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Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial

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Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Remove "Lunar Clock Luna Dial demetori" from tags.
Uh oh, you seem to have deleted 2 of the background images. When the "xxx.jpg and xxx.jpg files are unused, remove?" dialogue pops up, click No. They're actually the background for the 2 other difficulties.
Comboburst is too wide, max is 500px width.
Unused files:
- ranking-back.png
- ranking-replay.png
- ranking-retry.png
- .osb file
Lots of little white patches near the edges for skin elements, clean those up?
Don't really like the spinner, since it doesn't give much of a sense of where the center actually is, and how fast it's spinning. As well, the background seems vertically squished.

Jumping from 2 stars to 5 is a bit harsh, consider a middle Normal?

[Linkred's Easy+]

Eh, Easy+ is weird. Is it Easy or Normal?
Unrankably low stack leniency.
This map has countdown different from the other diffs.

01:22:700 (1,2,3) - Awkward sounding repeats...

[Hard]

More like an Insane.

00:42:200 (1,2,3) - Watch spacing; 1-2 and 2-3 are equally spaced, but time-wise, are different.
00:53:075 (1) - Spacing in this section is messed.
01:24:387 (1,1,1) - Don't need so many new combos. I'm also concerned with how the slider heads fall on the off-beats (Red ticks) instead of the white ones, which plays much nicer.
01:27:387 (1,1,1) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very random pattern. (also finishes hurt the ears, including the parts after this)
02:04:700 - This break doesn't make much sense.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - Random and unexpected, repeats are concealed by the hitbursts.
02:25:325 - End kiai before the break?

Same comments as before for the last section of the map.

[Insane]

Max score is quite high.

00:25:325 (4) - Totally out of nowhere.
00:36:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^, and spacing between sliders is inconsistent.
00:48:950 (1,2,3) - Bleh, antijump.
01:00:387 - Remove this break; too short.
01:09:575 - Weird place to start a break, map a bit more.
01:22:700 - Spacing here is ridiculous, make it more reasonable.
01:35:825 (1,2) - Weird timing.
01:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern.
01:42:199 (15,1) - Spacing is way too big already, why this jump mid-stream?
01:46:700 - Stream is way too long, not fun.
01:52:887 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.

Not going to keep modding this, mostly just the spacing is way too crazy and it feels like a really long stream with a few breaks. I recommend you scrap this difficulty, make Hard your Insane, and map a proper Normal/Hard.

Good luck!
[DBF]
1,827 posts
Joined January 2009
[DBF]
Its really cool~ take it, star~

irc mod, lol.
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DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
I don't know a blank spinner circle is rankable or not...


~Linkred's Easy+~
02:04:418 (4) - move 1/4 left

~Lunatic~
SliderTickRate:1
00:29:262 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:762 (1) - ^
00:53:450 (1) - ^
00:53:825 (1) - ^
00:58:325 (3) - new combo
01:12:200 (4) - ^
01:13:887 (10) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move up 1 grid & left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:39:387 (7) - new combo
01:42:387 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:575 (11) - new combo
01:51:575 (6) - ^
01:54:575 (11) - ^
01:57:575 (11) - ^
02:00:575 (6) - ^
02:03:575 (6) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:23:450 (2) - ^
02:33:387 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:887 (1) - ^
02:38:825 (4) - new combo
02:40:512 (13) - ^
03:12:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
03:16:512 (7) - new combo
03:19:512 (1) - remove new combo

~Extra Stage~
00:16:700 (5) - new combo
00:22:700 (5) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:19:043 (1) - remove new combo
03:23:825 - end the map here


+Star
Linkred
82 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred
Edit: Added sounds and changed the diff to a less-weird name.

Alright bg image was submitted.

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Linkred's Mild].osu
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Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
En general no le veo nada "malo" al map excepto que es muy dificil xDD me gusto la cancion y esos blanco,azul y rojo sugestivos xDDDD

El unico detalle sep es que en extra stage son muy rapidos los sliders.

Mi estrellita man y suerte.
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Kotomi-chan
La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Normal].osu

Linkred
82 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred

Kotomi-chan wrote:

La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game


Te quedo bacano, man.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Wow, que bueno el mapa!! :O

[Linkred's Mild]

01:37:512 (5,6) - Spacing
01:39:012 (8) - ^

[Kotomi's Hard]

00:35:825 (4,5) - Puedes alinear esto con la nota anterior?
01:52:793 (1) - Yo empezaría el spinner en el tick blanco (01:52:700), pero acábalo en el mismo sitio ee xD
01:55:700 (1) - Acaba el spinner en el tick blanco (01:58:721)
02:35:825 (1) - Alinea esto con la nota anterior (?)
Veamos, hay un pequeño lío con unas notas, colócalas dónde te digo ok? (usa 1/6) ^^
02:52:575 (1), 02:52:825 (2), 02:53:075 (3), 02:53:325, 02:53:575 (5), 02:53:825 (6)
02:56:825 (8) - New combo
03:14:825 (6) - ^

[Lunatic]

AWESOME!

[Extra Stage]

Resnap all notes!


Bueno, y eso es todo creo, te doy una estrella! :)
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
The whole map looks really messy, mostly because of confusing skin elements (like sliderfollowcircle.png, hit50.png, hit100.png which are almost 100% black), but it's about putting notes too.


[Linkred's Mild]

Set the slider tick value to 1. 2 sounds odd.

