Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Lasoki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 5. Juli 2015 at 17:00:28

Artist: Aoi Eir
Title: IGNITE (TV Size)
Source: Sword Art Online II
Tags: SAO, Sword Art Online 2, Lavaeater12, Opening, Kirito, Kirigaya Kazuto, Shinon, Asada Shino
BPM: 171
Filesize: 17256kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.83 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Insane (4.55 stars, 373 notes)
  4. Lavaeater12's Insane (4.09 stars, 340 notes)
  5. Normal (2.09 stars, 167 notes)


Download: Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size)
Download: Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SAOII OP yay! I think I'm getting better at mapping

Easy: Complete
Normal: Complete
Hard: Complete
Insane: Complete
Lavaeater12's Insane: Complete by Lavaeater12 (new mapper)

Redownload 25.01.15
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




First of All .

Add " (TV Size) "

Second .

Please set your AudioLeadIn to 1500 ( it can seen on your notepad ) your song starts too early . brb

[Easy]
Circle Size +1
00:13:877 Move ( x:108 y:272 )
00:14:578 Move ( x:20 y:104 )
00:15:280 Move ( x:216 y:116 )
00:15:280 Move ( x:108 y:272 )
00:35:280 Move ( x:48 y:236 )
00:38:789 Move ( x:152 y:80 )
00:44:754 Move ( x:192 y:268 )
00:53:350 Move ( x:168 y:248 )
01:18:789 Fix your LN


01:22:648 Fix your blanket


[Normal]
Circle Size +0.5
00:00:017 Fix your LN here
00:17:210 Move here --> 00:17:385
00:18:438 Fix your blanket


00:35:631 Move ( x:280 y:312 )
00:36:333 Move ( x:328 y:104 )
00:46:157 Move ( x:68 y:156 )

[Hard]
Circle Size +1
About the Hard Diff, your notes are too close you should give laps or give more space . That only .


That's All .
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Lasoki

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




First of All .

Add " (TV Size) " ok.

Second .

Please set your AudioLeadIn to 1500 ( it can seen on your notepad ) your song starts too early . brb don't really get what you mean... sry.

[Easy]
Circle Size +1 left. it
00:13:877 Move ( x:108 y:272 ) Fixed.
00:14:578 Move ( x:20 y:104 ) Fixed.
00:15:280 Move ( x:216 y:116 ) Fixed.
00:15:280 Move ( x:108 y:272 ) Fixed.
00:35:280 Move ( x:48 y:236 ) Fixed.
00:38:789 Move ( x:152 y:80 ) Fixed.
00:44:754 Move ( x:192 y:268 ) Fixed.
00:53:350 Move ( x:168 y:248 ) Fixed.
01:18:789 Fix your LN Fixed.


01:22:648 Fix your blanket Fixed.


[Normal]
Circle Size +0.5 Left it.
00:00:017 Fix your LN here
00:17:210 Move here --> 00:17:385 Left it.
00:18:438 Fix your blanket Should be okay now.


00:35:631 Move ( x:280 y:312 ) didn't do that.
00:36:333 Move ( x:328 y:104 ) didn't do that.
00:46:157 Move ( x:68 y:156 ) didn't do that.

[Hard]
Circle Size +1 left. it
About the Hard Diff, your notes are too close you should give laps or give more space . That only . ok thanks.


That's All .
Good Luck~
thanks.
Jaltzu
00:24:762 Add a note here. I'd suggest 3-point slider till 00:25:113. (replaces 00:24:937 (4) )
00:47:569 (3,4) - You could replace these with 3-point slider: start 00:47:393 and end 00:48:095
Couple of non-consistent distance spacings: 00:17:218 (7) / 00:38:797 (7) -
I think there's too many two circle stacks. Replace at least some of them with something else...
00:00:025 (1,2) - Replace these with a single slider. The start feels much smoother that way.
00:50:025 (4,5,6,7) - Try this: make slider 4 a 2-point slider. Add another slider 00:50:376 - 00:50:551. Delete 00:50:727 (5,6). Add slider 00:50:902 - 00:51:253. Replace 00:51:253 (7) with a circle at 00:51:428.
01:06:165 (1) - Add Clap (hitsound)
Another suggestion: make 01:20:376 (4) longer, till 01:20:727. Delete 01:20:902 (5,6). Slider start 01:21:078 - turning point 01:21:428 - end 01:21:779.
Same as normal: stacked double circles get a bit annoying.
00:13:709 (6,7) - I think these should be replaced with a single slider.
00:28:621 (4) - This circle is hidden too well... Consider moving it out of the slider.
00:47:569 (5,1) - Move circle 5 to 00:47:744. Replace the slider with another: 00:48:095 - 00:48:271.
01:02:832 (1,2,3) - Consider spreading these a bit.
00:38:271 (5,6) - Maybe replace these with a single slider. Fits better in the music.
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - Consider changing the position os these. They go through the last slider -> hard to read.


Many of my comments don't point out any mistakes, but are more like suggestions.
I wasn't able to get very much out of this, but hope it helps. :)
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Jaltzu wrote:

00:24:762 Add a note here. I'd suggest 3-point slider till 00:25:113. (replaces 00:24:937 (4) ) i shifted (4) back instead and put a reverse arrow
00:47:569 (3,4) - You could replace these with 3-point slider: start 00:47:393 and end 00:48:095 ended it 1/2 later
Couple of non-consistent distance spacings: 00:17:218 (7) / 00:38:797 (7) - ok.
I think there's too many two circle stacks. Replace at least some of them with something else...
00:00:025 (1,2) - Replace these with a single slider. The start feels much smoother that way.
00:50:025 (4,5,6,7) - Try this: make slider 4 a 2-point slider. Add another slider 00:50:376 - 00:50:551. Delete 00:50:727 (5,6). Add slider 00:50:902 - 00:51:253. Replace 00:51:253 (7) with a circle at 00:51:428.
01:06:165 (1) - Add Clap (hitsound)
Another suggestion: make 01:20:376 (4) longer, till 01:20:727. Delete 01:20:902 (5,6). Slider start 01:21:078 - turning point 01:21:428 - end 01:21:779. changed everything.
Same as normal: stacked double circles get a bit annoying. ok.
00:13:709 (6,7) - I think these should be replaced with a single slider. ok.
00:28:621 (4) - This circle is hidden too well... Consider moving it out of the slider. ok.
00:47:569 (5,1) - Move circle 5 to 00:47:744. Replace the slider with another: 00:48:095 - 00:48:271. ok.
01:02:832 (1,2,3) - Consider spreading these a bit.I'll think about it.
00:38:271 (5,6) - Maybe replace these with a single slider. Fits better in the music. ok.
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - Consider changing the position os these. They go through the last slider -> hard to read. ok.


