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[Open:]
00:25:270 (3) - Slider overlaps itself :[
01:40:813 (8) - Move the slider one tick to the right on the timeline and put an extra beat in this stream. \
01:59:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This is like, very unrankable.
02:17:993 (2) & 02:19:448 (5) - You can't see the lenght of the slider due to overlapping ;[
02:58:357 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no music wich makes it really hard to time these and it's hard to read due to overlapping.
03:01:448 - End this kiai section right after the final beat.
00:06:734 (2) - Unsnapped
00:40:005 (19) - Unsnapped
00:42:913 (18) - Unsnapped
01:55:457 (1) - Unsnapped
01:55:639 (2) - Usnapped
Look over the 1BPM sections again, try to fix the unsnapped beats and be sure the timing and offset is the same as in the other diffs.
Away from the red sections everything looks fine for ranking to me
00:25:270 (3) - Slider overlaps itself :[
01:40:813 (8) - Move the slider one tick to the right on the timeline and put an extra beat in this stream. \
01:59:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This is like, very unrankable.
02:17:993 (2) & 02:19:448 (5) - You can't see the lenght of the slider due to overlapping ;[
02:58:357 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no music wich makes it really hard to time these and it's hard to read due to overlapping.
03:01:448 - End this kiai section right after the final beat.
00:06:734 (2) - Unsnapped
00:40:005 (19) - Unsnapped
00:42:913 (18) - Unsnapped
01:55:457 (1) - Unsnapped
01:55:639 (2) - Usnapped
Look over the 1BPM sections again, try to fix the unsnapped beats and be sure the timing and offset is the same as in the other diffs.
Away from the red sections everything looks fine for ranking to me
对不起，我只学汉语学了三年了，所以我说得不太好。
[Normal]
00:35:643 (1) - 多我来说，太多finish
,请把slider repeat的finish删除吧？
[Hard]
00:45:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase spacing？
01:08:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:13:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
[Open's Difficulty]
O_O
[Insane]
不错
*star
[Normal]
00:35:643 (1) - 多我来说，太多finish
,请把slider repeat的finish删除吧？[Hard]
00:45:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase spacing？
01:08:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:13:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
[Open's Difficulty]
O_O
[Insane]
不错
*star
Here I am, to recheck this one 
Ok, everything is ok for me. I only have one question and a request.
EDIT: Normal: 00:26:915 (3) - i told you to add a beat, not a whole slider xD I think it feels weird, but it's your choice anyway.
Please capitalize the F in "Beautiful fighter". I know angela is not capitalized, but the title is, it looks better.
As soon as you do this, ask me for a protobubble, the map is ok.
Ok, everything is ok for me. I only have one question and a request.
EDIT: Normal: 00:26:915 (3) - i told you to add a beat, not a whole slider xD I think it feels weird, but it's your choice anyway.
Please capitalize the F in "Beautiful fighter". I know angela is not capitalized, but the title is, it looks better.
As soon as you do this, ask me for a protobubble, the map is ok.
MP3 and BGs are missing D:
I just got the .osz file with only 5 .osu files in it.
I just got the .osz file with only 5 .osu files in it.
Yeah, i noticed that too.
I asked Clare to make a full reupload, but BG and mp3 are still missing O.o
I dunno what happened and i feel it's my fault for telling him/her to fix the "F" ç_ç
EDIT: osz now is fine. Title fixed.
Protobubbled ^^
I asked Clare to make a full reupload, but BG and mp3 are still missing O.o
I dunno what happened and i feel it's my fault for telling him/her to fix the "F" ç_ç
EDIT: osz now is fine. Title fixed.