00:37:887 (2,3) - Spacing. Stack it on vanishing end of the slider or move somewhere else.
00:58:700 (5) - New combo.
[01:22:700] - Start kiai?
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:28:700 (3) - ^
01:31:700 (4) - ^
01:31:700 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:55:700 (2) - New combo.


[Kotomi's Hard]

Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?

00:36:200 (5) - New combo.
[00:57:200] - Add a note.
00:57:575 (7) - Delete clap from first repeat (00:57:950) and from the end (00:58:700) and add a clap to the start (00:57:575) and to the second repeat (00:58:325). Sounds much better.
00:59:075 (8) - Add a clap and new combo.
00:59:450 (2) - Delete clap.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:40:700 (9) - ^
02:17:450 (9) - ^
02:22:512 (6) - Unrankable hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:22:512 (6,1) - Also spacing.
[03:11:825] - Start kiai again.


[Lunatic]

Raise HP Drain a bit (1-2 ticks).

[00:46:325] - Add a note.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:13:887 (1) - This slider is hidden. Please move the repeat up (read the spoilerbox).
SPOILER
01:26:825 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
01:28:325 (4) - ^
01:42:200 (2) - New combo.
01:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds it the same like 01:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
[02:04:700] - Add a note.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - This slider placement isn't okay. I don't know what to expect about this pattern while playing. Please unstack them and space with Distance Spacing.
02:40:512 (1) - The same problem with hidden hitsound like before. Move the repeat up.
03:03:950 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
03:05:450 (4) - ^
03:19:512 (3) - ^
03:24:950 (1) - Make this slider looks normal. It looks like a note and don't fit this place.
03:27:950 (4) - ^
03:31:512 (1,2,3) - Unrankable. Move (2,3) somewhere else.


[Extra Stage]

Awwr. Overmapped.
Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?
Also I have no idea why is it mapped with soft-hitsounds type.

00:33:012 (15,1) - Spacing. I didn't know it's the continue of the stream or the 1/4 break.
00:34:418 (14,15) - ^
00:37:325 (1,2,1,2) - Samples sound odd. Hitsounds it the same like 00:36:762 (1,2).
00:38:450 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:40:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Please do something with these hitsounds. All of the notes are claps and it's totally out of the rhythm.
01:47:637 (11) - New combo.
01:50:637 (11) - New combo.
02:01:700 (1) - Hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:14:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The way how it sounds... It's weird. If you delete the clap from 02:14:450 (1) and make all of the triples sound like this, it will be much better.
02:19:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:450 (6) - New combo.
02:32:075 (1) - Make this slider straight?
02:52:512 (1) - End this slider at [02:53:825].
[02:54:012] - Add a break.
[02:59:825] - [03:23:450] - I don't like how this part has been copy-pasted.
03:18:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same problem with hitsounding.

+star
Kujo
149 posts
Joined July 2009
Kujo
Star mah niggah (am i allowed to say that? D: )
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
I didn't check the whole map, but i have to say that i am impressed o.o

A really great work for a first map, really.

Some suggestions, in the meanwhile:

- Skin:
  • I think you need a spinner, or at least draw a dot to let the player see the centre xD
    cont3.png is not so good, Sakura is squashed xD
- Extra Stage:
  • From 00:28:700 to 00:31:500, the pattern is really ugly in play mode because of the stacking: you should turn stacking down until you don't get that effect or place them a little differently... D:
Kd-star, keep up the good work, maybe i'll make a full mod soon for this one ^^
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. "touhou" doesn't need to be in tags, since it's already set for source. Also, tags must be the same for all difficulties.
  2. The ending for each map is rather awkward IMO, but I guess you had no choice, since the max score would be too high.
[Skinning]
  1. The files that were mentioned by Kytoxid weren't deleted (or you deleted them but didn't full submit).

Kytoxid wrote:

Unused files:
- ranking-back.png
- ranking-replay.png
- ranking-retry.png
- .osb file
  • Also the "scorebar-colour.png" image seems to be unused.
  1. Please shrink up the "spinner-circle.png" image to 1x1 or similar, players might have performance issues with that size. BATs might not rank it with a transparent spinner anyway.
  2. Please resize/crop all background images to 1024x768 or similar.
  3. Crop the upper side of the comboburst, it's unnecessary transparency which needs to be deleted.
  4. Maybe write up some numbers in the countdown?
  5. Maybe include a white border for the "Are you ready?" and "Start!" images? They're barely visible right now.
[Linkred's Mild]
  1. Why is stack leniency set like that? I can understand the sliders, but 00:17:450 (4,5,1) just won't work, since it's unrankable. You could change either these patterns or all those slider stacks.
[Kotomi's hard]
  1. Capitalize the h in "hard".
  2. While the map is technically fine, I suggest you to recheck overall spacing. There were some iffy parts in the map that might need fixing, like 01:03:200 (3,4) for example.
  3. Also, you might want to reduce the finish hitsounds a bit...
[Extra Stage]
  1. The max score attainable is a bit too high, I think... the difficulty is just overmapped.
~ ~ ~

Everything else is quite fine, though I think it can be even better. If you want, call me back to do an IRC mod so I can help you out even more.
Last edited by Gens , edited 1 time in total.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
LinkRed's Mild
01:22:700 (1) - clap this slider's start
02:07:700 (5,6,7) - move them a square down (and a square right for 6th)

Kotomi's Hard
[General] You had better to see some of the fixes suggested by AIMod about spacing. (Ctrl+Shift+A in Edit mode)
00:49:700 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end
00:57:575 (7) - end it with finish instead of clap
00:59:825 (3) - clap here
01:34:325 (7) - add a repeat on this slider
02:52:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - find a more intuitive spacing for these 1/3 beats... to put them into a single pile won't be so fun for players to understand the rhythm...

