This gonna be my 3rd recheck since I have free time now
[General]
[Hard]
[Normal]
HS for this map looks inconsistent well I think it better to change finish HS to whistle HS and add something that more suit for finish HS
Normal diff's HS is weird you just stop doing downbeat rhythm pattern( clap on 2nd and 4th white line ) for a moment
Insane's HS compare to Hard's HS I find Hard's HS better than Insane's one
I know you put hardwork in this but honestly it still not good enough to get bubble, I think
Well you just need to call some BAT to check this since they can give you nice information about mapping
Gonna shoot a star to encourage you
Good luck
One day this map will get ranked , I'm sure
[General]
- Your combo colour seem a bit too colorful try make it more light-tone
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,224,130
Combo2 : 176,255,255
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,94,94 - At tags include Everflower translate of tokohana
- At tags Delete ed because you already tagged ending ,no need to tag ed again
- 00:01:255 (3,4) - x=353 y=97 so 00:00:655 (1,2,3) - will line up perfectly
- 00:06:855 (5,6,7,1) - Bad spacing here I think try to make it a bit more reasonable spacing try DS=1.0x
- 00:07:655 (1) - No need to NC since it doesn't change anything in term of mapping
- 00:13:455 (1,1,1) - 3 continous spinner is a bit meh you can try replace one of theses spinners with long slider
- 00:20:755 (1,2,3) - DS is a bit inconsistent here
- 00:22:175 (1,2) - DS should be 1.7x I might say that you intend to do jump here but it still not a very good spacing for jump. A jump need a bit high difference in DS your is only 0.3x which is low and may consider to be called random spacing and you must know is music there suit for a jump for this one it just doesn't suit for a jump since it only a basic starter rhythm
- 00:23:595 (1,2,3) - Should line up by move (3) to x=280 y=296
- 00:25:548 - Weird rhythm here some notes are overmapped try this http://puu.sh/b3bmV/4e87b32cd4.jpg
- 00:28:654 (5) - Delete this no need because it create weird flow and weird rhythm
- 00:35:311 (2) - Should place at lower-right since it destroy good viewing (overlap with previous notes) in editor
- 00:44:187 (3) - x=294 y=148 io line up 00:43:832 (2,3) - perfectly
- 00:49:157 (1,2) - This rhythm weird since you intend to put slider tail at blue line you should decrease volume of 00:49:157 (1) - 's tail so for better sounding
- 01:21:110 (4,5) - inconsistent flow you should copy-paste 01:20:755 (2,3) - and place it at x=183 y=80
[Hard]
- 00:13:455 (1,1,1) - Same as insane
- 00:04:855 (1,2) - I saw your laziness here xD you should copy-paste 00:04:855 (1) - this instead of creating a new one for perfect symmetry
- 00:09:255 (2,4) - Same as above should copy-paste (2) for perfect symmetry
- 00:37:796 (3,4,1) - Should line up for better flow
- 00:44:187 (6) - Should Ctrl+G so the pattern will same as 00:43:122 (3,4) -
- 00:45:962 (2,3,4) - Should line up like this http://puu.sh/b3cNe/336550c093.jpg
- 01:04:778 (2) - Should NC to emphasis the start of best part of the music
- 01:09:039 - I don't hear finish sound here maybe it because my skin is acting weird xD
- 01:09:216 (4) - x=62 y=110 so this will stack perfectly with 01:08:861 (3) - 's tail
- 01:10:991 (3) - x=148 y=74 so 01:10:459 (2,3) - line up better
- 01:15:074 (7,9) - Should line up so the flow will consistent with 01:14:542 (6,8) -
- 01:16:139 (2) - Copy this and paste it here 01:17:204 - for perfect symmetry
[Normal]
- 00:08:255 (3,4) - Nazi DS=1.0x
- 00:35:666 (4) - x=139 y=162 so this will stack with 00:34:601 (2) - perfectly
- 00:46:672 (3,4) - Better blanket http://puu.sh/b3dLu/c22b1d41c8.jpg
- 01:05:844 (1) - Delete NC , no need to NC for a new vocal
- 01:07:619 (1) - Delete NC and NC then NC 01:08:329 (6) -
- 01:08:329 (2,1) - Should stack for better flow
- 01:20:400 (3,2) - Should stack perfectly
HS for this map looks inconsistent well I think it better to change finish HS to whistle HS and add something that more suit for finish HS
Normal diff's HS is weird you just stop doing downbeat rhythm pattern( clap on 2nd and 4th white line ) for a moment
Insane's HS compare to Hard's HS I find Hard's HS better than Insane's one
I know you put hardwork in this but honestly it still not good enough to get bubble, I think
Well you just need to call some BAT to check this since they can give you nice information about mapping
Gonna shoot a star to encourage you
Good luck
One day this map will get ranked , I'm sure