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Vanmonky

Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2009-12-25T10:52:34+00:00

As your request.

[General]
Use more hitsounds. Feels the offset is too early. Idk.

[Easy]
The beginning part is rather blank IMO. Try to add some hitsounds like whistles or claps. I think that's not just the beginning part, but almost the whole diff.

[Normal]
The problem is like the easy diff (rarely hitsound). But this is better than it.
00:37:996 (3) - Nazi modding. Lower it down a bit with tiny grid size.

[Hard]
Same like the easy diff. But this is a lot better.

Nice song. Star.

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2009-12-26T03:17:51+00:00

문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?

p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-26T04:53:54+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Easy]
00:18:234 (x) - Place note here
- rejected for ease

01:15:377 (1,2,3,4) - Move 5 grid up
- fixed

01:26:806 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider
01:33:711 (4,5) - Move backward to white tick
- they are on synth sounds DX

[Normal]
00:18:949 (3) - Move forward to white tick
00:19:663 (4) - Delete this object
00:19:187 (3) - Place note here
01:19:187 (1) - Should end in 01:19:425
01:19:901 (2) - Move backward to white tick
01:20:139 - Place note here
- same to easy, they are on synth sounds

[Hard]
01:20:020 (5) - Move forward to white tick
01:20:377 (x) - Place note here
-it isn't fit to synth bass

Nice map
STAR!!!

bmin11 wrote:
문제없어 보이네요. 개인적으로 이맵이 더 맘에 드므로 여기에 분홍별 쏠께요
그런데 탄막님한테서 허락 받고 쓰시는거 맞죠?
- 히트사운드요? 그거라면 제가 구해서 약간 편집해서 쓰는건데 ㅇㅅㅇ..

p.s 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요? 그냥 프리스타일로요
- 컴퓨터가 고장나서 게스트 난이도는 관리하기 힘들어져서 지금은 안받고 있습니다. 저번에 디팝 난이도고 거절했구요 ㄷㄷ; 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ

Thanks for modding, Leorda & VanMoNky

and thanks for star, bmin XD

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-12-26T05:32:44+00:00

Hello~!

[Normal]
01:06:334 - 01:18:715 [Easy]와 같이 쿵짝 말고 [Hard]와 같은 음 구성으로 갔으면 좋겠네요...
노멀에서 신나게 치다가 이부분에서 루즈하게 쿵짝하는 것은 조금 안어울리는 듯한 느낌이랄까..

Starred~!

P.S.: 그런데 마구 깔려있는 파란 라인은 무엇인가요?

Ra-s

1,289 posts

Joined May 2009

Ra-s 2009-12-26T09:03:27+00:00

star

Kytoxid

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1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-12-26T09:50:31+00:00

[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.

[Easy]

01:11:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Normal]

00:13:715 (4) - Unpredictable extra repeat; I recommend removing it and adding a note instead.

Looks good overall, star~

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-12-26T10:42:15+00:00

Easy
00:09:905 (6) - finish on this slider's end

Normal
00:31:572 (4) - new combo
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty hard to catch the right rhythm... I've got 300 only after 5 tries...

Hard
Sounds good for me.

Another well-packed map, MoonFragrance!
Another star for you ;3

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-27T06:54:57+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
[General]

Remove DJMax as a tag.
- mamy people find DJMax Song by searching 'djmax' word.

others all fixed, thanks for modding XD

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-12-27T09:41:20+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

Seems a Easy-Normal, but it's ok

[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~

Misaki Takahashi

22 posts

Joined December 2009

Misaki Takahashi 2009-12-27T14:17:41+00:00

Easy:
no problems found

Normal:
no problems found

Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
00:55:619 (9): New combo?

good map. star~

BananasGoMoo

206 posts

Joined March 2009

BananasGoMoo 2009-12-28T00:24:21+00:00

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Also fine

[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here

+Star

Zekira

9,233 posts

Joined September 2008

Zekira 2009-12-28T05:34:06+00:00

Wow, offset's incredibly early...