Lunatic
00:34:418 (2,5) - remove claps here

Extra Stage
00:31:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - refine spacing... some beats are further than others!

Hitsound-placing can be better, but for a 1st attempt of mapping this is a good starting foot!
Keep up the good work! (Star'd.)
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Other Stuff]
The spinner is freaking invisible and I can't see the center point. Add a few knives and make the center a little more obvious. Look at Cyclone's touhou skin for an example.
Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on.

Dislike the flashy and distracting silderball and the circle surrounding the sliderball, but that's just my opinion.


[Lunatic]
01:26:825 (1,1,2,3) - Godammit all this stacking from the previous notes makes this hard to follow. Difficulty is not an excuse.
01:44:825 - End kiai before the break, because it makes the red combo after the break flash. Try it.
From 01:49:700 (1) to 02:00:200 (5) - Borrrinngggg.
02:17:450 (1) - Ugly and hard to follow.
02:23:450 (1) - ^
02:49:325 (1) - ^
03:03:950 (1,1,2,3) - Godammit all this stacking from the previous notes makes this hard to follow. Difficulty is not an excuse.


[Extra]
Why do I even bother modding this streamfuck
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

JInxyjem wrote:

[Other Stuff]
The spinner is freaking invisible and I can't see the center point. Add a few knives and make the center a little more obvious. Look at Cyclone's touhou skin for an example.
Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on.

Dislike the flashy and distracting silderball and the circle surrounding the sliderball, but that's just my opinion.

"Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on."
If done the spinner of clock it would look bad.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
... I COULD use this opportunity to make the Sakuya spinner I've been promising people...
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"

[Kotomi's Hard]

  • • Add some Source
[Lunatic]

  • • Add some Source
[Extra Stage]

  • • Add some Source
darkpriest_old
darkpriest_old
Buen mapa lord :B ojala lo suban luego :roll:
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
#spanish mod let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Source: Si "Il Mondo dove e finito il Tempo" es el nombre del álbum en el que aparece la canción, elimínalo. Pon Touhou en su lugar.

~Linkred's Mild~
00:24:200 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
01:25:700 (1) - ^
01:31:700 (1) - ^
02:05:825 (3) - Arregla el spacing.

~Kotomi's hard~
- Pon la h de Hard en mayúsculas.
- Uhhh... muchos finish hitsounds en mi opinion x_x

00:49:513 (5) - Arregla el spacing.
00:55:700 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:825 (4) - Colócalo encima de (1)?
01:16:325 (2) - Arregla el spacing.
02:14:825 (2) - ^
02:20:075 (3) - ^
02:43:325 (3) - ^
02:56:075 (6) - ^
02:59:450 (6) - ^

~Lunatic~
- El combocolour rojo resulta muy dificil de ver a veces debido al rojo intenso del fondo xD Cambialo a otro que se vea mejor x3

00:43:700 (3) - Colócalo debajo de (2)
00:45:387 (2) - La flecha de repetición del slider está escondida, no es rankeable >.<
00:45:950 (4) - ^
01:10:700 (3) - Copia y pega (1) y haz un flip horizontal.
01:13:325 (7,8) - Colócalos debajo de (1,2)
01:15:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Haz que los finales coincidan en un mismo punto.
01:26:825 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - Esta parte es muy dificil de ver teniendo los circulos de antes x_x
02:04:325 (9) - Coloca el slider al final del stream y no debajo?
02:15:950 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Sepáralos un poco más.
02:17:450 (1) - Este slider es muy dificil de ver con los circulos de antes (a lo mejor si los mueves se ve un poco mejor, no se o.o)
02:39:950 (7,8) - Colócalos debajo de (1,2)
03:03:950 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - Lo mismo de antes... son muy dificiles de ver :/
03:24:200 (3) - New Combo.
03:24:575 (5) - ^
03:28:887 (3) - ^
03:29:262 (5) - ^

~Extra Stage~
- El combocolour blanco es muy dificil de ver aquí debido al blanco del fondo xD Cambialo a uno que se vea mejor.
- Sigo diciendo que veo esta dificultad para ir a approved xD

00:25:325 (4) - Tienes que hacer un aviso para el 2xbpm
00:36:200 (1) - ^
01:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - o_o' Creo que esto es mucho xD
01:43:700 (15) - Arregla el spacing.
03:15:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Digo lo mismo de antes xDDD
03:20:825 (15) - Arregla el spacing.

*star*~ Buena suerte :3

EDIT: Speed-up/slow-down Storyboard by request:


Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Extra Stage].osu


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Linkred
82 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Linkred's Mild~
00:24:200 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
01:25:700 (1) - ^
01:31:700 (1) - ^

fartownik wrote:

[Linkred's Mild]
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:31:700 (4) - ^
Uhh...
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Foster Don
ise todos los cambio solo me faltan monitos para señalar el 2xbpm
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
:D
onigiri-lol
78 posts
Joined October 2009
onigiri-lol
estrellado lord, lindo mapa :3
paatriix
3 posts
Joined November 2009
paatriix
:)
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
01:37:231: has que ese lado del slider no suene o cambiale el hitsound

el lado derecho es el que molesta el izquierdo esta bien :)

01:53:450-01:54:387: has esos jump más largos que los anteriores

01:53:450: New combo (?)
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Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Lunatic]

