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Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Lasoki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 5. Juli 2015 at 17:00:28

Artist: Aoi Eir
Title: IGNITE (TV Size)
Source: Sword Art Online II
Tags: SAO, Sword Art Online 2, Lavaeater12, Opening, Kirito, Kirigaya Kazuto, Shinon, Asada Shino
BPM: 171
Filesize: 17256kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.83 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Insane (4.55 stars, 373 notes)
  4. Lavaeater12's Insane (4.09 stars, 340 notes)
  5. Normal (2.09 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size)
Download: Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SAOII OP yay! I think I'm getting better at mapping

Easy: Complete
Normal: Complete
Hard: Complete
Insane: Complete
Lavaeater12's Insane: Complete by Lavaeater12 (new mapper)

Redownload 25.01.15
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




Nyan~MOD
First of All .

Add " (TV Size) "

Second .

Please set your AudioLeadIn to 1500 ( it can seen on your notepad ) your song starts too early . brb

[Easy]
Circle Size +1
00:13:877 Move ( x:108 y:272 )
00:14:578 Move ( x:20 y:104 )
00:15:280 Move ( x:216 y:116 )
00:15:280 Move ( x:108 y:272 )
00:35:280 Move ( x:48 y:236 )
00:38:789 Move ( x:152 y:80 )
00:44:754 Move ( x:192 y:268 )
00:53:350 Move ( x:168 y:248 )
01:18:789 Fix your LN


01:22:648 Fix your blanket


[Normal]
Circle Size +0.5
00:00:017 Fix your LN here
00:17:210 Move here --> 00:17:385
00:18:438 Fix your blanket


00:35:631 Move ( x:280 y:312 )
00:36:333 Move ( x:328 y:104 )
00:46:157 Move ( x:68 y:156 )

[Hard]
Circle Size +1
About the Hard Diff, your notes are too close you should give laps or give more space . That only .

That's All .
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Lasoki

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




Nyan~MOD
First of All .

Add " (TV Size) " ok.

Second .

Please set your AudioLeadIn to 1500 ( it can seen on your notepad ) your song starts too early . brb don't really get what you mean... sry.

[Easy]
Circle Size +1 left. it
00:13:877 Move ( x:108 y:272 ) Fixed.
00:14:578 Move ( x:20 y:104 ) Fixed.
00:15:280 Move ( x:216 y:116 ) Fixed.
00:15:280 Move ( x:108 y:272 ) Fixed.
00:35:280 Move ( x:48 y:236 ) Fixed.
00:38:789 Move ( x:152 y:80 ) Fixed.
00:44:754 Move ( x:192 y:268 ) Fixed.
00:53:350 Move ( x:168 y:248 ) Fixed.
01:18:789 Fix your LN Fixed.


01:22:648 Fix your blanket Fixed.


[Normal]
Circle Size +0.5 Left it.
00:00:017 Fix your LN here
00:17:210 Move here --> 00:17:385 Left it.
00:18:438 Fix your blanket Should be okay now.


00:35:631 Move ( x:280 y:312 ) didn't do that.
00:36:333 Move ( x:328 y:104 ) didn't do that.
00:46:157 Move ( x:68 y:156 ) didn't do that.

[Hard]
Circle Size +1 left. it
About the Hard Diff, your notes are too close you should give laps or give more space . That only . ok thanks.

That's All .
Good Luck~
thanks.
Jaltzu
EASY
00:24:762 Add a note here. I'd suggest 3-point slider till 00:25:113. (replaces 00:24:937 (4) )
00:47:569 (3,4) - You could replace these with 3-point slider: start 00:47:393 and end 00:48:095
Couple of non-consistent distance spacings: 00:17:218 (7) / 00:38:797 (7) -

NORMAL
I think there's too many two circle stacks. Replace at least some of them with something else...
00:00:025 (1,2) - Replace these with a single slider. The start feels much smoother that way.
00:50:025 (4,5,6,7) - Try this: make slider 4 a 2-point slider. Add another slider 00:50:376 - 00:50:551. Delete 00:50:727 (5,6). Add slider 00:50:902 - 00:51:253. Replace 00:51:253 (7) with a circle at 00:51:428.
01:06:165 (1) - Add Clap (hitsound)
Another suggestion: make 01:20:376 (4) longer, till 01:20:727. Delete 01:20:902 (5,6). Slider start 01:21:078 - turning point 01:21:428 - end 01:21:779.

HARD
Same as normal: stacked double circles get a bit annoying.
00:13:709 (6,7) - I think these should be replaced with a single slider.
00:28:621 (4) - This circle is hidden too well... Consider moving it out of the slider.
00:47:569 (5,1) - Move circle 5 to 00:47:744. Replace the slider with another: 00:48:095 - 00:48:271.
01:02:832 (1,2,3) - Consider spreading these a bit.

INSANE
00:38:271 (5,6) - Maybe replace these with a single slider. Fits better in the music.
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - Consider changing the position os these. They go through the last slider -> hard to read.

Many of my comments don't point out any mistakes, but are more like suggestions.
I wasn't able to get very much out of this, but hope it helps. :)
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Jaltzu wrote:

EASY
00:24:762 Add a note here. I'd suggest 3-point slider till 00:25:113. (replaces 00:24:937 (4) ) i shifted (4) back instead and put a reverse arrow
00:47:569 (3,4) - You could replace these with 3-point slider: start 00:47:393 and end 00:48:095 ended it 1/2 later
Couple of non-consistent distance spacings: 00:17:218 (7) / 00:38:797 (7) - ok.

NORMAL
I think there's too many two circle stacks. Replace at least some of them with something else...
00:00:025 (1,2) - Replace these with a single slider. The start feels much smoother that way.
00:50:025 (4,5,6,7) - Try this: make slider 4 a 2-point slider. Add another slider 00:50:376 - 00:50:551. Delete 00:50:727 (5,6). Add slider 00:50:902 - 00:51:253. Replace 00:51:253 (7) with a circle at 00:51:428.
01:06:165 (1) - Add Clap (hitsound)
Another suggestion: make 01:20:376 (4) longer, till 01:20:727. Delete 01:20:902 (5,6). Slider start 01:21:078 - turning point 01:21:428 - end 01:21:779. changed everything.

HARD
Same as normal: stacked double circles get a bit annoying. ok.
00:13:709 (6,7) - I think these should be replaced with a single slider. ok.
00:28:621 (4) - This circle is hidden too well... Consider moving it out of the slider. ok.
00:47:569 (5,1) - Move circle 5 to 00:47:744. Replace the slider with another: 00:48:095 - 00:48:271. ok.
01:02:832 (1,2,3) - Consider spreading these a bit.I'll think about it.

INSANE
00:38:271 (5,6) - Maybe replace these with a single slider. Fits better in the music. ok.
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - Consider changing the position os these. They go through the last slider -> hard to read. ok.

Many of my comments don't point out any mistakes, but are more like suggestions.
I wasn't able to get very much out of this, but hope it helps. :) i helped xD. Thanks a lot.
Good luck!
Seijiro
Here I am from my modding queue (with a looooot of late, sorry but I was really busy this last month :/ )

[General]

  1. What's with that strange tag o.O "Opening 3" ? Can I ask you why?
[Lavaeater12's Insane]

Alright, I was about to mod this, but I have to nuke it. Please read some of these

[Insane]

  1. 00:04:762 (7,8,9) - Strange imo
  2. 00:16:867 (5) - Remove it and make a NC after this
  3. 00:18:095 (1) - This NC should be on the next note
  4. 00:24:235 (6,7) - Please, don't do this :(
  5. 00:21:604 (1) - Make it end 2 ticks earlier
  6. 00:27:218 (1) - Same ^
  7. 00:29:937 (2) - You don't need this note at all, trust me
  8. 00:30:639 (6) - Same ^
  9. 00:37:832 (2) - Same ^
  10. 00:36:165 (1,2,3) - Better a slider imo
  11. 00:37:832 (2,2) - Remove them
  12. 00:42:657 (1) - Convert this in 4 normal beats
  13. 00:46:867 (3,1) - Use these to make a slider (1/1)
I won't do the rest not because I'm lazy (I did mods long 5 times this or more) but because you do the same errors, I could say.
Basically your mapping it's still too cramped (Which is normal from a mapper who hasn't find his style yet) and a bit disordered.
The best thing to do in these cases it's to "still" others techniques for a while, as long as you don't find your own :)

Final note: I saw some jumps resembling those I used on one of my map (maybe I'm clearly mistaking). If you're interested feel free to take a look :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200122


EDIT


Alright, I realized I did something I usually don't ever do: not helping at all. In this case the mapper was also a new mapper and it looks like I'm the bad guy here (and I really am). So I'll do a mod for his diff, 'cause everyone deserves help from me whether he's new or a pro. With this said, let's go down to business:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

  1. First of all: you need more AR, since you have 171 BPM and this should be an Insane. AR9 should be used here
  2. 00:02:306 (7) - This slider breaks the flow, since you started following the instruments, yet, for this slider, you use the vocals which doen't fit well imo. Try:
    -->
    I usually let the design for these things to the mapper, but if you need I could leave a suggestion also for that
  3. 00:06:692 (6) - I think you should remove this note and I'll tell you why: 00:04:060 (1,2,3) - From here you use a rhythm I think it fits perfectly the song, yet, from 00:05:113 you don't do the same. At this point you have 2 options:
    1. Rebuild all your notes and combos with that rhythm
    2. Remove the note I mentioned before to keep the other rhythm you choose
    3 and bonus option for both the previous ones: remove that note I told you and do this:
  4. 00:08:446 (1) - This slider should start 00:08:271 (5) <-- here
    My suggestion is to delete (5) and move (1) as it is. Then add a note at 00:08:972 vvv See below vvv
  5. 00:10:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Alright, this combo is really confusing, so we'll have to do a lot of work on it (I know you tried to do a slider stream, but it doesn't fit the song here):

    Alright, it's easier with images :3 The way I did there fits well with the next combo too imo. If not, try to find a better way to arrange them
  6. 00:13:358 (5) - Instead of putting this behind those sliders, I think it fits better put in front of them:
  7. 00:15:464 (3) - This slider is wrong because you put its end on a blue tick. Better if you put a normal note when it starts instead of it and re-arrange the nest stream:
  8. 00:17:393 (2) - Start a 1/1 slider here :
  9. If you add a note here 00:17:920 , you can even do a good blanket like this:
  10. 00:20:200 (5) - This slider covers a note that should be there and I'm referring to the note that should go 00:20:376 - here. To add that note (which you must add) and keep your slider too, you should do something like:

    (5) should be stacked on (6)
  11. 00:21:253 (1) - If you did what I said till here, this note shouldn't be a NC (New Combo)
  12. 00:21:604 (1,2) - For these 2 you should use the same slider. I mean: put down a slider, then copy it and paste it where you need it. This way the design has more order and it's nicer to see
  13. 00:22:306 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 00:22:481 - Add a note here: you already did 2 triplets, do also the third one :3
  15. Once you add this ^ Reduce the spacing between 00:22:306 (1,2,3) - them. Like:
  16. 00:22:657 (4) - This note doesn't respect your spacing. Move it somewhere further from the next note and closer to the previous one
  17. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:23:007 (1) - Remove this note. Move 00:23:183 (5) at 00:23:007 and make this note a NC. Also add a repeat to this slider. In short:
    -->
  19. 00:23:534 - Add a note here at x: 272 y: 172
  20. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 00:28:797 - Here I have again a lot to say and it's easier to show with an image:
  22. 00:36:341 (1) - Move this spinner a tick later and place a note:
  23. 00:37:393 (2) - Remove this note
  24. 00:37:569 (3) - This should be 00:37:393 - here
  25. 00:37:920 - Add a note here, stacked on (1) of the same combo. Basically: note - slider - note (at the same place of the first one)
  26. 00:39:674 (8) - Add NC here, also try to put this slider under the previous note, I think it fits better
  27. 00:42:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better if you do a normal stream here
  28. 00:47:920 (5) - Move it (on the time line) by 2 ticks later (on the right) and add a note 00:47:920 - here. Remove also 00:48:446 (1) , since you won't need it anymore. Combo-ing is fine as it is
  29. 00:51:779 - You forgot a note here :3
  30. 00:53:358 - 00:53:889 - Why isn't mapping xD Suggestion:

    Pay attention to ticks, since I also moved some notes/sliders
  31. 00:58:972 (6,1) - Wrong spacing between these 2 notes. Move (1) away, since (6) it's fine where it is
  32. 01:00:025 (4,1) - Same ^ Suggestion: Select all the combo and move it to the left. This way you can fix this and even the previous problem
  33. 01:03:007 (4,5) - Better a normal triplet. This pattern it's hard to read if you put it there
  34. 01:04:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - THIS IS IT! Here you can use slider streams, but fix them a little. Like this:
  35. 01:05:990 (1) - Replace it with 2 notes
  36. 01:07:218 (1) - Replace it with 3 notes
  37. 01:08:972 (1) - Remove NC and move it further from the previous note
  38. 01:09:849 (3) - Just 2 notes are fine here :3
  39. 01:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing, I think it's too much there
  40. 01:13:885 (4) - Too close to the previous note
  41. 01:14:586 (2) - You should do like this:
    -->
  42. 01:18:972 (5,1) - Normal triplet here
  43. 01:22:657 (1) - To close to the previous note

I hope this makes up for my rudeness and helps you a little more with your mapping experience :/
Topic Starter
Lasoki

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here I am from my modding queue (with a looooot of late, sorry but I was really busy this last month :/ )

[General]

  1. What's with that strange tag o.O "Opening 3" ? Can I ask you why? Sry, because of my map of the op of fairy tail(which is from the continuation of the anime and not really a second season i numbered that one 15 and then i just numbered this 3 since season one had two openings, changed it to one.
[Lavaeater12's Insane]

Alright, I was about to mod this, but I have to nuke it. Please read some of these

[Insane]

  1. 00:04:762 (7,8,9) - Strange imo really? don't think so.
  2. 00:16:867 (5) - Remove it and make a NC after this hmm, ok.
  3. 00:18:095 (1) - This NC should be on the next note i think it's okay.
  4. 00:24:235 (6,7) - Please, don't do this :( ok.
  5. 00:21:604 (1) - Make it end 2 ticks earlier ok.
  6. 00:27:218 (1) - Same ^
  7. 00:29:937 (2) - You don't need this note at all, trust me ok.
  8. 00:30:639 (6) - Same ^ i think it's ok like that.
  9. 00:37:832 (2) - Same ^ ok.
  10. 00:36:165 (1,2,3) - Better a slider imo not going to do it, but if others also suggest it i will.
  11. 00:37:832 (2,2) - Remove them ok.
  12. 00:42:657 (1) - Convert this in 4 normal beats like it better this way but if others suggest i will.
  13. 00:46:867 (3,1) - Use these to make a slider (1/1)ok.


