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Clazziquai - Freedom

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MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 1월 27일 수요일 at 오후 2:50:23

Artist: Clazziquai
Title: Freedom
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ Clazzi DJClazzi Christina SARA TECHNIKA Robotica
BPM: 126
Filesize: 7007kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.49 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 318 notes)
  3. Normal (4.36 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Clazziquai - Freedom
Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Composed by DJ Clazzi
Vocal by Christina
Visualized by SARA & Carrojuice / Purplelemon

Included Clazziquai's 3.5th Album 'Robotica'
and DJMAX Clazziquai Edition and TECHNIKA XD

- 12/28 resize the backgrounds' size, so please re-download map :3
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 22 times in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hayeonghaseyo!!

[Easy]
00:18:234 (x) - Place note here
01:15:377 (1,2,3,4) - Move 5 grid up
01:26:806 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider
01:33:711 (4,5) - Move backward to white tick

[Normal]
00:18:949 (3) - Move forward to white tick
00:19:663 (4) - Delete this object
00:19:187 (3) - Place note here
01:19:187 (1) - Should end in 01:19:425
01:19:901 (2) - Move backward to white tick
01:20:139 - Place note here

[Hard]
01:20:020 (5) - Move forward to white tick
01:20:377 (x) - Place note here

Nice map
STAR!!!
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[General]
Use more hitsounds. Feels the offset is too early. Idk.

[Easy]
The beginning part is rather blank IMO. Try to add some hitsounds like whistles or claps. I think that's not just the beginning part, but almost the whole diff.

[Normal]
The problem is like the easy diff (rarely hitsound). But this is better than it.
00:37:996 (3) - Nazi modding. Lower it down a bit with tiny grid size.

[Hard]
Same like the easy diff. But this is a lot better.

Nice song. Star.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?

p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Leorda wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:234 (x) - Place note here
- rejected for ease

01:15:377 (1,2,3,4) - Move 5 grid up
- fixed :)

01:26:806 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider
01:33:711 (4,5) - Move backward to white tick
- they are on synth sounds DX

[Normal]
00:18:949 (3) - Move forward to white tick
00:19:663 (4) - Delete this object
00:19:187 (3) - Place note here
01:19:187 (1) - Should end in 01:19:425
01:19:901 (2) - Move backward to white tick
01:20:139 - Place note here
- same to easy, they are on synth sounds :(

[Hard]
01:20:020 (5) - Move forward to white tick
01:20:377 (x) - Place note here
-it isn't fit to synth bass

Nice map
STAR!!!

bmin11 wrote:

문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?
- 히트사운드요? 그거라면 제가 구해서 약간 편집해서 쓰는건데 ㅇㅅㅇ..

p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
- 컴퓨터가 고장나서 게스트 난이도는 관리하기 힘들어져서 지금은 안받고 있습니다. 저번에 디팝 난이도고 거절했구요 ㄷㄷ; 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
Thanks for modding, Leorda & VanMoNky :D
and thanks for star, bmin XD
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~!

[Normal]
01:06:334 - 01:18:715 [Easy]와 같이 쿵짝 말고 [Hard]와 같은 음 구성으로 갔으면 좋겠네요...
노멀에서 신나게 치다가 이부분에서 루즈하게 쿵짝하는 것은 조금 안어울리는 듯한 느낌이랄까..


Starred~!

P.S.: 그런데 마구 깔려있는 파란 라인은 무엇인가요?
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
star
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.

[Easy]

01:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Normal]

00:13:715 (4) - Unpredictable extra repeat; I recommend removing it and adding a note instead.

Looks good overall, star~
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
00:09:905 (6) - finish on this slider's end

Normal
00:31:572 (4) - new combo
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty hard to catch the right rhythm... I've got 300 only after 5 tries...

Hard
Sounds good for me.

Another well-packed map, MoonFragrance!
Another star for you ;3
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.
- mamy people find DJMax Song by searching 'djmax' word.
others all fixed, thanks for modding XD
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

Seems a Easy-Normal, but it's ok

[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Misaki Takahashi
22 posts
Joined December 2009
Misaki Takahashi
Easy:
no problems found

Normal:
no problems found

Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
00:55:619 (9): New combo?


good map. star~
BananasGoMoo
206 posts
Joined March 2009
BananasGoMoo
[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Also fine

[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here


+Star
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Wow, offset's incredibly early...

Offset: 1110 (+14 from current)

Other than that the map looks pretty fine to me at the moment.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^
- i didn't fix some notes don't fit, but almost fixed :3

Misaki Takahashi wrote:

Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
- it's alredy has been lower :3

00:55:619 (9): New combo?
- i think it doesn't fit <_<

BananasGoMoo wrote:

[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
- i've already tried it, but it's not good at funny play <_<. so rejected ;_;
thanks for mod xxheroxx, Misaki Takahashi and BananasGoMoo :D
and thank you for offset, Zekira XD
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?


~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^

~Hard~
00:04:905 (6) - new combo
00:08:715 (7) - ^
00:12:762 (8) - ^
00:16:572 (9) - ^
00:40:976 - move timing section 1/4 right
00:55:619 (9) - new combo
01:03:238 (9) - ^
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?


+Star
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
- synth sounds :) note are fixed to follow them more.

~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
- synth bass sounds :)

~Hard~
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
- same to normal :D
others all fixed XD
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
The rhythm is some problem. :?

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.

