Shinxyn wrote:

SPOILER

wow, lots of skinning..
-I think you're missing "approachcircle.png" though.
-the offset's really off.... not to mention, all three diffs have different offsets, Use 904 for all three please, then resnap with 1/4 (no need for 1/8 at ALL), then double check places that might have snapped wrong
-Please don't use four different shades of the same colour (green), including the green background, it gets kinda hard to read green over green with a new combo being green...
-use lower hitsound volume, lower volume by two or so ticks?
-Set Preview point

Vicho's- this isn't complete? it seems fine though, though the storyboard continues.. kinda dull and sorta along Easy+ though, the 1/2 notes make it a bit complex for easy, but it's fine~

School Festival!- I can't mod this well cuz of the off timing, please fix the timing and remember to use only up to 1/4, not 1/8, I'll just try to point out stuff unrelated to timing...
Overall diff +2 or 3 please
Don't use full volume for normal hitsound set please, it's much too loud compared to the soft~~
01:01:094 (1) - I don't recommend you using these kinds of sliders, thought they're playable, they can still cause issues
01:19:576 (6) - if you're ganna stack, stack properly ._.
01:54:397 - place the speed up warning around here please (the spinner blocks out the one you have already...) or actually......... just don't use 2x bpm here
02:11:647 (2,4) - same as 1:19:576..
02:13:147 (1) - ow my ears, too loud, too fast, and mixed of whistle and finish </3

Bokudan!- @.@ again, too much timing issues right now
Same as School Festival in terms of hitsounds
00:31:292 (7) - too fast, too loud, etc etc
00:57:007 (2) - ^
01:15:488 (2,3,4,5) - things like this is why I don't like the combos being all green...
01:26:899 - add a break~

Theres a lot more things I could point out, but first, please fix the timing
Lots of stars, not enough mods >.<!!!
The map has some potential though...

happy30 wrote:

Hey hey, very nice skin!

offset 892 (-10/-12)
I think you should start the kiai on 57.463 for every diff Fixed in my diff! :3

[Vicho's Training Camp]

00:38:606 (1,2,1,2) - I think this is a little confusing for beginners, actually it was confusing for me too =_= Yeah x3
01:21:891 (3) - not perfectly stacked under the endpoint of (2) Fixed :O

orioncomet wrote:

- yay, nice skin ~

~[Over all]
- offset 894 fixed in my diff

~[Vicho's Training Camp]~
- set a preview point on this difficulty and make sure this preview point same as other difficulty. fixed in my diff :3
- silder tick rate 1? yeah x3
seem fine for me yay *-*

Astom wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]

-00:33:465 a 00:34:958, podrian agregar algo mas entremedio esta como un poco abandonada esa parte xD, quisa un slider siguiendo la voz o algunos circles siguiendo la bateria porqué no? fixeado xD
-agregar un slider de 00:46:322 a 00:47:179 (sugerencia). no :/
-01:15:465 a 01:16:322, quisa agregar un slider con repeticion, el rock rock rock suena muy fuerte como para ignorarlo fixeado xD

Leorda wrote:

[Vicho's Traning Camp]
00:48:475 (6) - Move 2 grid up? ok x3
00:51:046 (4) - Make curve or parallel? ...
00:52:332 (5) - Add a finish hitsound no
01:04:332 (3) - ^ ok xP
01:07:761 (1) - ^ ok ok xP
01:12:475 (2) - Move 1 grid up? yeah x3
01:16:761 (4) - Move 1 grid down? no .3.
00:28:332 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider ok xP

Leorda wrote:

Bivuendo!!

[Skin]
1) Please flip the picture of fruit-ryuuta.png, it's wrong direction if move left and right at Catch the Beat
2) fruit-plate.png is missing
3) menu-button-background.png is unused, remove it

GREAT MAP!
STAR

DJPop wrote:

PreviewTime: 57465
Fixed in my Diff


~Vicho's Training Camp~
00:17:608 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:036 (2) - new combo
00:21:465 (1) - add hitfinish
00:24:465 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:893 (2) - new combo
00:35:179 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - wrong claps inputted, make them like previous pattern
00:35:179 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
01:02:394 (4) - add clap at last note
01:09:465 (3) - add clap at middle note
01:10:751 (4) - add clap
01:15:465 (2) - add clap at middle note
01:17:179 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:036 (3) - add hitfinish
01:24:894 (1) - silence this spinner
All Fixed

No star. -3-

DJpop wrote:

No star.