I won't do the rest not because I'm lazy (I did mods long 5 times this or more) but because you do the same errors, I could say.
Basically your mapping it's still too cramped (Which is normal from a mapper who hasn't find his style yet) and a bit disordered.
The best thing to do in these cases it's to "still" others techniques for a while, as long as you don't find your own :)

Final note: I saw some jumps resembling those I used on one of my map (maybe I'm clearly mistaking). If you're interested feel free to take a look :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200122 O.o really? haha, it's a coincidence, i don't know that map but i'll take a look at it. Thanks for looking at my map.
Moeri_old_1
General:
You can use slidertick to make hitsound even in slider, but you'll need to make more timing points to decide whenever slidertick should have this sound or not. But it's up to you, it's complicated if you're first time mapper and never seen such before, if you need assistance on that or don't know what I mean, feel free to PM me!

What's "Opening 1" tag? Put tags like "Sword Art Online", "Sword Art Online II (or 2)", "Aoi Eir", "Ignite" and the beatmap contributors(you and Lavaeater12) or similar.

Easy:
Add circle at 01:08:621

Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:11:428
or
Move slider timing from 01:11:779 to 01:11:428 and add circle at 01:12:481 as well as moving slider timing from 01:13:183 to 01:12:832
-----------------------------------------------------
Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:13:885
or
Remove circle at 01:14:235 and add slider that starts at 01:13:885 and ends at 01:14:235
-----------------------------------------------------

Normal:
Add circle on 00:32:481
Add circle on 00:33:885
Move slider that starts at 01:00:025 to 01:00:200 because it sounds more comfortable.
From 01:02:657 to 01:03:885, use this timeline instead. Or no circles between sliders if you feel it's a bit overmapped.
Remove circle at 01:17:569 and move following slider to that timing instead, and move the three following circles 2 mini-beats earlier, like this

Hard:
I do not recommend to start a beatmap with 2 circles, rather replace them with a slider. Beacuse it would get annoying to hit them in time if you have Hidden mod and perhaps DT and HR as well. It's annoying.

Move slider at 00:02:832 to 00:03:007 and add circle at 00:02:832
From 00:04:411 to 00:06:165, use this timeline instead or switch places on circle and slider as you wish.
Slider at 00:16:692 can be removed.
The two-circle groups in section 00:06:867 to 00:09:323 can be three-circle groups instead, like this.
Timeline at 00:23:709 to 00:24:411, use this instead(two sliders instead of a circle into a slider).

Remove slider at 00:33:709, add circle at 00:35:990 and choose below:-------------------------------------
Add circle at 00:33:885 and 00:34:060
or
Add slider that starts at 00:33:709 and ends at 00:34:060
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Move slider on 00:46:341 two mini-beats later(00:46:516)
Move slider on 01:01:078 two mini-beats later(01:01:253)
Move slider on 01:09:148 two mini-beats later(01:09:323) and remove circle at 01:09:323
From 01:11:078 to 01:12:481, use this timeline instead.
Remove all circles from 01:13:972 to 01:14:148, it's simply overmapped.

Insane:
Change AR to 9.
Remove spinners at:
00:21:604
00:54:586
and make notes instead.

Also, streams at 00:52:306, 01:05:464, 01:13:885, 01:16:341 please use distance snap to make the streams and don't make strange curves even if you might think it fits the mapping style, it's rather just confusing to play them.

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing.
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288.

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it.



Don't forget my kudosu, I put quite some time and effort in this.
Lavaeater12

A i k a wrote:

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing. done
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288. this was a mistake, but I've moved it one mini-beat later instead, as that was the original intention

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it. changed most of the rest of the sliders and some circles so they hopefully make more sense now
Lavaeater12

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Alright, I realized I did something I usually don't ever do: not helping at all. In this case the mapper was also a new mapper and it looks like I'm the bad guy here (and I really am). So I'll do a mod for his diff, 'cause everyone deserves help from me whether he's new or a pro. With this said, let's go down to business:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

  1. First of all: you need more AR, since you have 171 BPM and this should be an Insane. AR9 should be used here ok done
  2. 00:02:306 (7) - This slider breaks the flow, since you started following the instruments, yet, for this slider, you use the vocals which doen't fit well imo. done

    I usually let the design for these things to the mapper, but if you need I could leave a suggestion also for that
  3. 00:06:692 (6) - I think you should remove this note and I'll tell you why: 00:04:060 (1,2,3) - From here you use a rhythm I think it fits perfectly the song, yet, from 00:05:113 you don't do the same. At this point you have 2 options:
    1. Rebuild all your notes and combos with that rhythm
    2. Remove the note I mentioned before to keep the other rhythm you choose
    3 and bonus option for both the previous ones: remove that note I told you and do this:

    done. I used option 3. It made the most sense to me.

  4. 00:08:446 (1) - This slider should start 00:08:271 (5) <-- here
    My suggestion is to delete (5) and move (1) as it is. Then add a note at 00:08:972 done.
  5. 00:10:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Alright, this combo is really confusing, so we'll have to do a lot of work on it (I know you tried to do a slider stream, but it doesn't fit the song here):
    Alright, it's easier with images :3 The way I did there fits well with the next combo too imo. If not, try to find a better way to arrange them Oh, you're right x.x this works so much better. done.
  6. 00:13:358 (5) - Instead of putting this behind those sliders, I think it fits better put in front of them: Alright, I did that.
  7. 00:15:464 (3) - This slider is wrong because you put its end on a blue tick. Better if you put a normal note when it starts instead of it and re-arrange the nest stream: okay, done.
  8. 00:17:393 (2) - Start a 1/1 slider here : done.
  9. If you add a note here 00:17:920 , you can even do a good blanket like this: done.
  10. 00:20:200 (5) - This slider covers a note that should be there and I'm referring to the note that should go 00:20:376 - here. To add that note (which you must add) and keep your slider too, you should do something like:
    (5) should be stacked on (6) done.
  11. 00:21:253 (1) - If you did what I said till here, this note shouldn't be a NC (New Combo) done.
  12. 00:21:604 (1,2) - For these 2 you should use the same slider. I mean: put down a slider, then copy it and paste it where you need it. This way the design has more order and it's nicer to see done.
  13. 00:22:306 (1) - Remove NC done.
  14. 00:22:481 - Add a note here: you already did 2 triplets, do also the third one :3 done.
  15. Once you add this ^ Reduce the spacing between 00:22:306 (1,2,3) - them. Like: done.
  16. 00:22:657 (4) - This note doesn't respect your spacing. Move it somewhere further from the next note and closer to the previous one done.
  17. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC done.
  18. 00:23:007 (1) - Remove this note. Move 00:23:183 (5) at 00:23:007 and make this note a NC. Also add a repeat to this slider. In short: done.
  19. 00:23:534 - Add a note here at x: 272 y: 172 done.
  20. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC done.
  21. 00:28:797 - Here I have again a lot to say and it's easier to show with an image: done.
  22. 00:36:341 (1) - Move this spinner a tick later and place a note: done.
  23. 00:37:393 (2) - Remove this note done.
  24. 00:37:569 (3) - This should be 00:37:393 - here done.
  25. 00:37:920 - Add a note here, stacked on (1) of the same combo. Basically: note - slider - note (at the same place of the first one) done.
  26. 00:39:674 (8) - Add NC here, also try to put this slider under the previous note, I think it fits better done.
  27. 00:42:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better if you do a normal stream here done.
  28. 00:47:920 (5) - Move it (on the time line) by 2 ticks later (on the right) and add a note 00:47:920 - here. Remove also 00:48:446 (1) , since you won't need it anymore. Combo-ing is fine as it is done.
  29. 00:51:779 - You forgot a note here :3 oops x.x done.
  30. 00:53:358 - 00:53:889 - Why isn't mapping xD Suggestion:
    Pay attention to ticks, since I also moved some notes/sliders I guess I kind of liked that gap there. But your suggestion is nice. I'll use that.

  31. 00:58:972 (6,1) - Wrong spacing between these 2 notes. Move (1) away, since (6) it's fine where it is done.
  32. 01:00:025 (4,1) - Same ^ Suggestion: Select all the combo and move it to the left. This way you can fix this and even the previous problem done.
  33. 01:03:007 (4,5) - Better a normal triplet. This pattern it's hard to read if you put it there done.
  34. 01:04:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - THIS IS IT! Here you can use slider streams, but fix them a little. Like this: done.
  35. 01:05:990 (1) - Replace it with 2 notes done.
  36. 01:07:218 (1) - Replace it with 3 notes done.
  37. 01:08:972 (1) - Remove NC and move it further from the previous note done.
  38. 01:09:849 (3) - Just 2 notes are fine here :3 done.
  39. 01:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing, I think it's too much there done.
  40. 01:13:885 (4) - Too close to the previous note done.
  41. 01:14:586 (2) - You should do like this: done.
  42. 01:18:972 (5,1) - Normal triplet here done.
  43. 01:22:657 (1) - To close to the previous note done.


I hope this makes up for my rudeness and helps you a little more with your mapping experience :/
Thanks for the mod! I think I was able to understand where I went wrong (at least in some areas) and learn a few more things!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

A i k a wrote:

General:
You can use slidertick to make hitsound even in slider, but you'll need to make more timing points to decide whenever slidertick should have this sound or not. But it's up to you, it's complicated if you're first time mapper and never seen such before, if you need assistance on that or don't know what I mean, feel free to PM me!

What's "Opening 1" tag? Put tags like "Sword Art Online", "Sword Art Online II (or 2)", "Aoi Eir", "Ignite" and the beatmap contributors(you and Lavaeater12) or similar. I put SAO, Sword art Online 2, Lavaeater12, but I left Opening since it's an Opening.

Easy:
Add circle at 01:08:621 done.

Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:11:428
or
Move slider timing from 01:11:779 to 01:11:428 and add circle at 01:12:481 as well as moving slider timing from 01:13:183 to 01:12:832
-----------------------------------------------------
Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:13:885 did this.
or
Remove circle at 01:14:235 and add slider that starts at 01:13:885 and ends at 01:14:235 Uh... this part doesn't make sense to me.
-----------------------------------------------------

Normal:
Add circle on 00:32:481 Added.
Add circle on 00:33:885 Added.
Move slider that starts at 01:00:025 to 01:00:200 because it sounds more comfortable. I don't agree with you, but if someone else suggests it i'll change it.
From 01:02:657 to 01:03:885, use this timeline instead. Or no circles between sliders if you feel it's a bit overmapped. change it but instead of circles i put reverse arrow.
Remove circle at 01:17:569 and move following slider to that timing instead, and move the three following circles 2 mini-beats earlier, like this changed it but i made the last circle into a 1/2 long slider since the next 3/2 beats, where there's nothing seemed strange to me.

Hard:
I do not recommend to start a beatmap with 2 circles, rather replace them with a slider. Beacuse it would get annoying to hit them in time if you have Hidden mod and perhaps DT and HR as well. It's annoying. ok.


Move slider at 00:02:832 to 00:03:007 and add circle at 00:02:832 did do it, didn't seem to fit for me.
From 00:04:411 to 00:06:165, use this timeline instead or switch places on circle and slider as you wish. also doesn't seem to fit for me.
Slider at 00:16:692 can be removed. flows better if left.
The two-circle groups in section 00:06:867 to 00:09:323 can be three-circle groups instead, like this. don't think so.
Timeline at 00:23:709 to 00:24:411, use this instead(two sliders instead of a circle into a slider). left it as it is.

Remove slider at 00:33:709, add circle at 00:35:990 and choose below:-------------------------------------
Add circle at 00:33:885 and 00:34:060
or
Add slider that starts at 00:33:709 and ends at 00:34:060 not changing.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Move slider on 00:46:341 two mini-beats later(00:46:516)
Move slider on 01:01:078 two mini-beats later(01:01:253)
Move slider on 01:09:148 two mini-beats later(01:09:323) and remove circle at 01:09:323 not doing all this.
From 01:11:078 to 01:12:481, use this timeline instead. not doing all this.
Remove all circles from 01:13:972 to 01:14:148, it's simply overmapped. don't think so, but i put a slider with reverse arrows instead of the circles.11111

Insane:
Change AR to 9. ok.
Remove spinners at:
00:21:604
00:54:586
and make notes instead. left the spinners.

Also, streams at 00:52:306, 01:05:464, 01:13:885, 01:16:341 please use distance snap to make the streams and don't make strange curves even if you might think it fits the mapping style, it's rather just confusing to play them. I did use distant snap there... but i made then straight.

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing.
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288.

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it.



