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Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece

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simplistiC
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simplistiC
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 3, 2010 at 5:11:03 PM

Artist: Hommarju feat. Latte
Title: masterpiece
Source: To Aru Majutsu no Index
Tags: ignorethis exit trance presents speed anime best 7
BPM: 180
Filesize: 8361kb
Play Time: 02:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.93 stars, 163 notes)
  2. ignore's Chaos (4.9 stars, 477 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 619 notes)
  4. Normal (4.23 stars, 183 notes)
Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd map!
awaiting ignorethis, happy30, and taka1235's difficulty
ignorethis - Insane -done-
simplistiC - Insane + Normal + Easy -done-

ALL DONE! :D

splitting into two mapsets.
second mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14592
Last edited by simplistiC , edited 29 times in total.
ignorethis
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ignorethis
i'll give a star first

depending on my schoolwork the map may be finished in one or two weeks, but I'll try to finish it asap
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
fixed

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [taka's Hard].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
"ignorethis - Hard/Insane
happy30 - Hard/Insane
taka1235 - Hard -done-
simplistiC - Hard Insane + Normal -done-"

GL Getting this ranked lmao
happy30
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happy30
its hard but easy :(

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [happy30].osu
ignorethis
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ignorethis
as the title said it's a Chaos :3

enjoy

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [ignore's Chaos].osu
happy30
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happy30
my diff is somehow not yet included to the mapset, can you fix this? :?
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
simplistiC
edit: nvm
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[Easy]

I guess in general, this map doesn't feel like it follows the music. The rhythms are interesting, but they should stay intuitive in the context of the music.

00:47:119 (1,2) - I understand this is just a 1/1 set of beats, but the gap could be placed in a more intuitive place, perhaps with more than just 2 sliders. For example, I thought a slider every 4 beats felt better here than every 5.
00:48:786 (2,1) - Spacing.
01:12:786 (1,2,3) - Same as before; I thought that the placement of every new slider could have been placed better.
01:23:619 (1) - Halve the length of this slider, and double the number of repeats. I'm a bit concerned that this stack is only a 1/2 gap, while the rest of the stacks were 1/1 gaps. Maybe don't stack them?
01:28:952 (1) - Placement of the repeats sounds kinda unnatural.
01:34:786 (3) - The new combo feels more suited for this note.
01:38:786 (1,1,2,3) - Weird beat pattern, doesn't seem to follow much in the music.
01:52:452 - As this kiai section also changes audio, put a section just before this note for the audio, in case the player hits the note early, while keeping the kiai section in place.
02:09:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - On the offbeats sounds kinda random and weird.
02:32:952 - Add a beat here if you want consistent beats.

[Normal]

00:12:119 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:20:952 (3) - Sounds better 1/2 later; remember to move the spinner a bit later too (end same place).
01:30:786 - This break starts very awkwardly mid-phrase. Please map more into it.
01:41:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to read this spacing. Slider also ends in a weird spot.
01:47:952 (2) - Weird slider.
02:05:952 (1) - Remove this finish?
02:26:452 (3,4,1) - Eh, spacing is different here. It's also kinda cluttered.

[taka's Hard]

00:33:286 (14) - This note seemed a little out of place, lol.
01:36:619 (7,8,9) - Felt a bit weird, but it's okay. XD
01:38:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - After such a tight stream, it's a bit hard to see that these are sliders.
02:09:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Not parallel - intended?

Cool.

[happy30]

Whoa, that's a lot of huge slowdowns. Might be excessive, in my opinion. Also, the timing sections aren't aligned properly; if you remove all but the first one, you'll get a ton of object-not-snapped errors, which means that the red timing sections aren't falling perfectly on the ticks, but 5-10ms ahead/behind, or something. Remove the timing sections, resnap all notes, and re-insert them. Make sure you add in all the normal-BPM sections before you add the low-BPM sections.

I thought this diff might be cool with the largest hitcircles, although it would raise the diff. to 5.00 (lolwhat) and lower the score to 7.4m.