~Normal~
00:18:734 - remove clap here
00:24:552 - ^
00:44:552 (1) - end on white tick
00:58:552 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:824 (1) - ^
~Hard~
00:06:552 (5) - new combo
00:06:733 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:643 (1) - ^
00:47:279 (1) - start on left blue tick
~Open's Difficulty~
00:06:734 (2) - silence the slideslide and the last note
01:01:086 (1) - start on left white tick, add hitfinish
01:17:813 (4) - new combo
01:38:358 (8) - ^
01:40:722 (7,8) - sounds weird
01:44:176 (8) - new combo
01:54:177 (1) - silence the sliderslide
01:55:631 (2) - ^
02:08:175 (6) - end on white tick
02:22:539 (1) - start on left red tick, add hitfinish
02:46:539 (1) - silence the sliderslide
02:49:448 (1) - ^
02:50:902 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:01:812 - end Kiai here
~Insane~
00:17:097 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:915 (1) - ^ , add clap at first note
00:29:824 (1) - silence the sliderslide
00:35:643 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:824 (2) - new combo
00:41:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:461 (2) - new combo
00:58:006 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:461 (3) - add clap at 1st & 3rd notes
01:20:733 (5) - new combo
01:21:279 (1) - remove new combo
~Crazy~
00:15:824 (4) - remove clap at middle note
00:17:643 (4) - remove clap at first note, add clap at middle note
+Star
00:18:734 - remove clap here
00:24:552 - ^
00:44:552 (1) - end on white tick
00:58:552 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:824 (1) - ^
~Hard~
00:06:552 (5) - new combo
00:06:733 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:643 (1) - ^
00:47:279 (1) - start on left blue tick
~Open's Difficulty~
00:06:734 (2) - silence the slideslide and the last note
01:01:086 (1) - start on left white tick, add hitfinish
01:17:813 (4) - new combo
01:38:358 (8) - ^
01:40:722 (7,8) - sounds weird
01:44:176 (8) - new combo
01:54:177 (1) - silence the sliderslide
01:55:631 (2) - ^
02:08:175 (6) - end on white tick
02:22:539 (1) - start on left red tick, add hitfinish
02:46:539 (1) - silence the sliderslide
02:49:448 (1) - ^
02:50:902 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:01:812 - end Kiai here
~Insane~
00:17:097 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:915 (1) - ^ , add clap at first note
00:29:824 (1) - silence the sliderslide
00:35:643 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:824 (2) - new combo
00:41:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:461 (2) - new combo
00:58:006 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:461 (3) - add clap at 1st & 3rd notes
01:20:733 (5) - new combo
01:21:279 (1) - remove new combo
~Crazy~
00:15:824 (4) - remove clap at middle note
00:17:643 (4) - remove clap at first note, add clap at middle note
+Star
[Normal]
00:37:461 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这一段完全不合拍。
作为一个normal,你的SV太快了，mapset不好。重新设置一下
[Open's diff]
UGLY
00:06:734 - there're 2 section lines .
00:06:907 - ^
01:54:177 - ^
01:56:358 - ^
02:02:176 - ^
02:02:903 - ^
02:34:357 - ^
02:39:083 - ^
there're 65535 objets unsnaped .
use aimod check it.
[Crazy]
UGLY
50%的note和slider与背景音不合，我觉得我可以不听音乐打这张。
这张排列好丑。好好修一下吧。
要在TAG里加上跟你合作map人的名字。每个难度都加。
MP3太长了要切掉一块。
.osb文件删掉。full upload.
00:37:461 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这一段完全不合拍。
作为一个normal,你的SV太快了，mapset不好。重新设置一下
[Open's diff]
UGLY
00:06:734 - there're 2 section lines .
00:06:907 - ^
01:54:177 - ^
01:56:358 - ^
02:02:176 - ^
02:02:903 - ^
02:34:357 - ^
02:39:083 - ^
there're 65535 objets unsnaped .
use aimod check it.
[Crazy]
UGLY
50%的note和slider与背景音不合，我觉得我可以不听音乐打这张。
这张排列好丑。好好修一下吧。
要在TAG里加上跟你合作map人的名字。每个难度都加。
MP3太长了要切掉一块。
.osb文件删掉。full upload.
來給星了-ˇ-
STAR~
STAR~~~~
乃可不可以找TV size 的 mp3 再做 = =
要不就切掉后面的，群里随便找一大堆人能做 >_>
要不就切掉后面的，群里随便找一大堆人能做 >_>
不嫌大就扔俩mp3进去，各不影响 
而且我那本来就是赶出来的图，各种不具合满载，要影响rank了就割掉随意=w=
而且我那本来就是赶出来的图，各种不具合满载，要影响rank了就割掉随意=w=
very good .. star~[Overall]
Add an "hitcircleoverlay.png" and a "spinner-approachcircle.png" on the folder and full submit.
