason AR 7 feels more enjoyable to me in the Insane diff. Just a suggestion but I only think about this due to the nature and the pace of the actualy song not the map. d: You're right, watch someone say AR +1 now =P

Anyways, good luck!
Thanks for modding ^_^
vytalibus
This map is polished beyond normal modding. You should get your bubble soon, and a rank not long after.
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks for checking vytalibus :)
Kamure
By Mod Request:

General
No kiai time? But now I think about it.... There aren't much places to put one in....
Remove countdown because there is no purpose for it...

Eh, don't even kudosu this post.....

Good luck! and Star!!
Topic Starter
Shulin

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Remove countdown because there is no purpose for it...
It doesn't load so I don't think it matters.

Thanks for looking at this ^_^
Garven
-bzzt-

[Normal]
00:02:761 (1,2) - Maybe have these facing the other way for better flow? Maybe have to flip a lot of your other combos around though to keep the flow like that. Same with copy/paste later on
00:25:182 (4,1) - Hrm, maybe raise a grid or so to make the transition an arc instead of a straight line? Same with copy/paste later on

[Dusty's Hard]
00:34:971 (5) - This slider kind of stuck out in the combo since it was linear compared to the large arc of the rest of the purple.

[Insane]
00:16:971 (6,7,8) - Hrm, maybe do a progression from the strong arc slider to a weak arc, then a linear? I dunno. Same with copy/paste later on if you agree.
Topic Starter
Shulin

Garven wrote:

-bzzt-

[Normal]
00:02:761 (1,2) - Maybe have these facing the other way for better flow? Maybe have to flip a lot of your other combos around though to keep the flow like that. Same with copy/paste later on I tried it but the map looked weird to me after so I left it.
00:25:182 (4,1) - Hrm, maybe raise a grid or so to make the transition an arc instead of a straight line? Same with copy/paste later on Okay, done ^_^

[Dusty's Hard]
00:34:971 (5) - This slider kind of stuck out in the combo since it was linear compared to the large arc of the rest of the purple.

[Insane]
00:16:971 (6,7,8) - Hrm, maybe do a progression from the strong arc slider to a weak arc, then a linear? I dunno. Same with copy/paste later on if you agree.I'm not sure I did exactly what you had in mind, but it's now something along those lines xD
Thanks for the recheck =)
Thite
:oops:
Dusty
Topic Starter
Shulin
Updated :)
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