Rtyzen wrote:

Form #modreqs

Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions
Purple : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. remove Blue line please. so many. http://puu.sh/ai4hW/5c003387ef.jpg

What? Blue line is good lol. For me it's easier to navigate with bookmarks. And if you dont use the blue lines it wont bother you at all.

1. 00:31:761 (4) - Please overlapping rematch with (1)
2. 00:43:832 (1,2) - just opinon. but more fun play~
   
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eINess wrote:

Rtyzen wrote:

Form #modreqs


Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions
Purple : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. remove Blue line please. so many. http://puu.sh/ai4hW/5c003387ef.jpg

What? Blue line is good lol. For me it's easier to navigate with bookmarks. And if you dont use the blue lines it wont bother you at all.

Although it is not necessary to delete the mod if you can stand a little less so other people comfortable. I recommend that you delete.
Nor does it need to echo. I don't see how the blue lines make people uncomfortable? Anyways I don't think I will delete it now because I still need to use them

At one time modder really Comfortable to mod.



ok. cheak on more time. cheak in missing Problem.

[Insane]

1. 00:31:761 (4) - Please overlapping rematch with (1) Fixed
2. 00:43:832 (1,2) - just opinon. but more fun play~ I changed 1 but kept 2
   
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no give kds , please. GL Thanks again

[ Shimakaze ] wrote:

Hello~

[Insane]

01:08:506 (2) - finish x No thanks
01:09:039 (5) - finish x OK
01:09:394 (6) - finish o OK
01:09:216 - finish o OK
01:09:749 - finish x No thanks
Although there is also a problem in other places,Style changes if defeat any more.
Sorry...

Miramono wrote:

Hi, from modding queue...

Mod

[Normal]
No comment

[Hard]
00:06:455 (4) - move x:208 y:200 OK
00:34:956 (4) - ctrl + G No thanks

That's all actually

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue! I hope I can be of some assistance to you Thanks for coming!

[Insane]

00:22:530 (3,4,5) - I think you can possition these notes better to make a better looking triangle, maybe something like this Fixed
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1897776

00:24:305 (3,4,5,6) - The shape this makes looks a bit off, consider moving 00:24:837 (6) - to 48, 184 I think it looks a little better this way Fixed

00:36:376 (7,1,2,3) - The flow is very inconsistent here OK changed to something else

00:56:258 (2,1) - I think you should slow down the SV with these notes, just like you did with 00:59:098 (1,2) - I think it fits much better with the song I'm sorry but I dont quite understand, they're both the same speed

Really cool map, and GREAT song! (Black Bullet was so good) Thanks (I agree)

Hopefully this helped you a little bit It did

Goodluck!

• 
  lots of imperfect blankets, i believe u should fix it

1. 00:11:655(1) imo the sliders should ended at 00:12:855 , the voice stopped there
2. 00:41:701 add a note here? it makes a beat sound here
3. 01:03:713 add a here also
   

SeNoZinD wrote:

From the Rakutenshi Modding Queue~ (SeNoZinD)

General
Black Bullet everywhere when will it stop ;-;


Easy
00:08:855 (4,2) - Maybe blanket these two? OK
00:20:400 (3,4) - Improve this blanket Not meant to blanket
00:42:766 (2,3) - ^^ this one too OK
01:03:713 - Consider adding a circle here for the start of the vocals Yea I think it sounds better with the circle. I initially removed it cuz it might be too close to the end of the spinner for a normal
Yeah.... I'm not that good at modding easy difficulties It's OK it wasn't a bad mod


Hard
01:20:577 (4,5) - This blanket could be slightly improved OK (This blanket is a pain in the ass)
Not much to say here, well done.


Insane
Nothing to say here, its well made

I hope this helped you!! Good luck with ranking

trammiexo wrote:

Thanks for checking out my queue! Great beatmap, I couldn't really find anything wrong but ...

Normal-
00:12:870 maybe you can end this slider with a softer sound OK

Again, great map. Has very nice rhythm of the objects

Best of luck on your map! (:

DeathOfSerious wrote:

Amazing map! I'd love to see it get ranked some day. I can't really see anything that would be a cause for concern so congrats!

1. 01:08:861 - map halfbeat slider, replace 01:09:039 (4)
2. 01:10:991 (3) - I think a slider up to the second blue tick just before 01:11:346 (1) fits better

1. 00:46:849 - map this note?
2. 00:47:204 - ^

Nekomata wrote:

NM from queue.

Hard

1. 01:08:861 - map halfbeat slider, replace 01:09:039 (4) OK
2. 01:10:991 (3) - I think a slider up to the second blue tick just before 01:11:346 (1) fits better I think that would be too long

Insane

1. 00:46:849 - map this note?
2. 00:47:204 - ^ No thanks

1. Your combo colour seem a bit too colorful try make it more light-tone
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,224,130
   Combo2 : 176,255,255
   Combo3 : 128,128,255
   Combo4 : 255,94,94

2. At tags include Everflower translate of tokohana
3. At tags Delete ed because you already tagged ending ,no need to tag ed again

1. 00:01:255 (3,4) - x=353 y=97 so 00:00:655 (1,2,3) - will line up perfectly
2. 00:06:855 (5,6,7,1) - Bad spacing here I think try to make it a bit more reasonable spacing try DS=1.0x
3. 00:07:655 (1) - No need to NC since it doesn't change anything in term of mapping
4. 00:13:455 (1,1,1) - 3 continous spinner is a bit meh you can try replace one of theses spinners with long slider
5. 00:20:755 (1,2,3) - DS is a bit inconsistent here
6. 00:22:175 (1,2) - DS should be 1.7x I might say that you intend to do jump here but it still not a very good spacing for jump. A jump need a bit high difference in DS your is only 0.3x which is low and may consider to be called random spacing and you must know is music there suit for a jump for this one it just doesn't suit for a jump since it only a basic starter rhythm
7. 00:23:595 (1,2,3) - Should line up by move (3) to x=280 y=296
8. 00:25:548 - Weird rhythm here some notes are overmapped try this http://puu.sh/b3bmV/4e87b32cd4.jpg
9. 00:28:654 (5) - Delete this no need because it create weird flow and weird rhythm
10. 00:35:311 (2) - Should place at lower-right since it destroy good viewing (overlap with previous notes) in editor
11. 00:44:187 (3) - x=294 y=148 io line up 00:43:832 (2,3) - perfectly
12. 00:49:157 (1,2) - This rhythm weird since you intend to put slider tail at blue line you should decrease volume of 00:49:157 (1) - 's tail so for better sounding
13. 01:21:110 (4,5) - inconsistent flow you should copy-paste 01:20:755 (2,3) - and place it at x=183 y=80