Don't forget my kudosu, I put quite some time and effort in this.
thanks for taking your time to mod my map. I helped me a lot, well except for hard diff, though that's just what i prefer.
Modem
Hi~! For M4M! (> w <)

Easy
00:00:025(1) Move this slider to 00:00:200 And shorten it to 00:00:902. It'll be easier for beginner to read
00:01:604 How about add a note here?
00:12:832 Add a slider here and reverse it once at 00:13:183 + use SC there
00:13:534 Back to NC
00:13:885 (3) SC
00:14:235 Add a slider here to 00:14:586 and SC there, then reverse it once
00:15:639 Add a note
00:48:972 (1) Move it to 00:48:972. Shorten it from here to 00:49:499 then add a note at 00:49:674
00:50:025 Add a note
01:03:358 (5) Make it end at 01:04:235
01:13:183 (2) Move it to 01:12:832 then reverse it once + move it closer to the slider at 01:11:779 (1)

Normal
00:00:025 (1) Move it to 00:00:200
00:07:920 Add a note
00:10:902 (4) Reverse it once
00:13:358 (2) SC
00:13:534 (3) Back to NC
00:13:709 (3) SC
00:14:235 (4) Back to NC
01:24:411 (1) Reverse it once

Hard
00:00:025 (1) Move this to 00:00:200
00:06:341 Add a sliser from here to 00:06:516, then reverse it once
00:10:200 (2) Reverse it once
00:21:253 Add a note
00:38:446 Add a note
00:38:621 Add a note
00:42:481 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:42:569, then reverse it once
01:22:657 (1) Remove this spinner
01:22:657 Then, make a slider from here to 01:22:832
01:23:007 Make a slider from here to 01:23:183
01:23:534 Add a note
01:23:709 Add a note
01:23:885 Add a note
01:25:113 Move this spinner to 01:25:200, make it end at 01:28:095, then add a note at 01:25:113

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once
00:42:569 Add a note
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once

Insane
00:05:814 Add a note
00:05:727 Add a note
00:06:341 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:16:516 (4) Reverse it once
00:17:744 (5) Remove this slider
00:27:218 (1) Remove this spinner
00:27:218 Add a note
00:27:569 Make a slider from here to 00:27:744
00:27:920 Make a slider from here to 00:28:095
00:28:271 Make a slider from here to 00:28:446
00:39:762 Add a note
00:54:586 How about remove this spinner and make some notes and sliders instead?
01:00:376 (4) Reverse it once
01:02:130 Add a note
01:02:218 Add a note
01:04:411 (9) Remove this slider
01:04:586 Add a note
01:22:657 Remove this spinner and replace it with some notes and sliders

Good luck~!!! (^ w ^)
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Modem wrote:

Hi~! For M4M! (> w <)

Easy
00:00:025(1) Move this slider to 00:00:200 And shorten it to 00:00:902. It'll be easier for beginner to read Errr... think it's better as it is.
00:01:604 How about add a note here? Like it more as it is.
00:12:832 Add a slider here and reverse it once at 00:13:183 + use SC there don't think so.
00:13:534 Back to NC color=#FF0000]-^[/color]
00:13:885 (3) SC -^
00:14:235 Add a slider here to 00:14:586 and SC there, then reverse it once color=#FF0000]-^[/color]
00:15:639 Add a note done.
00:48:972 (1) Move it to 00:48:972. Shorten it from here to 00:49:499 then add a note at 00:49:674 i moved it, and shortened it until the reverse arrow was at the time you mentioned and then i added a note at 00:48:621 (4) -
00:50:025 Add a note -^
01:03:358 (5) Make it end at 01:04:235 good idea, but i think it wouldn't be so nice to play like that, you know like the flow's just not right.
01:13:183 (2) Move it to 01:12:832 then reverse it once + move it closer to the slider at 01:11:779 (1) thanks, done.

Normal
00:00:025 (1) Move it to 00:00:200 like in easy.
00:07:920 Add a note like in easy.
00:10:902 (4) Reverse it once ok.
00:13:358 (2) SC don't think so.
00:13:534 (3) Back to NC don't think so.
00:13:709 (3) SC don't think so.
00:14:235 (4) Back to NC don't think so.
01:24:411 (1) Reverse it once i think it's okay as it is.

Hard
00:00:025 (1) Move this to 00:00:200 like in easy.
00:06:341 Add a sliser from here to 00:06:516, then reverse it once i think it's unnecessary.
00:10:200 (2) Reverse it once ok.
00:21:253 Add a note ok.
00:38:446 Add a note ok.
00:38:621 Add a note ok.
00:42:481 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:42:569, then reverse it once ok.
01:22:657 (1) Remove this spinner want it there.
01:22:657 Then, make a slider from here to 01:22:832
01:23:007 Make a slider from here to 01:23:183
01:23:534 Add a note
01:23:709 Add a note
01:23:885 Add a note
01:25:113 Move this spinner to 01:25:200, make it end at 01:28:095, then add a note at 01:25:113 left it as it is.

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once
00:42:569 Add a note
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once

Insane
00:05:814 Add a note ok.
00:05:727 Add a note ok.
00:06:341 Add a note didn't add
00:06:692 Add a note didn't add
00:16:516 (4) Reverse it once ok.
00:17:744 (5) Remove this slider didn't remove.
00:27:218 (1) Remove this spinner i want it here.
00:27:218 Add a note had one there before... but actually i don't really hear a beat on it so, didn't add.
00:27:569 Make a slider from here to 00:27:744
00:27:920 Make a slider from here to 00:28:095
00:28:271 Make a slider from here to 00:28:446 the all three, i want the spinners there.
00:39:762 Add a note had one there before... but actually i don't really hear a beat on it so, didn't add.
00:54:586 How about remove this spinner and make some notes and sliders instead? ... i like spinners! sry but I'll leave it.
01:00:376 (4) Reverse it once ok.
01:02:130 Add a note ok.
01:02:218 Add a note don't hear anything here.
01:04:411 (9) Remove this slider left it.
01:04:586 Add a note
01:22:657 Remove this spinner and replace it with some notes and sliders well like the others no.

Good luck~!!! (^ w ^)
Thanks for looking through my map (wil try to mod yours tomorrow) I know I declined a lot of your suggestions and there's the thing with the spinner. Really though thanks for looking through and giving suggestions for replplacing the spinners, it must have taken quite some time to get that. But I tried it out and after all I think I like the spinners there better.
Lurei
Hi there! Came from M4M request to your queue (overmapping everywhere! x.x)

[General]

  1. Artist: 藍井エイル Romanized Artist: Aoi Eir; Song title: IGNITE (TV Size ver.) (I'm not sure about the "ver." part). So, yeah. You need to change the song artist and title.
  2. Set up some Audio Lead-In, because the map starts too early. Around 1500 ms of lead-in should be enough. Configure this in the Notepad (select "Open .osu in Notepad"), in the Audio Lead-In option. And remember to do it on every difficulty!
[Easy]

  1. AR = 3 should make map a little bit easier.
  2. 00:11:428 (5) - This slider's too close to previous one. Keep Distance Snap the same...
  3. 00:20:551 (3) - Don't use 1/2 sliders in Easy (hard to read for newbies). I didn't complained about previous one because it seems to be easy enough.
  4. 00:24:762 (4) - ^^
  5. 00:26:341 (2) - Not only a 1/2 slider, but it is also at 1/2 distance from previous note... Do something, because it's too hard for an Easy.
  6. 00:27:920 (4) - Insert a New Combo here
  7. 00:28:621 (6) - Overlaps with 00:26:867 (3) - so I eagerly ask of you to move it somewhere else.
  8. 00:29:148 (7) - Same as 00:26:341 (2)
  9. 00:30:727 (2,4) - Those two overlap in an ugly way...
  10. 00:34:586 (1,2,3,4) - Try to curve (1) and (3) to make some blanket with (2), then move down (4) to line up with (3).
  11. 00:37:744 (5) - NC (New Combo), please!
  12. 00:38:095 (6,8) - 1/2 sliders again... Ugh...
  13. 00:43:358 (2) - Overlaps with 00:41:604 (3)
  14. 00:46:867 (2,3) - 1/2 beat separation... I'll stop complaining about those things, because I think you got the message of changing those.
  15. 00:53:358 (7,2,4) - I pray of you... don't make those sliders overlap. And correct any other overlap (which I'll stop mentioning).
  16. And since Kiai start, you started to put on a lot of claps... try to remove some (I can't suggest which ones because I'm bad at identifing hitsounds)
[Normal]

  1. 00:27:920 (1) - Try to keep your sliders with only a reverse. It makes things easier (and players aren't fully used to reverses yet). I'll only mention this once, because I don't want to keep repeating the same things.
  2. 01:00:025 (2) - This feels overmapped. You should place a circle at 01:00:200 instead of the slider.
  3. 01:03:007 (2,3,4,5) - OMG, this whole area feels overmapped...
  4. 01:17:218 (2) - I don't think this fits here. Place a circle at 01:17:393 instead.
  5. 01:24:411 (1) - Insert a reverse arrow, a finish hitsound at 01:25:113 then start spinner.
  6. I couldn't really mod this well...
[Hard]

Okay, this is weird...

Definitively, I need to mod this...
  1. I need to mod it, but I can't... too much overmapping... *dies* Try to listen to music for a while, then remap the diff...
Sorry, can't mod further.

Oh, yeah. If there isn't problem, would you allow me to map some hard?
I really want to do one. Please?
[ Nyx ]
Wooo random mod out of nowhere!

These are only suggestions, change what you think should be changed.

[Easy]

00:44:762 (4,5) - Fix the blanket.
01:03:007 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved slightly
01:04:762 (1,2) - Same with this one
00:30:727 (2,3,4) - Fix this so that (2) does not overlap (4). It looks ugly.
00:54:586 (1) - How about a finish here?
01:04:411 - Add a note here.
01:08:621 (5,6,7) - How about stacking (7) with (5) so that way (6) blankets both of them.
01:19:849 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved.

[Normal]

00:01:955 (4,1) - Slider (1)'s tail is not stacked properly with slider (4)'s head.
00:04:762 (4,5) - Make sure these are on the same x/y co-ordinates of this slider's head: 00:01:955 (4)
00:54:586 (1) - Finish here maybe?
01:11:078 (1,2) - Move (2) down a unit or two just so that they are better aligned.
01:08:621 (3,5) - Make sure these two slider tails are stacked properly.
01:16:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this part is going to be a little confusing for new players.

[Hard]

I tried playing this difficulty with DT and for me it was incredibly hard to read.

00:00:551 (2,5) - These notes shouldn't be overlapping.
00:13:183 (4,6) - Ugly overlap. Please fix.
00:21:428 (6,8) - Make sure (8) is stacked properly with (6)'s slider tail.
00:27:569 to 00:38:709 - Space out all of these notes. Bad overlapping and very cluttered notes makes it much harder to read.
00:56:516 (2,3) - Make a better blanket.
01:08:621 (5,6) - Make these two sliders the same. (Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V action)
01:10:200 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little confusing, at first I didn't even notice (4) Why not stack (4) on top of (5)
01:11:955 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:13:358 (5,6) - ^
01:13:972 (7,1) - Ugly overlap.
01:15:814 (7) - Rotate this note 20 degrees and fix the blanket.

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes?
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D)
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4)
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part.
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)?
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple.
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3)
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6)
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well.
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes.
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:06:867 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved.
00:08:095 (6,7) - ^
00:31:428 (2,4) - Why not stack these notes?
00:54:586 (1) - Not felling this spinner either. In all other difficulties this part had notes in it not a spinner. So why have a spinner now?
00:57:920 (9,1) - Improve blanket.

Well, that's all for me. mostly blanket/spacing/overlapping issues. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll become a good map in due time.
Jonarwhal
Hi m4m!

Easy-
SPOILER
AR-3
distance snap is important especially in easy and AiMod has 2 errors with this
they are at 00:11:428 (5) - this note and 00:50:902 (3) - this note
00:09:674 (3) - nc
00:10:200 (4) - make it go same direction as gap before it http://bit.ly/Wn3A9t
00:26:341 (2) - this should just be a circle at 00:26:516 - here
same with a lot of small circles in this diff, this is easy
00:26:867 (3) - overlaps with 00:28:621 (6) - this
00:29:674 (1,2) - why don't these look the same?
00:30:727 (2) - overlaps with 00:32:130 (4) - this
00:37:744 (5) - nc
00:41:604 (3) - overlaps with 00:43:358 (2) - this
00:52:130 (5) - overlaps with 00:52:130 (5) - and nc
these overlaps don't look intentional, they look kinda bad
01:04:411 - add note here
01:05:814 (2) - try x-360 y-232 for better blanket
01:17:393 (2) - overlaps
01:19:849 (5) - try x-392 y-192 for better blanket
01:21:604 (8) - fix blanket by reshaping slider
Normal-
SPOILER
again, ds errors in aimod
also, try to do the same thing i asked for with the nc's in all diffs
00:04:762 (4,5) - stack with 00:03:007 (1) - end
00:07:920 - note here stack with 00:08:972 (4) - here
00:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - overmapped, in fact, a lot of this is overmapped
try to use less reverses and make longer sliders
but, I won't point this out because it happens too much
00:19:499 (2,3,4) - fix flow, try (3) pressing "rotate 90 degrees clockwise" and "reverse selection" then moving it
00:28:972 (1,2,3,4) - fix blankets
00:31:779 (6,1,2,3) - fix flow, try something like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/gWZJeVB.jpg?1
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - a great example of overmapping
00:46:165 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:57:393 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
01:03:007 (2,3,4) - another example of overmapping
01:09:674 (5,6) - fix flow, try making (5) look like (3)
Hard-
SPOILER
Well, this diff has many of the same problems as normal/easy.
like overlap, which isn't hard to find.
I'll try to point out stuff that isn't so obvious or repetitive
00:00:376 - add note here
00:17:744 - ^
00:28:621 (4) - remove note
00:32:306 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:46:692 - add note
Ok, your kiai doesn't feel like a kiai.
I heard kiai means epic chorus, and this doesn't sound epic to me.
It actually sounds quieter than the rest of the map.
This is why I'm not mapping it (Edit) srry I meant modding it
Insane-
SPOILER
btw this is your best diff
00:08:095 (6,7) - blanket better
00:18:797 - add note
01:02:306 (1,2) - blanket
01:06:692 - add note
01:09:499 - ^
01:24:586 (2) - delete note

That's all!
really hope this helps and good luck :D
Topic Starter
Lasoki

LixRei wrote:

Hi there! Came from M4M request to your queue (overmapping everywhere! x.x)

[General]

  1. Artist: 藍井エイル Romanized Artist: Aoi Eir; Song title: IGNITE (TV Size ver.) (I'm not sure about the "ver." part). So, yeah. You need to change the song artist and title.
  2. Set up some Audio Lead-In, because the map starts too early. Around 1500 ms of lead-in should be enough. Configure this in the Notepad (select "Open .osu in Notepad"), in the Audio Lead-In option. And remember to do it on every difficulty!
changed.