01:34:947 (1,2,3) - Moving this a grid left makes both the triangle before and after the slider look neater.
02:05:278 (1) - This 1/2 BPM doesn't really fit, imo.
03:09:110 (3) - This note is placed kinda weirdly, partially under the slider middle.

[ignore's Chaos]

00:10:952 (6) - Concealed repeats.
00:21:452 (5) - Not stacked, looks kinda weird.
01:03:952 (4) - Concealed repeat again.
01:39:869 (14) - This is a double-note, please delete one.
02:37:762 - This break is kinda long, 20 seconds. Map some of it?
03:12:786 (5,7) - Moving these notes a grid up makes better symmetry.
03:14:619 (5) - Use Bezier?

[Insane]

00:14:786 (8) - Concealed repeat.
00:20:119 (12) - ^
00:21:452 (1) - Although the vocals end on the red tick, the strong beat is on the white tick, so it would make sense to either extend or shorten this by 1/2.
00:32:619 (1) - End this 1/2 sooner; currently it sounds strange and plays awkwardly.
01:30:286 (5,6,7,8) - Strange rhythm.
01:39:119 (1) - Same as before.
01:50:119 (1) - Dunno why you have such an obsession with sliders ending on red ticks. XDD It plays much more smoothly to end them on white.
02:04:119 (1,2,3,4) - Make it a square?
02:16:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The patterns at the beginning look nice, but don't particularly fit the music too well. (you come back to the center in the first pattern not because there's really a musical reason to, but rather because your slider finished and you need to put a beat somewhere) Later on, this puts all your slider heads on red ticks and slider tails on white, which feels kinda awkward while playing.
02:25:452 (3) - New combo should be here, not 2 notes before.
02:28:119 (9) - New combo here, not the note after. (align the new combos with the long white ticks on the timeline, pretty much) It doesn't make musical sense here to start a combo on a red tick. In general, you should take a look through combos in the entire map.
03:00:119 (1) - Since you've followed the lead vocals the entire map, it doesn't make much sense to follow the background here, in my opinion. Keep doing what you've been doing, at least until 03:23:286 (1).

Score is a concern for this diff, since it's not really harder than the other guest insanes. I'd say consider cutting the beatmap off at the same place they do.

Good luck!
ignorethis
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ignorethis

Kytoxid wrote:

[ignore's Chaos]

00:10:952 (6) - Concealed repeats.
I think this one can be easily recognised.
00:21:452 (5) - Not stacked, looks kinda weird.
...my fault
01:03:952 (4) - Concealed repeat again.
Same
01:39:869 (14) - This is a double-note, please delete one.
damn why didn't I recheck for playability D:
02:37:762 - This break is kinda long, 20 seconds. Map some of it?
when I listened to the song I found the vocals a bit off to the current offset, so I prefer not to map it to avoid trouble
03:12:786 (5,7) - Moving these notes a grid up makes better symmetry.
sure
03:14:619 (5) - Use Bezier?
Uh Bezier makes this slider bad in shape imo
Fixed version is provided below. Remind me if you detect fatal problems.

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [ignore's Chaos].osu
simplistiC
237 posts
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Topic Starter
simplistiC

Kytoxid wrote:

[Easy]

I guess in general, this map doesn't feel like it follows the music. The rhythms are interesting, but they should stay intuitive in the context of the music.

00:47:119 (1,2) - I understand this is just a 1/1 set of beats, but the gap could be placed in a more intuitive place, perhaps with more than just 2 sliders. For example, I thought a slider every 4 beats felt better here than every 5. Changed
00:48:786 (2,1) - Spacing. Fixed
01:12:786 (1,2,3) - Same as before; I thought that the placement of every new slider could have been placed better. Changed
01:23:619 (1) - Halve the length of this slider, and double the number of repeats. I'm a bit concerned that this stack is only a 1/2 gap, while the rest of the stacks were 1/1 gaps. Maybe don't stack them? Fixed
01:28:952 (1) - Placement of the repeats sounds kinda unnatural. Changed
01:34:786 (3) - The new combo feels more suited for this note. Done
01:38:786 (1,1,2,3) - Weird beat pattern, doesn't seem to follow much in the music. Fixed
01:52:452 - As this kiai section also changes audio, put a section just before this note for the audio, in case the player hits the note early, while keeping the kiai section in place. Done
02:09:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - On the offbeats sounds kinda random and weird. Changed
02:32:952 - Add a beat here if you want consistent beats. Done