  • • 00:54:012 (6,1) - Spacing
    • 02:03:200 (5,1) - ^
[Extra Stage]

  • • 02:36:387 (1,2) - 1 square up (grid level 3)
    • 02:36:950 (1,2) - 1 square down (grid level 3)






EDIT:

• Delete the .osb, then "Full submission".
• "Konachan.com - 66199 gray_hair izayoi_sakuya kanaria_(artist) maid red_eyes ribbons short_hair touhou weapon.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels :S


EDIT:

Pubbled~
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Foster Don
THX xxheroxx :)
Rosa1339
29 posts
Joined November 2008
Rosa1339
Star! :D
Suteko_old
2 posts
Joined January 2010
Suteko_old
Lo jugaré ;)
nico97
16 posts
Joined November 2008
nico97
estrellita :)
Fralkayg
1 post
Joined March 2010
Fralkayg
una estrella al mapa :B xd
Liitaaah
6 posts
Joined December 2009
Liitaaah
exe : )
Noutyr
70 posts
Joined June 2009
Noutyr
esta geniaal x3

aunque el kotomi hard esta medio facil

me gusto mucho haci que estrella x3
Raha_old
Raha_old
te amo weon :B
_v1toko_
7 posts
Joined December 2009
_v1toko_
esta entrete el map asi que te doy la estrella :D merecida eh!
budnik
2 posts
Joined January 2010
budnik
good
mincubill
6 posts
Joined July 2008
mincubill
nice
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
star!
Dark_Nero_old
1 post
Joined March 2010
Dark_Nero_old
Good Map (!!Very Good!!) (Recomendado)
Kablo
29 posts
Joined September 2009
Kablo
I like it, star.
ssggaa
2 posts
Joined November 2008
ssggaa
muy bien me agra el map :D, y te doy una star
salazar84
18 posts
Joined February 2010
salazar84
me gusto =3
Don_Burger
10 posts
Joined December 2008
Don_Burger
Star request :D!
Hohoa
[-SpaCe-]
3 posts
Joined February 2010
[-SpaCe-]
star :)
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
Ok suerte lo estoy jugando
shysiima
3 posts
Joined January 2010
shysiima
hey aki te escribo :)
X= shysiima
3ly_S
188 posts
Joined March 2008
3ly_S
Una estrellota bien estreellada :3
com ne come nee que sera rankeada xd
Saludotes
lota78
45 posts
Joined November 2008
lota78
buen trabajo =), estrella para vos.. y un regalito ^^

Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
No me des kudosu por esto =P

Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. osz.file is tooooo big, A map without video shouldn't larger than 10M D:
  2. Please delete osb.file since it's useless, then full-submit
  3. You must use same Stack Leniency in a map, now Linkred's Mild diff. is 0.2 while others are 0.7
  4. Kotomi's Hard has no countdown whilt other 3 diff. have, you'd better unify that
[Kotomi's Hard]
  1. 01:15:012 (1) - why here a unique 1
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:37:231 (5) - Ends at blue tick is werid, ends at 01:37:325 white tick better IMO
  2. 01:43:700 (x) - KIAI ends here
  3. 02:23:450 (1) - This slider is a little hard to read
  4. 03:14:450 (5) - Slider ends here
  5. 03:23:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Emm, never seen this pattern, I guess it's fine
[Extra Stage]
  1. I feel clap used no so good, remove some would better
  2. 00:46:700 (x) - SB 2xBPM warning here
  3. 01:36:950 (4,5) - sounds werid
  4. 02:24:950 (x) - KIAI ends here
  5. 02:30:950 (1,1,1) - Add finish
  6. 03:14:075 (4,5) - Werid
star
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2009
Beuchi

Breeze wrote:

[*]00:46:700 (x) - SB 2xBPM warning here


Oops I forgot this one o: Fixed ^^
Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Extra Stage].osu

Also:

lordfoster wrote:

OSB file is occupied by the difficulty "Extra Stage"
El OSB no lleva nada en tu map, el storyboard esta en el mismo archivo que la dificultad [Extra Stage] (por eso te mando el .osu :P) Asi que si te dicen de borrarlo (que seguro lo haran xD) tu hazlo que no pasara nada :3
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Looks like I was a bit late...

Apply Breeze's mods pl0x
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Looks like I was a bit late...

Apply Breeze's mods pl0x
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
March 22: +28 SP
Right now: +51 SP

:D~

(Even though there's a rule for it has to be under 20, I'll mod this anyway, while I have the time)

Mild:
Rocking the socks.

Hardl:
Socking the rocks.

Lunatic:
00:35:825 - Add note with clap
00:45:950 (4) - Add clap on second repeat and end of slider.
02:17:450 (1) - I'm not sure about this. Don't remove it, but I'm just bringing it to the attention of other modders who would know if this is good or not .-..
02:49:325 (1) - ^
Increase hitsound volume.

Extra:
<3~

ok ok ok star. :3~
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
re-size the spinner-approachcircle.png to 390x390 could be better.

Kotomi's Hard
00:43:700 (4,5) - Spacing?

Extra Stage
01:04:325 (1,2,1) - Just feel a bit strange about the placement...
01:41:918 (12,10,11,12) - Spacing?
Kujo
149 posts
Joined July 2009
Kujo

Breeze wrote:

[General]
[list][*]osz.file is tooooo big, A map without video shouldn't larger than 10M D:
Ever downloaded a whole Demetori album before? If you haven't you should :> all their songs are in super high quality and long, so because of that the files are always huge.
abalee
osu! Alumni
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abalee
Done
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Foster Don
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
thx abalee :P
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
(*)
RemmyX25
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
Popping bubble.