[Easy]

  1. AR = 3 should make map a little bit easier. ok.
  2. 00:11:428 (5) - This slider's too close to previous one. Keep Distance Snap the same... ok.
  3. 00:20:551 (3) - Don't use 1/2 sliders in Easy (hard to read for newbies). I didn't complained about previous one because it seems to be easy enough. changed.
  4. 00:24:762 (4) - ^^ -^
  5. 00:26:341 (2) - Not only a 1/2 slider, but it is also at 1/2 distance from previous note... Do something, because it's too hard for an Easy. changed.
  6. 00:27:920 (4) - Insert a New Combo here changed.
  7. 00:28:621 (6) - Overlaps with 00:26:867 (3) - so I eagerly ask of you to move it somewhere else.changed.
  8. 00:29:148 (7) - Same as 00:26:341 (2) changed.
  9. 00:30:727 (2,4) - Those two overlap in an ugly way...changed.
  10. 00:34:586 (1,2,3,4) - Try to curve (1) and (3) to make some blanket with (2), then move down (4) to line up with (3). changed.
  11. 00:37:744 (5) - NC (New Combo), please!changed.
  12. 00:38:095 (6,8) - 1/2 sliders again... Ugh...changed.
  13. 00:43:358 (2) - Overlaps with 00:41:604 (3)changed.
  14. 00:46:867 (2,3) - 1/2 beat separation... I'll stop complaining about those things, because I think you got the message of changing those.
  15. 00:53:358 (7,2,4) - I pray of you... don't make those sliders overlap. And correct any other overlap (which I'll stop mentioning).changed.
  16. And since Kiai start, you started to put on a lot of claps... try to remove some (I can't suggest which ones because I'm bad at identifing hitsounds)I actually think it's ok since there are a lot of claps in the music itself.
[Normal]

  1. 00:27:920 (1) - Try to keep your sliders with only a reverse. It makes things easier (and players aren't fully used to reverses yet). I'll only mention this once, because I don't want to keep repeating the same things. ok thanks.
  2. 01:00:025 (2) - This feels overmapped. You should place a circle at 01:00:200 instead of the slider. i don't really think so.
  3. 01:03:007 (2,3,4,5) - OMG, this whole area feels overmapped... changed
  4. 01:17:218 (2) - I don't think this fits here. Place a circle at 01:17:393 instead. ok.
  5. 01:24:411 (1) - Insert a reverse arrow, a finish hitsound at 01:25:113 then start spinner. ok.
  6. I couldn't really mod this well...
[Hard]

Okay, this is weird...

Definitively, I need to mod this...
  1. I need to mod it, but I can't... too much overmapping... *dies* Try to listen to music for a while, then remap the diff...
I'll remap it.

Sorry, can't mod further. it's fine xD

Oh, yeah. If there isn't problem, would you allow me to map some hard?
I really want to do one. Please?
Thanks for mapping! it really helped me!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Wooo random mod out of nowhere!

These are only suggestions, change what you think should be changed.

[Easy]

00:44:762 (4,5) - Fix the blanket. not supposed to be a blanket anymore.
01:03:007 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved slightly should be ok now.
01:04:762 (1,2) - Same with this one should be ok now.
00:30:727 (2,3,4) - Fix this so that (2) does not overlap (4). It looks ugly. fixed.
00:54:586 (1) - How about a finish here? ok.
01:04:411 - Add a note here. didn't add.
01:08:621 (5,6,7) - How about stacking (7) with (5) so that way (6) blankets both of them. nahhh...
01:19:849 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved. ok.

[Normal]

00:01:955 (4,1) - Slider (1)'s tail is not stacked properly with slider (4)'s head. O.o to me it is.
00:04:762 (4,5) - Make sure these are on the same x/y co-ordinates of this slider's head: 00:01:955 (4) ok.
00:54:586 (1) - Finish here maybe? ok.
01:11:078 (1,2) - Move (2) down a unit or two just so that they are better aligned. ok.
01:08:621 (3,5) - Make sure these two slider tails are stacked properly. Pretty sure they are.
01:16:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this part is going to be a little confusing for new players. should be better now.

[Hard]

I tried playing this difficulty with DT and for me it was incredibly hard to read. gonna skip this part since i decided to remap it... thanks though.

00:00:551 (2,5) - These notes shouldn't be overlapping.
00:13:183 (4,6) - Ugly overlap. Please fix.
00:21:428 (6,8) - Make sure (8) is stacked properly with (6)'s slider tail.
00:27:569 to 00:38:709 - Space out all of these notes. Bad overlapping and very cluttered notes makes it much harder to read.
00:56:516 (2,3) - Make a better blanket.
01:08:621 (5,6) - Make these two sliders the same. (Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V action)
01:10:200 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little confusing, at first I didn't even notice (4) Why not stack (4) on top of (5)
01:11:955 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:13:358 (5,6) - ^
01:13:972 (7,1) - Ugly overlap.
01:15:814 (7) - Rotate this note 20 degrees and fix the blanket.

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes?
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D)
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4)
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part.
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)?
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple.
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3)
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6)
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well.
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes.
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:06:867 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved. errr... seems fine for me.
00:08:095 (6,7) - ^ errr... seems fine for me.
00:31:428 (2,4) - Why not stack these notes? sure why not.
00:54:586 (1) - Not felling this spinner either. In all other difficulties this part had notes in it not a spinner. So why have a spinner now? honestly said not sure why i put the spinner there... and since you and someone else suggested mapping it out i did.
00:57:920 (9,1) - Improve blanket. should be better.

Well, that's all for me. mostly blanket/spacing/overlapping issues. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll become a good map in due time.
thanks~
Topic Starter
Lasoki

jonawaga wrote:

Hi m4m!

Easy-
SPOILER
AR-3 changed.
distance snap is important especially in easy and AiMod has 2 errors with this
they are at 00:11:428 (5) - this note and 00:50:902 (3) - this note ok.
00:09:674 (3) - nc ok.
00:10:200 (4) - make it go same direction as gap before it http://bit.ly/Wn3A9t ok.
00:26:341 (2) - this should just be a circle at 00:26:516 - here changed.
same with a lot of small circles in this diff, this is easy
00:26:867 (3) - overlaps with 00:28:621 (6) - this changed.
00:29:674 (1,2) - why don't these look the same? i like it i'll change it though if someone else mentions this.
00:30:727 (2) - overlaps with 00:32:130 (4) - this changed.
00:37:744 (5) - nc changed.
00:41:604 (3) - overlaps with 00:43:358 (2) - this changed.
00:52:130 (5) - overlaps with 00:52:130 (5) - and nc changed.
these overlaps don't look intentional, they look kinda bad
01:04:411 - add note here don't think it's needed.
01:05:814 (2) - try x-360 y-232 for better blanket the coordinates somehow don't fit for me but it should be better.
01:17:393 (2) - overlaps this was intentional.
01:19:849 (5) - try x-392 y-192 for better blanket fixed this in a mod which i haven't applied yet before you modded this.
01:21:604 (8) - fix blanket by reshaping slider-^
Normal-
SPOILER
again, ds errors in aimod
also, try to do the same thing i asked for with the nc's in all diffs
00:04:762 (4,5) - stack with 00:03:007 (1) - end changed.
00:07:920 - note here stack with 00:08:972 (4) - here didn't add, I like the space here.
00:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - overmapped, in fact, a lot of this is overmapped don't think so.
try to use less reverses and make longer sliders
but, I won't point this out because it happens too much ok thanks.
00:19:499 (2,3,4) - fix flow, try (3) pressing "rotate 90 degrees clockwise" and "reverse selection" then moving it ok.
00:28:972 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanketsok.
00:31:779 (6,1,2,3) - fix flow, try something like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/gWZJeVB.jpg?1 don't get that picture and I think it's ok how it is.
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - a great example of overmapping don't see how this is overmapping.
00:46:165 (1,2) - fix blanket ok.
00:57:393 (1,2,3) - fix blankets tried to...
01:03:007 (2,3,4) - another example of overmapping ok.
01:09:674 (5,6) - fix flow, try making (5) look like (3) ok.
Hard-
SPOILER
Well, this diff has many of the same problems as normal/easy.
like overlap, which isn't hard to find.
I'll try to point out stuff that isn't so obvious or repetitive
00:00:376 - add note here
00:17:744 - ^
00:28:621 (4) - remove note
00:32:306 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:46:692 - add note
Ok, your kiai doesn't feel like a kiai.
I heard kiai means epic chorus, and this doesn't sound epic to me.
It actually sounds quieter than the rest of the map.
This is why I'm not mapping it (Edit) srry I meant modding it decided to remap the whole hard diff.
Insane-
SPOILER
btw this is your best diff thanks! I also think so.
00:08:095 (6,7) - blanket better should be better.
00:18:797 - add note ok.
01:02:306 (1,2) - blanket ok.
01:06:692 - add note ok.
01:09:499 - ^ ok.
01:24:586 (2) - delete note ok.

That's all!
really hope this helps and good luck :D
Thanks, really helped.
Lavaeater12

Modem wrote:

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note I don't really see why so I didn't add this
00:06:692 Add a note I've changed the previous one into a slider instead
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once done
00:42:569 Add a note done
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note can't agree with this
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note can't agree with this either, but I've changed the combo to start on what used to be (3)
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note done
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once
Thanks for modding!


Z3R0Xx wrote:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes? done
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D) done
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4) done
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part. done
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)? done
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple. done
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3) done
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6) done
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well. done
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it. done, I've also moved the next few circles around to correct the spacing again.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes. done
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing. done
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^ done
Thank you for the help!
Sky Trias

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:885 - add note
  2. 00:09:849 (2) - remove . then move 00:10:025 (3) to 00:09:849
  3. 00:20:727 (1,2,3) - move to 00:20:551 . then add note here - 00:21:604
  4. 00:26:516 (3) - remove , move to 00:26:516 . then add note here - 00:27:042
  5. 00:28:095 (5) - remove ?
  6. 00:30:639 (1) - move to 00:30:551 ?
  7. 00:33:446 (1) - same ^ . move to 00:33:358 ?
  8. 00:47:744 - add note . move 00:48:095 (6) to 00:47:920 . then add note here - 00:48:271
  9. 00:48:621 - add note here
  10. 01:11:253 (1,2) - um .. make like this ?
[LixRei's Hard]
  1. 00:33:885 (2,3) - Ctrl+G ? then 00:34:586 (4) - Ctrl+G too
  2. 00:36:692 (9) - Ctrl+G ?
  3. 00:05:464 (2) - ^
  4. 00:59:674 - add note ?
[Lavaeater12's Insane]
  1. 00:05:990 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
  2. 00:19:674 (2) - remove ?
  3. 00:21:078 (7) - ^
  4. 00:50:376 (1) - longer this slider till 00:50:727
  5. 00:53:797 (2) - remove
  6. 00:57:306 - add note
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:271 (7) - Ctrl+G ?
  2. 00:29:323 (4) - remove . move this 00:29:499 (4) to 00:29:323
  3. 00:32:306 (7) - Ctrl+G ?
  4. 00:54:586 (6) - ^
OK .. that's all ..
GoodLuck!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Sky Trias wrote:


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:885 - add note no.
  2. 00:09:849 (2) - remove . then move 00:10:025 (3) to 00:09:849 ok.
  3. 00:20:727 (1,2,3) - move to 00:20:551 . then add note here - 00:21:604 no.
  4. 00:26:516 (3) - remove , move to 00:26:516 . then add note here - 00:27:042 no.
  5. 00:28:095 (5) - remove ? wouldn't know why i should.
  6. 00:30:639 (1) - move to 00:30:551 ? no.
  7. 00:33:446 (1) - same ^ . move to 00:33:358 ? no.
  8. 00:47:744 - add note . move 00:48:095 (6) to 00:47:920 . then add note here - 00:48:271 no.
  9. 00:48:621 - add note here ok.
  10. 01:11:253 (1,2) - um .. make like this ? did something else instead.
[LixRei's Hard]
  1. 00:33:885 (2,3) - Ctrl+G ? then 00:34:586 (4) - Ctrl+G too
  2. 00:36:692 (9) - Ctrl+G ?
  3. 00:05:464 (2) - ^
  4. 00:59:674 - add note ?
[Lavaeater12's Insane]
  1. 00:05:990 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
  2. 00:19:674 (2) - remove ?
  3. 00:21:078 (7) - ^
  4. 00:50:376 (1) - longer this slider till 00:50:727
  5. 00:53:797 (2) - remove
  6. 00:57:306 - add note
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:271 (7) - Ctrl+G ? no.
  2. 00:29:323 (4) - remove . move this 00:29:499 (4) to 00:29:323 I like the way it is more.
  3. 00:32:306 (7) - Ctrl+G ? no.
  4. 00:54:586 (6) - ^ no.
OK .. that's all ..
GoodLuck!
thanks a lot for the mod, though i didn't change a lot of things.
Lurei
Erm... this is kinda ankward to say.

I'm planning on making some big changes on my diff (not a full re-map), so I won't be applying any mods for now.

Anyway, thanks for modding!

@Lasoki: I'll PM you when I'm done.

Edit (too fast owo): Changes done. Didn't applied mods, since I don't wanna Ctrl + G those patterns, nor add the note (through I'm thinking about it).
Ultima Fox
Hello, I came from your modding Queue ^.^
Im not that good at modding, but maybe this can help :)

INSANE

SPOILER
00:15:288 (7) - This Slider Looks a little Awkward, try reshaping to make it a little smoother
00:28:621 (1,2) - I got Confused at this part, because the distance between 00:28:621 (1,2) and 00:29:148 (3,4) are the same, but they hit at different time intervals. This can be fixed by moving (1) over and putting (2) next to it, or something else.
00:53:358 (1) - You should make this note hit on all 3 beats to go with the song. You have a choice of what you want to do
01:05:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is like the slider earlier, it looks a little rough and random.