[Normal]

00:12:119 (2,1) - Spacing. Fixed
00:20:952 (3) - Sounds better 1/2 later; remember to move the spinner a bit later too (end same place). Fixed
01:30:786 - This break starts very awkwardly mid-phrase. Please map more into it. Changed
01:41:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to read this spacing. Slider also ends in a weird spot. Changed
01:47:952 (2) - Weird slider. Fixed
02:05:952 (1) - Remove this finish? K
02:26:452 (3,4,1) - Eh, spacing is different here. It's also kinda cluttered. ??

[Insane]

00:14:786 (8) - Concealed repeat. Noticeable.
00:20:119 (12) - ^ ^
00:21:452 (1) - Although the vocals end on the red tick, the strong beat is on the white tick, so it would make sense to either extend or shorten this by 1/2. Done
00:32:619 (1) - End this 1/2 sooner; currently it sounds strange and plays awkwardly. Done
01:30:286 (5,6,7,8) - Strange rhythm.
01:39:119 (1) - Same as before.Done
01:50:119 (1) - Dunno why you have such an obsession with sliders ending on red ticks. XDD It plays much more smoothly to end them on white. xD Done.
02:04:119 (1,2,3,4) - Make it a square? I think it's a square now.
02:16:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The patterns at the beginning look nice, but don't particularly fit the music too well. (you come back to the center in the first pattern not because there's really a musical reason to, but rather because your slider finished and you need to put a beat somewhere) Later on, this puts all your slider heads on red ticks and slider tails on white, which feels kinda awkward while playing. Changed
02:25:452 (3) - New combo should be here, not 2 notes before. Done
02:28:119 (9) - New combo here, not the note after. (align the new combos with the long white ticks on the timeline, pretty much) It doesn't make musical sense here to start a combo on a red tick. In general, you should take a look through combos in the entire map. Ehhhhhh..
03:00:119 (1) - Since you've followed the lead vocals the entire map, it doesn't make much sense to follow the background here, in my opinion. Keep doing what you've been doing, at least until 03:23:286 (1). Need more opinions.

Score is a concern for this diff, since it's not really harder than the other guest insanes. I'd say consider cutting the beatmap off at the same place they do. 12M max. Took out section after last spinner.
Good luck!
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235

Kytoxid wrote:

[taka's Hard]

00:33:286 (14) - This note seemed a little out of place, lol.
01:36:619 (7,8,9) - Felt a bit weird, but it's okay. XD
01:38:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - After such a tight stream, it's a bit hard to see that these are sliders.
02:09:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Not parallel - intended? fixed

Cool.
thank you !

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [taka's Hard].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello

[Easy]
00:56:953 (1) - No new combo
01:18:453 (1) - Allign with 5 (end of slider) Overlapping with prevoius slider it's not good idea
01:19:452 (1) - No new combo
01:20:119 (1) - ^
01:20:786 (1) - ^
01:21:452 (1) - ^
01:22:119 (1) - ^
01:25:452 (1) - ^
01:26:119 (1) - ^
01:26:786 (1) - ^
01:40:202 (1) - Move forward to red tick

[Normal]
00:22:702 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?

[baka's Hard]
Please decrease the HP Drain, the HP Bar is almost going to half while autoplay

[Insane]
01:39:119 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000)

Not bad
STAR
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Easy]
This feels very weird to play. Also, there are too many stacks, I think a lot of them are very awkward
00:16:953 (2) - Split into a note, a nonrepeating 1/2 slider, and then 1/2 slider that repeats once?
00:22:786 (1) - So soon after the spinner?
01:12:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - awkward
01:38:786 (1) - shorten
01:40:119 (1) - Start on white tick

[Normal]
aah clusterfucks and weird spacing/stacks, doesn't flow well at all
I hate this diff a lot.