1. Offset = 904 (yours feels a bit early)

Something is broken in this difficulty. When I go into " Song Setup", the game crashes. Not sure what is wrong though, since the other difficulties in this map don't crash like that. I can't suggest anything here though. Sorry

Doomsday93 wrote:

Offset = 904 (yours feels a bit early)
Change in my diff

[VICHO'S TRAINING CAMP]

Something is broken in this difficulty. When I go into " Song Setup", the game crashes. Not sure what is wrong though, since the other difficulties in this map don't crash like that. I can't suggest anything here though. Sorry
Yes, but now it's good, now you can mod

The layout of the beats are a bit boring. Most of the beat on the map are all on right angles. You should put the beats in more interesting patterns.
No :/

scar1410 wrote:

[General]
No Background ?

1. resize the BG images, as well as the pause-overlay (1024x768 is max size, you got 1080x768 and 2000x1433 right now )
2. there is no comboburst-1 but 2,3 and 4
3. try to center the slider ball pics, so that it looks smoother
4. scorebar-ki and fruit-ryuuta look a bit weird and kinda don't fit well to the rest of the skin elements
5. sliderfollowcircle got some white places on bottom right
6. remove title and artist from tags and add guest-mappers to tags (you need to do this for each diff)
7. remove unneeded green lines, that are neither changing timing nor hitsounds nor kiai (also recheck the other diffs)
8. resnap green lines to the timing
   
   Furthermore you are overusing hitsounds pretty much, imo. There are many parts with finish spam or overlapping hitsounds. And actually I think normal sound sample works better for this song.

1. remove last green line
2. remove lead in
3. reduce hp drain a bit

1. remove lead in
2. you should focus on the choruses with Kiai sections, seems like some sections are random or not snapped properly to the timing
3. there are several spacing problems which you can find easily with AIMod, some of them really should be fixed
4. 00:12:689 (3) - end on the white tick
5. 00:14:189 (5) - put the kiai burst on this note
6. 00:24:903 (1) - end 1/8 earlier
7. 00:42:475 (1) - end on white tick
8. 01:23:189 (4) - remove the overlapping green line
9. 02:07:975 (1) - end on red tick

1. check spacing with AIMod here as well
2. 00:14:189 (2) - put kiai burst on this note
3. 00:24:903 (1) - end 1/8 later
   
   This diff is a bit confusing due to some weird jumps and the slow down/speed up sections.

Dangaard wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]

1. remove last green line
2. remove lead in
3. reduce hp drain a bit
   Fixed

Derekku Chan wrote:

SPOILER

Pubble-ready? Most definitely not, I'm afraid. This map's SB alone is unrankable and needs to be fixed.

[General]
*Your SB elements have WAAAAAAY too many transparent pixels. When you make these elements, you should cut them to be the smallest size possible. Otherwise, you have large, unneeded space that will usually hinder performance during gameplay.

For example, Chance.png:

All of the black space is transparent pixels that should be gotten rid of. Please fix ALL images that have such unneeded space and resubmit. If there are only a few pixels on the sides like for the sliderball and rank images, it's fine, but everything else needs a revamp. (I thought that the 50/100/300/etc. ones needed fixed too, but they have transparent pixels themselves in the template skin, so.. nevermind those; just fix the big ones you have for the SB please.)

Now, back to general stuff...
*Since scorebar-colour-0, 1, 2, and 3 are the same, only the first is needed. Delete 1/2/3 and resubmit please.
*Sliderball frames aren't perfect, but the faults aren't noticeable during gameplay, so I guess they're okay. :V
*Tags: Let's, Ayana, Taketatsu, can be removed since they're searched from the title/artist.
*Please match up tags on all diffs. They should be the same on each.
*Shadows on section-fail are cut off a bit, but not too noticeable. :U
*kiai is inconsistent between difficulties. I don't mind the guest's diff having different kiai, but at least keep your own two with the same spots. =S

After going through all of this, I seem to have run out of time for modding tonight and need to get some homework done. @-@ I'll check the diffs themselves possibly tomorrow for ya. My apologies. D:

FPRC16 wrote:

waaa, koto-chan isiste sliberd solo hasta el 7 y es hasta el 12 y si te dio flojera borra los otros desde el 8 hasta el 12
se mesclan con los otros y asasdas es algo raro y se nota o-ó.
XD eso nomas, esque ahora no estabaa conectada y me dio por posterate xD

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Vicho's Training Camp~
00:55:118 (8,9) - Revisa el Spacing.
Fixeado x3

animask wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
Add "Vicho-kun" to the "Tags" section in Song Setup :o
01:16:761 (3) - Replace the Finish hitsound with a clap hitsound? Fixed

