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Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2010-02-03T19:34:54+00:00

- Just half of the mp3 is mapped, cut a part of it. (lol the mp3 is bigger than the video)
- The hitcircle has a small dot outside of the circle itself at the right. Remove it.
- There is an inherited section (green line) ON the actual timing section (red line). Remove the inherited and enable soft hitsound s in the first timing section.
- I can't read chinese/japanese, if other players made a difficulty be sure to credit them for their difficulties (in the OP or difficulty name) unless they don't want to. Also add their usernames as a tag.

[Hard:]
00:17:651 (4) - Distance snap
00:40:560 (1,2,3,4) - This overlap is ugly and very hard to read because of the too short distance.
01:07:651 (3) - Distance between this slider and the previous one differs from the patterns before it. > 01:04:014 (2,3)

There are other small spacing errors, I suggest you check out the 1/2 beats again. It looks better when the distance between them is the same.

[Insane:]
This map is perfect o_o

[Lunatic:]
01:24:908 (6) - I'd put a new combo on this one

That will do, be sure to fix the general errors at the top of this post. The insane difficulties look great ;>

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-03T21:10:48+00:00

thanks~

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-03T22:00:28+00:00

- General:

Are Angela and Fighter supposed to be capitalized?
itcircle.png should be fixed: it's very pixelated and there are some "dots" that stand out (check carefully in the editor, you should see a white dot to the right of every hitcircle)
Every difficulty has a different offset: I found 734 to be the best one. Please apply it to every difficulty and be sure to resnap all notes and recheck the whole map (you may need to fix some inherited sections)

- Normal:

.Suggestions:
00:26:953 - add a beat here?
make this end at 01:27:999?

- Hard:

.Opinions:
Good job here

- Open's Difficulty:

.Opinions:
00:46:722 (6) - LOLWUT
02:23:00 - 02:46:00 - people will complain about this long break, maybe.
Anyway, this difficulty is awesome. It's really awesome, there are things i've never seen before, great job on this one ^^

- Insane:

.Opinions:
Fine.

- Lunatic:

.Opinions:
Lunatic? O.o This isn't a touhou map xD
Anyway, this seems ok too ^^

Consider this starred when timing is fixed (i'll trust you and star it now btw

) and kudosu star is for the "Open's difficulty", that one was great.
Ask me again for another check, you may get a protobubble ^^

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-03T22:34:00+00:00

thanks~

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2010-02-04T00:30:00+00:00

moded on irc
star

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-02-04T00:31:23+00:00

lesjuh wrote:
- The hitcircle has a small dot outside of the circle itself at the right. Remove it.

maybe you forgot to fullsubmit, you should change this if you didn't already.

[general]
remove the .osb file from your folder (or at least the code of the picture it is SBing, since the picture isn't in the folder)

[Normal]
Be carefull with shorter return sliders and beats shortly after the end of spinners, these possibly make your normal harder than you think. Also the breaks feel randomly placed here.

[Hard]
actually there is no need for the first green line at all, you can put soft-sample to the red line.
01:10:370 (1) - should start 1 blue tick later (keep the end though = make the slider a bit shorter)

[Crazy]
seems a bit random on some parts, and the last slider looks a bit unshaped/unfinished

[Open's Difficulty]
maybe you should remove the video for this diff since this is full size.
resnap the following beats:
00:06:734 (2) -
00:40:005 (19) -
00:42:913 (18) -
01:55:457 (1) -
01:55:639 (2) -

00:50:176 (1) - move this a bit around in timeline, it's not snapped properly
01:13:449 (1) - end kiai time here?
01:40:540 (5,6,7,8) - I would make this a triplet-slider combination as well
01:58:539 (2) - yay, thats fast^^
01:59:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - might be really hard to read
02:03:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same here
02:17:993 (2) - slider is pretty much hidden
02:19:448 (5) - same here
make the last kiai section end shortly after last beat

I'm not telling you what to do, I just pointed out what you might rethink of.

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-04T01:19:29+00:00

thanks~

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-04T11:40:48+00:00

Overall :
[Crazy]PreviewTime: 37635
[Hard]PreviewTime: 37651
[Insane]PreviewTime: 37453
[Normal]PreviewTime: 37453
[Open's Difficulty]PreviewTime: 37453
把所有难度的PreviewTime设定成同一个数值（以上是你现在的设定，有些细微的差别）

[Normal]
01:25:279 (1) - make it start on 01:25:461 and end on 01:28:006(听起来更好)
Cancel lead-in

[Hard]
00:23:097 (10) - 和00:22:370 (7)保持平行

[Open's Difficulty]
00:11:270 (2,3,1,2) - 建议修改，太难读懂了。
最后一个Break时间有点长了，缩短点。
i dont like this diff :[