00:15:786 (3,4) - Unstack.
00:24:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
00:25:286 (5) - Aah why is there a 0.5x slider here
00:28:119 (1) - Extend to white tick
00:34:786 (1,2,3) - Why?
01:12:618 (3,1) - Unstack. Why are these stacked in the first place?
01:13:452 (4,1) - ^
01:52:119 (1) until the end - Clustered, aah.

[happy30]
0.125x speed sliders? o_o (not actually a problem)

[Chaos]
Hitsounds might be too loud.
Sushi
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Sushi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
simplistiC

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
This feels very weird to play. Also, there are too many stacks, I think a lot of them are very awkward
00:16:953 (2) - Split into a note, a nonrepeating 1/2 slider, and then 1/2 slider that repeats once? Done
00:22:786 (1) - So soon after the spinner? Fixed
01:12:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - awkward Seems to be ok...
01:38:786 (1) - shorten Done
01:40:119 (1) - Start on white tick Done.

[Normal]
aah clusterfucks and weird spacing/stacks, doesn't flow well at all
I hate this diff a lot. Me too..didn't really like how it turned out but I'm too lazy/busy to remap it.

00:15:786 (3,4) - Unstack. Done.
00:24:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing. Done.
00:25:286 (5) - Aah why is there a 0.5x slider here ?
00:28:119 (1) - Extend to white tick Done
00:34:786 (1,2,3) - Why? Why not? Not like it's hard or anything.
01:12:618 (3,1) - Unstack. Why are these stacked in the first place? Fixed. No clue.
01:13:452 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:52:119 (1) until the end - Clustered, aah. Yeah...really easy if you can see it though.

Sushi971 wrote:

Damn it, 6x3min xP

[Easy]
00:12:786 (1) - why new combo? I...have...no...clue..
00:21:119 (1,1) - they are to close (considering time) don't forget it is supposed to be an Easy diff Fixed
01:38:786 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:40:202 (1) - 1/4 beat earlier ^

[Normal]
00:22:786 (1) - timing's wrong Fixed
00:25:036 (4) - ^ ^
00:28:119 (1) - ^^
00:32:619 (1,1) - too close for a normal. ^
00:54:619 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:49:952 (1,1) - ^ ^
this diff looks loke a Hard >_> Not really xD

[Insane]
02:15:119 (2,3) - too close? I think its fine.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[Easy]
00:18:786 (6,7) - spacing is a bit large.(new players can not beat it well)~suggestion~
01:17:453 (1) - remove new combo?
01:37:452 (1) - ^
01:41:452 (2) - make it 1/2 later

[Normal]
01:42:369 (4,5) - move 2 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~

[taka's Hard]
00:48:786 (1) - remove new combo?
obviously,its insane
change the name to taka's Insane

[happy30]
fine

[ignore's Chaos]
no problems

[Insane]
00:15:619 (9) - new combo?

nice map
star
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh

gdeath wrote:

[taka's Hard]
obviously,its insane
change the name to taka's Insane

THIS
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
:)
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
taka's Hard it should be taka's INSANE

overall, I'm not a fan of having to guess at whether something is a circle or a slider or even a repeating slider.
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
General
I think better to start Kiai Time @01:53:452 instead.
Also, all the diffs. are generally pretty... Hard.

Easy
This diff. is waay too hard for Easy... more like Normal...
Either replace this with your current Normal, or make it easier.

Combo Mod~
01:15:452 (3) - New Combo.
01:21:452 (8) - ^
01:26:786 (7) - ^
01:32:119 (4) - ^
01:36:119 (3) - ^
01:42:786 (3) - ^
01:46:119 (4) - ^
01:48:119 (7) - ^ (maybe?)

01:17:453 (1) - No New Combo (maybe?)
01:22:119 (1) - ^
01:24:786 (1) - ^
01:27:452 (1) - ^
01:33:452 (1) - ^
01:35:452 (1) - ^

Normal
ehrm, Normal+ much? I think so orz. Make it easier.

taka's Hard
I think you should rename to "taka's Insane".

happy30
Fine.

That's all I'll mod. Too many diffs for me orz. sorry.
Orkel
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450 posts
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Orkel
Love this map. Star'd.
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 1445 (-8 from current).

