문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?
p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?
p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
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Clazziquai - Freedom
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Topic Starter
Leorda wrote:
[Easy]
00:18:234 (x) - Place note here
- rejected for ease
01:15:377 (1,2,3,4) - Move 5 grid up
- fixed
01:26:806 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider
01:33:711 (4,5) - Move backward to white tick
- they are on synth sounds DX
[Normal]
00:18:949 (3) - Move forward to white tick
00:19:663 (4) - Delete this object
00:19:187 (3) - Place note here
01:19:187 (1) - Should end in 01:19:425
01:19:901 (2) - Move backward to white tick
01:20:139 - Place note here
- same to easy, they are on synth sounds
[Hard]
01:20:020 (5) - Move forward to white tick
01:20:377 (x) - Place note here
-it isn't fit to synth bass
Nice map
STAR!!!
Thanks for modding, Leorda & VanMoNkybmin11 wrote:
문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?
- 히트사운드요? 그거라면 제가 구해서 약간 편집해서 쓰는건데 ㅇㅅㅇ..
p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
- 컴퓨터가 고장나서 게스트 난이도는 관리하기 힘들어져서 지금은 안받고 있습니다. 저번에 디팝 난이도고 거절했구요 ㄷㄷ; 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
and thanks for star, bmin XD
Hello~!
[Normal]
01:06:334 - 01:18:715 [Easy]와 같이 쿵짝 말고 [Hard]와 같은 음 구성으로 갔으면 좋겠네요...
노멀에서 신나게 치다가 이부분에서 루즈하게 쿵짝하는 것은 조금 안어울리는 듯한 느낌이랄까..
Starred~!
P.S.: 그런데 마구 깔려있는 파란 라인은 무엇인가요?
[Normal]
01:06:334 - 01:18:715 [Easy]와 같이 쿵짝 말고 [Hard]와 같은 음 구성으로 갔으면 좋겠네요...
노멀에서 신나게 치다가 이부분에서 루즈하게 쿵짝하는 것은 조금 안어울리는 듯한 느낌이랄까..
Starred~!
P.S.: 그런데 마구 깔려있는 파란 라인은 무엇인가요?
star
[General]
Remove DJMax as a tag.
[Easy]
01:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
[Normal]
00:13:715 (4) - Unpredictable extra repeat; I recommend removing it and adding a note instead.
Looks good overall, star~
Remove DJMax as a tag.
[Easy]
01:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
[Normal]
00:13:715 (4) - Unpredictable extra repeat; I recommend removing it and adding a note instead.
Looks good overall, star~
Easy
00:09:905 (6) - finish on this slider's end
Normal
00:31:572 (4) - new combo
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty hard to catch the right rhythm... I've got 300 only after 5 tries...
Hard
Sounds good for me.
Another well-packed map, MoonFragrance!
Another star for you ;3
00:09:905 (6) - finish on this slider's end
Normal
00:31:572 (4) - new combo
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty hard to catch the right rhythm... I've got 300 only after 5 tries...
Hard
Sounds good for me.
Another well-packed map, MoonFragrance!
Another star for you ;3
Topic Starter
others all fixed, thanks for modding XDKytoxid wrote:
[General]
Remove DJMax as a tag.
- mamy people find DJMax Song by searching 'djmax' word.
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
Seems a Easy-Normal, but it's ok
[Normal]
01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^
[Hard]
It's ok
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
Seems a Easy-Normal, but it's ok
[Normal]
01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^
[Hard]
It's ok
Starred~
Easy:
no problems found
Normal:
no problems found
Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
00:55:619 (9): New combo?
good map. star~
no problems found
Normal:
no problems found
Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
00:55:619 (9): New combo?
good map. star~
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
Also fine
[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
+Star
Fine
[Normal]
Also fine
[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
+Star
Wow, offset's incredibly early...
Offset: 1110 (+14 from current)
Other than that the map looks pretty fine to me at the moment.
Offset: 1110 (+14 from current)
Other than that the map looks pretty fine to me at the moment.
Topic Starter
xxheroxx wrote:
[Normal]
01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^
- i didn't fix some notes don't fit, but almost fixed :3
Misaki Takahashi wrote:
Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
- it's alredy has been lower :3
00:55:619 (9): New combo?
- i think it doesn't fit <_<
thanks for mod xxheroxx, Misaki Takahashi and BananasGoMooBananasGoMoo wrote:
[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
- i've already tried it, but it's not good at funny play <_<. so rejected ;_;
and thank you for offset, Zekira XD
~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
~Hard~
00:04:905 (6) - new combo
00:08:715 (7) - ^
00:12:762 (8) - ^
00:16:572 (9) - ^
00:40:976 - move timing section 1/4 right
00:55:619 (9) - new combo
01:03:238 (9) - ^
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
+Star
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
~Hard~
00:04:905 (6) - new combo
00:08:715 (7) - ^
00:12:762 (8) - ^
00:16:572 (9) - ^
00:40:976 - move timing section 1/4 right
00:55:619 (9) - new combo
01:03:238 (9) - ^
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
+Star
Topic Starter
others all fixed XDDJPop wrote:
~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
- synth soundsnote are fixed to follow them more.
