M4M queue (-b*=*)-b

There's nothing too problematic that stands out in terms of the beatmap. Basically your main issue is spacing for hard and extreme.

Hard
02:10:830 - to 01:29:012 - and others like it are messy. It's important to have a structure so you aren't forcing people to go all over the place.

Extreme
00:43:558 -
01:39:558 -
Parts like these don't suggest jumps. Try using distance snap.

02:10:830 -
Elements like these were very confusing. They're just sort of random and messy. Maybe give them some more structure. That it could also help the aesthetics.

In general:

1.The volume is way too low on the hit sounds. Turn it up. Not only will it give better feedback for the player but the hit sounds you picked go well with the song and even emphasize it.

2. Change the lighter colors. A lot of the issues I ran into were simply because the objects were blending in with the background and/or the sea of already hit objects

Nice job. I hope this helped.

Last edited by dorillis 2014-08-01T16:57:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2014-08-01T16:56:25+00:00

dorillis wrote:
No Dap wrote:
Hi :3/

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/193583

Thanks in advance!!
There's nothing too problematic that stands out in terms of the beatmap. Basically your main issue is spacing for hard and extreme.

Hard
02:10:830 - to 01:29:012 - and others like it are messy. It's important to have a structure so you aren't forcing people to go all over the place.

Extreme
00:43:558 -
01:39:558 -
Parts like these don't suggest jumps. Try using distance snap.

02:10:830 -
Elements like these were very confusing. They're just sort of random and messy. Maybe give them some more structure. That it could also help the aesthetics.

In general:

1.The volume is way too low on the hit sounds. Turn it up. Not only will it give better feedback for the player but the hit sounds you picked go well with the song and even emphasize it.

2. Change the lighter colors. A lot of the issues I ran into were simply because the objects were blending in with the background and/or the sea of already hit objects

maybe you try map-forum post?

Cancel

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Cancel 2014-08-01T16:57:20+00:00

Cancelled_ - Hopes and Dreams

hope you like it~ :3

dorillis

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dorillis 2014-08-01T16:59:32+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
maybe you try map-forum post?

what? why?

P o M u T a

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Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2014-08-01T17:01:52+00:00

nothing to say, if your method this.
(i mean, if you posted beatmap thread, you can get kuosu)
normally people post beatmap thread. not modding queue thread.

dorillis

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Topic Starter

dorillis 2014-08-01T17:29:53+00:00

Cancel wrote:
Cancelled_ - Hopes and Dreams

hope you like it~ :3

This one was pretty fun.

00:30:638 (3) - In parts like these, this little guy is basically invisible. I can get every single object but because that one's in the wake of a previously hit object and because it's that light color you don't even know it's there. when it tells me it missed something I don't even know where that miss came from. Try moving it down so you can see it better.

00:50:031 - There are instances like these which suggest quick pressing when they aren't. It's pretty counterintuitive. Try spacing them out.

Lastly, try changing up the background from time to time.

Good job! I'm interested to see what you come up with for the othe difficulties.

dorillis

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dorillis 2014-08-01T17:34:10+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
nothing to say, if your method this.
(i mean, if you posted beatmap thread, you can get kuosu)
normally people post beatmap thread. not modding queue thread.

hm I think I get what you're saying. I want to post here mostly because I want to get better at creating beatmaps. A good way for me to do that is by modding. Also it's just nice helping people out.

dorillis

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dorillis 2014-08-01T17:54:52+00:00

skinnyjimmy wrote:
hello, i would appreciate a mod!

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/195944

thanks a lot

Oh Intense.

00:59:105 (8)
02:29:105 (4)
02:32:166 (1) - So these need to be moved one notch to the left and get moved on the playing field accordingly. Otherwise the objects sound off

02:34:079 (7)
03:02:855 (5) - Same with these but to the right.

I'd put most of the fast notes closer together. They seem just as far away as the slower notes. It can get very confusing. Try using distance snap to get an idea of what I mean.

Also I recommend changing the background. The objects get lost very easily in this one.

I hope that helps.

Jaltzu

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Jaltzu 2014-08-01T18:59:54+00:00

dorillis wrote:
hm I think I get what you're saying. I want to post here mostly because I want to get better at creating beatmaps. A good way for me to do that is by modding. Also it's just nice helping people out.

Did you really get what he / she said?
You should post your mods to modded map's own forum thread, because:
1. You'll get kudosu. You can't get kudosu when posting here.
2. Many people won't check this thread for modding posts, but instead their map's thread. If you post here, the map owner might not find your mod at all.

( ^ - x - ^)ฅ
Mapping Taiko is fun

dorillis

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dorillis 2014-08-01T19:10:16+00:00

oh. oh.... oooooooooh..... okay. sorry;
well time to fix that. wow i'm such an idiot. haha

-Neipezi

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-Neipezi 2014-08-01T19:53:15+00:00

modding queues sill open o.o?