1. osz.file is tooooo big, A map without video shouldn't larger than 10M D:
2. Please delete osb.file since it's useless, then full-submit
3. You must use same Stack Leniency in a map, now Linkred's Mild diff. is 0.2 while others are 0.7
4. Kotomi's Hard has no countdown whilt other 3 diff. have, you'd better unify that

1. 01:15:012 (1) - why here a unique 1

1. 01:37:231 (5) - Ends at blue tick is werid, ends at 01:37:325 white tick better IMO
2. 01:43:700 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 02:23:450 (1) - This slider is a little hard to read
4. 03:14:450 (5) - Slider ends here
5. 03:23:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Emm, never seen this pattern, I guess it's fine

1. I feel clap used no so good, remove some would better
2. 00:46:700 (x) - SB 2xBPM warning here
3. 01:36:950 (4,5) - sounds werid
4. 02:24:950 (x) - KIAI ends here
5. 02:30:950 (1,1,1) - Add finish
6. 03:14:075 (4,5) - Werid

Breeze wrote:

[*]00:46:700 (x) - SB 2xBPM warning here

lordfoster wrote:

OSB file is occupied by the difficulty "Extra Stage"

Breeze wrote:

[General]
[list][*]osz.file is tooooo big, A map without video shouldn't larger than 10M D:

1. The HP bar does not animate smoothly and looks sloppy. The actual bar goes over the design of the container.
2. Same goes for the follow circle, it animates too sloppily.
3. The score numbers are far too spaced out, and looks like this on a standard 800x600 screen. Note how the last 0 is under the HP bar.
4. imo, the hitcircle design is unnecessary
5. This is more of a personal gripe, but the combo burst is way too short. If you could make the demensions 388x767, that would be awesome. If you need to make it wider to scale it, thats fine, but the max is 500x width
6. There is no point to having a designed spinner-background like that. No one will even see it; all I see is a hand.

Teras wrote:

Hmm, after I updated this everything on all maps are COMPLETELY OFF.

If it's not only me, then I wonder how this can have so much priority. Will redwonload and see if it helps.. otherwise it's probably something wrong with the offset..

HailBlazR wrote:

To be blunt, I honestly don't see what's so great about this map.

To me, aesthetics don't make a map. That's why I'm so mad about Bad Apple; James's map is far superior to the one with the PV, yet the one with the PV gets all the plays and likes just because it has a PV. SO WHAT. If you want the PV, go to youtube and watch it. If you want to play a beatmap, then go on Osu. James is an awesome beatmapper, yet he doesn't get as much credit for the sole reason that he didn't have the PV.

Same concept here. This map LOOKS great. The skin is pretty and the patterns of the notes look nice.

But in all honesty, the note placements and hitsounds are horrible. I'm sorry, but to me, excessive whistles give me a headache unless done properly. (like in James's Bad Apple)
The stacks are just impossible, frankly. And there are way too many of them.
There's too much of a difficulty jump between hard and lunatic; and in EoSD, the game from which this spawned, difference between hard and lunatic is not so significant.
The part starting at 1:46... really, I'm just disappointed. That's my favorite part of this song, yet it's done terribly. You just used the same clap patterns repetitively and the same note patterns as well. I can't believe you had 2:25-2:28 as a break. That's like... the crux of the song, that one moment of sheer chaos that every one of Demetori's songs has.
The same clap patterns were used for pretty much the entire song, really, and it gets boring having to follow the same pattern repetitively.
And the EXACT same note patterns were used in the choruses of the song. You just flipped them.

To sum it up; map looks awesome, but sounds and plays horribly. It reminds me of a Mac; it's shiny and looks nice but functions terribly.

CDFA wrote:

Re-looking a this map, the timing seems off. I'm not a master timer, but the claps seem to come a bit late. Also, later in the song, there must be a 2/4 or 3/4 measure somewhere, as the metronome goes 1 full beat off.

CDFA wrote:

After re-reading the thread, I've noticed that I probably have the old mp3, so the timing might be off. In that case, disregard my statements until I check this new mp3 out.

Also, just as a note:

osuplayer111 bubbled this map on the 30th of March. The new rule for "only 2 of any mode." was established on April 4th. Abalee, Remmy, MM, and osuplayer wouldn't have cared, because the rule was not put into place at the time they modded it.

Adding a note on the BAT stars thing, having 4 BAT stars doesn't mean anything. It means 4 BATs modded your map and liked it. It doesn't suddenly mean that nobody can find problems in it. My point is, ztrot pass over 4 bats, and say, "oh pop"

Also, I'm not neccesarily sure if maps that have a diff going for approval count towards the total limit of modes.This need more of one bubble

Plus, the diff spread is kind of wierd. EIII? I understand that one of the modes is supposed to be a hard mode, but it DOES seem kind of wierd. I'm not going to say anything more on this though, as I'm not really an expert on if a map should be ranked based on ranking spread.One of the dif is hard, no insane, If u play it u can notice that

CDFA wrote:

Having 4 BATs modding it and then having another BAT popping it doesn't really mean anything. It just means that ztrot noticed something the other 4 BATs might have missed or overlooked. I talk to other people about this, and they say "a unclear post like always", I can't see a reason for make a pop in this song.