~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
- synth bass sounds
~Hard~
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
- same to normal
By AL2e10's modding !!
[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
The rhythm is some problem.
[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
[Easy]
Fine ~
[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
But STAR ~
[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
The rhythm is some problem.
[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
[Easy]
Fine ~
[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
But STAR ~
Topic Starter
al2e10 wrote:
By AL2e10's modding !!
[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
- dizzy combo @_@
[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
- dizzy combo too @_@
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
- they're on synth bass
[Easy]
Fine ~
[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
- i think no ploblem there... but if many people point it, i should change beat to fit to vocal ;_;
Aside from the fact that there is almost no hitsounds, and when there is hit sounds..they are very quiet there is no problem
*star*
*star*
OK mod start
[General]
[General]
- DJMAX DJ Clazzi Clazzquai should not in the tag 'cause DJMAX is soure and Clazzquai is the artist, they are unneed to add to tags
- fine
- 01:06:586 (2), 01:08:252(2), 01:10:395 (2) - short them for 1/4 beat sounds better
- 01:12:657 (3), 01:14:562(8), 01:16:467 (3), 01:18:371 (8) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
- 00:41:095 (1,2,3,4) - I love these :3
- 01:06:929 (4), 01:08:834 (5), 01:10:738 (5) - move them 1/4 early sounds better
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[General]
01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
~ ~ ~
Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet).
- Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
- Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
~ ~ ~
Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet).
Topic Starter
Gens wrote:
[General]- it's for 'Clazziquai Edition' tag.
- Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
- Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
[Normal]
01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
- okay, they're fitted to vocal now
Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet).
- fixed
Overall
I personally don't like it when the beats becomesilent (sorry, it was so soft, I thought it was silent :p). Maybe make it a bit louder? Or maybe, you could use Soft Sounds instead of a Custom Override. I dunno, just a thought
Hard
Add more hitsounds, esp. near beginning. Sounds really plain there
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, since this has been modded so much, not much I could do but give suggestions
star ~ *
I personally don't like it when the beats become
Hard
Add more hitsounds, esp. near beginning. Sounds really plain there
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, since this has been modded so much, not much I could do but give suggestions
star ~ *
Topic Starter
fixed
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Freedom.mp3
Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (MoonFragrance) [Easy].osu
Download: Freedom.mp3
Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (MoonFragrance) [Easy].osu
[Easy]
00:16:348 (4,5,6) - i dont like the way this feels at all, just feels wrong for then song :/
00:36:824 (4,1) - spacing, make (4,1) have the same spacing as the rest of the combo, as it is there spacing is a lil close
01:13:014 (4,5) - nazi, spacing is a lil close
[Normal]
01:03:252 (7) - new combo goes nice here
01:06:348 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer so its like 01:08:252 (2,3) -
[Hard]
01:20:619 (6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern your doing with the blue ticks sounds out of time >_>, the pattern is horrid this way, would be better to use the red and white tick before, then add another note on the next white tick, like this
_________________________-
cant star while your using that blue tick combo srry
its out of time in my eyes
00:16:348 (4,5,6) - i dont like the way this feels at all, just feels wrong for then song :/
00:36:824 (4,1) - spacing, make (4,1) have the same spacing as the rest of the combo, as it is there spacing is a lil close
01:13:014 (4,5) - nazi, spacing is a lil close
[Normal]
01:03:252 (7) - new combo goes nice here
01:06:348 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer so its like 01:08:252 (2,3) -
[Hard]
01:20:619 (6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern your doing with the blue ticks sounds out of time >_>, the pattern is horrid this way, would be better to use the red and white tick before, then add another note on the next white tick, like this
_________________________-
cant star while your using that blue tick combo srry
its out of time in my eyesLate star. Sorry I forgot to mod...
Use 1,118 offset. Otherwise, the map's fine.
Easy
Normal
Hard
SPOILER
No visible errors.
No visible errors.
Normal
SPOILER
00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.
Good.
00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.
Good.
Hard
SPOILER
00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)
01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.
00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)
01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.
Topic Starter
they're on synth soudsLoogiesquared wrote:
EasySPOILER
No visible errors.
NormalSPOILER
00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.
Good.
HardSPOILER
00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)
01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.
offset fixed XD
I think the soft-hitnormal is not loud enough. at the beginning i felt like there was no hitsound.
[Easy]
00:33:975 (1,2,3,4) - Go for symetry, align (2) and (4)
00:53:022 (2,5) - symetry
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
maybe add some lead in.
00:48:012 (3,4) - make more parallel (tip : use Reverse tool [Ctrl + R] )
01:19:560 (3,5) - align?
Nice map, nice song, nice hitsounds .
Damn.Want. Need.
Star!
