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Kytoxid
[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.

[Easy]

01:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Normal]

00:13:715 (4) - Unpredictable extra repeat; I recommend removing it and adding a note instead.

Looks good overall, star~
Lokamp
Easy
00:09:905 (6) - finish on this slider's end

Normal
00:31:572 (4) - new combo
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty hard to catch the right rhythm... I've got 300 only after 5 tries...

Hard
Sounds good for me.

Another well-packed map, MoonFragrance!
Another star for you ;3
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.
- mamy people find DJMax Song by searching 'djmax' word.
others all fixed, thanks for modding XD
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

Seems a Easy-Normal, but it's ok

[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^


[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Misaki Takahashi
Easy:
no problems found

Normal:
no problems found

Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
00:55:619 (9): New combo?


good map. star~
BananasGoMoo
[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Also fine

[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here


+Star
Zekira
Wow, offset's incredibly early...

Offset: 1110 (+14 from current)

Other than that the map looks pretty fine to me at the moment.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^

- i didn't fix some notes don't fit, but almost fixed :3

Misaki Takahashi wrote:

Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
- it's alredy has been lower :3

00:55:619 (9): New combo?
- i think it doesn't fit <_<

BananasGoMoo wrote:

[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
- i've already tried it, but it's not good at funny play <_<. so rejected ;_;
thanks for mod xxheroxx, Misaki Takahashi and BananasGoMoo :D
and thank you for offset, Zekira XD
DJPop
~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?


~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^

~Hard~
00:04:905 (6) - new combo
00:08:715 (7) - ^
00:12:762 (8) - ^
00:16:572 (9) - ^
00:40:976 - move timing section 1/4 right
00:55:619 (9) - new combo
01:03:238 (9) - ^
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?


+Star
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
- synth sounds :) note are fixed to follow them more.

~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
- synth bass sounds :)

~Hard~
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
- same to normal :D
others all fixed XD
al2e10
By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
The rhythm is some problem. :?

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.

But STAR ~
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
- dizzy combo @_@

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
- dizzy combo too @_@

01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
- they're on synth bass

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
- i think no ploblem there... but if many people point it, i should change beat to fit to vocal ;_;
Xgor
Aside from the fact that there is almost no hitsounds, and when there is hit sounds..they are very quiet there is no problem
*star*
Breeze
OK mod start

[General]
  1. DJMAX DJ Clazzi Clazzquai should not in the tag 'cause DJMAX is soure and Clazzquai is the artist, they are unneed to add to tags
[Easy]
  1. fine
[Normal]
  1. 01:06:586 (2), 01:08:252(2), 01:10:395 (2) - short them for 1/4 beat sounds better
  2. 01:12:657 (3), 01:14:562(8), 01:16:467 (3), 01:18:371 (8) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:095 (1,2,3,4) - I love these :3
  2. 01:06:929 (4), 01:08:834 (5), 01:10:738 (5) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
star
Dusty
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
[General]
  1. Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
  2. Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.

~ ~ ~

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet). :)
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
  2. Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
- it's for 'Clazziquai Edition' tag.

[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
- okay, they're fitted to vocal now :(

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet). :)
- fixed :)
YGOkid8
Overall
I personally don't like it when the beats become silent (sorry, it was so soft, I thought it was silent :p). Maybe make it a bit louder? Or maybe, you could use Soft Sounds instead of a Custom Override. I dunno, just a thought

Hard
Add more hitsounds, esp. near beginning. Sounds really plain there
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Well, since this has been modded so much, not much I could do but give suggestions :o

star ~ *
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Freedom.mp3

Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (MoonFragrance) [Easy].osu
jericho2442
[Easy]
00:16:348 (4,5,6) - i dont like the way this feels at all, just feels wrong for then song :/
00:36:824 (4,1) - spacing, make (4,1) have the same spacing as the rest of the combo, as it is there spacing is a lil close
01:13:014 (4,5) - nazi, spacing is a lil close

[Normal]
01:03:252 (7) - new combo goes nice here
01:06:348 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer so its like 01:08:252 (2,3) -

[Hard]
01:20:619 (6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern your doing with the blue ticks sounds out of time >_>, the pattern is horrid this way, would be better to use the red and white tick before, then add another note on the next white tick, like this


_________________________-
cant star while your using that blue tick combo srry :( its out of time in my eyes
La Valse
gksrmfdl dkswjrguwudy gjf gkdurks star ~
DeathxShinigami
Late star. Sorry I forgot to mod...
Mashley
Use 1,118 offset. Otherwise, the map's fine.
anonymous_old
Easy
SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.



Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy
SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.



they're on synth souds ;)
offset fixed XD
Sushi
I think the soft-hitnormal is not loud enough. at the beginning i felt like there was no hitsound.

[Easy]
00:33:975 (1,2,3,4) - Go for symetry, align (2) and (4)
00:53:022 (2,5) - symetry

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
maybe add some lead in.
00:48:012 (3,4) - make more parallel (tip : use Reverse tool [Ctrl + R] )
01:19:560 (3,5) - align?


Nice map, nice song, nice hitsounds .
Damn.Want. Need.
Star!
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok :D

[Easy]
Ok :3

[Normal]
00:44:927 (1) Let this one finish at 00:46:594.
00:47:308 (x) Add beats.

[Hard]
00:03:369 (1,2) 1/4 before.

And that's all! Your map are soo cool! ^w^ hope you will ask me again x3 Starred
Teara
No problems

Good job :3

Star
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
Sonnyc
Hello

[Easy]
  • Nothing available
[Normal]
  • 00:27:784 (4) New combo
    00:48:260 (x) Add with Finish?
    01:33:975 (1) 3 Grids down
[Hard]
  • Nothing available
Good job MF
(No MX? lol)
star
Babble
Heya

Easy
Couldnt find anything wrong

Normal
Nothin

Hard
00:18:607 - Move back one tick in timeline


Nice song and map, star! :D
Lissette
how about to put a break time? dont have to be too long, a short one its ok

Easy
01:32:546 (4) - dont fit

Normal
00:44:927 (1) - end it at 00:46:832

Hard
01:19:203 - 01:34:203 - this part was to hard to follow, i had to play it couple of times to do it well u.u

Star!
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
bmin11
Needs moar SP
Doomsday
  1. Timing looks good
[EASY]

All good

[NORMAL]

00:56:117 (6) - This would sound better as just a hitcircle to me
01:03:737 (5) - ^

[HARD]

00:17:060 (1) - This spinner is rankable, but auto only just gets +2000 on it. Perhaps you could stretch it to where that hitcircle just after this is (1). (of course, if you do this, remove that hitcircle).

Very nicely made map. pretty fun too. I'd be happy P-bubbling this as it is, but I'll see what you do with my suggestions first

Starred
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
Doomsday
Sweet


Protobubbled
Shulin
General:

-- Remove "Clazziquai" from tags.
-- Soft hitsound sections seem too loud, maybe reduce by 2 ticks?
-- Resize BG to 1024x768 if you can.

Easy:

Good.

Normal:

00:17:546 to 00:33:259 -- Too loud imo reduce volume by 2 ticks?
00:41:117 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard

Offset is not the same as other difficulties ~ Make it 1,118

01:19:798 (4,5) - Volume is too loud to hear the synth sounds.
01:21:703 (3,4) - ^
01:23:607 (3,4) - ^
01:25:512 (3,4) - ^

Popping proto bubble until the offset is fixed, let me know when you've fixed it :D

~ Star
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
abalee
Hard:
01:29:094 (3,4) - minor spacing problem.

Normal:
01:06:356 (1,2) - ^

Easy:
01:25:403 (4) - Clap ---> finish.
Shulin
Proto Bubble Repair

Fix the things abalee mentioned and you'll probably get a bubble ;)
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
abalee
lighting.png seems useless, I can't find it coded in storyboard or used in template skin. :(

It is used. bubbled.
James
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed some hit sounds louder and some mistakes nobody had catched.
James
Looks/sounds good now.

This time I checked the easier diffs.

Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.

Bubbled again.
Zekira
Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.
Lol James, looks like you got left out on the new Submission system; if a submission was made while a bubble was active, it automatically gets converted to a star.
James
rank then
NoHitter
:|

Why did you bubble and rank the same map???
James
Because I am James.
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