[Insane]
cancel lead-in
00:45:280 (2,3,4) - 这种连续下3 clap的方法都得改。sound bad.根据歌曲本身的鼓点，每隔一条白线下一个clap
01:24:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 按照上面的方法改掉，其他我就不罗列了

[Crazy]
cancel lead-in
00:26:915 --->00:32:734 适当的加soft-whistle

star for new mapper

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-02-04T12:27:20+00:00

-Crazy-
00:20:188 (1) - 这个clap删掉然后在后面的白线上+个note? clap放到新+的note上._. 00:26:006 (1) - 同样
00:32:915 (1) - 有些看不清 new combo吧._. 会好些
00:26:915 (1) - 从这开始的部分还是用normal音效吧音量小1些然后在00:27:279 00:28:006 00:28:734 00:30:188 00:30:915 00:31:643 00:32:370补上clap ._. 如果坚持soft音效的话换成whistle
01:12:915 这里要不要+1个note =w=

-Insane-
mapset挺好音效不是我喜欢的类型 ._.为什么不按照Crazy难度的音效来+ ._.

-OPEN-
lol diff ._.
在最后的note后面+条绿线结束kiai
note即使再大1号我依然点不到╮(╯▽╰)╭ 好难

-Hard-
一些音效的建议._.
00:25:824 (7) - 去掉clap
00:31:279 (3) - ^
00:38:552 (4) - ^
00:40:733 (2) - 在slider后面+上clap
00:41:461 (4) - 去掉clap
00:43:643 (2) - 在slider后面+上clap
00:45:461 (1) - +clap
00:45:824 (3) - 去掉clap
00:46:188 (5) - +clap
00:58:915 (1) - ^
01:01:097 (2) - 去掉clap
01:01:824 (1) - ^
01:03:824 (1,2,1) - ^
01:06:734 (1,2) - ^
01:07:643 (1) - 去掉前面的clap
01:22:733 (4,5,6) - 把clap换成finish?
01:24:188 (1) - 去掉clap
01:24:370 (2) - 去掉前面的clap 在末尾+clap
01:24:915 (3) - 去掉clap
01:25:097 (4) - 去掉clap 末尾音量0?

star

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-04T13:42:33+00:00

OK 修好了謝謝兩位~

Ana_Coppola

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Ana_Coppola 2010-02-04T16:57:40+00:00

star~~~~

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2010-02-04T18:06:07+00:00

[Open:]

00:25:270 (3) - Slider overlaps itself :[
01:40:813 (8) - Move the slider one tick to the right on the timeline and put an extra beat in this stream. \
01:59:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This is like, very unrankable.
02:17:993 (2) & 02:19:448 (5) - You can't see the lenght of the slider due to overlapping ;[
02:58:357 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no music wich makes it really hard to time these and it's hard to read due to overlapping.
03:01:448 - End this kiai section right after the final beat.
00:06:734 (2) - Unsnapped
00:40:005 (19) - Unsnapped
00:42:913 (18) - Unsnapped
01:55:457 (1) - Unsnapped
01:55:639 (2) - Usnapped

Look over the 1BPM sections again, try to fix the unsnapped beats and be sure the timing and offset is the same as in the other diffs.

Away from the red sections everything looks fine for ranking to me

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-04T18:38:31+00:00

thanks~

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-02-05T02:30:56+00:00

对不起，我只学汉语学了三年了，所以我说得不太好。

[Normal]
00:35:643 (1) - 多我来说，太多finish

,请把slider repeat的finish删除吧？

[Hard]
00:45:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase spacing？
01:08:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:13:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Open's Difficulty]
O_O

[Insane]
不错

*star

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-05T08:22:36+00:00

thanks~ 感謝拉~

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-06T14:47:09+00:00

Here I am, to recheck this one

Ok, everything is ok for me. I only have one question and a request.
EDIT: Normal: 00:26:915 (3) - i told you to add a beat, not a whole slider xD I think it feels weird, but it's your choice anyway.

Please capitalize the F in "Beautiful fighter". I know angela is not capitalized, but the title is, it looks better.

As soon as you do this, ask me for a protobubble, the map is ok.

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-02-06T15:09:39+00:00

MP3 and BGs are missing D:

I just got the .osz file with only 5 .osu files in it.

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-06T15:23:39+00:00

Yeah, i noticed that too.
I asked Clare to make a full reupload, but BG and mp3 are still missing O.o

I dunno what happened and i feel it's my fault for telling him/her to fix the "F" ç_ç

EDIT: osz now is fine. Title fixed.