1. 00:13:455 (1,1,1) - Same as insane
2. 00:04:855 (1,2) - I saw your laziness here xD you should copy-paste 00:04:855 (1) - this instead of creating a new one for perfect symmetry
3. 00:09:255 (2,4) - Same as above should copy-paste (2) for perfect symmetry
4. 00:37:796 (3,4,1) - Should line up for better flow
5. 00:44:187 (6) - Should Ctrl+G so the pattern will same as 00:43:122 (3,4) -
6. 00:45:962 (2,3,4) - Should line up like this http://puu.sh/b3cNe/336550c093.jpg
7. 01:04:778 (2) - Should NC to emphasis the start of best part of the music
8. 01:09:039 - I don't hear finish sound here maybe it because my skin is acting weird xD
9. 01:09:216 (4) - x=62 y=110 so this will stack perfectly with 01:08:861 (3) - 's tail
10. 01:10:991 (3) - x=148 y=74 so 01:10:459 (2,3) - line up better
11. 01:15:074 (7,9) - Should line up so the flow will consistent with 01:14:542 (6,8) -
12. 01:16:139 (2) - Copy this and paste it here 01:17:204 - for perfect symmetry

1. 00:08:255 (3,4) - Nazi DS=1.0x
2. 00:35:666 (4) - x=139 y=162 so this will stack with 00:34:601 (2) - perfectly
3. 00:46:672 (3,4) - Better blanket http://puu.sh/b3dLu/c22b1d41c8.jpg
4. 01:05:844 (1) - Delete NC , no need to NC for a new vocal
5. 01:07:619 (1) - Delete NC and NC then NC 01:08:329 (6) -
6. 01:08:329 (2,1) - Should stack for better flow
7. 01:20:400 (3,2) - Should stack perfectly

Luckino wrote:

Normal

00:08:855 (4) - maybe NC here instead of 00:09:655 (1) I think tthis is fine cuz it follows the rhythm
00:10:455 (2) - stack slider end properly to 00:08:255 (3)? I can't stack it without breaking the DS
00:20:400 (3,4) - are these supposed to be blankets? Not before but now I changed it
00:22:175 (2,3,4) - here the distances look really akward Fixed
00:31:761 (2,3) - another distance change, this one can fairly easy be avoided by arrangig stuff a bit different Fixed
00:33:536 (5,1,2) - inconsistent distances again Fixed. I think
00:38:151 (3,4) - same as 00:31:761 (2,3) kind of, you can avoid this maybe Fixed
00:40:637 (3,4) - maybe you can improve this to actually be a blanket I think it'll look weird
00:41:701 (4) - you could ad a clap or something Yeah that works
01:10:104 (1) - stack to 01:08:329 (2)? No the DS wont work
01:12:589 (5,1) - distances Fixed
01:15:784 (5,1) - improve this blanket OK
01:20:400 (3,2) - These are actually not stacked properly! Fixed They're kind of far away in time
01:23:240 (3) - also this one can be stacked to the end of 01:21:110 (4)
I don't quite agree with the combos, especially because you do emphasize notes different, like e.g. 00:33:536 (5) - this one is emphasized by the hitsound, but not by it's combo, since the most emphasized note in a combo should be (1), but since I'm not sure if I should go through this indepth, I just wanted to mention this, so if you are not sure as well, we can have a deeper look again ofc I dont know, because IMO a new combo is supposed to indicate a new stanza, not to emphasise a strong note :S

Hard

00:00:855 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - most of the patterns are: circle slider, circle slider.. etc. so I'd suggest having the combos in the same way, also same with normal: maybe put the NCs on the note, which have whistles to even more emphasize them The NCs would look really messy. And again I don't believe that the NC should be used to emphasize a hitsound (especially a whistle which is soft)
00:10:655 (1,2,3) - this placing looks weird to me, also try to avoid the overlap between 00:11:255 (3) and 00:11:655 (1) Changed the overlap, that's all
00:23:595 (2) - NC should start here OK
00:26:435 (2) - ^ OK
00:41:701 (4) - clap on the tail sounds better to me OK I think i missed the tail
00:45:252 (1) - that one scratches the health bar, consider moving it a bit Moved
01:08:861 (3,4) - I actually didn't have any problems hitting this, but still felt like not hitting it precise, because I was odd to me, maybe better unstack these to let the player better see how to hit them right OK I agree
01:11:879 (2,3) - improve the blanket, if it was meant to be one OK
01:14:187 (5) - this one is close to the health bar as well, allthough I figured, it doesn't quite touch it, just saying OK I moved it
01:21:820 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe raise the volume on the triplets a bit, there's fairly nothing I can here like this lol I lowered it because others were complaining it was too loud. It's at 50% now

Insane

00:03:455 (3) - it's in the health bar, doesn't look good owo Moved
00:06:855 (5,6,7,1) - anti jump seems fine there, but they are a bit too close, rather stack the triplet on the position where 00:08:855 (1) is That would make it more confusing. I just moved the antijump closer together
00:21:997 (6,5) - stack them? OK
01:23:595 (2,1) - stack them? .....no thanks
as with the other diffs I don't quite agree with the combos, but well

I guess, that's all I could find, good luck Thank you!~

1. At tags include Everflower translate of tokohana OK
2. At tags Delete ed because you already tagged ending ,no need to tag ed again OK I'll finally remove it, but I don't understand why ending and ED is the same, what would happen if someone searched ED? Because in ending it has ED letters, I think or people prefer to call it ending

1. 00:35:311 (2) - Should place at lower-right since it destroy good viewing (overlap with previous notes) in editor I don't really understand what this means...? It overlap (3) which make bad view I suggest you place it like this http://puu.sh/b4dzL/000301acfa.jpg

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:35:311 (2) - Should place at lower-right since it destroy good viewing (overlap with previous notes) in editor I don't really understand what this means...? It overlap (3) which make bad view I suggest you place it like this http://puu.sh/b4dzL/000301acfa.jpg

1. 00:19:335- this timing point is correct? I prefer -15~-20

1. 00:00:855 (1,2) - I prefer to conbine into 1 slider
2. 00:42:056 (1,3) - avoid overlapping
3. 01:06:909 (4,1) - ^
4. 01:23:240 (3,1) - ^

1. 00:45:784- add a note
2. 01:18:092 (6) - I prefer normal slider
   

1. 00:00:655 (1) - delete

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in our Modding Queue
Please take note that I mod your map for mostly unrankable or "stupid" stuff. I try to avoid style related issues, as I cant really judge these. Why is that? That's a hilarious analogy

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

[General]
■ Is there a reason why it's "<TV Size>" as opposed to "(TV Size)"? There are some other maps with the (), so I'd assume that this is the way to go (I didnt find any other information that states that it uses <>, so feel free to ignore if you have a source)Somebody sent me a link to a (supposed) official album which used the <> instead of (). Since then I haven't found another one that's different so I'm just going to stick with that. If aanyone wants to tell me it's something different and show me proof I'll gladly change it.