Many of my comments don't point out any mistakes, but are more like suggestions.
I wasn't able to get very much out of this, but hope it helps. :)i helped xD. Thanks a lot.
Good luck!
MrSergio
Here I am from my modding queue (with a looooot of late, sorry but I was really busy this last month :/ )

[General]

  1. What's with that strange tag o.O "Opening 3" ? Can I ask you why?


[Lavaeater12's Insane]

Alright, I was about to mod this, but I have to nuke it. Please read some of these

[Insane]

  1. 00:04:762 (7,8,9) - Strange imo
  2. 00:16:867 (5) - Remove it and make a NC after this
  3. 00:18:095 (1) - This NC should be on the next note
  4. 00:24:235 (6,7) - Please, don't do this :(
  5. 00:21:604 (1) - Make it end 2 ticks earlier
  6. 00:27:218 (1) - Same ^
  7. 00:29:937 (2) - You don't need this note at all, trust me
  8. 00:30:639 (6) - Same ^
  9. 00:37:832 (2) - Same ^
  10. 00:36:165 (1,2,3) - Better a slider imo
  11. 00:37:832 (2,2) - Remove them
  12. 00:42:657 (1) - Convert this in 4 normal beats
  13. 00:46:867 (3,1) - Use these to make a slider (1/1)


I won't do the rest not because I'm lazy (I did mods long 5 times this or more) but because you do the same errors, I could say.
Basically your mapping it's still too cramped (Which is normal from a mapper who hasn't find his style yet) and a bit disordered.
The best thing to do in these cases it's to "still" others techniques for a while, as long as you don't find your own :)

Final note: I saw some jumps resembling those I used on one of my map (maybe I'm clearly mistaking). If you're interested feel free to take a look :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200122


EDIT


Alright, I realized I did something I usually don't ever do: not helping at all. In this case the mapper was also a new mapper and it looks like I'm the bad guy here (and I really am). So I'll do a mod for his diff, 'cause everyone deserves help from me whether he's new or a pro. With this said, let's go down to business:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

  1. First of all: you need more AR, since you have 171 BPM and this should be an Insane. AR9 should be used here
  2. 00:02:306 (7) - This slider breaks the flow, since you started following the instruments, yet, for this slider, you use the vocals which doen't fit well imo. Try:
    -->
    I usually let the design for these things to the mapper, but if you need I could leave a suggestion also for that
  3. 00:06:692 (6) - I think you should remove this note and I'll tell you why: 00:04:060 (1,2,3) - From here you use a rhythm I think it fits perfectly the song, yet, from 00:05:113 you don't do the same. At this point you have 2 options:
    1. Rebuild all your notes and combos with that rhythm
    2. Remove the note I mentioned before to keep the other rhythm you choose
    3 and bonus option for both the previous ones: remove that note I told you and do this:
  4. 00:08:446 (1) - This slider should start 00:08:271 (5) <-- here
    My suggestion is to delete (5) and move (1) as it is. Then add a note at 00:08:972 vvv See below vvv
  5. 00:10:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Alright, this combo is really confusing, so we'll have to do a lot of work on it (I know you tried to do a slider stream, but it doesn't fit the song here):

    Alright, it's easier with images :3 The way I did there fits well with the next combo too imo. If not, try to find a better way to arrange them
  6. 00:13:358 (5) - Instead of putting this behind those sliders, I think it fits better put in front of them:
  7. 00:15:464 (3) - This slider is wrong because you put its end on a blue tick. Better if you put a normal note when it starts instead of it and re-arrange the nest stream:
  8. 00:17:393 (2) - Start a 1/1 slider here :
  9. If you add a note here 00:17:920 , you can even do a good blanket like this:
  10. 00:20:200 (5) - This slider covers a note that should be there and I'm referring to the note that should go 00:20:376 - here. To add that note (which you must add) and keep your slider too, you should do something like:

    (5) should be stacked on (6)
  11. 00:21:253 (1) - If you did what I said till here, this note shouldn't be a NC (New Combo)
  12. 00:21:604 (1,2) - For these 2 you should use the same slider. I mean: put down a slider, then copy it and paste it where you need it. This way the design has more order and it's nicer to see
  13. 00:22:306 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 00:22:481 - Add a note here: you already did 2 triplets, do also the third one :3
  15. Once you add this ^ Reduce the spacing between 00:22:306 (1,2,3) - them. Like:
  16. 00:22:657 (4) - This note doesn't respect your spacing. Move it somewhere further from the next note and closer to the previous one
  17. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:23:007 (1) - Remove this note. Move 00:23:183 (5) at 00:23:007 and make this note a NC. Also add a repeat to this slider. In short:
    -->
  19. 00:23:534 - Add a note here at x: 272 y: 172
  20. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 00:28:797 - Here I have again a lot to say and it's easier to show with an image:
  22. 00:36:341 (1) - Move this spinner a tick later and place a note:
  23. 00:37:393 (2) - Remove this note
  24. 00:37:569 (3) - This should be 00:37:393 - here
  25. 00:37:920 - Add a note here, stacked on (1) of the same combo. Basically: note - slider - note (at the same place of the first one)
  26. 00:39:674 (8) - Add NC here, also try to put this slider under the previous note, I think it fits better
  27. 00:42:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better if you do a normal stream here
  28. 00:47:920 (5) - Move it (on the time line) by 2 ticks later (on the right) and add a note 00:47:920 - here. Remove also 00:48:446 (1) , since you won't need it anymore. Combo-ing is fine as it is
  29. 00:51:779 - You forgot a note here :3
  30. 00:53:358 - 00:53:889 - Why isn't mapping xD Suggestion:

    Pay attention to ticks, since I also moved some notes/sliders
  31. 00:58:972 (6,1) - Wrong spacing between these 2 notes. Move (1) away, since (6) it's fine where it is
  32. 01:00:025 (4,1) - Same ^ Suggestion: Select all the combo and move it to the left. This way you can fix this and even the previous problem
  33. 01:03:007 (4,5) - Better a normal triplet. This pattern it's hard to read if you put it there
  34. 01:04:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - THIS IS IT! Here you can use slider streams, but fix them a little. Like this:
  35. 01:05:990 (1) - Replace it with 2 notes
  36. 01:07:218 (1) - Replace it with 3 notes
  37. 01:08:972 (1) - Remove NC and move it further from the previous note
  38. 01:09:849 (3) - Just 2 notes are fine here :3
  39. 01:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing, I think it's too much there
  40. 01:13:885 (4) - Too close to the previous note
  41. 01:14:586 (2) - You should do like this:
    -->
  42. 01:18:972 (5,1) - Normal triplet here
  43. 01:22:657 (1) - To close to the previous note



I hope this makes up for my rudeness and helps you a little more with your mapping experience :/
Topic Starter
Lasoki

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here I am from my modding queue (with a looooot of late, sorry but I was really busy this last month :/ )

[General]

  1. What's with that strange tag o.O "Opening 3" ? Can I ask you why? Sry, because of my map of the op of fairy tail(which is from the continuation of the anime and not really a second season i numbered that one 15 and then i just numbered this 3 since season one had two openings, changed it to one.