Protobubbled ^^

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-06T16:30:28+00:00

thank you very much^^

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-02-07T02:08:21+00:00

~Normal~
00:18:734 - remove clap here
00:24:552 - ^
00:44:552 (1) - end on white tick
00:58:552 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:824 (1) - ^

~Hard~
00:06:552 (5) - new combo
00:06:733 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:643 (1) - ^
00:47:279 (1) - start on left blue tick

~Open's Difficulty~
00:06:734 (2) - silence the slideslide and the last note
01:01:086 (1) - start on left white tick, add hitfinish
01:17:813 (4) - new combo
01:38:358 (8) - ^
01:40:722 (7,8) - sounds weird
01:44:176 (8) - new combo
01:54:177 (1) - silence the sliderslide
01:55:631 (2) - ^
02:08:175 (6) - end on white tick
02:22:539 (1) - start on left red tick, add hitfinish
02:46:539 (1) - silence the sliderslide
02:49:448 (1) - ^
02:50:902 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:01:812 - end Kiai here

~Insane~
00:17:097 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:915 (1) - ^ , add clap at first note
00:29:824 (1) - silence the sliderslide
00:35:643 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:824 (2) - new combo
00:41:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:461 (2) - new combo
00:58:006 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:461 (3) - add clap at 1st & 3rd notes
01:20:733 (5) - new combo
01:21:279 (1) - remove new combo

~Crazy~
00:15:824 (4) - remove clap at middle note
00:17:643 (4) - remove clap at first note, add clap at middle note

+Star

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-07T23:22:00+00:00

[Normal]
00:37:461 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这一段完全不合拍。
作为一个normal,你的SV太快了，mapset不好。重新设置一下
[Open's diff]
UGLY
00:06:734 - there're 2 section lines .
00:06:907 - ^
01:54:177 - ^
01:56:358 - ^
02:02:176 - ^
02:02:903 - ^
02:34:357 - ^
02:39:083 - ^

there're 65535 objets unsnaped .
use aimod check it.
[Crazy]
UGLY
50%的note和slider与背景音不合，我觉得我可以不听音乐打这张。
这张排列好丑。好好修一下吧。

要在TAG里加上跟你合作map人的名字。每个难度都加。
MP3太长了要切掉一块。
.osb文件删掉。full upload.

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-08T12:37:55+00:00

好的謝謝YAYA~

Saten ruiko

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Saten ruiko 2010-02-10T11:41:59+00:00

來給星了-ˇ-

kioukiou

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kioukiou 2010-02-10T15:47:54+00:00

Could not find any problem.

star.

boy15174

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boy15174 2010-02-11T10:06:15+00:00

我只是给星的= =

Soul-Eater_old

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Soul-Eater_old 2010-02-11T10:08:49+00:00

STAR~

a526412351

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a526412351 2010-02-11T10:19:41+00:00

STAR~~~~

abalee

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abalee 2010-02-12T06:29:35+00:00

乃可不可以找TV size 的 mp3 再做 = =

要不就切掉后面的，群里随便找一大堆人能做 >_>

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-12T07:52:28+00:00

但是OPEN那個難度是full ver ..

Open [no map]

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Open [no map] 2010-02-12T09:55:57+00:00

不嫌大就扔俩mp3进去，各不影响

而且我那本来就是赶出来的图，各种不具合满载，要影响rank了就割掉随意=w=

Serafina [no map]

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Serafina [no map] 2010-02-14T16:20:25+00:00

very good .. star~

otakumak

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otakumak 2010-02-17T09:08:18+00:00

star

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-02-22T19:41:24+00:00

[Overall]

Add an "hitcircleoverlay.png" and a "spinner-approachcircle.png" on the folder and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

00:37:643 (1) - Sounds weird.
00:37:643 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too evil for the most easier difficulty.

[Hard]

Why different timing here? Use the same timing for all the difficulties!

00:47:097 (1) - Never start spinners on blue tick if not really necessary.

[Open's Revenge]

Video is from TV size and you mapped all the song on this difficulty. Seems really weird because other diff are TV size mapped, and because the other minutes of the map are with no video and only the background. I suggest to cut the mp3 and do a TV size for all the difficulties. Honestly, I suggest to remove this difficulty. Oh and if you don't want to remove this, I suggest you to map completely all the difficulties, don't forget to remove here audio lead-in.

[Insane]

00:26:552 (5,1) - Too close.

[Crazy]

00:26:552 (2,1) - Unexpected change of spacing.

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-26T21:12:52+00:00

用Quote
不要用Report

Clare

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Clare 2010-02-26T21:19:56+00:00

osu_CN_yaya wrote:
用Quote
不要用Report

哦哦~知道了~

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-02T11:40:15+00:00

still a star.
Hard:
这个的timing又不同了。最后面的timing又差了1ms。看看是哪一个timing section出错了。同时请resnap，后面的出错了。

Open's
timing和其他的不同。这个有01:28:086的时间点其它的没有。请检查哪里出错了。

Crazy:
01:25:005 (1) - extend to 01:28:096 (1) -

我建议后面的spinner都结束在同一个时间上并用无声，这样听起来好一点。

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-03-06T08:49:20+00:00

我好喜欢啊...虽然动画奇烂无比但是我也看完了啊...op都不跳的啊

星星啊!!!

edit:open里的那个break 是没做完的还是其他原因? 因为其他难度这里都没有break啊...最好也把这里填上吧.