[Normal]
General here: Some blankets could be improved, copy pasta below

■ 00:01:655 (3) - How about placing this on the same x coord as 00:00:855 (1) - ? (or the other way around) Actually, I'd also say that you change 00:00:855 (1,2) - to something like you did here 00:07:055 (1) - . The first two circes are rather awkward to play as you dont map on the beat, but on the vocals. Then again, youre not mapping the vocal that happens on 00:01:055 (2) - , but the next one after it
The good thing about 00:07:055 (1) - is, that it's mapping the beat. I changed 00:00:855 (1,2) to one slider. That should help
■ 00:21:820 (1) - General advice right ahead: In Easy and Normal difficulties, always keep the same distace between objects (preferably 1.0 DS). The best idea to fix this here is to move 00:21:110 (4) - . Rotate 00:20:400 (3) - if you want to keep the blanket. This also counts for
00:23:240 (3) -
00:48:092 (1) -
00:49:157 (3) -
01:20:400 (3) -
01:24:660 (1) -

■ 00:33:891 (1) - Have this one kinda more straight towards the next note ( 00:34:601 (2) - ) like this?

example

■ 00:38:861 (4,5) - Flow feels kinda weird. More details about what I mean at the end of this diff.
■ 00:43:477 (3,4) - ^ It'd be better if 3 were somewhere around 224/336 so that it flows out of the slider more as opposed to the hard movement. would need some remapping of the rest of the combo though
■ 01:01:583 (2,3) - move both to 356/308 so that the first circle actually gets blanketed by (1) as intended. The game automatically moves stacked objects
■ 01:04:068 (2) - Move to 140/192 and adjust the next (1) after that?
■ 01:09:039 (3) - Move to 200/340 for a better triangle with (1 2)
■ If you did ^, then move 01:10:104 (1) - to 216/228 (overlap) and adjust 01:10:814 (2) -
■ 01:20:400 (3) - rotate by 24°, place on 224/52 and adjust sliders after that? (rotate the other one as well)

Now, I guess I'll point out that there's flow missing in this difficulty. Some combos feel forced to flow into a direction, (example) where you couldve mapped a more smooth flow (example). I think thats a beginner's thing, so I'll excuse that one.
Try to map your map so that it feels like the cursor is naturally following the objects, smooth curves and all of that stuff. The example makes you move up, stop and go left, then up and left again. (Here's a quickmap example of how it couldve been done (note that most of the flow problems mean that you'd have to remap parts of it)) Iam bad at pointing flow out, or explaining it, but I hope I made clear what I mean OK, note taken

[Hard]
■ 00:10:055 (4) - Ctrl+g 00:10:655 (1) - move to 152/168 and turn 00:10:855 (2,3) - into slight curves? Would increase the flow OK, but I changed the position of 00:10:855 (2,3)
■ Iam not too sure about circles like 00:20:400 (3) - 00:21:820 (3) - 00:26:080 (3) - etc. All of these force you to slow down and wait 1/2 for the circle under the slider. Especially since the next circle is an overlap as well. It'd be better if you actually had these spaced out normally (or atleast have them being a back and forth or triangle) ( 00:26:790 (2,3) - is much better)
■ 00:32:826 (6) - Nothing wrong with that, but this another nice example why the overlaps before that wouldnt work too well. All of the overlaps before were 1/2 spaced, this here now is 1/1 spaced. Assuming the player plays this for the first time, it's very likely that he thinks that this is a 1/2 as well, hits too early and loses his combo. (Dont change this if you changed above) I understand
■ 00:38:329 (4) - 368/272 00:38:506 (1) - 384/356?
■ 00:39:216 (1) - I'd say that this is too difficult for a hard. There is no real reason to put a jump like this here (thats 3,34 DS as opposed to a semiconstant 1,20 DS). Resnap it to less DS (preferably 1.20. The rest after it can be snapped higher)

This diff looks better to me than the normal, but still not perfect. There's some structure, there's some flow, there's potential.
One thing I can recommend for your next maps is that you shouldnt use as many overlaps/stacks. Stacks usually work well if the song gives opportunity to do so (same pitch on a same beat, sudden stop, buildup and similar, 01:15:784 (1,2) - is pretty good for example) Yeah I've learnt that since I first mapped this. I don't overuse stacks anymore

[Insane]
■ 00:02:455 (1) - You couldve mapped this as an overlap as well. The song is very similar to 00:01:255 (3,4) - , where youve mapped one Nah I don't want all similar parts in this section to be an overlap
■ 00:07:055 (7,1) - ^ ^
■ 00:31:761 (4) - I think that "same slider as x hits before"-Sliders are annoying. The old slider didnt even fade out yet and the new one, that has exactly the same path, appears. This can lead to confusion and a unneccessary combobreak. (Quickmap example of what couldve been better for this) Been meaning to change this but never got any opinion on it until now

■ Well, I guess I have to point that out here. I have a really hard time modding these kind of Insanes, as I dont see too much of a structure in it and cant really judge how things would be better. If I were to remap a short part to give examples, it wouldnt fit to the next part I have to remap the next part as well etc etc. I have to pass on this one, sorry It's OK I understand what you mean. Sometimes I get the same feeling when looking at this map and trying to remap some parts

Blankets:
For the blankets, you can use the approach circle of an object to see how good the blanket is and how it can be improved. Here are some examples on blanketing

Bad

Okay

Good luck with your set! Thank you!~

FlobuFlobs wrote:

From #Modreqs

Generell

1. Remove combo colour
   Combo3 : 18,124,255
   Combo8 : 255,94,94
   Combo2 : 0,255,255
   
   They dont fit the bg or the map itself in my opinion They fit in the video IMO

Hard

1. 00:05:255 - 00:06:055 - would prefer a something like this here: follow the rhythm a bit better I think it is OK currently
   
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2. 00:35:311 (5) - the gap is confusing I changed the DS so it would fit better
3. 00:48:447 - short the slider here and add circle, follows the lyrics a bit better
4. 00:03:655 (2) - this curve is a bit too much, curve it like 00:02:855 (3) -

insane

1. 00:11:655 (1) - flip this one to get a bit spacing between to slider tail and the next slider
   
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2. 00:23:062 (5) - this is too much curved, let this one point the next circle?
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   , would emphasize the next big white tick nice
3. 00:33:003 (6) - this one is again to much curved, try like this
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4. 00:35:666 (3) - add here slider instead like the previous one, it sound wrong with these circles there Sounds wrong?
5. 00:36:287 - dont ignore this loud note I don't hear it.....?
6. 00:46:139 (4) - flip this one, it breaks the flow
7. 00:59:098 (1) - this curve on the begining of the slider seems weird, fix it
8. 01:11:879 (2) - add finish
9. 01:15:429 (1) - remove finish This one is supposed to be the last note in the stream but is instead a slider so the finish is on the head
10. 01:26:080 (10) - would add a finish here since it slows extremly down, it fits better without finish at this calm n slow part
    
11. There are way too many finish on the kiai, im not that good at hitsounding but ive tried a bit too help, you should ask someone who is expirience with it

[Timing]
change bpm 150 part offset to 655
[Insane]
00:00:655 - 00:11:655 I think you can use sv 0.5 or a slower sv not 1.0. cause the music is not very strong at this part. also don't put jumps like 00:03:255 (2,3,4) and 00:04:855 (3,4,5) , its ok for 00:06:255 (2,3,4,5) cause the music is strong
00:13:455 (1,1,1) - 3 spinner is not relly good, u can try 2 sliders + 1 spinner, it fells better
00:31:051 (1,4) - didn't stak well
00:22:707 (4) - y sv 1.25? if u change speed u need put nc on it
00:28:388 (4) - ^
01:04:068 (2,3) - i think slider is not fitting the music, 3 1/1 notes on ds0.1 maybe more fit the music
01:14:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i cant hear drums here, but there is drum stream here on 01:15:429 (1,2) , if u want fit the volcal, make jumps

[Hard]
00:00:855 - 00:18:255 same as insane
01:11:879 (2,3) - fix blanket
[Normal]
01:19:690 (2,3) - ds unranknable
[General]
Just the same when I start mapping, like many other place can improve well, but it maybe against your style so i didnt type on. I think the quality of the map is upon u.
If i say anything makes u unhappy, say it back

GanMineTMPL wrote:

Hi.
150- 666 xD
169- 19329

xChippy wrote:

From modreq
BPM is correct
Offset 1 +11 (662)
Offset 2 fine as-is (19329)

Offtopic:
00:19:351 - This beat is unsnapped in all diffs make sure to snap it accordingly!