[Lavaeater12's Insane]

Alright, I was about to mod this, but I have to nuke it. Please read some of these

[Insane]

  1. 00:04:762 (7,8,9) - Strange imo really? don't think so.
  2. 00:16:867 (5) - Remove it and make a NC after this hmm, ok.
  3. 00:18:095 (1) - This NC should be on the next note i think it's okay.
  4. 00:24:235 (6,7) - Please, don't do this :(ok.
  5. 00:21:604 (1) - Make it end 2 ticks earlier ok.
  6. 00:27:218 (1) - Same ^
  7. 00:29:937 (2) - You don't need this note at all, trust me ok.
  8. 00:30:639 (6) - Same ^ i think it's ok like that.
  9. 00:37:832 (2) - Same ^ ok.
  10. 00:36:165 (1,2,3) - Better a slider imo not going to do it, but if others also suggest it i will.
  11. 00:37:832 (2,2) - Remove them ok.
  12. 00:42:657 (1) - Convert this in 4 normal beats like it better this way but if others suggest i will.
  13. 00:46:867 (3,1) - Use these to make a slider (1/1)ok.


I won't do the rest not because I'm lazy (I did mods long 5 times this or more) but because you do the same errors, I could say.
Basically your mapping it's still too cramped (Which is normal from a mapper who hasn't find his style yet) and a bit disordered.
The best thing to do in these cases it's to "still" others techniques for a while, as long as you don't find your own :)

Final note: I saw some jumps resembling those I used on one of my map (maybe I'm clearly mistaking). If you're interested feel free to take a look :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200122 O.o really? haha, it's a coincidence, i don't know that map but i'll take a look at it. Thanks for looking at my map.
Moeri
General:
You can use slidertick to make hitsound even in slider, but you'll need to make more timing points to decide whenever slidertick should have this sound or not. But it's up to you, it's complicated if you're first time mapper and never seen such before, if you need assistance on that or don't know what I mean, feel free to PM me!

What's "Opening 1" tag? Put tags like "Sword Art Online", "Sword Art Online II (or 2)", "Aoi Eir", "Ignite" and the beatmap contributors(you and Lavaeater12) or similar.

Easy:
Add circle at 01:08:621

Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:11:428
or
Move slider timing from 01:11:779 to 01:11:428 and add circle at 01:12:481 as well as moving slider timing from 01:13:183 to 01:12:832
-----------------------------------------------------
Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:13:885
or
Remove circle at 01:14:235 and add slider that starts at 01:13:885 and ends at 01:14:235
-----------------------------------------------------

Normal:
Add circle on 00:32:481
Add circle on 00:33:885
Move slider that starts at 01:00:025 to 01:00:200 because it sounds more comfortable.
From 01:02:657 to 01:03:885, use this timeline instead. Or no circles between sliders if you feel it's a bit overmapped.
Remove circle at 01:17:569 and move following slider to that timing instead, and move the three following circles 2 mini-beats earlier, like this

Hard:
I do not recommend to start a beatmap with 2 circles, rather replace them with a slider. Beacuse it would get annoying to hit them in time if you have Hidden mod and perhaps DT and HR as well. It's annoying.

Move slider at 00:02:832 to 00:03:007 and add circle at 00:02:832
From 00:04:411 to 00:06:165, use this timeline instead or switch places on circle and slider as you wish.
Slider at 00:16:692 can be removed.
The two-circle groups in section 00:06:867 to 00:09:323 can be three-circle groups instead, like this.
Timeline at 00:23:709 to 00:24:411, use this instead(two sliders instead of a circle into a slider).

Remove slider at 00:33:709, add circle at 00:35:990 and choose below:-------------------------------------
Add circle at 00:33:885 and 00:34:060
or
Add slider that starts at 00:33:709 and ends at 00:34:060
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Move slider on 00:46:341 two mini-beats later(00:46:516)
Move slider on 01:01:078 two mini-beats later(01:01:253)
Move slider on 01:09:148 two mini-beats later(01:09:323) and remove circle at 01:09:323
From 01:11:078 to 01:12:481, use this timeline instead.
Remove all circles from 01:13:972 to 01:14:148, it's simply overmapped.

Insane:
Change AR to 9.
Remove spinners at:
00:21:604
00:54:586
and make notes instead.

Also, streams at 00:52:306, 01:05:464, 01:13:885, 01:16:341 please use distance snap to make the streams and don't make strange curves even if you might think it fits the mapping style, it's rather just confusing to play them.

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing.
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288.

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it.



Don't forget my kudosu, I put quite some time and effort in this.
Lavaeater12

A i k a wrote:

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing. done
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288. this was a mistake, but I've moved it one mini-beat later instead, as that was the original intention

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it. changed most of the rest of the sliders and some circles so they hopefully make more sense now
Lavaeater12

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Alright, I realized I did something I usually don't ever do: not helping at all. In this case the mapper was also a new mapper and it looks like I'm the bad guy here (and I really am). So I'll do a mod for his diff, 'cause everyone deserves help from me whether he's new or a pro. With this said, let's go down to business:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

  1. First of all: you need more AR, since you have 171 BPM and this should be an Insane. AR9 should be used here ok done
  2. 00:02:306 (7) - This slider breaks the flow, since you started following the instruments, yet, for this slider, you use the vocals which doen't fit well imo. done

    I usually let the design for these things to the mapper, but if you need I could leave a suggestion also for that
  3. 00:06:692 (6) - I think you should remove this note and I'll tell you why: 00:04:060 (1,2,3) - From here you use a rhythm I think it fits perfectly the song, yet, from 00:05:113 you don't do the same. At this point you have 2 options:
    1. Rebuild all your notes and combos with that rhythm
    2. Remove the note I mentioned before to keep the other rhythm you choose
    3 and bonus option for both the previous ones: remove that note I told you and do this:

    done. I used option 3. It made the most sense to me.