[Difficulties]
[Normal]
00:37:643 (1) - Sounds weird.
00:37:643 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too evil for the most easier difficulty.
[Hard]
Why different timing here? Use the same timing for all the difficulties!
00:47:097 (1) - Never start spinners on blue tick if not really necessary.
[Open's Revenge]
Video is from TV size and you mapped all the song on this difficulty. Seems really weird because other diff are TV size mapped, and because the other minutes of the map are with no video and only the background. I suggest to cut the mp3 and do a TV size for all the difficulties. Honestly, I suggest to remove this difficulty. Oh and if you don't want to remove this, I suggest you to map completely all the difficulties, don't forget to remove here audio lead-in.
[Insane]
00:26:552 (5,1) - Too close.
[Crazy]
00:26:552 (2,1) - Unexpected change of spacing.
Add an "hitcircleoverlay.png" and a "spinner-approachcircle.png" on the folder and full submit.
[Difficulties]
[Normal]
00:37:643 (1) - Sounds weird.
00:37:643 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too evil for the most easier difficulty.
[Hard]
Why different timing here? Use the same timing for all the difficulties!
00:47:097 (1) - Never start spinners on blue tick if not really necessary.
[Open's Revenge]
Video is from TV size and you mapped all the song on this difficulty. Seems really weird because other diff are TV size mapped, and because the other minutes of the map are with no video and only the background. I suggest to cut the mp3 and do a TV size for all the difficulties. Honestly, I suggest to remove this difficulty. Oh and if you don't want to remove this, I suggest you to map completely all the difficulties, don't forget to remove here audio lead-in.
[Insane]
00:26:552 (5,1) - Too close.
[Crazy]
00:26:552 (2,1) - Unexpected change of spacing.
用Quote
不要用Report
不要用Report
still a star.
Hard:
这个的timing又不同了。最后面的timing又差了1ms。看看是哪一个timing section出错了。同时请resnap，后面的出错了。
Open's
timing和其他的不同。这个有01:28:086的时间点其它的没有。请检查哪里出错了。
Crazy:
01:25:005 (1) - extend to 01:28:096 (1) -
我建议后面的spinner都结束在同一个时间上并用无声，这样听起来好一点。
Hard:
这个的timing又不同了。最后面的timing又差了1ms。看看是哪一个timing section出错了。同时请resnap，后面的出错了。
Open's
timing和其他的不同。这个有01:28:086的时间点其它的没有。请检查哪里出错了。
Crazy:
01:25:005 (1) - extend to 01:28:096 (1) -
我建议后面的spinner都结束在同一个时间上并用无声，这样听起来好一点。
我好喜欢啊...虽然动画奇烂无比但是我也看完了啊...op都不跳的啊
星星啊!!!
edit:open里的那个break 是没做完的还是其他原因? 因为其他难度这里都没有break啊...最好也把这里填上吧.
try this open's
remember to backup yours first.
Download: angela - Beautiful Fighter (Clare) [test].osu
remember to backup yours first.
Download: angela - Beautiful Fighter (Clare) [test].osu
easy
00:38:642 和 00:40:460 作为spin1的头尾吧
00:41:551 和 00:43:369 作为spin2的头尾吧
00:44:460 这里的话 似乎不用spinner 随便加几个note再在 00:47:369 开一个spinner比较好
01:06:642 的break或者和上面类似比较好
hard
well ><
open
节奏很好...但是需要美化工作啊...
例如00:39:823 (16,17,18) - 和00:42:550 (13,14,15,16,17) - 明显看上去形状不一样
00:56:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这些位置微调一下
insane
well
crazy
01:20:824 和01:22:278 的停顿似乎有点违和...建议再填几个圈上去..
00:38:642 和 00:40:460 作为spin1的头尾吧
00:41:551 和 00:43:369 作为spin2的头尾吧
00:44:460 这里的话 似乎不用spinner 随便加几个note再在 00:47:369 开一个spinner比较好
01:06:642 的break或者和上面类似比较好
hard
well ><
open
节奏很好...但是需要美化工作啊...
例如00:39:823 (16,17,18) - 和00:42:550 (13,14,15,16,17) - 明显看上去形状不一样
00:56:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这些位置微调一下
insane
well
crazy
01:20:824 和01:22:278 的停顿似乎有点违和...建议再填几个圈上去..
