Oh hey, you got a SB for it now so it's SB checking time!
Very solid storyboard so only suggestions here, It's really ready to go without them buuut would be better with it.
First of all you might wanna warn about the
MAJOR SPOILERS in the description about the SB. Probably an good idea, I had the album cover in my TTM map first buut people complained about spoilers. As this SB is pretty much based on that scene spoilers can't be avoided so a warning is the next best thing.
Bit of an pity of the lack of widescreen support buut I can see why it's not there as the game itself being 4:3
If you really wanna go authentic To The moon you could change the font on the text to something closer to the text in game (As far as I know it's Times new roman so it's really easy to change if you want that)
One idea I came up with when I saw if was that if you made the grass move at a different speed it will give a really really great sense of depth that looks great. No big deal but would be cool.
I changed
M,1,14411,38656,320,
-130,320,458
to
M,1,14411,38656,320,
-270,320,458
You need to change when moon.jpg appears to 23490 for it to look good though, but soo worth it.
If you really want to go super optimized with the SB load you could split up the log from the riven and Johnny and having them as separate images. No big deal though.
Anyways just small suggestions. Feel free to PM me when you think it's ready. I'd love to bubble it
Also every map doesn't need kiai... my To The Moon map didn't... Still your choice....