Aki - Zenmai Koi Tokei (T.E.B. Summer Mix)

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El Koko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 17 de febrero de 2015 at 01:43:08 p.m.

Artist: Aki
Title: Zenmai Koi Tokei (T.E.B. Summer Mix)
Source: Touhou
Tags: touhou eurobeat chen theme koko sumaru100
BPM: 168
Filesize: 6535kb
Play Time: 04:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 237 notes)
  2. Extra (5.58 stars, 1140 notes)
  3. Hard (3.42 stars, 756 notes)
  4. Lunatic (4.64 stars, 1085 notes)
  5. Normal (2.22 stars, 411 notes)
  6. sumaru's Hard (3.15 stars, 547 notes)


Download: Aki - Zenmai Koi Tokei (T.E.B. Summer Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First map. It's crap. I suck at mapping.
Going to finish with all ENHIX diffs some time around 2016. <- actually finished before 2015, even!
Cool song.

Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%
Sumaru's hard: 90%
Lunatic: 100%
Extra: 100%

help pls mod ;-;
BAKER BAKER
As you requested~

[Timing:]
BPM: 168
Offset: 11420
Do not forget to resnap all notes and preview point ;)
Topic Starter
El Koko

BAKER BAKER wrote:

As you requested~

[Timing:]
BPM: 168
Offset: 11420
Do not forget to resnap all notes and preview point ;)
Thanks, it's been updated. Also thanks to DakeDekaane.
Rainbow-
Mod
[Easy]
00:45:695 (1) - What A Weird Shape for a Slider.
I got Bored of The Easy and Stopped Modding it Halfway
*I Skipped Normal*
[Hard]
According to The Osu! Wikia. The HP Drain should be higher than 6 for a hard.
02:19:921 (1) - Replace this with a long slider.
[Insane]
Since this is From/Inspired by Touhou You can also call this Insane 'Lunatic'
01:30:338 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,18) - Maybe you can make this stream move. Plus, Shorten this. (New Combo)
02:02:302 (5,6,7,8,9) - Can You Make This Stream Move?
02:26:588 (5) - Make This a Single Slider (No Reverse Arrow)
02:41:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make This Stream Move?
02:48:731 (2,3,4) - Triplet Spacing is off. Move the hitcircle 2 to x:416 and y:136
02:49:267 (6) - Around Here you should start a new combo.
02:48:731 (7,8,9) - ^ x:96 and y:160
03:43:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Can You Make this Stream Move?
[Extra]
I Didnt even try to attempt to mod it.
Too Lazy. :)
Yauxo
Heya, coming from reddit, I just thought I give all the diffs a chance and look over them and point the general errors out.

[General]
■ Since Aeon participated in this mapset (Normal guest diff), you'll have to add his name in the tags

■ Every diff will need some visual upgrades, but that's what mods will (hopefully do)
[Easy]
■ The SV, Slidervelocity, seems too high for this. Usually a SV around 1,0 or less is used in Easy difficulties at medium-high BPMs; You use 1,40. Iam sure some modders/mappers/BATs will be bugged by that and point that out, maybe even request a remap.

I'd suggest that you lower the SV and then scale the whole map by x. (Edit -> Scale by) This way your whole map will have a lower SV and still work out the way you want it. Dont forget to go through the diff to check every Slider(lenght) and broken combos here and there.

■ Dont be afraid to use less circles and more sliders. The problem with many Circles in Easy diffs is that it sounds kinda empty. Especially in a strong and active song like you have here. Placing more 1/1 or 2/1 Sliders would fill it nicely. This also enables you to map nice looking Slidercombos.

■ Try to map less on straight lines. Mix it up a bit, try to map curves with circles, add some up and down here and there, andthing that improves the flow works.
[Normal]
■ Same SV related issue as in Easy. It feels really damn fast for a Normal.
What's to add is that you use ~0,7 Distance Snap for normal Circles. This isnt all that good, since the player has to move really fast on sliders (they move in a 1,0 DS base, if that makes sense) and then rather slow on normal Circles (said 0,7 DS). My suggestion is that you lower the SV so something like 1,2 and then replace ... yea, well, pretty much everything, so that you dont have to use the low DS on circles anymore.