But STAR ~
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
- dizzy combo @_@

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
- dizzy combo too @_@

01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
- they're on synth bass

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
- i think no ploblem there... but if many people point it, i should change beat to fit to vocal ;_;
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Aside from the fact that there is almost no hitsounds, and when there is hit sounds..they are very quiet there is no problem
*star*
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
OK mod start

[General]
  1. DJMAX DJ Clazzi Clazzquai should not in the tag 'cause DJMAX is soure and Clazzquai is the artist, they are unneed to add to tags
[Easy]
  1. fine
[Normal]
  1. 01:06:586 (2), 01:08:252(2), 01:10:395 (2) - short them for 1/4 beat sounds better
  2. 01:12:657 (3), 01:14:562(8), 01:16:467 (3), 01:18:371 (8) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:095 (1,2,3,4) - I love these :3
  2. 01:06:929 (4), 01:08:834 (5), 01:10:738 (5) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
star
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
  2. Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.

~ ~ ~

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet). :)
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
  2. Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
- it's for 'Clazziquai Edition' tag.

[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
- okay, they're fitted to vocal now :(

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet). :)
- fixed :)
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Overall
I personally don't like it when the beats become silent (sorry, it was so soft, I thought it was silent :p). Maybe make it a bit louder? Or maybe, you could use Soft Sounds instead of a Custom Override. I dunno, just a thought

Hard
Add more hitsounds, esp. near beginning. Sounds really plain there
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, since this has been modded so much, not much I could do but give suggestions :o

star ~ *
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Freedom.mp3

Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (MoonFragrance) [Easy].osu
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Easy]
00:16:348 (4,5,6) - i dont like the way this feels at all, just feels wrong for then song :/
00:36:824 (4,1) - spacing, make (4,1) have the same spacing as the rest of the combo, as it is there spacing is a lil close
01:13:014 (4,5) - nazi, spacing is a lil close

[Normal]
01:03:252 (7) - new combo goes nice here
01:06:348 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer so its like 01:08:252 (2,3) -

[Hard]
01:20:619 (6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern your doing with the blue ticks sounds out of time >_>, the pattern is horrid this way, would be better to use the red and white tick before, then add another note on the next white tick, like this


_________________________-
cant star while your using that blue tick combo srry :( its out of time in my eyes
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
gksrmfdl dkswjrguwudy gjf gkdurks star ~
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Late star. Sorry I forgot to mod...
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Use 1,118 offset. Otherwise, the map's fine.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Easy
SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.



MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy
SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.



they're on synth souds ;)
offset fixed XD
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
I think the soft-hitnormal is not loud enough. at the beginning i felt like there was no hitsound.

[Easy]
00:33:975 (1,2,3,4) - Go for symetry, align (2) and (4)
00:53:022 (2,5) - symetry

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
maybe add some lead in.
00:48:012 (3,4) - make more parallel (tip : use Reverse tool [Ctrl + R] )
01:19:560 (3,5) - align?


Nice map, nice song, nice hitsounds .
Damn.Want. Need.
Star!
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok :D

[Easy]
Ok :3

[Normal]
00:44:927 (1) Let this one finish at 00:46:594.
00:47:308 (x) Add beats.

[Hard]
00:03:369 (1,2) 1/4 before.

And that's all! Your map are soo cool! ^w^ hope you will ask me again x3 Starred
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
No problems

Good job :3

Star
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hello

[Easy]
  • Nothing available
[Normal]
  • 00:27:784 (4) New combo
    00:48:260 (x) Add with Finish?
    01:33:975 (1) 3 Grids down
[Hard]
  • Nothing available
Good job MF
(No MX? lol)
star
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Heya

Easy
Couldnt find anything wrong

Normal
Nothin

Hard
00:18:607 - Move back one tick in timeline


Nice song and map, star! :D
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
how about to put a break time? dont have to be too long, a short one its ok

Easy
01:32:546 (4) - dont fit

Normal
00:44:927 (1) - end it at 00:46:832

Hard
01:19:203 - 01:34:203 - this part was to hard to follow, i had to play it couple of times to do it well u.u

Star!
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Needs moar SP
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
  1. Timing looks good
[EASY]

All good

[NORMAL]

00:56:117 (6) - This would sound better as just a hitcircle to me
01:03:737 (5) - ^

[HARD]

00:17:060 (1) - This spinner is rankable, but auto only just gets +2000 on it. Perhaps you could stretch it to where that hitcircle just after this is (1). (of course, if you do this, remove that hitcircle).

Very nicely made map. pretty fun too. I'd be happy P-bubbling this as it is, but I'll see what you do with my suggestions first

Starred
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Sweet


Protobubbled
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Remove "Clazziquai" from tags.
-- Soft hitsound sections seem too loud, maybe reduce by 2 ticks?
-- Resize BG to 1024x768 if you can.

Easy:

Good.

Normal:

00:17:546 to 00:33:259 -- Too loud imo reduce volume by 2 ticks?
00:41:117 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard

Offset is not the same as other difficulties ~ Make it 1,118

01:19:798 (4,5) - Volume is too loud to hear the synth sounds.
01:21:703 (3,4) - ^
01:23:607 (3,4) - ^
01:25:512 (3,4) - ^

Popping proto bubble until the offset is fixed, let me know when you've fixed it :D

~ Star
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :)
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Hard:
01:29:094 (3,4) - minor spacing problem.

Normal:
01:06:356 (1,2) - ^

Easy:
01:25:403 (4) - Clap ---> finish.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Proto Bubble Repair

Fix the things abalee mentioned and you'll probably get a bubble ;)
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed :)
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