LAVAEATER12's INSANE

SPOILER
00:09:674 (6) - Start the combo here possibly
00:57:393 (1,3) - you have a hitsound on these 2 notes, which goes with the singing, but it stops at 00:58:797 (5) . I think you should either continue it by putting hitsounds on 00:58:797 (5,1) , or remove the hitsounds that go with the singing.
01:00:200 (1,3) - ^
01:08:621 (8,10) - ^
01:10:727 (1) - This slider doesnt look too bad, but it looks a little uneven

REI'S HARD

SPOILER
00:17:393 (4,5) - A jump like this in hard?
00:54:060 (2,3) - Here, (2) and (3) are farther apart than (1) and (2), feel free to keep it if you want
01:03:534 (7,8,9) - Why not stack them?
01:24:762 - Try adding a note here

HARD

SPOILER
00:09:849 (2,3) - These two are really close for how far apart they are timewise
00:11:779 (1,2) - These two are far, maybe try stacking them
01:07:569 (5,6) - Make these a repeating slider to match the triplet that comes after

NORMAL

SPOILER
00:11:428 (5,6) - Make these closer, maybe in the center
01:04:060 (4) - Maybe add a hitsound?

EASY

SPOILER
00:00:025 (1) - Is it just me, or does this sound wrong
00:38:797 (3) - Try not to make jumps in easy, you can make it at a distance where its close enough to (2) BUT AT A GOOD DISTANCE FROM (4)
01:11:428 (9) - Maybe start the combo here

Very Good Map, Hope it gets ranked!
Unusual-bot
Hi there, trying to mod your map for M4M. All i say here are suggestion only, so it's up to you whether you want to follow it or not :)
Let's start then~

Easy
Try to use Distance Snap, it's common to use this in Easy - Normal diffs
00:40:551 (2) - make this normal curve
00:43:358 (2) - ^
00:44:762 (4,5) - blanket
00:46:516 (1) - 284|192 for better flow
00:47:569 (3,4,1) - blanket
00:50:376 (2,3) - da distance difference w/ others xD, please make the distance equal for all notes in easy. and i think this placement or alike is better than just go straight
01:00:551 (5) - make this normal curve, i mean, the smooth one
01:01:604 (1,2,3) - (2)364|176, (3)256|212 with this placement

Normal
Use Distance Snap please
01:06:165 (1,2) - blanket properly
00:04:060 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well, don't make this straight, just make it up-down-up-down or down-up-down-up like [url=puu.sh/cKPUU.jpg]this[/url]
00:10:902 (4,5) - remove the space
00:47:218 (3,4,5) - too straight, make it zig-zag
00:49:323 (2,3,4,5) - ^ and you can combine 3 and 4 to make it easier to zig zag

Hard
00:48:095 (6) - you can make it into 2 circles
00:53:885 (1) - ^ and you can make some jump here
01:07:920 - you can add 1 note here

That's all from me
Good luck~
emilia
From https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/216120/start=0

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:025 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:06:165 (4,1) - Flow from 4 to 1 is awkward, like how 4 doesn't seem to lead to 1, try 1 blanket 4
  3. 00:08:271 (2,1) - Try a blanket here
  4. 00:11:428 (3) - That's one ugly slider, consider changing it
  5. 00:19:148 (2) - Starts off at a weird time
  6. 00:20:727 (3) - ^
  7. 00:28:271 (2,3) - Shift the end of 3 more towards the right so it doesn't seem like it cuts into 2
  8. 00:40:551 (2) - Ugly
  9. 00:41:604 (3,1) - Try making 1 parallel, or at least introduce better flow
  10. 00:43:358 (2) - Ugly
  11. 00:50:727 (3,4) - Consider centralize
  12. 00:58:446 (2) - I will suggest a shorter + reverse slider here, since there is a beat here: 00:58:797 -
  13. 01:17:393 (2,4) - I personally don't really like how these sliders intersect
  14. 01:18:797 (4,6) - ^
  15. 01:20:200 (6,8) - ^ (Sliders are touching a bit)

    Eh its a weird Easy. But its fine I think. NC patterns are very weird, try NC once every 4 bars instead of your current pattern.

    [Normal]
  16. 00:01:955 (4) - Try ctrl g
  17. 00:06:867 (1,2) - Blanket fix
  18. 00:08:271 (3,4) - ^
  19. 00:09:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern is very confusing; 2 stacked notes flow to a reverse slider then back to another reverse slider then to 2 intersecting sliders look very ugly. Try unstacking, then change direction of flow from reverse slider to the other, then make the intersecting slider face the same way instead.
  20. 00:13:183 (2,3,4) - Try making 2 and 3 curve down to flow with 4. I have no idea how this 2-3-4 will work in your case.
  21. 00:15:990 (1,2,3,4) - Switch from instrumental in 1,2,3 is weird when it hits 4 since 4 follows vocal. Try adding something between.
  22. 00:28:446 (2,1) - Dunno what you intended here, how does 2 get to 1 when 2 is straight (leads towards bottom right)
  23. 00:28:972 (1,3) - Try blanket
  24. 00:30:025 (3,4) - ^
  25. 00:33:534 (4,5,6) - Looks very confusing, especially to Normal players
  26. 00:37:042 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try a better transition from vocal to instrument, pattern 1,2,3,4 also looks very ugly
  27. 00:39:849 (6) - No double reverses please.
  28. 00:53:885 (2) - ^
  29. 01:01:253 (4,5,6) - Blanket?
  30. 01:04:586 (5,6,7) - Following vocal here is very awkward, since you dunno when 6 hits you
  31. 01:09:674 (5,6) - 5 should lead away from 6, make 6 vertical instead and shift it such that it flows along with 5
  32. 01:11:779 (3,4,5) - This pattern is very weird, since the slider heads/tails overlap a lot. May seem confusing. Try another pattern
  33. 01:13:885 (1,2) - Fix flow from 1 to 2, since 1 seems to lead away from 2
  34. 01:22:657 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for Normal I think

    A very weird Normal. A Normal is meant to be flowy IMO, so I don't get your reverse flows and stuff. Also, I spot a lot of linear patterns like: 00:23:358 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -. I dunno what your intention is, since it feels very boring. Try to make it flowy yet interesting to play. Note stacking may seem very confusing to play as well, since the player cannot fully grasp the rhythm of the song.

    [Hard]
  35. 00:05:288 (4,6) - 4 leads away from 5 (which stacks on 6) so its very weird flow, try to make 4 lead to 6
  36. 00:09:849 (2,3) - 3 is meant to be WAY further from 2, it may be confusing to the player due to uneven DS
  37. 00:17:042 (4,5,6) - Try making this symmetrical
  38. 00:18:446 (2,3) - Why does 3 lie on the edge of 2? It feels weird and un-flowy at the same time.
  39. 00:20:727 (1,2,3) - Try remove 2 and shift 3 up to 2, as of now your rhythm is very weird for that part of the song
  40. 00:21:955 (4,5,6,7) - Why this pattern? You can have something more interesting
  41. 00:24:060 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't get the rhythm here.
  42. 00:26:165 (1,2,3,4) - Try having 1,2,4,3 instead. Shift 4 to 3 then 3 to 4
  43. 00:27:569 (2,3,4,5) - Why the uneven DS?
  44. 00:30:639 (1,2) - Very awkward for its timing/rhythm. There's nothing at 1
  45. 00:33:446 (1,2) - ^
  46. 00:36:516 (5,6) - Don't stack, make sure 4 leads to 5 then to 6
  47. 00:46:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very confusing placement
  48. 00:48:095 (6,7) - There's nothing at 6 and 7, why are there notes there?
  49. 00:50:025 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - DS is very confusing for player to grasp
  50. 01:08:271 (7,8,9) - Try shifting this to the closest red line before 7
  51. 01:08:621 - Add a note here
  52. 01:24:411 (1,2,3) - Very weird for these 3 notes to be here, try a reverse slider instead, since that's easy to follow

    I'm starting to not understand your mapping. Your beat placements are weird, you use very linear patterns, you use a lot of patterns at the wrong location, and the notes seem to be too far apart. A lot of DS problems as well. I can tell that this mod will be rather long :(

    [Rei's Hard]
    00:05:464 (2) - Try ctrl g
  53. 00:11:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a pentagon
  54. 00:12:306 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - There are stronger beats to be emphasized here
  55. 00:40:551 (1,2) - Try adding something in between for smoother transition to this timing here
  56. 00:50:376 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern may be confusing, since DS is not all to catching this rhythm
  57. 01:23:007 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Timing is hard to get

    I can't say much, it's a very underdeveloped map. You're mapping to vocals, but some bits are too hard to follow. Try mapping something that interlaces vocal + bg music. Some nice patterns, but mostly very weird/don't fit there.

    [Lavaeater12's Insane]
  58. 00:05:464 (1,2) - 1 leads away from 2, try making 1's flow to 2 better
  59. 00:18:095 (1) - Slider shape for now is very ugly, consider shifting the points to make it something like this:
  60. 00:24:411 (1) - The slider here is missing too many strong beats
  61. 00:31:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks very confusing to follow
  62. 00:36:428 (1) - Weird spinner? What is this for?
  63. 01:03:709 (1,2,3) - Flow??
  64. 01:04:937 (2,3,4,5) - They should lead to each other, not the same direction
  65. 01:10:727 (1) - Missing a lot of strong beats

    Its very weird, since some bits are overmapped (the beginning) while some bits are undermapped (chorus). Very awkward mapping style with too many sliders that curve too much. Also, do remember, these sliders: 01:10:727 (1) - will get boring over time, try something new?

    [Insane]
  66. I think I'll need individual boxes for this
Weird/unfitting patterns
  1. 00:00:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 6 is so far away from spinner
  2. 00:11:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon?
  3. 00:25:990 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - The flow is messy as well, the hitcircles are too tight to each other, try a different pattern
  4. 00:45:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - If anything, shift 7 higher for a more consistent pattern
  5. 01:12:657 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe shift 4 outwards away from 1,2,3 more
Your patterns get boring over time, try something new when you encounter a new rhythm/new part of the song.

Weird flow
  1. 00:10:727 (4,5) - If anything, 4 should lead to 5
  2. 00:12:306 (1,2,3) - The triplet is really far apart from each other, they should be more linear than that curved
  3. 00:14:235 (2,3) - Flow fix
  4. 00:17:569 (4,5) - The anti-flow here is really horrible
  5. 00:20:025 (5,6) - ^
  6. 00:23:007 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:25:464 (4,5) - ^
  8. 00:33:709 (7,8,1) - Double^
  9. 00:36:692 (4,5) - ^ Protip: try making them look good by shifting the note being overlapped by the slider away
  10. 00:48:972 (4,5,6,7,8) - Pattern is very weird, flow is also very broken.
  11. 00:50:551 (4,5,6,7) - Confusing and broken in terms of flow at the same time
  12. 00:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream will be very hard to track if you keep them so far apart
  13. 00:54:586 (6,7,8) - Why the anti-flow
  14. 00:57:218 (6,7,8) - Double^
  15. 00:59:499 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Triple^
  16. 01:00:902 (1,2,1,2) - Double^
  17. 01:02:832 (1,2,3) - Mentioned above, triplet is too far apart from each other/very ugly/hard to track
  18. 01:03:183 (4,5,6) - Double anti-flow
  19. 01:04:235 (8,9) - ^
  20. 01:05:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, try having a more linear stream
  21. 01:05:990 (6,7) - Anti-flow
  22. 01:07:920 (3,4) - ^
  23. 01:08:797 (7,8) - ^ Protip: Anti-flows are not good when you place them like that
  24. 01:10:200 (4,5,6,7) - Double^
  25. 01:11:604 (4,5,6) - Double^
  26. 01:13:885 (8,9,10,11,1) - Hard to track
  27. 01:14:235 (1,2) - Anti-flow
  28. 01:16:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Hard to track
  29. 01:17:744 (5,1) - Anti-flow
  30. 01:21:428 (7,8) - ^
A heck-load of anti-flows and hard to track streams, which may not be optimal even in an Extra (at times). Try fixing all anti-flows and all unstreamables.

Bad rhythm
  1. 00:21:604 (1) - Random spinner here? wtf?
  2. 00:23:709 (3,4,5,6,7) - Really don't get the point in the hitcircle spam
  3. 00:34:937 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  4. 01:28:095 (1) - Make the rhythm end here instead
A lot of beat placements need working on

Weird sliders
  1. 00:03:885 (6,7) - Dunno how they lead into each other, dunno how they work effectively there
  2. 00:15:288 (7) - There are better rhythms to follow here
  3. 00:42:657 (1) - Angled weirdly, and try not to have double reverses
These are just opinions, because I don't really like weird sliders at places where they aren't used effectively. But please remove the double reverse.

Messy DS
  1. 00:28:621 (1,2,3,4) - The DS is very unclear
[*]01:09:849 (1,2,3,4) - Try shifting 4 away from 1 more, so the player doesn't get confused

Try to use DS if you're unfamiliar to Insane. Once you get the style down, then try something new and then mess around with DS.

Blanket fix
  1. 00:05:639 (9,10,11,2) -
I won't talk a lot about this since this isn't the major issue in your map

That was a horrifically long mod. Try to follow these steps and your map should turn out better.
Lurei
Applied mods, remapped a lot of things, etc. so I won't be giving reply to Estellia-'s mods (they were pretty helpful, anyway).

Anyway, here's update.