Good luck with the map!

304,44,27849,6,0,P|264:80|256:136,1,112,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,28559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,243,28914,2,0,P|359:296|310:318,1,112,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,318,29624,2,0,P|152:296|144:243,1,112,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,30334,2,0,L|256:84,1,112,12|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

Flower wrote:

Okay. Let's do it.

xChippy wrote:

Hi Rtyzen, me again!
Just dropping by to say that the preview time is unsnapped, make sure to fix it with either the ranking BAT, or Flower. Just to prevent possible trouble in the future.

ofcourse no kds for this post

eINess wrote:

Osu need more yanaginagi !!

Xellie wrote:

So this is from my modding queue and I'm suuuuuupper late, but I'll try modding anyway owo


[Normal]
00:49:151 (3,4) - This blanket could be a little better
01:00:157 (1,2) - ^
01:25:719 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:50:571 (6,1) - You could make this blanket it a little bit nicer

[Insane]
Couldn't really find anything

If you don't wanna give kds it's fine, I know I'm really late, but in the future if you have a map that needs mods then fourm pm and I'l give you first priority as a way of saying sorry for being so late ><

TestApple wrote:

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lewddddd

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey, "random" mod

Normal

1. 00:03:595 (3) - I believe that you should keep this as a normal 1/1 slider like you used previously. The sound in this moment is the same as with all previous sliders, so it doesn't justify imo.
2. 00:09:995 (2) - ^ Same for this one, just use something like http://puu.sh/bCU6L/56b0e13c76.jpg.
3. 00:20:287 - This tick definitely NEEDS to be clickable. It's very strong, and filling it with a slidertail is a waste imo. You should invert the rhythm between 00:19:577 (2,3).
4. 00:21:707 (2,3) - I believe that (2) is way too curved, and breaks flow with (3). Also, the overlap between 00:19:932 (3,2) - looks a bit unappealing, you might want to consider changing this. I did the ctrl h ctrl j ctrl g
5. 00:24:547 (1) - This is a difficult placing and the DS isn't consistent. You should fix this.
6. 00:24:902 (2,3) - Avoid stacking sliders like this as well, it's confusing. Furthermore, the downbeat needs to be clickable as I mentioned above. I'll keep myself from referring to these any further. I left the rhythm the same for this one
7. 01:22:772 (3,4) - Use 1/2 repeated sliders as you used previously, there's no change in the song.I think this one is ok

Overall this diff needs some visual polishing, and you should definitely recheck your DS in ALL objects. There's acceptable values then there's values that you're better off changing, like in 01:01:115 (2,3) (which is 1.2x instead of the consistent 1.0x) and 00:29:162 (4) (which is nearly 1.1x)

Hard

1. 00:03:795 (3,3) - You should avoid this overlap. It's barely visible, and it can be confusing. I would personally suggest remapping 00:03:795 (3,1,2,3).
2. 00:06:795 (1) - Avoid the use of this passive slider. 00:06:995 has a strong sound and should be clickable. I think 00:07:195 - is stronger and the slider is fine
3. 00:10:395 (2,3) - I strongly advise you to use the previous rhythm here: A 1/1 slider and a circle. Also, 00:09:395 (3,4,1,2,3) looks also a bit messy, so you might want to tweak it.
4. 00:21:707 (1,2,3,4) - keep your rhythm constant! Use the rhythm you used before. I added this one in for variety as all the other ones are the same
5. 00:34:133 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/bCVPu/1db7fa6262.jpg This rhythm works best here in my opinion, use it~
6. 00:37:328 (3) - I personally find this stack a bit random, but not an issue, you can keep it if you want to.
7. 00:56:855 (3,4) - As a preference, I'd use a circle alone where (3) is and deleted (4). It feels better than 00:57:565 (4) or the slidertail at 00:57:210.
8. 01:04:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - While this rhythm isn't necessarily wrong, you're covering a lot of strong beats with your passive sliders (in case you don't know yet, a passive slider is when you map a slider on a red tick and finish it on the white one), and so I'd advise you to review this section. It sounds fine to me
9. 01:16:736 (4,5,6) - This section feels a bit empty, because 01:17:091 is filled with a slidertail and the red ticks could actually be filled. I'd map it like this: http://puu.sh/bCWrT/c0bcb879df.jpg.
10. 01:21:352 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - These triples are very sudden, and it's the only time in the map where you use them. You should probably just go with a 1/2 rhythm all the way imo.It feels ok with the rhythm IMO...

My opinion on this diff stays the same as Normal: Take some time and focus on the aesthetics of the map; while it does have good rhythm at parts, it looks a bit of a mess in others as well.

Insane

1. 00:04:195 - For the sake of consistency, leave this tick unmapped in order to keep rhythm consistent. I see your point, but I feel it would be abit too weird without it IMO
2. 00:07:995 (5,1) - Delete (1) and make 5 a 1/1 slider, works best.
3. 00:25:080 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't fit here. But if you try http://puu.sh/bCWZS/2456fdf36e.jpg, then it works.
4. I forgot to add: In order to keep all diffs consistent, delete 00:53:038 (1) - from Hard and Insane, since you can't add it on Normal due to recovery rate. As many people have pointed out, this part feels very empty without it, and it's not in normal because breaks are generally more acceptable in easier diffs

This diff doesn't have as many issues regarding rhythm as the previous ones, but it still needs to have a look around, some things don't look too good, such as overlaps like 00:46:204 (1,3) or 00:49:932 (6,2,1,2).

While the state of the maps isn't actually "horrible", I don't believe this should have been bubbled yet indeed. Spend some time fixing what I pointed out, I tried hard to point only things that really didn't fit or that definitely needed a fix. If you need help with this poke me, I'll try to help you if I have the time for it.