  4. 00:08:446 (1) - This slider should start 00:08:271 (5) <-- here
    My suggestion is to delete (5) and move (1) as it is. Then add a note at 00:08:972 done.
  5. 00:10:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Alright, this combo is really confusing, so we'll have to do a lot of work on it (I know you tried to do a slider stream, but it doesn't fit the song here):
    Alright, it's easier with images :3 The way I did there fits well with the next combo too imo. If not, try to find a better way to arrange them Oh, you're right x.x this works so much better. done.
  6. 00:13:358 (5) - Instead of putting this behind those sliders, I think it fits better put in front of them: Alright, I did that.
  7. 00:15:464 (3) - This slider is wrong because you put its end on a blue tick. Better if you put a normal note when it starts instead of it and re-arrange the nest stream: okay, done.
  8. 00:17:393 (2) - Start a 1/1 slider here : done.
  9. If you add a note here 00:17:920 , you can even do a good blanket like this: done.
  10. 00:20:200 (5) - This slider covers a note that should be there and I'm referring to the note that should go 00:20:376 - here. To add that note (which you must add) and keep your slider too, you should do something like:
    (5) should be stacked on (6) done.
  11. 00:21:253 (1) - If you did what I said till here, this note shouldn't be a NC (New Combo) done.
  12. 00:21:604 (1,2) - For these 2 you should use the same slider. I mean: put down a slider, then copy it and paste it where you need it. This way the design has more order and it's nicer to see done.
  13. 00:22:306 (1) - Remove NC done.
  14. 00:22:481 - Add a note here: you already did 2 triplets, do also the third one :3 done.
  15. Once you add this ^ Reduce the spacing between 00:22:306 (1,2,3) - them. Like: done.
  16. 00:22:657 (4) - This note doesn't respect your spacing. Move it somewhere further from the next note and closer to the previous one done.
  17. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC done.
  18. 00:23:007 (1) - Remove this note. Move 00:23:183 (5) at 00:23:007 and make this note a NC. Also add a repeat to this slider. In short: done.
  19. 00:23:534 - Add a note here at x: 272 y: 172 done.
  20. 00:23:885 (1) - Remove NC done.
  21. 00:28:797 - Here I have again a lot to say and it's easier to show with an image: done.
  22. 00:36:341 (1) - Move this spinner a tick later and place a note: done.
  23. 00:37:393 (2) - Remove this note done.
  24. 00:37:569 (3) - This should be 00:37:393 - here done.
  25. 00:37:920 - Add a note here, stacked on (1) of the same combo. Basically: note - slider - note (at the same place of the first one) done.
  26. 00:39:674 (8) - Add NC here, also try to put this slider under the previous note, I think it fits better done.
  27. 00:42:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better if you do a normal stream here done.
  28. 00:47:920 (5) - Move it (on the time line) by 2 ticks later (on the right) and add a note 00:47:920 - here. Remove also 00:48:446 (1) , since you won't need it anymore. Combo-ing is fine as it is done.
  29. 00:51:779 - You forgot a note here :3 oops x.x done.
  30. 00:53:358 - 00:53:889 - Why isn't mapping xD Suggestion:
    Pay attention to ticks, since I also moved some notes/sliders I guess I kind of liked that gap there. But your suggestion is nice. I'll use that.

  31. 00:58:972 (6,1) - Wrong spacing between these 2 notes. Move (1) away, since (6) it's fine where it is done.
  32. 01:00:025 (4,1) - Same ^ Suggestion: Select all the combo and move it to the left. This way you can fix this and even the previous problem done.
  33. 01:03:007 (4,5) - Better a normal triplet. This pattern it's hard to read if you put it there done.
  34. 01:04:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - THIS IS IT! Here you can use slider streams, but fix them a little. Like this: done.
  35. 01:05:990 (1) - Replace it with 2 notes done.
  36. 01:07:218 (1) - Replace it with 3 notes done.
  37. 01:08:972 (1) - Remove NC and move it further from the previous note done.
  38. 01:09:849 (3) - Just 2 notes are fine here :3 done.
  39. 01:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing, I think it's too much there done.
  40. 01:13:885 (4) - Too close to the previous note done.
  41. 01:14:586 (2) - You should do like this: done.
  42. 01:18:972 (5,1) - Normal triplet here done.
  43. 01:22:657 (1) - To close to the previous note done.


I hope this makes up for my rudeness and helps you a little more with your mapping experience :/
Thanks for the mod! I think I was able to understand where I went wrong (at least in some areas) and learn a few more things!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

A i k a wrote:

General:
You can use slidertick to make hitsound even in slider, but you'll need to make more timing points to decide whenever slidertick should have this sound or not. But it's up to you, it's complicated if you're first time mapper and never seen such before, if you need assistance on that or don't know what I mean, feel free to PM me!

What's "Opening 1" tag? Put tags like "Sword Art Online", "Sword Art Online II (or 2)", "Aoi Eir", "Ignite" and the beatmap contributors(you and Lavaeater12) or similar. I put SAO, Sword art Online 2, Lavaeater12, but I left Opening since it's an Opening.

Easy:
Add circle at 01:08:621 done.

Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:11:428
or
Move slider timing from 01:11:779 to 01:11:428 and add circle at 01:12:481 as well as moving slider timing from 01:13:183 to 01:12:832
-----------------------------------------------------
Choose below:-----------------------------------
Add circle at 01:13:885 did this.
or
Remove circle at 01:14:235 and add slider that starts at 01:13:885 and ends at 01:14:235 Uh... this part doesn't make sense to me.
-----------------------------------------------------

Normal:
Add circle on 00:32:481 Added.
Add circle on 00:33:885 Added.
Move slider that starts at 01:00:025 to 01:00:200 because it sounds more comfortable. I don't agree with you, but if someone else suggests it i'll change it.
From 01:02:657 to 01:03:885, use this timeline instead. Or no circles between sliders if you feel it's a bit overmapped. change it but instead of circles i put reverse arrow.
Remove circle at 01:17:569 and move following slider to that timing instead, and move the three following circles 2 mini-beats earlier, like this changed it but i made the last circle into a 1/2 long slider since the next 3/2 beats, where there's nothing seemed strange to me.

Hard:
I do not recommend to start a beatmap with 2 circles, rather replace them with a slider. Beacuse it would get annoying to hit them in time if you have Hidden mod and perhaps DT and HR as well. It's annoying. ok.


Move slider at 00:02:832 to 00:03:007 and add circle at 00:02:832 did do it, didn't seem to fit for me.
From 00:04:411 to 00:06:165, use this timeline instead or switch places on circle and slider as you wish. also doesn't seem to fit for me.
Slider at 00:16:692 can be removed. flows better if left.
The two-circle groups in section 00:06:867 to 00:09:323 can be three-circle groups instead, like this. don't think so.
Timeline at 00:23:709 to 00:24:411, use this instead(two sliders instead of a circle into a slider). left it as it is.

Remove slider at 00:33:709, add circle at 00:35:990 and choose below:-------------------------------------
Add circle at 00:33:885 and 00:34:060
or
Add slider that starts at 00:33:709 and ends at 00:34:060 not changing.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Move slider on 00:46:341 two mini-beats later(00:46:516)
Move slider on 01:01:078 two mini-beats later(01:01:253)
Move slider on 01:09:148 two mini-beats later(01:09:323) and remove circle at 01:09:323 not doing all this.
From 01:11:078 to 01:12:481, use this timeline instead. not doing all this.
Remove all circles from 01:13:972 to 01:14:148, it's simply overmapped. don't think so, but i put a slider with reverse arrows instead of the circles.11111

Insane:
Change AR to 9. ok.
Remove spinners at:
00:21:604
00:54:586
and make notes instead. left the spinners.