SPOILER
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 53358
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:IGNITE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:IGNITE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
Creator:Lasoki
Version:Rei's Hard
Source:Sword Art Online II
Tags:SAO, Sword Art Online 2, Lavaeater12, LixRei, Opening
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BeatmapSetID:191519

[Difficulty]
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141,268,72130,2,0,L|72:216,2,81.25,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,131,72832,5,4,0:3:0:0:
279,131,73183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,267,73534,2,0,L|480:218,2,81.25,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,267,74060,6,0,L|253:315,2,81.25,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,169,74586,2,0,L|382:120,2,81.25,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,169,75113,2,0,L|154:120,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,266,75639,6,0,L|188:292,3,40.625,4|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,266,75990,2,0,L|297:292,3,40.625,8|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,76341,2,0,L|244:183,4,40.625,2|0|0|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
220,87,76867,6,0,P|182:98|160:132,2,81.25,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,87,77393,2,0,P|356:98|378:131,2,81.25,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,156,77920,2,0,P|214:176|201:214,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,296,78446,6,0,L|160:328,1,81.25,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,285,78797,2,0,L|98:256,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,186,79148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,186,79323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,108,79499,6,0,P|252:140|268:184,2,81.25,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,80025,2,0,P|143:58|170:28,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,80551,2,0,P|96:229|69:259,2,81.25,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,128,81078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,128,81253,5,4,0:3:0:0:
128,96,81428,2,0,P|172:116|198:148,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,81955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,260,82130,2,0,L|235:319,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,82657,5,4,0:0:0:0:
249,54,83007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,54,83183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,191,83534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,259,83709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,328,83885,2,0,L|188:272,2,81.25,0|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,230,84411,5,8,0:0:0:0:
366,207,84762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,184,85113,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85200,12,4,88095,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Lasoki
Updated Rei's Hard. Applied the other mods too, also changed some other things here and there a bit and did some thngs diffrent then suggested.... sry was to lazy to write a reply to them with all the changes I did... most of them helped me though.
Lavaeater12
Hi!
Sorry for being away for so long. I just couldn't get around to mapping.
I've tried to integrate all three new mods that i got in the mean time...

Sky Trias wrote:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]
  1. 00:05:990 (2) - Ctrl+G ? Didn't reverse this, but i moved (1) to lead into 2 better
  2. 00:19:674 (2) - remove ? ok
  3. 00:21:078 (7) - ^ ok
  4. 00:50:376 (1) - longer this slider till 00:50:727 ok
  5. 00:53:797 (2) - remove ok
  6. 00:57:306 - add note ok

GyroX20 wrote:

LAVAEATER12's INSANE

SPOILER
00:09:674 (6) - Start the combo here possibly ok
00:57:393 (1,3) - you have a hitsound on these 2 notes, which goes with the singing, but it stops at 00:58:797 (5) . I think you should either continue it by putting hitsounds on 00:58:797 (5,1) , or remove the hitsounds that go with the singing. ok, added the hitsounds
01:00:200 (1,3) - ^ ok
01:08:621 (8,10) - ^ ok
01:10:727 (1) - This slider doesnt look too bad, but it looks a little uneven
replaced this slider, because of Estellia's comment

Estellia- wrote:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]
[*]00:05:464 (1,2) - 1 leads away from 2, try making 1's flow to 2 better I've moved (1) away and rotated it a bit to flow better
[*]00:18:095 (1) - Slider shape for now is very ugly, consider shifting the points to make it something like this:
Agreed that it doesn't look that good. I split up the slider instead.
[*]00:24:411 (1) - The slider here is missing too many strong beats split up this slider as well
[*]00:31:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks very confusing to follow Moved the sliders so they don't overlap
[*]00:36:428 (1) - Weird spinner? What is this for? For the long note in the background and for some change... But I've removed the spinner now
[*]01:03:709 (1,2,3) - Flow?? Moved the 2 onto the other side
[*]01:04:937 (2,3,4,5) - They should lead to each other, not the same direction ok, reversed selection on (3) and (5)
[*]01:10:727 (1) - Missing a lot of strong beats ok, replaced this slider

Its very weird, since some bits are overmapped (the beginning) while some bits are undermapped (chorus). Very awkward mapping style with too many sliders that curve too much. Also, do remember, these sliders: 01:10:727 (1) - will get boring over time, try something new?
Thanks for the mods!
Come[Back]Home
Easy
00:06:165 (4,1) Those two are awfully close to each other
00:08:271 (2,2) Ba overlap here, move 00:10:200 (2) somewhere else
00:11:428 (3) Why dont you make this one curvy?
00:24:762 (3) ^
00:26:867 (3) I suggest ctrl+g here for better flow. You have to replace 00:26:867 (3) though
00:36:341 (4,2) Bad overlap here
00:39:148 (4,2) ^ and make (2) curvy
00:41:604 (3,2) They are really close to each other, you shoul fix that
00:43:358 (2,4) ^
00:50:376 (2,3) Blank (3) with (2)
00:54:937 (2,4) They are really close to each other
01:17:393 (2,4) Im unsure about this overlap. Maybe you should delete it
01:18:797 (4,6) overlap
01:20:200 (6,8) ^

Normal
00:09:674 (1,2) 1/2 slider instead?
00:13:534 (3) Delete it, and put one circle there
00:18:446 (6) Add NC delete NC 00:19:148
00:30:376 (4,5,6) This overlap is not so nice
00:34:235 (6,2) Stack is not perfect
00:43:709 (2,2) Avoid overlaps like this, really confusing for a normal diff
00:51:779 (1,2,3,4) Too hard for a normal
00:53:885 (2,1) Let (2) repeat once
00:54:937 (2,5) Bad overlap
00:57:393 (1,3) ^
01:05:464 (7,2) ^
01:08:621 (3,5) Stack can be improved
01:11:779 (3,5) ^
01:12:481 (4,1) ^

Hard
00:05:288 (4,5,6) They are really close to each other
00:09:849 (2,4) ^
00:17:393 (5,6) No need for a jump here
00:19:148 (4,5) Bad overlap
00:26:165 (1,3) You can stack those two
00:30:551 Add Circle
00:33:358 ^
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4) Flow is really akward here
00:41:428 (4,6) They are touching
00:46:516 (1,3) You can stack them
00:47:218 (4,5) ^
00:58:534 (3,5) Stack can be improved
01:06:516 (3,4) They are really close to each other
01:07:920 (7,10) Overlap
01:08:972 (1,3) They are nearly touching, fix that

Rei's Hard
00:03:709 (2) ctrl+g
00:08:972 (4,1,2) Why do you go against the flow with (1,2)?
00:12:832 A circle is missing here
00:17:393 (4,5) No need for a jump
00:19:148 (3) ctrl+g
00:32:130 (5,6) Improve those sliders, they look weird
00:43:183 (4,1) Why the jump?
00:51:253 (4,2) Overlap
00:54:060 (2,3) Why that jump? There is no need to
01:05:464 (4,5,1) ^
01:09:323 (5,6) Overlap
01:19:323 (7,1) Too confusing for hard

Lavaeater12's Insane
00:01:253 (1,5) Stack them
00:02:306 (7,2) Bad overlap
00:06:516 (4,1) Improve the blank
00:07:744 (3,4) Why the ds change?
00:14:586 (2,3) Bad overlap
00:34:235 (5,1) There is no need for this
00:36:341 (8,2) Bad overlap
00:49:849 (6,1) Improve the blank
00:53:358 (1,2) Bad overlap
01:11:428 (4,1) ^

Insane
Well, since im not that godd at modding Insane ill stop here. If you still want my mod on this diff just ask me :3

Good luck with it ^_^
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:06:165 (4,1) Those two are awfully close to each other changed.
00:08:271 (2,2) Ba overlap here, move 00:10:200 (2) somewhere else changed.
00:11:428 (3) Why dont you make this one curvy? nah, I like it as it is.
00:24:762 (3) ^ok, why not.
00:26:867 (3) I suggest ctrl+g here for better flow. You have to replace 00:26:867 (3) though done.
00:36:341 (4,2) Bad overlap here fixed.
00:39:148 (4,2) ^ and make (2) curvy got rid of bad overlap, but didn't curve anything.
00:41:604 (3,2) They are really close to each other, you shoul fix that done.
00:43:358 (2,4) ^ done.
00:50:376 (2,3) Blank (3) with (2) I don't think it fits, since the (4) after that is straight.
00:54:937 (2,4) They are really close to each other fixed.
01:17:393 (2,4) Im unsure about this overlap. Maybe you should delete it ok, changing it, since other people also mentioned this.
01:18:797 (4,6) overlap fixed.
01:20:200 (6,8) ^ fixed.

Normal
00:09:674 (1,2) 1/2 slider instead? I like it more as it is.
00:13:534 (3) Delete it, and put one circle there I feel like there's something missing when I put a circle there.
00:18:446 (6) Add NC delete NC 00:19:148 ok.
00:30:376 (4,5,6) This overlap is not so nice changed.
00:34:235 (6,2) Stack is not perfect should be fine now.
00:43:709 (2,2) Avoid overlaps like this, really confusing for a normal diff changed.
00:51:779 (1,2,3,4) Too hard for a normal i don't think so.
00:53:885 (2,1) Let (2) repeat once ok.
00:54:937 (2,5) Bad overlap i think it's ok though.
00:57:393 (1,3) ^ changed.
01:05:464 (7,2) ^ changed.
01:08:621 (3,5) Stack can be improved changed.
01:11:779 (3,5) ^ changed.
01:12:481 (4,1) ^ changed.

Hard
00:05:288 (4,5,6) They are really close to each other fixed.
00:09:849 (2,4) ^ fixed.
00:17:393 (5,6) No need for a jump here I think it fits.
00:19:148 (4,5) Bad overlap should be better.
00:26:165 (1,3) You can stack those two ok.
00:30:551 Add Circle there's no best there or anything, so no.
00:33:358 ^ there's no best there or anything, so no.
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4) Flow is really akward here I don't think so.
00:41:428 (4,6) They are touching changed.
00:46:516 (1,3) You can stack them ok.
00:47:218 (4,5) ^ no, then the distance it not good.
00:58:534 (3,5) Stack can be improved ok.
01:06:516 (3,4) They are really close to each other fixed.
01:07:920 (7,10) Overlap this was totally intentional.
01:08:972 (1,3) They are nearly touching, fix that fixed.

Rei's Hard
00:03:709 (2) ctrl+g
00:08:972 (4,1,2) Why do you go against the flow with (1,2)?
00:12:832 A circle is missing here
00:17:393 (4,5) No need for a jump
00:19:148 (3) ctrl+g
00:32:130 (5,6) Improve those sliders, they look weird
00:43:183 (4,1) Why the jump?
00:51:253 (4,2) Overlap
00:54:060 (2,3) Why that jump? There is no need to
01:05:464 (4,5,1) ^
01:09:323 (5,6) Overlap
01:19:323 (7,1) Too confusing for hard

Lavaeater12's Insane
00:01:253 (1,5) Stack them
00:02:306 (7,2) Bad overlap
00:06:516 (4,1) Improve the blank
00:07:744 (3,4) Why the ds change?
00:14:586 (2,3) Bad overlap
00:34:235 (5,1) There is no need for this
00:36:341 (8,2) Bad overlap
00:49:849 (6,1) Improve the blank
00:53:358 (1,2) Bad overlap
01:11:428 (4,1) ^

Insane
Well, since im not that godd at modding Insane ill stop here. If you still want my mod on this diff just ask me :3

Good luck with it ^_^
Thanks a lot for the mod! I'll mod yours this weekend.
Lavaeater12

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Lavaeater12's Insane
00:01:253 (1,5) Stack them ok
00:02:306 (7,2) Bad overlap ok
00:06:516 (4,1) Improve the blank ok
00:07:744 (3,4) Why the ds change? fixed this
00:14:586 (2,3) Bad overlap ok
00:34:235 (5,1) There is no need for this I don't understand what you mean?
00:36:341 (8,2) Bad overlap ok
00:49:849 (6,1) Improve the blank ok
00:53:358 (1,2) Bad overlap ok
01:11:428 (4,1) ^ ok
Thanks for the mod!
DreaM117er
SAO again... :?
And bumped into this song too many times...So I very hate this song
Then your 2nd map you post in my Queue I don't like, I have no choice...

[General]
  1. Easy: miss this:
  2. add finish↓ for whole diffs
    00:01:253 - 00:12:481 - 00:15:288 - 00:16:516 - 00:18:095 -
    00:29:323 - 00:37:744 - 00:38:797 - 00:40:551 - 00:43:358 -
    00:46:165 - 00:53:007 - 00:54:586 - 00:57:393 - 01:00:200 -
    01:03:007 - 01:05:814 - 01:08:621 - 01:11:428 - 01:14:235 -
    01:17:042 - 01:19:849 - 01:22:657 -

[Easy]

  • 00:12:481 - finish, not whistle
    00:33:534 (6) - Tail overmap, too below (Screen out)
    01:24:411 (2,3) - too below

[Normal]

  • 00:02:657 (5) - stack better
    00:06:867 (1) - Screen out
    00:14:235 (4) - ^, too below
    00:38:797 (3,4) - follow DS
    00:45:464 (4) - Screen out
    00:51:955 (2,3) - ^
    01:07:218 (4) - follow DS, no hiding
    01:08:621 (3,5) - stack better
    01:11:253 (2,4) - ^
    01:11:779 (3,5) - ^
    01:12:481 (4) - DS
    01:19:849 (3) - hiding below 01:19:499 (1,2) -
    01:22:657 (1) - Unrankable. Spinner and next notes must have 2 white line space in Normal diff

[Hard]
  1. CS4 AR8 HP+1
    00:12:306 (1,2) - stack better
    00:15:288 (4) - too below (Change CS, ignore this)
    00:47:218 (4,5) - Bad set in Hard diff, Insane is fine
    00:36:692 (6) - blanket better
    00:54:586 (1) - too below
    01:06:516 (3) - blanket better

[Insane]
  1. CS+1 or AR-1
    00:01:253 (1) - bad spinner here, you can make other thing to replace it (I know you follow voice, but it's very bad to play), Same 00:21:604 (1) - 00:27:218 (1) -
    00:15:990 - slider end here
    00:17:744 (4,5) - Just my suggestion: Don't put anything here better. So I think del these circles.
    00:19:148 (1) - Too below
    00:29:235 - where is your circle??
    00:42:657 (1) - This is very hard to play and too close with next note
    00:51:955 (1,2,3) - too below
    00:56:516 (2) - Are you sure this is first jump??
    01:00:200 (3) - Don't cover the arrow, unrankable
    01:03:007 (3) - move to 360|200
    01:05:727 (4) - too below