[General]
YGOkid's suggestion about the kiai, I agree with it. Maybe consider it.
For some odd reason, everytime I mod your maps, I always take note of the New Combos too much. :| From the looks of things, it's like you're putting a New Combo depending on the beat arrangements and not how it flows with the music; personally I like New Combos to be jiving with the music instead of the notes, but that's just me, and that most of the good maps I deem as 'good' actually have New Combos synced to the music rather than the note arrangement.
Turn the hitsound volume up please.

[Easy]
(uh, I must've accidentally modded this stuff with the new offset I got, so :P)
This is an Easy? Seriously? For a while I thought this was a Normal.
I personally don't like how much stacks were used, for an Easy at least.
01:18:445 (1) - for some reason this sounds really odd. I suggest changing it, but if you don't want to then I suggest you swap the new combos of 1 and 2.
01:24:778 (1) - remove new combo
01:33:444 (1) - ^
01:35:444 (1) - ^
01:52:444 (1) - this is why this is definitely not an Easy; it just seems too soon after a spinner lol
01:53:444 (3) - new combo
In general, in this chorus, the new combo placement looks very weird... >_>

[Normal]
This is a Normal? Seriously? For a while I thought this was a Hard.
Again, New Combos are kinda messy, but I can't point them all out since I'm a bit hasting atm... Consult someone about that.
01:42:619 (5) - maybe make it so that 3 is directly in the middle of the slider
CHORUS: WTH. THIS IS DEFINITELY A HARD.
Is it just me, or are people using stacks too much today?! >_>
I can't mod the first part of the chorus because of the excessive use of return stacks, which I am VERY weak at. I usually mod stuff by my playing intuition, and since I find return stacks to be hurtful to the eyes... >_>
Basically, what I'm trying to say is that the notes are a bit clusterfuck-ish in the middle... which I kinda don't like :(

[taka]
Definitely an Insane. WTH at the high OD though, lol.
00:20:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - clusterfuck >_< Really ugly. I suggest making it so that they're actually not covering up each other :|
01:30:119 (3,4,5,6) - evil :|
01:36:619 (7,8,9) - ...I couldn't see if this was a note or a slider.
01:39:452 (1,2,3,4) - WTF. Seriously. CHANGE.
01:50:119 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - sounds weird.
02:05:452 (4) - can't see this slider

[happy30]
00:27:786 (10) - maybe new Combo?
00:33:119 (10,1) - maybe swap New Combos?
00:47:114 (1) - I believe this speedup was a bit too sudden. Suggestion: maybe just make the entire soft part a slow one :|
01:23:113 (5,6,7,8) - personally don't like uneven stacks
02:04:445 (7) - New Combo definitely
02:05:278 (1,1,2) - remove new combo on 1,1, put on 2
Personally this is my favorite diff. so far

[ignore]
00:21:452 (5) - uh...?
00:41:952 (3) - I don't like this overlap.
00:52:119 (1,2,3) - no. Just no. Too much overlap.
01:57:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol'd at anti-jump. not saying you change it though; it was awesome X3
Insanely long break o_o
Yet again another really nice diff.

[Insane]
Again with the New Combos
02:41:453 (13) - stack it with 12
At least the stacks here are arranged in such a way that they're not clusterfucky and that they're actually readable. Out of all your diffs. this is the only one I find clean :|
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
fix

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - Masterpiece (simplistiC) [happy30].osu
Cillu
50 posts
Joined September 2008
Cillu
This shit needs a star, pronto!
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
Why are there 6 difficulties?
Dangaard
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Dangaard

JarJarJacob wrote:

Why are there 6 difficulties?
Why not?

and star for you (not modding since another MAT seems to be working on this)
orioncomet
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Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- Try Full-Submit again, when I downloaded This map have only [Easy] [Normal] [Insane]
- Delete "anime" from TAG because It will be on Genre
- Make sure that your Preview point all the diff are the same

[taka's Hard]
Maybe change name of this diff to taka's Insane ?
この難易度の名前を [ｔａｋａ’ｓ　Ｉｎｓａｎｅ] に変えてください
変えて欲しい理由は、この難易度はハードにしては難しすぎると思うからです(○｀ε´○)

[ignore's Chaos]
Error, 01:39:869 - Maybe here have 2notes on the same place.. I've missed But I'm always miss on the streams xD but auto play miss too =.=
Plz, Check this

nice nice, nice map set! Starrrrr ~ ☆
Linkred
83 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred
Amazing S i r i r u didn't get this one.