Also, streams at 00:52:306, 01:05:464, 01:13:885, 01:16:341 please use distance snap to make the streams and don't make strange curves even if you might think it fits the mapping style, it's rather just confusing to play them. I did use distant snap there... but i made then straight.

Lavaeater12's Insane:
At 00:02:744 and 00:02:920, please remove the circles and place a circle on 00:02:832. Otherwise it's very very very confusing.
Slider at 00:05:025, move it 3 mini-beat earlier(to 00:04:762). Not sure if just Lavaeater12 mistakenly put on wrong time or intentional. If it was intentional, it's not appropriate at all and doesn't fit. Also, add circle at 00:05:288.

Next, when I saw the crazy issues with timing, I decided to stop modding that difficulty. Please tell the author to fix the slider timing issues, when done I will mod it.



Don't forget my kudosu, I put quite some time and effort in this.
thanks for taking your time to mod my map. I helped me a lot, well except for hard diff, though that's just what i prefer.
Modem
Hi~! For M4M! (> w <)

Easy
00:00:025(1) Move this slider to 00:00:200 And shorten it to 00:00:902. It'll be easier for beginner to read
00:01:604 How about add a note here?
00:12:832 Add a slider here and reverse it once at 00:13:183 + use SC there
00:13:534 Back to NC
00:13:885 (3) SC
00:14:235 Add a slider here to 00:14:586 and SC there, then reverse it once
00:15:639 Add a note
00:48:972 (1) Move it to 00:48:972. Shorten it from here to 00:49:499 then add a note at 00:49:674
00:50:025 Add a note
01:03:358 (5) Make it end at 01:04:235
01:13:183 (2) Move it to 01:12:832 then reverse it once + move it closer to the slider at 01:11:779 (1)

Normal
00:00:025 (1) Move it to 00:00:200
00:07:920 Add a note
00:10:902 (4) Reverse it once
00:13:358 (2) SC
00:13:534 (3) Back to NC
00:13:709 (3) SC
00:14:235 (4) Back to NC
01:24:411 (1) Reverse it once

Hard
00:00:025 (1) Move this to 00:00:200
00:06:341 Add a sliser from here to 00:06:516, then reverse it once
00:10:200 (2) Reverse it once
00:21:253 Add a note
00:38:446 Add a note
00:38:621 Add a note
00:42:481 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:42:569, then reverse it once
01:22:657 (1) Remove this spinner
01:22:657 Then, make a slider from here to 01:22:832
01:23:007 Make a slider from here to 01:23:183
01:23:534 Add a note
01:23:709 Add a note
01:23:885 Add a note
01:25:113 Move this spinner to 01:25:200, make it end at 01:28:095, then add a note at 01:25:113

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once
00:42:569 Add a note
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once

Insane
00:05:814 Add a note
00:05:727 Add a note
00:06:341 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:16:516 (4) Reverse it once
00:17:744 (5) Remove this slider
00:27:218 (1) Remove this spinner
00:27:218 Add a note
00:27:569 Make a slider from here to 00:27:744
00:27:920 Make a slider from here to 00:28:095
00:28:271 Make a slider from here to 00:28:446
00:39:762 Add a note
00:54:586 How about remove this spinner and make some notes and sliders instead?
01:00:376 (4) Reverse it once
01:02:130 Add a note
01:02:218 Add a note
01:04:411 (9) Remove this slider
01:04:586 Add a note
01:22:657 Remove this spinner and replace it with some notes and sliders

Good luck~!!! (^ w ^)
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Modem wrote:

Hi~! For M4M! (> w <)

Easy
00:00:025(1) Move this slider to 00:00:200 And shorten it to 00:00:902. It'll be easier for beginner to read Errr... think it's better as it is.
00:01:604 How about add a note here? Like it more as it is.
00:12:832 Add a slider here and reverse it once at 00:13:183 + use SC there don't think so.
00:13:534 Back to NC color=#FF0000]-^[/color]
00:13:885 (3) SC -^
00:14:235 Add a slider here to 00:14:586 and SC there, then reverse it once color=#FF0000]-^[/color]
00:15:639 Add a note done.
00:48:972 (1) Move it to 00:48:972. Shorten it from here to 00:49:499 then add a note at 00:49:674 i moved it, and shortened it until the reverse arrow was at the time you mentioned and then i added a note at 00:48:621 (4) -
00:50:025 Add a note -^
01:03:358 (5) Make it end at 01:04:235 good idea, but i think it wouldn't be so nice to play like that, you know like the flow's just not right.
01:13:183 (2) Move it to 01:12:832 then reverse it once + move it closer to the slider at 01:11:779 (1) thanks, done.

Normal
00:00:025 (1) Move it to 00:00:200 like in easy.
00:07:920 Add a note like in easy.
00:10:902 (4) Reverse it once ok.
00:13:358 (2) SC don't think so.
00:13:534 (3) Back to NC don't think so.
00:13:709 (3) SC don't think so.
00:14:235 (4) Back to NC don't think so.
01:24:411 (1) Reverse it once i think it's okay as it is.

Hard
00:00:025 (1) Move this to 00:00:200 like in easy.
00:06:341 Add a sliser from here to 00:06:516, then reverse it once i think it's unnecessary.
00:10:200 (2) Reverse it once ok.
00:21:253 Add a note ok.
00:38:446 Add a note ok.
00:38:621 Add a note ok.
00:42:481 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:42:569, then reverse it once ok.
01:22:657 (1) Remove this spinner want it there.
01:22:657 Then, make a slider from here to 01:22:832
01:23:007 Make a slider from here to 01:23:183
01:23:534 Add a note
01:23:709 Add a note
01:23:885 Add a note
01:25:113 Move this spinner to 01:25:200, make it end at 01:28:095, then add a note at 01:25:113 left it as it is.

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note
00:06:692 Add a note
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once
00:42:569 Add a note
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once

Insane
00:05:814 Add a note ok.
00:05:727 Add a note ok.
00:06:341 Add a note didn't add
00:06:692 Add a note didn't add
00:16:516 (4) Reverse it once ok.
00:17:744 (5) Remove this slider didn't remove.
00:27:218 (1) Remove this spinner i want it here.
00:27:218 Add a note had one there before... but actually i don't really hear a beat on it so, didn't add.
00:27:569 Make a slider from here to 00:27:744
00:27:920 Make a slider from here to 00:28:095
00:28:271 Make a slider from here to 00:28:446 the all three, i want the spinners there.
00:39:762 Add a note had one there before... but actually i don't really hear a beat on it so, didn't add.
00:54:586 How about remove this spinner and make some notes and sliders instead? ... i like spinners! sry but I'll leave it.
01:00:376 (4) Reverse it once ok.
01:02:130 Add a note ok.
01:02:218 Add a note don't hear anything here.
01:04:411 (9) Remove this slider left it.
01:04:586 Add a note
01:22:657 Remove this spinner and replace it with some notes and sliders well like the others no.