■ Normals are supposed to have the same distance between objects through the diff. This means that if you use 1,0 DS for the circles, it should stay at 1,0 all the time. Jumps from 1,0 to, lets say, 1,2 should never happen.

■ Rethink your new combo placement. Some combos are longer than others are (maybe you just forgot to NC some things)

■ Just as in Easy, try to place more Sliders. You use aloooot of Circles here, which may be very difficult to people that are not used to tapping like we are. Sliders also fill empty spaces, which is .. good I assume :3
[Hard]
■ Same SV related thing. 2,0 is usually used in Insane/Extra diffs. Hard should be around 1,6 ~ 1,75 imo.

■ What Ive noticed is that you place alot of sliders on a red tick (the "not so strong" tick) while it'd fit better on a white tick (the "stonger, more audible" tick).
01:24:088 (6) - for example. The sound on the Slidertail (Sildertail is supposed to be the more silent tone, compared to the Sliderhead) is stronger than the one on the Sliderhead, which is, well, not good.
Take 01:27:838 (4) - as a counterexample. Sounds way better, doesnt it?

■ Try to avoid 1/2 Sliders with more than one repeat. These are outdated and 2 1/2 Slider do the job better.
[Insane]
■ Not too much besides rhythm errors and general placement that could be improved. Noteplacement itself looks better, but it's pretty 2009 esq. Mods will fix that for you (most likely)
[Extra]
■ Same as in Insane. Most is related to placement and there are some rhythm problems here and there. Mods will do that for you.

I'll probably give this a real mod once you gathered some mods by yourself. Feel free to pm me ingame.
kasdeya
Insane
01:18:909 (3) - i really think that should be a stream.
01:30:338 (8) - i really think that should be a stream.
02:50:159 (2) - this slider needs better flow with the song.
03:43:195 (3) - i really think that should be a stream.
03:59:267 (9) - i really think that should be a stream.
03:59:267 (9) - this slider needs better flow with the song

good map, i love it.
Cookiz
Peludo tu... xD
00:53:552 (7) - NC, 00:59:624 (7) - Seguir el patrón zic zachttp://puu.sh/c1bqa/b4bf23a597.jpg(Algo como eso), 01:25:338 (6) - CTRL+G 01:30:249 (5) - NC, 01:41:767 (8) - Snapealo y del 8-11 empalma, 01:52:838 (5) - CTRL+G, 01:53:552 (7) - CTRL+G, 01:55:338 (4) - Posiciona encima de slider, 02:13:909 (7) - Baja el stream un poco,algo así http://puu.sh/c1dE4/51badad028.jpg,02:17:124 (1) - bajalo http://puu.sh/c1dU6/00d482bb91.jpg, 02:29:624 (5) - poner donde esta este 02:29:088 (3) -, 02:34:267 (1) - cambiar todos los jumos a una forma diferente y algo no tan retiradas como lo están en esta parte 03:34:267 (1) - esos se me hace que quedan mejor, 02:41:409 (1) - picar NC, luego picar NC de nuevo aquí 02:41:767 (3) -, 02:52:302 (8) - 02:52:392 (9) - usar slider, 02:52:570 (10) - 02:52:659 (11) - Usar slider, 03:00:338 (2) - CTRL+G, 03:00:695 (3) - CTRL+G, 03:13:195 (3) - 03:13:374 (4) - seguir el patrón del triangulo,03:17:124 (9) - CTRL+G,03:19:088 (4) - bajar ese stream a donde esta 03:18:909 (3) -, 03:37:838 (5) - Si no snapea haga que las notas se toquen de esta forma http://puu.sh/c1fU9/fdd9664718.jpg, 03:39:802 (6) - poner debajo del slider, 03:43:195 (4) - NC, 03:53:731 (10) -03:53:820 (11) - usar slider y NC ,03:53:999 (12) -03:54:088 (13) - usar slider, después de hacerlo slider picar CTRL+G, 03:55:159 (10) - 03:55:249 (11) - usar slider,03:55:427 (12) -03:55:517 (13) - usar slider, 04:10:874 (8) - 04:10:963 (9) - usar slider, 04:11:142 (10) - 04:11:231 (11) - usar slider, y por mi parte creo que fue todo xD mañana le hago la insane si tengo tiempo :)
Topic Starter
El Koko