To next modder: the unsnapped objects in Open's are snapped in 165 BPM
The comboburst.png is too explicit making the beatmap unrankable. Find a new one or remove it.
165.02 BPM seems to make the notes a little bit better synced closed to the end of the map.
165.02 BPM seems to make the notes a little bit better synced closed to the end of the map.
Topic Starter
Mafiamaster wrote:
The comboburst.png is too explicit making the beatmap unrankable. Find a new one or remove it.
165.02 BPM seems to make the notes a little bit better synced closed to the end of the map.
comboburst.png is fixed
open's diff i can't change bpm because this diff have too many bpm
You or Open is going to have to find a way.
You may even have to scrap the 41.25 BPM all together since that's what is causing such a huge problem in the map or the lack of timing sections to keep the metronome synced with the song.
I could probably help tomorrow in my free time but indeed a BPM of 165.02 does sound better.
You may even have to scrap the 41.25 BPM all together since that's what is causing such a huge problem in the map or the lack of timing sections to keep the metronome synced with the song.
I could probably help tomorrow in my free time but indeed a BPM of 165.02 does sound better.
[Open]
00:40:732 (1) - This starts too early.
00:43:641 (1) - ^
01:20:273 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These sound a tad bit late. Move these 1/6 of a tick back so it's synced with the vocals.
01:24:273 (1) - Start this on the white tick.
Overall, move your uninherited timing sections on top of notes to keep the metronome from going offbeat.
Again, It'd probably be best if the 41.25 timing sections were gone to make it a little easier to keep the notes from going into anything but the red and white ticks. (Not counting 1/8 notes~)
00:40:732 (1) - This starts too early.
00:43:641 (1) - ^
01:20:273 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These sound a tad bit late. Move these 1/6 of a tick back so it's synced with the vocals.
01:24:273 (1) - Start this on the white tick.
Overall, move your uninherited timing sections on top of notes to keep the metronome from going offbeat.
Again, It'd probably be best if the 41.25 timing sections were gone to make it a little easier to keep the notes from going into anything but the red and white ticks. (Not counting 1/8 notes~)
Topic Starter
Mafiamaster wrote:
[Open]
00:40:732 (1) - This starts too early.
00:43:641 (1) - ^
01:20:273 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These sound a tad bit late. Move these 1/6 of a tick back so it's synced with the vocals.
01:24:273 (1) - Start this on the white tick.
Overall, move your uninherited timing sections on top of notes to keep the metronome from going offbeat.
Again, It'd probably be best if the 41.25 timing sections were gone to make it a little easier to keep the notes from going into anything but the red and white ticks. (Not counting 1/8 notes~)
ok i fixed
Alright, bubbled!
Have to pop for some reasons, sorry.
[Overall]
Remove file .osb and full submit.
Mp3 ends a bit weird. Can you do a fade out?
[Difficulties]
[Open's Revenge]
Remove Audio Lead-In.
00:08:095 (3) - Remove one repeat on this slider.
00:12:458 (1) - ^
EDIT: Rebubbled~
[Overall]
Remove file .osb and full submit.
Mp3 ends a bit weird. Can you do a fade out?
[Difficulties]
[Open's Revenge]
Remove Audio Lead-In.
00:08:095 (3) - Remove one repeat on this slider.
00:12:458 (1) - ^
EDIT: Rebubbled~
this song is so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
the insane diff is good, but you shoudl have used normal slider speed here 00:54:635 (1)
anyways, no need to change it, i guess it gives some variation.
more or less, star!
the insane diff is good, but you shoudl have used normal slider speed here 00:54:635 (1)
anyways, no need to change it, i guess it gives some variation.
more or less, star!
irc moded.
fine for me now
fine for me now
This map needs a dif between [Normal] and [Hard] imo.
Also [Hard] is [I] in the list but its fine if you played it.
Won't popped for this so have a star.
Also [Hard] is [I] in the list but its fine if you played it.
Won't popped for this so have a star.
Topic Starter
i don't add new diff D:
i think now is fine
but thank you for your suggestions
i think now is fine
but thank you for your suggestions
I'm happy
Repair >////< Gogogo for the rank gold
finally ranked .lol
yea agreed finally ranked, gratz
congra~