Good luck~!!! (^ w ^)
Thanks for looking through my map (wil try to mod yours tomorrow) I know I declined a lot of your suggestions and there's the thing with the spinner. Really though thanks for looking through and giving suggestions for replplacing the spinners, it must have taken quite some time to get that. But I tried it out and after all I think I like the spinners there better.
Reiki
Hi there! Came from M4M request to your queue (overmapping everywhere! x.x)

[General]

  1. Artist: 藍井エイル Romanized Artist: Aoi Eir; Song title: IGNITE (TV Size ver.) (I'm not sure about the "ver." part). So, yeah. You need to change the song artist and title.
  2. Set up some Audio Lead-In, because the map starts too early. Around 1500 ms of lead-in should be enough. Configure this in the Notepad (select "Open .osu in Notepad"), in the Audio Lead-In option. And remember to do it on every difficulty!



[Easy]

  1. AR = 3 should make map a little bit easier.
  2. 00:11:428 (5) - This slider's too close to previous one. Keep Distance Snap the same...
  3. 00:20:551 (3) - Don't use 1/2 sliders in Easy (hard to read for newbies). I didn't complained about previous one because it seems to be easy enough.
  4. 00:24:762 (4) - ^^
  5. 00:26:341 (2) - Not only a 1/2 slider, but it is also at 1/2 distance from previous note... Do something, because it's too hard for an Easy.
  6. 00:27:920 (4) - Insert a New Combo here
  7. 00:28:621 (6) - Overlaps with 00:26:867 (3) - so I eagerly ask of you to move it somewhere else.
  8. 00:29:148 (7) - Same as 00:26:341 (2)
  9. 00:30:727 (2,4) - Those two overlap in an ugly way...
  10. 00:34:586 (1,2,3,4) - Try to curve (1) and (3) to make some blanket with (2), then move down (4) to line up with (3).
  11. 00:37:744 (5) - NC (New Combo), please!
  12. 00:38:095 (6,8) - 1/2 sliders again... Ugh...
  13. 00:43:358 (2) - Overlaps with 00:41:604 (3)
  14. 00:46:867 (2,3) - 1/2 beat separation... I'll stop complaining about those things, because I think you got the message of changing those.
  15. 00:53:358 (7,2,4) - I pray of you... don't make those sliders overlap. And correct any other overlap (which I'll stop mentioning).
  16. And since Kiai start, you started to put on a lot of claps... try to remove some (I can't suggest which ones because I'm bad at identifing hitsounds)


[Normal]

  1. 00:27:920 (1) - Try to keep your sliders with only a reverse. It makes things easier (and players aren't fully used to reverses yet). I'll only mention this once, because I don't want to keep repeating the same things.
  2. 01:00:025 (2) - This feels overmapped. You should place a circle at 01:00:200 instead of the slider.
  3. 01:03:007 (2,3,4,5) - OMG, this whole area feels overmapped...
  4. 01:17:218 (2) - I don't think this fits here. Place a circle at 01:17:393 instead.
  5. 01:24:411 (1) - Insert a reverse arrow, a finish hitsound at 01:25:113 then start spinner.
  6. I couldn't really mod this well...


[Hard]


Definitively, I need to mod this...
  1. I need to mod it, but I can't... too much overmapping... *dies* Try to listen to music for a while, then remap the diff...


Sorry, can't mod further.


Oh, yeah. If there isn't problem, would you allow me to map some hard?
I really want to do one. Please?
[ Nyx ]
Wooo random mod out of nowhere!

These are only suggestions, change what you think should be changed.

[Easy]

00:44:762 (4,5) - Fix the blanket.
01:03:007 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved slightly
01:04:762 (1,2) - Same with this one
00:30:727 (2,3,4) - Fix this so that (2) does not overlap (4). It looks ugly.
00:54:586 (1) - How about a finish here?
01:04:411 - Add a note here.
01:08:621 (5,6,7) - How about stacking (7) with (5) so that way (6) blankets both of them.
01:19:849 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved.

[Normal]

00:01:955 (4,1) - Slider (1)'s tail is not stacked properly with slider (4)'s head.
00:04:762 (4,5) - Make sure these are on the same x/y co-ordinates of this slider's head: 00:01:955 (4)
00:54:586 (1) - Finish here maybe?
01:11:078 (1,2) - Move (2) down a unit or two just so that they are better aligned.
01:08:621 (3,5) - Make sure these two slider tails are stacked properly.
01:16:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this part is going to be a little confusing for new players.

[Hard]

I tried playing this difficulty with DT and for me it was incredibly hard to read.

00:00:551 (2,5) - These notes shouldn't be overlapping.
00:13:183 (4,6) - Ugly overlap. Please fix.
00:21:428 (6,8) - Make sure (8) is stacked properly with (6)'s slider tail.
00:27:569 to 00:38:709 - Space out all of these notes. Bad overlapping and very cluttered notes makes it much harder to read.
00:56:516 (2,3) - Make a better blanket.
01:08:621 (5,6) - Make these two sliders the same. (Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V action)
01:10:200 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little confusing, at first I didn't even notice (4) Why not stack (4) on top of (5)
01:11:955 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:13:358 (5,6) - ^
01:13:972 (7,1) - Ugly overlap.
01:15:814 (7) - Rotate this note 20 degrees and fix the blanket.

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes?
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D)
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4)
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part.
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)?
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple.
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3)
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6)
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well.
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes.
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:06:867 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved.
00:08:095 (6,7) - ^
00:31:428 (2,4) - Why not stack these notes?
00:54:586 (1) - Not felling this spinner either. In all other difficulties this part had notes in it not a spinner. So why have a spinner now?
00:57:920 (9,1) - Improve blanket.

Well, that's all for me. mostly blanket/spacing/overlapping issues. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll become a good map in due time.
Username105
Hi m4m!