Offset: 1110 (+14 from current)

Other than that the map looks pretty fine to me at the moment.

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-28T07:02:54+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
[Normal]

01:19:191 (1) - End it on red tick (01:19:416)
01:19:786 (2) - Start 01:19:667 || End 01:19:905
01:21:095 (4,5) - ^
01:23:000 (1,2) - ^
01:24:905 (4,5) - ^
01:27:167 (2) - Start: red tick || End: white tick
01:29:072 (7) - ^
01:30:976 (2) - ^
01:32:881 (7) - ^
- i didn't fix some notes don't fit, but almost fixed :3

Misaki Takahashi wrote:
Hard:
00:33:000 (1): Lower volume maybe?
- it's alredy has been lower :3

00:55:619 (9): New combo?
- i think it doesn't fit <_<

BananasGoMoo wrote:
[Hard]
00:18:476 (x) - put a note here
- i've already tried it, but it's not good at funny play <_<. so rejected ;_;

thanks for mod xxheroxx, Misaki Takahashi and BananasGoMoo

and thank you for offset, Zekira XD

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-12-29T02:44:13+00:00

~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?

~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^

~Hard~
00:04:905 (6) - new combo
00:08:715 (7) - ^
00:12:762 (8) - ^
00:16:572 (9) - ^
00:40:976 - move timing section 1/4 right
00:55:619 (9) - new combo
01:03:238 (9) - ^
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?

+Star

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-29T06:12:48+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Easy~
01:19:681 (2) and afterward - what does this slider follow with?
- synth sounds note are fixed to follow them more.

~Normal~
01:19:205 (1,2) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
01:27:062 (2,3) and afterward - ^
- synth bass sounds

~Hard~
01:19:429 (2,3,4,5) and afterward - what do these notes follow with?
- same to normal

others all fixed XD

al2e10

1,101 posts

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-12-31T07:42:14+00:00

By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
The rhythm is some problem.

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.

But STAR ~

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-31T08:38:36+00:00

al2e10 wrote:
By AL2e10's modding !!

[Hard]
00:55:143 (4 or 3) New combo
- dizzy combo @_@

[Normal]
01:09:681 (5) New combo
01:13:490 (6) New combo
01:17:300 (6) ^
- dizzy combo too @_@

01:23:609 (2) Move to 01:23:490
01:25:514 (5) Move to 01:25:395
- they're on synth bass

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
The rhythm is some problem, but I don't know how to say about it ~~
It is not main stream.
- i think no ploblem there... but if many people point it, i should change beat to fit to vocal ;_;

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2010-01-01T10:47:13+00:00

Aside from the fact that there is almost no hitsounds, and when there is hit sounds..they are very quiet there is no problem
*star*

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-01-02T08:21:32+00:00

OK mod start

[General]

DJMAX DJ Clazzi Clazzquai should not in the tag 'cause DJMAX is soure and Clazzquai is the artist, they are unneed to add to tags

[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

01:06:586 (2), 01:08:252(2), 01:10:395 (2) - short them for 1/4 beat sounds better
01:12:657 (3), 01:14:562(8), 01:16:467 (3), 01:18:371 (8) - move them 1/4 early sounds better

[Hard]

00:41:095 (1,2,3,4) - I love these :3
01:06:929 (4), 01:08:834 (5), 01:10:738 (5) - move them 1/4 early sounds better

star

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2010-01-04T23:59:43+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Gens

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Gens 2010-01-05T21:55:33+00:00

[General]

Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.

[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.

~ ~ ~

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet).

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-06T03:53:55+00:00

Gens wrote:
[General]
Offsets are not the same on all difficulties graaah
Remove "Clazziquai" from the tags since it's already set in the Artist field.
- it's for 'Clazziquai Edition' tag.