DJVinyl wrote:

Mod
[Easy]
00:45:695 (1) - What A Weird Shape for a Slider. <- a little bit... might get to changing it to something else.
I got Bored of The Easy and Stopped Modding it Halfway
*I Skipped Normal*
[Hard]
According to The Osu! Wikia. The HP Drain should be higher than 6 for a hard. done
02:19:921 (1) - Replace this with a long slider.
[Insane]
Since this is From/Inspired by Touhou You can also call this Insane 'Lunatic' i know this, but i always forget it lmao. thanks for pointing it out, going to make sure to change it this time.
01:30:338 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,18) - Maybe you can make this stream move. Plus, Shorten this. (New Combo) yeah man i can, watch this in all seriousness, i'm going to see how to work around this, i don't want to push the difficulty up too much by spacing these streams out, so i'll see what i can do.
02:02:302 (5,6,7,8,9) - Can You Make This Stream Move? ^
02:26:588 (5) - Make This a Single Slider (No Reverse Arrow) done
02:41:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make This Stream Move? ^
02:48:731 (2,3,4) - Triplet Spacing is off. Move the hitcircle 2 to x:416 and y:136 done
02:49:267 (6) - Around Here you should start a new combo. done... probably
02:48:731 (7,8,9) - ^ x:96 and y:160 done
03:43:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Can You Make this Stream Move? ^
[Extra]
I Didnt even try to attempt to mod it.
Too Lazy. :)
thanks!

Yauxo wrote:

Heya, coming from reddit, I just thought I give all the diffs a chance and look over them and point the general errors out.

[General]
■ Since Aeon participated in this mapset (Normal guest diff), you'll have to add his name in the tags done

■ Every diff will need some visual upgrades, but that's what mods will (hopefully do) hopefully...
[Easy]
■ The SV, Slidervelocity, seems too high for this. Usually a SV around 1,0 or less is used in Easy difficulties at medium-high BPMs; You use 1,40. Iam sure some modders/mappers/BATs will be bugged by that and point that out, maybe even request a remap.
I'd suggest that you lower the SV and then scale the whole map by x. (Edit -> Scale by) This way your whole map will have a lower SV and still work out the way you want it. Dont forget to go through the diff to check every Slider(lenght) and broken combos here and there.

■ Dont be afraid to use less circles and more sliders. The problem with many Circles in Easy diffs is that it sounds kinda empty. Especially in a strong and active song like you have here. Placing more 1/1 or 2/1 Sliders would fill it nicely. This also enables you to map nice looking Slidercombos.

■ Try to map less on straight lines. Mix it up a bit, try to map curves with circles, add some up and down here and there, andthing that improves the flow works.

going to more or less remap this according to these suggestions. thank you very much, i was definitely not very convinced by this diff.
[Normal]
■ Same SV related issue as in Easy. It feels really damn fast for a Normal.
What's to add is that you use ~0,7 Distance Snap for normal Circles. This isnt all that good, since the player has to move really fast on sliders (they move in a 1,0 DS base, if that makes sense) and then rather slow on normal Circles (said 0,7 DS). My suggestion is that you lower the SV so something like 1,2 and then replace ... yea, well, pretty much everything, so that you dont have to use the low DS on circles anymore.

■ Normals are supposed to have the same distance between objects through the diff. This means that if you use 1,0 DS for the circles, it should stay at 1,0 all the time. Jumps from 1,0 to, lets say, 1,2 should never happen.