Good luck with your set~ Thanks!~

Desperate-kun wrote:

• 
  Normal

1. 00:00:395 (1) - It seems a bit weird to start the map here although the first loud beat is at 00:00:195 - The rhythm sounds better if you change it like this: http://puu.sh/bDV5a/9a83d66c6c.jpg Maybe it's wrong currently, but the rhythm you gave sounds off IMO
2. 00:01:995 (1,2) - Swap NCs, for consistency with 00:08:395 (4,1) - Also, it fits better to the vocals.
3. 00:07:195 (2,3,4,1,2) - Why is the density so high compared to 00:00:795 (2,3,1,2,3) ? Since it is the same music and directly following after each other, I'd definitely change it to be the same rhythm. Less dense rhythm also fits a calm section like this better: http://puu.sh/bDVaE/97b0e959b0.jpg
4. 00:11:195 (1) - It sounds better to end the slider at 00:12:595 since the vocal is ending there.
5. 00:21:707 (2) - Try rotating this slider by -35° for a better transition with the previous object.
6. 00:25:612 (3) - It feels weird to end this slider on the big white line, since the slidertail doesn't emphasize this important beat enough. Try this rhythm for this combo: http://puu.sh/bDVqu/5319cf0b0c.jpg
7. 00:28:097 (2,3,4,5) - The flow is too sharp here, it doesn't play well in a Normal. Simple placement is always important for the easiest difficulty, so that newbie players are able to understand your patterns. Try this for example: http://puu.sh/bDVxB/9add51d1b6.jpg (See below for the Code!) Don't forget to fix the spacing with 00:29:872 (5,1) afterwards!
   
   Code

   367,245,28452,2,0,P|351:298|310:336,1,112,4|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
   200,336,29162,2,0,P|160:298|144:245,1,112,4|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,240,29872,2,0,L|256:128,1,112,8|12,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 00:33:423 (1) - Please, fix the spacing with the previous object. When you do that, make it face to the left, like this: http://puu.sh/bDVNh/8f7e2ec9b4.jpg It will avoid overlapping with the HP-bar.
9. 00:59:695 (1) - Remove the NC, it is inconsistent with 00:56:855 (3) - Add one at 01:01:470 (1) instead
10. 01:03:245 (1,2) - Delete these objects. They appear too soon after a spinner, which is not allowed in your easiest diff.
11. 01:04:310 (1,2) - Then you can move these upwards to make the transition between (2) and (3) more smooth. Something like this: http://puu.sh/bDVVj/0c361a3e14.jpg
12. 01:07:151 (5,1) - Swap NCs for consistency in your comboing pattern.
13. 01:18:511 (1) - Move this object so that the spacing to the following object is correct.
14. 01:26:677 (1) - The end of the song is very soft, so it would be more appropriate to have a (more) smooth slidershape here. What about something like this: http://puu.sh/bDW3V/fca9ded7ae.jpg

• 
  Hard

1. 00:00:195 - Add a circle for a more appropriate beginning of the map. You can just stack it on the slider. Also, don't forget to change the NCs then.
2. 00:04:995 - It seems weird to map this beat although there isn't really anything in the music here. Just replace 00:04:795 (2) - with a circle. Changed to a 1/1 slider
3. 00:07:995 (4,1) - Swap NCs for consistency with 00:01:395 (3,1) - Do the same for 00:09:595 (4,1) please
4. 00:11:195 (1) - Same as Normal.
5. 00:38:038 (1) - Remove NC.
6. 00:41:233 (4,5) - Don't stack (5) under (4), it is difficult to read. Space it somehow like this: http://puu.sh/bDWF1/0c0bdadef3.jpg
7. 00:52:949 (5) - Put NC here since you did the same in Normal.
8. 00:53:038 (1) - It sounds better to end the spinner at 00:54:369 because of the piano sound and the vocal is also starting to decrease volume there.
9. 00:56:855 (3) - Change it to a slider that continues until 00:57:920 for consistency with 00:59:695 - It follows the vocals better too
10. 00:59:695 (1) - Remove NC, same reason as Normal.
11. 01:01:470 (3) - Add NC please, for consistency.
12. 01:05:375 (3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit - You are trying to follow a mixture of vocals and drums but it's not so good because the slider ends on the big white line and it gets the emphasis wrong. Just try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/bDWRP/bd8435b773.jpg
13. 01:06:973 (5) - Same as above. Change it to 1/1: http://puu.sh/bDXFD/7317a6cdbb.jpg
14. 01:13:186 (3,4) - Why did you use such a low spacing here?
15. 01:14:074 (6) - Add NC.
16. 01:18:334 (2) - Again, decide if you want to follow vocals or drums. Ending a slider on the big white line is rarely a good idea. Just use an 1/1-slider like this: http://puu.sh/bDXhT/9e692b8be5.jpg
17. 01:24:192 (5,1) - The gap between those objects sounds pretty empty, because there are loud drum beats in the music. I'd recommend you to add circles at 01:24:902 and 01:25:080 to fix the problem.

• 
  Insane

1. Again, there are a lot of NC issues. Please try to copy the NCing from the Hard difficulty when it has been fixed, to avoid inconsistencies.
2. 00:00:395 (2,3) - Why is this spacing much bigger than 00:01:195 (4,5) ? I'd recommend you to make it consistent
3. 00:04:195 - Same as Hard. Also applies for 00:04:995 and 00:05:795 - Please think of a different rhythm, by using 1/1-gaps and / or 1/1-sliders instead of mapping to those empty beats. idk I fixed this awhile back and to me it flows and sounds nice/ok so I think I'm gonna keep it for awhile
4. 00:10:995 (3,1) - Move it more upwards, so that the spacing isn't so low? http://puu.sh/bE9yR/dccd915d35.jpg And of course the slider should be extended by 1/2 like I already mentioned in Hard and Normal ;w;
5. 00:29:162 (3,4) - The spacing between these seems a bit low compared to the spacing of the previous patterns. A simple solution would be to move the complete stream to the left so that the spacing is 1.4x
6. 00:53:038 (1) - Same as Hard.
7. 01:14:784 (5,1) - Same as at 00:29:16 - The spacing seems too low. Try to move the stream more downwards, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/bEa0R/ce54e7375e.jpg I shited the 5 up instead since it looked abit weird to me anyways

I know that the mapset already got a lot of mods, but it needs some more. The problem is that the maps, especially the Hard diff, are pretty untidy and have a lot of inconsistencies. The rhythm, jump placement, NCing and Hitsounding is quite inconsistent.
First of all, you should get one or two hitsound mods, to fix the hitsounding, since I didn't cover it in my mod (since the mapset is not ready yet, I can't cover everything ofc).
Then, check your NCing again and see if it is consistent. Tried to improve it abit
Check your rhythm and placement closely: When there is the same music again, try to use a similar (doesn't have to be exactly the same) rhythm and simlar jumps etc, otherwise it doesn't fit together well.
If you have any questions or need help, feel free to ask me ingame. Good luck :3 I'm sure you can make this a really great mapset! Thank you for all your help!