Last edited by Tonoko 2010-03-06T08:59:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-06T08:58:43+00:00

try this open's

remember to backup yours first.

Download: angela - Beautiful Fighter (Clare) [test].osu

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-03-06T09:55:29+00:00

easy
00:38:642 和 00:40:460 作为spin1的头尾吧
00:41:551 和 00:43:369 作为spin2的头尾吧
00:44:460 这里的话似乎不用spinner 随便加几个note再在 00:47:369 开一个spinner比较好
01:06:642 的break或者和上面类似比较好

hard
well ><

open
节奏很好...但是需要美化工作啊...
例如00:39:823 (16,17,18) - 和00:42:550 (13,14,15,16,17) - 明显看上去形状不一样
00:56:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这些位置微调一下

insane
well

crazy
01:20:824 和01:22:278 的停顿似乎有点违和...建议再填几个圈上去..

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-15T02:52:13+00:00

To next modder: the unsnapped objects in Open's are snapped in 165 BPM

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-17T19:34:01+00:00

The comboburst.png is too explicit making the beatmap unrankable. Find a new one or remove it.

165.02 BPM seems to make the notes a little bit better synced closed to the end of the map.

Clare

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Clare 2010-03-18T14:21:37+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
The comboburst.png is too explicit making the beatmap unrankable. Find a new one or remove it.

165.02 BPM seems to make the notes a little bit better synced closed to the end of the map.

comboburst.png is fixed
open's diff i can't change bpm because this diff have too many bpm

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-19T00:41:25+00:00

You or Open is going to have to find a way.
You may even have to scrap the 41.25 BPM all together since that's what is causing such a huge problem in the map or the lack of timing sections to keep the metronome synced with the song.

I could probably help tomorrow in my free time but indeed a BPM of 165.02 does sound better.

Clare

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Clare 2010-03-19T02:31:56+00:00

ok~ fixed

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-19T20:44:22+00:00

[Open]
00:40:732 (1) - This starts too early.
00:43:641 (1) - ^
01:20:273 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These sound a tad bit late. Move these 1/6 of a tick back so it's synced with the vocals.
01:24:273 (1) - Start this on the white tick.

Overall, move your uninherited timing sections on top of notes to keep the metronome from going offbeat.
Again, It'd probably be best if the 41.25 timing sections were gone to make it a little easier to keep the notes from going into anything but the red and white ticks. (Not counting 1/8 notes~)

Clare

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Clare 2010-03-20T06:07:37+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
[Open]
00:40:732 (1) - This starts too early.
00:43:641 (1) - ^
01:20:273 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These sound a tad bit late. Move these 1/6 of a tick back so it's synced with the vocals.
01:24:273 (1) - Start this on the white tick.

Overall, move your uninherited timing sections on top of notes to keep the metronome from going offbeat.
Again, It'd probably be best if the 41.25 timing sections were gone to make it a little easier to keep the notes from going into anything but the red and white ticks. (Not counting 1/8 notes~)

ok i fixed

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-22T23:35:09+00:00

Alright, bubbled!

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-03-24T13:01:40+00:00

Have to pop for some reasons, sorry.

[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

Mp3 ends a bit weird. Can you do a fade out?

[Difficulties]

[Open's Revenge]

Remove Audio Lead-In.

00:08:095 (3) - Remove one repeat on this slider.
00:12:458 (1) - ^

EDIT: Rebubbled~

Gabi

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Gabi 2010-03-24T21:40:54+00:00

this song is so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

the insane diff is good, but you shoudl have used normal slider speed here 00:54:635 (1)

anyways, no need to change it, i guess it gives some variation.

more or less, star!

yaya

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yaya 2010-03-28T13:30:05+00:00

irc moded.

fine for me now

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-04-03T10:19:13+00:00

This map needs a dif between [Normal] and [Hard] imo.

Also [Hard] is [I] in the list but its fine if you played it.

Won't popped for this so have a star.

Clare

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Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

Clare 2010-04-07T02:57:54+00:00

i don't add new diff D:
i think now is fine
but thank you for your suggestions

ztrot

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Joined February 2008

ztrot 2010-04-07T03:16:22+00:00

I really don't like this..In Opens diff also there are 3 Insanes I suggest lowing it down to a hardish feel even if it still reads as I but as is at least 3 diffs are Insane.