■ Rethink your new combo placement. Some combos are longer than others are (maybe you just forgot to NC some things)

■ Just as in Easy, try to place more Sliders. You use aloooot of Circles here, which may be very difficult to people that are not used to tapping like we are. Sliders also fill empty spaces, which is .. good I assume :3

remapping this too, i had to move a lot of stuff but it still wasn't quite pleasant. priority diff to work on. thanks
[Hard]
■ Same SV related thing. 2,0 is usually used in Insane/Extra diffs. Hard should be around 1,6 ~ 1,75 imo. that's going to require some work to do, but i'll do it.

■ What Ive noticed is that you place alot of sliders on a red tick (the "not so strong" tick) while it'd fit better on a white tick (the "stonger, more audible" tick).
01:24:088 (6) - for example. The sound on the Slidertail (Sildertail is supposed to be the more silent tone, compared to the Sliderhead) is stronger than the one on the Sliderhead, which is, well, not good.
Take 01:27:838 (4) - as a counterexample. Sounds way better, doesnt it? definitely! i actually played this a lot of times to find more of these, which are actually quite a lot. going to work on changing them, seems like i definitely missed on many of them.

■ Try to avoid 1/2 Sliders with more than one repeat. These are outdated and 2 1/2 Slider do the job better. going to work on this.
[Insane]
■ Not too much besides rhythm errors and general placement that could be improved. Noteplacement itself looks better, but it's pretty 2009 esq. Mods will fix that for you (most likely) not quite sure what this 2009esque thing means !!! but yeah, i'm hoping mods will help me out with this. i wouldn't like changing too much of it either so i think it's not going to be *that* easy.
[Extra]
■ Same as in Insane. Most is related to placement and there are some rhythm problems here and there. Mods will do that for you. same as above then. thank you very much.

I'll probably give this a real mod once you gathered some mods by yourself. Feel free to pm me ingame. will do, definitely. thank you very much!

kasdeya wrote:

Insane
01:18:909 (3) - i really think that should be a stream. read answers to djvinyl, going to work around this somehow
01:30:338 (8) - i really think that should be a stream. ^
02:50:159 (2) - this slider needs better flow with the song. working on this
03:43:195 (3) - i really think that should be a stream. ^
03:59:267 (9) - i really think that should be a stream.^
03:59:267 (9) - this slider needs better flow with the song what slider? wrong copypaste here lel

good map, i love it. thaaank you~

Cookiz wrote:

Peludo tu... xD
00:53:552 (7) - NC yep
00:59:624 (7) - Seguir el patrón zic zachttp://puu.sh/c1bqa/b4bf23a597.jpg(Algo como eso) probably, vere si juega bonito
01:25:338 (6) - CTRL+G yep
01:30:249 (5) - NC yep
01:41:767 (8) - Snapealo y del 8-11 empalma yep
01:52:838 (5) - CTRL+G yep
01:53:552 (7) - CTRL+G yep
01:55:338 (4) - Posiciona encima de slider yep
02:13:909 (7) - Baja el stream un poco,algo así http://puu.sh/c1dE4/51badad028.jpg http://puu.sh/c1dE4/51badad028.jpg asi lo veo bien
02:17:124 (1) - bajalo http://puu.sh/c1dU6/00d482bb91.jpgyep
02:29:624 (5) - poner donde esta este 02:29:088 (3) - nop
02:34:267 (1) - cambiar todos los jumos a una forma diferente y algo no tan retiradas como lo están en esta parte esos jumps me agradan y no tengo problemas con ellos, asi se quedan
03:34:267 (1) - esos se me hace que quedan mejor ^
02:41:409 (1) - picar NC, luego picar NC de nuevo aquí 02:41:767 (3) - yep
02:52:302 (8) - 02:52:392 (9) - usar slider probablemente...
02:52:570 (10) - 02:52:659 (11) - Usar slider^
03:00:338 (2) - CTRL+G ok
03:00:695 (3) - CTRL+G en conjunto con el otro queda raro, creo que mejor le hago ctrl+g al 4? se ve mejor a mi parecer...
03:13:195 (3) - 03:13:374 (4) - seguir el patrón del triangulo no entiendo?
03:17:124 (9) - CTRL+G yep
03:19:088 (4) - bajar ese stream a donde esta 03:18:909 (3) - no estoy seguro
03:37:838 (5) - Si no snapea haga que las notas se toquen de esta forma http://puu.sh/c1fU9/fdd9664718.jpg me gusta el espaciado uqe les puse, esperare mas opiniones para pegarlas como tu dices
03:39:802 (6) - poner debajo del slider probablemente
03:43:195 (4) - NC yep
03:53:731 (10) -03:53:820 (11) - usar slider y NC nel. creo que a nadie le gustan estos duplets, pero son la diferencia que hay entre esta diff y el insane, el tener que picarle dos veces y no con un slider, asi que esos me gustaría mantenerlos.
03:53:999 (12) -03:54:088 (13) - usar slider, después de hacerlo slider picar CTRL+G ^
03:55:159 (10) - 03:55:249 (11) - usar slider ^
03:55:427 (12) -03:55:517 (13) - usar slider ^
04:10:874 (8) - 04:10:963 (9) - usar slider ^
04:11:142 (10) - 04:11:231 (11) - usar slide