[Easy]
00:33:975 (1,2,3,4) - Go for symetry, align (2) and (4)
00:53:022 (2,5) - symetry
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
maybe add some lead in.
00:48:012 (3,4) - make more parallel (tip : use Reverse tool [Ctrl + R] )
01:19:560 (3,5) - align?
Nice map, nice song, nice hitsounds .
Damn.Want. Need.
Star!
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3
[General]
ok
[Easy]
Ok :3
[Normal]
00:44:927 (1) Let this one finish at 00:46:594.
00:47:308 (x) Add beats.
[Hard]
00:03:369 (1,2) 1/4 before.
And that's all! Your map are soo cool! ^w^ hope you will ask me again x3 Starred
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3
[General]
ok
[Easy]
Ok :3
[Normal]
00:44:927 (1) Let this one finish at 00:46:594.
00:47:308 (x) Add beats.
[Hard]
00:03:369 (1,2) 1/4 before.
And that's all! Your map are soo cool! ^w^ hope you will ask me again x3 Starred
Topic Starter
fixed
Hello
[Easy]
(No MX? lol)
star
[Easy]
- Nothing available
- 00:27:784 (4) New combo
00:48:260 (x) Add with Finish?
01:33:975 (1) 3 Grids down
- Nothing available
(No MX? lol)
star
Heya
Easy
Couldnt find anything wrong
Normal
Nothin
Hard
00:18:607 - Move back one tick in timeline
Nice song and map, star!
Easy
Couldnt find anything wrong
Normal
Nothin
Hard
00:18:607 - Move back one tick in timeline
Nice song and map, star!
how about to put a break time? dont have to be too long, a short one its ok
Easy
01:32:546 (4) - dont fit
Normal
00:44:927 (1) - end it at 00:46:832
Hard
01:19:203 - 01:34:203 - this part was to hard to follow, i had to play it couple of times to do it well u.u
Star!
Easy
01:32:546 (4) - dont fit
Normal
00:44:927 (1) - end it at 00:46:832
Hard
01:19:203 - 01:34:203 - this part was to hard to follow, i had to play it couple of times to do it well u.u
Star!
Topic Starter
fixed
Needs moar SP
- Timing looks good
All good
[NORMAL]
00:56:117 (6) - This would sound better as just a hitcircle to me
01:03:737 (5) - ^
[HARD]
00:17:060 (1) - This spinner is rankable, but auto only just gets +2000 on it. Perhaps you could stretch it to where that hitcircle just after this is (1). (of course, if you do this, remove that hitcircle).
Very nicely made map. pretty fun too. I'd be happy P-bubbling this as it is, but I'll see what you do with my suggestions first
Starred
Topic Starter
fixed
Sweet
Protobubbled
General:
-- Remove "Clazziquai" from tags.
-- Soft hitsound sections seem too loud, maybe reduce by 2 ticks?
-- Resize BG to 1024x768 if you can.
Easy:
Good.
Normal:
00:17:546 to 00:33:259 -- Too loud imo reduce volume by 2 ticks?
00:41:117 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Hard
Offset is not the same as other difficulties ~ Make it 1,118
01:19:798 (4,5) - Volume is too loud to hear the synth sounds.
01:21:703 (3,4) - ^
01:23:607 (3,4) - ^
01:25:512 (3,4) - ^
Popping proto bubble until the offset is fixed, let me know when you've fixed it
~ Star
-- Remove "Clazziquai" from tags.
-- Soft hitsound sections seem too loud, maybe reduce by 2 ticks?
-- Resize BG to 1024x768 if you can.
Easy:
Good.
Normal:
00:17:546 to 00:33:259 -- Too loud imo reduce volume by 2 ticks?
00:41:117 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Hard
Offset is not the same as other difficulties ~ Make it 1,118
01:19:798 (4,5) - Volume is too loud to hear the synth sounds.
01:21:703 (3,4) - ^
01:23:607 (3,4) - ^
01:25:512 (3,4) - ^
Popping proto bubble until the offset is fixed, let me know when you've fixed it
~ Star
Topic Starter
fixed
Hard:
01:29:094 (3,4) - minor spacing problem.
Normal:
01:06:356 (1,2) - ^
Easy:
01:25:403 (4) - Clap ---> finish.
01:29:094 (3,4) - minor spacing problem.
Normal:
01:06:356 (1,2) - ^
Easy:
01:25:403 (4) - Clap ---> finish.
Proto Bubble Repair
Fix the things abalee mentioned and you'll probably get a bubble
Fix the things abalee mentioned and you'll probably get a bubble
Topic Starter
fixed
It is used. bubbled.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Fixed some hit sounds louder and some mistakes nobody had catched.
Looks/sounds good now.
This time I checked the easier diffs.
Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.
Bubbled again.
This time I checked the easier diffs.
Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.
Bubbled again.
Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.Lol James, looks like you got left out on the new Submission system; if a submission was made while a bubble was active, it automatically gets converted to a star.
rank then
Why did you bubble and rank the same map???
Because I am James.