[Normal]

01:19:800 (2) - I can't hear what this slider is following... maybe move back/forward 1/4?
01:21:705 (5) - Same.
01:23:609 (2) - Same.
01:25:514 (5) - Same.
- okay, they're fitted to vocal now

Everything else is quite good (I must agree with the others though, hitsounds are rather quiet).
- fixed

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-01-07T00:15:31+00:00

Overall
I personally don't like it when the beats become ~~silent~~ (sorry, it was so soft, I thought it was silent :p). Maybe make it a bit louder? Or maybe, you could use Soft Sounds instead of a Custom Override. I dunno, just a thought

Hard
Add more hitsounds, esp. near beginning. Sounds really plain there
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, since this has been modded so much, not much I could do but give suggestions

star ~ *

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-07T01:26:01+00:00

fixed

Armin

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Armin 2010-01-07T17:33:28+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Freedom.mp3

Download: Clazziquai - Freedom (MoonFragrance) [Easy].osu

jericho2442

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1,918 posts

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jericho2442 2010-01-07T17:35:43+00:00

[Easy]
00:16:348 (4,5,6) - i dont like the way this feels at all, just feels wrong for then song :/
00:36:824 (4,1) - spacing, make (4,1) have the same spacing as the rest of the combo, as it is there spacing is a lil close
01:13:014 (4,5) - nazi, spacing is a lil close

[Normal]
01:03:252 (7) - new combo goes nice here
01:06:348 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer so its like 01:08:252 (2,3) -

[Hard]
01:20:619 (6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern your doing with the blue ticks sounds out of time >_>, the pattern is horrid this way, would be better to use the red and white tick before, then add another note on the next white tick, like this

_________________________-
cant star while your using that blue tick combo srry

its out of time in my eyes

La Valse

501 posts

Joined February 2009

La Valse 2010-01-08T03:29:08+00:00

gksrmfdl dkswjrguwudy gjf gkdurks star ~

DeathxShinigami

1,176 posts

Joined November 2008

DeathxShinigami 2010-01-08T05:22:08+00:00

Late star. Sorry I forgot to mod...

Mashley

2,042 posts

Joined September 2008

Mashley 2010-01-08T09:45:18+00:00

Use 1,118 offset. Otherwise, the map's fine.

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2010-01-08T23:07:45+00:00

Easy

SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal

SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard

SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-09T02:29:06+00:00

Loogiesquared wrote:
Easy
SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:55:395 (4) : Add a beat here with the finish hitsound.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:18:480 (2) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:195 (4) : Forward by 2 ticks.
00:19:314 (5) : Back by 1 tick.
00:19:667 (6) : Back by 1 tick.
(Screenshot explanation)

01:19:552 (3) : Delete.
01:20:147 (3) : Forward by 4 ticks.
01:20:385 (4) : Forward by 3 ticks.

they're on synth souds

offset fixed XD

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-01-09T10:05:31+00:00

I think the soft-hitnormal is not loud enough. at the beginning i felt like there was no hitsound.

[Easy]
00:33:975 (1,2,3,4) - Go for symetry, align (2) and (4)
00:53:022 (2,5) - symetry

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
maybe add some lead in.
00:48:012 (3,4) - make more parallel (tip : use Reverse tool [Ctrl + R] )
01:19:560 (3,5) - align?

Nice map, nice song, nice hitsounds .
Damn.Want. Need.
Star!

Mok

1,226 posts

Joined August 2009

Mok 2010-01-09T21:42:33+00:00

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok

[Easy]
Ok :3

[Normal]
00:44:927 (1) Let this one finish at 00:46:594.
00:47:308 (x) Add beats.

[Hard]
00:03:369 (1,2) 1/4 before.