Yes, I agree with the statement that the file size is rather large. I would highly recommend that you try and compress some of the files to lower this.

Second off, I have a few problems with the skin.

  1. The HP bar does not animate smoothly and looks sloppy. The actual bar goes over the design of the container.
  2. Same goes for the follow circle, it animates too sloppily.
  3. The score numbers are far too spaced out, and looks like this on a standard 800x600 screen. Note how the last 0 is under the HP bar.
  4. imo, the hitcircle design is unnecessary
  5. This is more of a personal gripe, but the combo burst is way too short. If you could make the demensions 388x767, that would be awesome. If you need to make it wider to scale it, thats fine, but the max is 500x width
  6. There is no point to having a designed spinner-background like that. No one will even see it; all I see is a hand.
Third, both Lunatic and Extra Stage are both 5 stars. Is this really necessary?

Mild:
Circle size could be larger

Extra Stage:
Feels extremely overmapped and has a max score of 16million. This wont pass ranking like this.
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Impossible to rank with Extra Stage difficulty ... S:

approval?
Linkred
82 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred
EDIT: Uagh IE me sigue jodiendo los temas donde posteo.

Ojala hubiera boton de borrar posts como en la mayoria de foros.
Lumiere
163 posts
Joined November 2008
Lumiere
Aqui presentandome para otorgar la merecida Star !

Buen trabajo Lord ^^
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
I don't know if this would still count/help, but yeah, you can ignore this if you want to.

Extra Stage
I don't know if these are intentional, but those really bothered me.
00:36:668 (2) - this beat is not perfectly placed beneath the previous slider's end point. Turn off grid snap and set distance snap multiplier to 0.0x and resnap that beat.
00:37:230 (2) - ^
00:37:793 (2) - ^
00:38:355 (2) - ^
00:47:168 (2) - ^
00:48:293 (2) - ^
00:48:855 (2) - ^
01:37:793 (6) - ^
01:38:918 (3) - slider ^
01:47:730 (1) - move one grid to the left
01:47:730 (1) - ^
01:47:543 (9) - ^

That new spinner is kickass

Here you go.
ft1717492
98 posts
Joined June 2009
ft1717492
:) nice map~star~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Hmm, after I updated this everything on all maps are COMPLETELY OFF.

If it's not only me, then I wonder how this can have so much priority. Will redwonload and see if it helps.. otherwise it's probably something wrong with the offset..
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens

Teras wrote:

Hmm, after I updated this everything on all maps are COMPLETELY OFF.

If it's not only me, then I wonder how this can have so much priority. Will redwonload and see if it helps.. otherwise it's probably something wrong with the offset..
Indeed, I gave lordfoster a new mp3 which needed a new offset, so you have to redownload.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Bivuendo!

[General]
1) Your map needs an easier diff
2) Cut the mp3 please

[Skin]
Can you make a spinner transparent, it's really cute if transparent

[Linkred's Mild]
Why this Stack Leniency is level 0?
00:15:267 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe try another pattern? It's boring
00:28:767 (1) - It's looks ugly, I prefer you to make it curve
01:22:767 (1,2,1,2) - These repeating slider make all player boring, try make another pattern?

[Kotomi's Hard]
00:28:767 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing error
01:15:079 (1) - OMFG, it's horrid! Delete this object, it's more chaos you know

[Lunatic]
00:33:267 (6) - Looks ugly, make it symetric?
02:33:454 (3) - Ugly slider, make it curve?
02:34:954 (3) - ^
02:49:392 (1) - Ugly slider........
02:50:892 (3) - ^

[Extra Stage]
I don't like this diff, it's lot's of deathstream. But you map it so well
03:31:579 (1) - Ugly slider, make it curve?
03:31:954 (2) - ^
03:32:329 (3) - ^
03:32:704 (4) - ^

Not bad
STAR
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
ia...



Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Foster Don
"Extra Stage" is going for approved
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Nice offset 0.0
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
If you don't know already, I'm waiting for see this map bubbled for check it, because Remmy checked it before me.
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
3,087 posts
Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
oi

i've been busy

Actually hold on i need to check offset It's fine
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Oh, Extra Stage going for approval...
In that case, Bubbled #2!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Linkred's Mild]

Stack leniency is unrankable. Increase it by 2 or 3 ticks.

EDIT: Bubble #1~
[Strike]
58 posts
Joined June 2009
[Strike]
nice map!

star^^
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
Missing skin elements such as a return arrow and the diff spread is a bit meh. pop!
HailBlazR
56 posts
Joined November 2008
HailBlazR
To be blunt, I honestly don't see what's so great about this map.

To me, aesthetics don't make a map. That's why I'm so mad about Bad Apple; James's map is far superior to the one with the PV, yet the one with the PV gets all the plays and likes just because it has a PV. SO WHAT. If you want the PV, go to youtube and watch it. If you want to play a beatmap, then go on Osu. James is an awesome beatmapper, yet he doesn't get as much credit for the sole reason that he didn't have the PV.

Same concept here. This map LOOKS great. The skin is pretty and the patterns of the notes look nice.