y por mi parte creo que fue todo xD mañana le hago la insane si tengo tiempo :)eres grande galletoso, gracias!
thank you very much everyone. going to update this when i work around the easy and normal diffs, which require the most work, then i'll look again for some mods.
Peachtrees
01:27 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124617 something like this feels nice, I couldn't figure out a way to place the notes right now but this feels better than the slider
01:28 Peachtrees: 00:20:874 (5,6,7,8) - same thing here
01:28 El Koko: what diff is it?
01:28 Peachtrees: oh
01:28 Peachtrees: Hard
01:29 El Koko: alright
01:30 Peachtrees: also, you don't need to apply anything
01:30 Peachtrees: it's all up to you c:
01:31 El Koko: i do really appreciate any input though :p want to make this a bit easier
01:32 Peachtrees: well then suggesting to put in a triplet is useless :P
01:32 Peachtrees: I'll have to think of something new then
01:32 El Koko: oh that was a triplet
01:33 El Koko: i thought it was just the notes one above the other lol
01:33 El Koko: thing is
01:33 El Koko: although i like how the Hard turned out to be
01:33 El Koko: the gap between Normal and Hard diffs is enormous
01:34 El Koko: and that can get this thing unraked forever
01:34 El Koko: and i don't really know what to do :
01:34 El Koko: because if i actually make the hard easier i fear that the gap between hard and insane gets bigger, too
01:34 El Koko: and then everything explodes
01:34 Peachtrees: hmm
01:35 Peachtrees: making another diff is no option I guess?
01:35 El Koko: it actually is! a friend of mine offered to make a guest diff
01:35 El Koko: so if he does something between my Normal and Hard
01:35 El Koko: i'm pretty much saved
01:36 Peachtrees: hmm I have the same problem for my mapset too, but I'm guessing since I have a diff below 2 stars everything should be fine
01:36 El Koko: yeah my easy is like 1 dot something
01:36 El Koko: i should actually ask a BAT if it is rankable like that
01:37 Peachtrees: isn't the only thing you need a diff below 2
01:38 El Koko: it is, but the diff spread must be reasonable too
01:39 Peachtrees: 01:18:909 (5,6,7) - I would get rid of the long back'n'forth slider, I personally don't like those (PERSONALLY)
01:39 Peachtrees: like a normal back'n'forth slider and three circles instead
01:39 Peachtrees: and the current spread is not reasonable?
01:40 El Koko: there's like 2 more of those... i guess i just wasn't creative when i made them, how would you map that?
01:40 El Koko: and it is... it's just, like i said, the gap between the diffs
01:41 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124646
01:41 Peachtrees: I tried something like this
01:41 Peachtrees: not sure if it's fitting
01:41 Peachtrees: well then I'm just hopeing that the diffspread won't be a problem ;w;
01:42 El Koko: i think yours is fine
01:42 Peachtrees: 01:20:695 (4) -
01:42 El Koko: and i'll try that out
01:42 Peachtrees: could make this a reverse slider
01:42 Peachtrees: goes along well with the vocals I think
01:43 El Koko: hmmm, it actually does
01:43 El Koko: i think i'll do that :o
01:44 Peachtrees: 01:24:981 (4,5) - would use two normal sliders instead
01:47 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124665 I would replace the second back'n'forth slider with something like that (note placement is up to oyu of course c:)
01:47 El Koko: yep i'll get around that
01:49 Peachtrees: 01:38:552 (1) - try making this a normal slider and then put a back'n'forth slider after it
01:53 El Koko: i think it sounds better as 2 sliders
01:55 Peachtrees: you mean the way you put it first or the way I suggested?
01:55 Peachtrees: also 01:55:517 (5) - try just making it a long slider instead of back'n'forth
01:56 El Koko: i mean this http://puu.sh/c8L2G/07df5f7110.jpg
01:56 El Koko: yeah sounds better as a long one
01:59 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124692 try placing them like this, it feels a bit better to me
02:00 El Koko: oh right
02:00 El Koko: i don't know why those sliders are on the red ticks
02:00 El Koko: thanks for pointing them out
02:01 Peachtrees: 02:13:909 (4,5,6,7) -
02:02 Peachtrees: make 5 a back'N'forth slider, 6 a long slider that goes along with the vocals and 7 a normal circle
02:02 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124697
02:02 Peachtrees: like this
02:03 Peachtrees: (proper note placement not included :P)
02:04 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124703
02:04 El Koko: i'll look into that
02:04 Peachtrees: could try something like this instead of the back'n'forth slider
02:05 El Koko: not really, feels empty
02:05 El Koko: might fill in with something
02:06 Peachtrees: it's all up to you c:
02:06 El Koko: :p
02:06 Peachtrees: 02:34:088 (6,7) - I personally feel like those sliders feel weird
02:06 Peachtrees: I'd just use a circle and a longer slider instead
02:08 El Koko: you're right, those are on the red tick too
02:08 El Koko: going to change them, thanks