[Lavaeater12's]
  1. CS+1 or AR-1
    00:20:727 - remove clap
    00:32:657 (4) - Ctrl+G. If you like
    00:34:235 (5,1) - make like this: http://puu.sh/gZHt5/7b2dc83804.jpg (Notice NC)
    00:51:779 (7,1) - too close, if you want to let it easy, don't change
    00:53:358 (1,2) - ^
    00:54:411 (4) - make like this: 00:45:288 (1,2,3) - , You ignore an important sound here 00:54:586 -
    01:04:937 (2,3,4,5) - If you like, make like this: http://puu.sh/gZHFQ/ca3334af2f.jpg

Maybe I give you both anger, I don't mean.
I really don't like this song, and your map have problem I must to find

Good luck for you :)
Hasbiii
Hello...M4M from your queue

lets see...

seems better starts from here 00:01:253 for all diff

[easy]

00:00:025(1,2) delete this
00:01:253 - 00:04:060 try like this ;
00:05:464(5,6) delete , and add slider from 00:05:464 to 00:06:165
00:13:183(2,3) like ^
00:20:727(3) set start here : 00:20:551
00:21:604(4) make this slider no reverse
00:23:007 - 00:24:937 try like this :
00:25:814(1,2) delete this
00:26:867(3) set start slider here : 00:26:516
00:28:271(2) delete
00:28:621(2) make this slider longer to red lines
00:29:323(3) delete this
00:38:095(2) - 00:40:200(1) delete , and try like this :
00:48:972(1) make this slider like 00:47:569(3) , and make a blanket ..
00:50:727(7,8,1) delete
00:50:902 add slider , reverse at 00:51:604 , end at 00:52:306 , or you can add spiner
00:55:990(3,4) delete this slider and add circle at 0:55:990 and slider start at 00:56:341 end at 00:57:042 ,like 00:54:586(1,2)
00:57:393 add circle
00:57:744 ^
01:24:762(3) its position should not be the same as 01:24:762(2) , fix it , and use a distance snap



[normal]

00:01:253 add slider , reverse at 00:01:604
00:04:060(2,3,4,5,6,7) better use slider each 2 circles
00:06:867(6) make this slider longer to 00:07:569
00:08:271(7) ^ to 00:08:797
00:16:165(2) this slider not here if you use distance snap
01:03:358(3) move to 01:03:534
01:04:060(4) ^ 01:04:235
01:04:586(5) delete
01:08:972(3) add clap
01:16:341(1) better this slider move to 01:16:165
01:22:657(1,1,1) ohhh why and like this T_T fix it please.. delete spiner at 01:22:657

You have to rethink this diff and easy diff , because unlike easily x_x
try use a distance snap for diff easy and normal :)



[hard]
00:20:727(1,2,3) make like 00:18:095(1,2,3)
00:21:604 add slider , end at 00:21:955
00:21:955 delete this circle
00:24:342(3) ctrl + h , ctrl + j
00:30:639(1) move to red lines
00:33:446(1) ^
00:38:183(2,5) delete
00:51:955(1) i think better use a long slider or something :/
00:53:885(1) reverse this slider
01:04:849(2,5) delete
01:08:271(8) add clap
01:08:621(10) remove clap
01:08:972(1) add clap
01:13:885(1,2,3,4,5) ahh... http://puu.sh/h0Hhz/cbcb3d6b51.jpg this stream broken --"
01:13:972(2) delete this
01:22:657(1) this again :( you can add something like http://puu.sh/h0Hp4/ad76f2e68d.jpg

i cant mod insane *w*

good luck *w*
DahplA
General
  1. Maybe disable Letterbox during breaks because there are no breaks
  2. Add to tags "Kirito" "Kirigaya Kazuto" "Sinon Asada"
  3. Offset could go back -5ms
  4. In my opinion, Kiai ends 01:17:042
Insane
  1. 00:00:376 (2,4,6) - Make these have consistent distance spacing
  2. 00:03:885 (6) - Move back the slider to the big white tick and add a circle where it was, also make the slider smaller
  3. 00:05:639 (10,11,12) - Triple doesn't fit here
  4. 00:10:902 (5) - Stack or move further away, it looks awkward (There are also other places this occurs, but I'll refrain from listing these in case you don't change them)
  5. 00:27:218 (1) - Move the slider back to the red tick and add a circle where it was
  6. 00:42:657 (1) - Remove one of the reverse arrows, also straighten up this slider
  7. 00:53:358 (1) - Make this a 1/2 beat slider with 1 reverse instead
  8. 01:17:042 (1) - Move to the left for better flow
  9. 01:20:727 (4) - Not stacked properly
Lavaeater12's Insane
  1. 00:02:657 NC here, remove NC on 00:02:832 (1) -
  2. 00:11:078 (9) - ^
  3. 00:12:481 (3) - NC
  4. 00:13:885 (7) - ^
  5. 00:15:464 (4) - ^
  6. 00:17:218 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:19:323 (1) - Remove NC, put it on the note after
  8. After this, you need to put the NCs on the downbeats (big white ticks), or every second, depends on what you think fits well and as long as it's consistent
  9. 00:08:972 (2,3,4) - Triple doesn't fit here
  10. 00:15:639 Add a hitcircle here?
  11. 00:21:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - Triples don't fit here
  12. 01:03:007 (5,6,7) - ^
  13. 01:27:920 (1) - Remove NC
Hard
  1. 00:11:253 (4) - Move this on the x line so it's level with 00:10:902 (3) -
  2. 00:20:902 (2) - Maybe this instead?
  3. 00:24:937 (1) - Why the NC here
  4. 00:30:551 Add a circle
  5. 00:33:358 ^
Normal
  1. 00:03:007 (1) - Not stacked properly
  2. You need to put the NCs on the big white ticks
  3. 00:39:849 (6) - Only have 1 reverse arrow
Easy
  1. 00:36:341 (4) - Improve blanket
Starfall9908
M4M from your modding queue

[General]
  1. I think the hitsounds are too loud take it down to 50% and 80% during kiai (100% is way too loud)
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:007 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks boring to play. (1) and (3)
  2. 00:36:341 (4) - blanket better
  3. 00:50:727 (3,4) - curve those sliders.
  4. 00:54:937 (2) - blanket
  5. 00:58:446 (2) - ^
  6. 01:03:358 (5) - ^
  7. 00:55:990 (3) - clap at reverse
  8. 01:04:411 - add a circle here
  9. 01:08:972 (6) - clap at slider head
  10. 01:20:200 (6) - blanket
  11. 01:24:411 (2,3) - don't stack them. Stack on easy is confusing for new players.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:060 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - too many circles to hit in row. Delete som of them and use sliders insted
  2. 00:15:990 (1,2) - distance snap
  3. V (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too confusing for players who just started playing osu. Use a different pattern (I'm pretty bad at these things so I can't give you an example ;-;)
  4. 00:39:849 (6) - delete one reverse and add a circle on 00:40:376
  5. 00:55:990 (5) - clap at slider tail
  6. 00:58:797 (3) - blanket
  7. 01:08:621 (3) - clap at slidertail
  8. 01:15:639 (5) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:148 (4,5) - (5) is overlapping (4)
  2. 00:20:902 (2,3) - delete (2) and start (3) on (2)'s place. Let the slider end on 00:21:604
  3. 00:30:639 (1) - delete
  4. 00:33:446 (1) - ^
  5. 00:47:744 - 00:47:920 - add two circles on those points. it feels empty otherwise

I can't mod insane yet so this is all I had to point out.

This mapset still needs a lot of work but it's not bad and has a chance to get ranked ^w^Good luck with ranking it.
mion_6GKM
M4M

Easy

00:26:867 (3) change the white line to 00:27:218 and delete 00:27:920 (1)

00:26:867 add note

00:28:271 no NC

00:29:323 (1,2) swap NC

00:47:218 no hitsound-clap

00:56:341 add hitsound-clap

01:08:972 (6) ^

Normal

00:15:990 (1) stack it with 00:16:165 (2)

00:32:130 (1) don't deceive people. change like this http://puu.sh/h20cu/3537c779e0.jpg

00:33:534 (4,5,6) ^ tooo

00:56:341 add hitsound-clap

01:08:972 ^

Hard

00:47:920 add note

00:56:341 (3) add hitsound-clap

01:03:534 add note

01:05:639 ^

01:08:271 (8) add hitsound-clap

01:07:569 NC

01:08:621 (6)add hitsound-finish

01:08:972 (1) add hitsound-clap

Lavaeater12's insane

00:34:499 (1) change to 00:34:586

00:34:499 add note

01:08:621 (8) NC

01:09:674 swap NC to 01:10:025

That's all.. Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Lasoki
Nishikino-'s Mod

Nishikino- wrote:

Hello...M4M from your queue

lets see...

seems better starts from here 00:01:253 for all diff Nah, I like it as it is.

[easy]

00:00:025(1,2) delete this like above.
00:01:253 - 00:04:060 try like this ; ok.
00:05:464(5,6) delete , and add slider from 00:05:464 to 00:06:165 nope, I think it's better as it is.
00:13:183(2,3) like ^ like above.
00:20:727(3) set start here : 00:20:551 don't think it fits.
00:21:604(4) make this slider no reverse I like one there though.
00:23:007 - 00:24:937 try like this : changed.
00:25:814(1,2) delete this ok.
00:26:867(3) set start slider here : 00:26:516 did something else.
00:28:271(2) delete rather not.
00:28:621(2) make this slider longer to red lines too difficult for easy imo.
00:29:323(3) delete this strong beat here so no.
00:38:095(2) - 00:40:200(1) delete , and try like this : did something similar.
00:48:972(1) make this slider like 00:47:569(3) , and make a blanket .. no.
00:50:727(7,8,1) delete sry, don't really get what I'm supposed to delete...
00:50:902 add slider , reverse at 00:51:604 , end at 00:52:306 , or you can add spiner
00:55:990(3,4) delete this slider and add circle at 0:55:990 and slider start at 00:56:341 end at 00:57:042 ,like 00:54:586(1,2) done.
00:57:393 add circle don't really get what you mean, there's already a reverse there so no.
00:57:744 ^ like above.
01:24:762(3) its position should not be the same as 01:24:762(2) , fix it , and use a distance snap fixed.



[normal]

00:01:253 add slider , reverse at 00:01:604 no.
00:04:060(2,3,4,5,6,7) better use slider each 2 circles like it as it is.
00:06:867(6) make this slider longer to 00:07:569 not nice flow.
00:08:271(7) ^ to 00:08:797 as above.
00:16:165(2) this slider not here if you use distance snap thanks, O.o how did that happen...
01:03:358(3) move to 01:03:534 did something similar.
01:04:060(4) ^ 01:04:235 did something similar.
01:04:586(5) delete did something similar.
01:08:972(3) add clap well, I don't hear one in the background so I'm not adding one.
01:16:341(1) better this slider move to 01:16:165 did somthing similar.
01:22:657(1,1,1) ohhh why and like this T_T fix it please.. delete spiner at 01:22:657 no.

You have to rethink this diff and easy diff , because unlike easily x_x don't really get what you mean.
try use a distance snap for diff easy and normal :) I do, just that it gets wrong after I go over mods sometimes.



[hard]
00:20:727(1,2,3) make like 00:18:095(1,2,3) like it as it is more.
00:21:604 add slider , end at 00:21:955 like above.
00:21:955 delete this circle like above.
00:24:342(3) ctrl + h , ctrl + j no.
00:30:639(1) move to red lines wouldn't follow the music if I did.
00:33:446(1) ^ Like above.
00:38:183(2,5) delete ok.
00:51:955(1) i think better use a long slider or something :/ don't think so, too easy imo.
00:53:885(1) reverse this slider no.
01:04:849(2,5) delete I think this time they fit as they are.
01:08:271(8) add clap no.
01:08:621(10) remove clap no.
01:08:972(1) add clap don't hear one so no.
01:13:885(1,2,3,4,5) ahh... http://puu.sh/h0Hhz/cbcb3d6b51.jpg this stream broken --" don't get what you mean...
01:13:972(2) delete this did something similar.
01:22:657(1) this again :( you can add something like http://puu.sh/h0Hp4/ad76f2e68d.jpg no, like it as it is.

i cant mod insane *w*

good luck *w*
Thanks for the mod, there where some really helpful stuff, especially in easy and normal.

DahplA's Mod

DahplA wrote:

General
  1. Maybe disable Letterbox during breaks because there are no breaks ok.
  2. Add to tags "Kirito" "Kirigaya Kazuto" "Sinon Asada" ok.
  3. Offset could go back -5ms ok.
  4. In my opinion, Kiai ends 01:17:042 for me not. xD
Insane
  1. 00:00:376 (2,4,6) - Make these have consistent distance spacing done.
  2. 00:03:885 (6) - Move back the slider to the big white tick and add a circle where it was, also make the slider smaller
    done.
  3. 00:05:639 (10,11,12) - Triple doesn't fit here I think it does.
  4. 00:10:902 (5) - Stack or move further away, it looks awkward (There are also other places this occurs, but I'll refrain from listing these in case you don't change them) I don't really think this is weird, but I'll think about changing it, if other people also ask me to change it I probably will.
  5. 00:27:218 (1) - Move the slider back to the red tick and add a circle where it was ok.
  6. 00:42:657 (1) - Remove one of the reverse arrows, also straighten up this slider ok.
  7. 00:53:358 (1) - Make this a 1/2 beat slider with 1 reverse instead hmm... I like it more as it is.
  8. 01:17:042 (1) - Move to the left for better flow ok.
  9. 01:20:727 (4) - Not stacked properly should be better now.
Lavaeater12's Insane
  1. 00:02:657 NC here, remove NC on 00:02:832 (1) -
  2. 00:11:078 (9) - ^
  3. 00:12:481 (3) - NC
  4. 00:13:885 (7) - ^
  5. 00:15:464 (4) - ^
  6. 00:17:218 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:19:323 (1) - Remove NC, put it on the note after
  8. After this, you need to put the NCs on the downbeats (big white ticks), or every second, depends on what you think fits well and as long as it's consistent
  9. 00:08:972 (2,3,4) - Triple doesn't fit here
  10. 00:15:639 Add a hitcircle here?
  11. 00:21:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - Triples don't fit here
  12. 01:03:007 (5,6,7) - ^
  13. 01:27:920 (1) - Remove NC
Hard
  1. 00:11:253 (4) - Move this on the x line so it's level with 00:10:902 (3) - ok.
  2. 00:20:902 (2) - Maybe this instead? no.
  3. 00:24:937 (1) - Why the NC here O.o, no idea man.
  4. 00:30:551 Add a circle no.
  5. 00:33:358 ^ no.
Normal
  1. 00:03:007 (1) - Not stacked properly can't seem to make it better.
  2. You need to put the NCs on the big white ticks ok.
  3. 00:39:849 (6) - Only have 1 reverse arrow feels odd without it.
Easy
  1. 00:36:341 (4) - Improve blanket fixed.
Thanks, was quite helpful too, especially insane.

mion_6GKM's Mod

mion_6GKM wrote:

M4M

Easy

00:26:867 (3) change the white line to 00:27:218 and delete 00:27:920 (1) Imo it fits better with the music as it is.