But in all honesty, the note placements and hitsounds are horrible. I'm sorry, but to me, excessive whistles give me a headache unless done properly. (like in James's Bad Apple)
The stacks are just impossible, frankly. And there are way too many of them.
There's too much of a difficulty jump between hard and lunatic; and in EoSD, the game from which this spawned, difference between hard and lunatic is not so significant.
The part starting at 1:46... really, I'm just disappointed. That's my favorite part of this song, yet it's done terribly. You just used the same clap patterns repetitively and the same note patterns as well. I can't believe you had 2:25-2:28 as a break. That's like... the crux of the song, that one moment of sheer chaos that every one of Demetori's songs has.
The same clap patterns were used for pretty much the entire song, really, and it gets boring having to follow the same pattern repetitively.
And the EXACT same note patterns were used in the choruses of the song. You just flipped them.

To sum it up; map looks awesome, but sounds and plays horribly. It reminds me of a Mac; it's shiny and looks nice but functions terribly.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Re-looking a this map, the timing seems off. I'm not a master timer, but the claps seem to come a bit late. Also, later in the song, there must be a 2/4 or 3/4 measure somewhere, as the metronome goes 1 full beat off.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Okey, enought of this.







ztrot, first read the previous post, diff spread is not a problem.
Missing skin? Remmy request take off parts of the skin, If i don't remember bad you can always use your default skin, when I play this I haven't problems with skin.

HailBlazR wrote:

To be blunt, I honestly don't see what's so great about this map.

To me, aesthetics don't make a map. That's why I'm so mad about Bad Apple; James's map is far superior to the one with the PV, yet the one with the PV gets all the plays and likes just because it has a PV. SO WHAT. If you want the PV, go to youtube and watch it. If you want to play a beatmap, then go on Osu. James is an awesome beatmapper, yet he doesn't get as much credit for the sole reason that he didn't have the PV.

Same concept here. This map LOOKS great. The skin is pretty and the patterns of the notes look nice.

But in all honesty, the note placements and hitsounds are horrible. I'm sorry, but to me, excessive whistles give me a headache unless done properly. (like in James's Bad Apple)
The stacks are just impossible, frankly. And there are way too many of them.
There's too much of a difficulty jump between hard and lunatic; and in EoSD, the game from which this spawned, difference between hard and lunatic is not so significant.
The part starting at 1:46... really, I'm just disappointed. That's my favorite part of this song, yet it's done terribly. You just used the same clap patterns repetitively and the same note patterns as well. I can't believe you had 2:25-2:28 as a break. That's like... the crux of the song, that one moment of sheer chaos that every one of Demetori's songs has.
The same clap patterns were used for pretty much the entire song, really, and it gets boring having to follow the same pattern repetitively.
And the EXACT same note patterns were used in the choruses of the song. You just flipped them.

To sum it up; map looks awesome, but sounds and plays horribly. It reminds me of a Mac; it's shiny and looks nice but functions terribly.
Go to cry to another song please and don't support "pop" without reason

CDFA wrote:

Re-looking a this map, the timing seems off. I'm not a master timer, but the claps seem to come a bit late. Also, later in the song, there must be a 2/4 or 3/4 measure somewhere, as the metronome goes 1 full beat off.
I rechek this, but it's not a problem.


My point is zrot don't play the song and pop it for "E-I-I-I" and don't read and ask first because this song is "E-I-I" "I"


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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
After re-reading the thread, I've noticed that I probably have the old mp3, so the timing might be off. In that case, disregard my statements until I check this new mp3 out.

Also, just as a note:

osuplayer111 bubbled this map on the 30th of March. The new rule for "only 2 of any mode." was established on April 4th. Abalee, Remmy, MM, and osuplayer wouldn't have cared, because the rule was not put into place at the time they modded it.

Adding a note on the BAT stars thing, having 4 BAT stars doesn't mean anything. It means 4 BATs modded your map and liked it. It doesn't suddenly mean that nobody can find problems in it.

Also, I'm not neccesarily sure if maps that have a diff going for approval count towards the total limit of modes.

Plus, the diff spread is kind of wierd. EIII? I understand that one of the modes is supposed to be a hard mode, but it DOES seem kind of wierd. I'm not going to say anything more on this though, as I'm not really an expert on if a map should be ranked based on ranking spread.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

CDFA wrote:

After re-reading the thread, I've noticed that I probably have the old mp3, so the timing might be off. In that case, disregard my statements until I check this new mp3 out.

Also, just as a note:

osuplayer111 bubbled this map on the 30th of March. The new rule for "only 2 of any mode." was established on April 4th. Abalee, Remmy, MM, and osuplayer wouldn't have cared, because the rule was not put into place at the time they modded it.

Adding a note on the BAT stars thing, having 4 BAT stars doesn't mean anything. It means 4 BATs modded your map and liked it. It doesn't suddenly mean that nobody can find problems in it. My point is, ztrot pass over 4 bats, and say, "oh pop"

Also, I'm not neccesarily sure if maps that have a diff going for approval count towards the total limit of modes.This need more of one bubble

Plus, the diff spread is kind of wierd. EIII? I understand that one of the modes is supposed to be a hard mode, but it DOES seem kind of wierd. I'm not going to say anything more on this though, as I'm not really an expert on if a map should be ranked based on ranking spread.One of the dif is hard, no insane, If u play it u can notice that
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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Having 4 BATs modding it and then having another BAT popping it doesn't really mean anything. It just means that ztrot noticed something the other 4 BATs might have missed or overlooked.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

CDFA wrote:

