Derekku Chan wrote:

SPOILER

Pubble-ready? Most definitely not, I'm afraid. This map's SB alone is unrankable and needs to be fixed.

[General]
*Your SB elements have WAAAAAAY too many transparent pixels. When you make these elements, you should cut them to be the smallest size possible. Otherwise, you have large, unneeded space that will usually hinder performance during gameplay.

For example, Chance.png:

All of the black space is transparent pixels that should be gotten rid of. Please fix ALL images that have such unneeded space and resubmit. If there are only a few pixels on the sides like for the sliderball and rank images, it's fine, but everything else needs a revamp. (I thought that the 50/100/300/etc. ones needed fixed too, but they have transparent pixels themselves in the template skin, so.. nevermind those; just fix the big ones you have for the SB please.)

Now, back to general stuff...
*Since scorebar-colour-0, 1, 2, and 3 are the same, only the first is needed. Delete 1/2/3 and resubmit please.
*Sliderball frames aren't perfect, but the faults aren't noticeable during gameplay, so I guess they're okay. :V
*Tags: Let's, Ayana, Taketatsu, can be removed since they're searched from the title/artist.
*Please match up tags on all diffs. They should be the same on each.
*Shadows on section-fail are cut off a bit, but not too noticeable. :U
*kiai is inconsistent between difficulties. I don't mind the guest's diff having different kiai, but at least keep your own two with the same spots. =S

After going through all of this, I seem to have run out of time for modding tonight and need to get some homework done. @-@ I'll check the diffs themselves possibly tomorrow for ya. My apologies. D:

FPRC16 wrote:

waaa, koto-chan isiste sliberd solo hasta el 7 y es hasta el 12 y si te dio flojera borra los otros desde el 8 hasta el 12
se mesclan con los otros y asasdas es algo raro y se nota o-ó.
XD eso nomas, esque ahora no estabaa conectada y me dio por posterate xD

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Vicho's Training Camp~
00:55:118 (8,9) - Revisa el Spacing.
Fixeado x3

animask wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
Add "Vicho-kun" to the "Tags" section in Song Setup :o
01:16:761 (3) - Replace the Finish hitsound with a clap hitsound? Fixed

Derekku Chan wrote:

*kiai is inconsistent between difficulties. I don't mind the guest's diff having different kiai, but at least keep your own two with the same spots. =S

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
I'd probably make the circle size as large as you can make it, considering this is the easy map and all. It's fine
00:31:118 (4) - Stack this on (5); the slider hides most of it the way it is now Ok x)
00:37:975 (4) - Same story here Yup
00:39:261 (2,1,2,3) - Move these out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4960 Fixed :3
Good map Arigatou Gozaimasu :3

dksslqj wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp
00:46:332 (x) - plz add note Added :3

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
*The small distance spacing becomes clustered in some parts and hard to read. That's really the only problem I have with this diff.
00:30:032 (3,4,5) - is an example of a hard-to-read spot. All parts "hard-to-read" Fixed :3

xBubu wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]

SPOILER

IMO,1 / 2 beat in terms of too difficult for novice.
For example,00:31:118(4,5)on, and exactly the same as above
If you want to do this, I suggest, modify the following issues Fixed :3

• 00:42:475(x)- add note Ok x)
  00:46:332(x)-^ Ok xP
  01:00:689(x)-^ Ok

• .Opinions:
  The map is ok. Just a thing: don't you think that you used a really tiny spacing? Sometimes tiny spacing =/= easy to play.

• .Opinions:
  Great ^^

• .Opinions:
  2 Seconds of Audio Lead-in fit better.
  Quick note about the Storyboard at ~01:50:00: what's the point of telling the player to slow down while he's already playing the thing you slowed down? Consider moving this warning before, so that the player can understand when the speed change is going to occur. The "Speed Up!" part is ok, and the other warnings should be ok, since the player might expect them after seeing the first one.
  .Suggestions:
  01:09:568 (1) - end this one 1/4 before or after
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:41:175 (2) - this one should end on the white line (00:42:461)

tmokb93 wrote:

A little advertisement:
Source: K-ON! Keion OST
Tags: add Character Song too.

*Star* I love this song

• • 00:36:890 (3,4,5) - Spacing

xxheroxx wrote:

[Vicho's]

• • 00:36:890 (3,4,5) - Spacing ok

Ultimate wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp:
00:40:324 (3) - 1 timing point shorter what are you talking about??
01:18:895 (1) - 1 timing point shorter ^
01:18:895 (1,2) - i don't like this spacing Fixed

minyeob wrote:

[Vicho]
01:18:889 (1) - This should be ended on 1:19:961 Fixed

Shulin wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp:

00:18:032 (7) - New combo. Ok
00:28:318 (4) - ^ Ok

1. hit100g.png isn't part of a skin template!! And hit100k.png should be the image of hit100g.png. Erase hit100k.png and rename hit100g.png as hit100k.png.
2. I don't see differences between hit300.png and hit300k.png, so I can't know whenever I completed a combo, or I bashed with both drums a big circle on Taiko. Modify hit300k.png, use your imagination ^^
3. On the scorebar-colour images, try to use a lighter color at the final of it (i.e., don't use black, but a dark green. I can't see the ki bar well on Taiko!!
4. Two backgrounds for your diffs and the Vicho's custom one?! It's a waste of space. Make only ONE background and, then, signs with your names and use them as a diff. specific storyboards.
5. On the fruits images (not the fruits overlays), due you aren't using these, replace them with blank images, 1x1 pixels, I mean, without nothing. Don't erase or osu! will use the default images!! You'll save 15 KB!! (OK. Not too much neccesary, so you can skip this tip).
6. hit0.png isn't descriptive. Write something like "Fail" or an "X" mark along with the current image.
7. Please, use the face for all the slider ball frames!!

1. Delete keion from tags of School Festival! diff.

1. 00:57:461 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:05:497 (2) - Remove clap, add finish as others
3. 01:12:032 (T) - KIAI here used too often, generally KIAI shouldn't use twice in 1 minute
4. 01:54:032 (x) - KIAI ends here
5. 02:05:497 (5) - Remove clap, add finish as others

1. 00:57:461(x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:05:390 (5) - Unusual spacing. If you want to put them like this, I suggest you new combo (4)
3. 01:14:068 (2,3) - I feel spcing a little far
4. 01:15:461 (T) - KIAI too often
5. 01:15:782 (2,3) - These two you must fix, it's too far
6. 02:30:032 (T) - Unused timing section