*star*
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. *.*

[General]
*There are two "trance" tags, so remove one of them from all diffs
*"happy30" tag should only be in their own diff (same for the other two guest diff name tags)

[Easy]
00:16:786 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard of a pattern for an Easy diff. I'd delete 1 and 2, since an Easy diff doesn't need to be mapped to every lyric/note/whatever, and this would make a much easier pattern. Also, have 3 a little bit more on top of 4 like you do at the beginning of this diff with 00:11:619 (1,2).
00:20:952 (6) - delete this note
00:22:786 (1) - too far from the center of the spinner
00:36:119 (1) - ^
00:39:453 (2) - shorten to the red tick
00:43:119 (2,1) - I don't like the pause between these.
00:46:286 (2,3,4) - I'd make this into a short, repeating slider. 3 1/2 notes in a row at 180BPM is kinda difficult for Easy.
00:50:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd try to avoid these upbeats for an Easy diff. Maybe make (1,2,3) into medium-size repeating slider and then (4,5,6) into a short, repeating one?
00:56:786 (6,7,8) - same as 46:286
01:14:119 (2,1,2,3,1) - Try to avoid these stacks since they're a bit difficult to read. Perhaps add a grid or two space between notes to make reading it as easy as possible.
01:22:119 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286
01:23:619 (1) - move closer to previous and remove a repeat so that the next note is easier to see and hit
01:24:452 (2) - don't have this stacked under 01:22:786 (6).
01:27:452 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286...
01:30:452 (2) - remove a repeat
01:34:786 (2,3,4) - you know the drill...
01:40:119 (1) - too far from center
01:46:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like this stack. =X It's kinda boring imo
01:53:452 (1) - shouldn't this go back to normal sampleset?
01:52:452 (1) - closer to center please (OR exactly in the center xp)
01:56:452 (4,5) - make into a repeating slider
01:57:452 (2,3,4) - dddddd
01:58:452 (1,2,3) - ;x
01:59:452 (1,2) - make into a repeating slider..
02:02:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks...
02:08:452 (4,5,6) - ^
02:12:786 (2,3,4,5) - too hard to read
02:17:452 (4) - end kiai here like in Normal.
02:27:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks
02:28:786 (2,3,4) - ^
02:32:786 (5,6,7) - too hard

[Normal]
01:53:452 (3) - start kiai here in like Easy.
*lots of craziness that I didn't get to mod x_x;;;

[taka's Hard]
*lower Overall Difficulty a notch or two ;x
00:21:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too hard to read under the 100/300's from the previous stream.
00:35:286 (4,5,6) - difficult to read
01:12:786 (5) - ^
01:17:452 (1) - end kiai on the end of this instead of the middle o-o
*stopped here

[happy30]
*no custom colors?

Sorry that I didn't mod all diffs, but I was getting kinda dizzy from the high OD and crazy spacing (sick from surgery atm). I didn't get to play and do an offset check either, but if anything, it might only be a few ms late. Some of these diffs really need work, but I'll leave that up to regular modders to help. Good luck x.x;

EDIT: Forgot to mention that I'd add a 1/2 or 1 second audio lead-in to all diffs so that the song fades in nicer.

EDIT 2: My mistake; tags should be the same in all diffs. Just remove the trance one as I said. Also, lead-in isn't really important. :p
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simplistiC
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Fixed most of the suggestions. As for the tags, the album name is called "EXIT TRANCE PRESENTS SPEED ANIME TRANCE BEST 7"...
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oh.. just want to tell you one thing that i forgot o.o
Source: To Aru Majutsu no Index
fartownik
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I've modded only 2 difficulties for not having much time, so don't gimme kudosu for this post. I'll mod the rest 4 difficulties tommorrow.