Easy-
AR-3
distance snap is important especially in easy and AiMod has 2 errors with this
they are at 00:11:428 (5) - this note and 00:50:902 (3) - this note
00:09:674 (3) - nc
00:10:200 (4) - make it go same direction as gap before it http://bit.ly/Wn3A9t
00:26:341 (2) - this should just be a circle at 00:26:516 - here
same with a lot of small circles in this diff, this is easy
00:26:867 (3) - overlaps with 00:28:621 (6) - this
00:29:674 (1,2) - why don't these look the same?
00:30:727 (2) - overlaps with 00:32:130 (4) - this
00:37:744 (5) - nc
00:41:604 (3) - overlaps with 00:43:358 (2) - this
00:52:130 (5) - overlaps with 00:52:130 (5) - and nc
these overlaps don't look intentional, they look kinda bad
01:04:411 - add note here
01:05:814 (2) - try x-360 y-232 for better blanket
01:17:393 (2) - overlaps
01:19:849 (5) - try x-392 y-192 for better blanket
01:21:604 (8) - fix blanket by reshaping slider
Normal-
again, ds errors in aimod
also, try to do the same thing i asked for with the nc's in all diffs
00:04:762 (4,5) - stack with 00:03:007 (1) - end
00:07:920 - note here stack with 00:08:972 (4) - here
00:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - overmapped, in fact, a lot of this is overmapped
try to use less reverses and make longer sliders
but, I won't point this out because it happens too much
00:19:499 (2,3,4) - fix flow, try (3) pressing "rotate 90 degrees clockwise" and "reverse selection" then moving it
00:28:972 (1,2,3,4) - fix blankets
00:31:779 (6,1,2,3) - fix flow, try something like this http://i.imgur.com/gWZJeVB.jpg?1
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - a great example of overmapping
00:46:165 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:57:393 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
01:03:007 (2,3,4) - another example of overmapping
01:09:674 (5,6) - fix flow, try making (5) look like (3)
Hard-
Well, this diff has many of the same problems as normal/easy.
like overlap, which isn't hard to find.
I'll try to point out stuff that isn't so obvious or repetitive
00:00:376 - add note here
00:17:744 - ^
00:28:621 (4) - remove note
00:32:306 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:46:692 - add note
Ok, your kiai doesn't feel like a kiai.
I heard kiai means epic chorus, and this doesn't sound epic to me.
It actually sounds quieter than the rest of the map.
This is why I'm not mapping it (Edit) srry I meant modding it
Insane-
btw this is your best diff
00:08:095 (6,7) - blanket better
00:18:797 - add note
01:02:306 (1,2) - blanket
01:06:692 - add note
01:09:499 - ^
01:24:586 (2) - delete note


That's all!
really hope this helps and good luck :D
Topic Starter
Lasoki

LixRei wrote:

Hi there! Came from M4M request to your queue (overmapping everywhere! x.x)

[General]

  1. Artist: 藍井エイル Romanized Artist: Aoi Eir; Song title: IGNITE (TV Size ver.) (I'm not sure about the "ver." part). So, yeah. You need to change the song artist and title.
  2. Set up some Audio Lead-In, because the map starts too early. Around 1500 ms of lead-in should be enough. Configure this in the Notepad (select "Open .osu in Notepad"), in the Audio Lead-In option. And remember to do it on every difficulty!

changed.

[Easy]

  1. AR = 3 should make map a little bit easier. ok.
  2. 00:11:428 (5) - This slider's too close to previous one. Keep Distance Snap the same... ok.
  3. 00:20:551 (3) - Don't use 1/2 sliders in Easy (hard to read for newbies). I didn't complained about previous one because it seems to be easy enough. changed.
  4. 00:24:762 (4) - ^^ -^
  5. 00:26:341 (2) - Not only a 1/2 slider, but it is also at 1/2 distance from previous note... Do something, because it's too hard for an Easy. changed.
  6. 00:27:920 (4) - Insert a New Combo here changed.
  7. 00:28:621 (6) - Overlaps with 00:26:867 (3) - so I eagerly ask of you to move it somewhere else.changed.
  8. 00:29:148 (7) - Same as 00:26:341 (2) changed.
  9. 00:30:727 (2,4) - Those two overlap in an ugly way...changed.
  10. 00:34:586 (1,2,3,4) - Try to curve (1) and (3) to make some blanket with (2), then move down (4) to line up with (3).
    changed.
  11. 00:37:744 (5) - NC (New Combo), please!changed.
  12. 00:38:095 (6,8) - 1/2 sliders again... Ugh...changed.
  13. 00:43:358 (2) - Overlaps with 00:41:604 (3)changed.
  14. 00:46:867 (2,3) - 1/2 beat separation... I'll stop complaining about those things, because I think you got the message of changing those.
  15. 00:53:358 (7,2,4) - I pray of you... don't make those sliders overlap. And correct any other overlap (which I'll stop mentioning).changed.
  16. And since Kiai start, you started to put on a lot of claps... try to remove some (I can't suggest which ones because I'm bad at identifing hitsounds)I actually think it's ok since there are a lot of claps in the music itself.


[Normal]

  1. 00:27:920 (1) - Try to keep your sliders with only a reverse. It makes things easier (and players aren't fully used to reverses yet). I'll only mention this once, because I don't want to keep repeating the same things. ok thanks.
  2. 01:00:025 (2) - This feels overmapped. You should place a circle at 01:00:200 instead of the slider. i don't really think so.
  3. 01:03:007 (2,3,4,5) - OMG, this whole area feels overmapped... changed
  4. 01:17:218 (2) - I don't think this fits here. Place a circle at 01:17:393 instead. ok.
  5. 01:24:411 (1) - Insert a reverse arrow, a finish hitsound at 01:25:113 then start spinner. ok.
  6. I couldn't really mod this well...


[Hard]


Definitively, I need to mod this...
  1. I need to mod it, but I can't... too much overmapping... *dies* Try to listen to music for a while, then remap the diff...

I'll remap it.

Sorry, can't mod further. it's fine xD


Oh, yeah. If there isn't problem, would you allow me to map some hard?
I really want to do one. Please?
Thanks for mapping! it really helped me!
Topic Starter
Lasoki

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Wooo random mod out of nowhere!

These are only suggestions, change what you think should be changed.

[Easy]

00:44:762 (4,5) - Fix the blanket. not supposed to be a blanket anymore.
01:03:007 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved slightly should be ok now.
01:04:762 (1,2) - Same with this one should be ok now.
00:30:727 (2,3,4) - Fix this so that (2) does not overlap (4). It looks ugly. fixed.
00:54:586 (1) - How about a finish here? ok.
01:04:411 - Add a note here. didn't add.
01:08:621 (5,6,7) - How about stacking (7) with (5) so that way (6) blankets both of them. nahhh...
01:19:849 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved. ok.

[Normal]

00:01:955 (4,1) - Slider (1)'s tail is not stacked properly with slider (4)'s head. O.o to me it is.
00:04:762 (4,5) - Make sure these are on the same x/y co-ordinates of this slider's head: 00:01:955 (4) ok.
00:54:586 (1) - Finish here maybe? ok.
01:11:078 (1,2) - Move (2) down a unit or two just so that they are better aligned. ok.
01:08:621 (3,5) - Make sure these two slider tails are stacked properly. Pretty sure they are.
01:16:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this part is going to be a little confusing for new players. should be better now.