Having 4 BATs modding it and then having another BAT popping it doesn't really mean anything. It just means that ztrot noticed something the other 4 BATs might have missed or overlooked. I talk to other people about this, and they say "a unclear post like always", I can't see a reason for make a pop in this song.
Well continue this discussion don't make sense, others bat ignore this problem (like always). How they say, ztrot need post a clear reason for pop this.
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
the timing was fine the skin wasn't finished and the diff spread was a bit unbalanced that's all
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Ia espero q esto solucione todo xD

Download: Skin.rar



ztrot
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2008
ztrot
the paused screen is still to small other than that you are done fix that plz
ztrot
osu! Alumni
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ztrot
:)
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Mafiamaster
Bubble #2 again.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.7.00 Go~

Osz. File Scan

[Current] Size: 10.5 MB
Extra/Duplicated Objects: 0
Video & Format: No video
.mp3 Bitrate: 192Kbps
SB (Story Board): Yes
SB (Story Board) Scan: Pass
Background: Yes
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes (Could have added The Embodiment of Scarlet Devil and have the full name of Sakuya Izayoi...)
Song Name Check: Yes
Flash Effects Warning: None


[Linkred's Mild]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 106,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / .80
[Current] Max Combo: 184
[Current] Max Score: 310,080
[Current] Star Rating: 1.82
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.2

00:30:283 (2,3) - The spacing is broken here. Compare it to 00:32:908 (5,6), and (3) could be a new combo note.
01:04:783 (2,3,4) - I can understand that this is an approved map, but still..... something like this for an "easy" difficulty is going to be too confusing.
01:22:767 (1,2,1,2) - Please be more creative about this. This is done quite lazy....

Notes: The spacing could have been fixed up a bit better. Its like it was manually snapped then wasn't. Also, try adding some more creativity to this difficulty.

[Kotomi's Hard]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 94,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 143,423ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 151,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
8. Offset: 152,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
10. Offset: 188,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
11. Offset: 191,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
12. Offset: 197,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 204,079ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) <-
14. Offset: 204,267ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) <- The kiai fountain seems pointless and not used right at this section


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.50
[Current] Max Combo: 531
[Current] Max Score: 3,016,772
[Current] Star Rating: 4.65
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:29:517 (2,3) - Could have been lined up better.
01:40:767 (1,2) - Too close together.
01:52:392 (1) - This note is just..... there. Look into making better use of the beats.
01:58:954 - This would be too early for a break. There was just a note and two spinners.....
02:13:392 (6,1) - Too close together.
02:16:017 (6,7,8,9,1) - Broken spacing.
02:21:267 (5,6) - ^
02:22:579 (7,1) - ^
02:23:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - What is up with this stack? The notes don't flow evenly and is really hard to read set like this. Try doing something more creative like jumps (not TOO far apart).
02:54:642 (2,6) - If you take (2) and flip it horizantally, you can see it fails to line up right into (6). Make sure your shapes are even.
02:55:392 (4,1) - (Similar issue as above ^)
02:59:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Broken spacing. Make sure it is even.
03:04:579 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
03:11:142 (5,6,1) - ^
03:14:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:28:392 (4,5,6,1) - ^

Notes: WAY TOO MUCH slider use. If the map is to be a real "hard", try to use more notes and less sliders. Also, please look into adjusting combo color #4. Its a bit too dark and blends with the current background some.

[Lunatic] (Modding...)

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 103,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 112,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 118,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
8. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 200,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.60
[Current] Max Combo: 797
[Current] Max Score: 12,257,880
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:28:767 - Why does the map start here and the others start earlier?

Notes: Honestly, this difficulty is lacking some creativity. There are copy & pasted sections that could have been worked over some. Try to be more creative and use the sliders less for harder difficulties. Also, the hitsound use would need some work as well (like the claps at the start for example. It stands out too much in the song and is used too much).

[Extra Stage]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 25,392ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
3. Offset: 28,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 36,267ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
5. Offset: 49,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
7. Offset: 94,954ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
8. Offset: 104,329ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 112,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
10. Offset: 118,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
11. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
12. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 152,142ms BPM: Inhereted (0.5x)
14. Offset: 152,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
15. Offset: 155,824ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
16. Offset: 161,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
17. Offset: 166,392ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
18. Offset: 172,392ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
19. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
20. Offset: 191,704ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.80
[Current] Max Combo: 957
[Current] Max Score: 15,177,694
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:36:267 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Looks like a copy, paste, and flip with broken spacing...
01:22:767 ~ 02:25:017 - This speed up section is really screwy. Especially with the current use of the sliders and the copy and pasted sections. Just about the point its overmapped. Also, the end of the speed up section is missing the slow down warning.
02:17:517 (1,2,3) - Can't see the notes on this stack. The slider is in the way.

Notes: This difficulty is overdone and is lacking in some creativity. Notes are being forced into place, plenty of copy and pasted notes, broken spacing, and the speed up sections need some work.

Overall: The map could still use some work before being bubbled again honestly. Try to use more patterns and less sliders while trying to organize the spacing. Also, the spinner-approachcircle.png looks quite odd. It looks more like a ring cut out of a BG image than a neatly done skin object. Lost the rest I was going to say due to the power surge, but this should just about sum it up.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.7.00 Go~

Osz. File Scan

[Current] Size: 10.5 MB
Extra/Duplicated Objects: 0
Video & Format: No video
.mp3 Bitrate: 192Kbps
SB (Story Board): Yes
SB (Story Board) Scan: Pass
Background: Yes
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes (Could have added The Embodiment of Scarlet Devil and have the full name of Sakuya Izayoi...)
Song Name Check: Yes
Flash Effects Warning: None


[Linkred's Mild]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 106,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / .80
[Current] Max Combo: 184
[Current] Max Score: 310,080
[Current] Star Rating: 1.82
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.2

00:30:283 (2,3) - The spacing is broken here. Compare it to 00:32:908 (5,6), and (3) could be a new combo note.
01:04:783 (2,3,4) - I can understand that this is an approved map, but still..... something like this for an "easy" difficulty is going to be too confusing.
01:22:767 (1,2,1,2) - Please be more creative about this. This is done quite lazy....