[Ignore]

Nice one.

00:10:952 (6) - This slider is hidden. Place it somewhere else.
00:21:452 (5) - Stack it properly?
01:03:952 (4) - Hidden slider repeat.


[Insane]

Generally, the difficulty is fine, most patterns are playable and fit the music, but there are exceptions. 00:11:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) [it's an example, there are more of them] - I can't understand - why did you do something like this? I feel like you force the map to be hard by adding few streams, mega-jumps and other hard stuff. I will say also that these patterns don't sound good. I hope you'll do something with this.

00:13:453 (4,6,7) - It's VERY confusing since (7) comes out from the end of (6). Please AT LEAST make a reverse selection on (7) (Edit -> Reverse Selection).
00:14:786 (8) - Hidden slider repeat.
00:20:119 (12) - ^ + new combo.
01:32:119 (11) - New combo.
01:56:952 (2) - Stack on the (7)'s end.
02:06:619 (5,6) - Spacing o.o
02:07:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The whole pattern has inconsistent spacing, it makes no sense since it's just small change. Also new combo at (4).
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[Easy]

00:51:786 (2,1) - Oh, come on, jumps? In an Easy? It's already hard, don't kill the newbies.
01:38:786 (1) - Isn't this spinner to short for an easy difficulty? Also the comeback after it is quite short.


[Normal]

Overmapped Normal... it looks like a Hard one.

00:16:786 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:18:119 (4,1) - ^

[Taka]

Some slider patterns are pretty weird, but it's rankable, so I don't see anything wrong.

[happy30]

Nothing.
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fartownik wrote:

I've modded only 2 difficulties for not having much time, so don't gimme kudosu for this post. I'll mod the rest 4 difficulties tommorrow.

[Insane]

Generally, the difficulty is fine, most patterns are playable and fit the music, but there are exceptions. 00:11:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) [it's an example, there are more of them] - I can't understand - why did you do something like this? I feel like you force the map to be hard by adding few streams, mega-jumps and other hard stuff. I will say also that these patterns don't sound good. I hope you'll do something with this.

00:13:453 (4,6,7) - It's VERY confusing since (7) comes out from the end of (6). Please AT LEAST make a reverse selection on (7) (Edit -> Reverse Selection).
00:14:786 (8) - Hidden slider repeat.
00:20:119 (12) - ^ + new combo.
01:32:119 (11) - New combo.
01:56:952 (2) - Stack on the (7)'s end.
02:06:619 (5,6) - Spacing o.o
02:07:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The whole pattern has inconsistent spacing, it makes no sense since it's just small change. Also new combo at (4).
Remapped everything pointed out and more.

fartownik wrote:

[Easy]

00:51:786 (2,1) - Oh, come on, jumps? In an Easy? It's already hard, don't kill the newbies. Fixed
01:38:786 (1) - Isn't this spinner to short for an easy difficulty? Also the comeback after it is quite short. Fixed


[Normal]

Overmapped Normal... it looks like a Hard one. Hate making easy/normal diffs.

00:16:786 (5,1) - Spacing. Think it should be fine.
00:18:119 (4,1) - ^ ^
Furawa
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Furawa
very very nice >w<//
jump jump >w<//
insane dont delete any jump plz plz ><map is so cool
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Fuuko
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Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Silence slider roll, it is pretty annoying at ignore's diff.
Normal:

Hm...The thing here is that it's a bit too hard for a normal, and it's hard to read in some parts. Why don't you turn up the OD by one tick and rename it to Normal+? It would solve both problems.
ignore's Chaos:

01:39:619 (11) - New combo.
02:36:036 - This break has 25 secs, max is 15.
Insane:

02:36:119 (1) - Silence the end.
02:38:286 ~ 02:49:452 - Claps don't go well on this part, remove them.
That's it, star for the awesome map.
Furawa
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Furawa
try this normal-hitwhistle? ><

Download: normal-hitwhistle.rar
simplistiC
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FuukoLover wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Silence slider roll, it is pretty annoying at ignore's diff.
Done
Normal:

Hm...The thing here is that it's a bit too hard for a normal, and it's hard to read in some parts. Why don't you turn up the OD by one tick and rename it to Normal+? It would solve both problems. Done...although I hate calling it "Normal+"

Insane:

02:36:119 (1) - Silence the end. Done
02:38:286 ~ 02:49:452 - Claps don't go well on this part, remove them. ^
That's it, star for the awesome map.Thanks for the mod Fuuko, and thank you SOGASOGAMO for the hitsound :3
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Andrew I miss you and I'm bored in this hotel! :(
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A very late mod. Very sorry.