00:26:867 add note like above.

00:28:271 no NC no.

00:29:323 (1,2) swap NC did something else.

00:47:218 no hitsound-clap ok.

00:56:341 add hitsound-clap there is no clap in the music so no.

01:08:972 (6) ^ ok.

Normal

00:15:990 (1) stack it with 00:16:165 (2) no.

00:32:130 (1) don't deceive people. change like this http://puu.sh/h20cu/3537c779e0.jpg thanks, wanted to change this for a while, but didn't know how to.

00:33:534 (4,5,6) ^ tooo like above.

00:56:341 add hitsound-clap no clap in the music...

01:08:972 ^ ok.

Hard

00:47:920 add note no.

00:56:341 (3) add hitsound-clap pls listen to the music when you suggest stuff like this...

01:03:534 add note I don't follow the vocals.

01:05:639 ^ no.

01:08:271 (8) add hitsound-clap like above.

01:07:569 NC I don't see why I should do that.

01:08:621 (6)add hitsound-finish ok.

01:08:972 (1) add hitsound-clap ok.

Lavaeater12's insane

00:34:499 (1) change to 00:34:586

00:34:499 add note

01:08:621 (8) NC

01:09:674 swap NC to 01:10:025

That's all.. Good luck! :)
thanks for the mod!

nadapan's Mod

nadapan wrote:

M4M from your modding queue

[General]
  1. I think the hitsounds are too loud take it down to 50% and 80% during kiai (100% is way too loud) ok.
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:007 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks boring to play. (1) and (3) changed it in an earlier mod.
  2. 00:36:341 (4) - blanket better like above.
  3. 00:50:727 (3,4) - curve those sliders. did something else, so looks different.
  4. 00:54:937 (2) - blanket it already is?
  5. 00:58:446 (2) - ^ like above.
  6. 01:03:358 (5) - ^ like above.
  7. 00:55:990 (3) - clap at reverse i don't hear one in the music.
  8. 01:04:411 - add a circle here I think it's good to have some space in easy if you know what I mean, like not too many notes.
  9. 01:08:972 (6) - clap at slider head done.
  10. 01:20:200 (6) - blanket it already is.
  11. 01:24:411 (2,3) - don't stack them. Stack on easy is confusing for new players. changed.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:060 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - too many circles to hit in row. Delete som of them and use sliders insted don't really get what you mean... there are only 2 circles at max in a row here... and from what osu! is showing me you're in Hard btw.... Ok I think I still get what you mean, but the circles are only 1/1 so it should be ok.
  2. 00:15:990 (1,2) - distance snap hmm... Osu! still keeps showing me the hard patterns,but I DS it.
  3. V (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too confusing for players who just started playing osu. Use a different pattern (I'm pretty bad at these things so I can't give you an example ;-;) don't know where you mean.
  4. 00:39:849 (6) - delete one reverse and add a circle on 00:40:376 changing this since others also asked me to change it.
  5. 00:55:990 (5) - clap at slider tail no, like in easy.
  6. 00:58:797 (3) - blanket it is as far as I can see, if you want me to properly understand what you're asking me to do, then write it out clearly, because for be that is a blanket.
  7. 01:08:621 (3) - clap at slidertail done.
  8. 01:15:639 (5) - ^no.
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:148 (4,5) - (5) is overlapping (4) is that supposed to be a problem?
  2. 00:20:902 (2,3) - delete (2) and start (3) on (2)'s place. Let the slider end on 00:21:604 no.
  3. 00:30:639 (1) - delete no.
  4. 00:33:446 (1) - ^ no.
  5. 00:47:744 - 00:47:920 - add two circles on those points. it feels empty otherwise added one circle.

I can't mod insane yet so this is all I had to point out. no problem.

This mapset still needs a lot of work but it's not bad and has a chance to get ranked ^w^Good luck with ranking it. thanks :)
Thankyou too for modding!
micchi_chi
Hi~ M4M from your Modding Q
I wonder if this actually active...
Here my map if you can't find my post : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716835&m=0

[General]
  1. Use this ソードアート・オンライン II for source. You don't need to add Sword art online again on tags.
  2. You don't need to add comma for tags, just use space to separate them.
  3. You don't need to tick "Widescreen support" (song setup -> design) since you have no storyboard.
  4. Check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) there are some kiai that aren't snapped in some diff and there's a audio preview conflict. You better fix them.

[Easy]
  1. Open AiMod and check the "Check distance snap" option. There's some DS problem, you have to fix them, Easy and Normal may not have any.
  2. 00:01:248 (2) - I'd rather ctrl+g this so the flow from (1) would feel better. http://puu.sh/iko5U/ea2c981328.jpg instead of like this http://puu.sh/iko9g/f206cd9408.jpg I'll help you DS-ing after this.
  3. If you apply the mod above, try this for DS-ing http://puu.sh/ikoeN/d894581da9.jpg Look better too because previously, (2) and (4) was ovelapping.
  4. 00:11:423 (3) - Maybe try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ikom4/8682cc6951.jpg
  5. 00:24:230 (1,3) - Overlapped x.x move (3) kinda upward.
  6. 00:26:336 (3) - But I think this following the minor sound .-. maybe you could just follow the major sound for easy; the vocal.
  7. 00:29:318 (1) - Actually starting a slider here would feel better ...
  8. 00:37:739 (1,2,3) - Wait, try to change this, sounds weird. First, delete all of these. Add a slider here 00:37:739 which ends here 00:38:266 then another slider here 00:38:792 which ends here 00:39:318 and a circle here 00:39:844 http://puu.sh/ikoLF/0e8f8942d8.jpg
  9. 00:40:546 (5) - NC here because of verse change
  10. 00:50:722 (3) - Uhh seems inappropriate... Delete those. Try this http://puu.sh/ikoZx/2eb67d4724.jpg
  11. If you apply the mod above, add a spinner here 00:51:774 which ends here 00:53:002 and just delete 00:53:002 (4) -
  12. 00:53:353 (1) - I think this kinda unnecessary for Easy, just delete it.
  13. 00:57:037 (4) - Uh, a reverse on big white tick is a no no (unless some kind of condition that make it appropriate) change this to a circle and add a slider here 00:57:388 http://puu.sh/ikpbB/4e91b16646.jpg
  14. 00:58:090 (2,3) - Switch these two places. http://puu.sh/ikpe0/1ea59a8612.jpg
  15. 01:00:195 (5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/ikpgK/63f245f42c.jpg
  16. 01:03:353 (5) - Extend this slider here 01:04:230 http://puu.sh/ikpkH/9ad84f9ecd.jpg
  17. 01:04:757 (1) - Move this 1/2 tick forward, let it end here 01:05:459 http://puu.sh/ikpnZ/e614a3b84f.jpg
  18. Okay, not bad, just need some improvement. Some notes: 1) Avoid placing a circle on big white tick followed by a slider, it feels weird, you use a lot of them in this map. 2) Pay attention on overlapping, http://puu.sh/ikpxG/644ce21148.jpg they looks ugly you know. 3) Fix your blanket, use approach circle as guide, most of your blankets are imperfect http://puu.sh/ikpDY/d160da8afc.jpg

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:020 (1,2) - Just simplify this into a single slider just like in Easy. http://puu.sh/ikpO9/79bd2589f3.jpg
  2. 00:04:055 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You used too much circles, some new player might struggle; change some of them into a slider.
  3. 00:10:195 (3,4) - Simplify this two into this: http://puu.sh/ikpW5/d69efaa1b3.jpg Follow the rhythm better as well.
  4. 00:21:599 (8,3) - Overlapped, change (3)'s shape maybe.
  5. 00:24:055 (4,5) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ikq6z/bf85546516.jpg
  6. 00:27:915 (4) - Change this into a single 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/ikqaQ/ab0e5c7c48.jpg
  7. 00:40:546 For this part and on I think you better keep this rhythm http://puu.sh/ikqh4/a1ec3dbe69.jpg Just like that for the whole verse.
  8. 00:47:739 (4,5) - Change this to circles, don't overmap it for Normal. Change (6) for better polarity http://puu.sh/ikqns/2a92f7a51f.jpg
  9. 00:49:844 (3,4) - These too, don't overmap it. http://puu.sh/ikqqG/f57e23d42f.jpg
  10. 01:07:037 (6,1) - This seems hard for normal, just like a triplets... Maybe change this to 1/2 slider.
  11. 01:09:318 (4,5) - Switch these places. http://puu.sh/ikqzQ/4835f65a60.jpg
  12. 01:11:073 (2,3,4,5,6) - Let's change this to a better rhythm. 01:11:073 (2) - delete this, move 01:11:248 (3) - 1/2 tick forward, move 01:11:774 (4,5,6) - 1 tick forward, and add a note here 01:13:529 http://puu.sh/ikqLO/5bfc289c10.jpg
  13. 01:14:581 (1,2,3) - Move these 1/2 tick forward and add another note here 01:15:459 http://puu.sh/ikqQs/eab020f5ad.jpg
  14. 01:18:090 (3,4) - Change this to this : http://puu.sh/ikqT2/2ff1be9903.jpg follow the vocal.
  15. 01:20:897 (3) - unnecessary note, delete.
  16. 01:25:108 (1) - Delete, extend 01:22:652 (1) - so it would ends here 01:25:108 move 01:25:195 (1) - to here 01:25:459 and ends it here 01:28:090
  17. Some notes: it seems overmapped (for me) for example this part 00:51:774 (1,2,3,4) - and this part 01:15:634 (5,6,7) - Avoid doing that on Normal.

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:792 (3) - Maybe move this kinda downward for a better flow http://puu.sh/ikrej/b8e89412ab.jpg
  2. 00:20:195 (5) - Weird placement, and I think you better use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/ikriT/da89d2880a.jpg
  3. 00:21:073 (3) - End this here 00:21:423 and add a note here 00:21:599 because it's a Hard.
  4. 00:24:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This don't seems to follow the music well, delete it first. Then add a slider here 00:23:880 which ends here 00:24:230 add a reverse to that slider. Add a note here 00:24:932. Add another 1/1 slider here00:25:108. Last add a note here 00:25:809 http://puu.sh/ikrBQ/064b56b5e3.jpg
  5. 00:28:266 (6) - NC this because of SV change so the player would be aware of it.
  6. 00:30:546 Just add a note here to make a triplets, easier to read and hit.
  7. 00:33:353 ^
  8. 00:38:616 Add a note here for a better polarity.
  9. 00:47:388 (5) - Reverse arrow may not be covered, move this note somewhere else.
  10. 00:51:950 (1) - Umm, maybe try this. http://puu.sh/ikrOt/b87ebfe5db.jpg Look, I made a star :D http://puu.sh/ikrQs/5f100eeb5b.jpg
  11. Better than Normal, but I think this one is undermapped instead xD Add some jumps, this is hard, jumps are allowed. And add more note.

[Lavaeater12's Insane]
  1. The SV is pretty slow for Insane I think?
  2. 00:24:230 (6,1,2) - Change it like this maybe http://puu.sh/iksgn/8ee3aaa761.jpg to follow the vocal better.
  3. 00:28:266 (3,1,2) - Change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ikslF/bed35e0685.jpg
  4. 00:34:494 (1) - Seems inappropriate, follow the vocal. Move it backward so it would start here 00:34:581
  5. 00:50:371 (1) - End it here 00:50:546 to follow the vocal better,
  6. 00:54:406 (4) - Uh no. Don't ever ever ignore a big white tick when the kiai starts, even to follow the vocal. Ignore the vocal this time and follow the background music. http://puu.sh/iksxV/daf0b4c0fd.jpg
  7. Not bad, but not that good as well. Some notes, please read: 1) Improve your placement, this one seems kinda messy, try stacking and blanketing, making shapes like triangle, box, stars and stuff. 2) You seems to start a lot of triplets at white tick 01:01:599 (1) - 01:03:002 (5,6,7) - 01:13:529 (3) - and many others, it's not like they aren't allowed but mostly they sounds weird; conclusion: start a triplets at red tick unless there's a significant sound.
  8. Ah, don't forget to resnap your audio preview, it's causing conflict.

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:020 (1) - You better change this into a reverse slider, the rhythm would be the same, but would fit better.
  2. 00:14:230 (2,3) - Switch places
  3. 00:19:494 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:21:599 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, just map this part
  5. Okay, I'm too lazy to do this orz. But let me just give you some notes: it seems your mistake are all the same all over the diff, too much slider on red tick which follow nothing. If the slider would be addition to make the map harder and don't follow significant sound (like vocal or other sounds) avoid starting it on red tick, it'll sounds weird. And you seems to like this kind of stack 01:00:897 (1,2) - since you use it a lot; nothing's wrong about it, but honestly, it don't look that good for me. BTW, nice hitsounding.

That's all, pretty big mod eh…
I hope you can mod my map ASAP :3
Good luck ;)
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