And that's all! Your map are soo cool! ^w^ hope you will ask me again x3 Starred

Teara

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Teara 2010-01-10T06:44:18+00:00

No problems

Good job :3

Star

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-10T06:55:55+00:00

fixed

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

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Sonnyc 2010-01-10T09:27:26+00:00

Hello

[Easy]

Nothing available

[Normal]

00:27:784 (4) New combo
00:48:260 (x) Add with Finish?
01:33:975 (1) 3 Grids down

[Hard]

Nothing available

Good job MF
(No MX? lol)
star

Babble

230 posts

Joined July 2009

Babble 2010-01-10T21:00:46+00:00

Heya

Easy
Couldnt find anything wrong

Normal
Nothin

Hard
00:18:607 - Move back one tick in timeline

Nice song and map, star!

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-01-12T00:50:13+00:00

how about to put a break time? dont have to be too long, a short one its ok

Easy
01:32:546 (4) - dont fit

Normal
00:44:927 (1) - end it at 00:46:832

Hard
01:19:203 - 01:34:203 - this part was to hard to follow, i had to play it couple of times to do it well u.u

Star!

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-13T02:31:01+00:00

fixed

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2010-01-13T04:25:51+00:00

Needs moar SP

Doomsday

Featured Artist

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Joined July 2008

Doomsday 2010-01-17T23:16:00+00:00

Timing looks good

[EASY]

All good

[NORMAL]

00:56:117 (6) - This would sound better as just a hitcircle to me
01:03:737 (5) - ^

[HARD]

00:17:060 (1) - This spinner is rankable, but auto only just gets +2000 on it. Perhaps you could stretch it to where that hitcircle just after this is (1). (of course, if you do this, remove that hitcircle).

Very nicely made map. pretty fun too. I'd be happy P-bubbling this as it is, but I'll see what you do with my suggestions first

Starred

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-20T02:04:10+00:00

fixed

Doomsday

Featured Artist

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Doomsday 2010-01-20T22:58:42+00:00

Sweet

Protobubbled

Shulin

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Joined August 2009

Shulin 2010-01-21T20:56:54+00:00

General:

-- Remove "Clazziquai" from tags.
-- Soft hitsound sections seem too loud, maybe reduce by 2 ticks?
-- Resize BG to 1024x768 if you can.

Easy:

Good.

Normal:

00:17:546 to 00:33:259 -- Too loud imo reduce volume by 2 ticks?
00:41:117 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard

Offset is not the same as other difficulties ~ Make it 1,118

01:19:798 (4,5) - Volume is too loud to hear the synth sounds.
01:21:703 (3,4) - ^
01:23:607 (3,4) - ^
01:25:512 (3,4) - ^

Popping proto bubble until the offset is fixed, let me know when you've fixed it

~ Star

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-01-22T03:22:41+00:00

fixed

abalee

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abalee 2010-01-22T11:07:45+00:00

Hard:
01:29:094 (3,4) - minor spacing problem.

Normal:
01:06:356 (1,2) - ^

Easy:
01:25:403 (4) - Clap ---> finish.

Shulin

1,333 posts

Joined August 2009

Shulin 2010-01-22T21:23:51+00:00

Proto Bubble Repair

Fix the things abalee mentioned and you'll probably get a bubble

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-23T01:56:27+00:00

fixed

abalee

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abalee 2010-01-24T02:30:13+00:00

~~lighting.png seems useless, I can't find it coded in storyboard or used in template skin.~~

It is used. bubbled.

James

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James 2010-01-26T17:17:30+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-27T05:51:47+00:00

Fixed some hit sounds louder and some mistakes nobody had catched.

James

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James 2010-01-27T10:45:03+00:00

Looks/sounds good now.

This time I checked the easier diffs.

Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.

Bubbled again.

Zekira

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Zekira 2010-01-29T17:33:57+00:00

Who starred this? I'm sure that I did not change this back to star.

Lol James, looks like you got left out on the new Submission system; if a submission was made while a bubble was active, it automatically gets converted to a star.

James

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James 2010-01-30T01:33:34+00:00

rank then

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-01-30T01:43:47+00:00