02:10 Peachtrees: 03:13:552 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I can't quite tell why but I honestly feel like this part should be different from the rest of the map since the vocals feel different
02:10 Peachtrees: I can't seem to word it properly
02:11 El Koko: i decided not to follow the vocals there because they would be looong notes
02:11 El Koko: and that would be boring, so instead it's following the beat
02:11 Peachtrees: yeah, I figured that's what you did
02:11 Peachtrees: 03:36:052 (2,3) -
02:12 Peachtrees: I would change to circle and the slider
02:12 El Koko: yep
02:13 Peachtrees: 03:48:552 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - would replaced the last two slider with circles and make the long slider two shorter ones
02:13 Peachtrees: maybe that's just me though
02:14 El Koko: yeah probably going to do something like that
02:14 El Koko: so many sliders make it boring
02:15 Peachtrees: that was the idea behind that
02:16 Peachtrees: also I'm just going to say that I personally don't like to use these really short sliders too often
02:16 Peachtrees: it's probably because I don't know how to use them properly
02:16 Peachtrees: but I don't like really like using them too much
02:17 El Koko: 03:53:731 (2) - you mean this?
02:18 Peachtrees: yeah
02:18 Peachtrees: 00:38:374 (6) -
02:18 Peachtrees: would make this a long slider instead of back'n'forth
02:18 Peachtrees: that's my personal opinion though
02:18 Peachtrees: they should be fine as long as they're fitting
02:20 Peachtrees: 00:49:802 (1) - would put a long slider here
02:20 El Koko: probably going to make it a circle and a slider, i don't really think it would work as a long one :v
02:20 Peachtrees: everything's up to you c:
02:20 El Koko: i know i know :p
02:21 Peachtrees: we both have a very different style when it comes to mapping so it's no wonder I'd suggest things you wouldn't use
02:21 El Koko: yeah, i think the same way, but you're still doing some pretty good suggestoins
02:21 El Koko: so keep going :D
02:22 Peachtrees: 01:13:374 (9) - move slider to the next white tick and put a circle instead
02:22 Peachtrees: feels better to me
02:22 Peachtrees: 01:15:517 (5) - I'd personally add a circle
02:26 El Koko: ghost note might fit
02:26 Peachtrees: 01:42:481 (1) - not sure about this one but moving this to the next red tick and putting a circle and the white ticks feels a bit better to me
02:27 Peachtrees: might mess up the spacing though not sure
02:28 Peachtrees: 01:47:838 (5) - if you don't want too many sliders in a row, replacing this with circles wouldn't hurt to much I htink
02:28 Peachtrees: 01:51:409 (1) - perhaps make this one tick longer
02:28 El Koko: maybe the first two slideres, yeah
02:29 El Koko: yep
02:29 Peachtrees: I feel like replacing one with circles doesn't hurt the flow
02:31 Peachtrees: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2124754 perhaps try something like this,
02:32 Peachtrees: hmm not sure how fitting this is, maybe changing the other back'n'forth slider would make it fit better
02:32 El Koko: not sure but i'll see
02:32 Peachtrees: let me see
02:33 Peachtrees: I'd make the other back'n'forth slider into something like this 01:59:802 (3) -
02:34 Peachtrees: not sure if I already pointed this one out
02:34 Peachtrees: 02:03:552 (3,4) -
02:34 Peachtrees: would swap those two
02:35 El Koko: you didn't, going to swap them
02:36 Peachtrees: I noticed that a lot of notes are stacked, but I honestly don't see a reason why
02:36 Peachtrees: 02:04:981 (4,5) - like those two for example
02:36 Peachtrees: I didn't try playing it yet so I don't know how this feels while playing
02:37 El Koko: ah
02:37 El Koko: that's because those used to be triplets
02:37 El Koko: but i removed them. not sure what i'm going to do with them, for now i'll just leave them that way and change them once i work around that diff again
02:38 Peachtrees: 02:06:945 (6) - I'd make this one tick longer
02:38 Peachtrees: I'm going over the map again to see if I missed anything so sorry if I point out something twice
02:38 Peachtrees: :c
02:39 El Koko: no problem x)
02:40 Peachtrees: 02:23:374 (4,5) -
02:40 Peachtrees: would swap those two
02:40 El Koko: yes
02:42 Peachtrees: 02:50:338 (1) - would move this to the next white tick and place a circle instead, although it works likes this too
02:43 Peachtrees: 02:53:909 (1,2) - again, would swap those two
02:44 El Koko: aham
02:46 Peachtrees: 04:08:731 (2) - would move to next white tick and then place a circle instead (would have to get rid of the slider after this one and place another circle instead
02:46 Peachtrees: it works if you just keep it as it is though
02:46 El Koko: oh, yeah maybe
02:47 Peachtrees: okay, I think this is all I can come up with right now :c
02:47 El Koko: that's ok xD
02:47 El Koko: thank you very much
02:47 El Koko: save your log and post it so i can kd :)
02:49 Peachtrees: how do I do that again?
02:49 El Koko: ./savelog
Satoiji
Extra :3