[Hard]

I tried playing this difficulty with DT and for me it was incredibly hard to read. gonna skip this part since i decided to remap it... thanks though.

00:00:551 (2,5) - These notes shouldn't be overlapping.
00:13:183 (4,6) - Ugly overlap. Please fix.
00:21:428 (6,8) - Make sure (8) is stacked properly with (6)'s slider tail.
00:27:569 to 00:38:709 - Space out all of these notes. Bad overlapping and very cluttered notes makes it much harder to read.
00:56:516 (2,3) - Make a better blanket.
01:08:621 (5,6) - Make these two sliders the same. (Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V action)
01:10:200 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little confusing, at first I didn't even notice (4) Why not stack (4) on top of (5)
01:11:955 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:13:358 (5,6) - ^
01:13:972 (7,1) - Ugly overlap.
01:15:814 (7) - Rotate this note 20 degrees and fix the blanket.

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes?
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D)
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4)
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part.
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)?
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple.
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3)
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6)
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well.
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes.
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:06:867 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved. errr... seems fine for me.
00:08:095 (6,7) - ^ errr... seems fine for me.
00:31:428 (2,4) - Why not stack these notes? sure why not.
00:54:586 (1) - Not felling this spinner either. In all other difficulties this part had notes in it not a spinner. So why have a spinner now? honestly said not sure why i put the spinner there... and since you and someone else suggested mapping it out i did.
00:57:920 (9,1) - Improve blanket. should be better.

Well, that's all for me. mostly blanket/spacing/overlapping issues. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll become a good map in due time.
thanks~
Topic Starter
Lasoki

jonawaga wrote:

Hi m4m!

Easy-
AR-3 changed.
distance snap is important especially in easy and AiMod has 2 errors with this
they are at 00:11:428 (5) - this note and 00:50:902 (3) - this note ok.
00:09:674 (3) - nc ok.
00:10:200 (4) - make it go same direction as gap before it http://bit.ly/Wn3A9t ok.
00:26:341 (2) - this should just be a circle at 00:26:516 - here changed.
same with a lot of small circles in this diff, this is easy
00:26:867 (3) - overlaps with 00:28:621 (6) - this changed.
00:29:674 (1,2) - why don't these look the same? i like it i'll change it though if someone else mentions this.
00:30:727 (2) - overlaps with 00:32:130 (4) - this changed.
00:37:744 (5) - nc changed.
00:41:604 (3) - overlaps with 00:43:358 (2) - this changed.
00:52:130 (5) - overlaps with 00:52:130 (5) - and nc changed.
these overlaps don't look intentional, they look kinda bad
01:04:411 - add note here don't think it's needed.
01:05:814 (2) - try x-360 y-232 for better blanket the coordinates somehow don't fit for me but it should be better.
01:17:393 (2) - overlaps this was intentional.
01:19:849 (5) - try x-392 y-192 for better blanket fixed this in a mod which i haven't applied yet before you modded this.
01:21:604 (8) - fix blanket by reshaping slider-^
Normal-
again, ds errors in aimod
also, try to do the same thing i asked for with the nc's in all diffs
00:04:762 (4,5) - stack with 00:03:007 (1) - end changed.
00:07:920 - note here stack with 00:08:972 (4) - here didn't add, I like the space here.
00:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - overmapped, in fact, a lot of this is overmapped don't think so.
try to use less reverses and make longer sliders
but, I won't point this out because it happens too much ok thanks.
00:19:499 (2,3,4) - fix flow, try (3) pressing "rotate 90 degrees clockwise" and "reverse selection" then moving it ok.
00:28:972 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanketsok.
00:31:779 (6,1,2,3) - fix flow, try something like this http://i.imgur.com/gWZJeVB.jpg?1 don't get that picture and I think it's ok how it is.
00:40:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - a great example of overmapping don't see how this is overmapping.
00:46:165 (1,2) - fix blanket ok.
00:57:393 (1,2,3) - fix blankets tried to...
01:03:007 (2,3,4) - another example of overmapping ok.
01:09:674 (5,6) - fix flow, try making (5) look like (3) ok.
Hard-
Well, this diff has many of the same problems as normal/easy.
like overlap, which isn't hard to find.
I'll try to point out stuff that isn't so obvious or repetitive
00:00:376 - add note here
00:17:744 - ^
00:28:621 (4) - remove note
00:32:306 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:46:692 - add note
Ok, your kiai doesn't feel like a kiai.
I heard kiai means epic chorus, and this doesn't sound epic to me.
It actually sounds quieter than the rest of the map.
This is why I'm not mapping it (Edit) srry I meant modding it decided to remap the whole hard diff.
Insane-
btw this is your best diff thanks! I also think so.
00:08:095 (6,7) - blanket better should be better.
00:18:797 - add note ok.
01:02:306 (1,2) - blanket ok.
01:06:692 - add note ok.
01:09:499 - ^ ok.
01:24:586 (2) - delete note ok.


That's all!
really hope this helps and good luck :D
Thanks, really helped.
Lavaeater12

Modem wrote:

Lavaeater's Insane
00:06:428 Add a note I don't really see why so I didn't add this
00:06:692 Add a note I've changed the previous one into a slider instead
00:39:674 (1) Shorten this slider from here to 00:39:762 and reverse it once done
00:42:569 Add a note done
00:51:604 (6) Remove this note can't agree with this
00:51:779 (1) Remove this note can't agree with this either, but I've changed the combo to start on what used to be (3)
00:51:867 (2) Remove this note done
01:13:354 (3) Shorten this slider to 01:13:621 + Reverse it once
01:13:885 (4) Shorten this slider to 01:13:972 + Reverse it once
Thanks for modding!


Z3R0Xx wrote:

[Lavaeater12's Insane]

00:01:428 (2,7) - How about stacking these notes? done
00:07:393 (2,4) - Make these to slider the same (use some copy and paste action :D) done
00:09:148 (4,5) - Make (5) blanket (4) done
00:13:797 (1) - I'm not feeling this slider. I would remove it and map this part. done
00:16:341 (2,2) - How about making slider (2)'s tail stack with note (2)? done
00:33:358 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple. done
00:43:885 (3,5) - (5) should stack better with (3) done
00:43:709 (2,6) - Same idea but with (2) and (6) done
00:45:288 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing with this triple as well. done
00:50:376 (1) - Should blanket the slider that came before it. done, I've also moved the next few circles around to correct the spacing again.
01:12:130 (2,2) - Stack these two notes. done
01:18:095 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing. done
01:26:341 (1,2,3) - ^ done
Thank you for the help!
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