Cosmolade wrote:

[General]

1. 00:00:395 to 00:12:595 -The volume is too loud, down to 5% or 10% in the intro. I think it's ok, 5 to 10 definitely too low for an entire part
2. The map need a Easy diff. My normal is below 2 stars so it's all good

[Normal]

1. 00:09:995 (2) - Maybe this? This part sounds the same as all those before it I dont see a need for it to be different
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:195 (1) -Try make other form to the slider, and the slider doesn't get out of the edit box. -> http://puu.sh/bRk3g/12172815a0.png
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:287 (3,4) -Fix the Blanket
4. 00:29:162 (4) -Remove the finish in the head of the slider, and make a reverse No thanks
5. 00:30:227 -Circle with Finish and Clap ^
6. 00:33:423 (1) -Whistle in the head of reverse Whistle? that sounds abit weird
7. 00:46:204 (3) and 00:47:624 (1) - Avoid get out of the edit box please
8. 01:06:440 (4) and 01:07:151 (1) - Try to make a little less sharp the sliders
9. 01:06:440 to 01:12:298 - Suggested Pattern: Probably should just post a screenshot and if I want to change it I'll change it myself
   
   SPOILER

   184,168,66440,2,0,B|152:120|152:120|200:40,1,112,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   276,16,67151,38,0,B|308:64|308:64|260:144,1,112,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   184,168,67861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   124,260,68216,1,12,1:0:0:0:
   200,340,68571,2,4,P|280:356|312:340,2,112,4|8|4,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,244,69636,70,0,P|252:184|278:136,1,112,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   304,32,70346,1,8,1:0:0:0:
   384,108,70701,2,0,P|432:140|492:148,2,112,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   304,32,71766,2,0,L|232:44,1,56
   160,108,72298,2,0,L|180:180,1,56,0|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]

1. 00:50:109 (6) -Ctrl+G
2. 01:07:861 (1) -Remove Finish Keeping the finishes
3. 01:08:038 (2) -^ (only in the head)
4. 01:08:393 (3) -Remove Finish
5. 01:08:748 (4) -Remove Finish in the end
6. 01:09:281 -Circle Maybe. I'll think about it, but now it doesn't fit well IMO
7. 01:18:867 to 01:19:577 -Suggested Pattern: ^ I can't tell what you want it to be with just code
   
   SPOILER

   96,140,78867,1,8,1:0:0:0:
   88,224,79044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   148,284,79222,6,0,L|236:284,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   304,276,79577,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

1. 01:25:080 to 01:25:612 -Suggested Pattern: ^
   
   SPOILER

   434,285,85080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   434,285,85168,2,0,P|414:209|372:148,1,126.000000447034
   244,68,85612,2,0,P|200:80|152:128,1,84.000000298023

That's all
Good luck! ✿σ▽σ) Thanks for your help!

Don wrote:

Hey! M4M as promised.

Normal
Try to get your finishes on the first beat instead of the fourth. Also, a slider is best off starting on beat 1 and beat 3. Not really issues in a normal AS MUCH, but bear that in mind, and try changing some stuff accordingly.

00:01:995 (3,1) - 1 could blanket the slidertail of 3.
00:19:577 (2) - This note could be a copy of 1. Made 1 a copy of 2 instead
00:29:872 (5) - This is better off as two seperate notes. No thanks, don't see why it would
00:37:683 (3,1) - Look out for overlaps like this! This is very visually unsatisfying.
00:40:168 (3,4) - Try to improve this blanket
00:44:429 (6,1) - This is a normal. You might want to fix the distance in here.
00:44:784 (1,2,3) - Change the direction of 2 like in the picture to create symmetry. http://puu.sh/bTSTK/c23a8376d2.jpg
00:48:689 (3,4) - You could improve this blanket
01:06:440 (4,2) - This overlaps.
01:10:701 (3,4) - This isn't visually appealing, I'd consider blanketing this. Changed but not blanket
01:17:091 (3,1) - These sliders should be better shaped to create something perpindicular. I'd suggest http://puu.sh/bTWLc/c70e640014.jpg and http://puu.sh/bTWLE/1ba3a22717.jpg I think i followed this but the pics are abit confusing

Hard
sample text

00:01:595 (1,3) - Although I know what you're going for here, it's not visually satisfying. Maybe try something else! I think it's ok even though it crosses the slider end. The distance is the best like this
00:03:795 (3,2) - An unneeded overlap
00:34:488 (4) - This could be a repeat, I feel like that'd play much better. Then just add a note 00:35:375 right here. The singer holds the note so i think it fits better
00:36:263 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these into each other? Fixed, but idk if it's what you mean
00:40:878 (3,4,5) - Sliders with 4 repeats are too hard to read because the placement implies they only have one repeat. 1. it follows the background. 2. the next one is placed very close to the first one implying that there will be multiple repeats
00:56:855 (3,1) - You might want to fix this blanket

Insane
I'd say this map is a mess. Red>White sliders (tick wise) are generally a bad idea. I'd go over the map and see where it's good to change it. Also, try to think about visual satisfaction!

00:22:239 (4) - Give this a fun perpindicular shape! http://puu.sh/bU0ho/8633f83cee.jpg Perpendicular to what o_O IMO like this it flows better into the next slider
00:34:488 (1) - NC here is inconsistent with the previous green combo (always map/mod with default skin!) Previous green combo? I am using the default skin
00:50:109 (1,2) - Spacing between these notes is inconsistent.
01:05:908 (2,3) - Control G It flows better from 3 to 4

Hope it's been helpful. It has, thank you!

1. 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would say that the rhythm for this part in Hard is much better than Insane's , it give me quite weird feeling if you pause the rhythm here 00:00:795 (3) - , 00:01:595 (5) - I saw that you follow the vocal but might be better if you give some more feeling to (3) and (5) I would make a 1/1 sliders there since it fit very well with the vocal you might need to change some rhythm after this too
2. 00:05:795 (2,3) - Why do you make jump here? I don't find the beat here 00:05:995 (3) - emphasized that much , for this part I recommend to use spacing increase techniques by gradually increase the spacing because I can feel that the music start to getting louder it would be nice to make the spacing consist with the music
3. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend anti-jumps here, I would use anti-jumps only for the notes that emphasized a lots
4. 00:11:195 (1) -If you have time you can try make this a bit more natural nice http://puu.sh/bZLDe/91880f8836.png
5. 00:22:062 (3,4) - You can use high spacing here
6. 00:23:837 (3,4,5,6) - You should use DS 2.0x for every notes here but well, I find that spacing here 00:23:837 (3,4) - is a bit too force might need to decrease spacing here
7. 00:33:778 (2,3,4,5) - Using spacing increase techniques here will give nice feeling when playing this part
8. 00:37:328 (1) - NC
9. 00:41:588 (11) - NC
10. 00:44:429 (6) - NC this instead of 00:44:784 (1) -
11. 00:45:849 (5) - NC this instead of 00:46:204 (1) -
12. 00:47:269 (5) - NC this instead of 00:47:624 (1) -
13. 00:49:577 (4,6) - Remove clap
14. 01:06:973 (7) - NC this instead of 01:07:506 (1) -
15. 01:07:506 (10) - NC this instead of 01:07:861 (1) -
16. 01:07:861 (1) - Remove finish
17. 01:07:861 (2) - ^
18. 01:08:571 (6) - Whistle at head and tail
19. 01:09:103 (9) - Remove finish at tail
20. 01:15:227 (4) - Whistle maybe?
21. 01:18:334 (2,3) - Stack maybe? the vocal pause here
    Spacing a little bit too forced for me. I recommend you to play(or just take a look) ranked maps of this song so that you can know how to use appropriate spacing for each notes