Easy: Not a very easy diff, probably closer to a normal, but I guess it passes as an easy enough diff
Combo mod:
01:36:119 (1) - this new combo seems sort of random when most other combos followed the lyrics (not going to ask about consistency since the beginning has a very different combo pattern than this part)
01:53:452 - I personally wish that the whole kiai section starting here has combos that follow the lyrics like the first chorus
02:15:452 (1) - I wish I knew what the combos follow from this section onward

Normal+:
Normal mod:
This diff was quite confusing for me with a lot of stacks that made me wonder where to go. For example(00:18:953 (3,4), 02:27:119 (1,2), and the beginning half of the kiai section), but I might just be extremely weak at stacks. As a result, you do not need to change this if you don't want to.
02:02:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part felt a quite boring and repetitive to me

Combo mod:
00:53:786 (5) - new combo to follow the lyrics
00:58:786 (1) - I advise you make the combo sin this section 2 whole notes long so remove 01:03:119 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 01:03:953 (4) and remove 01:09:953 (1)'s new combo to add a new combo to 01:09:286. Then you can continue the pattern for the rest of the section
(note I did this pattern because it follow your current one, but it does feel weird because the music has a 4 whole note pattern and this pattern puts the 2nd and 3rd whole notes and the 4th and 1st whole notes together, so you might want to move the whole pattern forward or back a half note)
02:25:786 (1) - same as 00:58:786 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:52:119 - because you changed the hitsound type, a quarter note before this timing section, add a inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai

Taka's Hard:
This diff was very hard for me to read at times.

Timing section mod:
00:55:952 - move back a quarter note
00:57:369 - up the hitsound volume slightly to match the hitsound volume of the kiai section (or you can lower the kiai's section volume to the volume of this timing section)

happy30:
Timing section mod:
00:06:786 - unneeded timing section please remove

Combo mod:
03:19:943 (5) - new combo?

ignore's Chaos:
Combo mod:
01:41:452 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:44:119 (5)?

Timing section mod:
00:36:119 - move a quarter note backward
00:57:452 - ^

Insane:
This was quite difficult........

============================================
Sorry for making you wait so long. The map is pretty good overall. I guess I am mostly going to complain about normal+, so please take my suggestions there. That is all. Star.
Aenna
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very fun !! :)
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cool XD
Furawa
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omg ana fc it XDDD

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Dangaard
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[general]
"trance" appears twice in the tags, remove one of them ^^

[Easy]
put preview point to 180.119 ms (like in the other diffs)
00:39:453 (2) - remove the whistle sound on this?
00:39:953 (3) - too close to 2
I think the hitsounds are a bit weird at some places, especially the change from normal sample to soft feels kind of random.

[taka]
00:20:702 (1,2) - switch new combo to 2, I imagine playing this on tag mode :o, usually new combos on white ticks are easier

quite insane mapset :3
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taka's
00:21:369 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is very to read
01:39:452 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

Normal+:
just call it a hard, other than that it's fine

Happy30's:
Why does happy's have red timing sections shouldn't all the maps timing be the same?

Easy:
Fine

other diff look okay but really this map has far to many insane maps, I suggest either toning them down some or removing a few.
:(
Dangaard
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ztrot wrote:

Happy30's:
Why does happy's have red timing sections shouldn't all the maps timing be the same?
1/4 bpm slowdowns (actually it's quite obvious if you check the sliders in those time sections)
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Title : masterpiece :o
yaya
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hmm.
i agree with ztrot .. there're 5 Insane ..
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