Sorry it took me so long to get back to this. @-@;;;
[General]*Offset feels late; Try 890 and resnap on all diffs please.
*Some of the SB elements could've been clipped down a bit more, but for consistency's sake and not wasting more time fixing the SB, they're good enough. Besides, they're only on-screen for a few seconds each, and no longer lag me.
*Don't forget to fix asdfasdfasdfasdf.png if you haven't already :B
*I only see "keion" tag in one difficulty. Make tags on all diffs the same, please. :V
Derekku Chan wrote:
*kiai is inconsistent between difficulties. I don't mind the guest's diff having different kiai, but at least keep your own two with the same spots. =S
*Also, I hate to say it, but there are too many kiai toggles. Plus, a lot of times, I see kiai starting on 1/4th notes or in the middle of sliders and it's just very sloppy. Please check every spot and fix it up. Other times, kiai ends in the middle of breaks or way after it should've.
[Vicho's Training Camp]*The small distance spacing becomes clustered in some parts and hard to read. That's really the only problem I have with this diff.
00:30:032 (3,4,5) - is an example of a hard-to-read spot.
[School Festival!]00:24:689 (1) - How come this starts on the red tick, but the same spinner in the harder diff starts on the white? I'd make them the same
00:33:475 (3) - too far from previous
00:51:032 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this keep the same closer spacing for this 0.5x bpm section?
01:45:461 (1) - too far from previous
01:50:604 (3) - random slider velocity change that doesn't fit here
02:09:889 (2) - not stacked under the slider
02:25:318 (1) - doesn't start at the same place as the harder diff's
[Budokan!]00:41:175 (2) - end isn't snapped right
01:12:032 (1,2,3) - put these first three closer together (slightly overlapping) so one can actually tell that there's only 1/4 time between each. Otherwise, it's just confusing.
01:48:889 (1) - 'Speed down' shouldn't appear until, like, halfway through this slider. I thought that the warning was for THIS slider and got confused. :/
01:52:532 (1) - 'Speed up' warning should appear before the end of the last slider so that players can actually see it. =S
*same thing with warnings after this. They appear too quickly and half the time I either didn't notice them or saw them too late.
Not a bad map, but many parts feel sloppy and I'd like to see some fixes. Star for effort~