Derekku Chan wrote:

*kiai is inconsistent between difficulties. I don't mind the guest's diff having different kiai, but at least keep your own two with the same spots. =S

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
I'd probably make the circle size as large as you can make it, considering this is the easy map and all. It's fine
00:31:118 (4) - Stack this on (5); the slider hides most of it the way it is now Ok x)
00:37:975 (4) - Same story here Yup
00:39:261 (2,1,2,3) - Move these out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4960 Fixed :3
Good map Arigatou Gozaimasu :3

dksslqj wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp
00:46:332 (x) - plz add note Added :3

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]
*The small distance spacing becomes clustered in some parts and hard to read. That's really the only problem I have with this diff.
00:30:032 (3,4,5) - is an example of a hard-to-read spot. All parts "hard-to-read" Fixed :3

xBubu wrote:

[Vicho's Training Camp]

SPOILER

IMO,1 / 2 beat in terms of too difficult for novice.
For example,00:31:118(4,5)on, and exactly the same as above
If you want to do this, I suggest, modify the following issues Fixed :3

• 00:42:475(x)- add note Ok x)
  00:46:332(x)-^ Ok xP
  01:00:689(x)-^ Ok

• .Opinions:
  The map is ok. Just a thing: don't you think that you used a really tiny spacing? Sometimes tiny spacing =/= easy to play.

• .Opinions:
  Great ^^

• .Opinions:
  2 Seconds of Audio Lead-in fit better.
  Quick note about the Storyboard at ~01:50:00: what's the point of telling the player to slow down while he's already playing the thing you slowed down? Consider moving this warning before, so that the player can understand when the speed change is going to occur. The "Speed Up!" part is ok, and the other warnings should be ok, since the player might expect them after seeing the first one.
  .Suggestions:
  01:09:568 (1) - end this one 1/4 before or after
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:41:175 (2) - this one should end on the white line (00:42:461)

tmokb93 wrote:

A little advertisement:
Source: K-ON! Keion OST
Tags: add Character Song too.

*Star* I love this song

• • 00:36:890 (3,4,5) - Spacing

xxheroxx wrote:

[Vicho's]

• • 00:36:890 (3,4,5) - Spacing ok

Ultimate wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp:
00:40:324 (3) - 1 timing point shorter what are you talking about??
01:18:895 (1) - 1 timing point shorter ^
01:18:895 (1,2) - i don't like this spacing Fixed

minyeob wrote:

[Vicho]
01:18:889 (1) - This should be ended on 1:19:961 Fixed

Shulin wrote:

Vicho's Training Camp:

00:18:032 (7) - New combo. Ok
00:28:318 (4) - ^ Ok

1. hit100g.png isn't part of a skin template!! And hit100k.png should be the image of hit100g.png. Erase hit100k.png and rename hit100g.png as hit100k.png.
2. I don't see differences between hit300.png and hit300k.png, so I can't know whenever I completed a combo, or I bashed with both drums a big circle on Taiko. Modify hit300k.png, use your imagination ^^
3. On the scorebar-colour images, try to use a lighter color at the final of it (i.e., don't use black, but a dark green. I can't see the ki bar well on Taiko!!
4. Two backgrounds for your diffs and the Vicho's custom one?! It's a waste of space. Make only ONE background and, then, signs with your names and use them as a diff. specific storyboards.
5. On the fruits images (not the fruits overlays), due you aren't using these, replace them with blank images, 1x1 pixels, I mean, without nothing. Don't erase or osu! will use the default images!! You'll save 15 KB!! (OK. Not too much neccesary, so you can skip this tip).
6. hit0.png isn't descriptive. Write something like "Fail" or an "X" mark along with the current image.
7. Please, use the face for all the slider ball frames!!

1. Delete keion from tags of School Festival! diff.

1. 00:57:461 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:05:497 (2) - Remove clap, add finish as others
3. 01:12:032 (T) - KIAI here used too often, generally KIAI shouldn't use twice in 1 minute
4. 01:54:032 (x) - KIAI ends here
5. 02:05:497 (5) - Remove clap, add finish as others

1. 00:57:461(x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:05:390 (5) - Unusual spacing. If you want to put them like this, I suggest you new combo (4)
3. 01:14:068 (2,3) - I feel spcing a little far
4. 01:15:461 (T) - KIAI too often
5. 01:15:782 (2,3) - These two you must fix, it's too far
6. 02:30:032 (T) - Unused timing section