00:42:481 (8) - x:384, y:200
01:01:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - éste square jump opino se vería mejor más cuadrado que romboide
03:09:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - podrías ponerlos a una distancia como la de los sliders
03:37:838 (5,6,7,8,9) - la distancia entre ellos es bastante exagerada a pesar de ser entrada al outro, y está dioquis siendo que los demás streams tienen otra distancia.
El stream que está en el 03:31:767 le quedaría mejor esa distancia entre círculos.
AnOzi Changle
My English is no good
[Lunatic]
00:20:874 (6,7) - 1/4 3Stream
00:28:017 (3,4) - Exchange
00:42:481 (1) - move to 00:41:231 456,104
00:41:231 (6,7,8) - move to 00:41:409
00:46:409 (3) - bad slider
00:49:088 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad Permutation
00:53:195 (6) - move to 184,280
00:58:552 (6,1,3,5) - NC 01:49:981 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It is good
01:11:052 (10) - move to 128,96
01:11:231 (1) - move to 224,96 (You can skip this mod
01:13:552 (2) - move to 256,56
01:15:159 (4,5,6,7) - NC at all
01:21:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - - ugly
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337502
01:22:659 (1,2) - NC by 2
01:22:838 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H
01:27:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad Triangle You can ctrl+shift+R
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337513
01:28:552 (1) - Change a note at 01:28:552
01:31:409 (1,2,3,4) - Have Beautiful Permutation
01:41:767 (2,3,4,5) - move to 248,248
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337523
02:21:409 (4) - bad slider
02:24:981 (3) - NC and move to 288,296
02:25:338 (4) - move to 432,264
02:26:767 (6) - bad slider
02:36:945 (6) - Delete
02:37:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - NC at all
02:53:195 (4,5,6,7) - To move it visible
02:57:481 (3,5,7) - NC
03:01:945 (8) - ctrl+G
03:11:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Have Beautiful Permutation
03:39:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:38:195 (4) - move to 400,320
03:58:731 (3,1) - so bad
04:06:052 (4,5,6) - NC
04:08:731 (2) - ugly slider
04:12:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - NC