1. 00:05:595 - Rhythm suggestion
   Rhythm can be improve for this diff I recommend making emphasized beat clickable still the placement of the notes quite good, the problems is the rhythm which is a bit inconsistent for me for the most part of the music I don't really like suggest rhythm though since sometimes it can be result in remap so I will let you decide the rhythm by yourself

1. 00:06:195 - Add a note
2. 00:07:195 - Try this http://puu.sh/bZQj4/611a6e55e4.png
   I see that most of the rhythm are 1/1 notes I find that kind of boring you might to add some 1/2 beat but make sure it not too hard or too confusing for beginner players or if you find that it will increase star diff just make some slider a bit longer and add some pause in rhythm for some part

CelsiusLK wrote:

Recheck....... once again

[General]
AudioLeadIn problem in Normal to fix open Normal diff in notepad and then at AudioLeadIn change 0 to 2000

[Insane]

1. 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would say that the rhythm for this part in Hard is much better than Insane's , it give me quite weird feeling if you pause the rhythm here 00:00:795 (3) - , 00:01:595 (5) - I saw that you follow the vocal but might be better if you give some more feeling to (3) and (5) I would make a 1/1 sliders there since it fit very well with the vocal you might need to change some rhythm after this too
   
   I resist changing it to that rhythm for so long cuz IMO kinda boring
2. 00:05:795 (2,3) - Why do you make jump here? I don't find the beat here 00:05:995 (3) - emphasized that much , for this part I recommend to use spacing increase techniques by gradually increase the spacing because I can feel that the music start to getting louder it would be nice to make the spacing consist with the music
3. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend anti-jumps here, I would use anti-jumps only for the notes that emphasized a lots
4. 00:11:195 (1) -If you have time you can try make this a bit more natural nice http://puu.sh/bZLDe/91880f8836.png OK I made it flow abit more but IMO yours is way too curved
5. 00:22:062 (3,4) - You can use high spacing here
6. 00:23:837 (3,4,5,6) - You should use DS 2.0x for every notes here but well, I find that spacing here 00:23:837 (3,4) - is a bit too force might need to decrease spacing here
7. 00:33:778 (2,3,4,5) - Using spacing increase techniques here will give nice feeling when playing this part Yeah I guess that would work
8. 00:37:328 (1) - NC
9. 00:41:588 (11) - NC
10. 00:44:429 (6) - NC this instead of 00:44:784 (1) - I may not have followed all your NC mods but I hope it's correct
11. 00:45:849 (5) - NC this instead of 00:46:204 (1) -
12. 00:47:269 (5) - NC this instead of 00:47:624 (1) -
13. 00:49:577 (4,6) - Remove clap
14. 01:06:973 (7) - NC this instead of 01:07:506 (1) -
15. 01:07:506 (10) - NC this instead of 01:07:861 (1) -
16. 01:07:861 (1) - Remove finish
17. 01:07:861 (2) - ^
18. 01:08:571 (6) - Whistle at head and tail I feel it will sound weird if there was only 1 part with whistle so no thanks
19. 01:09:103 (9) - Remove finish at tail I think the finishes here are ok
20. 01:15:227 (4) - Whistle maybe? ^^
21. 01:18:334 (2,3) - Stack maybe? the vocal pause here umm dont really know what you mean here
    Spacing a little bit too forced for me. I recommend you to play(or just take a look) ranked maps of this song so that you can know how to use appropriate spacing for each notes

[Hard]

1. 00:05:595 - Rhythm suggestion
   Rhythm can be improve for this diff I recommend making emphasized beat clickable still the placement of the notes quite good, the problems is the rhythm which is a bit inconsistent for me for the most part of the music I don't really like suggest rhythm though since sometimes it can be result in remap so I will let you decide the rhythm by yourself

[Normal]

1. 00:06:195 - Add a note Do you mean 00:06:395 - ? cuz that timing sounds really off
2. 00:07:195 - Try this http://puu.sh/bZQj4/611a6e55e4.png
   I see that most of the rhythm are 1/1 notes I find that kind of boring you might to add some 1/2 beat but make sure it not too hard or too confusing for beginner players or if you find that it will increase star diff just make some slider a bit longer and add some pause in rhythm for some part

About HS you should try not to use finish too much since it loud and can be annoying if you abuse it
For NC try NC every big white line it can make your NC a bit more consistent
I can see improvement in your mapping skill

Good luck

1. 00:04:395 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, please be consistent through all the difficulty, since this is the easiest one of your mapset.
2. 01:01:648 (1) - I'm not really sure but I find this spinner to be kinda short for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, I'd make a slider here instead.
3. 01:05:375 (3) - Clap is missing on slider start.
4. 01:06:440 (4) - Clap is missing on slider end.
5. 01:24:192 (1) - Remove new combo from here.
6. 01:25:257 (2) - Add a new combo, music and lyrics changes here.
7. 01:26:677 (1) - Then once again remove new combo from here.

1. I'd increase OD by 1 tick at least, seems really low right now to me.

1. 00:10:995 (3,1) - Fix the spacing here, if you want to be consistent with the rest of your pattern.
2. 00:38:566 - Unsnapped green line, you might want to fix this just to be consistent with the rest.
3. 00:50:109 (6,1) - I understand what you wanted to do here, but this anti-jump kinda plays weird imo.
4. 01:21:352 (2,3,4) - These triplets are kinda sudden and unexpected here, they would be better if you make them as a slider instead.
5. 01:22:062 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
6. 01:26:677 (1) - Remove new combo from here, it's not necessary.

1. 00:38:566 - Same as mentioned in Hard difficulty.
2. 00:41:588 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it doesn't fit since you haven't added it on a similiar part before.
3. 00:52:594 (5,6,1) - It would look nicer if you would be able to center them properly in the grid.
4. 01:25:612 (10) - Add a new combo here to emphasize the strong beat of the music.
5. 01:25:967 (1) - Remove new combo here afterwards.
6. 01:26:677 (1) - Same as above.

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

1. 00:04:395 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, please be consistent through all the difficulty, since this is the easiest one of your mapset.
2. 01:01:648 (1) - I'm not really sure but I find this spinner to be kinda short for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, I'd make a slider here instead. I think it's ok. For now :/
3. 01:05:375 (3) - Clap is missing on slider start.
4. 01:06:440 (4) - Clap is missing on slider end.
5. 01:24:192 (1) - Remove new combo from here.
6. 01:25:257 (2) - Add a new combo, music and lyrics changes here.
7. 01:26:677 (1) - Then once again remove new combo from here.

~Hard~

1. I'd increase OD by 1 tick at least, seems really low right now to me. OD6 it is

1. 00:10:995 (3,1) - Fix the spacing here, if you want to be consistent with the rest of your pattern.
2. 00:38:566 - Unsnapped green line, you might want to fix this just to be consistent with the rest.
3. 00:50:109 (6,1) - I understand what you wanted to do here, but this anti-jump kinda plays weird imo.
4. 01:21:352 (2,3,4) - These triplets are kinda sudden and unexpected here, they would be better if you make them as a slider instead. I like the current rhythm so no thanks
5. 01:22:062 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
6. 01:26:677 (1) - Remove new combo from here, it's not necessary.