Notes: The spacing could have been fixed up a bit better. Its like it was manually snapped then wasn't. Also, try adding some more creativity to this difficulty.

[Kotomi's Hard]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 94,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 143,423ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 151,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
8. Offset: 152,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
10. Offset: 188,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
11. Offset: 191,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
12. Offset: 197,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 204,079ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) <-
14. Offset: 204,267ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) <- The kiai fountain seems pointless and not used right at this section


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.50
[Current] Max Combo: 531
[Current] Max Score: 3,016,772
[Current] Star Rating: 4.65
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:29:517 (2,3) - Could have been lined up better.
01:40:767 (1,2) - Too close together.
01:52:392 (1) - This note is just..... there. Look into making better use of the beats.
01:58:954 - This would be too early for a break. There was just a note and two spinners.....
02:13:392 (6,1) - Too close together.
02:16:017 (6,7,8,9,1) - Broken spacing.
02:21:267 (5,6) - ^
02:22:579 (7,1) - ^
02:23:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - What is up with this stack? The notes don't flow evenly and is really hard to read set like this. Try doing something more creative like jumps (not TOO far apart).
02:54:642 (2,6) - If you take (2) and flip it horizantally, you can see it fails to line up right into (6). Make sure your shapes are even.
02:55:392 (4,1) - (Similar issue as above ^)
02:59:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Broken spacing. Make sure it is even.
03:04:579 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
03:11:142 (5,6,1) - ^
03:14:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:28:392 (4,5,6,1) - ^

Notes: WAY TOO MUCH slider use. If the map is to be a real "hard", try to use more notes and less sliders. Also, please look into adjusting combo color #4. Its a bit too dark and blends with the current background some.

[Lunatic] (Modding...)

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 103,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 112,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 118,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
8. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 200,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.60
[Current] Max Combo: 797
[Current] Max Score: 12,257,880
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:28:767 - Why does the map start here and the others start earlier?

Notes: Honestly, this difficulty is lacking some creativity. There are copy & pasted sections that could have been worked over some. Try to be more creative and use the sliders less for harder difficulties. Also, the hitsound use would need some work as well (like the claps at the start for example. It stands out too much in the song and is used too much).

[Extra Stage]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 3,267ms BPM: 160.00
2. Offset: 25,392ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
3. Offset: 28,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 36,267ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
5. Offset: 49,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 82,767ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
7. Offset: 94,954ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
8. Offset: 104,329ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
9. Offset: 112,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
10. Offset: 118,767ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
11. Offset: 134,517ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
12. Offset: 145,017ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 152,142ms BPM: Inhereted (0.5x)
14. Offset: 152,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
15. Offset: 155,824ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
16. Offset: 161,892ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
17. Offset: 166,392ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
18. Offset: 172,392ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
19. Offset: 179,892ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)
20. Offset: 191,704ms BPM: Inhereted (2x)

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: .5 / 1.80
[Current] Max Combo: 957
[Current] Max Score: 15,177,694
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: None (Set it to "Default")
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.5

00:36:267 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Looks like a copy, paste, and flip with broken spacing...
01:22:767 ~ 02:25:017 - This speed up section is really screwy. Especially with the current use of the sliders and the copy and pasted sections. Just about the point its overmapped. Also, the end of the speed up section is missing the slow down warning.
02:17:517 (1,2,3) - Can't see the notes on this stack. The slider is in the way.

Notes: This difficulty is overdone and is lacking in some creativity. Notes are being forced into place, plenty of copy and pasted notes, broken spacing, and the speed up sections need some work.

Overall: The map could still use some work before being bubbled again honestly. Try to use more patterns and less sliders while trying to organize the spacing. Also, the spinner-approachcircle.png looks quite odd. It looks more like a ring cut out of a BG image than a neatly done skin object. Lost the rest I was going to say due to the power surge, but this should just about sum it up.
omg xDDDD
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Why EXTRA STAGE difficulty is changed OMG was fantastic


ç_ç please post me old version
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
old ver :p

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Extra Stage].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
ok why is this not ranked yet ;~;.
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Thanks so much ztrot :D
Lunah_old
Lunah_old

CDFA wrote:

ok why is this not ranked yet ;~;.
lordforest changed the map, because old version was too hard for rank
Linkred
82 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred

whymeman wrote:

[Linkred's Mild]


00:30:283 (2,3) - The spacing is broken here. Compare it to 00:32:908 (5,6), and (3) could be a new combo note.
01:04:783 (2,3,4) - I can understand that this is an approved map, but still..... something like this for an "easy" difficulty is going to be too confusing.
01:22:767 (1,2,1,2) - Please be more creative about this. This is done quite lazy....
Oh my map was quite different back then, but constant modding just ended in lordfoster being forced to make that/those sections the way they are now.
ZeosFury
ZeosFury
i go to play it cuz my GF helped =D just for that .. btw.. DEMETORI FANS!!
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
MAP DEAD*
Orkel
osu! Alumni
450 posts
Joined September 2008
Orkel
Why? This is a great map, come on, try to resurrect it please!

also star
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