would you like to mod my map please?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/237864
thx in advance
Topic Starter
El Koko

ctpsky wrote:

My English is no good
[Lunatic]
00:20:874 (6,7) - 1/4 3Stream maybe, maybe not
00:28:017 (3,4) - Exchange yessss
00:42:481 (1) - move to 00:41:231 456,104 nah
00:41:231 (6,7,8) - move to 00:41:409 yeah fixed that
00:46:409 (3) - bad slider terrible but not sure what to do
00:49:088 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad Permutation what do you mean
00:53:195 (6) - move to 184,280 yeah
00:58:552 (6,1,3,5) - NC 01:49:981 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It is good yeah
01:11:052 (10) - move to 128,96 nah
01:11:231 (1) - move to 224,96 (You can skip this mod nah
01:13:552 (2) - move to 256,56 nah
01:15:159 (4,5,6,7) - NC at all not a fan of these kinda NC's, just nc'd the slider
01:21:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - - ugly yeah this was horrid thanks for your suggestion! made something very similar.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337502
01:22:659 (1,2) - NC by 2 nah
01:22:838 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H wat, nah
01:27:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad Triangle You can ctrl+shift+R
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337513 probably... will mess around with this later.
01:28:552 (1) - Change a note at 01:28:552 wat
01:31:409 (1,2,3,4) - Have Beautiful Permutation wat
01:41:767 (2,3,4,5) - move to 248,248 yeah
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337523
02:21:409 (4) - bad slider wat
02:24:981 (3) - NC and move to 288,296 nah
02:25:338 (4) - move to 432,264 nah
02:26:767 (6) - bad slider nah
02:36:945 (6) - Delete yes
02:37:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - NC at all nah
02:53:195 (4,5,6,7) - To move it visible yeah
02:57:481 (3,5,7) - NC yeah
03:01:945 (8) - ctrl+G yeah
03:11:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Have Beautiful Permutation wat
03:39:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ wat
03:38:195 (4) - move to 400,320 yeah
03:58:731 (3,1) - so bad hmmmm, maybe, maybe not
04:06:052 (4,5,6) - NC nah
04:08:731 (2) - ugly slider yeah don't know what to do
04:12:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - NC nah

would you like to mod my map please?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/237864
thx in advance

not good at modding but i tried
thank you very much :D
qwr
Suggestions

00:23:731 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - A little hard to read (optional change)
02:21:767 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - add variety
02:47:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change spacing between 3 and 4
02:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - Move
04:05:874 (3,4,5,6) - Space out
01:09:802 (1,2,3,4) - onwards, don't overdo squares
01:01:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Move rows so not on top of each other
03:09:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Space out pairs

There are some very large jumps in this map - I'm ok with them, make sure you don't go from small spaces between notes to large jumps too quickly

Excellent first map!
My Name Is R
Hoooooola XD

pues... solo para decirte que agregues sumaru100 a los tags :V

y pues que despues te hago un mod, solo recuerdame porque me da flojera y olvido todo

No kudosu plox, cya XDDDDD

ahhh, toma unas estreshas sensoales :3
Dogirl
pls rank this, it's really good.
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