~Insane~

1. 00:38:566 - Same as mentioned in Hard difficulty.
2. 00:41:588 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it doesn't fit since you haven't added it on a similiar part before.
3. 00:52:594 (5,6,1) - It would look nicer if you would be able to center them properly in the grid.
4. 01:25:612 (10) - Add a new combo here to emphasize the strong beat of the music.
5. 01:25:967 (1) - Remove new combo here afterwards.
6. 01:26:677 (1) - Same as above.

Good luck :3 Thanks

1. first offset is wrong, change it to 0

1. 00:33:068 (5) - remove this finish, it doesn't fit here
2. 00:30:582 (1) - you could add some whistles since here
3. 00:53:304 - maybe remove this break?
4. 01:25:257 (1) - unnecessary NC imo

1. 00:02:995 (1,2) - NC should be in (2)
2. 00:22:062 (2) - Ctrl+G?
3. 01:01:115 (4,1) - kinda confusing, should be further of that slider ;w;
4. 01:07:861 (1,3,5) - remove those finishes, shouldn't be there

1. 00:06:495 (6) - overmapped, remove it

Inyuschan wrote:

General:

1. first offset is wrong, change it to 0 the music starts at 195 (I also got the mp3 from the ranked map by xchippy so I'm pretty sure it'ss correct)

Normal:

1. 00:33:068 (5) - remove this finish, it doesn't fit here it does IMO
2. 00:30:582 (1) - you could add some whistles since here Yea I guess sure
3. 00:53:304 - maybe remove this break? break fits for a normal
4. 01:25:257 (1) - unnecessary NC imo

Hard:

1. 00:02:995 (1,2) - NC should be in (2) Fixed
2. 00:22:062 (2) - Ctrl+G? No thanks weird flow
3. 01:01:115 (4,1) - kinda confusing, should be further of that slider ;w;
4. 01:07:861 (1,3,5) - remove those finishes, shouldn't be there going to keep them (there are even more finishes in this part in normal lol)

Insane:

1. 00:06:495 (6) - overmapped, remove it eh it fits so imma keep it

not bad actually but needs more work imo ><

good luck ~

handsome wrote:

remove audio from video file unrankable

kds plz

neonat wrote:

handsome is becoming a retard. Someone stop him before it gets worse plz

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
the CD which including this song is released imo, try to confirm this version's title please. maybe there's a tv size in the CD The official website hasn't changed. Pretty sure the info hasn't changed

[Normal]
00:19:222 - 00:27:742 - this part can add more Normal claps imo OK added at every 2 white lines instead of 4

[Hard]
how about HD+1 AR+0.5, I think the current setting is a bit low HP increased, AR I left it
00:06:195 (5,6,7) - this is tooooo loud.. turn the volume down a bit plz..
00:14:595 - how about end the 1st spinner here and start the 2nd later?
00:16:195 - ^, the spinners would fit the song better imo
00:19:222 - 00:27:742 - same as Normal
00:40:878 (3,4) - too loud here..

[Insane]
00:06:395 (5,6,7) - this 3 circles are too loud imo
00:12:995 (1,1,1) - same as Hard
00:19:222 - 00:27:742 - same here

a map without much issues but with ordinary quality It's my first map for ranked so I didn't add much flair or anything. I'll try harder next time orz ><
if you can't find other bats.. call me back then

Title source

These are from the official website > http://yanaginagi.net/

KSHR wrote:

Keep the current title as is or your map will be unrankable. Also this is the only official source. http://puu.sh/bcV16/b8b7b130fd.jpg

CelsiusLK wrote:

It's finally happening? o_O

wcx19911123 wrote:

fixed some hitsounds via irc, checked and rebubbled

IamKwaN wrote:

Nice, gonna mod this within this couple of days!

1. You should replace the soft-sliderslide.wav with this blank .wav according to the ranking criteria. Furthermore, copy that file and rename it to soft-sliderslide2.wav as the noises are quite obvious when it comes to 00:11:195 (1) .

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:22:239 - lol I dont understand the intention of speeding up here.
3. 00:27:387 (1,4) - You may want to fix the stack here. Same for 00:34:843 (2,7,8,1) .
4. 00:29:517 - Volume is too high that hitsounds dominates the music, lower it to 60%?
5. 00:35:730 (5,6) - Try a triplet here. http://puu.sh/cfvTs.jpg
6. 00:52:772 (5) - It doesn't make sense to have this gaining a higher volume of hitsound than 00:52:594 (4) if you compare the heaviness of these two in the music. I am quite sure (5) is softer than (4). So, I suggest 00:52:594 (4) using drum finish and 00:52:772 (5) only drum sampleset.
7. 01:14:606 - As mentioned above, lower the volume to 50% please. Drum samples are just acting like ornaments instead of main-dish. Also, same for 01:15:316.
8. 01:24:991 - Adding a circle here sounds more comfortable to me as there is a heavy drum. Also, delete 01:25:168 (5) as the stream of drums starts at 01:25:257 .

1. 00:59:695 - Missing whistle.
2. 01:18:156 (1,2) - Blanket.

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:35:198 (4) - 142,170 for polishing the stack with 00:34:133 (2) .
3. 00:44:784 (1) - 395,151 for polishing the blanket.
4. 01:01:115 (4) - Try 469,346 for consistent distance snap.

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. You should replace the soft-sliderslide.wav with this blank .wav according to the ranking criteria. Furthermore, copy that file and rename it to soft-sliderslide2.wav as the noises are quite obvious when it comes to 00:11:195 (1) . OK I did but I'm not quite sure what was wrong with my current slider-slide. it was already blank

[Insane]

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:22:239 - lol I dont understand the intention of speeding up here. Well I felt that the 1/4 reverse at the same speed looks too short and it would look better if it was longer.Since most people would just hold it, it won't make a difference in terms of gameplay
3. 00:27:387 (1,4) - You may want to fix the stack here. Same for 00:34:843 (2,7,8,1) .
4. 00:29:517 - Volume is too high that hitsounds dominates the music, lower it to 60%?
5. 00:35:730 (5,6) - Try a triplet here. http://puu.sh/cfvTs.jpg
6. 00:52:772 (5) - It doesn't make sense to have this gaining a higher volume of hitsound than 00:52:594 (4) if you compare the heaviness of these two in the music. I am quite sure (5) is softer than (4). So, I suggest 00:52:594 (4) using drum finish and 00:52:772 (5) only drum sampleset.
7. 01:14:606 - As mentioned above, lower the volume to 50% please. Drum samples are just acting like ornaments instead of main-dish. Also, same for 01:15:316.
8. 01:24:991 - Adding a circle here sounds more comfortable to me as there is a heavy drum. Also, delete 01:25:168 (5) as the stream of drums starts at 01:25:257 .

[Hard]

1. 00:59:695 - Missing whistle.
2. 01:18:156 (1,2) - Blanket.

[Normal]

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:35:198 (4) - 142,170 for polishing the stack with 00:34:133 (2) .
3. 00:44:784 (1) - 395,151 for polishing the blanket.
4. 01:01:115 (4) - Try 469,346 for consistent distance snap.

IamKwaN wrote:

Gratz for your first rank! Keep it up!